syle
syle
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i love it. i love your structure and flow. i'm going to have to keep coming back and reading each poem because it's hard to digest all at once.
syle
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wow. i can *feel* this. nothing like being able to *feel* writing. or rather, writing that makes you feel. painful, but wonderful.
syle
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"I feel your body,
Close to mine,
Spiritual Love,
Interwine."
beautiful line. the rest of the poem though let me down. it felt too manufactured.
syle
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"We all come from nothing
And nothing keeps happening"
awesome line.
Mean ing less W ords / Easel backwards Blue dummy skirts Shallow fabric screw Muscle bound clerks Shee
syle
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very nice. i likes.
Mean ing less W ords / Easel backwards Blue dummy skirts Shallow fabric screw Muscle bound clerks Shee
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sleeplessness / Kaizen 120404 i lay awake in bed trying to sleep to death. i toss and turn, the pain i
short of breath / enlightened wonderer dilated pupils i wonder what innocence may be or maybe what exp
syle published:
The Wedding Kaizen 111404 like in a cloud of dust or morning's fog ready to drop i can't see past wh
closer come i (eyes so mesmerizing) / Kaizen Early 2003 eyes, so mesmerizing, lost was i. like a whirl
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