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Effective Trader Samurai |
This needs a proper description. The title could be construed as misleading though I do not think this is intentional. Also, this is not a sports category item; it's business. |
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The Story of Mankind |
this hardly seems like a short story. you should probably remove it from improper categories. |
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Voiceless |
now this piece has conflict, climax and resolution. nice piece. |
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Limping For Life |
the padded version sounds forced once to get to the first brother wheeling on the second. the unpadded version sounds more natural. but in either version, i don't understand why the two brothers never see each other again if they have been visiting each other for years (as seems implied) at Christmas. unfortunately, there is no conflict in this piece. nothing happens. it's merely a scene. scenes don't make for good fiction. not that it's not well written, but something has to happen. |
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Tokyo |
you need a better description for this. something like 'Touring Tokyo in Chinese' or something similar. it's also in the wrong category. |
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Samurai Androids RPG: Origins |
If you encounter illegible fonts in the iPaper version of my work, please click the DOWNLOAD PDF version, which will automatically load a legible version of the work into Adobe Reader. The problem is not my fonts or my work; they are both fine. |
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Narrative in Computer Games |
excellent work! |
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Sid Sackson Boardgame Design Document 3 |
great fun! nostaglic at the very least. |
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Sid Sackson Boardgame Design Document 2 |
okay, now THIS is FAR MORE interesting. perhaps you should consider combining all three of these docs together into one with this one being the first. just a thought. thanks. very cool. thumbs up. |
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Sid Sackson Boardgame Design Document 1 |
gah, while interesting, a little difficult to read. a typed version included would increase its 'value' here in my opinion. still, if this really is Sid's work, interesting. |


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Comment on The Novel Notebook
Posted on April 1, 2008
impressive.