Michael Gagui

English 1T
Peer Review

Jeremys blog and peer review by Michael

Revise and edit the activities and
assignments listed to earn a grade
for your portfolio. Make sure to
place each assignment in correct
tab.
TAB: Personal Dictionary Terms
1. Reading Journal1: 2 terms
2. Reading journal 2: activism and
agency
3. Reading journal 4: 3 terms: Blanco,
Valencia, McCurdy
4. Reading Journal 6: 2 terms
heilbroner

Excellent

TAB: About
Your thoughtful selfie
Sentence clarity
Text cohesion
Visual
Complete response to selfie
question

TAB: Student voice symposium

1. Brainstorming: response to 7
question
2. Symposium ideas (group
document)
3. your symposium contribution
(paragraph)

1.
a.
b.
c.
d.

Tab: Reflections
1. Portfolio audience reflection
(paragraph) (missing this)
2. Symposium audience reflection
(paragraph) (missing this)
3. Essay 1 reflection (completed in
class
4. Portfolio Rubrics for your group
members
Tab: Home

Proficient

Needs work

1. your pathway MIssion statement

(uploaded by 2/17)
2. Individual writing goals
3. Published pieces:
a. Publish essay

Target Audience: academic college audience

After reviewing the required portfolio items listed about, evaluate the presentation and
organization of the documents posted on your group members individual portfolio sites.
1. based on the sentence craft usage and organization of information for the portfolios, determine
if the portfolio assignments are written and formatted for an academic audience.
a. if no, highlight specific passages that highlight your perspective and offer suggestions to
improving the text format and/or sentence craft.
b. if yes, highlight string lines that demonstrates that the text is written for college-level academic
audience.
2. . That place is the archery range I frequently go to. Its a place where I can relieve myself from
stress. When I step onto the range thats when I can just focus on the present moment and not worry
about the outside world. There, I feel liberated from everything else. I dont have to worry about
someone judging me; it is I who judged myself in this time.

Portfolio Presentation/Organization
Strengths
I liked your seflie project.

Portfolio Presentation/Organization
Need work
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