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Julian Grebe
English 093
12/10/09
The high school’s principal and superintendent have appointed the Student Judicial Court
– six seniors who help the school administration decide whether or not students who have
violated the rules should be punished – to make a decision on a group of athletes who have
harassed high schools girls [Appositive]. Even though, the principal and superintendent will not
be bound by the court’s decision, it is highly probable they will follow it [Subordinator].
The group of athletes have been harassing high schools girls for several years, received
several warnings and threats; despite this the group stopped only the worst of their behavior,
continuing more subtle forms of harassment [Prepositional Phrases]. During the fall semester
their behavior has resumed. When one girl threatened to complain to the principal, three of the
group’s boys pushed her into a boys’ lavatory and threatened her that it would get worse if she
talked [Participle]. That she eventually talked, resulted in more girls who had been harassed
coming forward alone or with their parents [NS – That]. The girls’ parents have hired a lawyer,
who has written to principle and superintendent saying, that unless the behavior stops, the
parents would sue the principle and superintendent personally and the school district for the
These types of issues are very common in schools. In my opinion the more immediate
problem is the physical damages; there is very little physical damage done on any of the girls.
The girl who was pushed into the lavatory may have a few minor injuries, but nothing major or
life threatening [Absolute]. The long term effects are more severe. This depends on the issue’s
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outcome; if the school takes a very severe action against certain members of the group or the
whole group, it is highly likely that this would appear on their transcripts and other school
records. This is especially bad for the members of the group who are planning on going to
college; another long term effect is the emotional effect the whole issue will have on the girls
who have been harassed. The issue could be a long term one, resulting in any one or all of them
could result in either parents not putting their children in the school or parents pulling their
The main purpose of the punishment is to please the parents and also send a message to
all future harassers in order to prevent this type of situation from happening again [Infinitive].
Obviously the group would like to get a warning, a threat or reading an apology to the whole
school; any one or all of these would be preferred by the group since it does not affect their
future in any way. However, since the verbal offences on the girls occurred several times and
also since the parents of the girls who have been harassed want action taken against the group
and not a slap on the wrist, this is not possible. Probation would be a better option, but it would
probably be disliked by the girls’ parents, since it is not particularly harsh and it’s not a real
punishment, as they would only have some restrictions on them and they would have to show up
once a week or monthly to show their progress to who ever is in charge. The ideal option would
be for the school to suspend the boys; this will please the girls and their parents causing them to
drop the case, which in turn would please both the principal and superintendent [Relative
Clause]. However, this may affect the boys mainly because some of them are planning on
attending college, and the suspension might be included in their college transcripts. Expulsion is
another option which would please the parents, but it is an extreme measure and would be
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inappropriate because the principal and superintendent are really to be blamed because they
failed to do anything when the harassment occurred a second and third time. Expelling the boys
would shatter all of their futures because it is highly unlikely that they would be able to attend
another school with expulsion in their records [NS – Gerund]. Expulsion would be the best
choice if their behavior continued after their probation, suspension or whatever the principal and
superintendent decide to do to them [NS – WH]. Giving the case over to the authorities would
have similar if not worse consequences on the group members for it would not only mean that it
would be widely known and ruin any of their credibility but it would also kill their dreams of
attending college and it might also make it hard for them to find good jobs [Coordinator].
For the principal to please the girls and their parents means that they would have to make
the boys give an apology in front of the whole school. Then give them a three week suspension
followed by a probation that would last an entire school year and a threat of expulsion if they
ever acted like that again [NS – Infinitive]. If that solution does not work, then nothing but
handing them over to the authorities after expelling them from the school would do the trick.