CAMBRIDGE HANDBOOKS is a series of practical guides for i"eachns of English and other languages. Illustrative examples are usually drawn from the field of English as a foreign or second language. Ideas and techniques described can equally well be used in the teaching of any language.
CAMBRIDGE HANDBOOKS is a series of practical guides for i"eachns of English and other languages. Illustrative examples are usually drawn from the field of English as a foreign or second language. Ideas and techniques described can equally well be used in the teaching of any language.
CAMBRIDGE HANDBOOKS is a series of practical guides for i"eachns of English and other languages. Illustrative examples are usually drawn from the field of English as a foreign or second language. Ideas and techniques described can equally well be used in the teaching of any language.
Thisis aseriesofpracticalguidesforI"eachnsof Englishandother languages. Illustrativeexamplesareusuallydrawn from thefield ofEnglish as aforeignorsecondlanguage,butthe ideasandtechniquesdescribedcan equallywellbeusedin theteachingofany language. In thisseries: DramaTechniquesinLanguageLearning- Aresourcebookof communicationactivitiesforlanguageteachers byAlanMateyandAtanDuff GamesforLanguageLearning byAndrewWright, DavidBetteridgeandMichaelBuckby DiscussionsthatWork- Task-centredfluency practicebyPenny Ur OnceUponaTime- Usingstoriesinthelanguageclassroom byJohnMorganandMario Rinvolucri TeachingListeningComprehensionbyPennyUr KeepTalking- Communicativefluency activitiesfot languageteaching byFriederikeKtippel WorkingwithWords- Aguidereteachingandlearningvocabulary byRuthCairnsandStuartRedman LearnerEnglish- Ateacher'sguidetointerferenceandotherproblems editedbyMichaetSwanandBernardSmith TestingSpokenLanguage- Ahandbookoforaltestingtechniques byNic Underhitl LiteratureintheLanguageClassroom- Aresourcebookofideasand activitiesbyJoanne CollieandStephenSlater Dictation- Newmethods,newpossibilities byPaulDavisandMario Rinvolucri GrammarPracticeActivities- ApracticalguideforteachersbyPennyUr OnceUponaTillle Usingstoriesinthe languageclassroom ]ahnMargan andMaria Rinvalucri The dgh,0l,he Unipe,s;ty 0/Com})"dge 10 prultandulJ allmanner ofooakt "';03' granted. by V/I!irt }JJf. The -Ulllrns/ly Im.r plinre4 wldI'lIhli.fhCdCOrtflntlously ,Iill(,( JJ8.f. .11111,,111 1 .1' Press "1\1.".1, . I I , ,,' i I;, n' U." Ior "" 11" I,,,. ', .. 1", \ Publishedby thePressSyndicateoftill"1 ....If .d(.11I1I11I1I1, ,c ThePittBuilding,TrumpingtonStreet,(':JJIIlll I '" litI' 32East57thStreet,NewYork,NY I ODn,1J:,,\ 10StamfordRoad,Oakleigh,Melbourn' \1/'1,.1\11'.1]"h:l CambridgeUniversityPress1983 Firstpublished1983 Fifthprinting1988 PrintedinGreatBritain attheUniversityPress,Cambridge LibraryofCongresscataloguecardnumber: 83-5356 BritishLibrarycataloguingin publicationdata Morgan,John Onceuponatime- (Cambridgehandbooksfor languageteachers) 1. Englishlanguage- Studyandteaching- Foreignstudents I. Title n. Rinvolucri,Mario 428.2'4'091 PE1128 ISBN0521252695 hardcovers ISBN0521 272629 paperback Once Upon a Time was originally published in pilot form by Pilgrims Publications, Canterbury,England.ThisCambridgeUnivcrslly Press echtlOn been extensively revised and cxpandcd. Contents Techniques TotheTeacher Section1 Tellingastory Section2 Storiesandfollow-ups 2.1 Revengequestions 2.2 Themepictures 2.3 Forbeginners 2.4 Takingroles 2.5 Themewords 2.6 Discussion 2.7 Shapesandcharacters 2.8 Completion 2.9 Storytopoem 2.J() Innewclothes 2.1 J Birthorder 2..12 Problemstories .2..1'\ Aserialstory 2.1 / 1 Storyropicture 3 '..1 1'.\1;.11('1 Stories Page 1 Thehunchback 5 Theriver 12 13 Theinventor 13 KingCaliban 16 Kacuy 18 MrsPeters 20 Thebearthatwasn't 23 Jackandthebeanstalk 25 Peacocks 27 Freyfaxi 28 Rumpelstiltskin 29 Thetwosons 31 Yvonne 32 Willow 32 Thesingingmushrooms 34 Th.epiperofRome 35 TheBillyGoatsGruff 36 Thetwodoors 37 Unexpected 38 Thesignofthebroken 38 sword Ananecdote 40 41 Seguin'sgoat 41 TIll:' (:{It thatwal1udbyitself 42 nIf',Ineebears 43 1,,1',11'11-' 44 Itl'" I""'I1'/S 47 1I1I1"/"',II,! 4S 1/"/'1,,1'1}1/ \ I Techniques St"".... Page Techniques Stories Page 7.5 Firestories 94 Section4 BeforeIbegin... 54 7.6 Hidingthings 95 4.1 Grammarpractice (;oMduI' ;,>.,' 54 7.7 Heroesandheroines 95 'I'f!/'l'I'1I'lshl's 55 7.8 Storiesfromjobs Thewrparkattendant 96 "Un'tIJlI'I' pigs 56 7.9 Shame Theorchard 97 4.2 Themesentences HreJllfslm'l'lJr'Silent 57 4.3 Apicturestarter (;dert 59 Section8 Vanishingstories Godin amatchbox 98 TheIJigl'oll 59 4.4 Picturerose Theqllilrrymall 60 Section9 Revision 9.1 Astoryyoureallyliked 102 Section5 Co-operativetelling 63 9.2 Music 103 5.1 Inthelanguagelab Theunicorn 63 9.3 Doodlestripreview 104 Twobrothers 65 5.2 Groupstory Theghost 65 Section10 Storypool 105 5.3 Dictation Theseventhrose 66 A Snow 105 Nonamewom,m 68 B Thepullover 105 5.4 Scenetostory ThedragonofNara 69 C Honour 106 5.5 Astoryfromfourwords 72 D Thefigtree 106 5.6 Threeitemstories 73 E Ivar 107 5.7 Randomstory 74 F Inthecellar 107 5.8 Picturecomposition 75 G Thedonkey 108 5.9 Dictogloss Solomon'sjudgement 77 H Oogledeboo 108 Theforcedburglar 77 I Theman,thesnake,and 109 thestone Section6 Students'stories 79 J Thebaby 110 6.1 Mumble,listen,tell 79 K Thehusband 110 6.2 Comprehensionquestions Thegianttortoise 80 L Enkidu 110 6.3 Spoofstories Cambodiansoupstone 80 M Ophir 111 Airtravel 81 N Ahorserace 112 6.4 Storyofthefilm 82 o Thewisdomoftheworld 112 6,5 Lovestories Rapunzel 82 P Theprincessandthepea 113 6.6 Frombeginnings... Frogin awell 83 Q Thepaem 114 Grandpa 84 R Analdman 114 Three-wheeler 84 S Ants 115 6.7 ...toendings Wildcat 85 T Themagicbarrel 116 6.8 Objectstellstories 86 NI,I,". 117 6.9 Doodlestrips 87 6.10 Triplestories 88 PI""" I ipl 119 Section7 Fromthepast l)() \.),,1,,\\,11"111:' 111"111'. 120 7.1 Photos l)() 7.2 ')2 7.. Tilll"-!ravl'llllil'1'l'! 'Ij . LI I1 h''!'!Il'IL,,lllInil' qi To the teacher Thanks Wewish tothankthefollowingpeople: Studentswithwhomwehavelearnttotell stories. Bothscepticaland enthusiasticcolleagues, in particular.lane Lockwood,KatyaBenjamin,PaulDavis, MoStcll1gcman,Cynthia Beresford,.lanAspeslagh,CharlesWilliams,.lamesDixey,Michael Swan,MargaretCallow,CarlosMaeztu,RichardandMarjorie Baudins,ElenaMorgan,LindsayBrown,LorenMcGrail,Sarah Braine. BernardDufeuwhoopenedoureyes tothepsychodramauseof tales. Theartisticoraltraditionwe knowbestis thatoftheGreekshadow puppeteersandweparticularlywanttoacknowledgetheinsights gainedfromworkingwithGiorgosCharidimos. Booksthathavehelpedus inourthinkingabouttheoralstory include: ' BrunoBettelheim,The Uses of Enchantment, Penguin 1978 IonaandPeterOpie,The Classic Fairy Tales, OUP1974 V1adimirPropp,Morphology of the Fo/ktale, Austin 1968 GianniRodari,Grammatica de/la Fantasia, Einaudi1973 Finally,this bookowesa heavydebtto thevariousoraltraditionsof whichit1S acuriouscontinuation,andto individualswhosewritten storieswehave'skeletonised'in preparationfor manyoral tellings. ].M. M.R. Amongbothpractisinglanguageteachersandapplied linguiststhere anIOcreasmgawarenessthatsuccessfu.lsecond-languagelearning is far morea matterofunconsciousacquisitionthanofconscious, systemaricstudy.Stephen Krashen (Second Language Acquisition and Second Language Learning, Pergamon 1981)goessofar as to saythat'themajorfunctionofthesecond-languageclassroomis to provideintakefor acquisition'. It viewthatthe'intake'requiredto facilitatelanguage wdlbeverydifferentfromthematerialscurrentlyprovided mthedassroomas partofsystematicstructuralornotionalcourses. If ,unconsciousprocessesaretobeenlisted,then thewholeperson Will needto be engaged: weshallnolonger be abletorelyonthe learner'sgeneral'motivation'orontheintrinsiccharmsofthetarget bnguagetosustainhimorherthrough theyearsofmonotonous drillingand blandrole-play, Classroomactivitieswillhaveto be slructurcdtoserveimmediateratherthanlong-termneeds,topromote I'atl!crthanpractisecommunicationandexpression, Thisbook is offeredasastepinthatdirection.Within theframeof srofytelling-thatmostancientandcompellingofhumanactivities-we Ill' >])OSC a \vide rangeofclassroomexercisesandmorethan70story ol1dil1cS ('skeletons') foryouandyourstudentstoworkfrom. The 1''1: 'rcist'srangehonlintrospectivetohighlyi.nteractive;frombeginner 1,) advanced; manyareofferedascommunicative to Ir:lditiollal language-teachingactivities; all, wehope,arcengaging ,lllllfL'w:ll'dlngHl rhcl11,'dves. J (i\N'IIFl.l. ST01UIS' YOLlcouldberight,butifsoyou'rein ,I lllillorily, III \1111' very few teachersofEnglish can /"",/,tlnll,I,It!nlll.lll'l " IlIll ,111110,';( ,dl 11;1\1(':1 hidd'11 talcr)! asstory- 11'111'1'... I '011,1'.;':[" ',\\,1\", II1 ",,'hid, \,(111 Cln workfrom a bare 1111111T1i' III 111.1,,1, '1"'111 HI,I,1111 '111.1 Idlll'!', 11. '1".111,1) ,111i',II'Jlilll',I!l:11 ',llll\ rlllll\'III,,1 \',," 1l'11 1.11111'1 1'''111 dill ,1111111" "11 '111I"ll.d To the teacher listening comprehension frolll 1;'11('. TIH' 1.1l1l"l" is always third-person listening, a kind of eavesclroppill1',lI1.l1 i. r:\llgely uncompelling. To be told a stOry by a live storyteller, Oil 1l1l' l'Olllrary, involves onc in 'I-thou' lisrening, where the IiSll'IllTS t ';111 Ji reedy influence the telling. Even if you arc a non-native Il':lt her of English, the com- municative gain will more than outwl'igh thl' 'un-Englishness' you may hear in your telling. FOLLOWING UP A STORY 'Compn'hL:l1sion ql1'estions' and paraphrase exercises are standard classroom follow-ups to listening work: after a story they at best dilute, at worst de-stroy, its effect on the listener. In Section 2 you will find a variety of alternative follow-up exercises. 2.1, for example, gives the student all opportunity to decide for himself or herself which questions (if any) he or she wants answered, and to hear the answers from a classmate. 2.4 uses role- assignment to explore the group's feelings towards characters in a story; 2.14 uses a drawing exercise to help students 'cap' one story with another. All the exercises encourage the recycling of new language. RETELLING Being required to retell a story to someone who has just heard it is a pleasure few of us would willingly repeat: yet this is often what we force upon our students. Section 3 suggests activities in which retelling is both necessary and enjoyable. STORIES AND GRAMMAR Many traditional stories abound in powerful repeated phrases (e.g. 'Who's been sleeping in MY bed?). For elementary and intermediate students, such stories (suitably chosen) can be used as an almost subliminal grammar input. 4.1 gives some examples of this. It is also a fairly simple matter to angle your telling and/or follow-up exercises in such a way that particular structures are demanded of the student: ftom common strong verbs to third conditionals. In Section 8 you are introduced to the Silent Way reduction technique which has the students working intensively on grammar, syntax, intonation and meaning all at the same time. After 20 minutes intensive work the story they started out from has vanished! FROM I.ISTENINC TO OI{AI. I'ROIHI(TI()r-! III Sl'clioll S Wt' suggest W:lys of t'oll:lhor;llilll'. willl ;lll1h'III'. III tI" 1lIll,ltl(lilll1 01 11.111.11<111'111 (oI., I 11"'111 I 1111111111'; " H To the teacher shows the teacher modelling vocahulary from within a group; in 5.1 a use IS found for the language lahoratory. ORAL PRODUCTION There are stories hidden inside everyone. Elementary students will bring them out in dramatic, excited half-sen- tences; advanced speakers will reach out for ever more vivid or exact expression. For all, adequate communication is an attainable miracle if the teacher is prepared to allow it. Section 6 provides frames for ' the recal,l or creation of students' own stories; Section 7 goes a little deeper-mto one's real or imaginary past. PICTURE We arc all familiar with the 'picture story' as a deVice for provokll1g narrative work. Unfortunately, anyone with eyeSight produces much the same story, which robs the of any In 6,9 -v:e provide symbolic pictures to provoke a WIde range of dIfferent stones, Once they have created their own story, students are keen to tell them and to find out what others have made of the 'doodlestrip': ),R Y POOL At the end of the book you will find twenty story to supplement those scattered through the exercises. We ILIVI' Irf(;d to make these as varied as possible, but tecognise that we , :1111101 d,le range of tastes of all the possible readers of this hook. 11 you hlltl pk;ls11re and profit in telling stories with your class, 111('11 Wl' hope yOIl wdl he abk to add your own stories to the pool. to. II( )' ,"I'() I( <, Wt' h;IVl' consciously included a number of fairy 111 i1ll' hO<ll.., w,' It-l'IIIII''''' ;Ill-' for work with both " I\' VIIIIII,', 1,',1111<'1', ,111.1 \\'ltl, hill lhl'y ;lrc prrh:1ps not a good 1"'1 11111111',\ ,I ',I', III "I, d" /, Ill', II1 till'. W\' sugg 'st you 'l'1' I 1111.1(1 "" 1111 .I'l I,l< I,ll I', 111.1 1,,"hll'lll'iI411 ic";, I '11" I I I. , I,,, '. , , . I \' I, \1 \ h 11 " I}'.' " r11 IV' 11 I" Ill'. Ill) t. i I1 \ ',r I J I i C' ,i1, ,,1.1. I I" .. ,.1. I I,. 11.' 11 , f 1I'Idl.ll III ,,"t1111 '" 1,111111 To the teacher in detail) in the student's 11Iot 111'1 1III 11',1 Il' 1" ' LUlguage is simple the meanings are evocative ,11ll! 11l.IlIY 1.')"'I\'d; and the stones,bnng back, often in a flood of cxcitCIlIl'1l1, of one's own chIldhood and that of one's children. Section1 Tellingastory One day, while testing material for this book, we decided to tell the same story in each of the two groups of students we were working with, and to record ourselves while doing so. The story, a Ghanaian folk tale, goes like this: A hunchback girl protects her father's beans from wild animals In the fields, she is visited by fairies They ask herfor bean soup She says she can't bend down to pick the beans, because of her hump The fairies remove the hump She picks the beans and cooks them The fairies eat, thank her They replace the hump and leave Her father tells her: 'You silly girl, you should have run away before they could replace the hump' Next day, the same thing, She runs off before they replace the hump She hides in the hut from the fairies A week later there is a dance in the village She can't resist-joins the dance While dancing, she feels a weight on her shoulders She turns, sees the fairies leaving the village (from Folk Tales and Fables, ed, p, Itayemi & P. Gurrey) I11 OIl(' rooll1l11C stlldcllt. 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Section1 Tellingastory One day, while testing material for this book, we decided to tell the same story in each of the two groups of students we were working with, and to record ourselves while doing so. The story, a Ghanaian folk tale, goes like this: A hunchback girl protects her father's beans from wild animals In the fields, she is visited by fairies They ask herfor bean soup She says she can't bend down to pick the beans, because of her hump The fairies remove the hump She picks the beans and cooks them The fairies eat, thank her They replace the hump and leave Her father tells her: 'You silly girl, you should have run away before they could replace the hump' Next day, the same thing, She runs off before they replace the hump She hides in the hut from the fairies A week later there is a dance in the village She can't resist-joins the dance While dancing, she feels a weight on her shoulders She turns, sees the fairies leaving the village (from Folk Tales and Fables, ed, p, Itayemi & P. Gurrey) I11 OIl(' rooll1l11C stlldcllt. TIlI'l!' \\';\', ,I I.ll'IlltT / ill rhe norrh of the country I who \\',1', \'('1 \' I""" f ,llld 1](' jWil !l:ld <l couple of fields where he )',1"\\ 1',1111', ,llId 1,,',111'. ,111.1 dllllJ'" i and he Jived by himself \\ 1l11111" ,llll)',hl"1 ,lllt'l ,'VITV d:1)' hl' would 'go our to his 11"1,1',11111,1",, 1",1111111" 1',llIl', I IOllk:tfll'r his f:lI'Jll I his ,111\'1.", .0>1,1,11'," I '''1'\\1111111111 ! 1111l"!H'II:HI:lhllll1p "11 11' I 11" I I" ',11111111 1.1',11 I ,111.1 ',I,," 1>111.111'1.1" ,Ill\, Ic':d ,,,,I 11" ""1,1,, I I" 1,,1 111,11"'11,,1. \ 1',1" ',', I" 111l' 1111>'" ,1'101" 1111,1,,,,1 11',1 "1",1111. I.. 1\1,110>11,11., 1111111/' \' I Telling a story who would ("(1111" .111\\ 111'11111.1" ,,,,, ',I ,Hound / ol1e (bv she wentouttotlllfit'l.I 1111,1 whikshewastherc'sotnt fairies came oul ut 1111' "',,' ,.1 I ,Ill' I ,hked her for / beans / they walll... .1 111'1 '" I ""I 1111'111 / and make them a meal/she said ;,he 'lllIl.11l 1 I",. ,1I1'.C' ;,Ill' couldn't bend to pick the beans / SOIIIII',dllll"IIIJI"; ,UIH'uptoherputhis hand on her back and lili<'.1 IIll' 11111111' oil h 'J' hack / and said now you can pick b 'ans / ",..11,,111' ,hd she picked the beans and she put thell1 ill :1 I'''' 111,1111' ,I hrl' cooked the beans and gave them to the fairies / ,lllllllll'Y :lI',' them thanhd for them / and turned to gu ;llid ,I;' !I\L'y ldt they replaced the hump on her back / WhclI sll\' (;11111' h;wk to the hut she told her father what had happened and Ill:r f:lch 'r said hOw if they come again / and they prohahly wiil / when they take the hump off your back / don't f-';O pick lhe he,lhs run away and hide / then you'll gn w lip str,light / like the other girls / so the next day she we;:J1l our 1'0 the field and the fairies did come and asked her for bean._ / and took the hump off her back / and instead of going / out into the field to pick the beans / she turned and ran / as fast as she could / she rushed back to the village and hid in the hut / that evening when her father came home / he advised her to stay in the house / because the fairies now would be looking for her / but after a few weeks he thought they would go away / so she stayed in the house / for a week / and / then there was a festival in the village and all the girls went out into the streets of the village / and they danced / and the girl looked / out of her window at the girls / in / their bright / costumes / dancing in the street / and she couldn't resist it / she'd always loved dancing and she'd never been able to dance and now she could / and out into the street she went / danced with the other girls / while she was dancing / she felt a weight / on her shoulders / turned round / and there she saw the fairies / quietly / going off / out of the village In the other room the students heard: Once upon a time there was a village / on the edge of a desert / in the village there Jived a mall who had seven sons he also had one d<.1ughter / his sons were straight and uprig-ht / but his daughter / well/she had a hUlllp OJ1 her b;1Ck / alllI she, kid ro w;llk hCllf OV(T / and rI,r... 111:1<11' lh(' fTl;11l vny vl'l'y 1I11h:IIlPY :111,1 il 111.1,1(' ,Ill' !',id VI'I\' 1'('1\- IlIdl.\I'I'\' I ,.Ill" ",d. hi" Ill' I Il,,,,,,, "I' ,.Ill" 'lId,III-' w dl, I 1" "I" d\ 11,.1 .1" . ""1.1,, I ,111'11' "," '" Telling a story had a beanfield on the edge of the desert / and one of the daughter's jobs was to go and watch the beanfield / and make sure no animals or people stoic beans from.it / one evening she was there / as night was falling / in this part of the world night falls quickly / and as she was preparing to go home suddenly some fairies appeared on the edge of the bean- field / and they came over / and one of them said to her / we're hungry / pick us some beans and make us a bean soup / but the girl looked at them sadly / and said / I can't bend down to pick the beans / but the fairy / came close behind her and lifted / the hump from off her back / and she could stand upright and walk straight / she smiled / and began to pick beans / she made a fire / and she made the fairies a bean soup / which they ate greedily / and then disappeared / across the edge of the field back / into the desert / and the girl / ran home / but as she was running / suddenly / she felt the hump / com- ing back onto her shoulders / and by the time she got home she was stooped forward / and could only walk slowly / and she told her father everything that had happened / and her father said to her / you acted wrong my daughter / you should have run away as soon as the fairies took the hump off your back / they couldn't have found you to put it back on again / I'm sure they'll come back tomorrow / when it happens run away / before they can put the hump back on your shoulders / and so the next evening / the girl went to the beanfield again and sure enough the fairies / appeared over the edge of the field / and they asked her to make them a bean soup again / and a fairy lifted rhe bump from off her back / and quickly she ran out of the field aud ran back home to the viJlage / she hid in her father's house / and she could walk straight / and she realised that she could dance / for that evening there was going to be n dance / at the house of some ncighbours where there was a wedding / and she / later on in the evening she crept out / and w('nl 10 th(' / fo the ncighbour's house / and joined I hl' J:lIH'illg / ;llld Ihl'n she saw / on the edge of the / d;III' 1111', 1'I'lll'Il' / 1111' f:lirics / suddenly / her hump was 111('1" 1111111'1 11,1< I. ''11,1111 / ;,h(' stooped f()[\vard / she could 11.1111 LOlll) 111IJl(' llin '"01 ,lift./ 11"111' 1,11111111'1 1111""llllolll' III Ill' I I,l IV11 I I I,,, I " .. III I' I.. ,". I ,1 '" I" Iill. I 11" I, 11 I ' I"" I, .," 111/1' Telling a story in numerous ways. Onc L';\I) r(';lddy 1111.1)',111(' till' wide range of factors that might go to producing Sill h lilt mood ofthe teller when he or she first encoLlmLTcd lIll' ",1111 \'; Ilis or her mood while telling; the background exrwri('llll'S Ih,ll k:lll, (nr example, to one teller seeing forest where the 01hLT S:I VI' dc.nt landscape; the numher and seating of the audience; the lc1kr's rd;lliollship to the audience; and so on and so on. And thcse difkrl'IlLc'. :Ire in rum reflected in the language: sometimes fluent, soll1l't iIlIl'S 11l'"j t ;llll alld uncertain, broken by irregular pauses, but always lh-lillildy s/JOken language, the language of personal communicatioll I hat is so often absent from the foreign-language classroom. In some ways teUing is easier than reading aluud: the reader may be forced to interpret speech patterns ami rhythms very different from his or her own; he or she is forced to bccomc aware of things normally taken for granted, such as breathing; and these technical problems may become a barrier hetween him or her and the author just as the book he or she is holding may hccome ;1 physical barrier between him or her and his or her audience In telling, on the other hand, one can shape the story to one's own needs, and while this may require the development of certain, perhaps huried, skills, the advantages are very great. In the first place, one can address one's audience directly: one can make eye contact or not as and when one chooses, use gesture and mirlle freely, expand or modify the form of one's telling as the occasion demands, and in general establish and maintain a community of attention het\.... een teller and listener, Again, from the learner's point of view, it is of immense benefit to witness the process of framing ideas in the target language without, as in conversation, constantly having to engage in that process oneself: forcing students always to hear polished speech (or, worse, the bland monotony of specially constructed oral texts) does tbem a great disservice. Since first starting to work with stories, we have come to realise something of the extent to which narrative underlies our conversa- tional encounters with others, and of the deep need that people have to tell and exchange stories. We have also learned something aboLlt the ways in which storytelling can take place in the foreign-language classroom. Telling a story Finding and choosing stories Stories are everywhere: in selecting for this book we have drawn on traditional fairy stories, folk tale collections, newspaper reports, literary short stories, films and plays, personal anecdotes, rumours, stories from our own childhood and from the childhood of our friends, students and colleagues, and on our own imagination, We have learned stories from our children and their friends, and from professionals like Propp and Rodari. In selecting storics for the classroom, we have been guided by two main criteria: is this a story that we would enjoy telling and is this a story our students might find entertaining or thought-provoking? We have seldom been influenced by purely linguistic considerations in our choice (though this does play Cl part-see 4,1), and we have never aUowed the language of an original text to determine suita- I ility-indeed, many of the stories we have used have been taken from originals in languages other than English. Making skeletons We found early on that a brief written outline ('skeleton') provided (he hest way for us to store material for storytelling. The skeleton should give, in minimal form, a plot outline, background information where necessary (e.g. cultural context if the plot is heavily dependent oil this), apd a certain amount of character detail. There is no ohligation to produce a continuous text-indeed, this could be an to improvisation-or to observe the conventions of punctua- IlClll Jud 'complete sentences', The aim should be to record all those (I('IIlCllts that are essential to the story, but only these. (The decision ,d)(l\lt what is essential is entirely, and rightly, subjective: faithfulness 10 an original text or to Cl 'writer's intention' play no part in this work.) !\lllIw s[oriL's PITSl'lltl'd ill this book are given in the form of ',k,'klll"'. Tlll'Sl' :11"1' pl"illll'd ("ClL.:t1y as we would use them ourselves, ,1I1l1 \-\l'II.I\'(' Ill" ;llll'lllpll'" to provide;1 'standardised form'. We 1111111 1111'\' wl1lll1' ,11 1",1',( ,ICII'ljl':lll' ,IS tlll'y SI:lI1d, and are sure that 1(',1l /11"1', \\1111 \\/,.1,111 \\1111 IIOIlI 1IIl'lrtlwl1ll1:I!(,l"ial, :1nd thus 1'1, ,dll" ,11"11 "\ I1 ',I'll \ ',I , 11 I,",'" W dI dl'\'('lop I hei I' own Sf le and I" /lllt'I'I' 11111'1 1 I, '1111,1, 1,1',' I ,!t.tl Ill,' '.I,,'klll" lIlt'n'lv pro"idl" " I, I, ", 11 I /110 ," 1I,. i ' '" I, -, 1110 I, 11, I I' I \ \" I1 I. f I 0111 _ ,Ill d 11111 I 1101 J" "I.,,,.lr,,d Telling a story Preparing to tell Inpreparingtotell a story,weh;rvc workeddirectly fromskeletons. Thishastheeffectbothofdist:1.flcing tlw leller from therhythmsand forms ofthesource(whetheroralorwrillLIl) andoffocussing on whatisessential to memorise-theploI ami development.Except where expressionsarecssl'llli;i1 to th story(e.g, in fairy storiessuchrepetirionsas 'Whatbig..... you have,grandmother') we haveconsciouslyavoidedall memorisatioll orrecordingofforms of words, concentratingon plotlineand pace,andon'gettingthe feel' ofthestory, Adress rehearsal,for example,in frontofthemirror, may attimes be helpful,butcaneasilyleadto lossofinvolvement, andthus,intheclassroom,failure tocommunicate;onerehearsal techniquewhich gets roundthisis to replay thestoryinone'shead while mumblingtherhythmsofthestory (butnottheactualwords ofthetelling) aloud.We havealsofoundthata briefperiodoftotal relaxation beforetellingis ofimmensehelp. Styles of storytelling Therearemanywaysoftellingastory. Onecan unrollone'smat underthenearesttreeandcalltogethera crowd;onecanbuttonhole a strangerin a railwaycarriageorbar;onecan murmurintheearof a sleepychild.Theseandmanyothertraditional modesoftellingcan havetheircounterpartsintheforeign-language classroom.Standing, orsittingona raisedchairin frontofrowsofstudentsonecan capturesomethingoftheone-mantheatreshow,andaim to fire emotionsorentertainby pureactingskill. In total contrastro this, sittingwiththestudents,inatightcircle,can conjurememoriesof childhoodstorytelling.By seekingand exchangingeyecontact,one candrawthestudentsintothestory, andgivea senseofparticipation in theprocessoftelling;withholdingeyeconmct,ontheotherhand, canbeusedtoincreasethemoodoffantasy, and to encourage introspection.Bodyposture,voicelevel, andvariationin theexternal environment(furniture,lighting,colour)canalsobemadetoheighten particular effecrs. Particula r stories, and particula rgroups of listeners, willcall for differentstylesoftelling, and thetellershouldbeaware ofthe ofpossihilityopento him orher. Acert:lill al1HlIlllt of ddihl'l':1fccxpt'l'ill1coutillll is VtT)' hclpfllllO:111\'1111<' 11 I'llI!'. (. I ..Jc."dop his orh(:r OWl) 'it\'ks: \('1' Wh,ll h;I],I'Illo., llll ",,11111'1. . iI 10111', ,11 (. IlIld Itlllll 1)("1111111 i111' 1"11. 11,'1'" III \\,liI,,]\I \\ 1".1. I '''''1. 1 "I ,I .. '11. Telling a story he listener Justas therearcstylesoftelling,sothere;lrestylesoflistening. Peopledonotalwayslistenin thesamcway,orfor thesamecnd;nor do all peoplelisten for theendswemightwanttoprescribe. When, for example, theschoolmasterpunishesa child for 'daydreaming' insteadof'payingattention'to whatis beingsaid, heis assuming thattheaimofthechild'slisteningis theabsorptionand retention of thestoryorargument,Thus,ifthechildfails topayattention, the worthofthetelUng, and by implicationoftheteller, is calledinto question.Inpractice,quitetheoppositemaybe thecase: thetelling may besopowerful orstimulatingtharitsets updominanttrainsof thoughtin the listener's head whichforce theattentionawayfrom the teller and alongnewandexcitingpaths.Thestorytellershould not merely recognisethatthis, too,might bea validaim, buttake \lCPS toencourageandexploititby, for example,allowingthinking I i mewtthin thetelling, a ndbyencouragingthelistenerstosh are I heirthoughtsafterwards, Foreign'!earnersmayhavetheirown, \pccialaims in listening: theymay beconcentratingonthestructures orrhythmsofspeech,andallow'meanings'ro passthem by; they IlIa)' beengagedin a rangeoftranslationprocesses; they may, c'o.;pccially iftheyareadvancedstudents,bemakingconsciollsattempts III rind, in thestyleoftelling, models for thingsthey themselveswish ["l'Xpress-thingswhich maybequite remote(for others) from the ',[llI"y be1l1g told. Thistoothe teller shouldbecontentwith. W at not to do J 11I'IT ;lIT 110 recipes forstorytelling, buttherearevery clearly things "Ill' sho\lld NOTdo: 1)1111'( 1l'Il stlll"il'S you don'tlike, orare outofsympathywith. 11,111'( Litelilt' sllll"y :lho"ethe list ner: tell thestoryfor thesakeof tilL' li"II'IIl'l', Illlt tor 1he sakeofthestory. 11111\'1 hnollll'lill"Hl'lIpinl wilh 'gcltingthe right'-your 1I'lIll1 f ', will I"" (>lIlt' Ill" V' >11'> Ilr 1111, )1"11" 1"llIII01I11I<d''', Telling a story Askeleton Here is an example of thestory presented in the book. The river Summer Theyreachedtheriver, h[ld t)eenatwarthreeyears Lullinfighting Threeofthemwentbathing-threeshots HQputriveroutofbounds Hecreptthroughwoodtoriverbank Propped rifleagainsttree, undressed,swam Watercoolandclean Caughtbranchinmidstream Sawheadinwater,Ours?Theirs? Headwenttootherbank Hesw.am backto rifle,gottherefirst Aimedatotherclimbingoutofwater Couldnotsqueezetrigger Letriflefall Sawbirdsriseas shotrangout Hisface hittheground (afterAntonisSamarakis,Zitite Efpis) ection2 Storiesandfollow-ups 2.1 Revengequestions Skeleton Theinventor Inventor Livedincountry Drewplans,torethem up,startedagain For40years neverspoke,readnewspaper,orreceived letter Didn'tknowradioexisted Onedayrealised he hadmade invention Dayand nightcheckedplans,calculations Hewenttotown Carsinsteadofhorses;electricinsteadofsteamtrains; escalators,refrigerators. Quicklyunderstood-sawtelephoneand said: 'Aha' Toldpeoplein street'I havemadeagreatinvention' Theydidnotcare Heenteredacafeandexplainedtoaman 'I haveinventedamachinewhichshowswhat'sgoingon milesaway' 'Ohthetelevision-there'soneinthecorner-shallIturn iUm?' Till:inventorwenthome Atdf:skf )r il rnonth--re-inventedcar ,ill 11 wdll )1', tAlepllone,refrigerator 1111' r rillly11; 11 (1111 ill!l is10 i nv(:ntthingsthatalreadyexist (,dllll I'..rl" llill",IlI, illK;ndergeschichten) Stories and follou.;-ups Before class Makeonecopyofthequcsriollsgiven llelnw. On thiscopyadd thenamesoftwopeoplefrOl1l yourd;lss ill tilt: blanksinquestions4 and25.Thencopythenumberofshntsyou will needforyourclass. In class 1 Tell thestudentsthestory. 2 Givethemthe'comprehension'questions hdowandinvitethem tocross out anytheydon'tlike orthink arcstupid. Eachstudent shouldworkonhisorherowndoingthis. Youarehereinviting thestudenttotakerevengeon boringcomprehensionquestions. 3 Whenstudentshavereadallthequestionsandcrossedoutthose theywantto,askthemtoworkin pairsandputtoapartnerthe questionstheyhaveretained.Pairstudentswhohaveretaineda lotofquestionswithoneswhohavecrossedoutmostorallofthe questions. 4 Havethemre-pairandrepeat3 above. QUESTIONS 1 Whatdidthemanin thecafetell hiswifewhenhegothomethat night? 2 Is it deeplyuseful toinventthings thathavealreadybeen invented? 3 Whatdidtheinventorlooklike? 4 Did inthisgrouplikethisstory? 5 Whatkindofhousedidtheinventorlivein? 6 Whatis theunderlyingthemeofthis story,for you? 7 Wheredid theinventotgethislivingfrom? 8 Whydidtheinventor nolongerknowhowtospeaktopeople? 9 Whatnewthingssurprisedtheinventorwhenhewentinto town? 10 Doyou knowanybodylikethisman? 11 Whatcolourwerethewallsoftheinventor'sroom? 12 Wouldyourbrotherlikethisstory? 13 Whatdidtheinventorlooklike? 14 Whatkindoffatherwouldtheinventormake? IS Why didtheinvcntorfinally dccide togo intoIOWII? 1(, Wh:ll sort oflnWIl did YO\l illJ:lgilll':I'; yllll ,Ill.Jil" ',fllr)'? I ' 111\'('11101.111.11111 '.tllI."III.IJii' Revenge questions 18 Iftheinventorwasa Muslim,howmanywives wouldhehave? 19 Inwhatways,ifany, doyousympathisewiththeinventor? 20 Whatdidtheinventordointhetrams? 21 Whydidtheinventorgetangryinthecafe? 22 Wasthismana lunatic? 23 Howdidthestorybegin? 24 Didthestoryhappenfor youinEngland,yourowncountryor somewhereelse? 25 Did.......... inthisgrouplikethestory? 26 Whatwastheinventor'sreactiontothenewthingshesawinthe town? 27 Whichofthenewthings didheprobablyfind mostrevolu- tionary? 28 Whydidthismanwanttoinventthings? 29 Howdid thestoryend? 30 Werethereanyrosesintheinventor'sgarden? 31 If,heinventorhadhadhobbies,whatmighttheyhave!been? 32 Whatsortofrelationshipdoyouimaginetheinventorhaving hadwithhis parents? .n Whatdidthemaninthecafeoffertodofortheinventor? .H Howcouldtheinventorgetbywithoutearningasalary? Whatis thesymbolicmeaningofthestory? 36 Didtheinventorgrowpotatoes? . 37 Whatdoyouknowabouttheauthorofthisstory,PeterBichsel? R Whyaretheretrafficlightsintowns? 9 Whydidtheinventoroftentearuphisplans? .H) Iftheinventorwasananimal,whatsortofanimalwouldhebe? I Is this a children'sstory? 12 Doyouthinkthepersonwhotold usthestorylikedit? ., Whatwastheweatherlikewhentheinventorwenttotown? 14 Whatyearwastheinventorbornin? I Doyoulikelisteningtostupidstoriesinforeign languages? 1(, W;lS rhe inventorwearinga tieonthedayhewentintotownor his IlStdpyjamas? I ' I)()yOll like:lIJswcringcomprehensionquestions? l.\ \XIII:II did he S;lY 10 till'Ill'opkh'metin thetown? I" 1111\0\' old wOllld dlt'111\'1'11(01' hl' j(he WLTC alivenow? .11 \XlIIi, h i'.lIl1' 1I11,000f 11'11";1 ion ill theabovelist? I Stories and follow-ups Preparation of this kind of quvstilll Ill,,ire lor subsequent classes You willnoticethatche50C)u 'sIionsgiV('lt 1;,111 intoseveralcategories, Forexamplequestions4, Ll, 2. and IJ. ;11'(' ;t11 todowiththereactions tothestoryofpeoplethestudent knows. I!()w Illanyothercategories aretherefor you? Itis vitalthatyouwriteveryvariL'd qlll'Slio!1S, .so chatstudentsend up by crossingoutverydifferentthings. Belowyouwillfind a secondstory,with a ratherdifferentselection ofquestions: King Caliban Fred, huge,strong,gentlebutratherslow Earned80aweekin shop Happy: kids, garden;wife Doreen,ambitious,unsatisfied Fred metwrestling promoterin pub Offered800 aweekas'fighter'-allfightsfixed Fred unsure,dislikesviolence Doreen pusheshim Fred becomesKing Caliban,pairedwith Billythe Crusher In rehearsal Fredslow,makesmistakes,workshard Town Hall, Saturdaynight Audienceoutfor blood Bald manoutfor Caliban Screamsat him Fred nervous,makesmistakehurts Billy Fightin earnest,18aldygoesmad Fred knocks Billy unconscious,Baldyscreamsabuse Fredlumbersoutofring, picks Baldyupandsmashes himontoseats Ambulance,police-Fredis charged (afterJohnWain,Death a/the Hind Legs and Other Stories) QUESTIONS I Howoldwas Fred? 2. Whydid FredmarJ'y Dorcen{ ,1 Wh.!t ofC1I' did J)orL'I'n W:1l1t? 4 no Y()lIlhillk ill Ill('",J'UIJp Ilk('11 dli'.r,H'1 \ 'I \,IIIIld,(.,110I' .1',',i,I.llll'.11 1 1111111 \ 111111' . Revenge questions (I Howtallwasthewrestlingpromoter'ssister? -;- If Fredhad been to abetterschool,would.he have been happier? X Wasthestorywell told? ) Howmanyfights hadFredhad beforetheTownHallfight? 10 Is wrc.)tlinggoodforthespectators? 11 WhatwasFred'smistake? 12 Haveyougota brother?Wouldhelikethisstory? I) Shouldwomenwrestle? WhatSOHofshopdidFredandDorecnworkin? I' HowdidFrcdentertainills children? I (, Whois thevillainofthestory? 17 Whowas theoriginalCaliban? Whydidn'tFredlikeviolence? It) ])0youthinkthewriterofchestorywas aneducated man? '() HowmanypeoplewantedFredtowin? HowmuchmorewouldFred havemadeas a wrestlerthanasa shopworker? I I DoesDoreenlikewrestling? Did thestorytakeplaceinManchesterorLondon? ',1 WhathappenedtoFredin thepolicestation? Did in thisgrouplikethestory? Howdid FredspendhisSaturdaymornings? Weretheremorementhanwomenintheaudience? Wouldthestorymakea goodfilm? fl so, \-"hieh actorshouldtakethepartofFred? I )id thestorymakeyoufeel guilty? \XIlLlt h:1ppenedtoBaldyafterFredthrewhim? ,> JII rrl,d',sshm's, whatwouldyouhavedoneaboutBaldy? !: Whodol'S f)oreen blame:? '\ I \X!hidl is morl''I1t)nest, wrestlingoreducation? li I:r('d h;ldll'IIlHllle a l11israke, whowouldhavewonthefight? I, IIll\\' IllIlcll 1l1OIley W:.lS lherefereepaid? W.I, ,'0'%, ;l l'l':\son:lhlt.., Slllrl for thewrestlingpromoterto I,',t'I\' l':' 11,1\\' .li,1 J)011'('11 voll' ill Ihl'!:''';! t'kctioJl? I , ,tI I1 11' If' "/1111,1; , III I" II 11"III.Ji I"1IIIdl,.,lld,' /1)',1111'[',:' I1 \"1111.'.."111 ,1111111',1 'JlW'IItIII'" wll.II willlt:lj1j1l'l1? Ill, 11" '11'11\1,11, 11111,1, \'.1"""111I'\ltJrv? 1"111,1,. j I.",h I, ,. I ill 'Ill' t i I,' 'I,'11'"111 ,1,111' III ,1,,1 j I' .1,.1" . 1111111 1111" 111111' 111\ "'11' '11'"' ,1,,11. ,I "'11111111 Stories and follow-ups 46 Ifyourson wantedtobea wn:stll'r, wouldyoulethim? 47 WastheTownHalltherightplan'fora wrestliogmatch? 48 Whois thebest wrestlerin this WOIl)? 49 Howlongdid thestorytake to telI? 50 Whatmightyouhavebeendoinginsteadoflisteningtothe story? 2.2 Theme pictures Skeleton Kacuy Shelivedwith brotherincottageinforest Didcooking,cleaning; he hunted Shewasunhappy;cottagetoosmall,isolated Onedayhebroughthomeanimal: Shesaid: 'Cookityourself,' Hesaid nothing He knewsheloved honey Nextdaycamehome,toldherabouthugebees- nestuptree Askedhertohelphimgethoney-sherefused 'IfIgoalone I'llspillthe honey' Sheagreedtohelp Hetookhood and machete,theysetoff Finallycametotalltreeinclearing Sheclimbed aheadofhim,wearing hood Neartophewhispered'Ssh,stoporthe bees'lI hear' Hewentdowntree,10PiJed offbranchesabovehead Leftclearing,thought: 'Nowshewillseesheneedsme' Cold,nightfalling,shewasterrified,windrising Begantogropeherwaydowntree Herfootslippedintospace Tookoffhood,lookeddown: nobranches Herarm itched,lookeddown:feathers Feltbackofhead: somethinggrowing Herfeetonbranch:claws Gustofwino knocked herofftree Shewasflyillq; callt'!cl 0111 11,11111', 11l',1I&1 'I'.tnlY, KllCllY' Theme pictures EversinceKacuy bird hasbeensearchingforestfor brother (afterKacuy,inSouthAmerican FairyTales, ed,John Meehan) IIp-foreclass I ollecta lotofmagazinepicturesand details,cutoutfrom magazine I 'I,-lures (theseshouldcomein useful for a wholerangeofexercises). (!loosesomepicturesthat,foryou,areconnectedwiththethemesof 111l' storyand plentyofothersthatappear toyouto be unconnected. I'lllureswiththefollowingfeatures mightappeartoconnecteasily WilIt Kacuy anditsthemes: orphans I feathers I lonetrees I i'llds I families I him-herscenes I sex-roleimages I ',.I(I,ICSS anger I 'I'llteachyoua lesson' I magictrans- Illlmations I flying ! honey = thirst for love I marriageete. t IIIlosingpicturesthatdonot seem to youtoconnecttotbethemes '. 'll can see is important, aspeopleseedifferentthingsin a story. III t:lass I'dItheclass thestory, prl':ld thepicturesandpicturefragmentsona tableatoneendof till'room.Askstudentsropickpictures thattheyassociatewith IIll' story. Askthem topairoffandexplaintheirchoiceofpicture I.),1I}()ther person. ;\-,k rhl' students to find a newpartner. Continuethis untileach h.I', '>pOlU'll with fourothers. 1 ' ,\ I 11) N 1\ I F Thereasoll for proposingpictureassociationis tha t 11 11 j,'/I'III'1'l'("e,lll'S ;1 story vcry muchofhis orherown. Explaining J' I \111'1' ,l'>';I)l'j:lliollS to:1 p,lITncr allows theindividualstudentto I' i1I""lllIW,pn'j;ll;ll1d thestoryheorsheheardorinternally ,I' 1Il'd I',> hy di; ..'o\,(ril1gIt'IW differentlyotherpeoplesawthestory. 1'1,,11111' .1'.' ",i.lll'''!,11 ,lW', (1111 .... oft<.'11 otherwiseunsaid. I'j For heginners Stories and follow-ups 2.3 For beginners Skeleton Mrs Peters Mrs Peterswas80 and leantona stick I usedtocarryherbasketbackfrom theshop Onedaysheshowedmea bottleshehad bought Thelabel said: 'Onesipofthiswill take20 years offyourlife' Shehobbled upthestepsinto herhouse NexttimeI sawhershewaswalking ram-rod straight. Her stickwasgone.Shewavedtome ThatSundayI wentfor astrollin thepark MrsPeterswassitting on bench nearthegate wearinganelegantdressandscarf Shefooked about40 Thefollowing weekI metherin theparkagain Shewasdressedin tightjeansand asweater I satdown nextto herandtook herhand I askedhertothecinema Shesaidshewantedtogoandchange, Shesaidshe'd meetmein theparkin an hour'stime. I camebackin an hour-nobodythere, I wentto herhouseandhammeredonthedoor, No answer (we learntthisstoryfrom a telling byJanAspeslagh) What sort of complete beginners? Youcan nsefully tell storiestocomplete beginnersif theirmother languagesarereasonablyclosetothetargetlanguage. 1 youare teachingEnglishtoDutch,German,Scandinavian (barringFinnish) speakersandtoa lesserextentfrench, Sp:mish,Italian slw:lknsthen storytelling;1("'I.ero-st;\(t !t'v('] cmhe 1IS(' fll I. [t is 1lo1 111111 1111"1' 10 fry stl1rytdlirl!', 10 I'Ir:I!,j,, (11" ./;III,IIll";(' "IH":lkilll',I'"lq.l'l' I" ,'1'1111"1', Before class ReadtheskeletonvetycarefullyamI decidehowtogetcertain wordsacrosswithmimeanddrawing.From theabovestoryyou CJngetacrosstheideaofleaningonCl stick,carryingbags,hobbling, walkingstraight,wavingetc., by miming.Label, bottle,steps, henchcaoall beverysimplydrawn.If youhaveneverrolda story tocompletebeginners before,rehearsethestory toyourself, using mime. 1 all yourstudentshavethesamemother-tongue,youmay find youcantranslatetheoddwordoridea. I Photocopythesplitsentences below,onesettoeveryfourstudents. CutthepagesupsoyOll cndup with16halfsentencesfromeach, whichcanbestoredinenvelopes.Inwritingyourown split sClltences forotherstories,makesureyOll coverall thekey move- tllentsinthenarration.If youcan't,the storyisprobablytoo 'oHlplexanyway. Morethanabouteightsentences canfeel overwhelmingtothecompletebeginner.Inwritingyourownsplit sentencespunctuatedearlyaspunctuationandlackofitare 11I<ljor re-combinationandsequencingmarkers. III l:!ass Tell thestory,slowly,measuredly, usingmimeandplentyofeye , ('lltdCt. Inno waywilleverybody'understand'everythingthefirst I iJlIC. Donotfeel badatthis 'incomprehension'- therehasto be l'kntyofit ontbeway topiecingtogetherevenpartialcom- Ill"chl'nsion. J (;rollPthestudentsin fours. Giveeacha setofsplitsentences. Ask IIWllI to jointhehalves upandsequencethem. Everynowand I [WIJ ll10ve a personfrom hisorhergrouptotbenextgroup. Go .'1111)(I :ll1swcringquestionsandhelpingwhere necessary. '1',,11 IIll' qory;lgail1, still mimingand beingveryexplicit.Letthem Illtlk 1l1l'ol'l,h thcirsequencingagain. 1('11 I Ill' slnr)' :1 third timc,with kssmimeandslightlyfaster, 1III ',1'1 11 1'11, Oil :1';1ick" III t. d, (. I(I \' C',11 '. ( ) 11 \' C1111 Ii f 1111111 I Stories and follow-ups Shewaswearinganelegant dressandshelookedabout40, Isatdownnextto hnandtookherhand. Iaskedherto withmetothecinema, Ihammeredonthedoorofher buttherewasnoanswer. VARIATION Old Maid Thisis agoodstoryfollow-up ,lCtivityatpost-beginner level. Before class Takeeightsplitsentencesandputeachhalfsentenceonaplaying cardsizedpieceofpaperorcardboard,e.g.: Isatdown herandtook nextto herhand, Youwillneedonepackof16cardsfor everyfourpeopleinyour class,sofor agroupof20youwillneedfive packs. In class 1 Groupthestudentsinfours. Giveoutapacktoeachfoursome andaskonestudentto shuffleanddealthecards. 2 Explaintherules: Aimofgame- tolaydownas manycompletesentencesasyou can. Playersmustnotshowtheirhandstooneanother. PlayerAstartsthegameby randomlypickinga cardfromPlayer B'shand. Athenlaysdownanycompletesentencesheorshecan. Bthenrepeats theprocess,takingacardfrom Cetc. Thegroupsequencesthecompletedsentencesoncetheyareall on thetable. The c\lllwJl1ade h;ndlT hy splitlilll',111(' '11 111!'111 I",illlo t1Hl;(' hn'; l',lch Clr hy 111l11I,lill", 111011' ",'111'11'0 '. , , Taking roles ( )Id Maid canwellbeusedfor revision ofsomeofthelanguagein I :-.Lory weeksaftermeetingit, I I VEL Theprincipleexemplifiedin this unitofmakingavery Lhl(icultchunkoflanguagegraduallymoreandmoreaccessibleto '1Illpletebeginnersbymime,drawingandthen aco-operativeor ,"lllpctitivereadingtask,followedbyfurthertellings, canwell be IllpllCd tootherlevelsoflearner.So, forexample,youcouldtella '.I 11 I I Pofelementarystudentsastorythatwouldonlybereadily II1Idtrstoodbyupper-intermediates.Thisis veryusefulpsychologi- "ily;,lS theelementarylearneris thus havinghis selfexpectations I 11 "l'llbeyond theirnormallevel. Itis wonderfultoenduppretty I,ll 'l1loerstandingsomethingoneatfirst feltconfidentonewould 11I 1 /IIJlderstand. Taking roles Thebearthatwasn't Bearsawgeeseflying South,leavesfluttering down Said to himself'It'stimetosleep' Wenttocave, piledupleaves: soonasleep October 111 DeCernl)ermencame,builtfactoryovercave M<lrd1 B , I W k(-) lip,wenttocave mouth: nograss,no trees, 1:llilllrwys rllllll!llltitWilS a dream,pinched himself,nochange Inrr'rllllll'WIlV youworking?' '1IIItl"II"hC:;II' 'Nc" /1111. YIlII'le:;, /lwnwhoneedsashaveand 1Nl' Ill, ,,1111 (,ll,II' l,ljC.rII.lp 11111 I"','fIII(,(IIf:lirl Malll,f.lr: Jialeman,big 1I!".I',I',lld 1""'111 IIllo'li"il' wltl' '1'111 '1"1111111"", I, 11' Villi IILol Volt,'", /1;1/ ,IJO It' , \ Stories and follow-ups All drovetozoo 11l1'n;IJl, 11 1'1';; 'ndillac Little bearsin 111:111 Iq,tH' -l:)ked 'Is hea bear?' Little bearslaughed'I[ Ill. was LI bear,he'dbeinside thecagewith us' Beardepressed Theywentto circus: same: with bearsonfunny bikes Bearmoredepressed Backtofactory,bearworked on machine October Oil crisis,factoryclosed,men backtofamilies Bearin wood: sawgeese.leaves- saidto himself 'It'stimeto... no .. I'm asilly manwho needsa .. .' Colderandcolder;whitestufffell, snow Walkedtocave,wentin, piled upleaves,wentto sleep saying 'I'mnota man, I'm abear' (afterTashlin) Inclass 1 Tellthestory. 2 Groupthestudentsineights. Writeupthefollowingeightroleson the board: zoobear Cadillac foreman cave wildgoose manager Bear flutteringleaf 3 Explaintothestudentsthateachofthemis a film who hastocasttheeightroles. Eachpersonmustcasttheeightroles withinhisorhergroup,allottinga roletohimselforherselftoo. 4 Askthestudentstoworkindividually,withobtcommunicating theirdecisionstoanyoneelse, 5 Whenthis hasbeendone,askeach personto workwith one partnertoexplain howtheycasttheroles. I?o r'lotallowthe studentstogroupintothreesandfours, whIchwdl happenunless youexpresslystopit. . 6 WhenMOpartnershavefinished talkingaskthem (';H.:h tofmd ,1 n w partner. . 7 Ollly :d'llTSOll1l' Iill\(' :,llllwgrollpsoflllllrl' Ih,lll 1'\" I" l"rlll. It IS (,:,',il'l I"dj',III','. illllJIl:I\l' t11l11j'," ,\'j,h ,,'1,1' "d)11 d, 111 \11111,1 )',1111111 Theme words NOTES Thisis a ratherintimateexercisethatshouldnotbe ,lttempteduntilpeopleknoweachotherfairly well. Therearesome !,roupswherethereis notenoughmutualtrustforittobeattempted C1l all. lfyou tryittoosoonitmaygetdoneskittishly andsuperfi- 11:111y, Thereis nowayofknowinginadvancewhichroleswill beseenas 1wgativebystudents. Cadillac,fromthesetabove,hasbeenseenby I 'lIepersonina group as aninsultandbyanotherinthesamegroup ,I'. ;1 fair compliment. Veryofteninanimateandanimalrolesarericherthanhuman ,"ICS, despitethe students'initialwondermentatthisnovel formof 11I11acy! \1 "NOWLEDGEMENT Theideaofroleallocationwelearntfrom 1''''l"ll:ud Dufeuwhohadworkedwithit inthe contextofpsycho- ,11,1111<1., Theme words ',/, It .. ton Jack and the beanstalk Jack livedwith motherin cottage,verypoor Shesenthimtosell cow He metbutcher- soH:! cowforbeans MotherAngry- threwbeansoutofwindow rnomingJack'sroomdark, Beanstall<rising tosky I c:lillll>l!d totop- strangeland MI,t W()lllHll shesaidland belongedtogiant. Gianthad rli:; t;lttwrtltld stolen hismoney ,I Ic'!< w,dlald, 1110111 f(!II, came10 castle l ,f,I1II", wilo1lllWillillfjlyrookhim in,fed him,hid him in IIV.'11 1'1.111\ fl'llIlIf,itl. ',lJilll)il'llllllrl 'I "". rI, I." I, 11111 I I 1111 11111II,I""d 101 ,1111111111' 11111.111 ,.1'1/"1,1110' hi' 11" d I'll 'JlllhlId 1",", I.. 11111, Ill, I", ,d' Stories and follow-ups Giantatehuge'Supp r, culled forhishen,roared: 'Lay!' Shelaid 12eggs,Gi<:lllt wonllOsleep,snoresshookcastle Jackstolehen,ran toIJ8811swlk, backhome He andmotherrich Jackbackupbeanstalk- Taken inagain bygiant'swi.fe-- hiddenincupboard Giantreturned: 'Feefi ...' Hugesupper,countsmoney, snores Jackstealsmoney,backdownbeanstalk Buildsmothernewhouse Newdisguise- backupbeanstalk Takeninbywife,hiddenin wash-tub 'Fee,fi. ..' Hugesupper,giantcallsforharp: 'Play!' Harpplays,giantsnores Jackgrabsharp,harpcries'Master,Master!' Giantwakes- chasesJack Jackfastdownbeanstalk,giantclosebehind Calls'Mother,Mother,theaxe!' Chopsdownbeanstalk- killsgiant In class t Tellthestoryasfully asyoucan, 2 Writeupthewordsbelowontheboardandaskthestudents, workingindividualty,toputtheideastheyfindmostrelevantto thestoryfirstandtheleastrelevantlast.Be readytoexplain unknownwords. 3 Pairthestudentsandaskthemtojustifytheirrankingtotheir partner.Getthemtore-pairtwoorthreetimes,Theseexplanatiolls re-cycle much otthelanguageheardinthestory widllllll IlI<1king thestlldelllsrctdllhl'story ('0 '1 l)ersoll whoh.I', )11',1 III 11,1 Ill(' sdi slory, 't Discussion ,6 Discussion .' 'kti!leton Peacocks Peacocks In parkintowncentre Dozensofmagnificentpeacocks Oneday10peacocksfound dead Nextdayanother10 Outrage,Policeinvestigate Noclues Inspectorinterviewsallpeacockfanciers Meetsoldmanwhooncebredpeacocks Alone,houseneat,militarysouvenirs,oldsoldier He cannothelpbutbe interestedincase,pleasedtotalk Leaving,Inspectorseesphotographofyoungmanin uniform 'Yourson?' 'Myselfwhen IservedtheEmperor' Nextdayold mancomestopolicestation Casefascinateshim 'Tokill apeacock is theperfectact,forapeacockisitself perfection' afternightpoliceinwaitoutsidepark At lastInspectorseesfiguresapproaching: manwiththree dogs Mun cutsfence- dogsattackpeacocks Manlunsoff I c: in lightofstreetlamp II .fir'torrecognisesfaceofyoungman inphotograph (,11(/:1 YukloMlf.ihima) , .'"", 1 1,1111, 0,111111 1110, 1Ill"'.1111\'. ,11,,\ I,,,li'11111'" 111\111111"/ 11'111'1 lilllllipH'aft'l'r telling, thenask Ill. IInll,II'.In 11"lllj,1111 11 ofthl'storyIJl groups III d".. 1I, iI'.' ".", 1I "1'1, ,I"I"\\' Storiesandfollow-ups EXAMPLES Ina lower-interlllnli:llt'groupinwhichtheabove storywastold,almosteverystudl'1l1 had :1 differentinterpretation, including: 1 Rosathoughtitwasa problemoj idelltificationaroundthephoto andtheyoungmanwiththedogs: perhapsthekillerwastheold man'sson. 2 Yannicksawthestoryas aversioll of.Jekyll andHyde. 3 Hans(whohadalsoseena film based Oil thestory)thoughtthatin murderingthepeacockstheold m:lll was rediscoveringhisyouth, whichforhimhadbeendestroyingthings:lIldpeopleinthewar. 4 Christoffelt therewasnorealfeelingoftimeinthestoryorthat therewas'timecrossing'- thetimeofthephotoandthetimeof thekiUing ofthepeacockswereblurredorthesame. S Umbertothoughtthattheoldmanhaddiscoveredwhothepeacock killerwasandhadphotographedhim: hehadthephotographin hishousebecauseheidentifiedwith theyoungmanintheactof killingthepeacocks. NOTES Forthisveryopen,directexercisetobeeffective,thestory chosenshouldbecapableofaverywiderangeofinterpretation,and thetellingshouldbeclearandsimple: i.e. thecomplexityshouldlie inthestoryratherthaninthelanguage, Hereis anotherstory: Freyfaxi Hrafnkelwaspriestofgod Frey Ownedsheep,herdofmaresandfinestallion Dedicatedstalliontothegod: calledhim Freyfaxi Sworeonlyheshouldride Freyfaxi Einarcametoworkasshepherd Einarpromised nottoride Freyfaxi Einarlived in hutat headofvalley Oneday30 sheepgone- searched- couldnotfind them Decidedtorideoutafterthem Wenttocatcha mare- all ran off Freyfaxi stoodwaiting Dare heridethehorse? Mounted, Rode Freyfaxi all overmountains nosheep Returnedto hut- sheeptherebleating UnsaddledFrevfaxi hlotllollltIll I" rhl'l Shapesandcharacters Hrafnkel understood- horse hard ridden SetoffforEinar'shut 'Didyou ride Freyfaxi?' 'I did' Hrafnkel raisedaxe Einarstood- did notrun- did notdefendhimself Withoutmalice,Hrafnkel killed Einar (fromtheIcelandic) Shapes and characters Rumpelstiltski'n Poormiller. Beautifuldaughter He told king 'Shecanspinstrawintogold' King locked herupwithspindleandstraw Ifnogold by morning: death Shewept Dooropened: Funnylittle mansaid 'Whatwill yougivemeifIspinthestrawintogold?' 'Mynecklace' Whirr,whirr- gold NextnightKling locked herin largerroom- morestraw hdrneseqL!enCe asabovewithring insteadofnecklace) Illirdnightking promisedmarriageif she'dspinthestraw Inquid ('"IIIW sequenceasabovewithfirst-born child insteadof 1ill!II W,'ddil1!:1 tI'll" Vlld' 1:II'tl l:hild- Shehadforgotten little man tI1 .1,1" 11 '.11,'c1 '( iivlI 11 le: VIlll Ghild' ',Ill'nit, wd1IlIIl t., lit:l'l'lused- herthreedaystofind Ill'./I 1111" ',11. "1" 11111 1 1111 "I'l 1I'I'.\I.,ll,1t1 '.111'11'1.. 01 dll'1I11"hili 1111111'11'1111 1'1,1 It II1"f)',I"OlIIlI,I.IV '""11 I lid '" Stories and follow-ups Thirddaymessengerrcporlodlittle manin woodsinging: 'Thisguessinggameslw'll Illlverwin, Rumpelstiltskin is myname' Shetoldthelittle man his n<Jrne Rage- 'Awitchhastoldyou,a witchhastoldyou!' Hevanishes In class 1 Tellthestory. 2 Givethestudentsthegeometricshapesandadjectivesbelowand askthemtoworkontheirown.Theyaretodecide a) whichshapesrepresentwhichcharacters:miller,king, daughter,Rumpelstiltskin,baby. b) whichadjectivesgowithwhichcharacter. Encouragethemto usedictionaries, toasktheirneighboursorask you iftheydonotknowthemeaningofsomeofthelistedadjec- tives. 3 PaIr thestudentsandgetthemto explaintheirchoicestoeach other. SHAPES AND ADJECTIVES '11 Completion IIIIlucent helpful astonished Ilo;lStful poor stupid 1',1 '-dy childless worried ,,lred surprised cruel IIIIJ ridiculous desperate 11'llItiful terrified little ,11,lnge amazed tearful 1,1, h regal queer 1"ldly-dressed sleepless polite 1',II'II-working motherly angry l\ 'I'r-joyed unusual odd 11. lighted ambitious empty-handed I"('!c. llil nt cross enigmatic I h NOWLEDGEMENT LouSpaventaandGertrudeMoskowitz I,II1(I behind thisexercise. (Caring and Sharing in the Foreign i Classroom, NewburyHouse,1978.) Completion Thetwo sons Germany- towardsendofWorldWar11 A farmerdreamsthathersonis calling her Wakes, gOS intoyard,seessonbypump illlit i.; not herSOI'1 - oneofRussian prisonersofwarwho work011 thefarm Tllo..,amosequencerepeatedseveraltimesovernext Will'! I.11:11 UITU) :;l1r: realisesitistheRussianPOW " secretly- theyareplanning ,,'.t Ill!' '"IV',flldl 11 I 1l:'lp::1111)11 food, blankets 11,'I '.'111 .11 IIVI', ',Iy';1-111l :;j'tn;HrllY 20 ktnsaway- waris 1,,,"1 I11' W".II ,11 dtClI III ," I', I dIILI " "'" I Ill, 1.1 /1/ \ '/ ' .. hilt'} " I Stories and follow-ups Thirddaymessengerrcporlodlittle manin woodsinging: 'Thisguessinggameslw'll Illlverwin, Rumpelstiltskin is myname' Shetoldthelittle man his n<Jrne Rage- 'Awitchhastoldyou,a witchhastoldyou!' Hevanishes In class 1 Tellthestory. 2 Givethestudentsthegeometricshapesandadjectivesbelowand askthemtoworkontheirown.Theyaretodecide a) whichshapesrepresentwhichcharacters:miller,king, daughter,Rumpelstiltskin,baby. b) whichadjectivesgowithwhichcharacter. Encouragethemto usedictionaries, toasktheirneighboursorask you iftheydonotknowthemeaningofsomeofthelistedadjec- tives. 3 PaIr thestudentsandgetthemto explaintheirchoicestoeach other. SHAPES AND ADJECTIVES '11 Completion IIIIlucent helpful astonished Ilo;lStful poor stupid 1',1 '-dy childless worried ,,lred surprised cruel IIIIJ ridiculous desperate 11'llItiful terrified little ,11,lnge amazed tearful 1,1, h regal queer 1"ldly-dressed sleepless polite 1',II'II-working motherly angry l\ 'I'r-joyed unusual odd 11. lighted ambitious empty-handed I"('!c. llil nt cross enigmatic I h NOWLEDGEMENT LouSpaventaandGertrudeMoskowitz I,II1(I behind thisexercise. (Caring and Sharing in the Foreign i Classroom, NewburyHouse,1978.) Completion Thetwo sons Germany- towardsendofWorldWar11 A farmerdreamsthathersonis calling her Wakes, gOS intoyard,seessonbypump illlit i.; not herSOI'1 - oneofRussian prisonersofwarwho work011 thefarm Tllo..,amosequencerepeatedseveraltimesovernext Will'! I.11:11 UITU) :;l1r: realisesitistheRussianPOW " secretly- theyareplanning ,,'.t Ill!' '"IV',flldl 11 I 1l:'lp::1111)11 food, blankets 11,'I '.'111 .11 IIVI', ',Iy';1-111l :;j'tn;HrllY 20 ktnsaway- waris 1,,,"1 I11' W".II ,11 dtClI III ," I', I dIILI " "'" I Ill, 1.1 /1/ \ '/ ' .. hilt'} " I Stories and follow-ups Skeleton B Yvonne Gloomytownin Amazonforest Crocodilesin river Men cometosearchfor gold: gringos Raven-haired Yvonnein bar, meetsmen leavingbar, manyneverseenagain 20thdisappearance Policefrom laPaz crossAndesto investigate.. , (newspaperaccount,June1982) In class 1 Tellthestudentsoneofthestories, breakingoffabruptly. 2 Askthestudents,inpairsorsmallgroups,toworkoutendingsfor thestory. 3 Iftheclassisnottoolarge,askeachgrouptonominateastoryteller totell thegroup'sproposedending. 2.9 Story to poem Skeleton Willow In avi'llage- a greenwillow,centuriesold Forthevillagers- shadefrom heat, meeting place ForHeitaro,youngfarmer, placetositandthink Onedayvillagersdecideto buildbridgeoverriver Theycometo cutdownwillowfor itswood Heitaro: 'No,takemytreesbutsparethewillow' Villagersaccept NextnightHeitarositsunderwillow- nirl appears Tlwynwc)!, ninlll ,If!HI Iliqlll III!yIllOlfly : j Story to poem Yearslater Messengersarrive- announceEmperorwantsto build a temple Villagersfeel honoured- wanttogivewoodfortemple Offerwillow Heitaro hasnotreesofhisown now- cannotsavewillow Thinks 'I will losethewillow-Istill havemywife' Villagers chopdownwillow Heitaro'swife isfound dead In I, I,,11 "ll' studentsthestory, I t11\;til, workingalone, to respondtothestorywith a poem: 1,1.1111 thattheyarenotexpectedtoretellthestoryinpoemform. 11,'1 I A lower-inrermediate studentproducedthispoem: I 'he WiLLow Tree >,onlcrhingwemustlove I ., lllll .1 11" I 1"II..IJ"ll loved ;1 tree Ill'11\' 'J i1ll'luVl'11l;1l!e life ill'" lit" W,I";1 wife 1\ '" ,'hildn'lI.. ,dW,I\'" In,'( Il't'"IIII""I"'H kill,'dII1\' trcl' I" 1ll,I,k,ljl:lhn' , I,d.lll" w,llltHI! It)\'!'1s;1 dC:ld tTCl' 'I" I ,I 11011-.,' I Ill'I I,',' h,I ' "" "I 1111 \l'd"I',I',,1",,1 1111 r 1t,,1 Ill" 1"\,,f" it'll,11'" I 11, " Ill' "1.11 1I, 11.111), 11" d, 11" l,d,lr, I1 \\ dlll\' ri' I 1,1 lit111 , '".," "Itit, It , t ,d 11" ,11.. 11"1, I Ill.llr , I I. 11111111111 Stories and follow-ups OTHER STORIFS AllY III I1 llll'\'()\'arive scenes or actions will serve well for rhi' excrciSL'. I kll" I', .1l1111hn you may like to try: Skeleton The singing mushrooms A widow - three sons: Ogun, Oja and Little Brother They go off to war. Each promises to kill seven men, take seven captives O,gun and Oja laugh at Little Brother Each does as promised Little Brother also kills enemy king and wins treasure Ogun and Oja angry On way home pass through desert Thirsty Little Brother fi nds strea m Ogun drinks first, then Oja Little Brother bends to drink - they cut off his head Bury him in desert Brothers Tell mother Little Brother killed in war She mourns Life continues One day she crosses desert Sees mushrooms Picks them - they sing story of Little Brother's death Return to village - vengec,nce Brothers hide in corners of house They turn to bronze - become household gods (after 'The Story of the Singing Mushrooms', in Folk Tales and Fables, ed. p, ltayemi & P. Gurreyl In new clothes 2.10 In new clothes ,...keleton The piper of Rome Cars everywhere, piazzas, streets, pavements, blind alleys St Peter's Square - some parked on dome of St Peter's Mayor - gold chain - called council together 'What can we do? It's impossible' Council chorused 'It's impossible. What can be done?' Enter Piper Offers to free Rome of cars Mayor offers all the deposits in the banks and daughter's hand in marriage Piper also demands freedom of streets for children to play in Agreed Piper plays sweetly - everywhere motors start up Piper leads cars, buses, lorries to remote spot on River Tiber Mayor's car first to plunge into yellow waters Mayor and councillors cry 'Stop!' Beg the piper to send their cars underground And now the cars, buses, lorries in Rome go underground Children play in the streets and piazzas (after G. Rodari) I 1./.... ! 1I rill' :-.lory, .1 1111' ',llIdcIIIS if rhey know any stories like this one. Someone in ,Ill .dV\";lVS knows the original story. IIV. 1,,1. rlH' \;[TIc!I'II(S 1'0 work in pairs, bringing old stories back 11111111111 ,lllll, dl,'idil\.I'.ltoW to ll)od('f'llisc' them. ,""11' rill ',llld"II1s 11110 IOllI'S. '1"1)(' p:1irs r('por!. 111"1111" 1111I,lllIlIl.ll willII11l'11l'1)',ill:1I story, scc story (1) Stories and follow-ut).' Problem stories 2.11 Birthorder , Askpeopletotakeapartnerfromanothergroupandcompare '. 'xpenences. Skeleton ()1'1:, Otherstoriesinthisbookwhicharesuitableforthisexercise TheBillyGoatsGrlJ \1" Three Pigs andKacuy. Threegoatsinmountainvalley \ i J'NOWLEDGEMENT Welearntthebirth-orderexercisefrom Bridg1e overriver- underbrid(JQ troll- atepeople I Moskowitz, Caring and Sharing in the Foreign Language Goatswantedtoeatgrassotherside- greenerand sweeter !oI",.room, NewburyHouse,1978. Onedaysmallestgoatontobridge,trip-trap,trip-trap Troll'suglyheadappeared 'Who'sthattrip-trappingovermybridge?' 'Onlyme,thelittlestBillyGoatGruff' 'ThenI'mgoingtoeatyouup' 'No,don'teatme,eatmybrother- he'sbiggerandfatter thanme' 'Mmmm,OK, offyougo' Littlestgoatcrossed bridge,begantoeatgrass Nextdaymiddle-sizedgoattrip-trappedontobridge (samesequenceas above,substituting'middle-sized') Biggestgoat-longbeard,sharphorns TRAPTRAPTRAPontobridge 'Who'sthattrap-trappingovermybridge?' Problemstories 'It'sme,thebiggestBillyGoatGruff' 'ThenI'mgoingtoeatyou up' ,'/1'11111 A I 'Ohnoyou'renot' Thetwodoors Biggoatloweredhorns- ran attroll- tossedhiminto river TIlH kingnevercondemnedcr,imjnalstodeath- thisis whathedid: Sincethenbridgesafetocross 1110 crilllindlwasled intoan arenawith2 doors /lIJllirHI ollea ravenoustiger thoothJr 'beautiful girl Inclass 11,1 111.111 did'101 kr owwhichdoorwaswhich 1 Tellthestory. 11.,d IIIdlllCi . O I)'ltenormarrythegirl 2 Askwhoare: 1111'. W,I', 1.111 JJl.1II'H f It:in hisownhands a) only children 1.111 ,Ii"dd,lllqlllol b) firstborns ',Ill ",11111 IIlV(' wHir p'lll" c) lastborns 11,111111111', yllllfl d) between-borns hi """,1111' I" Ill' " I<ll1q ,11111 r/:III!lhtl?f Askthestudentstosplitlipilltotheirhirrh-ord('J'",141111'" :lIld 1', ",I '.'. I""Wwill, I1 01 I'"1Wol', wll" 11 what it'slikeb lirslhnl"lI,!:IstbOII\,('I' VVII.l\ I'J/I.t! did',1'1- '111/1'111" I"Vl'lt Stories and follow-ut).' Problem stories 2.11 Birthorder , Askpeopletotakeapartnerfromanothergroupandcompare '. 'xpenences. Skeleton ()1'1:, Otherstoriesinthisbookwhicharesuitableforthisexercise TheBillyGoatsGrlJ \1" Three Pigs andKacuy. Threegoatsinmountainvalley \ i J'NOWLEDGEMENT Welearntthebirth-orderexercisefrom Bridg1e overriver- underbrid(JQ troll- atepeople I Moskowitz, Caring and Sharing in the Foreign Language Goatswantedtoeatgrassotherside- greenerand sweeter !oI",.room, NewburyHouse,1978. Onedaysmallestgoatontobridge,trip-trap,trip-trap Troll'suglyheadappeared 'Who'sthattrip-trappingovermybridge?' 'Onlyme,thelittlestBillyGoatGruff' 'ThenI'mgoingtoeatyouup' 'No,don'teatme,eatmybrother- he'sbiggerandfatter thanme' 'Mmmm,OK, offyougo' Littlestgoatcrossed bridge,begantoeatgrass Nextdaymiddle-sizedgoattrip-trappedontobridge (samesequenceas above,substituting'middle-sized') Biggestgoat-longbeard,sharphorns TRAPTRAPTRAPontobridge 'Who'sthattrap-trappingovermybridge?' Problemstories 'It'sme,thebiggestBillyGoatGruff' 'ThenI'mgoingtoeatyou up' ,'/1'11111 A I 'Ohnoyou'renot' Thetwodoors Biggoatloweredhorns- ran attroll- tossedhiminto river TIlH kingnevercondemnedcr,imjnalstodeath- thisis whathedid: Sincethenbridgesafetocross 1110 crilllindlwasled intoan arenawith2 doors /lIJllirHI ollea ravenoustiger thoothJr 'beautiful girl Inclass 11,1 111.111 did'101 kr owwhichdoorwaswhich 1 Tellthestory. 11.,d IIIdlllCi . O I)'ltenormarrythegirl 2 Askwhoare: 1111'. W,I', 1.111 JJl.1II'H f It:in hisownhands a) only children 1.111 ,Ii"dd,lllqlllol b) firstborns ',Ill ",11111 IIlV(' wHir p'lll" c) lastborns 11,111111111', yllllfl d) between-borns hi """,1111' I" Ill' " I<ll1q ,11111 r/:III!lhtl?f Askthestudentstosplitlipilltotheirhirrh-ord('J'",141111'" :lIld 1', ",I '.'. I""Wwill, I1 01 I'"1Wol', wll" 11 what it'slikeb lirslhnl"lI,!:IstbOII\,('I' VVII.l\ I'J/I.t! did',1'1- '111/1'111" I"Vl'lt Stories and follow-UIJS Skeleton B Unexpected Monday: Teachersaysshewillsprinutotallyunexpectedtestany daybetween nowand Friday Studentssaythisis impossible: IftestnotgivenbyThursday,thenFridayitwillbe expected Iftestnotgiven byWednesday,onsubsequentdaysitwill beexpected,etc. Therefore,nowayshecan springunexpected test Thursday: Testcomes Whowas right? (afterWatzlawick) In class 1 Telloneofthestories. 2 Askthestudents,workingindividually,toconsiderpossible solutionsto theproblem. 3 Askthestudentstofind apartneranddiscusstheirproposals. 2.13 A serial story Skeleton Thesignofthebrokensword Dayone Wheredoesawisemanhideapebble?Onthebeach GeneralStClare:successful soldier,hadwonmanybattles Olivierwasagreatleaderandagreatgeneral StClareattacked Olivier'sgreatarmywithtinyforce Hismenoutnumbered,manykilled, resttaken prisoner Allthensetfree. Olivierfamousforhonourand chivalry But StClarefoundhangp.d ontree- broke:n ',WillI I11111fHI neck Whyt A serial story Day two Wheredoesawiseman hidealeaf? Intheforest StClare hadcommitted manycrimesin hislife Secretlyhehadraped,tortured,pillaged Hisdoctorknewthis; blackmailedhim TogetmoneyStClaresoldsecretstoenemy Hisaidediscoveredthis - threatenedtoexposehim StClaredrove swordintoaide'sbody- pointsnappedoff Wheretohidethebroken sword? Wheretohidethebody? StClare attackedOlivier'sgreatarmywithtinyforce Menoutnumbered,manykilled, resttakenprisoner Allthensetfree But AlonewithStClaresurvivorsguesstruth Hang himfromtree- broken sword roundneck Wheredoesawiseman hideapebble?Onthebeach (afterG.K. Chesterton,The Innocence of Father Brown) II1 , 1,1:;"; 1 / ,1\ lllll') Tell the firstpanofthestory. 1 / ,1\' 1\..... 0) Ask theclass togetintosmallgroups.Askeachgroup , Willk11111 ;Ill explanation andcontinuationofthestory. I l.1 I, group10 appoint';1storyteller,whowillthentell hisor III I /'.I'"IJl\vcrsiOll ofthestoryto thewholeclass. I"I ,1\ h"tlllylcllt-rtoIl'lI his orher group'sversion to therest. I I 11 rill' ',I' 1111 d 1':1rt (,I' d1L' storyin theversiongivenintheskeleton J \ I Il' \':\1I J ,\ I11) " I [Ill., .1.III1I.II.1hll!<ll",1 tlf ',111111'111 ',lmYlL'llillg(Daytwo,2) is high, ,,1'"11 1'''11111111 11', \1',11 \'I',,iellJ. I, 't ,,10111.11111 ' "11111 ,., i',lIIll IIIlilt' Wllllll'd:lssIt,ll it to :111y "i1'I' d.1l Ill" I" 11.1 Ill!,. ,Ill'"1111\ ,11, I11 I1 \ I" I ",11'1'","1111/', \'11111 ""I',illll,I', lilt",llln'(I' Stories and fulloUJ-1f I),' FURTHERWORK Onct' lilt' )',It 11q' I', 1,lllLll';l!"with the methodused above, it maybedevelopt.:d InliLt! Will I( texts,evenofnovel length, byspreadingthetelliJlg11\;\'1' ,1 111111111('1' ofdays. 2.14 Storytopicture Before class Chooseananecdoteabout yourselfIh;11 f()('lIsst's rhelistener's imaginationona singlescene. We OIlC: I was9 Earlymorning - a fourth floor hotel room in Genoa Parentsnotaround Wenttowindow,looked down Headsandhatsscurryingtowork I spat: hit a baldone [)rewback- fear,thriJlI, guilt Peepedoutagain Spat Again... again... I feltfearuntil we left In class 1 Telltheclassyouranecdote. 2 Askthemto drawthesceneyouevoked,ora previousorlater scenein thestory. 3 Askthem tocomparedrawingsinsmall groups. 4 Ashomework,askthemtoprepareto tellanecdotesaboutthem- selves. Explainthattheseshould be one-sceneanecdotes. In the next class S Getthosewhohaveanecdotes readytotell them toa smallgroup. 6 Asktbehstenerstodrawthescenesevoked. Lctthetellers andlistentoeachother'sstorieswhile rhis is goingon. 7 Usingthedrawings ()s () centrepoint,askthestudentswhowere listeningtotell thestoriesthey have learnttootherswhoh()vG not yetheard them. tion 3 Retelling Parallelstories , "/r'fOIl A Seguin'sgoat MrSeguin.Iived atfoot ofmountains He had hadsixgoats: eachhadjumpedoverfence round field and run into mountains [,Jeh eatenbywolf WhitewasSeguin'sseventhgoat Icthered herin field At firstshewas happy- he movedstake round- ..liwaysfresh grass H,Q milked her ,uldheraboutothersix: howsixth foughtall nightbutstill
I w(H-)ks laterWhitebecamerestless l'lillt-)d 011 rope- kicked at milkingtime :;()llllill nskerJ why '1l1dtu lhis Iwanttogoupintothehigh mountains' Ill:II)(;/wtl Iw!in shed 1/,11 Iflllflott nwindowatbackopen WIIIII'II!oIIl1 llut upintohigh mountains /\,1,' t 11 W !I clr;:mkhornstreams,ju mpedfrom rocktorock 1111' ".1nl, IH!;IIc1I1( wlinH ill mountainsabove her 'd11' 1101' II;IWi,y l:llLi!ej fiO 110 further- precipicebehind 1"'1 (,"", w1dll'1. y,,i1wlll1 ;dlllighl .,Ill r l'f,1i"lldI.'11 ''-11111' "i 11 lJuill huttedandstamped_ I" pi\J 011"f f ,I 'litI WII'!I'''",.,", .. 11 I" 111'1 .111 IWI,III.IIIII1',1 Retelling Skeleton B The cat that walk I by itself Once upon a time all allilll.Jis together in forest: lion, tiger etc, and cow, dog, gOClt, Crlt - all wild Man lives with Woman and Baby in cave - outside forest One day dog hungry - nQthinn to eat in forest - goes hunting outside Comes to Man's cave - smell of meat - warmth of fire Dog sniffs, comes closer 'Do you want something to eat, Dog?' Dog shy, but comes closer - man repeats question Man tempts Dog with meat, then proposes bargain Man to give Dog food and warmth, Dog to help man hunt etc, Dog agrees Later, same with Cow - milk etc. Later, same with Sheep / Goat etc. Very much later, Cat very, very hungry and thin, comes along Cat sneaks into cave, Man absent, looks for mice, curls up nearfire, plays with Baby Man comes back - very angry - throws rocks at Cat Cat leaves Later, Woman calls out into darkness 'If you will come around now and again, hunt mice, keep Baby amused, I'll let you have scraps, a little warmth- but if Man is angry he will throw rocks at you' Cat agrees, (after Kipling, Just So Stories) Before class Tell one of the stories to a tape-recorder. As you tell imagine you have a real aud.ience, as you would have to do if you were making a radio recording for transmission. Prepare to tell the other story 'live' Parallel stories 11 I I, I:" Ilgg two ways of tunning this exercise. IIII lANGUAGE LABORATORY " 1111 (JIlt the story yOll have taped to half the booths. Half the 11,1"llts listen to this in their own time. In the meantime you l'II',IL!;lst the other story to the other half of the group. .1 I Ill; 'srudcnts if they want to listen again. As soon as some of 1I J, I11 ,\ I'e ready them to take off their headphones and pair off iI, ',(II(Jcnts who listened to the other storv. Thev tell each other , I 11 ',I () I'll'S. ' I 11 I I!\SSR OOM I 11.11 f I he cbss to listen to the tape you have made. Make sure "'1' I,d d1('1l1 call work the machine. I 11, Ihe' 1I1ht:r half of the group to another room, into a corridor , '11'11'1'11 'r"CC and tell them the other story, I' 1111'. IIll'St' sllldents back and ask them to pair off with members 101 11" ',1111'1' group. The partners tell their respective stories. I1 \1111 ,,,ish to gmerate discussion after the telling around IJlld,lI'Illl'S \'011 could brainstorm a theme word such as 'lI,r,':lliij 1 fl/"/I'" ell' J )011I lsticatio!'1 or Freedom prior to the listening '1111"" <,I"rie':,; ;1 W"ly of doing this tS to ask students to 11" rJ' ',1 l! 1111)' 1h;11 COli1CS in to their heads on hearing the ""I lj',.II:;siol1 of the dmwings then naturally provides a 1 1 !'"11 Illl di'7(ll.s"ioJl of the theme, 'I ',1111< 111\, S(lIril';; IIOS('11 for this exercise should be I, ,11,,, I III illllllW" ,IS ,dlll\'(', or ill slIpcrtici:ll cOlltent. The I", 11' III.I} t',i\(' ;111 it/L'a of Ihe rallge. 11 I" 111/ ' ,11,,11"1 wiill i11l' Ir,t.liliolla] C;oldilocks story (sce I" tllII'! t (',-11 I' Retelling Theymakeporrid!Jl: '11) (lilt forwalkwhileItcools Littleoldwoman 10 ge Shelooksthrough1,11e; kllyhull'! Sheliftsthelatch Notniceoldwoman didll'tknock Threebowlsofporridgeuntllble- shetastesthem big bowltoohot- she badword middlebowltoocold- says badword littlebowljustright,eatsitall,notenough- shesaysbad word Threechairs- shetriesthem bigchairtoohard- badword middlechairtoosoft- badword littlechairright- sits,breaksit- badword Threebeds samething fallsasleep insmallest Bearsreturn See bowls,see chairs,see beds,seeoldwoman Shewakes- jumpsoutofwindow Whathappenedto her? broke neck? lostinforest? Arreste asvagrant? Bears never sawheragain (afterRobertSouthey) (b) Tell'Theriver'p.l2(inparallelwith'Twofriends' (3.2). (c) Divideyourclass intotwo,threeorfourgroups,thentelltwoor moreofthefollowinginparallel: Skeleton A Jesuswasacrosstheriver He heardthatLazaruswas ill Hewaitedtwodays,then returnedtoBethany Lazaruswasdead He foundthehousefullofpeople 'Ifyouhadbeen herehewouldn'thave died'saidMartha TheysentforLazarus'sand Martha'ssisterMary 'Ifyouhadbeen herehewouldn'theWO dj""" Id Mary .JII 'IH; rli'f!n', kllnwwll 11 tndn I I Parallel stories Andsomesaid 'You madetheblindsee,whydidn'tyousave Lazarus?' JesuswenttoLazarus'grave Asked peopletoremove thestone Called 'Lazarus,comeforth[' Thedeadmanwalkedoutofhisgrave (St John's Gospel) Hecamestillwrappedin graveclothes Staggered,blinkedinthelight He stank fleopleshrankfrom him led himhome Wi;lshed him Hc;) stillstank Sistersgaveafeastforhim came Tllllsrncll gotworse I','pp!/-) 1I nabletolookathisface Nu spoketohim 11,: Idltileroom 111111 !fi1fden MlllHllinllt,fresh air I "Xl rJlo/llillg Mart/lafound him 11.111 ",11 on tree (,lIlt:1 11,,":; I uilmr, AllJumente fur Lazarus) I'f l I 'IIIIIH.I"I"I, I,1.,.1/11:, W I' ',lll"'!1dthomenewscame: 1"11.1 "I/"',ld"III JI1III' .l'It III ,11 ,M.lIl"",,,,,"ill1101 ,11'" ,,/',,111111 11" I I"I I I1I 1111 I, I, Retelling Lazarus Doesn'tfeel well Cold outside: afraid WL:l achill hasn'tfelttoogood , '" sincehewas,,' 'soill' 'Lazarus,comewith us' 'I will."only". I'mso afraidofdyingagain' (after KarekCapek, Lazarus,Apocryphal Stories) Skeleton D JesuslookedatLazarus LazaruslookedatJesus Bothsmiled Lazaruswenthome Threemonthslaterhe wasmarried Jesusstayedbythegraveforafewminutes SpokeaboutGodand eternity Then left,backacrosstheJordan LazaruswasinJerusalemwhenJesuscrucified thenewscame: Jesus'graveempty Laza ru s we nttosee He lookedintotheemptygrave Andthelightwentoutin hiseyes (afterDavid Kossoff, The Book of Witnesses) BothCapekandKossoffare goodsourcesforvariantstories.Inthe areaoftraditionalfairystories,werecommendIonaandPeterOpie, The Classic Fairy Tales, OUP1974andBrunoBettelheim,The Uses of Enchantment, Penguin 1978. Storymaking and retelling Story-making and retelling Two friends During wartwofriends meetin street BeforetheyusedtofishtogethereverySunday Nowwarhasstoppedthis- battleveryclose Theydrinkin cafe- decidetogofishing Collecttackle- walkintocountrythroughownlines Persuadeofficertoletthemthroughinto no-man'sland Acrosstherivertheenemy Gunsstart'up- theyignorethem,begintofish Theyfish,theytalk,theyfish Mensurroundthem- theenemy 'Whatisthepassword?' Theydon'tknow heyshakehands- areshot 'nemyofficerhas fish cookedforhissupper (uftorGuyde Maupassant) I 'w"I,I.rclSl' fro!1l the story,e.g. friends no-man'sland IHT'ill:ldl' Sunday officer Fairy stories in the news Retelling rothers cleare of NOTE WhenpreparingyOIJl" nWIl wo!d roses,you shouldbe carefultochoosewordsthat,Ire 11("ltlll']' loo generalto glVe a thestory,nortOospecific: 'keywords'tend to robtheexerClseofitS urder variety. 'd f f cl Two brothers who killed their sister's husband in a knife Bysettingthewordsina 'rose' yon the1 ea 0 a lxe, fight were found not guilty of his murder at Huddersfield sequenceofideas,andallowthe thell1es ufthestorytobeseen1I1 Crown Court yesterday after the prosecution withdrew all greaterclarity, charges, Peter Finnist?n, 19, Ibody in then:, He was strange Cl corporal In the Pnnce of that way,' saId Mrs Barber. Wales Regiment, and his Later, when her husband 3.3 Fairystoriesinthenews hrotherLewis Finniston, 23, a retumed and found the key guard, had acted in missing, Mrs Barber told him Ihe only way they could to de- what she had done, 'He Skeleton fend their sister, said the picked up the kitchen knife judge. and came at me like a mad Bluebeard instructing the jury to find thing. If my brothers hadn't Ugly man,bluebeard- rich castle Ihe defendants not guilty, Mr arrived, he'd have done me Hasalreadyhadsevenwives \ Justice Holmroyd said that in,' hut for their intervention Mrs Giving evidence, Mr Peter Marriesa young JlIli\!. Barber, 19, of Halt Finniston described how he Onemonth later . Manor Farm, Woodley, would had been home on leave from Giveswifeall his keys- shemayuseall exceptlittlekey ll.sslll'edly have been killed by the Army, and had decided to Thisopensroomintower ,I wr husband. ride over to Woodley to visit He leaveson business- sheexploresthe the court was told his sister. Opensroom in tower- blood,heads,bodiesofseven how Mrs Barber had married 'We heard the screams as 111(".t1 farmer Jacob 'Bluey' we came into the yard. When wives 11.111)('1, il widower of 53, 'out we got to the back door we Terrified- dropskey, picksitup,locksdoor "f (I il'llllship' in July last year. saw Bluey bending over Julie Keycoveredin blood- will notwashoff '11.' was Cl qui t, gentle man,' with a knife in his hand. ] Bluebeardback: shegiveshim all keysexceptbloodyone '.. lid l\1rs narblT, 'and ] kicked down the door and Ill" wOllld take care of grabbed him while Lewis tried 'Whereis it?' Ill" .lfl,', Ill\' f;llhvr died.' to get the knife off him. Shetellshim 1111 till" .Ifl('rno()1I of the Somehow the knife must have 'Thenyoumustdie.' 1'1111 {), lobL'l, Mrs Barlwr was gone into him.' Shebegs15minutestopray ,oI"llC" III Ill' IltlllSL' whilt: her Superintendant Roderick Callstosisterstandingonbattlements 11I1')1.111l1 W;\S oul Oil the C..rimstone, ofWest Yorkshire 7' 'Anne,sisterAnne,whatdoyousee". , 11''''''', 'IlllIulillj( 11]1 slray I'lllice, refused to comment to 'Onlythegreengrassandthesunshining . 11' "1' n.-porters about persistent ru- '.11l dl"ld,d ICI lIlt, l11()urs in the district that hu- 'Anne,sisterAnne,.,. ' Ill" "I I I., I /111 l'C'llllII' 111;,11 ITmaills had been found 'Onlythegreengrass...' 111110111011',.' ,Ilid l""h IIIl' l,,'v ill till' dttic of Holt Manor 'Anne sisterAnne,... ' 1,,'"1 I 1111" II1 11\1" 1,11,IIl'11 ]0'.11111. '\\1(' dn' still making 'A ofdustfar awayin thedistance' III ,dw,,\' h"pl Ill, .1111l', "'1l11111W into Ill(' III;lI\for,' he 'Anne,sisterAnne,... ' I I L. ,I "1111 \"1'010111'1 1.'1 11" '..11.1 'I seetwohorsernencoming' 0111111"'1111/1'1 /,',1 011,1",/ 'I I I;: ,) Ilr!1 kiIII\IIII!II1,lld Retelling Fairy stories in the news Before class The state of mind of a Preparesufficientcopies oftill' itl'm for onequarterofthe class. mouse In class 1 Dividetheclass into twogroups. 2 Askthestudentsinonegroupto forlll p:1irs. 3 Toeachpair,giveonecopyofthenewspaperarticle. (Students co-operatemorecloselywhenworkingfrom thesamecopy.) 4 Askeachpairtolistona pieceofpaperthemainfact11al itemsin thearticle. S Taketheothergroupawaytoa quietplaceandtellthem thestory oudinedintheskeleton. 6Askthestudentsinthisgrouptoform pairs, andtoworkoutin eachpairhowtotell thestoryto thestudentswho havenotheard thestory. 7 Bringtheclass backtogetherandaskeachstudenttoteam upwicll onefrom theothergroup. 8 Askthestudentsineachnewpairtoexchangestoriesandfacts. VARIATION Analternativewayto usethismaterialis to treatthe articleasa norma] comprehensionpassage- useanymethodof presentingthepassagethatiswithintheirexpectations.Don'ttell themthatthearticleis onlya simulatedpiece. Thenasktheclass,insmallgroups, todiscussthearticletofind outifitremindsthemofanytraditionalstorytheyhavereador heard. Finally,tellthemhowthearticlewas composed- and tell the story. As a furtherexercise,in alatermeeting, theclassmight liketo composetheirown'newspaperitems' fromtraditionalstories. CHOICE OF STORIES/ARTICLES Ifyouwishtocreateyourown materials,you canworkeitherfromstory to article,ortheotherwa round.In the followingexample,wetooka newspaperarticleand produceda storyfromit: .11 Bloxwich pet-shop owner mouse, unharmed, after about Gurmit Singh walked free five minutes, from Walsall Magistrates' Local vet Peter Barnwell Court yesterday because two said that in his opiniop the veterinary surgeons could not mouse would have been ter- agTee Over a mouse's state of rified at the very sight of the mind. snake, and should have been Mr Singh, 53, a dealer in removed 'after at most two rare animals for over minutes', view twenty but his was years, had been brought to contested by Dr WaIter l:c>urt by the RSPCA for Barnes, senior lecturer in vet. iJlllj'cting unnecessary suffer- erinary medicine at Aston ing on the mOUse by puttingit University: 'Ifthe mouse had in a python's cage. been terrified, it would have Ile explained to the court made frantic attempts to es- Ihat he had been very worried cape, which it did not.' abuut thc python's state of The python later died. h alth. Ithad refused all food I t}j over a week, and had even ! :Ilkd to respond when a dead IIlOuse was put in the cage. In d 'spt:ration, he said, his 0111\[ lIt'l hac! tried to tempt rill" '11':Lt1Ife's appetite with a 11\" Whl'lI this also 11I1lll"ll, 01111101 to bl' to its lik- 111.', ,,11l' had removed the 1I JI' !lyt 11Oil It,ll111111' 1101111 Iivl)l! ill p.liJl:(J in Bokhara 11, 11 I I I ""lit:! '. c:.lllfld I,iirlh. tanksofexoticfish '11 'I I' .III 1111/1\ 1o"II.IIIIII1I1I.!.lIl"jlll l ll w,/r (.fl1t1 I, ''1' 1"1111 liT r, 1IIIId"llIlI! hid from 1'''11 I I .1111 11 11111". '.'1111" '.11.111 IIW' 1,,1 ,'lor'lll I p/ , i In old clothes Retelling One morning pedlarcametogate Laid beautiful boxbeforemerchant Inside- blue,green,goldcoils- pythonwith unblinking eyes Merchantaskedprice- pedlarvanished Merchantbuiltpythongoldandivorycage Gavepythonspecialservanttoservehim choicestfood Merchantcaressedcoolcoils Aftera weekmerchantnoticedsnake'scolourslessbright Dismissedservant- preparedpython'sfood himself Snakewould noteat- motionless Daughterfoundfatherweeping- took pythontoherroo Laid it in wardrobeon hersilkenclothes- it waslightnow Oneofherpetmicedied- gaveit to python- noreaction Offered himlive mouse Mouseparalysedwithfear Pythonstirred,raised head,eyedshivering mouse Shuddered- collapsed- died Enterfather- mousesniffedpython- jumpedoverhis coils Fathertold daughterto pack bags Toldstewardto sell animals,house- divide money amongservants FatheranddaughterwalkedoutofcityofBokhara 3,4 In old clothes Before class Getholdofa differentEnglishlanguagenewspaperfor eachstudent or use a classsetofoneormoreEFLcollectionsofnewspaper articles (e.g. JaniceAbbott, Meet the Press, CUP 1981). In class 1 Giveoutthenewspapersorbooksofarticlesandaskthestudeni ashomework,toselectthesaddest articletheycan find. Tellthe! to cometothelJcxt chssr':ldytotell :,110!11('1' IWI.1l1l i11l' c:onlclI of 11)(' ;\I'I;dt :llId wllv tl1I'Y /IIH1 il ~ I d I flu' next class I' I11 1he studentsandaskthem totelleachothertheirstories, and 1,), tllq findthemsad. I I hem toexchangearticleswiththeirpartners.Thenaskeach ,'111"111 togorhroughhisorherpartner'sarticle,andtowrite I. 1\\'11 thelive mostimportantwordsinit,ona sheetofpaper. I1 till' members ofeachpairtohandtheirsheetsofpapertothe ''''IldH'l'S of anotherpair. 1.111ht studentstoprepare,as homework,totell a storyinthe I I11 ic 111:11 'Onceupona time... ' fairy-tale manner, usingthefive I q ,I,. I hq. ha v'e beengivenaskeywordsintheirstories. \ "111111(' d ~ \ s s in fours, sothateachgroupoffour containsthe ,,"1('1', of I he originalpairsinvolvedinstep4 above. I . 11.11 11I1'mhCl' ofthegroupsinturntotellhisorherfairy tale. Ill, I 1,1111 1I,Iling thememberwhooriginallywrotethekeywords .,",d.1 '.lllll111;\risethearticletheyweretakenfrom. I I' I I11S1I';l(.1 of askingstudentstopickthesaddestarticle, 111'".IIClos' themoststupid,themostimportant,ortheleast ., or .\. ,11 tIc 1(', l'1e. Theideashouldalwaysbetogetthem 111 .1" h.1 \\';1 th;lt theyarepersonallyinvolved andaware. I I I It,11111 N'I Wl' Ie'unttheideaofemotionalselection '.1110'> M;\l/,lll. BeforeI-..".... n... Section4 4.1 Grammarpractice Ifvou areinvolvedinstructurete,lching, whetherstraightorcloake in"notions',andwish tomovebeyondl11t'ch::ll1ical drillingyoumlgh wanttotry this exercise: Examplestructure X \ Ibeen -ingY (presentperfectcontinuous) Skeleton Goldilocks Little girl goesforwalkin woods- motherwarns her t Comestohousein clearing,knocks- noanswer- goesIn Triesthreechairs Big onetoohard,middleoneratherhard,littleonejustrig Breaksleg oflittlechair Triesthreebowlsofporridge Big onetoo hot, middleoneratherhot, littleonejustright Eats porridgeall up Tired- goesupstairs- triesthreebeds Firstonetoobig, middleoneratherbig, little onejustrigh Goestosleep House belongstothreebears- theytrampbackthrough forest In turn,Father,Motherand BabyBearlookattheirchairs 'Who'sbeen sittingon mychair?' BabyBearadds: ' ... andwho'sbroken it?' Theylookatbowlsandsay, in turn 'Who's beeneatingmy porridge?' B;:l!Jy B ilr ,IIH\ wl1n':. ,!;I\"1111 .11 '11'" Grammarpractice Theygo upstairsandlookatbeds 'Who's beensleepingin my bed?' BabyBearadds: ' ..,andwho'sstill sleepingtherenow?' Goldilockswakes,jumpsup,outofwindowand home I 1'" '.('111 ;lnddrillotpractisethepresentperfectcontinuousinyour 111"111;11 way.Leadintoa situationin whichonestudentcan "tll,I iL';dly' saytotheclass: 'Who's beensittingonmychairI I11', 'hook?'Getpeopleeatingeach other'ssweets, biscuits etc, '")'1CldIICC a situationfor: 'Who'sbeen eatingmychocolateI I "Ill' .... idly-babies.' , 1I I Ill' ory::ll1d getthe classtochorusthe'Who'sbeen.. ' bits. A 11 ',1111111 is tosplittheclassintothreegroupsandallotFather I'.. I, '" \,.Irt to oncgroup,Mothet'sto thenextandBaby Bear'sto I" 1.)'.1 Theycanbeaskedtochorus indeep, normaland '1'1, ,,I \' voices. III I .II{lICTllRES, OTHER STORIES Plentyofstories use I. ,,'1"'111iOIl ofsequencesorsentencesas anessential device. q " I 1,.1111\'11hr gra mmarstructurewill naturallyoccuraspartof 11111111, 1I11' n:pL'titiol1.beingcentralto thestory,andpleasur- I .I,>IIo c .I,l'!o\o\';\reofthissorr: " I ,.,j I,ll",'wi"hes 11 L III witl. neithorrich I11 V Iliql1hours richerthanthey '11111,01111111\' wiull(!;. .' wife I I 111111'1" (.'11" wh;lles- goes I, 11 1 ," I'' 11" -1"1..1,,..111)1' \/..,111," Id. 11' 1,l.ly Re("ore ]he,!!,;"'" 4.2 Theme sentences NextmOll111111 11, II,d,1 ,. Says 'I wi:;11111 "I., ,,! Yardoft)l"ck I'lldolll1'1 ' HusbandfuriUII'. 'I wishitwollld,.tll f 1" ''I'''' Itdoes- shetrln.1(11'11111 1 ,'11 'IwishitwereYUIII" Itgoes Theyrealisewhatlln:.lloI)'I' III ,I 1]' II , + infinitive won t Skeleton Thethreelittlepigs Amotherpig andthreelittlepigs Shesendsthemouttobuildtheirownboil'.,,,. llilt mind thewolf! Firstpig begsstrawoffafarmer- buildsIlClil:":ut straw Secondpig ... sticksfromwoodman Thirdpig ... bricksfrombuilder Wolfcomestofirstpig'shouse 'Littlepig,littlepig,letmein' 'No,bythehairon mychinnychinchin, Iwon'tletyou in' 'ThenI'll huffand I'llpuffandI'll blowthehousedown' Andhedoes,and eatsthefirstlittlepig Secondpig- same Thirdpig- same, butwolfcannot Hegetsangry,triestocomedownchimney Third pig is waitingwith potofboilingwater Endofwolf Skeleton BrontshaTheSilent Brontshadiedsilentandunremembered ButinHeaventheyknewofhimandwaited Histrialwaspreparedin GreatHallofHeaven Brontshaarrived.Defendingangel stoodtospeak: 'Onearth Brontshanevercomplained Circumcisingknifeslipped- hedidnotcryout Motherdiedwhenhewaseight- hesaid nothing Stepmothergavehimmouldybread- herselfdrankcoffee withcream Fathermadehimchopwood barefootinsnow Brontshanevercomplained Wenttocity- foundworkas porter Bosssaid 'I'll payyounextmonth'- didn't- Brontsha showednoanger Married- wiferan off- Brontshabroughtupchild When40 Brontsharun overbyrich man'scarriage In hospitalfullofgroaningpeoplehedidnotgroan.He died Noonesad - 10peoplewaitedforhisbed,50forhisplace inthemortuary Prosecutingangelstoodtospeak: Wordsdriedonhistongue,hesatdown Judgewelcomed BrontshatoHeaven: 'Whatrewarddoyouwant- youcan haveanything' Brontshasaid: 'YourWorship,could Ihave,each morning,ahotroll with butterformybreakfast?' Judgeandangelsbowedtheirheads 1,,-lY Wllreashamedtohavecreatedsuch meeknesson ,'.11111 Before I begin... Before class Puteachofthefollowingsl'IIII'IIlI' '0)1 '1 , ']'>11 wil.l need a setofcardsforevery four licl.-111 Thepoorproducetherich Beggarscan'tbechoosers Heavenis tomorrow Angerbegetsmeekness In class 1 Groupthestudentsin fours. 2 GiveeachgroupthefirstsentencecaI'd. 3 Askthestudentstodiscuss the cd 1111' ',llill'llII' it stands.Whendiscussionrunslowon ,]'.1' 1111'111 III reversethe underlinedpartsofthesentence,as 'TheIit11 I" C IdIII c' I thenaskthemtodiscuss thereversed s ntcrl'l'. 4 Thengiveoutthesecondsentencecardalld flop!':tl. puttingthe sentencesoncards,youcanfeed innewthCllll:S :llld wheneach groupis ready, 5 Tellthestory. CHOICE OF SENTENCES FOR REVERSAL To k::ld ill1"0 a given storythesentencesneedto be broadlyrelatedtorhed1l'Jlic(s) ofthe story,andsemanticallyandgrammaticallyreversihle. 'lheyshould besimple. Sayingsandproverbsarepowerfulmaterial forthiskind ofexercise. VARIATI0 NS Furtherexamplesofthisstyleofexercisecanbe foundinFrank,Rinvolucri,andBerer, Challenge to think, OUP 1982. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Wefirstmetthe teversalideain the writingofEdwardde Bono, butwesuspectitmayhaveanolder history. I: A picture starter 4.3 A picture starter Skeleton Gelert A man hadafavourite dog,Gelert Dog devotedto man and his infantson Dog guardedhousewhenmanaway Onedayhegoes hunting- leavesdogonguard Wolvesattackhouse Dog defendschild- kills onewolf- woundsmany Man returns- bloodeverywhere,cannotfind child ThinksGelerthaskilled his son: kills Gelert Too late- findssonpattingdeadbodyofwolf Before class Prepareto dra w ontheblackboarda pictureofanAlsatianorother (frightening) dog,oraska studenttodoitforyou. In class 1 Putupthepicture(oraskyourstudenttodraw)ontheblackboard. Let thestudentslookatthepictureandaskthemtosharetheir associations, feelings etc. aboutthedog. 2Telltheclass thatyouaregoingtotellthemastoryaboutthe picture- invitethemtospeculateon whatform yourstorywill take. 3 Tell thestOry tothegroup. 4 Allowa few moments'thoughtafteryouhavetoldthestory then invitecommentfrom thegroup. ' NOTE Anotherstorythatlendsitselftothistreatmentis: The pigeon (If ':rrl:-lll, modern housein Montevideo Hl'Il'l!,I,dflC:i.d : ,'Ii" filii" c 1','/, ,",1.,11 first rbll:0 III j I 111.111,.1,1/111111;111111' ill tir',1 I ,'I Before I begin... He sees birdcirdillllllV"illl1,1I1 '1.1i1y 11 I Hl':ordI? Heknows it is hishil d Birdcircles- 1111 .... Ii.WII f'"1l1Io!t Lateafternoon- sun"ll1klll'l Birdhasspecialcylin1kr1111 I. 11 110: 11111',\ cylinderin atimeclocktoprove'filiI TriestolurebirddownInlofl: IHII:, 111111 .. 1h wearswhen feeding birds Rattlesfeedingtins Whistles- nogood Fetchesshotg un Aims Shootsdownbird- grabsit- fmlCl5 intoclock Hisfirstwin- surely Heclutchesbroken bird Breaksdown 'WhathaveIdone?' (afterCarlosMartinezMoreno,'La Palorna') 4.4 Pictu re rose Skeleton The quarryman Thequarryman'sworkwashard- hewasn'thappy Said:'IfIwasrich,Icouldsleepinabedwithsilken curtains' Angelappeared: 'Youare rich' Manwas rich: sleptin bedwithsilkencurtains King cameby- goldcarriage- horsemen infrontand behind Rich man nothappy. He said'Iwanttobe king' Angelappeared: 'Youareking' He was king Sunshonedown- burntupgrass Kingsawsunhlld morepowerthanhim- hewasn-\ happy Picture rose A big blackcloudcame betweensunandearth Sun'srayscouldnotgetthrough- sunwasunhappyetc.... Cloudshutoutthesun- madegrassgreen Cloudpoureddownrainonrock- it madeno impression Cloudwasnothappy... Rockstoodthere- mancamewithpickaxeandshovel Hackedstonefromtherock Rocksaid: 'Thisman is strongerthan I', Rocknothappy 'I wanttobethequarryman' Angel appeared 'Youarethequarryman' He was aquarryman,hackingstonefromtherock Hisworkhard- hewonderedifhewashappy (afterMultatuli,MaxHavelaar) Beforeclass Prepare to draw a number of images suggested by the story (say 4-6 pictures) or arrange for a student to do it for you. Inclass 1 Put up the pictures on the blackboard as shown below, e.g. 1,1 ,,11 Before I begill ... Section 5 Co-operative telling 2 Telltheclass that yCl11 ,Ill' ,.,,111' I.. I 1101(. 'I' , '''I'.IICllllld the picturesoO-the bo,lrd 11" ill I.. I"I filii' "" \\'li,ll torm yourstorywilltake. 3 Tellthestorytothegmllp. 4 Allowafewmoments' tllDlI)',111 .ill'1',"111 h.', ",1.1 b'story,then invitecommentfromtht: 5.1 Co-operative stories in the language lab ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Th:lllk',V,I I I" I Ill" 111,1 r.ll1d('cl1 Sionfor translatingthisstoryoutoftheDrip,IILd 11111.11, Skeleton Theunicorn Thehusbandwokeupand lookedoutofthewindow, Describe the husband Hesawaunicorneating alilyinthegarden, Describe the garden Hewokehiswifeupandtoldhertherewasaunicorninthe gardeneating alily, Shesaid: 'Don'tbesilly,therecan't be;theunicornis amythicalbeast.' Describe the wife Thehusbandwentdowntotakeacloserlookattheunicorn, butithad gone, He satdownonabenchnearthe roses andwenttosleep, He had adream What did he dream? Thewiferang thepsychiatristand thepolice.Shetold themherhusbandwasgoingmad,Sheaskedthemto comequicklywith astraitjacket. Describe the psychiatrist Shetoldthepsychiatrist: 'Myhusbandsaidhesawa unicorninthegardeneating alily.'The psychiatristasked thehusband: 'Didyou see aunicorninthegardeneatinga lily?'Tothisthe husbandreplied; JOf coursenot,the unicornis amythicalbeast.' Finish the story (afterThurberl 'hl' instrlll'li'III';ill ilalic:lretothestudent.) I 1111"1 )'111 Id .\,1 I Ii ." 11,,' ',Ill 1"111 Ill' rnvillll;dll1ll' \.\1111 Ill!' 111'\ 1",11,1'11.111, 11'"'.0,1""1,1'," i"llh 111,1',1"1 .lllil'.ll1c1l"1ll 1101' I,. Before I begill ... 2 Telltheclass that yCl11 ,Ill' ,.,,111' I.. I 1101(. 'I' , '''I'.IICllllld the picturesoO-the bo,lrd 11" ill I.. I"I filii' "" \\'li,ll torm yourstorywilltake. 3 Tellthestorytothegmllp. 4 Allowafewmoments' tllDlI)',111 .ill'1',"111 h.', ",1.1 b'story,then invitecommentfromtht: ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Th:lllk',V,I I I" I Ill" 111,1 r.ll1d('cl1 Sionfor translatingthisstoryoutoftheDrip,IILd 11111.11, Section 5 Co-operative telling 5.1 Co-operative stories in the language lab Skeleton Theunicorn Thehusbandwokeupand lookedoutofthewindow, Describe the husband Hesawaunicorneating alilyinthegarden, Describe the garden Hewokehiswifeupandtoldhertherewasaunicorninthe gardeneating alily, Shesaid: 'Don'tbesilly,therecan't be;theunicornis amythicalbeast.' Describe the wife Thehusbandwentdowntotakeacloserlookattheunicorn, butithad gone, He satdownonabenchnearthe roses andwenttosleep, He had adream What did he dream? Thewiferang thepsychiatristand thepolice.Shetold themherhusbandwasgoingmad,Sheaskedthemto comequicklywith astraitjacket. Describe the psychiatrist Shetoldthepsychiatrist: 'Myhusbandsaidhesawa unicorninthegardeneating alily.'The psychiatristasked thehusband: 'Didyou see aunicorninthegardeneatinga lily?'Tothisthe husbandreplied; JOf coursenot,the unicornis amythicalbeast.' Finish the story (afterThurberl 'hl' instrlll'li'III';ill ilalic:lretothestudent.) I 1111"1 )'111 Id .\,1 I Ii ." 11,,' ',Ill 1"111 Ill' rnvillll;dll1ll' \.\1111 Ill!' 111'\ 1",11,1'11.111, 11'"'.0,1""1,1'," i"llh 111,1',1"1 .lllil'.ll1c1l"1ll 1101' I,. Co-operativetelling In class 1 Explainanywordsin thesk\'k1"11 dl,ll rill' ,h,sis unlikely to know. 2 Putthelabinto'broadcast (Will tIll',IlII',tlk' 1l10dt andexplain thatyouaregoingtotell thelll ;1 :,111I y. I\t n'rt:lill pointsyouwill pauseandaskthem to fill in thedl'l,.llls, 'pC:lkillgOil to theirown tapes. Askthemtosettheirmachill\':.10 In( :ORD. 3 Tellthefirstsectionoftheskeletoll ;t!JllVl' :\IlJ givethemthefirst instruction.Monitorwithearand eyt.:, ,11111 whcll everybody hasfinishedspeakingbreakingently with 'jv1:IY I tell youthenext part?'Thenrepeattheprocess untilrh, ('IIJ of thestory. 4 Askthestudentstowindbacktheirtapes:llld thcn to swap booths.Invitethemtolistento thetapein rhl' Ilew boothandto notedownona pieceofpaperthreelallgll;,ge Illistakes theyspot. S Askthestudentstoswapboothsagain, Itavingtheslipsofpaper. 6 Repeatsteps4 andS. 7 Askthestudentsto returntotheiroriginal boothsanJtolistento theirowntapeswhilenotingthemistakes noteddown by their friends. 8 With earphonesoff; allowtimeforquestionsandcommentson theslips. VARIATlON If youdon'twanttoworkin alab theaboveexercise canalso bedoneinwriting.In thiscase,thestorywill haveto be read: 1 Explainunfamiliarwords. 2 Dictatethefirstsentenceandgivethefirstinstruction.Move roundtheclass helpingandcorrectingasneeded. Thencontinue with thesecondsentence,ete. 3 Attheendoftheexercise,putup thestoriesroundthewallsofthe roomso thatstudentscanreadeachother'swork. NOTES Thebestsortofstoryfor thisexerciseis onethatcaneasily bereducedtofiveorsixsentencesI shortparagraphs.It shouldbe unfamiliartothestudents. Whenpreparingthestoryfor laboratoryuse,makesurethatat leastS<)Il1C ofthedescriptions bystudentsare- ofmorethan just individll:ll char:l tcrs, likt th drc:l1l1 desc;.rip,tiol1 (ahow).TIlt' fnlluwiIll', :.tIII'}' I" ('1\ 11'1 i lie I bI',; Groupstory Two brothers Amotherlefthertwoyoungsonsalone in thehutwhile shewenttomarket. Describe the hut Whenshewasaway, raidersattackedthevillageand carriedthe boysoffintoslavery. Describe the leader of the raiders Theboysaresoldtodifferentmasters, butpromiseeach otherthatwhicheverfindsfreedomfirstwill buytheother. Thefirstsonis lucky; hegetsa goodmasterandlearnsa trade. Eventuallyhebuyshisfreedom. Describe the first brother's master Thesecondis soldto a bad master, He becomesill, andat becomeshisown brother'sslave.His brotherdoesnot recognisehim,andill-treats him. Describe the i//-treatment Theslave makesfriendswith his brother'slittle daughter. Shebrings himfood from herown plate. Hetells herhis story, Tell the story the slave told Thefirst brothernoticeshisdaughterslipping awaytothe slave quarters, Finish the story (after'TheTwoBrothersOteteand More',in Folk Tales and Fables, ed. P, itayemi & P. Gurrey) 5.2 Group story Skeleton The ghost A YOI'llI[.j womanlayondeath bed rIIld 'lId)Hnc! nottotakeotherwomanafterherdeath 11 ill' did, '.'111' Wtlldd comeand haunthim 11" 1"11'1 d.". f.,illtllil fill' tllr':rllo,ntht; 11, rll" I VI '"JllIl. 11,11' In I(lv,:, not flllq. q --- Co-operative telling Everynightwife'sghostblallwd11111' forengagement Toldhimin detail abouthisCOIlVc:t.ationswith sweetheart Ghostdescribedpresentshe nav l : 11 er Young mandesperate . Deci'dedtoconsultsage - sagelivud in mountains Sagesaid'Tel.l yourwifethatif sh<.: answersonequestion youwill breakofftheengagement' Young manaskedwhatthequestionwas 'Takehandfulof beans,askherhoWmanyyou've got' 'H shedoesn'tknowyouwill realisesheis onlyin your head' Next nightyoung mantold ghostshekneweverything abouthim Ghost: 'Yes, Iknowyou visiteda wisemanyesterday' Young man: 'How manybeanshaveIgotin thishand?' ..__....- Therewasno ghostthereto answerthequestion (afterWatzlawick) In class Invite threestudents to comeoutandsit behind you, facing the class.Tell thethreethatwheneveryoustopinthetellingofthestory youwantthemtospeakaboutwhattheycanseeintheirimaginations atthepointreached.Duringthenarrationyoumay feel youwantto replacetheoriginalpanelofthreewithanotherpanel.Intheskeleton abovestoppingplacesaresuggested!butyou shouldbeawarebefore youstarttellingastorywhereyou arelikely towanttostop. 5.3 Dictation Material HYPNOTISE SEVEN ROSES SCHOOLMASTER BACHELOR THROW AWAY MOTIIP..R IMPROVEMENT DEATH SUCCESS ( ~ SI:, SS)( ) N FIJNERAI p.II'rT()NHOI.F I t\ I)F)) I".Y( 1111\'1'1< 1',1 ,ot Dictation In class 1 Dictatethewordsin thelistsinglyandin theordergiven. 2 Appointonememberofthegroupas secretaryandaskhimorherto standattheblackboard. 3 Asktheothermembersofthegrouptoreadoutthewordstheyhave written down and to agree on spellings for each: the secretary shouldwritedowntheagreedspellings,inorder,ontheblackboard. Allowthestudentsto workouttheir versionsbeforeconfirmingor otherwise. 4 Whenthewholelistisontheblackboard,askthestudents,working aloneorinsmallgroups,toconstructastoryfromthelist,following theordergiven. 5 Askthestudentstosharetheirstories. Skeleton Ifyouoryourstudentsfeel theneed fora'definitive'version,youmay liketo use this: The seventh rose Aman,38,schoolmaster,self-contained Motherdies Though hehas notrealised it, veryfond of mother Afterfuneral, breaksdown,cannotcope Teaching,living- all goeswrong Obsession,guilt,compulsivelyta'lks aboutmother HarleySt- seespsychiatrist Psychiatristhypnotiseshim Giveshimsevenroses- tells himtothrowawayoneevery dayfor aweek Eachtimehethrowsawayflower, guiltwillllessen With seventh rose, problemwill havegone Man goes,doesaspsychiatristsays(wethink)- career improves- becomesprofessorat University But In his buttonhole,always,isafaded,weedyflowerstalk (nftor KenWhftmore, The Seventh Rose) ( '11< ) 11 I I 11 ~ J 11/ t \ I SlOrit,;s fonhis<;:xerciSl: should !lJ'I!l'I.d,h I, ''''I''"11111 ,1. 111,1 rid! ill strong'(,Cltl\l'lll-words'. IILlI' \'. (I. ! "tIII111 ,. Co-operative telling VILLAGE EMIGRATE MARRIAGE ABSENCE PREGNANT SHAME ATTACK DESTRUCTION BIRTH DEEP WELL SUICIDE A 'definitive' version of this might run: Skeleton No name woman Village: poverty, emigration Before leaving, young men marry A year after husband left, girl is pregnant Shame When birth due villagers gather Masked figures trample crops, open dykes Kill animals, burn outhouses White masks, lanterns, wild hair Faces stare in at windows She is silent in house Villagers break in, smash everything Smear house with animals' blood As they leave, take oranges and sugar as blessing She goes to pigsty (to deceive gods) Gives birth Feeds baby Goesto well Jumps in with child What bitterness - so to poison the well (after Maxine Hong Kingston, The Woman Warrior) Scene to story 5.4 Scene to story Skeleton The dragon of Nara There once lived priest in Nara - ugly, long nose etc. Everybody made fun of him: Bitter Decides to play practical joke He puts up notice by lake ON MARCH 3 A DRAGON WILL ASCEND FROM THIS LAKE TO HEAVEN Villagers read, rumours spread Fisherman says he saw dragon asleep at bottom of lake Little girl has vision Others dream of dragon's ascension March 1 People begin to drift down to lake March 2 Hundreds of people camped round lake, some from far away March 3 Thousands by lake - priest joins them - they wait, day passes No dragon - priest begins to regret his notice Suddenly: rain, thunder, lightning Dragon ascends Priest is ashamed - confesses No one believes him Before c:lass In[l:I'Il;lli' (0 Ill' '.1'11 \' seqllence, and prepare an initial picture in your mind, Itl) '''"1.1, 1111' lilst picture below. Your aim should be to ('st.t1di'.I, 111" .... 1 "rIlill :lIld hcul'l' in I hI,' group, rather than l"lq'l 11 , 1""'"1, '10 11I1J"""'on t1I('I',I't1I1P. --- Co-operative telling In class 1 Bringthegroupintoahalf-circlerOllnd the blackboard- try throughouttheexercisetomaintainthe hlackboardas thegroup focus, ratherthanyourself. 2 Beginbydrawingastrongcentralimageontheboard,tosetthe scene,e.g. .) "4. -_/
3 Withoutspeaking,invitethegroupto translatewhatthey seeinto words: allowasmanypeople tospeakaswish to.Donotblock anyofthesuggestionsoffered. 4 Add afurtherimagetotheblackboardscene: try tomakethe developmentfitthemoodofthestudents,as expressedinstage3 above,e.g Scene to story 5 Continue still witho k' " b 1 'f h ' lit spea lI1g, tolI1Vlte ver a suggestions ram t e express theseinfurrherdevelopmentofthepicture on e 11 af board.As theexerciseprogresses, thestorywill gra ua y)utld up,bQth onthe boardandin themindsofthe alsC), to agreaterorlesserextentthestotywill epart.romtheskeletongivenabove: thiswilldependbothonthe 0 f tfhe studentsand,in evenlatgermeasure, onthe WI mgness 0 the tea . h" h chertolI1terprett elrWIS es. 6 WhentheStoryha ' k d k' 1 s teachedanaturalconcluslOn,as thestu ents, lr: g on\toPtepareto retellthestoryas they understandit. ,a ceart at arefree to alterorexpandthestoryas they h wls ) spreparatJ()n, the'mumblingexercise'(6.1) may befound usefu. l NOTES TheaimoftL '. . f exerciseIS to encouragetheco-operative 11 ' te lI1g 0 a story - the>-' bl" ' h f 11 d ' ., "'e IS no0 IgatlOn eH erto 0 OW orto epart f rom t h ethe ongmal' . 'd '. If' StoryIme, butratherforthe teachertoprovl e apotentia .ramem wL' b d astory can econstructe . Co-operative telling 5.5 A story from four words In class 1 Askeachstudenttothinkofastory, Allow flllC'(' or fOllr minutes forthis. 2 Pairthestudents and ask themtotdleach01hndwi[' sI lries. Ask them to pickouttwokeywordsfrom each slory. 3 Ask thcpairs to taketheirfour keywords and trollllhe!'it builda newstory. 4 The then form newpairsandtell th"storieshornfrom thefour keywords. EXAMPLE In onepairthegirl toldhowa boy hadshutheranda girl friend intohiscar becausetheywouldn'tgo alongwithwhathe wantedtodo. Hestoodandlaughedasthey frantically triedtoget outofthecar.Finally theywounddownthewindowofthecarand escaped. Themanstudenttoldrhe storyofthetwowomenwhocameto Solomonclaimingtheywere both mothersofthesamebaby. He orderedaservanttosawthebabyintwo.Thisrevealedthe true mother: sheaskedhimtogivethechildtotheotherwomanrather thanseeirdie. Keywords: ESCAPE BABY CAR SAW Aftersomehead-scratchingthispairdecidedthat SAWsymbolised threat. Thegirl thenproducedthis tale: Acouplehadwanteda babyforalongtime. Finallythey hadone. Someweeksafterits birth threateninglettersstartedto arrive, Desperateto keepthebabysafetheyonenightgotintotheircar andescapedto anothertown,leavingeverythingbehindthem. ACKNOWLEDCEMENT Wehaveadaptedthis technique by H. Auge,M.F.Borot,andM. Vielmas,fromIe/.lx pour parler, Ieux pour creer eLEInternational,1981, Three item stories 5.6 Three item stories In class 1 Givethestudentsthesewords: BIRD FIRE Tellthemthesewordsarekeywordsin astoryyouhavein your head. Tell themtheir task is to unearthyourstory by questioningyou. You only answerYes orNo. Onestorybehind thethreeitemsis: [n thedrySouthAfricanVeldfires arefrequently caused when vultures, havinglandedsafelyonoverheadpowerlines, try to take offagatn. Bctn?very heavy birdsthey canonlytakeoffbymighty flappmgoftheIrlongwings.Ifavultureprovidesacontactbetween twohigh tensioncables, itis instantlyelectrocutedandfalls to the gound belowin a ball offlames. Thisoftenstarts majorveldfires. 2 When studentshavehalfreachedyourstory through their queStlOnlOg, stop themandaskthemtoworkin pairs makingupa storythatcouldhave BIRD, METALand FIREas keywords. Tell them to make uptheirstory quitefreely. 3 Ask thestudentsto re-paira coupleoftimes andtell theirstories to eachother. 4 Usuallythey also wantto find outyourstory;if they ask,tell them. EXAMPLES In onegroupthefollowingstorieswereproduced: A Amanwascaughtin a forest fire, Hcwascarryinga goldnugget he hadfound whilepanning. Hehadwithhim a carrierpigeon,so hetied thegold tothelegofthepigeonwhichcarriedhiswealth tosafety. B Adriverofa greattruckfell asleepashedrovethroughthe mountains.Thetruck plungeddowna ravineandburstinto flames, buthe wasthrowntree. , rl'SCl1l'rs foundhimthreedayslaterthey foundhe had diedollli illjlll'iand beeneaten by vultures. (; 1\ p,111l11 111 ,I 11Il'1;d l'agl'saved his owner'slife by shriekingin the llwl,II, ,.I 1111' lI'VIIl WIIl'I) rill'hOl\secaughtfire. Co-operativetelling 5.7 Random story In class 1 Tell theclass thatyou arcalJ g(lingto wlllk 1111 '"Illlles, 2 Takeonestudentoutsideand:Isk hilll orIIl'l'\\'11.111\'11(' ofstoryhe orshewouldliketoworkon.OfferLht' tollowillg wdlclcfined categoriesofstory: Newspapercrimestory Biblestory Storyaboutunemployment Football-starstory Fairystory Letthestudentchooseonecategory. 3 Leavethestudentoutsidethe classroom,whileyOll lell rhe restof thegroupthatheorsheisgoingto trytodiscoverastorythat 'theyhavedecidedon'.In fact theyarenotgoingtodecideonany storybutareinsteadtoanswerYesorNotoquest,ions, <lccording towhethertheyendin a monosyllabicorpolysyllabicword. 4 Bringthestudentbackinto theroom. Tellhimorherthatthe grouphavedecidedona storywithinthecategorychosen,and thatheorsheis to discoverwhatthestoryis by askingyes/no questions. Warnthestudentthattheremay beinconsistenciesas thegroupcouldnotagreeoneverydetail. 5 Whenthequestioninghasgoneonfor five orten minutes askthe group to tellthequestionerwhathasbeen happening. VARIATlONS 1 Insteadoftherulegiven in step 3above,otherrules canbeused, for example: Is thefinal soundofthequestiona vowel orconson- ant?Doesthequestioncontaina particularword (e.g. 'is'or'are'). 2 Insteadofusingstories,theexercisecanbebasedondreams: the personcominginis todiscovera dreamheorshehashad,and which thegroupknows,butwhichheorshehasforgotten. This framecopesbetterwith theinevitableinconsistencies. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Welearntthedream versionfrom Chris Sion.GiseJaMuellerhadthe ideaoftransferringtheideatoa story frame. Picturecomposition 5.8 Picture composition (Inthis itis intendedthattheteachershou1ld function aspart ofthegroup,J.e. thatheorsheshould participatein theactivities.) In class 1 Drawthison the board,inthetopright-handarea: 2 Tellstudentsthatthegroupisgoingto filloutthepictureand developstoriesfromit. 3 Invitestudentsto saywhattheywantto addtothepictureand thenhand themthe boardmarker/chalk andgetthemtodrawin whatthey havesuggested. Addthingsyoufeel youwanttoaddas a groupmember. 4 Stoptheexercisebefore ,thedrawinggetstoocluttered.Askpeople toworklI:dlVlduallyorrn patrstocreatestories. (Withan odd ofst'lldcnrs, you canformpartofapairyourself.) S Wlwfl IS l"('ndy, askpt:opletoform newpairsandtell r111'1I ',1'11 11 ,,.,1',11 11 11111('1". Repeattheprocesstwicemore. I, \ ..\ 1\1111 I Co-operative telling Dictog/oss Thegroupproduced,amongothers,the followingstoriesfrom the picture: A Thethreepeoplein theforeground arefactoryinspectors,who havecometocheckonworkers'complaintsaboutthepollution in thefactory. Theyaresodisgustedthattheyarenowgoingto crossthestreamandhave theirlunch underthetree,awayfrom thefilth, amongthesheep, B Agreatnewfactoryhas been built. Itis in anidealsituation,near a river, rightunderpowerlineswitha roadrunningoutsidethe frontgate. MtsThatcherhascometoopenit, butbecausesheis very unpopularsheis beingsmuggledinto the factory under water,soas toenter bythe backdoor. C Thisfactoryis in Iran andthemiddlechimneydoublesas a minaret, Thepeopl.einthe foregroundhavejustbeensummoned to middayprayer. Suchis theirzealthatthey paynoattentionto theirfellow-worker, whomyoucansee drowningin thepolluted stream to theleft, ACKNOWLEDGEMENT SarahBraineshowedus thepoweroffree picturecomposition. I 5.9 Dictogloss I Stories A Solomon's judgement I I (Twowomenhadquarrelledoverpossessionofababygirl andbroughttheircasetotheking'scourt,) Theking heardtheirtwostoriesoutbeforeordering his servantstosawthebabyin two,which promptedthetrue mothertocryout: 'No,no! Givehertotheotherwoman!' B The forced burgl1ar I (On tleingquestionedbyhiswifeabouthisfrequent .dl',('/Ie ~ from thehouseatnight,Johnthoughtquickly, I f 111111. 11111,,,,:; ~ r l to beingaburglar.) Will 11 Ill',VIlli" 1111:11 sti:lrtecl tonskwhereallthestolen ll'''''' I. 11 W"', fllrced actlliJllytobccornc~ [J1Jrnlarill 1I ." It,, II" I' h 1111' I'VIclc 11 (; I: 11I :; 11 ppllr t Ii I', " tll Iy, 11111 t1, Co-operative telling unabletostandthestrainanyIOnUIII, 11: lotthometolive withhislover,atwhichpointhiswife :,llowuclthe police everythinghe hadstolen. In class 1 Tellthegroupthatyouaregoingtoreada vnyshort storyto . themonceandonceonly,andthattheywill h;tve to reconstruct whatyouhavereadout: they will beallowl'llt o writeduringyour reading,buttherewill not betimefor themtowrixl'everything, i.e. they shouldfocusonkeywordsand thenattempttoreconstruct therestafterwards.Banshorthand. 2 ReadstoryA, oranequivalentsingle-sentence talc.:. Readat medium-slowpace, butnot atdictationspeed. 3 Whenyou havefinished, askt'he studentstoamplifythenotes theyhave made,workingin pairs. (Ifthisis thefirst timethey havedonetheexercise,youmightwishtoreadthestoryagam.) 4 Whenthestudentsworkinginpairsseemtohavegotas far as they can,allowthemtomixandhelponeanother. , 5 Thenappointonestudenttoactas secretary,andaskhImorher towriteup thestoryontheblackboard,takingdictationfromthe restofthegroup. 6 Finally,as acheck,givethetexttooneofthestudents (notthe best)to readtothegroup. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Wetearntthisfromanaccountby Diane FittonofworkdoneatSydneyUniversity by CharlesTaylor.The originalideais tobefoundin anarticle by O. Ilsen in Language Learning 12,4 (1962). Section6 Students'stories 6.1 Mumble,listen,tell Before class Gettoge,ther a wide choice ofstoryskeletonsandlorstories.Ifyou have 20IIItheclassmakesureyouhavc atleast20storiesorskeletons. Makethreeorfourphotocopiesofeachskeleton,sothereis genuinely plentyofchoice. In class 1 Spreadthetextsona flat surface.Askthestudentstotake any storytheywantandgoanywherein theroomtheylike toreadit. Explajnthattheywill be askedtotell eachothertheirstories (not read themaloud), You shouldmoveroundandvery quietlyhelpwithunknown words.Be availableas a whisperingreadingaid. 2 Tellthestudentstheywillbetellingeachothertheirstories but thatfirsttheyshould'mumble'thestorytothemselves, tomake suretheyhavegottheEnglishthewaytheywantit. Agoodway tomumbleIS toshutyoureyes andsay thewordsquietlytoyour- self. 3 Whenthefirststudentshavefinishedmumblingaskthemifthey areready to tell. Doall thisvery quietly,soas notto disturb those s(illpreparing.When,studentsareready, pair themoff, making sureeachpaIrhas a differentstory.Askthemtotelleachother the,irstoriesin lowvoicesorwhispering. Goroundlisteningand wnteupsentencesyouheardgoingwrongontbe blackboard. (It IS bestIf, dunngyourwriting,theblackboardcan beangled away from thegroup.) 4 Whenthefirst pairs finish, c1sk themtosetaboutdecidinghow the)' ''''Old.! ~ O T l c t thesentences. '. Co-operative telling unabletostandthestrainanyIOnUIII, 11: lotthometolive withhislover,atwhichpointhiswife :,llowuclthe police everythinghe hadstolen. In class 1 Tellthegroupthatyouaregoingtoreada vnyshort storyto . themonceandonceonly,andthattheywill h;tve to reconstruct whatyouhavereadout: they will beallowl'llt o writeduringyour reading,buttherewill not betimefor themtowrixl'everything, i.e. they shouldfocusonkeywordsand thenattempttoreconstruct therestafterwards.Banshorthand. 2 ReadstoryA, oranequivalentsingle-sentence talc.:. Readat medium-slowpace, butnot atdictationspeed. 3 Whenyou havefinished, askt'he studentstoamplifythenotes theyhave made,workingin pairs. (Ifthisis thefirst timethey havedonetheexercise,youmightwishtoreadthestoryagam.) 4 Whenthestudentsworkinginpairsseemtohavegotas far as they can,allowthemtomixandhelponeanother. , 5 Thenappointonestudenttoactas secretary,andaskhImorher towriteup thestoryontheblackboard,takingdictationfromthe restofthegroup. 6 Finally,as acheck,givethetexttooneofthestudents (notthe best)to readtothegroup. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Wetearntthisfromanaccountby Diane FittonofworkdoneatSydneyUniversity by CharlesTaylor.The originalideais tobefoundin anarticle by O. Ilsen in Language Learning 12,4 (1962). Section6 Students'stories 6.1 Mumble,listen,tell Before class Gettoge,ther a wide choice ofstoryskeletonsandlorstories.Ifyou have 20IIItheclassmakesureyouhavc atleast20storiesorskeletons. Makethreeorfourphotocopiesofeachskeleton,sothereis genuinely plentyofchoice. In class 1 Spreadthetextsona flat surface.Askthestudentstotake any storytheywantandgoanywherein theroomtheylike toreadit. Explajnthattheywill be askedtotell eachothertheirstories (not read themaloud), You shouldmoveroundandvery quietlyhelpwithunknown words.Be availableas a whisperingreadingaid. 2 Tellthestudentstheywillbetellingeachothertheirstories but thatfirsttheyshould'mumble'thestorytothemselves, tomake suretheyhavegottheEnglishthewaytheywantit. Agoodway tomumbleIS toshutyoureyes andsay thewordsquietlytoyour- self. 3 Whenthefirststudentshavefinishedmumblingaskthemifthey areready to tell. Doall thisvery quietly,soas notto disturb those s(illpreparing.When,studentsareready, pair themoff, making sureeachpaIrhas a differentstory.Askthemtotelleachother the,irstoriesin lowvoicesorwhispering. Goroundlisteningand wnteupsentencesyouheardgoingwrongontbe blackboard. (It IS bestIf, dunngyourwriting,theblackboardcan beangled away from thegroup.) 4 Whenthefirst pairs finish, c1sk themtosetaboutdecidinghow the)' ''''Old.! ~ O T l c t thesentences. '. Students' stories Spoof stories 6.2 Comprehension questions In class 1 Takeoutyourstoneandholditinyourhandsothatthegroup's In class attentionis caught. Calmlyandseriouslybegintotell thegroup 1 Givethestudentsthequestionsbelow. Ask 1111'111 10 decide o ~ the aboutthestone.Explainthatitis a Cambodiansoupstoneand storytheyseelyingbehindthequestiolls.Tlwv 11I;\Y dllthiS eIther thatyouboughtitin anopen-airmarketinCambodiamanyyears individuallyorinpairs. ago.Thestonesimplyneedstobesimmeredforhalfanhourvery 2 Askeachstudenttotell theirstory tooncnllllTpcrsllll. gentlytoproducethemostexcellentsoup. Explainhowyou refused to believethiswhenyouacquiredthestonebutnowyou QUESTIONS havenochoice, sinceyouhavehadsomanygoodsoupsfrom it. Ifyoutell thestoryconvincinglyenough,takingtheirincredulity 1 Wherewasthegianttortoise? as somethingyouexpect,somestudentswillwanttobelieveyour 2 Whatwastheboydoingtoit? story.Handthestoneround,letthemfeel it, lickit andsmell it. 3 Howdidthemanhelpthetortoise? 4 Whatdidthetortoiseoffertodofortheman? 2 Nowasktheclassifthey knowtheword spoof. Askthemif they canbringtomindspoofstoriesthey haveread inthepapersorif 5 Howdidthemangetthere? theycanthinkoftimeswhenthey orpeoplethey knowhave 6 Whatsortofplacewas it deep belowthesea? trickedothersinto believingsomethingfalse orabsurd,e.g. 7 Whataremermaids? aroundApril 1st. 8 Whywashehappythere? . 3 Dependinghowmanypeoplecomeupwith spoof,pracricaljoke 9 Whydidhewanttogo backtothelandt etc.storiesgroupthestudentsinsmallgroupssothatacoupleof 10 Whatwashegivenas a farewell present? tellers haveagroupoflisteners. 11 Wheredidthetortoisetakehim backto? 12 Whatwashisvillagelikenow? VARIATION Ifthestonestoryabovedoes notappeal toyou, try 13 Heopenedthetiny box- whatcameout? thIS newspaperspoofstory: 'LastSundayIread this amazingstory iu 14 Whywashis facewrinkled? anEnglish newspaper....' CHOICEOFSTORIES Forthisexerciseyouneedto~ o o s s.tories Skeleton withasimplestructure,theoutlineofwhichyoucanImply faIrly BritishAirwaysto revolutioniseairtravel clearlywitharelativelysmallnumberofcomprehensIOnquestIOns. London-Sydney: 55 mins Passengerswillbesentby30-footrocket ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Thetortoisestorywelearntfrom a Research team in Nakaburoworkingonpigs,has Japanesestudent.Theideaforthetechniquecamefrom.lean Paul discoveredwonder'shrinking'drug Creton. Passengers miniaturisedat LondonAirportregain normal sizeatSydneybytakingreverserdrug Schemenot yetperfectbecausenoway toshri nk passengers'luggage (AfterSundav Times spoofstory) /\c:K \I O\'X' I I 1)(; F;\-II:.!\iT WeowetheCambodiansoupstonestory 6.3 Spoof stories to ,) ll'i1illJ'. hv ( .trlo.., rv1:11.:ZrLI. Before class Find;\',nIlHllh, illl\'ITSlillj',!llokilll','ilOIH' Inl:lkl'into,1.1.. \\illl\'!lll Students' stories 6.4 Story of the film In class 1 Bringa studenttotheblackboardas thegrc1l11"" '.(', IlI.I1'V'. Getthe otherstudentstoshoutoutfilm titles tohilll111 hll,.II.11. The secretaryshouldwritethetitles downindisurdl'l ,dl (l\'!T the board. . ' 2 Askeach studenttochoosea film heorshelu... 1l.111 LU1Lu'Iy liked andmakea posteradvertisingit. . , 3 Pairthestudentsandget each persontoCXrLl111 hI'orherposter andtell thestoryofthefilm behindit. NOTE Itis, ofcourse,possi bletodispense wi rh step 2.:1hoveand simplyaskthestudentstotellthefilm stories.Wchave(mind, however,thatthetimespentdrawingis pleasurable [orthestudents (as a changeofactivity) andprovidesvaluablerhtnkl11g space, 6.5 Love stories Skeleton Rapunzel Manandwifelivedincottage From bedroomwindowwifecouldsee lettucesin neighbour'sgarden Shewantedone- manunwillingtosteal one- neighbour awitch Hefinallydid - wifedelighted He wentagain- caughtbywitch Shemadehimpromisehertheirfirstchild Rapunzel born- mangavehertowitch When12,witchtook hertotowerinforest- nodoor Rapunzel had long,longhair,doneinplait Hung herplaitfrom highwindow- witchclimbeclllpitin morning R;\(:k down;lq;linin From beginnings... Princecame,heard Rapunzel singing Watchedwitchclimbplait Nextdaydidsame Rapunzel shy- theybecamefriends He cameeveryday Onedaywitchfoundthemtogether Chopped offRapunzel'splait- threwPrincefromhigh window Hefell onthorns- blinded- wanderedearthforthree years,begging Rapunzel escapedtower- wanderedeverywherelooking forhim Foundhimindesert Wept- tearsfellon hiseyes He sawagain Theywenttohisfather's palace, marriedand hadmany children In class 1 TellthestoryofRapunzel. 2 Askthestudentstoshuttheireyes fora coupleofminutesand thll1k backtoa lovestorytheyknowandfindimportant. 3 Askthem tomovearoundandfind a partner,Theyshouldthen tell theirstorytotheirpartner. 6.6 From beginnings ... In class 1 Seta scene,..somethinglikethis: Afrog- deepdownin aweU -livedtheresinceshewasatadpole- knows crackandcrevice- knowsnothingbeyondexcept P::ltd1 Cllllght!llghupabove. Olll'd.I\' ,1 '1ILlil f1il'1\ ;lLTOSS the patch(flight- sets frog 1h111" Ill!'. I AJ .111,h Ill', 11' \\.,,1. '1IIIhl'iro'l"'Il,or \\(','\1 I .,,\ "'"11 work ,.10111' ,\1)'1'( ... 1 till'\' I ,. ,I t I" I " , Students' stories 3 Whenstudentshave finished t11L" prL'Jl.tr.llI 11 ll Wllr!' (different peopletakedifferenttimesto dothis) :\,,1- dll'Il1 III... 11111 theireyes andmumblethestorytothemselves ill piillrtotellingit tosomeoneelse, Thisproduces 1111H'h 1111111' (ohL'rl'llt telling. 4 Ask thestudentstotell theirstory toSOIlH'OIH' they !l;\Vl' not previouslyworkedwith. EXAMPLES Theabove beginningprompted dL'nJ<::lltary studentstowardsthestoriesskeletonisedhere: A Prettyfrog- climbedoutofwell - w.alked andvisitnlall day- at nightafraid- triedtogetbacktowell- lost- spL'nt nightin fear - jumpedata butterfly- butbutterflyW;lS hunteroffrogs- endedupin Frenchrestaurant. . B Sunnyday- frogwalkingby river- plentyoffood - OK,Boy cameto river- waterwarm- swam- sawfrog- caughther. Tookherhometohis garden- shewasfree there- thenfell downwellatendofgarden, C Froghappyin wetwell- Twochildrenlookeddown- asked frog whysheliked thedark- frogaskedwhatworlduptherelooked like- Theyinvitedfrogup- sun'srays toohot- hadtogo back to wetnessofwell. CHOICE OF STORY STARTERS Thescenesetmustimplya continuation- thesymbolofthebirdsuddenlyenteringthefrog's confined worlddoes justthis. Herearetwootherscenes: Grandpaalwaysintheway- peopletakehischairoppositetheTV set- noonelistenstohis views- hisdaughter-i.n-Iawneverputs sugarin his coffee- hehasenoughofbeingignored- onedayhe goes toTrafalgarSquare.., (afterRodari) 'Here'sonethathasto beputoutofcirculation.' 'What's'is job?' 'MP,' 'Youwantmetousethe three-wheeler?' (afterVassilisVassilikos,Z) .. ,to endings 6.7 ... to endings In class 1 Dictatethefollowingstoryending: Thewoman on his right begantotug,crying: 'Letmego,it's mornIng,' Butherefused, Sheturnedintoa wildcat,bithis handand ranoffintothewoods. 2 Ask thestudentstoworkontheirown,orin groupsoftwo or three,tomakea storythatleadstothisending.Iftheyworkalone suggesttheytakenotes. 3 Whenpeopleh,ave finished thepreparationwork (differentpeople takedIfferent tlmestodothIS) ask themtoshuttheireyes and mumblethestorytothemselvesin English.Thisproducesa much more coherenttelling. 4 Askthestudentstotelltheirstory tosomeonetheyhavenotyet worked WIth. NOTE Ifstudentsask for the 'original'story,yOll mayliketouse this: Wild cat Scholarandwife lived outsidecitygate Very poor, He studiedfar into night No foodforaweek- senthertowoodto pickchestnuts Shecamebackwithsevenshrivelled nuts in basket Suddenlydoorflewopen- womancamein with seven shrivellednuts in basket Shelookedexactlythesameaswife. in everydetail Twolookedateachother Both 'Whoareyou?' Scholarpulledboth to him - grippedeach byan arm Sotheysatall night Cockscrowed Thewomanon his rightbegantotug.. , (Kore,mtraditionalstory,collectedby101 Bangl Ulnlcl II1 '.llll'Y Otherclldingsyoumighrlikcto 1111.1 ',Iill',(ood11l,.,idL' hilll, hellll111'1' 1111. 1111' .11111111 (111... 11,., ' Students' stories 2 ...washedoverboardanddrowned. But YO\l ;\lld 11, liP\\'different. 3 And Peter?Well, hestilllives inthevillage, Illllonger in thegreathouse. Hekeeps thepubnow, w'hG"(' till' wltlllestory started. 4 Thefarmerand thecowlooked areach olh"1', Thell,\Tl'y slowly, theyboth began tolaugh. 6.8 Objects tell stories Before class Choosethreeobjects thatdo not makeanobviousset,e.g. a bra,a lightbulb,a kipper. In class 1 Takein the objectsand letthestudents lookatthem, passthem roundand speculateaboutthem. 2 Askthe studentstogroupin fours andtouse theobjectsas the startingpointfor a story. 3 When thegroups havefound theirstories, askeachpersonto workwithsomeonefromanothergroup.Ask them to tell the storyas one of the ohjects, e.g. 'I'ma lightbulb.WhenIlooked down,I...'Donotgivetime for furtherpreparationofthetelling. NOTE Switchingnarrativestandpointtothatofanobject in the story hasa powerful'makingnew'effectandcanconsiderably modifythe story agreed onin thegroupsoffour. VARIATJON lfyourstudentsalreadyknoweach otherquitewell, thefollowingexercisehasa morepowerfuleffect: 1 Pairthestudents. 2 In each pairAnamesthreeobjectsthatheorshethinksaretypical ofB, andBnamesthreeobjectstypicalofA. 3 Atells the first partofa storyahoutB, hringingin thetlH\'t' objects. Rthen finishes thestory, 4 p, tells the p:\1'1 of:lslmy:dHl\l1 i\, \vhil\! f\ lilll"III' Doodlestrips ACKNOWLEDGEMEl"T Theideaoffittingthestoryto theperson comes IndIan therapypractices,and morerecentlyfrom the workotMiltonErickson. 6.9 Doodlestrips Before class Prepareandduplicateabstractcartoonstripslikethoseillustrated below: / o 1/1 1\,,1 d. Students'stories Triplestories 2 Giveoutthedoodles trips,Olll' In ,';111111,1111\'11111.11 CII group. 3 Askeach individualorgroup to \"'lllk11111 .1 '.1111)' by theirstrip,andto preparetotelltlH' ICI ill theclass. 4 Askthestudentsto circulateand1(,lll';llll ClIbt'! dll'lrstories. VARIATION Askstudentsto 'COll1pklL" till' ',Irip by ;lddingan extraframe beforeproceedingtostep3 :I!Jo\'!'. FOLLOW-UP Whenstudentshaveworkl'lllbrollghslIch anexercise onceortwice,itis a good ideatogetthel1l drawiqgdoodJestripsfor eachother. N01ES 1 Wefind thatworkingfrom abstractdrawingssuchas these producesa very differentexerciseandgroupdynamicfrom work onconventional'picturecompositions'.Thelatteroftenlead to rathermechanical,uninvolvedstorytellingwitb d high priority given to'gettingthestoryright'.Whenabstractrather than concretepicturesare used,studentsareencouragednotonlyto give theirimaginationsfree rein, butalso to attempt(andsucceed at) moreadventurouslanguage. 2 Whenconstructingyourowndoodlestrips,youmightfind thatthe mostproductivemethodis toillustrateanabstractorvery general idea,ratherthan any particularstory-line. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Thisexercisewassuggested bythework ofMoStrangeman (Magi-pies, PilgrimsPublications,Canterbury 1982) in thesymbolicdepiction offairy stories. 6.10 Triple stories In class 1 Ask thestudentseach towritethreestoriesthatmustnotbemore thanfive sentenceslong,thefirst abouta boy and a gun,the secondabouta teenagegirl and a teacher,and thethird abouta youngman andhis employer.Askthemro writethemonthree differentpiecesofpaper. 2 Ask thestudentstostick theirstoriesup roundthewallsoft1w classroom: useoncwall for thefirst.story, OllC for the <111,1,111.1 OJlC fordJ(' Ihird. Askthestudents ro read thestoriesandtocorrecranylanguage mistakesthevscc in anvofrhem. , , EXAMPLES Herearethreeofrhe uncorrected boyandgunstories wegotfrom olderteenageelementarystudents. Iknowa boywholikeda gun. HegOt a gunwhenhewas fifteen. He joineda marksmensociety. Helearnttoshootwithhisgun. Hewas a verygood marksman,buthebecamedangerousand began tokill people. Therewasi pleasantboy with hisgunin a sittingroom.The boy was playingalonebecausehe hadno brotherorsister. Suddenlyhe brokea vaseandhewasverysad. Hewasaboy. Hewantto hadagun.Hegota gun-shopand bought a gun. Afterhegotinthewoodandshouthirds. Hewasvery happy tohavea gun now. VARIATION You canask thestudentstowritetriplestoriesabout otheritems/peoplethan thosegivenabove, e.g.: soldier woman woman .woman child lorry ACKNOWLEDCEMENT Thisideacomesfrom D.I.MalamudandS. Machover,Toroards S'elfUnderstanding, CharlesC. Thomas, Illinois, 1965. "I' .,,\,\ Students' stories 2 Giveoutthedoodles trips,Olll' In ,';111111,1111\'11111.11 CII group. 3 Askeach individualorgroup to \"'lllk11111 .1 '.1111)' by theirstrip,andto preparetotelltlH' ICI ill theclass. 4 Askthestudentsto circulateand1(,lll';llll ClIbt'! dll'lrstories. VARIATION Askstudentsto 'COll1pklL" till' ',Irip by ;lddingan extraframe beforeproceedingtostep3 :I!Jo\'!'. FOLLOW-UP Whenstudentshaveworkl'lllbrollghslIch anexercise onceortwice,itis a good ideatogetthel1l drawiqgdoodJestripsfor eachother. N01ES 1 Wefind thatworkingfrom abstractdrawingssuchas these producesa very differentexerciseandgroupdynamicfrom work onconventional'picturecompositions'.Thelatteroftenlead to rathermechanical,uninvolvedstorytellingwitb d high priority given to'gettingthestoryright'.Whenabstractrather than concretepicturesare used,studentsareencouragednotonlyto give theirimaginationsfree rein, butalso to attempt(andsucceed at) moreadventurouslanguage. 2 Whenconstructingyourowndoodlestrips,youmightfind thatthe mostproductivemethodis toillustrateanabstractorvery general idea,ratherthan any particularstory-line. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Thisexercisewassuggested bythework ofMoStrangeman (Magi-pies, PilgrimsPublications,Canterbury 1982) in thesymbolicdepiction offairy stories. 6.10 Triple stories In class 1 Ask thestudentseach towritethreestoriesthatmustnotbemore thanfive sentenceslong,thefirst abouta boy and a gun,the secondabouta teenagegirl and a teacher,and thethird abouta youngman andhis employer.Askthemro writethemonthree differentpiecesofpaper. 2 Ask thestudentstostick theirstoriesup roundthewallsoft1w classroom: useoncwall for thefirst.story, OllC for the <111,1,111.1 OJlC fordJ(' Ihird. "I' .,,\,\ Triple stories Askthestudents ro read thestoriesandtocorrecranylanguage mistakesthevscc in anv , ofrhem. , EXAMPLES Herearethreeofrhe uncorrected boyandgunstories wegotfrom olderteenageelementarystudents. Iknowa boywholikeda gun. HegOt a gunwhenhewas fifteen. He joineda marksmensociety. Helearnttoshootwithhisgun. Hewas a verygood marksman,buthebecamedangerousand began tokill people. Therewasi pleasantboy with hisgunin a sittingroom.The boy was playingalonebecausehe hadno brotherorsister. Suddenlyhe brokea vaseandhewasverysad. Hewasaboy. Hewantto hadagun.Hegota gun-shopand bought a gun. Afterhegotinthewoodandshouthirds. Hewasvery happy tohavea gun now. VARIATION You canask thestudentstowritetriplestoriesabout otheritems/peoplethan thosegivenabove, e.g.: soldier woman woman .woman child lorry ACKNOWLEDCEMENT Thisideacomesfrom D.I.MalamudandS. Machover,Toroards S'elf Understanding, CharlesC. Thomas, Illinois, 1965. Photos Section7 Fromthepast 7.1 Photos Before class Findalargequantityofold family photographs,preferablynot featuringyourself.Try to achieve awidetimespan overthephotos. Youwill need atleastonehundred fora groupof25 students. In class 1 Putthephotosoutona flat surfaceandinvitethestudentstolook throughthem andpickoutonephotoeachthatbringsbacka memory,story,orsceneoftheirown. 2 Ask thestudentstomovearoundtheroomand tell each other whattheirchosenphotoevokes. 'J I From the past 7.2 Yesterday In class 1 DrawthreescenesonthebO(1(d ill which VClll Wl'I'l' involved yesterday,Theworseyoudrawthl'Iwttc'l.'fill"Ill(,xl'I'cise, as your baddrawingwill makethestudt:ntsmorel'(lIl1lnrtahlewhenthey cometodraw. 2 Ask thestudentsto makedrawingsillustrallngduct: momentsthat springtomindfrom yesterday. Askthem 10 ;ldd times. 3 Pairtl1e studentssotheycanexplain tht:irdrawings.Thenask themtosharewiththeirpartneraB the'SCt'I1l:S' fromyesterday thattheycaretorecall. Explain yourownscenes if NOTES Akindredexerciseis tobefound onp.HS ofViolaSpolin's Improvisation for the Theatre, Pitman, 1964,though heraimis very differentfromours. As withmanypairexercises, theteachercan choosetotakepartasa pairmemberifthereis anoddnumberof students. 7.3 Time-travel mirror In class 1 Askastudentwholikesdrawingtocomeoutanddrawalarge ornatemirrorframeontheboard.Ask theotherstocopythe student'smirrorontolargesheetsofpaper. 2 Suggesttothestudentsthatthesearetime-travelmirrorsin which eachofthemcanseeascenefromhisorherpast.Askthemto drawthescene. 3 Askthestudentstogetupandmovearound.Thenaskeach persontofind a partner,sitdownagainandexplainthestory behindthescenetheyhavedrawn. Let themre-pairseveraltimes. (Thepointofgettingupandmovingis thatitallowsstudentsto chooseapartnertheywant,unobtrusively.) NOTE Youmayreassurestudents whofeel thattheycannotdraw bytellingthemthatbaddrawingimprovestheexercise; thegreater theinformationgap,themorenecessaryand productivethe Ol";t! comll1tilli<,;aliO!l. 'I.' It happened to me EXAMPLES Here'arethreeorfourexamplesofthesortofthings peopleinonegroupdrew anddescribed. Elena, a Mexican,drewpeoplesittingroundanidyllic placeoutside MexicoCity. Shedescribedthisveryhappyperiodofherlife when shewasatUniversity. Marco, fromFlorence,drewadramaticsceneinfrontofthegoalposts. This was themomentofhisfirstgoalforhis town'sprofessional under-18 team.Thisledhimontotell thestoryofhis collar-bone injurythatinvalidedhimoutoffootball andcondemnedhimto bored book-keeping. Nicole, fromGeneva,drewa 16th-centuryladyina greathall. Her dream,sheexplained, wastobe anobserver,an uncommitted person,atthecourtofHenriIVofFrance. fromIstanbul,drewa manfishinginthesea. Hethentold thestoryofhowhisfriendtaughthimto fish in theSea ofMarmara. VARIATION Anotherwayofhelpingstudentstorecallstorieslinci- dentsfromtheirownpastis toaskthestudenttodrawanempty boxingring.Thestudentscopytheringandputin itanybodythey feel orhavefelt angrywith.TheypairoffandtellthestoryJincident/ feelings behindthedrawings. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT Wegotthe'emptypicture'ideasfrom S. StrikerandE. Kimmel,The Second Antz-colouring Book, Scholastic Publications,London1980. 7.4 It happened to me Before class Chooseananecdoteareasuchas'stupidthings I'vedone'. Prepare ananecdoteofyourowntotell theclass. In dass '1.11111, .11 .'J \'11111 .llltnlull'. \I I' I, ,. "I",'.. 11"11 .1.111'. lLII"I'"'i in IWoPh''s 1H';lds, hy rllt'clldcd ''',,1 1.11 H 01 . I' '" Id,"11,1,(, ,t."vll'.d jl/l'lpl .. ill fill' ,1'.11111(' \villl '11 From the past wantto tell anecdotesoftheirOWII. (,('1 tlll'lll Itllilll-'; their stories to thewholegroup. POSSIBLE ANECDOTE AREAS losingthings: documents,passp< rts, h<ll1dh:ll',s, childrell ... runningaway: from home,one'sjob,awkw.\rd Silll;lLions... nearaccidents: in thehome,on theroaJ ... fear: ofthings,people,places,imaginary horrors... ifonly... stories 7.5 Fire stories Before class Geta largepictureofa fire oroftheresultsofahre. It should bein colourifpossible. Preparetotell a firestoryofyourown. '1.1 If"'lr . I rll In class Displayyourpictllre- allowtimefor thestudentsto look .11 I1 111 silence. 2 Tellyour fire story. 3 Invitestudentsto bringtomind firestoriesoftheirown,<lIHI1c l preparetotell them in Englishby mumblingthem through. 4 Putthestudentsinsmall groupssothestorytellers have 5 Askthelistenerstotellthestoriestheyhaveheardtoother students. 7.6 Hiding things Before class Preparetotellthestudents astoryfrom yourownexperienceof peoplehidingthings. Forexample,myson,whenhewassix,hidhis Christmaspresentsfor thefamily sosecurelythateven hecouldnot find themonDecember24! In class 1Tellyourstory. 2 Askthestudentsto thinkofstoriesofthingsth;}tgothiddenand topreparetotell them.Discouragethemfrom writingthemdown. Suggesttheymumbletheirstoriesthroughto themselves. 3 Put thestudentsinsmall groupssothatpeoplewhohavecomeup with storiescantell them. 4 Askthelisteners to tell thestoriestheyhavel1eard to peoplefrom othergroups. 7.7 Heroes and heroines 1'1, I' I I I. \. 11 i1'1 ,1.1" i111' '.1 or\, of',OIIH'Olll' VIllI rl')\:lrtl ;\.,<;j hero. Ill' I Ill. 1,1 U "Pl' 111 ",ll I.IIIIII\' III ,ll111lllf', >'1111 Ili"Il<I" '.Clllll \. .. ,I ., ,,' I 111111 ,d rill' 1'.1'.1 J. From the past In class 1 Tellyourstory. 2 Asktheclasstothinkoftheirownherolberoinestories. It is quite agoodideato allowthisto bedoneas homework,sothatstu-dents havea chancetogetthedetailsright. Youshouldmakeitclear, however,thattheyshouldnotproducewritten accounts. 3 Groupthosewhohavecome upwithstorieswiththosewhohave not. 4 Askstudentsto tell theirstoriestotheothersintheirgroup. 5 Askthosewhowereonlylisteners totell whatthey haveheard to peoplein theothergroups. EXAMPLE mygrandfather- a miner- duringa strikehewaited forthepolicevans to arrive- rolled rocksoffa bridgeontothe vans- when thestrikewasover hecould notfind workin anypit ACKNOWLEDGEMENT This idea camefrom Paul Davis. 7.8 Stories from jobs Before class Preparetotell a story involvingan experienceatwork,eitherabout yourselforabouta closefriend orrelative.With urban,middle-class studentgroups,stOries drawnfromexperiencesas anunskilled workeroftenhavea powerfulshockvalue: theyaresurprisedatthe richnessofjobstheyhad consideredemptyormindless. In class 1 TellyourstOry. 2 Askthestudentsto respond with job-relatedstoriesoftheirown, oroftheirfriends orrela tives. EXAMPLE a carparkattendant- satin hutcollectingmoney - a windowontheworld- businessmenwouldlingerin rheircars heforetnkingrhem Ollt: theW'lstt"pap<:r hillS werefull oft1H' t hev 11;1<1 he('I] !"l'ad,ill/!, - rid] peoplewould ;11 riil'l 1,'1' ,Iy 11 vI'I Il.ll' i 11) I nI' I' 11 ,I d d Ii"\ .1, 1\'\'.1 .1 lc'\\' IIIi 11111 \' ,d I. I ""II III .1 Shame hour-,somewouldsitintheircarsfor 55minutes justtogettheir moneysworth- peoplecomingfrom thedivorcecourtnextdoor wouldtell himall abouttheirmarriages: hewasthefirst human beingtheymetaftertheirdivorce ACKNOWlEDGElvlE0JT Paul Davissuggestedthisexercise. 7.9 Shame Skeleton The orchard Boy asksfathertotake him towork Fatherrefuses:worktoo hard Boy begs, insists Fatheragrees Theywalkoutoftowntoorchards Fathertells boytoshoutifanyonecanseehim Climbsoverwall and up tree Father's handtouchesapple 'Someonecanseeyou,Father' 'Who?' 'God.Whatyouaredoing is shameful.' (Jordanianstorytoldto us by LindsayBrown) In class 1 Tellthestory. 2 Askthestudentsifthestorycalled tomindanysituationin which theywereinvolved. 3 Groupstudentsin fives toexchangestories, reactionsandideas. Section8 VanishingStories In class 1 Writethefollowingstoryonthe board: 'Godis everywhere,absolutelyeverywhere'thelittle boywastold by hisserious, grey-beardedelders,andso, reachingupon tiptoe, hegrabhed ahalf-openmatchboxfromoHthemantelpiece, snappeditshutandcried: 'Got'im!' 2 Explaintothestudentsthattheyaregoing toreducethissentence as muchas theycan. Givethemtheserules: (a) Youmaytakeonewordout. (b) You may taketwoconsecutivewords out. (c) You may takeOllt threeconsecutivewords. (d) You mustnotaddanything. (el Youmustnotchangeotmodifyanywords. (fl Youmustnotmove anywords. (g) Youmay delete, change,ordeletepunctuationasneeded. (h) Aftereach deletionthestudentwhohasproposeditmustread' theremainingsentence aloud: this mustbe grammatically correctandmusthavea meaning,thoughrhemeaningmay changeastheexerciseprogresses. 3 Assoonasastudentsuggestsa deletion,rub itoutatonce,without hesitation. Itis thestudent whomustjustifythedeletion,notyou. Oftenasrudentwhowantstodeletea word thatmakes the sentencenon-grammaticalornonsensical, realisesthisforhimself orherselfin the' processoftryingtoreadit aloud.Iftheresultant sentenceis wrongandthestudentdoesnotrealiseit,turnsilently totheothersandasktheir opinionwith yourface. Ifno one realisesitis wrong,putbacktheword(s)deletedwithoutcomment. NOTES In this exercisethereis noneedfor youtospeakatall. You candemandre-readingsorindicatedoubtby gesture,Thismakesthe studentsconcentratemuchharderonthe boardandleavesspacefor themtothink.Givetimeforthestudentyou areworkingwithatany glvenmomenttodecidefor himselforherselfwhctlwIthe dl'iclioll k:1V('S thes('11I('ncl' acceptahleorIlut. 'I'h<' ",1"(1111' 1l1.ly \\,<,111)(' ;d,!t-I(lI,',IIlt'l"lw(Hi)'.il1.1i Vanishing stories word (thoughthisshouldnotbeanabsoluteaim),ashappenedin theexamplegiven below. VARIAnON Ifyouhaveaccesstoanordinarydomesticmicrocom- puter,youmayliketowritea programtohandle thetextdisplayand deletionprocess. A featureofyourprogram,whichwouldbean advantageoverblackboarddisplay,could beasub-routinetorecall thevariousstagesoftheexercises: detailedgrammaticaldiscussion could thenbepostponed!to a moreopportunemoment. 'Godis everywhere, ,the htrle boy was told byhisserious,grey-beardedelders, andso, reachingupon tiptoe,hegrabbed ahalf-open matchboxfromoffrhe manrel- piece,snappedit shutandcried: 'Got'im!' 'Godis everywhere, ,the litrle boy was told byhis elders, andso, reachingupon tiptoe, he grabbeda half-openmatchboxfromoffthemantel- piece,snappeditshutandcried: 'Got'im!' 'Godis everywhere, 'the little boy was told byhis elders, andso, reachingup on tiptoe,he grabbedahalf-openmatchboxfrom rhe manrel- piece, snappeditshutandcried: 'Got'im!' 'Godis everywhere, 'the littleboywas told ,andso, reachingup on tiptoe, he grabbedahalf-open nyHchbox from rhe manrel- piece, snappeditshutandcriecY:'Gor'im!' 'Godis everywhere, 'thelittleboywas told ' ,andso, reachingup on tiptoe, he grabbedahalf-open matchbox' , ,snappeditshutand cried: 'Got'im!' 'Godis everywhere, ,thelittle boywas told ,andso, reachingup on tiptoe,he grabbedahalf-openO1archbox ,snappeditshut ;'Got'im!' 'Godis ,the boy was raid ,and so,reachingup on tiptoc, he grabbedahalf-open matchbox , itshut :'Gor'im!' '( .,I, IIt, (-he hoy was I',1,,1 ,:Jt1d so, rt':ll-hill!!,Ill'Oil I1lil",1 11' 1'1, d.I",,,I h,d! 111"'11 Ill.1l\.;hl ... \ 11 '1'1'. ,I '( ;,,1 'IIII!' ,11, 'Ill Vanishing stories Vanishing stories 'God is the boy was told , and so, reaching up he grabbed a half-open matchbox ,snapped ; 'Got 'im" 'God is ' [he boy was told , and so, reaching up he grabbed a matchbox , snapped : 'Got'im!' 'God !' the boy was told , and so, reaching up he grabbed a matchbox ,snapped : 'Got 'im!' 'God!' the boy was told; reaching up , he grabbed a matchbox , snapped ; 'Got'im!' 'God!' the boy was told; he grabbed a matchbox snapped ; 'Got'im!' 'God!' the boy was told; he grabbed a matchbox. 'God was told; he grabbed a matchbox. 'God was He grabbed a matchbox. he grabbed a matchbox. Matchbox! RATIONALE This is an excellent exercise to do with tired students as it requires and gets high concentration. Perhaps this is because so many skills and operations are happening almost at once: silent reading for mean,ing l"t'ading aloud - intonatiol! - rhyllll11 checking inflectional possibilities checking syntactic possibilities listening very closely for meaning CHOICE OF STORY The story you start out with must be one sentence and no more. (It sometimes breaks into two or more during the reduction process.) Here is an example of a traditional story compressed into one sentence; The greedy mayor and bloated aldermen refused to pay the Pied Piper the gold they had promised him for luring the rats of HameJin into the fast-Howing river, which made him so angry that he led away the children of the city, who vanished for ever into the mounrainside. ACKNOWLEDGEMENT We learnt this exercise from our exposure to Silent Way, though we do not know whether this form of reduction was invented by Caleb Gattegno, thought up by people round him or indeed incorporated in Silent Way practice from earlier thinking by others. 1/111 1111 Music Section9 Revision 9.1 Astoryyou reallyliked In class When the students have done half a dozen story activities over a period of time, ask which stories they can recalL Ask students each to pick one story they like and come to the next lesson ready to tell it. In next class Pair students and ask them to retell the story of their choice. Make sure they do not work with a neighbour who is a habitual partner. TELL NOT REPEAT In this type of revision exercise the students are not simply repeating a story they have heard or told or both. They are rejecting stories they didn'tldon't like and reworking the story of their choice. Providing they have not been asked to do written telling of stories, they have no frozen record to refer back to. They have to re-invent the story from the fragments they recall which may well include a mixture of plot strands, memorable sentences and their own reaction at the time of first hearingltelling. As important as all the above is that they tell the story to a person to whom they have not told this story before - stories change a lot in telling them to different audiences. 9.2 Music In class When a nUllIlwl Id ,.IOl'll'S h,lve heen worked on in class ask the students, EOI hlllJII'Work, [0 choose a story and find a i ~ of music they feel gOl'S willl 11. Thl' musical passage, snatch of song, etc. should not he (HOrl' LlLltl two minutes long; ask them to come with a cassette ready ,Il lIll' start of the bit chosen, In next class Find Ollt how m:l1lY people have done the homework. Ask one of them to play his or her piece on the class tape-recorder. He or she then tells the story to the whole group. Repeat with other students. RATIONALE Even if the student told his or her story to someone when he or she first worked with it, this second telling will be very different from the first. The telling will be affected by the passage of time, by the recall work involved in choosing story A rather than story B, by the thought entailed in choosing the music, and finally by telling the story to an audience under the influence of the music. NOTE This exercise may not be feasible if the students are away from their own collections of music. V A R [ATI 0 N The exercise can be done in the Ianguage lab if yours has a group-work facility that allows one student to speak to three or four others and that allows them to listen to his or her machine. In the lab, a student who has brought a cassette plays his or her music to a small group and tells the accompanying story while the same is ~ o i n on in other groups in different parts of the lab. 11' I Revision 9.3 Doodlestripreview In class In order to encourage students to recall and rcteU stories they have heard earlier in their COurse: 1 Ask the students to think back over the stories they have heard and to draw any images that come to mind. 2 Ask them to choose one image and to develop it as d doodJestrip (see 6.9). 3 Invite them to show ea-ch other their strips and toexplain how they reflect the story. In one group, a student produced this strip to convey the story of the Pied Piper (see p.10l). ~ (j) , " I " J' ' ,,," , , f'r , ,,' -+ """ ,"' I , , .. , '-"., ~ J') 'I r , I ; . 7 , t j " . , NOTE Before asking the group to try this exercise, you should have worked through one or more sessions of Doodlestrips (see 6.9). Section10 Storypool A Snow The typist in the office was happy 'SnowI Snow l ' Everyone except him crowded to the window to see 'All you want is to be on your own.' But this was not true Leaving office, he told typist she had a hair on her coat He didn't go home He walked through the snow He went to a bar, had a brandy Didn't know how to start conversation in bar Left, walked on through snow Round a corner he saw man in the shadow, bowler hat on head At first afraid Then saw other was all alone, like him, in the night His heart opened to stranger - he told everything bottled upforsolong Told everything to snowman with bowler hat (after Antonis Samarakis, ZititeElpis) B Thepulllover David's gran gave him pullover with flowers on He hated it 'Lost' it - parents always found it Left it in garden - dog brought it in Put it in washing machine on 'Hot' - would not shrink Out walking one day Found loose thread in sleeve - pulled it Crow swooped down - grabbed end of thread Crow flc;)w into tree - w'ound pull,over off David M.ut" 111'1 I J 101 1',1\1111 '.h'IWf'i1 '11.111111'011'''.1 J III Revision 9.3 Doodlestripreview In class In order to encourage students to recall and rcteU stories they have heard earlier in their COurse: 1 Ask the students to think back over the stories they have heard and to draw any images that come to mind. 2 Ask them to choose one image and to develop it as d doodJestrip (see 6.9). 3 Invite them to show ea-ch other their strips and toexplain how they reflect the story. In one group, a student produced this strip to convey the story of the Pied Piper (see p.10l). ~ (j) , " I " J' ' ,,," , , f'r , ,,' -+ """ ,"' I , , .. , '-"., ~ J') 'I r , I ; . 7 , t j " . , NOTE Before asking the group to try this exercise, you should have worked through one or more sessions of Doodlestrips (see 6.9). Section10 Storypool A Snow The typist in the office was happy 'SnowI Snow l ' Everyone except him crowded to the window to see 'All you want is to be on your own.' But this was not true Leaving office, he told typist she had a hair on her coat He didn't go home He walked through the snow He went to a bar, had a brandy Didn't know how to start conversation in bar Left, walked on through snow Round a corner he saw man in the shadow, bowler hat on head At first afraid Then saw other was all alone, like him, in the night His heart opened to stranger - he told everything bottled upforsolong Told everything to snowman with bowler hat (after Antonis Samarakis, ZititeElpis) B Thepulllover David's gran gave him pullover with flowers on He hated it 'Lost' it - parents always found it Left it in garden - dog brought it in Put it in washing machine on 'Hot' - would not shrink Out walking one day Found loose thread in sleeve - pulled it Crow swooped down - grabbed end of thread Crow flc;)w into tree - w'ound pull,over off David M.ut" 111'1 I J 101 1',1\1111 '.h'IWf'i1 '11.111111'011'''.1 J III Story pool C Honour Teenagerlostherjob Fatherpoliceman- didn'ttell Leftforworkeach morning Returnedeach evening Severalweekslikethis Fatheraskedforrent Shestole Policeinvestigated Fatherhadcase hushed up Then hethrewherout (newsitem) D Thefigtree Mukami,young,beautiful Muthogaalreadyhasfourwives,manychildren Shefallsin lovewith him Fatheragainstmatch- saysMuthogabeatswives Reluctantlyfatheragrees Marry Otherwivesjealous- Muthogabeatsthem-lovesher Firstyearfine After2yearsMukamistillchildless Husbandcools Afterthreeyears he beatsher- seemstowanttokill her Mukamileaveshouse Cannotreturntofather Walksintobush- to wheredeadareburied Owls,hyenas,windhowls,skydark Comestoclearingofholyfigtree belongstogod Murungu Sheltersbeneathit,sleeps Dream - god'swifetouchesher Wakes- realisesshe is pregnant,several months Walksbacktohusband'shouse Acowmoos (af!HrNUllO! Wi) ThiollllO, inMnrn M()r!I.'rn Ar,il',lI/ :,f"I/'''.} E Ivar IVBI' greatpoetofIceland Sailed to Norwaywith brother King madehimcourtpoet Ivarsentbrotherbackwith messageforSWfotl" III Asked hertowaitforhim Sweetheartfell in lovewith brother Theymarried IvartoIceland Discoveredtruth Backto Norway Each daymoremiserable King: 'Angrywithsomeonehere?'lvar: 'No' King: 'Morehonours?'Ivar: 'No' King: 'Awoman?''Yes' 'Shall Isend forher?''Married' 'Another?''Nohelp' 'ThenwhenIam free,you can talkto meofhm sadnesslessenswhenyou can talk' 'You honourme, myLord' (:nrom theIcelandic) F Inthecellar Armyretreat Hidingin basement- verytired,nofood,dark Suddenly:TICK-TACKin nextcellar Again Terror Grippedmachine-gun Friendwithtorch TICK-TACK Tiptoedto door TICK-TACK Burstin 'wnflnns onasee-sawin corner III. Story pool G The donkey Two thieves see idiot leading donkey along road Decide to steal it One slips collar off donkey - takes donkey's place Other takes donkey, s.ell in market After a mile, idiot sees thief in donkey's collar Thief explains: Under curse for drinking, beating mother Now curse lifted - mother must have forgiven Idiot gives him money - sends him off Idiot to market to buy new donkey Recognises old one 'Aha! Been beating your mother again! Shan't buy you again !' (from 1007 Nights) H Oogledeboo 'Make a penny go away, Granddad' He took penny, blew, it disappeared 'Again' He did 'How?' 'I say "oogledeboo" and it vanishes' She tries, it vanishes, Granddad leaves, puzzled Next day she goes shopping with Mummy Fat lady in way 'Oogledeboo' Lady vanishes Then she vanishes furniture, lift full of people, neighbour's son Parents ca II doctors, psych iatrists, conju ro rs No effect One day Granddad comes Tells her to bring things and people back 'How?' Must say 'oogledeboo' backwards She does Tllinns iJ rt 11 ) l Story pool She tries to vClnish things again Fails 'Pity, Granddad' (after Will F. Jenkins, in Saturday Evening Post Reader of Fantasy and Science Fiction) The man, the snake, and the stone Man lifts flat stone by road Snake comes out - says will kill man Man begs for one chance Snake: 'We'll ask next creature we meet to decide' Meet sheep - against man - mutton One more chance Meet horse - against man - slavery One more chance Meet fox Asks them to take him back to stone Tells snake to lie where he was Fox replaces stone on snake Fox asks payment Go to man's house Man gives chicken in sack Says open sack away from house - neighbours won't like him helping fox 'Go to that clump of trees, it's quiet there' Fox goes Hunters in trees Shoot fox Matter settled And man? His turn still to come (after Idries Shah, Caravan of Dreams) 111'1 Story pool J The baby Village family: 14 children very poor father places eldest daughter, 12, in service in town one less mouth to feed she works 15-hour day mistress has baby she looks after baby while mistress works half day off per week - gets pregnant mistress discovers - sacks her nowhere to go she meets a pimp... K The husband Cold night Traveller crossing moor Knocked on farm door Woman by corpse - candle light 'He's just died in my arms' Wept Asked traveller to watch corpse Fear Came back with young man Gave the two men tea Young man into bedroom She too Corpse opened eyes Looked at traveller (after JI.M. Synge, The Aran Islands) L Enkidu Goddess pictured Enkidu in her mind's eye Took water, clay -let it fall in desert Enkidu made I I () Story pool He ran with gazelle -long hair like woman - hair matted on body Trapper's son saw him at water-hole - froze with fear Told father 'This man is strongest in world - tears up my traps. Help me' Father told him to go to city and get woman Trapper's son to city Brought woman to waterhole They waited there three days Then Enkidu came with gazelle Trapper's son to woman: 'show yourself naked, teach him' She did Enkidu spent seven nights with her He went back to gazelle, they bolted, his knees gave way He came to her Sat at her feet Said 'Take me to the city' (From the Epic of Gilgamesh) M Ophir Fifteenth-century Venice Old man, tattered, dirty, askl? to see doge Tells how he visited fabled land of Ophir Asks doge for ship to return and bring back treasure! Doge, Bishop question him Tells them - sailed round Africa Flew inland on winged horses People of Ophir traded iron for gold Shipwreck - treasure lost Bishop: 'Are there centaurs there?' No 'Birds of bronze with steel beaks?' No 'What trees?' Palms Bishop says man is liar "Iore are centaurs, birds of bronze III I", r8 I I 11' I I 'I"" ,1/"" '1'1,/1./1. ;,,,",''.) I11 Story pool I\J A horserace Merchanthad twolazysons Theygambled,raced horses Lefthisfortunetoone ofhis sons- no division A horseracetodecidewhoinherits Sonwhosehorse reachesLondon Bridgelast willwin Merchantdied Sonsbeganrace Sixmonthslatertheyhad gonetwomiles Anoldmansawthem-laughed 'Youcan endtheracetodayif.. .' Advicewas? o Thewisdomoftheworld Tortoisedecidesto collectall wisdom in world Doesso Putsitingourdandsealsitup Goesto hideituptree Puts roperoundgourd,hangsitroundneck Startstoclimb,findshe cannot Huntercomesalong 'Hang gourdon back' Tortoiserealiseshe cannotcollectall wisdom Throwsgourd away Itbreaks Bitsflyall overworld Youwantwisdom? Go andtryto findsomeofthebits (after'Tortoiseandthewisdomoftheworld'in Folk Tales and Fables, ed. P, ltayemi& P. Gurrey) Story /I( 11,1 IIH'plllH andthepea 01111 01 1'111111' W 1111,"II" IIHII'Y;1princess [111111 1{I,d1'11111 Ill'wIII !Hld' ()III',1.111. III Ihl : ;1111 ) Il I ,1111 Ii 11 t ni n9 tl1under Know 11 (lilt)!" Killl1 Wlllll downstairs,openedup 11 princess l)IIPPlllqwet Kill[J hasidea Invitedherin- food,clean clothes Becl fornight- specialbed! 20 mattresses,20featherbeds And underall: one pea Princesstobed Notawinkofsleep Bed toolumpy Aha! areal princess Princefell in love Married Happyeverafter Andthepea isinthepalacestill,unlesssomeone has walked offwithit So itwasatruestory (afterH.C. Andersen) I I I I Story pool Story pool Q The poem Great battle - victo ry King to poet: 'Celebrate my victory in song' A year passes - a great poem King gives poet silver mirror 'Now make a greater poem' A year passes - second poem is mag nificent Much shorter King gives poet golden mask 'Now a third - the greatest' A year passes - poet whispers poem to king Single line of verse 'True poetry' King gives poet dagger of iron Poet leaves palace - kills himself King leaves palace - a wandering beggar (after J.L. Barges, The Mirror and the Mask) R An old man West of Ireland Film location Sea, moorland Director meets old man - wants him to act in film 'You should see my father' Father lives in hut by sea Doesn't speak English Unbelievabllyold Son translates - father agrees to act Filming takes two weeks Final scene: old man looks to sea, as family leave for USA Director whispers to son Son translates Retake of'scene- S<lITH:, bllt old rntJ ~ ~ y e s It 1111 r I. )1'1"",1 hllJe with 11:;11 :; End of film Photographer takes pola roid of old man Hands it to him He looks, snarls, tears up photo Storms of muttering in Gaelic The son translates: 'This is a picture of an old man' (after Harry Towb) S Ants I saw a family of red ants - stamped on them But I had stamped on other children I walked on Looked back - ant following me Saw where I lived Next day ants big as people came to our house We ran away Moved to better house (Deborah, aged 10) 11, I I I Story pool T The magic barrel New York student: to become rabbi Needs wife Calls matchmaker Photographs: widow, lame girl, schoolteacher Ag rees to meet teacher Disaster - he is shy Matchmaker returns - more photographs He has a barrel full of them, he says Student sends him away Photos left on table - packet with six in colour and one in black and white Black and white photo shows girl with deep eyes, a girl who has suffered He falls in love Goes to matchmaker's home - bare, no furniture, no barrel 'Who is this girl' Matchmaker turns white: 'my daughter - an error, not for you - dead' Student doesn't believe him - demands to meet her 'She disgraced us' Insists - meeting under streetlamp A thin, pale girl, gaudily dressed Tart? In the shadows, her father chants prayer for the dead (after Bernard Malamud, The Magic Barrel) I 1/, Story !JOol Notes and sug "_ ions The stories coIl '('ll'd ill Ill' Story pool are intended as a supplement to the stories to Iw hlllnd ill the body of this book, and as a starting- point for te;H.:!ll'rS who \vant to build up their own storytelling repertoire. We havl', therefore, not provided lesson notes or exercise materials for them. As an example of how the stories in the pool might be nseJ, the following is offered as a suggestion: Story Exercises A 2.5 (you will need to write your own theme words) 2.9 3.1 (parallel with story E) B 2.3 2.14 (in place at the anecdote given) C 2.2 3.1 (parallel with story J) 5.3 (you will need to select your own 'content words') 7.9 D 2.5 (you will need to write your own theme words) 5.4 E 2.7 3.1 (parallel with story A) 3.2 (you will need to construct your own 'word rose') F 2.8 (e.g. tell astar as penultimate line only) G 2.10 H 2.4 I 2.2 2.13 (break at line 13) 4.2 (try finding your own theme sentences, e.g. 'Death before dishonour') J 3.1 (parallel with story C) 3.4 K 6.7 (start ate.g.line 11) L 2.5 (you will need to write your own theme words) M 2.6 2.7 1.2 (you will need to construct your own 'word rose') N ) I) ( I , I (' I 1 \' Illwl It'\'\'1 ill' rill' 'i1()l'y >'Olll''iI'H 'in new dollll''i' 01' gl'l I1,1 t I i . I' I \ "1'/' 11 I, 111 I I Story pool Q 2.6 2.9 4.4 (pictures of e.g. crown, mask, dagger, beggar) R 3.2 (you will need to make your own 'word rose') 4.2 (you wiJ[ need to write your own theme sentences) 6.2 (this story provides a good opportunity to try writing 'comprehension questions' ohhis sort) 5 2.6 4.3 (ant) T 2.1 (either write the questions yourself, or get one class to write the questions for another group) 2.7 11, Posts ript Books like this have no real business to finish, ThL' rl',ltkl '()ldd usefully and excitingly go on into the following ;lI'e;1S: 1 Guided fantasies. The group leader, after Cl relaxatioll talks the participants through the outline of a fant;lsy so cOllsrnlClnl as ro leave the whole filling-out of the situation to the expcrienn: and imagination of the listener. A well-conducted guided biHasy leaves the participant more with the sense of having lived through a novel or dream than a short story, though the time of the tdlillg is perhaps no more than five minutes, excluding pauses for inller imaginative work. 2 Recall of buried stories from childhood. Everybody has stOries heard in childhood and of great significance then, which resist being dug up. They seem often to surface only in fragments, ami areas in and around them are often blocked. 3 Childhood fantasies. The waking dreams people wove for thelll selves as children, before reaching sleep. They may have b'cn influenced by elements from such SOl,lrces as adult tellers, TV, radio and books. They may had to do with atc;1S like fears, omnipotence, sexuality. 4 Dreams. There are a number of non-judgemental, l1ol1"<:1nalyric ways of working with dreams as stories variously understood hy different people in a group. There are, too, the Gesralt ltchlfiqlll'S for exploring a dream from the point of view of objects and people within it. ':lle have not included exercise material in the above areas bCGII1Sl.' our teaching situation did not allow us to reach the depth of 111l1tlLli truSl required 10 enter such delicate and fraught territory. PCOpll' interested in guided fantasies might find these two books of illtcn's(: G. Moskowitz, Caring and Sharing in the Foreip,n J.i7Il'.;l!dkl' Classroom, Newburv House, 1971'\, John O. Stcvcns, Au/(/rc!'/c.:;s: I I'Xjll'rill/('lltin,l!., 1',\'/JI'ril'/I, III,r:, l{",d l'l'upk 1'1'",,\, 111;\11, I !, 011 11, 1111" h", I", I III ',1 Cl 1 \ Will I, 11' III I ,11 l \ Ill', I 111'11 ( .11.1I111 'I I 1,,j ! >1 ,,111' ,11" I: I ,,11'1.11 .Ill "',11. 1 11,1 1.,1 I'''' ,,I i III I I