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pendapat saya tentang wanita karir adalah sah-sah saja apabilah tidak

mengganggu kewajibannya terhadap suami dan anak2nya.Karena kewajiban


seorang wanita yang utama adalah buat keluarganya,selanjutnya boleh mengabdi
terhadap masyarakat dan negaranya.Wanita harus mempunyai alasan yang kuat
apabilah memutuskan untuk bekerja,Mungkin buat membantu perekonomian
keluarga atau mempunyai keahlian untuk membantu orang banyak.Jika seorang
wanita bekerja hanya untuk menghilangkan rasa bosen saja, lebih baik diam
dirumah dan mengabdi kepada suami dan anak karena itu lebih baik.Juga,dalam
kepercayaan agama saya seorang wanita harus dilindungi tidak untuk bekerja
keras.
Saya tahu sekitar tahun 1890 an R.A.Kartini telah berhasil memperjuangkan
drajat wanita untuk jauh lebih maju dan mampu mengimbangi kaum pria dalam hal
hak memperoleh pendidikan,hak berpendapat dan lainnya.Beliau juga telah menulis
sebuh buku yang terkenal sampai sekarang "HABIS GELAP TERBITLAH
TERANG".
Emansipasi dan kesetaraan gender memang perlu diterapkan bagi wanita, namun
tidak boleh meninggalkan kodratnya sebagai seorang wanita.

My opinion about women career is possible if not disturb to obligations for


husband and childs.Because first obligations a women is subserve to her family,then
can dedicate to society and country.A women must have reason that strong if
decide for work,maybe for help economic matters or have a skill to help people.If a
women working only to get rid of felling bored,stay at home and subserved to
husband and childs better.Also,in my religion a women must be protected not for
work very hard.
I know around in 1890 R.A.Kartini was succed to struggle dignity women
much better and capable offset men in right get education,right contend and
others.She has also written a book that famous until now "HABIS GELAP
TERBITLAH TERANG".
Emancipation and gender equality indeed must applied for women,however should
not leave nature as a women.

REVIEW
My opinion about (a career woman) women career is (that it is alright) possible (as
long as it does) if not disturb (their) to obligations (towards their) for husband and
(children) childs. Because (the primary) first (responsibility/duty) obligations (of) a
(woman) women is (subserving) subserve () to her family, then () can (a dedication

towards the) dedicate to society and country (comes next). A (woman) women must
have (a strong) reason () that strong if (she) decide(s) (to) for work, maybe () for
help(ing) (the family for) economic matters or have(ing) a skill to help (many)
people. If a women working only to get rid of (feeling) felling bored, (then) stay(ing)
at home and (serving) subserved (her) to husband and (children) childs (would be)
better. (Moreover/furthermore) Also, (according to) in my religion(,) women must be
protected, not () for work(ing) very hard.
(As) I know around () in 1890(,) R.A.Kartini was (succeed) succed to (stand up)
struggle (for woman dignity) dignity women (to raise their level) much better and
(gain equal capability) capable (with) offset men in (education) right () get
education, (freedom of speech) right contend(,) and (many) others (so on). She has
also written a book that (is) famous until now(, titled) "HABIS GELAP TERBITLAH
TERANG".
(After all,) (woman) Emancipation and gender equality indeed (should be) must
applied () for women, however(,) (one) should not (forget) leave (her) nature as a
(woman) women.

CLEAN REVIEW
My opinion about a career woman is that it is alright as long as it does not disturb
their obligations towards their husband and children. Because the primary
responsibility of a woman is sub-serving her family, then a dedication towards the
society and country comes next. A woman must have a strong reason if she decides
to work, maybe helping the family for economic matters or having a skill to help
many people. If a women working only to get rid of feeling bored, then staying at
home and serving her husband and children would be better. Moreover, according to
my religion, women must be protected, not working very hard.
As I know around 1890, R. A. Kartini was succeed to stand up for woman dignity to
raise their level and gain equal capability with men in education right, freedom of
speech, and so on. She has also written a book that is famous until now, titled
"HABIS GELAP TERBITLAH TERANG".
After all, woman emancipation and gender equality indeed should be applied,
however, one should not forget her nature as a woman.

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