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Dissertation Critique 1
Keith D. George
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Dr. M. Rice
Dissertation Critique 1
The background for the study was inadequate. At the most, the author stated that the
increased
prevalence
of
technology
coaches
in
schools
raised
a
need
for
the
study
of
their
effectiveness.
The
author
stated
that
current
training
methods
were
not
effective,
however,
this
was
based
upon
conversations
many
teachers
have
had
with
the
researcher.
(Garrett,
2008)
Little
attention
was
given
to
establish
a
research-based
need
for
additional
or
different
methods
of
providing
professional
development.
The literature review raised several questions as well. The author includes just over
sixty
citations
in
the
literature
review;
however,
many
of
these
citations
are
from
the
same
sources.
In
fact,
a
2005
article
by
William
Sugar
accounts
for
nine
of
these
references
and
a
2002
article
by
Wiles
and
Bondi
was
cited
seven
times.
These
two
works
alone
account
for
almost
one-third
of
the
citations
of
the
literature
review.
The
entire
references
section
of
the
paper
only
includes
sixteen
works.
It
should
be
noted
that
the
research
on
technology
coaches
is
in
its
infancy
so
there
are
a
limited
number
of
directly
related
resources.
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The references included were current and included just one historical work related to
Blooms
taxonomy.
The
references
came
from
a
variety
of
sources,
all
of
which
appear
to
be
well
established
and
refereed
journals.
Few
of
the
items
in
the
literature
review
appeared
to
be
actual
studies.
Again,
this
may
be
attributed
to
the
relative
newness
of
the
technology
coach
position.
Much of the literature review revolves around general technology use by teachers and
includes
several
references
that
are
only
cursorily
related
to
the
topic
of
technology
coaches.
There
are
no
significant
findings
included
in
the
literature
review
and
no
connection
is
made
between
the
effectiveness
of
technology
coaches
and
other
instructional
coaches,
an
area
that
one
would
expect
more
research
to
have
been
conducted.
Statement
and
significance
of
problem
The author clearly states the purpose of the study but does not necessarily identify the
problem.
The
purpose
is
described
as
determining
if
teachers
use
technology
more
effectively
and
with
more
confidence
before
or
after
the
integration
of
a
technology
coach.
There
is
no
indication
in
the
statement
of
the
problem
that
teachers
are
in
need
of
using
technology
more
effectively.
One
would
expect
the
author
to
include
some
research
that
indicated
that
students
perform
better
when
technology
is
fully
integrated
as
well
as
evidence
that
instructional
coaches
increase
teachers
confidence.
There are several limitations to this study and the author clearly articulates these
throughout the paper. The primary limitation is the small sample sixe. This study included a
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single
high
school
and
just
twenty-five
participants.
While
the
study
can
still
provide
some
insight
into
teachers
attitude
towards
technology
coaches,
no
significant
findings
are
present
that
could
be
transferred
to
a
larger
population
without
significant
further
study.
There
were
no
assumptions
stated
by
the
author.
The author stated several times that the results of the study would be important,
especially
to
the
school
district,
in
determining
if
the
grant-funded
position
of
technology
coach
would
be
continued
after
the
expiration
of
the
grant.
However,
no
mention
was
made
as
to
the
importance
of
the
study
outside
of
this
single
school
and
district.
Therefore,
the
study
appears
to
have
little
impact
on
the
larger
body
of
research
related
to
school-level
technology
coaches
and
the
effect
that
they
may
have
on
teacher
confidence.
Research
Questions
The author identified three research questions in this study. First, the author asked,
What
are
the
effects
upon
the
confidence
levels
of
teachers
with
regard
to
acquiring
and
using
technology
skills,
when
a
technology
coach
is
used
in
the
school?
This
question
is
clear
and
relates
directly
to
the
purpose
of
the
study.
In
short,
the
author
is
seeking
to
determine
if
teachers
are
more
confident
when
using
technology
in
schools
that
have
a
technology
coach.
The second research question stated, What specific strategies can be utilized by a
technology
coach
to
bolster
teacher
confidence
levels
towards
technology
integration
that
is
embedded
into
the
curriculum?
This
question
is
not
as
directly
related
to
the
purpose
of
the
study.
The
stated
purpose
of
the
study
sought
to
determine
if
teachers
used
technology
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more
efficiently
and
with
more
confidence.
Determining
the
strategies
that
might
improve
this
would
be
of
great
benefit,
however
this
research
question
was
not
addressed
by
the
study.
There
is
no
indication
that
the
researcher
actually
surveyed
participants
regarding
strategies.
There
are
no
questions
in
the
survey
instrument
related
to
how
a
technology
coach
worked
with
the
teachers,
only
if
they
worked
with
them
and
how
it
affected
confidence.
The
author
cited
two
items
from
the
survey
instrument
as
addressing
this
question,
however,
I
do
not
feel
that
the
survey
item
accurately
reflects
to
content
of
the
research
question.
Asking
if
the
coach
gave
the
teacher
more
confidence
or
if
the
use
of
a
coach
was
a
better
method
of
learning
technology
does
not
provide
information
on
strategies
can
be
utilized
by
a
technology
coach.
The final research question articulated by the author asked, What effect does daily-
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The
dissertation
was
a
based
on
a
qualitative
research
study
using
a
descriptive
design.
The
researcher
used
a
set
of
archival
survey
results
that
had
been
previously
conducted
by
the
participating
school
district.
These
results
were
then
compared
to
a
post-test
survey
conducted
by
the
researcher.
This
post-test
survey
was
conducted
at
the
end
of
the
first
year
of
the
technology
coach
being
implemented
into
the
school.
The
choice
of
a
qualitative
design
was
appropriate,
especially
considering
the
small
population.
The
choice
by
the
researcher
to
limit
the
study
to
one
single
school
could
easily
be
questioned
as
short-sighted.
Assumedly,
there
were
ulterior
goals,
such
as
a
program
evaluation
of
this
particular
effort
rather
than
an
overall
examination
of
the
efficacy
of
technology
coaches
in
general.
The
survey
was
only
administered
to
twenty-five
teachers
at
the
target
school.
The
author
acknowledges
the
limitation
created
by
the
small
population
and
recommends
additional
research
of
larger
populations.
several
aspects
of
teacher
attitudes
before
and
after
one
year
with
a
technology
coach
in
place.
As
previously
noted,
several
of
these
questions
were
identified
as
addressing
various
aspects
of
the
research
questions
even
though
the
results
do
not
seem
to
accurately
evaluate
the
premise
of
the
question.
For
instance,
the
research
attempts
to
answer
the
question
related
to
effective
strategies
for
increasing
teacher
confidence
with
a
survey
question
that
simply
asks
participants
to
rank
if
the
experience
of
working
with
a
technology
was
better
way
to
learn.
The
implication
that
the
use
of
a
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technology
coach
was
better
does
not
provide
any
data
on
which
methods
might
be
successful
when
the
implementation
is
replicated.
The omission of the strategies used by the technology coach, and any
As written, the study provided only superficial data and basic analysis of that
data.
The
comparison
of
pre-
and
post-test
data
related
to
experience
and
comfort
level
with
a
series
of
fourteen
basic
computer
technology
skills,
and
the
alignment
of
these
changes
with
the
demographic
data,
paints
an
interesting
picture
of
the
school,
staff
and
their
progress
over
the
year
of
the
study.
This
data
was
reported
as
simple
percentage
increases
over
the
length
of
the
study.
The
data
was
broken
down
by
demographic
category;
however,
no
in-depth
analysis
was
completed.
Results,
Conclusions
and
Implications
The researcher identified improvement in experience level in all but one of the fourteen
technology
skills
areas
included
in
the
study.
Many
subtopics,
such
a
Desktop
Computer
Usage,
saw
significant
gains
while
other
areas
saw
minimal
increases.
The
results
also
show
positive
teacher
reaction
to
the
presence
of
a
technology
coach
in
helpfulness,
increase
in
skills
attributed
to
the
technology
coach,
and
that
the
technology
coach
was
a
better
way
to
learn.
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The researcher concluded that the technology coach did provide a positive impact on
the
integration
of
technology
in
classroom
instruction.
The
data
supports
this
conclusion,
but
to
varying
degrees.
The
results
indicate
that
for
each
of
the
research
questions,
a
positive
impact
was
shown.
It
should
be
noted,
however,
the
highest
results
bearly
topped
sixty
percent
(The
technology
coach
is
a
better
way
to
learn.
.
.
with
61.9%
greatly
agreeing.)
The results are expected although one would have expected the impact to be more
highly
recognized
by
the
participants
in
the
study.
Many
factors
could
account
for
this
including
the
efficacy
of
the
one
particular
technology
coach
involved.
It
is
difficult
to
make
many
generalizations
fro
the
study.
The
previously
discussed
limitation
of
the
population
is
evident,
but
even
more
limiting
is
the
fact
that
all
of
the
data
related
to
effectiveness
of
technology
coaches
is
in
this
case
based
upon
the
performance
of
a
single
coach
for
a
single
year.
Overall
Evaluation
There
are
several
positive
factors
identified
by
the
study.
However,
these
improvements
cannot
be
linked
to
the
implementation
of
the
technology
coach.
Had
the
researcher
included
survey
items
that
identified
how
much
time
the
technology
coach
had
spent
providing
professional
development
to
each
teacher,
a
correlation
between
time
and
increase
in
confidence
and
or
skill
levels
could
have
been
established.
For
example,
teachers
that
utilize
the
just
in
time
training
offered
by
a
technology
coach
five
or
more
times
a
month
show
a
higher
percentage
increase
in
confidence
to
implement
technology
would
have
been
a
valuable
finding.
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Overall the dissertation had several positive aspects. The study could be easily
replicated
in
any
school
that
has
or
plans
to
implement
technology
coaches.
The
study,
as
designed,
could
provide
some
valuable
data
to
evaluate
the
perceived
benefits
of
the
technology
coach.
The
topic
presented
is
an
important
one
that
will
only
require
more
research
in
the
coming
years.
However,
that
research
should
take
a
much
more
in-depth
look
at
the
efficacy
of
technology
coaches.
It
should
examine
more
than
just
experience
and
confidence
in
the
technology
skills
of
teachers.
It
should
look
to
establish
a
link
between
effective,
just-in-
time
professional
development
presented
by
a
technology
coach
that
has
worked
to
embed
technology
into
the
core
curriculum
and
an
increase
in
teacher
efficacy
as
a
whole.
It
should
begin
to
make
the
connection
between
effective
instructional
technology
coaches
and
increases
in
student
achievement.
Style
The
dissertation
did
not
stand
out
as
one
of
the
best
writing
examples
on
educational
technology.
The
paper
included
several
repeated
sentences
that
appeared
almost
exactly
in
multiple
places.
The
author
seemed
to
have
little
flow
in
the
literature
review
with
several
topics
seemingly
placed
randomly
in
the
middle
of
other
unrelated
topics.
Overall,
the
paper
simply
seemed
to
have
been
rushed.