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GCSE English (4700) English Language (4705) English Literature (4710)

English unit 3
Centre number

English Language unit 3


English Literature unit 3


English Literature unit 5


Centre name

Sir John Lawes

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Anna Young
Task title

Explore the ways the relationship between John and Elizabeth Proctor is presented in The Crucible.

Start present tense. Reminiscing. Unfortunately happened. To me. Worst day of life. Unusual siblings
Para 1 We were peas in pod. Describe our relationship.
Day of the adoption
Para 2 past tense. The adults arrived. Pretend to look fascinated. Rotten unpleasant. Kids left abandoned by
parents. Smart clothes
Para 3 the look in their eyes, mile away. Fear fright. Lucky to have Bianca. Exception about siblings. Although
desperate to leave.
Desperation took over
Para4- Dialogue between Bianca and Adults. Me watching without. Hammock. Keep down Kelly Sitting on a swing
B: love tennis and playing outside .
Italic writing. Me saying thoughts.
Para 6- Heart sank anchor. Limp dishcloth.Overconfident about her decision. Like- Why did she . Family. Go
back to present: life isnt the same. I am no like all the others. Alone. Isolated separated. Hope it goes wrong..

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