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Online Greenlight Review #1
20-01-2016

Premise
A young girl tormented by a dream that
could save her life

Step Outline
A young girl wakes up, her head bandaged. She is in a hospital. Awakened by the sound of a lullaby.
She walks down a strangely deserted corridor trying to find the source of the lullaby.
She enters a room that has a music box on a table, open and loudly playing its tune. The little girl
goes to investigate the box.
A key is by the music boxs side. The ballerina inside the box begins to slow and eventually stops
dancing.
Another girl appears within the room (a ghost) out of nowhere. A striking resemblance between them. They
look at each other, one of them confused, the other (ghost) looks on with a sad expression.
The girl (ghost) picks up the key next to the box and puts it in its winding mechanism, with 3 quick
turns, the girl wakes up.
She lie awake, startled, breathless, her parents rush to her bedside, they hug her to calm her down and
lay her back down to rest on her pillow.
She closes her eyes and goes back to sleep.

Logline
Stuck in hospital, a girl is haunted by a dream, a dream that
could open her eyes to the world and bring her back to life.

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