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Phn tch cc thnh phn cu thnh mt on vn ting Anh

TOPIC:
What is your hobby?
Transitional word

Topic sentence
(Main idea: I like
traveling
Arguments: it not only
relaxes my mind, widens
my knowledge, but also
brings me new friends.)

I like traveling very much because it not only


relaxes my mind, widens my knowledge, but also
brings me new friends. First, I always feel happy when
traveling. Enjoying beautiful scenery everywhere, though
natural or man-made, is the most effective pill to heal my
mental diseases. Besides, I can learn many interesting
things from traveling. The more we travel, the more we
know about the world around us, which considerably
contributes to our understandings. In addition, we can
have interesting relationships when we travel to
somewhere. Sudden friendships coming with us in our
trips bring us sweet memories and warm feelings
everywhere, making us not feel lonely or strange
anywhere we come and visit. Briefly speaking, traveling
is important and essential part of my life.

Explanations

Supporting detail 1
(relaxes my mind)

Supporting detail 2
(widens my knowledge)

Supporting detail 2
(brings me new friends)

Restatement: (Summarizes
the main idea: traveling
And includes the writers
personal opinion:
important and essential part
of my life.)

Written and explained by Dang Quang Diem, ESL teacher,


Angiang University, tel: 0906483527