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CHILL OUT MUSIC WITH YOUR COFEE |
...unbelievable vocals, phenomenal, pleasing to the senses... what can i say, divinely gifted... shall message via email for more thoughts... thanks for this beautiful sound... |
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Immune Intro Blurb |
all right... comments welcome you said, correct? most importantly, and i am also guilty of this, always use spelling and grammar checker on your computer... it'll break up your sentences better making your readers comprehend a bit better... otherwise, intro is great, and loved sentence "feral gangs of survivors stalk ...", extremely descriptive. The 4 key words used certainly caught my interest... well, that's just me anyway... due to the apparent definition of the word "feral"... well, thanks for letting me comment... |
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Wake The Fuck Up, America! |
Touché ... Touché ... Touché ... is what came to mind ... strong view and excellent point! |
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A Love Letter To Someone |
... very sweet and to the point ... loved it!!! |
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young love |
BRAVO!!! Question for you if I may... how long did it take you to compose this short story? And second question, do the words somehow fluidly appear in the visionary mind then conveyed into writing? Very well written... use of diction with such strong distinctive phraseology makes your story visually lucid as though watching from the eyes on an eagle. |
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The 11 Facts You Didnt Know About Pheromones |
very interesting... |
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To Spider |
Wow... deep ... must digest ... ANGST ... the sadness, the emptiness, the sorrows ... your belief, your honesty, your time ... yet there is a very positive feeling, energy, emotion one senses of openness, forgiveness, freedom ... ... die before you die ... transformation ... transmutation ... new beginnings ... peace be within ... bill, must say this touches the soul... |
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Blank Wall |
... hey you ... shall read all docs ... will comment as well ... must say hello to samvit ... hi samvit ... |
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Blond is Beautiful |
WOW ... beautiful loving words filled with genuine emotions coming from your heart ... treasured capturing moments ... your audience feeling and absorbing sentiments of words ... Then at the end, your dog! This indeed is magnificent!!! Love it! Love it! Love it! |
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Fear Not |
...hello my dear samvit...you are absolutely and positively correct, your statement "both...related but...the opposite sense...risk is life...what is fear?"...love how you phrased this question...just really admire how you phrase everything, how you question, how your logic works, how you make sense...just admire all your creation!..of course, admire you my friend, samvit :) ~ bette ~ |
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Posted on October 11, 2008
Actually, this is a bit confusing, however, must read word per word. My writing are emotions once hidden within ones self, finally surfacing and facing the demons hidden, which I actually hid, for such the great actress that I am,.. i find releasing all sentiments of negativity makes one's attitude transmute pessimistic thoughts into a loving harmonious reality..