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Name: I S O B E L L E

C H A P P L E

Unit: 1.5 Force

Task:

Teachers comments:

3 artist analysis (9 photos)

The artist sections that you have completed are good but there
should be three artists with three pictures analyses at present
you only have two Artists please can you complete this
section.

T-

Nadav Kander (3 photos)

Excellent analysis and understanding of his work your vocab is


strong and demonstrates a strong understanding of the
photographic process.

T+

Francois Delfosse (3 photos)

Three images but where is your analysis

T-

Bernd And Hilla Becher (3 photos)

Three images but where is your analysis

T-

Force of nature

A really strong section excellent location used I especially like


the rusted car images. This location could defiantly be
revisited and different angles looked at. The images attached
are from the same location and turned into B/W this could be
an interesting way of developing this section.

T+

Applied force

Again a good section that is helped by the fact you have gone
beyond the number of responses asked for. The mirror section
is good and could be developed further in the studio maybe
experimenting with colour and light on the glass.

Imposing architecture

The early shots taken around school lack any real impact.
Your choice of buildings is not good you need to be shooting
up using a worm eye view. The later images have much more
impact and the ally pally images work with the dark skies has
real impact.

3 strands

It is difficult to see what your three strands are; you need to


move a few sections around. The shots in water and the water
experiments need to be placed at the end as part of the strand
development. This would make the sections flow.

Ao3:

Application of technique

T+

Quality of the
photographs.
How has the
subject been
recorded?

You demonstrate a good understanding of the techniques


looked at in class and clearly refine your work in your second
and third responses.

Composition

On the whole your composition is very good but I would like


you to get closer in some of your images. In particular the man
vs nature images. By getting closer you can highlight the
struggle between man and nature and its visual effect.

Location and subject matter

Excellent locations and subject matter used well done

T+

3 final images

The two images that you have put forward as your final pieces
are good but they stand alone at present. If you move the
sections around as I mentioned earlier the project would make
more sense also you should have three images.

Ao1:
Analysis.
How well have
you understood
the work of
other
photographers?

Ao2:
Progression
from 1st to 2nd
response. How
have the photos
been refined?

Ao4:
Final Piece,
How have you
presented and
realised your
unique
photographs?

T+

Grade: B+

Target: B

Final Comment:
Well done a very good project if you go back and make the changes that I have mentioned this project would move up to
an A.

Ao1

Develop their ideas through investigations informed by


contextual and other sources, demonstrating
analytical and cultural understanding

Ao2

Refine their ideas through experimenting and


selecting appropriate resources, media, materials, techniques
and processes

Ao3

Record ideas, observations and insights relevant to


their intentions in visual and/or other forms

Ao4

Present a personal, informed and meaningful response


Demonstrating analytical and critical understanding,
realising intentions and, where appropriate,
making connections between visual, written, oral or
other elements.