Sara Eckford Caruso English 1103 December 3, 2012 9/11 Conspiracy, Popular Culture

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Skip intro. The first tower to be hit was the North tower, struck by American Airlines flight 11 around the 93rd floor and 99th floor, killing everyone on board, and hundreds within the building instantly. Seventeen minutes later, at 9:03 am, just one minute after the tenants of South tower were instructed by Port Authority Police to stay in the building; United Airlines flight 175 crashes into the South tower between floors 75-85. Five minutes after the second WTC tower was struck, the FAA bans all flight take-off in New York City. Strangely enough, the Steel-built building, of the South tower collapses. Also, only six minutes after Bush presumed what he called “an apparent terrorist attack on the United States”, Flight 77 crashes into the West end of the Pentagon, killing nearly 200 people in all. Amidst the evacuation of the White House and other high-profile buildings, the North Tower collapses to the ground as well. It is believed that just before this, Flight 93 of United Airlines, crashed into a Pennsylvania field, after passengers attempted to take over. It took, not even two hours from the time of the first impact, to the last collapse of the WTC building. Never before in history has a steel-built building collapsed so easily, and quickly. As for most American’s, the most believed story is that these planes were hijacked and intentionally crashed into these buildings as a terrorist act. However, Korey Rowe, the maker of
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the 9/11 movie called “Loose Change”, along with thousands of other American’s, believe different. Most people will agree that anything other than what the media and government tell you are considered conspiracy theories. As for that, Korey Rowe says differently, “That 19 hijackers are going to completely bypass security and crash four commercial airliners in a span of two hours, with no interruption from the military forces, in the most guarded airspace in the United States and the world? That to me is a conspiracy theory.”
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