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1/1 Close up of blackboard with use of stop motion pictures to display artist name/song name 2/1 Shot of group of friends eating and laughing together 2/2 Focus in on artist who begins to lip synch (close up looks distressed) Im telling a story 2/3 Youll go alonghumiliate me etc. focus on male love interest laughing/making fun of artist 2/4 Camera focuses on the friends who look happy/chatty etc. in contrast to artist/male love interest 3/1 Camera tracks the artist as she leaves the table and walks to the bar 3/2 A pint of beer is poured for the artist at the bar close up of the pint glass being filled 3/3 Why dont you just have another beer then? Artist lip synchs then takes a gulp of the drink before walking out of shot 4/1 Camera rotates back towards the table male love interest has stood up looking angry and yells in time with the lyrics b***h whilst the group of friends look shocked 5/1 Shot reverses back to artist who turns her back to the camera and begins to walk into the garden for the chorus 6/1 Chorus - Close us shot of the artists face in the garden lip synching to the camera

Characters n/a

Date (dd/mm/yy) 29/10/12

Location The Red Lion Britwell Salome

Artist/male love interest/friends Artist

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Dinner table The Red Lion Britwell Salome Dinner table The Red Lion Britwell Salome Dinner table The Red Lion Britwell Salome Dinner table

Male love interest

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Friends

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Artist/ bar tender n/a

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Bar The Red Lion Britwell Salome Bar The Red Lion Britwell Salome Bar

Artist/ bar tender

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Male love interest/ friends

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Dinner table

artist

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome

Artist

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden

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6/3

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7/1

7/2

Chorus - Extreme close up of the artists eyes glancing away and then back at the camera Let go but I cant Chorus - close up of the artists hands fiddling with daisies every time we fight Chorus Extreme close up of artists mouth as she sings youre upset and I smile You said I must eat so many lemons Shot change to artist entering ladies toilets Door closes on camera shot pause on image of lady Over the shoulder shot into the mirror I am so bitter I said Id rather be with your friends mate - begin to walk back out of the toilets, past the camera they are much fitter Extreme close up, wink at camera Long shot artist seen leaving toilets, confronted by male love interest, heated argument begins Thrills to wind you up extreme close up of artist eyes CLOSES EYES OPENS EYES - Camera zooms out to reveal the artist is now outside chorus I know that I should let go camera and artist tilt down to look at artists clenched hand I cant opens hand to reveal daisies from previous scene - drop on floor Camera pauses on daises for a moment

Artist

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Toilets The Red Lion Britwell Salome Toilets The Red Lion Britwell Salome Toilets The Red Lion Britwell Salome Toilets The Red Lion Britwell Salome The Red Lion Britwell Salome

Artist

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Artist

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Artist

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n/a

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7/3

Artist

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7/4

Artist

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7/5

Artist

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8/1

Artist/male love interest

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8/2

Artist

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden

9/1

Artist

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Artist

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Artist

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n/a

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10/1

Shot tracks artists standing up every time we fight Artists begins to walk slowly camera shot from behind Artist turns head to look back at the camera lip synchs forget, but I cant landscape in the distance Shot change to close up of male love interest looking pale splashing water on his face your face is pasty before taking another drink Shot pans to reveal artist standing behind love interest looking down on him low camera angle looking up what a surprise sick Male love interest storms out of toilets ignoring artist Youve gone and got sick on my trainers Close up on artists face I cannot be bothered with this Shot of male love interest stumbling and sitting/falling onto a sofa/seat Dear God I hope Im not stuck with this one Artist joins drunken love interest on the sofa/seat looking dejected Chorus - Shot to close up of artist and love interests hands intertwined fingertips Chorus artist looks at love interest and is lip synching at him - but I cant every time we fight love interest drops hand, stands up yelling, looking down on artist - argument

Artist

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Artist

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10/3

Artist

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Garden The Red Lion Britwell Salome Toilets

11/1

Male love interest

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11/2

Male love interest/artist

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Toilets

11/3

Male love interest/artist

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Toilets The Red Lion Britwell Salome Toilets The Red Lion Britwell Salome

11/4

Artist

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12/1

Male love interest

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12/2

Artist/male love interest

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome

13/1

Artist/male love interest

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome

13/2

Artist/male love interest Artist/male love interest

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome The Red Lion Britwell Salome

13/3

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15/1

Artist stands up ignoring yelling boyfriend continuing to lip synch Shot of the artist coming toward camera still repeating chorus boyfriend visible in the background As chorus ends and ending music plays artists exits the pub and the camera watches as she walk into the distance -----------------------------------

Artist/male love interest Artist/male love interest

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome The Red Lion Britwell Salome

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Artist/

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The Red Lion Britwell Salome Outside

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