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Persuasive Essay Organizer

Name:DianaRodriguezTopic:MaternalMortalityMod:3

INTRODUCTION(Negatives)
MainIdeaTopicSentence:
Despitethefactthatweareinthe21stcentury,westillfacemanyproblemsinvolving
womensrights.
SupportingReasons:Body1:
OneofthemajorproblemswomenstillfaceinAfricaduringthe21thcenturyis
maternalmortality.

Body2:
MaternalMortalitythenandnow

Body3:
Manypeoplearenowjoiningforcesinordertodecreasethenumberofdeathscaused
bymaternalmortality.
Thesis:
Inmyopinion,MaternalMortalityisoneofthemajorproblemswestillfaceinthe21stcenturybecausethis
issomethingthatoccursdaily,allaroundus,andmanyofusarentevenaware.
BODY#1
Reason#1:
OneofthemajorproblemswomenstillfaceinAfricaduringthe21thcenturyismaternalmortality.

Detail/Example1
Accordingto
HalftheSky
Book,oneofAfricasmajorproblemsismaternalmortality.

Detail/Example2
AnotherproblemAfricafacesisgenderbasedviolence.

Detail/Example3
Manywomendiedailyduetomaternalmortalityandlackofattention.
ConclusionSentence:
MaternalmortalityisamajorproblemAfricafacesdaily.
BODY#2
Reason#2:
MaternalMortalitythenandnow

Detail/

Example1
Beforenoonereallypayedattentiontomaternalmortality

Detail/Example2
Peoplewerentawareoftheconsequencesofnonadequatesupportduringpregnancy.

Detail/Example3
Nowmorepeopleknowaboutitanddeathsaredecreasingbecauseofthat
knowledgement.
ConclusionSentence:
Thankstomoreknowledgement,maternalmortalityismuchbetterthanbefore.Eventhoughit
isanissueitsnotasbadasbefore.
BODY#3
Reason#3:
Manypeoplearenowjoiningforcesinordertodecreasethenumberofdeathscausedbymaternal
mortality.

Detail/Example1
WomeninAfricadonthavetherequiredrecoursesneededinordertosuccessfully
deliverababy.

Detail/Example2
.AccordingtoHalftheSkyMovementtheriskofdyingduetochildbirthisoneoutof22.

Detail/Example3
Atthatrate,Africaspopulationisbecominggreatlyaffected
ConclusionSentence:
Withthehelpofpeoplearoundtheworld,includingartists,wecandecreasethedeathrate.
COUNTERARGUMENTS(Positives)
IntroductiontoCounterArguments:
Nowbecauseofmaternalmortality,womenwillthinktwiceiftheydecidetoget
prgnant,oriftheydogetpregnantshouldknowwhattheyaresupposedtodoinordertosuccessfullydeliverababy.

RefutethenaysayersofReason#1
Whatawomenshouldconsiderbeforehavingababy

RefutethenaysayersofReason#2
Whatwomenshoulddoduringpregnancy

Persuasive Essay Organizer

RefutethenaysayersofReason#3
Howtoavoidmaternalmortality
ConclusionSentence:
Womenshouldbeabletosuccessfullydeliverababy,andmaternalmortalitycandecrease.
CONCLUSION
RestateMainIdea:
Despitethefactthatweareinthe21stcentury,westillfacemanyproblemsinvolvingwomens
rights.OneofthemajorproblemswomenstillfaceinAfricaduringthe21thcenturyismaternalmortality.
RestateSupportingReasons:1
OneofthemajorproblemswomenstillfaceinAfricaduringthe21thcenturyis
maternalmortality.

2
MaternalMortalitythenandnow

3
Manypeoplearenowjoiningforcesinordertodecreasethenumberofdeaths
causedbymaternalmortality.
Recommendationsand/orPredictions:
Everyoneshouldbeawareofthecausesandconsequencesassociatedwith
maternalmortalityintheeffortofdecreasingdeathsduetoit.