UALE2013 Academic Writing

Tutor: Foo Chein Ling

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ASSIGNMENT 1
DRAFT 1
Tutorial Group 3

Student Name

LEE CHEI THAI
1103382

LOO MUN HAR
1103584
Title

Travelling Vacations versus Staycations


Introduction
Thesis
Statement

There are few reasons why travelling will always remain a better alternative,
despite the cost issues and any possible inconveniences.
Aspect 1

Travelling involves experiencing with your own senses
Aspect 2

Travelling is the best source of inspiration.
Aspect 3

Travelling means meeting new people.

Body Paragraph 1
Topic
Sentence
Travelling involves experiencing with your own senses
Supporting
Detail 1

Seeing, touching, hearing and smelling the new, unusual and unique atmosphere
of places you visit while on vacation increase our experience.
Supporting
Detail 2

Visiting the place is ten times more powerful of an experience.
Supporting
Detail 3

You able to form your own opinion about what you see instead of just watching
it through the eyes of a documentary director or through the lens of a
photographer.



UALE2013 Academic Writing
Tutor: Foo Chein Ling

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Body Paragraph 2
Topic
Sentence
Travelling is the best source of inspiration.
Supporting
Detail 1

Travelling always brings new discoveries, whether they are discoveries of the
outer worlds externally or discoveries within yourself.
Supporting
Detail 2

Travelling can be the best cure for depression.
Supporting
Detail 3

Broaden your knowledge and inspire new emotions.

Body Paragraph 3
Topic
Sentence
Travelling means meeting new people.
Supporting
Detail 1

Travelling brings together at times absolutely different people, from various
cultures and backgrounds.
Supporting
Detail 2

A chance to get to know others better and to learn to adjust to new traditions
and other peoples lifestyle.
Supporting
Detail 3

A chance to make new friends and change the cycle of the everyday routine that
youve gotten trapped in over the years.

Conclusion
Sentence
of
summary

Travelling may seem like a, but those who have the courage to follow their
dreams and overcome any obstacles will always find a way to pursue a hobby
they like.