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She says
” i dont care for religion i just love my Lord Jesus ”
And that’s cool.
perhaps..
and jump
and scream
and reach
as it pulls me beneath
to the hearth
and to the heart.
P.S
Maybe
some other “h” word.
Abyss of fire and splendor
Suck me in and suck me off.
Addendum: So I originally had an inappropriate last line that I liked a lot but I thought I would
elaborate a bit more on a thought instead of risk the last line which was “suck me in and suck me
off” after abyss of fire and splendor. Such a line was meant to be less of a crude statement and more
of a not so subtle refutation of a future in fire. I’d honestly prefer it but censor away if need be.
Perhaps you can suggest a better last line?