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William McCanless Point.Click.Shoot 4325 Hidden Meadow Circle Sugar Hill, GA 30518
INT. TITLELOANS LOBBY -- DAY SIDE SHOT of a YOUNG WOMAN standing behind a counter. She has full Atlanta Title Loans attire on. Similar to the Progressive Insurance woman, she seems overly optimistic and bubbly about her job. However, we do not want to blatantly copy that concept. Moments later a YOUNG MAN enters on screen. He is a skinny guy and kind of dorky. When he speaks, he seems unsure of himself. YOUNG MAN Hi. YOUNG WOMAN Hello! YOUNG MAN Um... (Looking down, fidgeting) I really need some money, but I’ve been all over town and nobody will give me any. CUT TO: POV behind Young Man’s head looking at Young Woman. Young Woman puts her hand on Young Man’s shoulder and looks concerned. A fairly awkward silence ensues. We switch camera views back and forth from looking at Young Woman to looking at Young Man. The buzz from the fluorescent is heard. Young Woman stays looking concerned like a mother. Young Man seems uncomfortable. CUT TO: SIDE SHOT YOUNG MAN (Clears throat) Uh hum... YOUNG WOMAN (Takes hand away) Right! You’ve come to the right place. All you need is a clean and clear car title and a valid ID! Do you have that?
YOUNG MAN (Embarrassed) Yeah, but that’s my car. Young man points behind him. Young Woman squints for a moment and then grimaces. YOUNG WOMAN Oh.... and it works? CAMERA begins to pan over to look out the window. Young Woman looks at camera and shakes her finger. YOUNG WOMAN No! No....that’s not such a good idea. YOUNG MAN (At Camera) Yeah, you better not. Camera returns back to FIXED SIDE SHOT. YOUNG WOMAN Well sir, I do believe you are in luck! YOUNG MAN Really? YOUNG WOMAN Yeah! Wasn’t that easy? YOUNG MAN It sure was! YOUNG WOMAN And I don’t mean to pry... but you may want to use your loan to... spruce that up a little bit. Or maybe get a bicycle! CUT TO: Close up of Young Woman holding her hands out like she’s riding a bicycle. YOUNG WOMAN Ding ding! CUT TO:
LOGO / INFORMATION SCREEN Showing logo and contact information. YOUNG WOMAN (V.O.) Atlanta Title Loans. Get extra cash in just a few minutes using only a valid ID and car title. Stop in today and walk out with some cash in those pockets.