Hi there! Thanks for the opportunity to work on this!

Ive put together a template now and

we can discuss the issues Ive highlighted tomorrow. The key thing is to get as much specific,
measurable detail as possible! All the best!

Was this during an internship? What was the situation here?: Get an offer of a bank without a
business background. Suggest a successful sale stratage to a small company.


I get the impression this experience is important, but I think we should discuss specifics.
sell in massage chair shop With the expeirence of oganizing the chamber music activity, I become a
saler in a newly opened massage armchair shop. In the first month, I sold only one chair. I was so
frustrated and doubted myself, although other salers are not much better than me. We discussed it and
conducted survey about the customers in the block, and found the consumptive power was too low.
Although I failed to sell sussesfully in the intership, but I offered a report about my thoughts to the
excutive and to my parents to prove my ability. And my parents finally agreed me to chase my dream.

suggest my boss to set up a new massage chair shop in 4s shop area.[put his chairs in the 4s shop,
offer the 4s shop customers a rest place in order to increase target group]

The following things are items on which it would be good to get more SPECIFIC, CONCRETE
detail from you during our call. We can go through each point and you can highlight important
details or explain things to me!

organizer of many group that take part in academic competence.

use different ways to think problems and use different ways to achieve it.

I can talk to everybody naturally no matter who they are when I meet them and receive good reviews.

took part in every activities about my specilization,

and found the rare intership in superior court.

prizes during different music fesitivals, and as a

part of volunteer team, take part in all kinds of volunteer activities.

Orchestra?
Leading: know how to put people in right positions,
know how to connect a system and
run it well.
know how to organize activities.

Legal Aid:
give original ideas about seleting case,
prensent our results in the final case display , won the second place.

NAME NAME
email@email.com | +86 XXX XXXX XXXX
Address, Address, Address, PRC

Educational Background
ZHONGNAN UNIVERSITY OF ECONOMICS (Z.U.E.) XX.XX- XX.XX
Major: Law | GPA: 3.52/4.00 | Ranking: XX
Research: Empirical Innovation Fund Projects Group
Publications: Title, Economic Vision, 2013 (11)
Prizes: Second Prize, Z. U. E. Case Analysis Competition (YEAR); Musical Prizes (YEAR);
Legal Aid Prize (YEAR);

Professional Experience
XXXX HIGH COURT XX.XX- XX.XX
Intern
XX
XX
XXXX LAW FIRM XX.XX- XX.XX
Intern
Acquired a comprehensive familiarity with the legal market in XXX, particularly in the fields of XXX and XXX.
Participated in XXX

Extracurricular & Leadership
Z.U.E. ORCHESTRA XX.XX-XX.XX
Head of the Orchestra; Lead Violin (17 years experience)
Ran a 120-person organization structured around five different departments, coordinating with departmental
management team and marshaling efforts to run concerts, training, event planning and general
administration of the Orchestra; organized a series of highly successful concerts, each taking around three
months to plan in order to ensure quality of performances, outstanding advertising and booking suitable
venues.
Raised profile of organization through innovative methods such as XXX and XXX as well as inviting other
Z.U.E. musical associations to participate in a highly successful grand symphony concert, which has now
become an annual event at Z.U.E; secured a XXX% increase in membership.
Conceived of a chamber music sub-organization named the Never-ending Chapter Musical Society;
established this Society entirely independently of any funding or external assistance, based on program of
research that surveyed the preferences of XXX Z.U.E. students; ultimately the new organization won a
coveted place at the Z.U.E Art Festival.
TEACH TIBET XX.XX- XX.XX
Head of Volunteer Teaching Team; Volunteer Music Teacher
Organized a group of XX people to travel to XXX, a village in Tibet to offer educational programs to local
students; the project involved obtaining the permission and involvement of the local headmaster
Developed various charitable initiatives in order to ensure that a donation of RMBXXX could be made to the
local school; publicized the activity, to encourage both participation and donations, using radio broadcasts,
posters and XXX.
Taught children aged XX, focusing principally on Western instruments, as well as arranging theatrical
performances to be put on by students; visited other institutions in the local area in order to spread a clear
understanding of legal rights among the local population.
Z.U.E. LEGAL AID SOCIETY XX.XX- XX.XX
Consultant; Team Representative
Assisted five clients to take various measures in order to successfully secure their rights, including a fellow
student who had been injured in a road traffic accident, successfully arguing case for RMBXXX in
compensation.
Represented team of volunteers in the presentation of overall results to XXX; argued points for the defense in
a moot competition and succeeded in winning the case.
Z.U.E. DEBATE TEAM XX.XX-XX.XX
Role
Learned to take a respectful and nurturing approach to my teammates, encouraging the equal sharing of
each team-members ideas, as well as eagerly communicating my own reflections.
XX

Other
Languages: Mandarin Chinese (native); English (fluent); XXX.
Computers: XXX.
Standardized tests: TOEFL R: 26 | L: 21 | S: 20 | W: 25; GMAT 680