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    Cafeteria to be renovated over Christmas break. Prices in the cafeteria will be cut by ten percent at the start of next semester. New salads, fruits, lowfatitems, and highfiber foods.

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    Cafeteria to be renovated over Christmas break. Prices in the cafeteria will be cut by ten percent at the start of next semester. New salads, fruits, lowfatitems, and highfiber foods.

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    Cafeteria to be renovated over Christmas break. Prices in the cafeteria will be cut by ten percent at the start of next semester. New salads, fruits, lowfatitems, and highfiber foods.

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    CafeteriaRenovationNewsStory

    Makesureyourleadfocusesonthegeneralareasoftherenovation.Thenget
    morespecificinyournutgraph.Exampleyoumightwanttosaynewfurniture
    aspartofyourlead,butinyournutgraph,youwillbespecificsaying
    restaurantstyleboothsDoesthatmakesense?

    5Whys&H
    Who

    school

    What

    beingrenovated

    Where

    cafeteria

    When

    christmasbreak

    How

    renovation?

    Why

    easiertocleanandrelaxedatmosphere

    FinalStory(copyandpasteeachoftheparagraphsbelowintotheboxbelow.Makesureyouskipa
    linebetweenparagraphs.Donotindenteachparagraph.
    Tomakeamorecomfortableatmosphereforstudents,theschoolplansonredoingand
    modernizingthewholecafeteriaoverChristmasbreak.

    Studentswillsitinrestaurantstyleboothsandmusicisbeingconsideredanoption.Amuralwillbe
    paintedonthecafeteriaofstudentsdoingdifferentschoollikeactivities.Amajorchangeinthefood
    selectionisalsotakingplacewithnewsalads,fruits,lowfatitems,andhighfiberfoods.

    Itisgoodtoseethestaffbeingsensitivetotheneedsofallstudents,saidseniorandvegetarian,
    JasonLoring.

    Pricesinthecafeteriawillbecutbytenpercentatthestartofnextsemester.

    Wehopethelowerpriceswillattractmorestudentstothecafeteriafortheirnoonmeal,food
    servicedirectorShirleyWaxensaid.

    TheStudentCouncilhadbeenworkingonthesechangesoverthatpastseveralyearsandwere
    finallyabletocompromisewiththeadministration.

    Wehopethesechangesmakeforamoreenjoyablelunchhourforthestudents,saidStudent
    Councilpresident,JulianFarnsworth.Wealsohopestudentswillbemoreproductiveintheir
    afternoonclassesasaresultofamorerelaxedmeal.

    RevisionofCafeteriaStory
    Tomakeamorecomfortableatmosphereforstudents,theschoolplansonredoingand
    modernizingthewholecafeteriaovertheChristmasbreak.

    The

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    Tomakeamorecomfortableatmosphereforstudents,theschoolplansonredoingand
    modernizingthewholecafeteriaoverChristmasbreak.

    #2

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    Studentswillbeabletositinrestaurantstyleboothsandmusicisbeingconsideredan
    option.Amuralwillbepaintedonthecafeteriaofstudentsdoingdifferentschoollike
    activities.Amajorchangeinthefoodselectionisalsotakingplacewithnewsalads,fruits,
    lowfatitems,andhighfiberfoods.

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    Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
    Itisgoodtoseethestaffbeingsensitivetotheneedsofallstudents,saidseniorand
    vegetarian,JasonLoring.

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    Pricesinthecafeteriawillbecutbytenpercentatthestartofnextsemester.

    #5

    Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
    Wehopethelowerpriceswillattractmorestudentstothecafeteriafortheirnoonmeal,
    saidthefoodservicedirector.

    #6

    Transitioneithertoaddinformation,explainorhelpwithstoryflow.
    TheStudentCouncilhadbeenworkingonthesechangesoverthatpastseveralyearsand
    werefinallyabletocompromisewiththeadministration.

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    Quote(direct)Onesentence1sentence:sourcesaid.2sentencessaidsource.
    Wehopethesechangesmakeforamoreenjoyablelunchhourforthestudents,said
    StudentCouncilpresident,JulianFarnsworth.Wealsohopestudentswillbemore
    productiveintheirafternoonclassesasaresultofamorerelaxedmeal.

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