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As Stalin rose to power, he moved through the ranks of the communist


party; resulting in him becoming the dictator of the U.S.S.R.

The Soviet union was in turmoil prior to Joseph


Stalins rise to power.

What was the state of The Soviet


Union prior to Joseph Stalin coming
to power?

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Lenin, who was still in exile, realized this


was the moment he had been waiting for. In
April 1917, the German authorities allowed
him to return to Russia in a sealed train.
The Germans hoped that the Bolsheviks
would destabilize Russia and force the
country to withdraw from the war. on his
arrival in Petrograd, Lenin... immediately
published a series of demands, known as
the April Theses, calling for radical
oppositions to the Provisional Government.
In November 1917, the Bolsheviks led by
Vladimir Lenin seized power in Russia and
set about establishing the worlds first
communist state. In April 1918, Nicholas
and his family were transferred to
Yekaterinburg in the Urals, which sealed
their doom. Civil war broke out in Russia in
June 1918, and in July the anti-Bolshevik
White Russian forces advanced on
Yekaterinburg... during a campaign against
the Bolshevik forces. Local authorities were
ordered to prevent a rescue of the
Romanovs, and after a secret meeting by
the Yekaterinburg Soviet, a death sentence
was passed on the imperial family.The
revolt was eventually crushed, and the
soviets were closed down, though not
before Czar Nicholas II had issued his
October Manifesto... which granted agrarian
reform (allowing the wealthier peasants to
buy their own land) and the creation of a
representative parliament, the duma. the
duma was suppose to approve all russian
laws, but ...the Czar made sure it had no
real power, dissolving it twice during his
reign.
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Lenin was in exile


The germans wished the
Bolsheviks would destabilize russia and
make the country withdraw from the war
a death sentence was
announced upon the imperial family

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Vladimir Lenin was in exile,the germans


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In November ...1917, the


Bolsheviks led by Vladimir
Lenin seized power in
Russia and set about
establishing the worlds first
commun ist state. In... April
1918, Nicholas and his fami
ly were transferred to
Yekaterinburg... in the
Urals, which sealed their
doom. Civil war broke out
in Russia in... June 1918...
and in July the antiBolshevik White Russian
forces advanced on
Yekaterinburg...

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The Germans wished the the Bolsheviks would destabilize russia and make the country withdraw from
WWII. During this, the Bolsheviks...seized power in Russia and set about establishing the worlds first
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Therefore, Russia was forced by the Bolsheviks, to improve and become a better country. Later on, the
Bolsheviks change the name of Russia to the U.S.S.R. the bolsheviks renamed russia the ussr
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In early October, Lenin convinced the Bolshevik


Party to form an immediate insurrection against
the Provisional Government. The Bolshevik
leaders felt it was of the utmost importance to act
quickly while they had the momentum to do so.
The armed workers known as Red Guards and
the other revolutionary groups moved on the
night of Nov. 6-7 under the orders of the Soviet's
Military Revolutionary Committee. These forces
seized post and telegraph offices, electric works,
railroad stations, and the state bank. Once the
shot rang out from the Battleship Aurora, the
thousands of people in the Red Guard stormed

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The Red Guards, under the


orders of the soviets Military
Revolutionary Committee.
They seized forces such as
post,telegraph, electric works, railroad
stations, and the state bank.

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the Winter Palace. The Provisional Government


had officially fallen to the Bolshevik regime. Once
the word came to the rest of the people that the
Winter Palace had been taken, people from all
over rose and filled it. V. I. Lenin, the leader of
the Bolsheviks, announced his attempt to
construct the socialist order in Russia. This new
government made up of Soviets, and led by the
Bolsheviks. By early November, there was little
doubt that the proletariats backed the Bolshevik
motto: "All power to the soviets!"

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The Red Guards who were under the control of


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were forced to seized post, telegraph, electric
works, railroad stations, and the state bank.*

The Provisional
Government had officially
fallen to the Bolshevik
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In early October, the Red Guards who were under the control of the Soviets Military Revolutionary
Committee, were forced to seized post, telegraph, electric works, railroad stations, and the state bank.
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How did Joseph Stalin move up


through the ranks of the communist
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April 1922 Stalin ascended to the

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Joseph Stalin moved through the ranks of the communist party


by becoming General Secretary.
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stalin gained control over the party.

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position of General Secretary of the


ruling Communist Party, a post that
gave him control over all party
appointments, promotions, and
demotions. This enabled him to fill
the ranks of the Party with his allies
and thereby solidify an enormous
power base. He appointed only
loyal communists to leadership
posts in local trade unions,
cooperatives, and army units; all
appointees reported directly to
Stalin, who kept detailed files not
only on them, but also on all party
members and industrial managers.

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move up through the ranks of
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he was able to appoint loyal


communists to higher levels and post in
nearby trade unions, and the armed
forces unit, cooperatives.
all appointees were reported to
stalin, which he kept detailed files on
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* With this he was able to appoint loyal


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trade unions, and the armed forces unit,
cooperatives, all appointees were reported to
stalin ,which he kept detailed files on them.

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Stalin [became]
ascended to the
position of General
Secretary of the
ruling Communist
Party, a post that
[which] gave him
control over all [it]
party appointments,
promotions, and
demotions. This
enabled him to fill the
ranks of the Party
with his allies and
thereby solidify an
enormous power
base. He appointed
only loyal
communists to
leadership posts in
local trade unions,

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Stalin [became]...General Secretary of the ...Communist Party...[which] gave him control (Simkin,
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To gain power Stalin, moved up through the levels of the communist party and lied to the country, which
allowed him to become dictator.

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As General Secretary Stalin


helped Lenin decide all emergency
issues in the difficult first period of
the Civil War. At the Party
Conference on 3rd April, 1922,
Lenin suggested that a new post of
General Secretary of the Central
Committee should be created.
Lenin's choice for the post was
Stalin, who in the past had always
loyally supported his policies.
Stalin's main opponents for the
future leadership of the party failed
to see the importance of this
position and actually supported his
nomination. They initially saw the
post of General Secretary as being
no more than Lenin's
mouthpiece... Soon after Stalin's
appointment as General Secretary,
Lenin went into hospital to have a
bullet removed from his body that
had been there since Kaplan's
assassination attempt. It was
hoped that this operation would
restore his health. This was not to
be; soon afterwards, a blood
vessel broke in Lenin's brain. This
left him paralyzed all down his right
side and for a time he was unable
to speak... As Lenin's
mouthpiece, Stalin had suddenly
become extremely important.
While Lenin was immobilized,
Stalin made full use of his powers
as General Secretary... At the
Party Congress he had been
granted permission to expel
unsatisfactory party members.
This enabled Stalin to remove
thousands of supporters of Leon
Trotsky, his main rival for the
leadership of the party... As

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Lenin was sent to the hospital to


remove a bullet and from being shot which
caused him to become paralyzed on his right
side.
Lenin put stalin to take over his
position

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Lenin decided to give Stalin his position after he


dies. After which Lenin was sent to the hospital to
remove a bullet and from being shot which caused
him to become paralyzed on his right side.*

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While Lenin was


immobilized, Stalin made
full use[d] of his powers as
General Secretary... At the
Party Congress he... had
been [was] granted
permission to [remove]
expel [unsatisfactory party
members.

General Secretary, Stalin also had


the power to appoint and sack
people from important positions in
the government. The new holders
of these posts were fully aware
that they owed their promotion to
Stalin. They also knew that if their
behaviour did not please Stalin
they would`be replaced.
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Lenin was sent to the hospital to remove a bullet after being shot which caused him to become
paralyzed on his right side. While Lenin was immobilized, Stalin, use[d] ...his powers... to
[remove]...unsatisfactory party members(Simkin, Joseph Stalin). After which, Stalin falsely announced
that Lenin was giving his position to him after he died.
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How did Stalin solidify power and


ultimately become dictator?

Stalin ordered a series of Purges, so he could solidify power and


ultimately become dictator.

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By the time Lenin [previous leader


of the Soviet Union] died, Stalin was
the undisputed master of the Soviet
Union. Stalin consolidated his power
by murdering or secretly discrediting
his rivals so that there was no one

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Stalin ordered a series of purges


onto his citizens
The dictator received his power by
murdering or secretly discrediting his rivals.
After Lenin passed away, Stalin
took power

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who could challenge his


authority.Stalin proceeded to
dismantle the NEP [new economic
policy] and eliminate his opposition.
He ordered a series of purges from
the late 1920s through the 1930s
that resulted in the deaths of as
many as a million soviet citizens
(some 10 million were arrested).

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After Lenin passed away, Joseph Stalin came to


power. To gain more power murdered or secretly
discredited his rivals.StAlin later ordered a series
of purges onto his citizens, as a result of this,*

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...in the deaths of as


many as a million soviet
citizens

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After Lenin passed away, Joseph Stalin came to power. To grow with this power he murdered or secretly dishonored
his rivals.So no one would be able to question his authority. Stalin later ordered a series of purges onto his citizens,
which resulted in,...the deaths of as many as a million soviet citizens (Lansford, 31)
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To obtain his powerful position he ordered the Great Purges to commence upon his citizens.watch rep
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As head of the Politburo, Stalin


consolidated near-absolute power in
the 1930s with a Great Purge of the
party, justified as an attempt to
expel 'opportunists' and 'counterrevolutionary infiltrators'. Those
targeted by the purge were often
expelled from the party, however
more severe measures ranged from
banishment to the Gulag labor
camps and to execution after trials
held by NKVD operatives.The
Purges commenced after the
assassination of Sergei Kirov, the
popular leader of the party in
Leningrad. Kirov was very close and
loyal to Stalin and his assassination
sent chills through the Bolshevik
party. It is disputed among
historians whether Kirov's
assassination was masterminded by
Stalin due to Kirov's growing
popularity. Stalin took advantage of
the Kirov assassination to begin
tightening security, (and in effect to
remove those who might have
threatened Stalin's leadership). He
initiated efforts aimed at identifying
alleged spies and counterrevolutionaries.
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stalin was the leader of the


politburo
People who were targeted by
the purges were sent to concentration
camps or murdered

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Stalin was the leader of the Politburo, as the


leader he came close to gaining the most
amount of power, giving him the ability to
start the Great Purges.People who were
targeted by the purges were sent to
concentration camps or murdered, *

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.The Purges
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The Purges originally began, due to people questioning Stalin's power and authority. People who were
targeted by the purges were sent to concentration camps or murdered, later on, The Purges
commenced after the assassination of Sergei Kirov( New world Encyclopedia, Joseph Stalin)

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Furthermore + Stalin rose to power, he moved through
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his people to maintain control.

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Furthermore, Stalin came to power by moving through the communist party,


ending up with him becoming dictator. After which, Stalin improved the
economy by ordering a five year plan, and he manipulated his people in order
to maintain his power and control.

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improve the economy?
hundred years on industrial revolution were crammed into five

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Stalin realized that the USSR


needed rapid modernization to
survive. At stake was communisms
boast that it could create a powerful,
modern state to rival any created by
capitalism. One hundred years of
industrial revolution were
crammed into intensive Five-Year
Plans. Vital heavy industries such
as, coal, iron, steel, electricity, oil
and machinery were established. By

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Stalin noticed that the U.S.S.R.


need a quick modernization to continue
to grow and survives
Important industries were such
as, iron, coal, electricity, oil, steel and
machinery were added to the U.S.S.R
quickly
The U.S.S.R. become the largest
industrial power the United States

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One hundred years of


industrial revolution were

1937, the USSR was the largest


industrial power in the world, just
behind the United States.

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Stalin perceived that the U.S.S.R. need a quick


modernization to continue to grow and survive,
as a result,* one hundred years of industrial
revolution were crammed into intensive FiveYear Plans. (Richie, 25) Due to this, significant
industries such as, iron, coal, electricity, oil, steel
and machinery were added to the U.S.S.R
quickly, eventually it became the largest
industrial power behind the United States.

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crammed into intensive


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approved Stalin perceived that the U.S.S.R. need a quick modernization to continue to grow and survive, as a result,
one hundred years of industrial revolution were crammed into intensive Five-Year Plans. (Richie, 25) Due to this,
industries such as, iron, coal, electricity, oil, steel and machinery were added to the U.S.S.R, over a quick period of
time it became the largest industrial power behind the United States.

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order to modernize the U.S.S.R. Stalin order a Five-Year Plan where one hundred years
of industrial revolution, were crammed into five years.
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Under the dictator's five-year


plans, the Russians had achieved
very uneven results. Most notably
they created a great industrial
establishment, but were able to
obtain only limited material rewards.
Although Stalin meant us not to
know many of the magnitudes, I
believe we can gauge the main
trends. In 1952, the dictator's nextto-last year, Soviet industry
produced about 6.5 times as much
as it did at the beginning of the fiveyear plans in 1928. In heavy
industries the gains were even
greater. Steel production increased
eightfold to 34.5 million tons, coal
8.5 times to 301 million tons, and
electric power 23 times to 116
billion kilowatt hours. In a quartercentury the U.S.S.R. became the
world's second industrial
Power.

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Five year plans


The industries products and gains
were extremely efficient
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In a quarter-century ...the
U.S.S.R. became the world's
second industrial Power.

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Due to Stalin's Five-Year Plan, the U.S.S.R. were


able to have their industrial products and gains to
become extremely efficient. The dictator also
made steel production increase to allow, *

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APPROVED Due to Stalin's Five-Year Plan, the U.S.S.R. was able to have their industrial products and gains to
become extremely efficient. The dictator also made steel production increase to allow, ...the U.S.S.R. became
the world's second industrial Power. (Bergson)

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How did Stalin manipulate the


people to maintain his control?

Therefore, Stalin manipulated his people to gain power/maintain his


control by ruling in terror and killing everyone who disagreed with
him.

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Stalin ruled by terror and with a


Stalin ruled by terror and killed
totalitarian grip in order to eliminate
everyone who disagreed with him.
anyone who might oppose him. He
He encouraged his citizens to spy
expanded the powers of the secret
on each other and had millions of people
police, encouraged citizens to spy
murdered or sent to forced labor camps.
on one another and had millions of
he created a plan to remove the
people killed or sent to the Gulag
communist party.
system of forced labor camps.
During the second half of the
1930s, Stalin instituted the Great
Purge, a series of campaigns
designed to rid the Communist
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Party, the military and other parts
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of Soviet society from those he
Stalin controlled the U.S.S.R. by making his
considered a threat.
citizens afraid, by killing everyone who disagreed
with him, while doing so, he inspired his people to
observe each other and had millions of citizens
and foreigners murdered or sent to concentration
camps. Later on he created a plan to remove the
communist party. *

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the military and other


parts of Soviet society
from those he
considered a threat.

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Stalin controlled the U.S.S.R. by making his citizens afraid, by killing everyone who disagreed with him.
While doing so, he inspired his people to observe each other and had millions of citizens and foreigners
murdered or sent to concentration camps.Later on he created a plan to remove the communist party,
since,...the military and other parts of Soviet society from those he considered a threat, to his nation.
(History.com Staff, Joseph Stalin)
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Stalin influenced his citizens to get him out of situations, which would question his authority, he did this
in order to keep his power. IDK what youre trying to say
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Stalin further created falsified


historical accounts by portraying
himself as Lenin's favorite and
chosen successor, when in fact
Lenin did not trust him. He
sponsored literature which glorified
his presumed humble origins, so
much so that the small bungalow
in which he was born was encased
in glass and surrounded by marble
columns. Stalin was quick to paint
those who challenged or even
disagreed with him as "enemies of
the revolution." Witnesses were
paid to offer false testimony, after
which the witnesses themselves
were quieted. With zero dissent
and his image constantly before
the Soviet People, Stalin was able
to work his will with deftness and
efficiency.

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stalin made historical accounts


as lenins favorite successor, even
though, lenin did not trust him.
Witnesses were paid to offer
false testimony

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stalin made historical accounts as lenins


favorite successor, even though, lenin did not
trust him. * Witnesses were paid to offer false
testimony

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Stalin was quick to


paint those who
challenged or even
disagreed with him as
"enemies of the
revolution."

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Stalin made historical accounts as Lenins favorite successor, even though, Lenin did not trust him. As a
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revolution, (Larry Gates) witnesses were paid to offer false testimony, to protect him. REDO THIS BOX

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As a result + Stalin improved the economy by


ordering a five year plan, and he manipulated
his people in order to maintain his power and
control. + stalin allied himself with at the
beginning of the war + stalin involvement in
WWII affect the U.S.S.R. as a whole + Joseph
Stalin

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As a result, Stalin improved the economy by commencing a five year


plan, and he manipulated his people to maintain power and control.
Then, Stalin allied himself with both side during WWII, this affected the
U.S.S.R. by allowing Stalin to use it as an advantage.

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Who did Stalin ally himself with at


the beginning of WWII?

Stalin allied himself with Adolf Hitler, the United States, and Great
Britain, at the beginning of the war.

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In 1939, on the eve of World War


II, Joseph Stalin and German
dictator Adolf Hitler(1889-1945)
signed a nonaggression pact.
Stalin then proceeded to annex
parts of Poland and Romania, as
well as the Baltic states of
Estonia, Latvia and Lithuania. He
also launched an invasion of
Finland.

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Stalin annex Poland and Romania


and a Baltic states
Launched an invasion on finland
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Joseph Stalin and


German dictator Adolf
Hitler(1889-1945)
signed a nonaggression
pact.

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*, After, Stalin annex Poland and Romania and a


Baltic states. Later, Stain launched an invasion on
Finland

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Joseph Stalin and German dictator Adolf Hitler...signed a nonaggression pact, ( History.com Staff, Joesph
Stalin) after, Stalin extended the U.S.S.R. to Poland and Romania and the Baltic states. Later, Stalin started an
infringement on Finland REDO incorp

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During WWII, Stalin made alliances with two competing side of the war, so he didnt get on eithers
badside.
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Stalin joined the Allied powers,


which included Great Britain (led
by Sir
Winston Churchill) and later the
United States (led by Franklin D.
Roosevelt). Although they
shared a joint enemy, the
communist/capitalist rift ensured
that mistrust
characterized the relationship.

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Stalin had an alliance with great


britain, united states which was led by
Winston Churchill and it was later led by
Franklin D. Roosevelt
They shared a mistrust relationship
with the communist/capitalist .

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Stalin joined the


Allied powers..

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*,which was an alliance with great britain, united


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was later led by Franklin D. Roosevelt. They
shared a mistrust relationship with the
communist/capitalist .

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Stalin joined the Allied powers..,which was an alliance with Great Britain, United States which was led
by Winston Churchill and it was later led by Franklin D. Roosevelt. They all shared a mistrust
relationship with the communist/capitalist. Stalin made alliances with both sides of the war, so he wasnt
hated by either. (History 1900s) add more of you

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How did Russias involvement in


WW2 effect the country as a
whole?
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Domestically, Stalin was


presented as a great wartime
leader who had led the Soviets to
victory against the Nazis. By the
end of the 1940s, Russian
nationalism increased. For
instance, some inventions and
scientific discoveries were
reclaimed by ethnic Russian
researchers. Internationally, Stalin
viewed Soviet consolidation of
power as a necessary step to

PG 14
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Since Stalin allied himself with both side of the war, it allowed him to
take advantage of the situation.
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Russian nation increased with


inventions and scientific discoveries
Stalin looked at the Soviet power
as a way to protect the U.S.S.R.
He wished that the United States
would withdraw from the war.

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Domestically, Stalin
was presented as a
great wartime leader
who had led the

protect the USSR by surrounding it


with countries with friendly
governments, to act as a cordon
sanitaire (buffer) against possible
invaders (while the West sought a
similar buffer against
communism).He had hoped that
American withdrawal and
demobilization would lead to
increased communist influence,
especially in Europe. Each side
might view the other's defensive
actions as destabilizing
provocations and these security
dilemmas frayed relations between
the Soviet Union and its former
World War II western allies and led
to a prolonged period of tension
and distrust between East and
West known as the Cold War.

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Soviets to victory
against the Nazis.

*, after this the Russian nation increased with


inventions and scientific discoveries. Stalin
looked at the Soviet power as a way to protect
the U.S.S.R. As he wished that the United
States would withdraw from the war.

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Domestically, Stalin was presented as a great wartime leader who had led the Soviets to victory
against the Nazis, after this the Russian nation increased with inventions and scientific discoveries.
Stalin looked at the Soviet power as a way to protect the U.S.S.R. As he wished that the United States
would withdraw from the war. (New World Encyclopedia Staff, Joseph Stalin)
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U.S.S.R.

Stalin wanted to present himself as a strong war leader, so he claimed more land for the

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Most of Eastern Europe was


devastated and destabilized from
WWII. The USSR takes advantage,
setting up communist governments
in Poland, Czechoslovakia,
Hungary, Yugoslavia, Romania and
Bulgaria. The Baltic nations of
Estonia, Latvia and Lithuania are
simply added directly to the Soviet
Union. The USSR also keeps the
northern part of East Prussia
(formerly part of Germany), naming
it Kaliningrad Oblast, to give it a
badly needed warm-water port in
the Baltic Sea. With this gain in
territory, the USSR becomes a
leading world power, along with the
U.S., as it is strengthened while
other European powers are
weakened."

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The U.S.S.R. took advantage, by


setting up the communist government
The U.S.S.R. kept the northern
part of eastern Prussia.
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With this gain in


territory, the USSR
becomes a leading
world power,
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U.S.S.R. was able to gain the eastern area of
Prussia, *

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The U.S.S.R. took advantage, by setting up the communist government. By doing so, The U.S.S.R. was
able to gain the eastern area of Prussia, With this gain in territory, the USSR becomes a leading world
power (Effect of WW2 on Each Country)