[The Short Story: Excerpt #1]
atlas brown [March 29, 2013]

[Charlie.Browne.2.Butahflies.&.Painky.Lillies. – Is my first short story that I wrote in Dallas, Texas in 2004-2005 and
is close to my heart. The story turned into my Senior Honors Thesis and transitioned into a novella. The full-length version of the short story will debut on June 1, 2013. The novella will debut in 2014. I hope that you enjoy this first excerpt. This has been a work in progress for quite some time. I’m finally ready to release it to the public.]

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mother’s. you sho’ got some good-tight pussy. “Gurl.and.moving. “Ooh… That feels so good to me gurl.Browne.Browne. .Charlie.Charlie.Charlie.Browne.Browne.Charlie.Charlie.moving. open up some mo.down.Browne.and.spoon.round.Browne who is looking up at the white ceiling shriveling--terrified in the dark.Charlie.spoon.the.womb.up.mother’s womb. Ya’ mamma don’t have nothin like this. Forcefully moving the trick up young Charlie’s bruised vagina-flower like tearing in to a birthday present… grinding her until she cries.Browne.In. “Open up some mo’ now Bitch! I said.” X says to Charlie.her. Ya. ma’ma didn’t have this kind when I first met hah” X says to Charlie.Charlie.her. he would do his trick with the. slowly opening up her thin ferail legs and vagina-flower to her mother’s boyfriend.” X whispers in Charlie’s ear while forcefully fucking the young girl.down.round.up.Charlie. In.silver.Browne. Charlie was ten years old and used to these sexual X-capades— she had received them the past four years and told no one. Before climaxing.Browne.

and shut it.to. “I know this is wrong. Texas.his.world.” Although subconsciously-in.reality… X then would pop his veins with his right forefingers and tie his left arm up with the rubberband man as tight as he could. X then takes the needle and slips the magic-potion that is precooked into the syringe… gently he’d poke the needle in to his vein… X’s eyes would roll up and the. He immediately would get the miniature black chest. but I need it. walked in. X never felt that the atlas brown 4 | P a g e . look at his veins and say to him-self.Every morning at exactly 4:15-aM… X would silently sneak from his and Rose’s bed--creep to the bathroom that they shared.spin.starts. which he took with Marvin in Fort Worth. I need it. opened the door carefully. open his left arm. X was chasing after the first fix. thinking he was a king riding down the highways everyday with his boy. His pops called it that when X accidentally walked in on him while using with some junkies when he was alive. sit on the toilet-seat. He was eighteen.

down.up.Charlie.Charlie. In. U slipping.” From that day on Marvin and X both were hooked on the magic-potion. wan’Na try some?” Marvin asked X while sitting on the couch already stoned off hash.Charlie.mother’s womb. X could forget all his problems and just be in magic-potion—land. Pop’s been on it for a’while and he act real different.In.mother’s. .Browne.Browne.Browne. But.Browne. Come’on try it wit me… jus this one time.and.Browne. Man you sho’is wrong.down. I got some potion that Clydedale gave me from round the way. on that hot summer afternoon in Village Creek Projects at Marvin’s they had nothing else to do but get into trouble. “Hey Flyjock. magic-potion everyone talked about in his hood would creep up on him… or injected into his left arm. “Marvin I don’t feel dat I should uh… try dat. The magic-potion never failed them.Charlie. “U slipping.Browne.Browne.womb. Let’s gon’head and do this to hush ya’ nurves.” Marvin urged! “Aight.moving.Charlie.and.Browne.her.” X said to Marvin.Charlie.—magicpotion—trouble.round.Charlie.round.Charlie.moving.up.her.

she was always lying in her bed with the covers just above her neck.After the fix settled. X would put his utensils away in the miniature black chest inside the mirror-closet next to the window. He would then quietly walk out the bathroom doing his best still not to wake Rose. Virgin. ~ X started messing with girls when he was twelve: a revolving circle… His Uncle Newberry molested him when he was eight. Rose knew X was molesting her oldest daughter she just didn’t know how to handle the situation—so she would roll over on her side with her back facing the doorway and act as though she were asleep. though she was woke all the time. X then would tiptoe through the hallway and gently open Charlie’s door.” X would say to himself. atlas brown 6 | P a g e . “Virgin som’ real good. In his mind he knew she was hiding while looking at her face.

he would get the fix.Browne.mother’s womb. and Malcolm X anymore or dream about being a famous photographer like his favorite—Gordon Parks.down.up.Charlie. but he went in to the living room instead. Ya ma-ma and pap’s is g’on and I want you to get my fix out the bedroom chest in my room and make sure you take ya pants off while you n’ deah.down.In.round.round. Mildred Taylor.Charlie.Browne. In.womb.moving.Charlie. He could no longer go in the “room” and read books by Langston Hughes.her. X would cry as he walked to the back room of the house he loved so much.Charlie.Browne.and. take off his pants and throw them on the floor by the chest… X then walked back through the hallway wanting to run. gave the fix to his Uncle Newberry. As usual.up.Browne. “Boy’e com on in heah.” Uncle Newberry would holler while sitting in his favorite chair.Browne.her.Browne. and waited until Uncle Newberry got high and was spaced-out.and.Charlie.Charlie.mother’s.Charlie. . It was his room… until Uncle Newberry came to live with them.Browne.Charlie.Browne.moving.

” Uncle Newberry would then get on his knees and slide inside of X’s rectum and shout. “Get on the damn floor and face the TV and open dem legs wide boy’e. Uncle Newberry lived with X and atlas brown 8 | P a g e .” X sacredly would reply. “Yeah! Yeah! Oh! Yeah that’s it… Tell me who you love boy’e… tell me before I take this dick out and slap you in the face with it.X would see his Uncle Newberry move out the chair and scream loudly. “UUUUhhh!” ~ From that day forward X vowed to himself that he would not go back to the “room” he would run.” Then the moment would be up and all of this white stuff came out of Uncle Newberry’s dick as he pulled out of X… and X would nearly vomit at the site while being thrown to the side witnessing Uncle Newberry growl. “I love you Uncle Newberry.

Browne.silver. I don’t give a damn about goin to jail.down. and wanting more. I will kill yu.Charlie.and.Charlie. X never let anyone know that he was being violated and he did not run. Ya’ hear me? I will kill yu and dis entire famley..round.up.In. Taste what Daddy want to give yu.Browne.Charlie.spoon.round.womb.mother’s womb.Browne.Browne.” .. “Gurl open them legs some mo’.her. Pounding in the dark after doing the the.Charlie.Charlie. She had taken his crack pipe and thrown it in the Trinity River: The Dallas-Fort Worth connection.her.moving.spoon— trick.Browne.Charlie. Daddy’s coming… Daddy’s coming…Now lick on it baby. The cycle just kept going that was all he knew. In. he continues to dehumanize the young one.down. his family for a total of six years… until he was picked up one early Saturday morning by the police on Bishop Street in the Eastwoodhood for killing his girlfriend Wanda Gene.up.Charlie. He threatened Charlie as he lay on top of her body. If you tell anybody.Browne.Charlie.Browne.the.mother’s.moving. It’s coming.and. OOOOOh! It’s coming baby.Browne.

rolled over out of the bed. I don’t need to be late today. When I tell you to do something you betta do it a lil’ bit quic-ka… and especially opening dem’ legs. Get my clothes and breakfast read’ey!” atlas brown 10 | P a g e . not looking back at the victimized ten-year old. turned on the light and yelled loudly. I gotta get read’ey for work. “Now if you want to be a good gurl you will keep ya mouth shut and quit think’n bout any shifty-bullshit… like running away. “Rose get yo’ ass up. went back in to his bedroom.” X removed his manhood from her mouth. under her breath while holding the large penis in her mouth. He opened the door.“Why you have to touch me? I HATE YOU! I HATE YOU!” Charlie says. quickly put his pants and tee shirt on.

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