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Ironyessay____/100

"Howdoestheauthorconveythemeinthestory?Mustincludeatleastoneparagraphonirony."
StoriesmayincludeThenecklace,LambtotheSlaughter,TheSniper,TheRansomofRedChief,TheManfromtheSouth
and/orTheCowardlyLion.Youcouldalsousemultiplestoriestosupportyourclaim.

Incomplete/Poor(F)

Meh(C)

Excellente!(A)

PromptIrony

Essaydoesnotfollowor
answerpromptor
doesntfocusonIrony.

Essaypromptis
answeredbutIneedto
seemorereferencesto
Irony.

Promptisfullyanswered
andIknowwhythe
authorusedIrony,what
kindofironyandwhat
theironychangesabout
themessage.

Intro

Introdoesnotincludea Hookcouldbestronger. IfIwereafishyouwould


hook,appropriatefilleror Somefillerisincluded,
havecaughtme!You
thesisisinthewrong
butthereaderdoesnt
haveagreathook,
place.
haveagreatideaofwhat
strongfillerandyour
Doesnotincludestory
thepaperisabout.
thesisisinthecorrect
tilteorauthor.
IncludesstorytitleOR
location.
author.
Includesbothstorytitle
andauthor.Summarizes
story.

Bodyparagraphs

Paragraphorderdoes
notmatchthethesis,
paragraphsdonotprove
thethesis.Missing
evidence.

Someevidenceis
includedbutmoreis
neededtofullysupport
thethesis.

Thesisisfullysupported
andevidenceisclear
andexact.Exact
examplesaregiven.

Quotesandwiches

Incorrectformatisused.
Thequotesareatthe
beginningortheendof
theparagraph.Not
surroundedbywriters
ownwords,dont
connectorarenot
sorted.

Somequotesareusedin Correctquotesandwich
thecorrectformat.Some
used.Citedand
areatthebeginningor explainedandconnected
end,orlackingwriters
well.
ownwords.Someare
citedcorrectly.

Conclusions

Conclusionismissinga
Clenchercouldbe
clencherandsummary,
stronger,andsummary
thesisismissingorinthe
ispresentbut
wrongplace.Attheend
incomplete.Thesisis
oftheessayIcanstill
presentintherightplace
asksowhat?
butnotnotreworded
fromfirstthesis.

Yourclencherleftme
thinkingaboutyour
paper!Thesiswas
rewordedandsummary
wasthoroughand
excellent.

Organization

Paperispoorly
organized,hardtofollow
andconfusing.Didnot
followthesis.

WithsomeeffortIcould
understandandfollow
thepaper.Partially
followedthesis.

Followedthesisperfectly.
Greatorganizationand
easytofollow.

Grammar,Usage,
spelling,fluencyetc.

Paperincludessomany
mistakesthatitishardto
followorunderstand.Not
revised.Commasplice
problems.
YouandIis
used.Pronoun
inconsistencies.

Includessomeerrors,
buttheoverallmessage
ofthepaperisnot
inhibitedbytheseerrors.

FinalDrafthasnoneor
veryminorerrors.Itdoes
notaffectcomprehension
atall.Nocommasplices!
YouandIisNEVER
used.Pronounsare
consistent.

Format(font,spacing
etc)

DoesnotfollowMiss
Sturmsformatforfinal
drafts.

FollowsMissSturms
finalformat.