Dylan Garity is a slam poet who advocates for the implementation of bilingual education. Garity uses a variation of parallels and similes to persuade his readers about the injustices that he thinks are being committed in the current education system.
Dylan Garity is a slam poet who advocates for the implementation of bilingual education. Garity uses a variation of parallels and similes to persuade his readers about the injustices that he thinks are being committed in the current education system.
Dylan Garity is a slam poet who advocates for the implementation of bilingual education. Garity uses a variation of parallels and similes to persuade his readers about the injustices that he thinks are being committed in the current education system.
authors desired message through writing. This specific typography piece is a poem by Dylan Garity, a slam poet who advocates for the implementation of bilingual education. Throughout his poem titled Rigged game; Garity describes the disadvantages by which many students whose first language is not english, have to go through. Garity focuses on self-experience; he is a bilingual person himself, and his sister is an ESL (English as another language) teacher. Garity utilizes a variation of parallels and similes to persuade his readers about the injustices that he thinks are being committed in the current education system.
Audience and Purpose
Questions
Garitys poem is intended to be read by all those
who undermine the importance of bilingual education. He specifically quotes a senator who thinks that throwing money at an urban school is like feeding caviar to your dog. they just don't know how to appreciate it. Garity responds to this senators thoughts by stating individual examples about actual students, who struggle and still do their best to keep up with their education; Well tell that to Ana who has my sister translate newsletters aloud to her father because he, too, was never taught how to read. Tell that to Juan ,whose mother and baby sister are still in Guatemala whose father works three jobs(Garity 2013). Garitys audience ties very well with the purpose because not only is his poem trying to persuade about bilingual education to all those who oppose, but he is also reinforcing the idea that something needs to be done to fix this problem, this idea specifically directed to all of those who may have been oblivious to this problem before. We are leading these children along a track built in circles as their lungs fill with smoke telling them it is their fault they cant find a way out(2013) By referring to all those culpable of these kids failure as we he includes himself, senators, and all readers. garity then, stretches the need for action towards all his readers.
Rhetorical Issues
ETHOS: In order to make his argument credible,
Garity utilizes experience as examples. Being a
Bilingual student himself, he seems to know how bilingual programs have worked, and giving the fact that his sister is an ESL teacher, he seems to realize that these programs have not improved, if anything they have gotten worse through the years. she teaches ESL at an elementary school in Boston and every week she tells me stories about her students.(2013) I am lucky enough to be one of the winners of this game.I was handed a head start and a rulebook in my own tongue (2013) LOGOS: In order to make a logical argument, Garity utilizes the individual stories that his sister tells him, and makes the reader realize that although every student has different backgrounds, parents, circumstances, and previous knowledge, they all share one thing in common: the struggle to keep up with their education after trying to learn in an unfamiliar language or the first time. In 2001, No Child Left Behind gutted bilingual education.Students who have been in the country for one year are now expected to perform at grade level on standardized English tests if the kids do not jump high enough, the school loses money(2013) Garity then, proceeds to state similes that parallel to the situation. Improving a school by picking its pockets is like tuning a guitar by ripping off the strings(2013) PATHOS: The strongest appeal on Garitys poem, is the emotional connection he manages to create between the reader and the individual stories he tells about different children, which have been told to him by his sister. My sister tells me school is the most stable place in these kids lives Ana does not know how to read in Spanish, much less English but she still wants to be a writer when she grows up.Juan chooses to stay inside and study at recess so that one day hell be able to teach his own brother. These kids are good organs in a sick body.(Garity 2013). In addition, Garitys utilization of similes makes the reader realize how nonsense it sounds
Structure and Delivery
Garitys purpose was to demonstrate the need
for a better bilingual system in current education. His poem, made the purpose clear for all readers. Even though his only tools were words, and experience, he managed to create a peculiar imagery, which connected the reader with the difficulties that many children in america go through. The structure of this poem is simple and informal, yet Garity manages to convey a deep meaning and reflective essence with his words.
Reference:
Garity, D. (2013, September 26). Dylan Garitys
Rigged Game. Retrieved February 8, 2015, from http://www.giftstogive.org/dylan-garitysrigged-gam