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Joseph Najera
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Slider Joe,
This piece has a TON of potential, and Im really looking
forward to the improvements that youll hopefully be making
on this for your portfolio.
If I have one piece of advice, its this: be crystal-clear about
what, exactly, youre arguing in this paper. Lay it out in your
thesis statement so your reader will be able to follow your
thought process along the way.
Also: paragraphs--use them, my man! Some of your superlong paragraphs were tough for me to get through. Make your
readers job as easy possible. :)
All told, though, again: this paper could be an A with
enough work and re-organization. Great topic too.
Z
7.5/10
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De Piero - Writing 2
October 14, 2015
The Slide Heard Around the World
The NLDS (National League Divisional Series) for Major League Baseball is
being played right now by the New York Mets and the Los Angeles Dodgers. Featuring
two teams with different styles of play on different sides of the country, the series is
becoming more intense as the series advances towards game three, with each team
winning one game so far. Sports writers around the country are all following this series,
with each adding their own take on the events that have occurred. And although many of
these articles are all covering the same topic, they present different information, yet are
still similar because of certain conventions that are the same throughout their genre.
The websites of ESPN, the LA Times, and NJ.com all have covered the NLDS since it
began on October 9th. Although each article focuses on the same topic, there are many
differences in the way the information is presented because of the bias of each writer.
Each writer tries to present the information in a manner most intriguing to the reader,
often resulting in different takes and perspectives for each article. Many factors go into
the bias, and each has its own importance in terms of how the finished article is presented
to the readers. To begin, the audience for which the articles are written plays a large part
in terms of how the writer is presenting information to the readers. The NJ.com article
will naturally have a more pro-Mets tone throughout the piece because it is written for
Mets fans by a Mets fan (probably), and is centered in New Jersey. Thus, the
LATimes.com article will focus more on the Dodgers and present their side of the event,
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so as to relate more to Dodger Fans. However, the ESPN.com article is on a more neutral
siteESPNand must then try to present the topic with only facts, and without bias. For
example, a controversial play that occurred in Game Two of the series that allowed the
Dodgers to win and left the starting shortstop of the Mets with a broken Fibula is the
main topic of the playoffs right now. Although the ESPN article does have its fair share
of opinions on the topic, it is able to stay balanced as it presents opinions that elaborate
on each side of the topic, allowing for both sides to be seen. The NJ.com article on this
topic is entitled Pedro Martinez rips Dodgers' Chase Utley for reckless 'mind-boggling'
slide and focuses on what an ex-Met and Hall of Fame Pitcher--Pedro Martinez-- had to
say on the topic. It also features many excerpts from current Mets player and even
baseball analysts who took to the media to focus on not only how terrible the slide was,
but how the call on the play was misconstrued as well. The result of these excerpts
creates a tone of anger and resentment towards the Dodgers and Chase Utley in
particular, referring to the slide as a tackle and saying that it belongs nowhere in the
sport of baseball. On the other hand, the LA Times article vaguely mentions the incident,
and instead chooses to focus on how runs were scored and the great pitching matchup
that had endured as well. The article mentions the slide once in the first paragraph, and
fails to elaborate on what had occurred after that. Each article must also follow the
constraints set by their platform so that they may get the most reads and have the most
influential voice on the subject. One constraint (or annoyance) that is extremely
important in the sports world is the favoritism that the larger, multi-sport covering
websites sometimes have. Many people visit sites such as ESPN.com or MLB.com, so
that they may not get the bias that websites like DodgersNation.com or MetsBlog.com
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have towards a specific team. Instead they want the whole picture that contains the facts,
but also presents the opinions from both sides so that the whole story can be in view. If
the author of the ESPN.com article were to focus on one team, then he would not be
within the constraints of his website and ultimately lose readers because of it. Readers
know that if they are looking for a blog that favors their team, and will say things they
ultimately want to hear, they should go to a specialized website to find their news.
Overall, these articles all cover the same topic, all fit inside the same genre, yet display
different information because of their audience and their constraints that are around them.
Despite the differences each article has with one another, they still each contain
certain conventions that link them together. To begin, they all follow a very similar set-up
that allows them to draw readers in and hopefully keep them there by showcasing other
articles of similar, interesting topics. These litter the top, sides, and even the middle of
articles, and are a main way the website shows off other articles to consistent readers.
Each article also always conatians a headline that serves as a small introduction to the
article as a whole. The headline is supposed to grab the readers attention and draw them
in, as it serves as the readers first introduction to the writing. Headlines may also contain
other rhetorical techniques that help pull the reader on. One example is the NJ.com article
and which uses rhetorical technique of ethos (Caroll, 63), as it establishes a large amount
of credibility as it builds on what was said by an ex-Met and Hall of Famer, Pedro
Martinez. This allows the reader to have more of an inclination to follow the article--and
even the writer--more closely than they would have before. Although it may not be in
every headline, almost every sports article mentions the name of someone deemed great
so that it may establish a connection of the article, to the athlete who is more than likely
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loved by fans everywhere. This occurs in both the LA Times and ESPN articles as well,
as each calls on experts in order to bring about a solid conclusion on the topic. The ESPN
article gets quotes from both Mets and Dodger players in order to showcase both sides of
the argument. This can be shown through specific quotes which serve to defend either
Chase Utley (the runner who slid) or Ruben Tejada (the position player who was slid
into). This also provides credibility in the fact that by pulling quotes from current players
on each team, this allows ESPN to seem as if they are with the players during every step
of the way, and that they have the inside beat on what is occurring. Writers also love to
mention the past and bring up old events that sometimes barely even relate to the
situation they are covering. All three articles mention a previous incident that has no
relativity to the event in terms of context. Five years ago, when Chase Utley played for
the Phillies, he had a similar collision with Ruben Tejada and the Mets, which ended in a
benches-clearing brawl. This excerpt and connection is done by each article in order to
help get the reader hooked and allowing them to divulge into the event more, hoping to
get the fans to follow the NLDS more closely in case a similar situation happens. And
although another benches-clearing brawl may be imminent in the near future--theres
already been two this Postseason--the previous Utley-Tejada collision has no impact on
the most recent one or any events that follow it. This rhetorical tactic can be classified as
pathos as they are stirring up emotion and getting readers from both sides of the fence
invested into what may occur in the near future (Carroll, 63). Overall, the strategies and
layouts that these writers use are all similar because they are apart of the conventions that
are employed in this genre to create successful writing.
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By analyzing and seeing the conventions and how they apply to this genre, we are
able to gain a better grasp of genre as a whole. These articles help to show that certain
conventions must be followed in order to allow the reader to know what theyre getting
into and to like the piece. The articles and how they present their information is important
because it allows for the reader to see how a topic can be covered by different sides, with
different opinions being mixed in, yet it can still fit inside the same genre and relate to the
topic. This helps show that genre isnt as cookie cutter and as rigid as people believe it to
be. Genre and the conventions that make up a specific genre are able to change (not
drastically, but more of a morphing) into fitting for a specific topic so that the
information and topic being covered can gain the best response for the situation. Also, by
understanding how this genre works and employs its conventions, readers are able to use
the same analytical skills on other genres and can figure out the inter-workings of how
writers create specific actions on the part of the readers (Dirk, 254). This is covered in
the reading Navigating Genres by Kerry Dirk where she mentions that all genres
matter because they shape our everyday lives (254). Dirk is talking about how genre can
help us see the authors purpose and it helps when writing because knowing the purpose
for your writing is a big advantage. Another technique that was present in Backpacks vs.
Briefcases, that was also present in the articles were how authors able to conform to their
audience and present information that the audience would like to read. Caroll states on
page 49, that audience should help you address the problem when writing. Basically,
Caroll is focusing on the ablility to identify the audience you are writing for and then
knowing how to present information in the best possible manner for the audience.
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In the end, the importance of genre and the identifying of conventions in an article
really relies on the reader and the amount of significance they place in it. Yet, genres are
all around us and can still be seen even when you try escape the analytical part of it all.
From Netflix descriptions, to magazine covers, we can see how rhetors of all types follow
certain conventions to allow their piece to fit into the genre they are aiming for. And even
if the information presented is different, and the writers have a differing stance on a topic,
they are still able to use the same conventions to fit inside the same genre.
Bibliography
Carroll, Laura Bolin. "Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps Toward Rhetorical Analysis."
Backpacks vs. Briefcases: Steps Toward Rhetorical Analysis. N.p., n.d. Web. 11 Oct.
2015.
Dilbeck, Steve. "Dodgers Beat Mets, 5-2, to Even the NLDS Series after Controversial
Play." Los Angeles Times. Los Angeles Times, 11 Oct. 2015. Web. 11 Oct. 2015.
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Dirk, Kerry. "Navigating Genres." Writing Spaces: Readings on Writing. By Charles
Lowe and Pavel Zemliansky. West Lafayette, IN: Parlor, 2010. N. pag. Print.
Saxon, Mark. "Mets' Ruben Tejada Fractures Lower Leg on Chase Utley's Hard Slide."
ESPN.com. ESPN, 11 Oct. 15. Web. 11 Oct. 15.
Vorkunov, Mike. "Pedro Martinez Rips Dodgers' Chase Utley for Reckless 'mindboggling' Slide." NJ.com. N.p., 11 Oct. 15. Web. 11 Oct. 15.