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REVIEW
My opinion about (a career woman) women career is (that it is alright) possible (as
long as it does) if not disturb (their) to obligations (towards their) for husband and
(children) childs. Because (the primary) first (responsibility/duty) obligations (of) a
(woman) women is (subserving) subserve () to her family, then () can (a dedication
towards the) dedicate to society and country (comes next). A (woman) women must
have (a strong) reason () that strong if (she) decide(s) (to) for work, maybe () for
help(ing) (the family for) economic matters or have(ing) a skill to help (many)
people. If a women working only to get rid of (feeling) felling bored, (then) stay(ing)
at home and (serving) subserved (her) to husband and (children) childs (would be)
better. (Moreover/furthermore) Also, (according to) in my religion(,) women must be
protected, not () for work(ing) very hard.
(As) I know around () in 1890(,) R.A.Kartini was (succeed) succed to (stand up)
struggle (for woman dignity) dignity women (to raise their level) much better and
(gain equal capability) capable (with) offset men in (education) right () get
education, (freedom of speech) right contend(,) and (many) others (so on). She has
also written a book that (is) famous until now(, titled) "HABIS GELAP TERBITLAH
TERANG".
(After all,) (woman) Emancipation and gender equality indeed (should be) must
applied () for women, however(,) (one) should not (forget) leave (her) nature as a
(woman) women.
CLEAN REVIEW
My opinion about a career woman is that it is alright as long as it does not disturb
their obligations towards their husband and children. Because the primary
responsibility of a woman is sub-serving her family, then a dedication towards the
society and country comes next. A woman must have a strong reason if she decides
to work, maybe helping the family for economic matters or having a skill to help
many people. If a women working only to get rid of feeling bored, then staying at
home and serving her husband and children would be better. Moreover, according to
my religion, women must be protected, not working very hard.
As I know around 1890, R. A. Kartini was succeed to stand up for woman dignity to
raise their level and gain equal capability with men in education right, freedom of
speech, and so on. She has also written a book that is famous until now, titled
"HABIS GELAP TERBITLAH TERANG".
After all, woman emancipation and gender equality indeed should be applied,
however, one should not forget her nature as a woman.