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and incidents either are the product of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any
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JULY
WEDNESDAY, July 18 — My name is Nick. Someday, if I grow up to become a gangster, perhaps I will be known as Nick the Prick. This may cause
some embarrassment for my family, but when your don gives you your mafia
sobriquet you don’t ask questions.
I am 14 years old (nearly) and live in Oakland, a large torpid city across
the bay from San Francisco. I am writing this in the tenuous privacy of my
bedroom on my annoyingly obsolete AT clone. My friend Lefty gave me a
bootleg copy of WordPerfect, so I’m doing some writing to try and learn the
command codes. My ambition is someday to be able to move entire paragraphs in a single bound.
My last name, which I loathe, is Twisp. Even John Wayne on a horse
would look effeminate pronouncing that name. As soon as I turn 21 I’m going
to jettison it for something a bit more macho. Right now, I’m leaning toward
Dillinger. “Nick Dillinger.” I think that strikes just the right note of hirsute
virility.
I am an only child except for my big sister Joanie, who has left the bosom of her family to live in Los Angeles and sling hash at 35,000 feet.
The next thing you should know about me is that I am obsessed with
sex. When I close my eyes, ranks of creamy thighs slowly part like some
X-rated Busby Berkeley extravaganza. Lately I have become morbidly aware
of my penis. Once a remote region accessed indifferently for businesslike
micturition, it has developed—seemingly overnight—into a gaudy Las Vegas
of the body, complete with pulsing neon, star-studded floor shows, exotic
animal acts, and throngs of drunken conventioneers perpetually on the prowl
for depraved thrills. I walk about in a state of obsessive expectancy, ever
conscious of an urgent clamor rising from my tumescent loins. Any stimulus
can trigger the show—a rhythmic rumble from the radiator, the word “titular”
in a newspaper editorial, even the smell of the old vinyl in Mr. Ferguson’s Toyota.
As much as I think about sex, I can only with extreme difficulty conceive of myself actually performing the act. And here’s another thing I wonder
about. How could you ever look a girl in the eye after you’ve had your winkie
up her wendell? I mean, doesn’t that render normal social conversation impossible? Apparently not.

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THURSDAY, July 19 — My mother just left for work. She gives people
driver’s tests at the Department of Motor Vehicles. As you might expect, she is
extremely well informed on all the arcane rules of the road (like who has to
back up when two cars meet on a one-lane mountain road). She used to keep
Dad up to date as he drove along on all the motor statutes he was violating.
That’s one of the reasons they got divorced.
I’m not speaking to her right now. Last Monday I came back from two
miserable days in my dad’s custody to find she had painted my bedroom a
ghastly pink. She said she had read this color was widely used in hospitals to
calm mental patients. I told her I wasn’t mentally ill, I was just a teenager.
Meanwhile, I am now embarrassed to invite my friends over. When you’re a
slight, unathletic teen who reads a lot and likes Frank Sinatra, you really don’t
want the word to get around that you wank your winkie in a room that looks
like Dolly Parton’s boudoir.
FRIDAY, July 20 — I got a headache from reading, so I thought I’d try
typing for a while. I’m still using the F3 (help) key a lot. Too bad life doesn’t
have an F3 key. I’d press it and tell them to send over two chicks—sixteen
years old and more than usually horny.
This summer I’m reading Charles Dickens. I’ve read David Coppertone,
Great Expectorations, Little Dorrito, and now I’m deep into A Tale of Two
Townies. Sydney Carton is so cool. If he were alive today I believe he would
be endorsing fine scotch on the backs of magazines. I like Chuck a lot, but
let’s face it, you could read him for years and never come to a dirty part.
I am boning up (you’ll pardon the expression) on Dickens in anticipation
of taking Miss Satron’s English Literature class next term. I’m going be in the
ninth grade at St. Vitus Academy. This, they tell the parents, is the most elite
and rigorous prep school in the entire East Bay. Only 40 scholarly wankers are
admitted each year from literally dozens of applications.
Ravishing Miss Satron has wonderful bone structure and wears tight
sweaters. She is also said to be extremely well read. Needless to say, she looms
like a titan in my masturbatory fantasies.
I am back to talking to my mother (my birthday is coming up soon). She
says she will buy new paint for my bedroom, but I have to apply it myself.
(Personally, I’d prefer a tasteful decoupage of Hustler outtakes.) She’s suggesting off-white this time, but I’m insisting on manly khaki.
SUNDAY, July 22 — Dad was supposed to pick me up at 10 A.M. for
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lor’s bungalow and found him still in bed. (Doubtless with his latest bimbette.)
Mom gave him one of her canned high-volume diatribes. At 12:10 he
screeched into the driveway, blasting the horn.
The drive over to Marin went about as I expected. First, you should know
Dad pilots a leased BMW 318i (the cheap one). He would dearly love to move
up to a more prestigious model, but—as he often reminds me—he is burdened
with crippling child-support payments. In the journey of 16 miles he changed
lanes 82 times, honked the horn seven times, and flipped the bird to four
drivers (mostly confused old ladies). Dad is more cautious with men now after
he was chased for 15 miles on the Nimitz freeway by a carful of Iranians
swinging lead pipes out the windows.
In between the scary moments, I tried to make conversation with Lacey,
Dad’s latest bimbette. She is 19, a newly minted alumna of Stanfort (with a
“t”) Institute of Cosmetology, and voluptuous in the extreme. Since I am
frighteningly inarticulate around girls, I force myself to practice with Dad’s
bimbettes. Lacey, however, seemed more interested in laughing like a maniac
and urging my father to “step on it, honey! Make that turbo scream!”
When we got to Kentfield, I learned that not only did Dad not have any
activities planned, he wanted me to mow his damn lawn. For free! “Why?”
said Dad. “Because, pal, I’d like to have something to show for my $583 a
month in child support besides a canceled check.” How about a loving relationship with your only son, you creep!
Finally, I agreed to do it for $5, pointing out that a gardener would
charge at least $50. “Yeah,” said Dad, “but you’re not Japanese.”
While I was gassing up the mower, Lacey came out on the patio in a
weensy bikini for some al fresco power tanning. You didn’t have to be a geologist to see that her body has more dramatic outcroppings than the coastline of
Albania. Later, Dad came out and invited Lacey in for a “nap.” Like all of
Dad’s bimbettes, she didn’t have to be asked twice. As they were going in, arm
in arm, I detected what looked to me like a smug glance in my direction from
Dad. What a competitive asshole! Perhaps that’s why I’m so uncompetitive.
I’ve curbed my aggressiveness in reaction to his relentless excesses. Fortunately, I am writing all these revelations down in a notebook for use someday
when I go into analysis. They should prove a real timesaver.
I just remembered. I never got my five bucks!
MONDAY, July 23 — Today I finished A Tale of Two Sissies. What a noble
and moving sacrifice. Could I ever perform such a deed for the woman I love?
Probably not.
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the library. I arrived to find the building full of unwashed people talking to
themselves. Why do the homeless take such a keen interest in literature? Will
this be my destiny someday? Reading Turgenev while residing in the back seat
of a ’72 Dodge Polara?
One particularly repellent fellow asked me for a quarter. I gave him my
standard reply: “I hear McDanold’s is hiring.” Not very compassionate, but
what do you expect from the spoiled offspring of two would-be yuppies?
The atmosphere was so dreary, I came back without a book. I’d go to the
bookstores in Berkeley, but Dad is late (as usual) with my allowance—penurious as it is. I have 63 cents to my name.
TUESDAY, July 24 — Nothing in the house to read except California
Farmer magazine. We get this because Dad is a copywriter for an obscure ad
agency in Marin that handles agricultural accounts. Were he free of familial
responsibilities, Dad would be in Paris, penning a Lasting Work of Important
Fiction. Instead, he goads bug-fearing farmers into despoiling the earth (and
their Mexican farmworkers) with mega-death herbicides. I was fooling around
in Dad’s office one day and discovered his thesaurus fell open naturally to entry 360: “Death — noun.”
I wrote this poem about his plight:
A writer of promise named Dad
Is quite literarily mad;
His kids are so grasping
They’ve made him a has been.
Now the hack bends his muse to an ad.
Noting I was bored, Mom suggested I go over to the park and find a
pickup game of basketball. She is, of course, completely out of her mind.
Short honkie teens do not play basketball on the public courts of Oakland.
WEDNESDAY, July 25 — One more week to my birthday. Mom finally
asked me what I wanted. “A 386 motherboard,” I replied firmly and decisively.
Most of the members of Byte Backers (St. V’s computer club) have already
upgraded. Some even have 586s!
She looked doubtful. “That sounds like something else for your computer. You spend too much time at that machine. You should get outside in the
fresh air. Have some fun.”
“Doing what?” I asked. “Stealing rebounds from future NBA stars?”
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FRIDAY, July 27 — My friend Lefty called up to say he was back from
his vacation in Nice. (I’ll be lucky if we go to Modesto for ours.) I invited him
over, but cautioned him that if word got out I had a pink bedroom, I would be
forced to tell Millie Filbert (who he’s had a crush on for years) why he’s called
Lefty even though he is right-handed.
In case you haven’t heard, Lefty’s erect member takes a sudden and dramatic turn to the east about midway up the shaft. Although this worries him a
lot, he’s never been able to bring it up (so to speak) with his parents.
“It would kill them to know I even get hard-ons,” Lefty says. He worries
this abnormality will lead to targeting errors when he gets older. “What if I
shove it up the wrong hole?” Lefty’s grasp of female anatomy is somewhat
tenuous; he imagines there are orifices galore down there.
Meanwhile, he pursues a treatment of his own devising. Every night before going to bed he tapes his dick to his right leg. Then, lying in bed, he mentally undresses Millie—thus putting counter-rotational tension on the shaft. So
far, this has not straightened out the bow.
After telling me about his trip (strange food, unintelligible natives, cute
girls without tops arrayed like cordwood on sunny beaches), he got to the real
news: he has found his older sister Martha’s diary. And a real page-turner it is.
She writes she “went all the way” with Carlo, an Italian waiter at their hotel in
France. And did a few other semi-kinky things with him as well. Now all she
can do is “think about sweet fat cock.” Under this sizzling confession, Lefty
has penciled in: “For a good time, call Nick Twisp,” followed by my phone
number.
I’m ready if she calls. My Conduit Of Carnal Knowledge may not be
particularly “fat,” but it probably qualifies under a broad definition of “sweet.”
And I’m sure I’m better read than that guy Carlo.
TUESDAY, July 31 — Tomorrow I will be 14. A milestone in any man’s
life. Time for some serious stocktaking. The issue can no longer be ignored: I
am still a virgin. To be honest I have never even kissed a woman to whom I
was not related by blood or marriage. In fact, I have never even held a girl’s
hand. Nor do I have any immediate prospects for finding myself digitally, oscularly, or genitally linked.
Since my last birthday I have gained a total of three and one-quarter
inches—two and one-half inches in height and three-quarter inch in erect penis length. If it were all the same to my DNA, I’d just as soon those figures
were reversed. I am still struggling to reach six inches, while Lefty has already
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voted to mental development. Still, if I am not destined to be tall or goodlooking, it’s only fair that I be granted some compensatory phallic elongation.
At the very least, I should be spared the ravages of adolescent acne. (My face
is beginning to resemble a pepperoni and eyeballs pizza.) I think they should
take some of the billions they’re throwing away on dandruff cures and cancer
research, and apply it to really important matters—like wiping out the scourge
of acne.

AUGUST
WEDNESDAY, August 1 — Happy birthday to me. Thirteen was a
crummy age; let’s hope 14 is an improvement. So far it’s been a real scrotum
squeezer.
Mom gave me $20 this morning to get my hair cut. She likes me to get it
professionally styled in a salon where they play loud rock music. That way I
can come out looking like a successful real estate agent, junior division. Instead, I go to the $9 places and pocket the change. (I feel I am still too young
to tip.) So I’m sitting there, minding my own business, when the barber says,
“By the way, did anyone ever tell you you’re going to be bald by the age of
30?”
What! Yes, it seems all signs point to a clear diagnosis of incipient malepattern baldness. But, I protest, my dad still has all (well most) of his hair. “No
matter,” replies the learned barber, “baldness is inherited through the mother’s
side.” Terror paralyzes me as I remember Uncle Al’s acres of clear-cut scalp.
Apparently, I am going to grow up to be a short, pockmarked bald guy. My
only hope for enjoying any intimate female companionship at all is to obtain
great wealth—as quickly as possible. That’s it for literature. It’s get-rich-quick
books for me from now on.
All this was so depressing, I had to go to Rasputin Records and buy two
Frank Sinatra albums (both from the ’60s when he could still sing). The clerks
are so condescending when you’re not buying the latest output of the Moist
Panties, Puking Libidos, or other such heroin-addicted, heavy metal group. So
I always tell them my purchase is a gift for my aunt in Cleveland. Personally, I
feel the world would be a much better place if every radio station played
Frank’s version of “My One and Only Love” at least once an hour. Fat chance!
Then, after dinner, Mom brought out this gaily wrapped package that
was precisely the right size and shape to contain a 486 motherboard. Eagerly, I
tore off the wrapping, ripped open the box, and stared in stunned disbelief. An
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Just what I always wanted. Another mitt for my closet. I now have enough gear
to equip a triple-A ball team.
Mom persists in believing I will someday bring glory to the family on
the playing fields of a grateful nation. Have I confessed to her that I’m always
the last guy picked when they choose up sides? Yes. Have I abased my manhood by admitting to my mother that I throw like a girl? Yes. Does she listen?
No! Just keep giving me mitts and someday I’ll turn into Rollie Fingers. What
I can’t understand, if she wanted to breed jocks, why did she mate with a dork
like Dad? He needs professional coaching just to pull a jockstrap on straight.
11:50 P.M. My birthday is almost over. No call or card from Dad. I am
squeezing a zit on my chin the size of metropolitan Fresno.
THURSDAY, August 2 — Our neighbor, Mr. Ferguson, brought over three
birthday cards for me that had been delivered to his house by mistake. The
postman for this neighborhood shuffles through his route in a drug-induced
haze. I suspect he even snorts his dog repellent.
Card Number One, from a prominent Marin advertising man, contained
a check for $15 (no doubt an impressive sum back when he was a troubled
teen). Card Number Two, from a voluptuous Marin hairdresser, contained a
full-frontal Polaroid of the sender in her most revealing swim togs. I have seldom been so deeply moved. Timidly, I allow myself to fantasize that she may
possibly be attracted to younger men. Card Number Three, from a globe-trotting flight attendant (my sister Joanie), contained a crisp new $100 bill. Not a
bad haul!
Here’s the message in Dad’s card: “Happy birthday, kid. The birthday
I’m really going to celebrate is your 18th! Ha-ha. Just kidding. Yours sincerely,
Dad.” It would serve that miser right if the state extended the cutoff age for
child support—say to 35.
I am rich! Gripped by the fever of materialism, I wander happily for
hours through the great shopping mall of the mind. “Spend, spend! Acquire,
acquire!” whispers the sweet subliminal music.
FRIDAY, August 3 — My bankroll is down to $87. All I have to show for
it is a headache, a stomachache, sore feet, an I’M SINGLE, LET’S MINGLE tee
shirt, a tube of industrial-strength zit salve, and a paperback book: How I
Made One Million Dollars in High School and Was Accepted by Yale by Herbert Roland Pennypacker.
Why are people so suspicious when a 14-year-old youth pulls out a $100
bill? OK, maybe I could be a crack dealer. What’s it to them! I wonder if teen
millionaire Herbert Roland Pennypacker has this problem.

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SATURDAY, August 4 — I came back from the library to find Mom cuddling on the couch with Jerry, her repulsive boyfriend. They immediately leapt
apart and pretended to be fascinated by the wallpaper. I can’t imagine why my
mother wishes me to believe her relationship with Jerry is platonic. Anyway
you slice it, I’ve got her beat for celibacy champ in this family.
Jerry is a long-distance truck driver, which fortunately keeps him out of
town a lot. His ultimate ambition is to go on permanent state disability. (Every
man needs a dream!) He files claim after claim (for a different incapacitating
debility each time), but the stuffy bureaucrats in Sacramento continue to insist
on solid X-ray evidence of degeneration. (He should send them a scan of his
skull.) Jerry says if he were African-American he would be “pulling down a
big state check, no questions asked.”
After 12 years with Dad, Mom apparently decided she needed a less intellectual consort. Not that Dad’s nonstop cultural one-upmanship qualifies
him as a deep thinker. His mind ranges widely: from arid to vapid, with stops
at banal, insipid, and shallow. But Jerry’s gray matter doesn’t even register on
the gauge. The needle sits there at Cretin and doesn’t budge.
Physically Jerry is also a curiosity. He is completely devoid of an ass. I
suppose he must sit on his spine. His pants hang perfectly flat, while out front
his angry red beer gut balloons out like the front end of a ’51 Studebaker. As
long as Mom’s known Jerry, I’ve been struggling to think of a commendable
thing to say about him. No luck. He may be God’s perfect asshole.
11:30 P.M. Woke up to the sounds of a woman screaming. It was Mom.
I’d scream too if Jerry were making love to me. Improbably, the dolt seems to
have some talent in this area. Mom did a lot of hollering with Dad, but never
that I can recall out of pleasure. Do all women scream at the moment of ecstasy? Why don’t they have 800 numbers where teens can call up with questions like these?
SUNDAY, August 5 — Another typical East Bay summer morning: foggy,
gray, and bitterly cold. I began this cheery day by sharing the breakfast table
with Jerry. After ten minutes of listening to him slurp his Cheerios, I was
ready to go for the meat cleaver. Pouring his coffee, Mom said, “Isn’t it nice of
Jerry to drop by so early?”
The woman takes me for a complete idiot.
After breakfast Mom turned on the furnace and we sat around reading
the Sunday paper. Jerry read the sports pages and all the used-car ads. He believes a man should never keep a car longer than two months. That way, he
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However stimulating his current vehicle, Jerry always keeps a big FOR
sign taped in the back window—so as not to miss any passing impulse
buyers. So far he’s had only tepid interest in his present car—a battered ’76
Chevy Nova, painted (by Jerry) in camouflage colors.
Lefty dropped by and we wanked off to my Penthouse collection. He has
marked all of his favorite spreads (so to speak), but usually selects the Pet who
resembles a mature Millie Filbert. After wiping up, he informed me his sister
found his addendum to her diary and is now on the warpath. Because of the
journal’s inflammatory contents, she can’t rat on Lefty to their parents. But she
has promised to make his life “a living hell.” We both agreed it is not wise to
cross a sexually frustrated woman. I was disappointed in her reaction, as I half
expected her to call.
Dad was supposed to take me out for a belated birthday dinner, but
he never showed. So I had takeout pizza with Mom and Jerry. The latter
drank an entire six-pack of Colt .45. Even his loving girlfriend looked appalled.

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MONDAY, August 6 — I painted my bedroom! The ghastly pink is no
more. What a lot of tedious work. I’m glad I’m an intellectual and so do not
have to look forward to a lifetime of such menial drudgery. I’d much rather sit
in front of a computer terminal and get my brain irradiated all day by an electron beam.
The khaki was rolling on too brown, so I mixed in some green I found
out in the garage. Turns out when you combine latex and oil-based paints, the
colors tend to separate on the walls. After a period of extreme indecision, I decided I liked the mottled effect.
When Mom got home from work, she let out a scream and said it looked
just like the prison cells of IRA detainees in Ulster. These unhappy chaps do
something to their walls you won’t find in Better Homes and Gardens. I told
her not to worry, that faux wall treatments were all the rage now and that a
decorator would have charged thousands to produce the same effect.
She said she would never step foot in my room again. Best news I’ve
heard in months!
Lefty just called in a panic. His sister told him that she saw Millie at the
mall holding hands with some college guy. I told him not to worry, that it was
just part of Martha’s campaign of psychological warfare. Lefty is naturally
feeling vulnerable, as he has not seen Millie all summer. He desperately wants
to phone her, but is too chicken. He says this separation anxiety “is almost
enough to make a guy look forward to going back to school.” Coming from
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TUESDAY, August 7 — Dad called from his office to apologize for
missing our dinner engagement. Someone broke into his Beamer and stole
Lacey’s purse. Since it contained both her address and door key, Dad had
to stay all night at her apartment to protect her and her valuables until she
got the locks changed. A good story, but he must have forgotten he’d
used the same one on me about six months before. Only the bimbette had
changed.
I asked Dad if he was giving much thought to my back-to-school
wardrobe. He asked me if I was giving any thought to a summer job. With the
conversation thus at an impasse, we hung up.
Lefty came over in a blue funk. His sister heard on the grapevine about
his penile eccentricity and told his parents. Naturally his mother got hysterical
and wanted to see it, but Lefty fought her off like a wild man. He has a doctor’s appointment tomorrow morning at 10 A.M. “If I don’t kill myself first,” he
says.
To cheer him up I suggested we call Millie to see how she was doing.
Lefty was dubious, but finally his curiosity won him over to the idea. I dialed
the number while Lefty listened in on the extension. After many rings, Millie’s
mother wheezed a dispirited “Hello.”
“May I speak to Millie, please?” I asked politely.
“Who is this?” sniffled the voice.
“Uh, a school friend,” I said.
“Not that monster Willis, is it?” she demanded.
“No, it’s Nick. Nick Twisp.”
“I’m sorry, Nick,” said Mrs. Filbert. “Millie is indisposed. And will be
for about the next seven and a half months.” Click.
This put Lefty in an even darker mood. It’s not easy to hear your childhood sweetheart may be expecting another man’s child. Especially when the
status of your own manhood is in question.
“My life is a living hell,” said Lefty as he departed.
WEDNESDAY, August 8 — I counted 39 hairs in the shower drain this
morning and 27 more on my comb. The long emasculating march toward disfiguring baldness has begun!
I also squeezed 17 engorged pustules on my face and seven erubescent
carbuncles on my neck. It will be a miracle if I don’t get blood poisoning. Yet,
though I look like a medieval plague victim, the world expects me to go on being a happy, busy teen. I despair, knowing every fresh eruption places another
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to put it more succinctly: pimples postpone pussy. Perhaps I should give up
fried food.
Lefty may have to get an operation! He has something called Peyronie’s
disease. In three months if vitamins don’t straighten him out, surgeons will be
chasing him with machetes. He is feeling totally humiliated. The doctor injected him with something that gave him a killer hard-on, then he had to lie
there and have his erection professionally examined. At first his mother insisted on being in the room, but Lefty refused to unzip until she split. Most
embarrassing of all, the doctor was a woman! And kind of a cute young one
too.
“The first time a woman touched my dick,” said Lefty, “and I didn’t enjoy it at all. I sure hope I’m not gay.”
Good news. Jerry is off on the road again. I hope he’s hauling cucumbers
to Bolivia. He sold his Chevy to a sailor at the Alameda Naval Air Station. The
camouflage should fit right in on the base. At least one car in the parking lot
will be fooling our enemies (whoever they may be).
I asked Mom at dinner if she really liked Jerry. Her reply: “That’s none
of your damn business!” After five minutes of angry silence, she went on:
“Jerry is OK. You should try to be nicer to him. How many men do you think
there are who’d be interested in a 41-year-old woman with two kids, no money,
and stretch marks? He’s no Cary Grant, but he’s better than nothing.”
Mom is a realist about everything except her age. She’s 43.
THURSDAY, August 9 — Lefty and I went for a hike up in the hills above
the UC campus. This is not like me, but even my body requires some exercise
occasionally. Lefty wanted to get out of the house. He made the mistake of
telling Martha he disliked her Joe Cocker album, and now she plays it incessantly.
It was sunny and mild, with a few fleecy white clouds floating like becalmed zeppelins above the azure bay. (I may save that sentence for recycling
in a future novel.) Rounding Inspiration Point, we were startled to spy in a secluded clearing down the ravine a naked couple making love. Naturally, we
crept closer for a better look. Finally, those Cub Scout forest skills were starting to pay off! If only I’d thought to bring my binoculars. They looked like Cal
students—a cute Asian coed and her honkie jock boyfriend, happily humping
away in the brown grass. They climaxed, rested for a bit, then hopped to it
again—while Lefty and I looked on in breathless silence.
After the show, we lurched off to find our own secluded spot for some
manual hydraulic relief. My explosive discharge felled a mature eucalyptus
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agreed crazed teen horniness locked us ever tighter in its torrid embrace. My
body is broadcasting a desperate signal: It needs it bad. Very bad.
SUNDAY, August 12 — Another fun-filled Sunday in Marin with Dad
and Lacey. One of the tragic consequences of divorce is that the kids are
legally obligated by the courts to spend a fixed amount of time with their dads.
In normal families, dads and children happily ignore each other.
It was a killer hot day. Even though the air conditioning in Dad’s Beamer
was on the fritz, he made us ride over with the windows up so the other motorists wouldn’t think he didn’t have any. The only compensation was an outrageously sexy bead of sweat the stifling heat brought out on Lacey’s upper lip. I
longed to daub it off—with my tongue.
Once in Kentfield, Dad said he would take me to buy some school
clothes if I washed his car. I agreed and got totally fried by the sun while degriming the fine German steel. Dad watched me like a hawk lest I drop the
sponge and pick up some paint-marring grit. (We both suffer from extreme
blemish anxiety.)
After lunch (at McDanold’s) we went clothes shopping in the shiny
Beamer—to the Sebastopol Flea Market! I got three shirts, two pairs of pants,
a jacket, and a belt—for a miserly total of $8.65. Dad was prepared to spend
more, but I drew the line at previously owned shoes. This fall I shall be going
to school dressed in the height of fashion—for the year 1973.
Lacey had on a groin-swelling yellow polka-dot sunsuit and alien invader’s sunglasses. She flirted with all the bikers selling motorcycle parts and
even knew two of the most criminal-looking by name. Dad was extremely jealous and did a lot of inward seething. He looks like heart-attack material to me;
I just hope he’s adequately insured.
Dad sprang for hot dogs at the flea market, so he didn’t feel dinner was
called for later. I took my hunger and new wardrobe back to Oakland. (But I
am not going to let him weasel out of the promised birthday dinner!)
While I was cooking up some frozen french fries (I feel the link between
fried foods and acne has not yet been positively established), the sailor dropped
by with two of his buddies looking for Jerry. It seems the Chevy went only 17
miles before the engine blew up. They also found evidence of a banana in the
transmission. When I told them Jerry was out of town, they looked quite crestfallen and promised to return. They also left the dead Chevy in the driveway.
Across the camouflaged hood someone had spray-painted, “Pay up or die!”
MONDAY, August 13 — Millie Filbert is getting married! To Willis, the
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on the grapevine and woke up Lefty this morning with the news. He exclaimed, “This is a day that will live in infamy!” Just kidding. Actually, his
precise words were “Great fucking balls ache!”
Lefty came over immediately for some peer counseling. I told him Millie
was a cheap tart and he was well rid of her. He agreed and said he hoped she
had a long and difficult marriage to an inveterate wife-beater. He said if he’d
known she was such an easy lay, he definitely would have gotten up the nerve
to ask her out. Instead, he wasted all those years worshipping her from afar.
Then, for emotional closure, I had him tear up the Penthouse Millie-look-alike
Pet. Lefty said he was feeling better, so we had a morale-boosting whack-off
session. Even though he has been sneaking extra doses of his vitamins, he still
looks as crooked as ever. Millie will never know what she missed.
I think the sunburn helped my acne. So I am trying to spend more time
outdoors. Even if I die of melanoma in 20 years, I feel it will have been worth
it. I asked Mom for some money to buy sunglasses, but instead she gave me
her old pair. It took me 45 minutes to chisel out the rhinestones. That accomplished, they still don’t look like a style Tom Cruise would wear.
Like an early-morning erection, the sailor came back. (I am trying to introduce more similes into my prose.) This time Mom had the pleasure of chatting with him. The sailor demanded she write him a check! She explained that
was impossible, but said she would try to contact Jerry. While the sailor
waited, seething nautically, she called Jerry’s dispatcher, who gave her the
number of a motel in Iowa City. When she called the motel and asked for
Jerry’s room, a woman answered! The woman said Jerry was in the shower and
could she take a message? Mom turned red, hung up, and told the sailor she
would get him his $900. Even if it was the last thing she ever did.
TUESDAY, August 14 — Mom found my Polaroid of Lacey! She claimed
she discovered it “while putting away some clean socks.” Yeah, like I always
keep my argyles hidden in the back of my bottom desk drawer. With the
parental Gestapo on patrol around here, privacy stops at the bathroom door.
And even that sanctuary is hardly inviolable.
Mom really hit the roof when I told her the well-proportioned semi-nudist was Dad’s latest girlfriend. She stared in horror at the photo, her face contorted by revulsion and envy. Then I got a 25-minute grilling about Lacey.
Mom takes a morbid interest in Dad’s love life (don’t we all?), so I don’t mind
inventing a few details here and there to watch her boil. To cope with my torrid
revelations, Mom chain-smoked throughout the interrogation.
I told her no, Lacey did not appear to live with Dad, but she did hang her
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spent a lot of time in the bedroom taking naps. I revealed that Lacey liked to
sit on Dad’s lap during Masterpiece Theatre and blow into his ear. (I made that
up.) I said she called him “Thunder Rod” and he called her “Sugar Puss.”
(True, believe it or not.) I told her Lacey liked fast cars, knew bikers by their
first names, and carried a small flask of brandy in her décolletage. (All true.) I
said she came from a prominent San Francisco family, graduated from Stanford at 19, had an IQ of 163, and did secret work for the government involving
hair. (More or less lacking a factual basis.) Finally, I said Lacey was fun to be
with, had a good sense of humor despite being such an intellectual, and had a
mature outlook on the beauty and wholesomeness of the human body. Therefore, I wanted her photo back.
Mom snorted, “That’s what you think, buster.” She said she was keeping
the Polaroid for evidence and had half a mind to have Lacey prosecuted for
corrupting a minor. “You’re still a child,” lectured Mom, taking multiple deep
drags on her cigarette. “You should be out playing sports. Not looking at disgusting pictures of naked harlots.”
I replied that Millie Filbert had played softball for years, but that hadn’t
stopped her from getting knocked up.
Mom told me to get my mind out of the gutter. So much for trying to
reason with a woman.
WEDNESDAY, August 15 — A sunny day, so I put on my sunglasses and
my I’M SINGLE, LET’S MINGLE tee shirt and walked all the way downtown to the
library. We live about three miles up from the center of town—in the nervous
zone between the affluent hills and the seething flats. Seeded baguettes in one
direction, barbecue in the other—it’s a short trip either way.
Because of the heat, the library smelled even worse than usual. I wish
some wealthy philanthropist would endow a foundation to distribute Right
Guard to the homeless. In the library bathroom a bookish-looking gentleman
about 30 glanced at my sunglasses and asked me if I wanted to go out for coffee. I said no, I was too young for dating. He seemed disappointed. I’m glad
that in spite of my zits and incipient baldness at least one person in this world
finds me attractive. If only he were a cute 16-year-old girl. But then what
would she be doing loitering in the men’s room?
I sat in the periodicals room for a few hours reading computer magazines. This always fills me with extreme hardware lust. Unrequited, of course,
like all my other passions. My bankroll is down to $72 and falling fast. At the
opposite end of the table a short fat girl about my age was reading Atari magazines. She kept looking over at me. Finally, she got her fat composed in a
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age her, but out of politeness I said yes I had an IBM AT clone. She said she
had an Atari ST and loved its color graphics for games and drawing. I said I
used my IBM mostly for word processing and “other serious tasks.” That took
the starch out of her sails. She was going to reply, but fortunately a librarian
shushed for quiet. When Ms. Atari got up to get another magazine, I sneaked
out.
After dinner tonight, we heard a semi-tractor hiss to a stop out front. It
was the assless Don Juan back from his Iowa assignations. Jerry pretended
nothing was amiss and feigned surprise when my mother lit into him. He disavowed any knowledge of the incident and said if a woman answered his
phone (which he doubted) it must have been the maid bringing more toilet paper. What a feeble and transparent liar! To my shock, Mom bought it. She even
kissed him!
As Mom fixed Jerry a much better dinner than she had served me, she
asked him what he intended to do about the deceased camouflaged hulk in the
driveway. Jerry viewed the matter with cool detachment. He said as much as
he would like to move the car, he could not—because, of course, it was someone else’s private property. He suggested Mom call the city and have it towed.
What about the angry sailor and his $900?
Jerry said if the sailor came back, Mom should simply remind him he
had purchased the car with Jerry’s standard guarantee: “Thirty days or thirty
feet. Whichever comes first.”
“I’m in the right,” announced Jerry, carving his steak. “That $900 is already invested in my new car. I pick it up tomorrow.”
“What did you get this time, honey?” asked Mom.
“A slab-sided Lincoln,” said Jerry. “A cherry ’62 convertible. Like the
one Kennedy was shot in. Only this one’s white instead of black.”
With Jerry, that stands to reason.
THURSDAY, August 16 — When I got up, the big tractor truck was still
parked outside. Thinking it would be fun to have extra guests for breakfast, I
sneaked downstairs and called the sailor in Alameda (I found the number in
Mom’s purse). He was very happy to hear Jerry was back.
At 8:12 we had three sailors at the front door and two at the back door.
When the doorbell rang, Jerry was slumped in a kitchen chair trying to wake
up enough to swallow coffee. He perked right up when Mom yelled the fleet
was in. He turned white, hissed at Mom to get rid of them, and ran upstairs.
The sailors cornered him in Joanie’s closet. (They hadn’t stopped to chat with
Mom.) When they grabbed him, Jerry went limp like a house cat caught with
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ground while the erstwhile Chevy owner went through his pockets. They found
$63 and change. Jerry said that was his entire life savings. The sailor poked
him hard in the beer gut. Mom whimpered, “Don’t hurt him!” I was shaking
with excitement. The sailors were breathing hard. Jerry looked like he was trying to climb out of his body.
“Honest, guys,” said Jerry, “that’s all I got!” The sailor hit him again.
Jerry lost his coffee down the front of his shirt. Mom screamed. I felt like
screaming. Jerry started to cry. They carried him downstairs and dragged him
outside to go through the cab of the truck. Mom yelled at me to call 911, but
one of the sailors said, “Touch that phone, kid, and I’ll slice your balls off.” I
didn’t have to be warned twice. In the truck they found Jerry’s jacket with his
credit cards and bankbook. So all five sailors and the rumpled truck driver
piled into a Navy van (“For Official Use Only”) and drove off to wait for the
bank to open.
Mom didn’t go to work. She spent the morning crying in the kitchen. I
feel terrible for ratting on Jerry. But what a stimulating way to start your day!
1:30 P.M. No sign of Jerry. Mom is frantic. The big question: if they murdered him, am I an accessory?
3:20 P.M. Jerry pulled up in his big white Lincoln. He had put the top
down, changed into his nice (for him) clothes, and was smiling from ear to ear.
He took us for a ride. What a beautiful car! The interior is as cherry as the outside—all chrome, plush carpet, and white leather seats.
Driving down to the bay, Jerry told us how he had outsmarted the U.S.
Navy. In the bank, when they found out he didn’t have any money in his account, the sailors made him get a cash advance of $836.72 on his Visa card.
Jerry agreed, but asked the teller for a cashier’s check instead of cash. The
sailor was pissed, but took it anyway since it was a bank-guaranteed check.
Then, when the sailors let him go, Jerry called up Visa and reported his credit
card had been stolen. The night before! “Boy,” chuckled Jerry, “is that dumb
sailor going to get a surprise when he tries to cash that check!”
FRIDAY, August 17 — Mom and I are going to Clear Lake for a week
with Jerry. We leave early tomorrow. The arrangements are being made sort of
suddenly. Don’t ask me why. I’m never consulted about these things. All I was
told is we’re going to be staying in a cabin on the lake owned by a friend of
Jerry’s.
I packed my grip. I’m taking my sunglasses, my harmonica, my zit salve,
three books: Bleak House, Atlas Shrugged, and The Function of the Orgasm
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whether to take my baggy swimsuit or my skimpy, form-fitting trunks. The
baggy suit looks dumpy, but the tight, form-fitting trunks don’t have enough
bulging forms to fit. So I packed both. Maybe the lake air will revive my dormant growth hormones.
I let Mom pack the cooking gear and sleeping bags. This always makes
her a bit touchy. Right before she and Dad split up, he went on a four-day fishing trip to Lake Shasta with the guys. Later, when Mom was putting away his
camping gear, she found a brassiere (size 42D) in the bottom of his sleeping
bag. Ever since then, the sight of ripstop nylon or a Coleman lantern always
puts Mom in a bad mood.
Lefty came over to say goodbye. He was acting kind of jumpy. I suspect
vitamin poisoning. Martha has stopped tormenting him with Joe Cocker and
has switched to their parents’ old Barry Coma records. We both agreed that
is hitting below the belt. Lefty threatened to tell their parents about the diary
revelations, but Martha has burned the evidence and says they’d never believe him. Until he gets some leverage over her, his life will remain a living
hell.
SATURDAY, August 18 — I’m on vacation! Believe it or not, I’m actually writing all this down in longhand on a legal pad for transcription later into
the computer. What a tedious process. I suppose, though, back when the pencil
was a new invention people must have thought it was a marvelous labor-saving
device. Then some genius thought of adding an eraser and everyone had to upgrade.
We hit the road right after breakfast. The phone rang steadily from 6
A.M., but Mom was under orders from Jerry not to answer it. I called Lefty before we left to check on battle casualties. His mom answered and said he was
still asleep in the back yard. He had pitched a tent and was now camping out.
“I hope the damp ground doesn’t aggravate his condition,” she said. I said
probably not if he slept on his back. She wished me a good trip and I said I’d
send them a postcard.
We took the Lincoln, of course. Jerry insisted on driving with the top
down. He had on baggy Bermudas, a TRUCKERS DO IT IN OVERDRIVE tee shirt,
and a hat made from Coors beer cans. Mom wore a halter top that looked like
an advertisement for Droop City. I was a bottle baby, so don’t blame me. She
also had on short shorts to show off her legs, which are nice if you like
bulging blue veins.
I sat in the back-seat wind tunnel. The whole four hours up to Lakeport I
was smashing bugs with my face at 70 miles per hour. After a while I looked
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couple of unidentified specimens dive-bombed my mouth and were swallowed
reflexively, leaving behind the lingering taste of brackish bug. Yuck.
As we passed trucks and motor homes, Mom waved to the drivers like
she was Miss Corn Dog of 1954. Just as we were overtaking a Greyhound bus,
Jerry went into a prolonged session of crotch rearrangement. Even through the
glaze of bug slime, I could feel the passengers’ curious stares.
Finally, the blue waters of Clear Lake came into view. Jerry wanted to
stop for lunch, but Mom was all for driving straight through to the cabin. It
took us 45 minutes to find the address—which turned out to be not a private
residence, but the Restless Axles Trailer Park! Six busy, motel-clogged blocks
from the lake.
Our trailer is a long, green, turd-shaped vehicle from some time in the
Truman administration. It has a little patch of grass with a wagon wheel and
some concrete dwarves, a dusty canvas awning over a small cement patio, and
a decrepit picket fence with a sign that reads: “My Green Haven.” Mom
looked like she was going to cry, but Jerry said it was “real cute” on the inside.
He was right. Inside was kind of dim and cool and cluttered and mustysmelling. Lots of old polished dark wood and 3-D religious art. Everything
was in miniature. Up front was a miniature kitchen. Then came a compact living room, followed by a condensed bathroom, a long closet with bunk beds
opposite, and then a tiny master bedroom with a shrunken double bed flanked
by little built-in tables with milk-glass lamps topped with rose-covered shades.
It was real cute.
Mom perked right up after she got the windows open. She resumed her
reign as Corn Dog Queen and waved to all the curious neighbors as we unloaded the big Lincoln. After washing my face in the toylike sink, I unpacked
my gear and put Frank on the tiny record player while Mom fixed lunch. After hot dogs, potato chips, and iced tea, Jerry scratched his balls, checked out
Mom’s low-slung halter, and suggested I go look at the lake. I got the message.
I took my sunglasses, zit salve, sun block, beach towel, and Atlas
Shrugged. This book weighs about five pounds and should come with a foldout handle and wheels. I lugged it along in hopes it might impress any literary
chicks I met on the beach.
I circled through the trailer park on the way toward the water. Most of
the trailers were old and looked like they had retired from the call of the open
road. A few trailerites were about—mostly old folks in their 30s and 40s. No
kids my age, unless they were all at the beach.
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hot. Lots of high school kids in souped-up cars and cute girls in skimpy
bathing suits. The beach was noisy and crowded, but I found a vacant spot in
the shade under a tree. There was a bit of a breeze off the lake, which is several miles wide at this point. Mt. Konocti rose, brown and sunbaked, above the
distant shore.
I read my book for a while, but kept getting distracted by the passing
bikinis. What a fantastic invention! All those enticing curves wrapped in small
bits of thin fabric. Here and there the teasing outline of a nipple or a faintly
perceptible furrow in that softly swelling vee below the navel. I got a killer
T.E. (Thunderous Erection) beneath my weighty book and could feel the sticky
warmth of lubricant oozing optimistically from the tip. In the shallow water
beyond the sand, tanned couples wrestled and splashed, pausing in their noisy
games to touch with their bodies and lips. I need a girlfriend!
After my T.E. subsided, I toured the town in the late-afternoon heat—the
local idle youth eyeing me suspiciously. Not even a bookstore or movie theater. What am I going to do here for six days?
When I got back to “My Green Haven,” Jerry was kneeling on the cement patio with his shirt off trying to light the propane water heater. His beer
gut bobbled and hopped with each cuss word. No luck. We could hear the hiss
of gas, but the pilot refused to light. Six days of cold water loom ahead.
The Corn Dog Queen has mastered the abbreviated kitchen and made a
great dinner of fried chicken, potato salad, and corn on the cob. Rhubarb cobbler for dessert. Jerry guzzled Coors and rhapsodized at length on the nomadic
life. He is hot to buy a trailer he can hitch to the Lincoln. “Just big enough for
the two of us,” he said to Mom. They exchanged a sloppy kiss, while I sat
there feeling like an unexpected guest on a honeymoon cruise.
I was welcome to do the dishes. While I battled chicken grease with cold
water, Mom tweezed hairs out of her legs and Jerry scanned the local paper for
trailer ads. We were interrupted by a knock on the door. It was a thin, ancient
lady in white gloves and a flowered dress. She introduced herself as Mrs. Herbert Clarkelson, our neighbor, and invited us to a prayer meeting. Surprise!
This is a church-run trailer park with its own meeting hall. They have services
every day. Mom declined the invitation, but said maybe we’d come tomorrow. I
can’t wait.
We went to bed to the sounds of hymn singing in the distance. Mom pretended that the issue of sleeping accommodations had just occurred to her and
suggested I take the bunk bed while the “adults” took the back bedroom (as if
they hadn’t been flogging the mattress back there all afternoon). I agreed.
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the lamp, my afternoon T.E. reasserted itself. I was all for putting it out of its
misery, but any sort of vigorous arm movement shook the entire trailer. I went
at it anyway, and just as I was about to blast a hole through the ceiling, Jerry
kicked the wall and yelled, “Hey, kid, you wanna beat your meat go outside!” I
told him I was scratching my foot.
Just wait ’til that jerk wants some privacy. I’m going to stick to him like
glue. Meanwhile, I hope I don’t get terminal blue balls.
SUNDAY, August 19 — This may not be very coherent. I got about two
hours sleep last night. Interruptions included returning churchgoers chatting
about Armageddon timetables, barking dogs, Jerry’s snoring, Mom talking in
her sleep, Mom and Jerry trooping past me to the bathroom, trucks roaring by
on the highway, and Mrs. Clarkelson knocking on the door at 6 A.M. to announce that early church services began promptly at 7:15. Donuts would be
served.
Since our trailer shower had no hot water and was only big enough anyway for bathing a penguin, I put on my robe and walked sleepily over to the
park rest room. This turned out to be an austere cement shed with three dripping shower heads and no privacy walls. A fat bald man was toweling himself
off when I arrived. I brushed my teeth (for about 10 minutes!) while he slowly
dressed. Finally he left and I disrobed and turned on the shower. Ten seconds
later, Jerry entered, stripped, and stepped under the shower next to mine.
Guess what? The guy has more hose than a nervous fireman. No wonder
ladies go for him. If Jerry had been my father, I’d be dumb, happy, and have a
penis length in the 99th percentile. I’d also stand to inherit a nifty Lincoln convertible. Still, would I make the switch if I had the choice? I wonder!
Jerry is a very athletic showerer. He hopped around, splashed, gargled,
spit, belched, and warbled truck-driving songs. I cut short my ablutions and
left as soon as I could. As I walked out, red and damp, I passed a cute girl
about my age going in the women’s door. Garbed in a modest but nonetheless
alluring flannel robe, she had chestnut shoulder-length hair, pretty blue eyes,
and an aristocratically chiseled nose. She smiled at me! I panicked and returned a philosophical scowl. As we passed, she whispered softly, “Your robe’s
open.” Flustered, I looked down. No winkie in sight. That was a bald-faced
tease!
After breakfast, I walked through the trailer park hoping to run into her
again. No luck. I figured she must be having donuts with God like the rest of
the residents. Then, when I got back to our row, there she was—sitting on our
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white blouse just sheer enough to reveal the shape of her bra. She was thin, but
interesting developments were in progress. As I walked through the gate, she
looked me straight in the eyes and said, “Hi, stuck up.” I stammered an incoherent reply. Mom said, “Nick honey, meet Sheeni.”
Sheeni had to go to the grocery store, and invited me along as her bearer.
I would have carried a Volkswagen. As we walked into town, my panic started
to subside. I can actually talk to girls!
She is 14, is one of two intellectuals living in Ukiah, California, and is
an atheist. This causes terrible fights with her Bible-thumping parents. She refuses to go to church and now the entire trailerite congregation is praying for
her salvation. Her father is a big-time lawyer in Ukiah. I told her I never heard
of a born-again lawyer. Sheeni said yes and he’s prepared to sue for Christ.
She has been reading the existentialists this summer—Camus, Sartre,
and other guys I never heard of. She said Ayn Rand is deplorable and will
damage my “inchoate mind.” She promised to draw up a study list of books
for me to read. When she’s 18 and free of “parental bondage” she wants to go
to Paris and study philosophy. She is the only person in Ukiah studying
French-language tapes.
In the grocery store, Sheeni bought a large watermelon and permitted
me to buy her a Popsicle. We walked back slowly in the heat, the watermelon
progressively dislocating my shoulder. Sheeni said the arrival of the Lincoln
excited considerable interest in the trailer park. Most residents are still reserving judgment, although Jerry’s large beer cooler on the patio has been disquieting to some. Sheeni said she liked my mom, but thought my father was “perhaps rather dim.” I hastened to point out that Jerry was only my mother’s
consort and that I had absolutely no blood links of any kind to him. This
seemed to put her mind at ease.
As we passed the cement-block meeting hall, we could hear the congregation inside shouting and stomping. Sheeni said that even though she was no
longer a believer, she had to admit that the services were “wonderfully aerobic.”
“You could say the same thing about sex,” I surprised myself by saying.
Sheeni stopped and looked at me intently. “I hope, Nick,” she said,
“you’re not going to turn out like all the other young men and have nothing on
your mind except carnal pleasures.”
I assured her that was not the case. “I hardly ever think about sex,” I lied.
“I think about it all the time,” Sheeni said. “It’s the hormones at work,
you know.”
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cle. I longed to taste the orange sweetness on her lips. She has lovely, full lips
that cry out to be kissed. Sheeni turned in at a trailer I had noticed before. It
was a 1959 Pacemaker (not to be confused with the medical device) and was
the only two-story mobile home in the park. “Father bought it so he could look
down upon the world,” Sheeni explained. “For him Christian humility has always been a struggle.”
I carried in the three-ton watermelon and Sheeni gave me a tour. Downstairs was a kitchen, living room, master bedroom, and bath. The usual dark
paneling and (somewhat more tasteful) religious art. Up a short flight of stairs
were two tiny bedrooms and a bathroom you couldn’t stand up in. My heart
was pounding furiously as Sheeni slid open the door to her miniature bedroom. It was cluttered with books, but otherwise was very neat. On the wall
above the tiny, girlish bed was a poster of Jean-Paul Belmondo holding a revolver in a sexually suggestive manner.
“Didn’t you love Breathless?” Sheeni asked eagerly, sitting on the bed.
“Yes,” I lied, hunched over under the low ceiling like a nervous teenaged
Quasimodo.
“It’s my favorite film,” she announced. “What’s yours?”
I tried to think of a suitably highbrow movie. “Tokyo Story,” I said. “I
think Mizoguchi is a great director.”
“Tokyo Story,” said Sheeni. “A great film. But wasn’t it by Ozu?”
I may be completely out of my league.
Sheeni jumped up, checked her face in the tiny dresser mirror (it was
still beautiful), and led me downstairs. With extreme anxiety, I asked if she
would like to go to the beach that afternoon. Sheeni smiled and said she would
love to, but had to visit an “indigent ill person” her father was suing. We made
a date for a swim after breakfast tomorrow. As I left, Sheeni waved from the
doorway and said, “Goodbye, Mr. Twisp.”
I forced myself to laugh. She may imagine that jest is original with her,
but I have been hearing it since preschool days. When people ask what writer I
think is overrated, I always say James Hilton. I wish the twit had caught
beriberi in Shangri-la.
I walked home in a state of supremely exalted exhilaration. I wonder
if this is what religious ecstasy feels like. Perhaps I should ask Mrs. Clarkelson.
The rest of the day passed in a fog. I think we had some sort of meat for
dinner. Jerry drank too much beer and asked Mrs. Clarkelson, when she
stopped by to invite us to the evening prayer service, to come in and sit on his
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aged to sunburn most of her chest and is irascible in the extreme. I played a lot
of F.S. love ballads and thought about my future life in Paris with Sheeni.
Where can you buy French-language tapes?
MONDAY, August 20 — Another embarrassing shower episode. I may
have to give up bathing on this trip. All night I slept in a state of lingering
tumescence (I wonder why). Then, in the shower my hard-on returned—just as
the fat, bald guy walked in. He smiled a lot at me and, while lathering his
hairy white flab, kept stealing fond glances at my perky pecker. His got kind
of perky too. (Not that I was looking!) I got out of there as fast as I could.
Back in the trailer I was trying to decide which bathing suit to wear,
when Mom and Jerry waltzed through from the bedroom. Jerry said, “Look,
Estelle, your kid’s got a load in his peashooter.” Mom looked. “Better put
something on,” she said. “If you’re going out.”
No, I was going to walk to the beach naked!
For my first semi-clothed date with Sheeni, I decided the baggy trunks
would be better—especially in view of the present hair-trigger on my erectile
response. For this beach excursion I packed along a towel, sunglasses, sun
block, notebook, wallet, pen and pencil, book (The Function of the Orgasm),
and condom (one must always be prepared, should the times demand it, to
grow up fast).
Sheeni answered the door in a knockout yellow swimsuit that concealed
yet paradoxically revealed her flowering nubility. She was so breathtakingly
lovely, the pleasure I felt in gazing upon her jonquil-draped curves bordered
upon physical anguish. Sheeni invited me in and introduced her father—an
immense, outsized, larger-than-life, gray-haired, florid-faced, verdant-eyebrowed, loud-voiced ogre in a rumpled blue suit.
“I understand you have invited my daughter to the beach,” he boomed.
“Er, yes, Mr. Saunders,” I stammered.
“Aha!” he bellowed, his great eyebrows rising. “Then I trust, sir, you are
aware that in doing so you have entered into an oral contract to perform in
loco parentis, i.e, to provide for the safety and well-being of aforementioned
minor female.”
Sheeni told her father to shut up. He didn’t seem to mind. She picked up
a large straw beach bag and pushed me out the door. “Bye, Father,” she said.
“Vaya con Dios!” he rumbled.
We walked along in the warm sunshine toward the beach. I wanted to
take Sheeni’s hand, but was paralyzed by adolescent indecision. My companion brazenly looked me over. “You’re all skin and bones,” she said. “Your hair-

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cut is impossible. Those sunglasses are an optical outrage. And I believe you
could invite my father in to share those awful swim trunks with you.”
The thought was repellent in the extreme. “I wasn’t thinking of inviting
your father,” I said suggestively.
Sheeni smiled, wrinkling the faint but lovely freckles on her nose. “Well,
I don’t think my mother would be particularly interested.”
“I wasn’t thinking of your mother either,” I said. We passed Mrs.
Clarkelson, who cut us dead.
“How about, Mrs. Clarkelson?” asked Sheeni. “I hear she’s hot for your
bod.”
“She’s a bitchin’ chick,” I replied. “But wrinkles aren’t my scene.”
“You like them younger?” Sheeni inquired.
“About 14.”
“That’s statutory rape. A felony, I believe.”
“Not if you’re married.”
“God!” exclaimed Sheeni. “Don’t make me barf!”
Since it was a weekday, the beach was pleasantly uncrowded. We spread
our towels in the sand and lay down in the hot sun. Sheeni’s book was The Red
and the Black by some well-dead Frog named Stendhal. She inspected my
reading material approvingly and said Wilhelm Reich was one of the great
thinkers of the 20th century. “His death in a U.S. federal prison was both a
tragedy and a travesty,” Sheeni declared. I was shocked. I didn’t know you
could be sent to prison for writing a sex manual.
Sheeni handed me her tanning lotion and asked if I wanted the arduous
task of applying it to her “exposed areas.” I gulped and assented. She rolled
over on her stomach, exposing her exquisite back. My hands shook as I
smoothed the sweet oils into her tanned, warm flesh. Instantly I got a killer
T.E., which I hoped my billowing trunks would conceal.
“My, you get turned on easily,” Sheeni observed.
My hands froze on her back.
“Oh, don’t stop, Nick.” she said. “We all have our hormones to cope
with. Girls are fortunate in that it doesn’t show. For all the world knows, my
vagina could be moist with desire as we speak.”
“Is it?” I asked nonchalantly.
“That’s none of your business, I’m sure.”
“Well,” I said, “then why are we discussing my penis?”
“Oh, I suppose because the subject came up. I find it very boring.”
“The topic or the penis?” I asked.
“Both,” she replied. “Shall you do my front too?”
I gulped. “OK. I’m up for it.”

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Sheeni rolled over on her back, her young breasts straining up against
the yellow spandex. “I hope you don’t find it too stimulating, Nick.”
“I’m coping,” I said. I started with her flawless legs, gliding on the oil all
the way up to within a finger’s reach of her sweet apex. I could feel her muscles tense as the slippery hand approached, then swerved away in the final split
second before contact. With each daring pass, a roar of approval rose from my
groin. Then finally, the reckless hand swerved too late, and a finger lightly
grazed the softly yielding vee.
“Uh, Nick,” said Sheeni, looking up over her sunglasses. “Maybe you
better do the top now.” I moved upstream, lubricating her tanned arms, shoulders, and neck. I saved the chest for last, smoothing oil on the softly undulating foothills in the public domain. So close, but off-limits (for now!) rose the
tantalizing, spandex-shrouded highlands. Desperately overstimulated, my T.E.
throbbed, my balls felt like they were going to explode.
“Thanks, Nick,” said Sheeni with sickening finality. I handed her the
tanning lotion, hoping she would volunteer to do me. She didn’t. She opened
her book and soon was engrossed in Great Literature. I did the same. Incredulous that relief was not at hand, my erection clung on defiantly, forcing me to
lie on my stomach. Soon I could feel my back barbecuing. I read through 27
difficult pages of The Function of the Orgasm and did not encounter a single
tantalizing sex tip. Meanwhile, Sheeni read avidly, pausing frequently to make
long notations in the margins.
3 P.M. Sheeni and I are sitting in a cafe drinking coffee and writing in our
journals. Except for the smell of burgers, the sound of the C&W jukebox, and
the sight of two loutish truck drivers eating apple pie, we might be in a Paris
bistro. Sheeni has been keeping a journal since the age of eight and claims to
have written more than one million words. She writes rapidly in a charming
ovoid script, pausing now and then to look up in abstracted concentration. I
saw her writing my name! Then she asked if “puerile” was spelled with one
“l” or two.
We have to go. The slatternly waitress just shuffled over and told us to
leave. Apparently we are violating their “no loitering” policy. Sheeni became
incensed, her fine nostrils flaring dramatically. She told the woman she found
their coffee “unpalatable,” their premises “unsavory,” and their rudeness “unalloyed.” Unchastened, the waitress hollered, “Get out!” We did so, but not before Sheeni proclaimed in a loud, clear voice her contempt for “rural America
and all its denizens.” I backed her up with a gesture of protest. I withheld the
tip.
8:15 P.M. Dreadful news! Sheeni has a boyfriend! She dropped this
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Ukiah’s other intellectual. He is six-two, speaks French, plays the piano, is a
champion swimmer, and writes “Futurist Percussive” poetry. The affected twit
is named Trent Preston. Sheeni recited this recent work by him:
RamDam 12
Sizzle mop
Crunch down
Safety net
Hot! Hot! Hot!
Void.
If that’s poetry, I’m a turkey scrotum. She says Trent has a brilliant mind,
and daily writes her an “intellectually stimulating” letter. I just hope it’s only
her intellect he stimulates.
Temporarily deranged by this shocking revelation, I announced that I too
receive daily missives of a culturally enlightened nature from my sweetheart.
Sheeni probed for details. I said her name was Martha, she was 16 and had
just returned from Nice, where she had been conducting sociological research
on the assimilation problems of Italian migrant workers. In addition, I said she
was a trained musicologist, earned a large income as a professional model specializing in lingerie, and her IQ was registered in Washington with the FBI as
a national resource.
Sheeni looked somewhat taken aback. She said Martha sounded like a
“wonderful person” and hoped that someday soon she would have the pleasure
of meeting “this remarkable teen.”
I said that was unlikely as Martha rarely ventured out of the city “to
small, out-of-the-way places like Ukiah.”
“I certainly can’t blame her for that,” said Sheeni bitterly. “Trent feels
even more stifled there than I do.”
Poor Trent!
We walked on in angry silence to the Saunders’ towering trailer. Sheeni
looked pensive. I felt terrible. She stopped by their patio gate and asked me
how my sunburn felt. I said it was no worse than medieval torture. She said
thank you for the lovely time. I said don’t mention it. We stood there awhile,
not saying anything, and then I left. As I turned the corner, I saw her extract a
letter from their mailbox (shaped like a miniature two-story trailer). No doubt
Trent’s latest literary masterpiece.
I am miserable. Plunged from exaltation to suicidal depression in one
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the Redwoods. As he is older, taller, better-looking, and more accomplished
than I, he must die. The gods demand it.
Things were generally tense at “My Green Haven.” Mom went to the
park laundromat this afternoon and was pointedly snubbed by all the ladies.
Then Jerry came back from a beer run to discover someone had scrawled
“SHAME SINNERS!” in scarlet lipstick across the windshield of his Lincoln.
Mom speculates that somehow word has gotten around that she and Jerry are
cohabitating without benefit of wedlock. I fear the source of the leak may be a
beautiful young temptress who has ripped out my heart and stomped on it.
TUESDAY, August 21 — Here’s an hour-by-hour chronology of the worst
night of my life:
1 A.M. I decide it was just a case of puppy love and look forward to all
the interesting women I shall meet in the future.
2 A.M. I conclude the only way out is suicide. I turn on the light to write
a poignant suicide note. Sheeni will see Trent for the shallow pedant he is and
will always treasure my memory. Jerry yells at me to turn out the light.
3 A.M. Running through the options, I decide I am too chicken for any of
the manly, violent means of suicide. I shall swallow sleeping pills. Where to
get them, though?
4 A.M. I decide I can’t die an inviolate virgin. Either I find a way to get
laid soon or suicide gets postponed until after high school.
5 A.M. I decide it will be too painful to see Sheeni again. I shall ask Mom
and Jerry if we can cut short our vacation and return to Oakland. Someday,
Sheeni will read about me in The New York Review of Books and will realize
she has wasted her life.
6 A.M. Violent panic! I have to see Sheeni again! We have only three days
left together! Maybe she’ll like me better than Trent. Even if she doesn’t, and I
am completely humiliated, it will still be worth it. Why did I waste all of yesterday evening when I could have been with her? Even if she does marry Trent
someday, I could still be their loyal best friend—like Sydney Carton. I could
even save their child from a runaway horse. Then when Trent goes to a tragic
early death (poets have a high mortality rate), Sheeni could turn to me for solace. Everything will work out!
6:05 A.M. I drag my weary body out of bed and stumble over to the men’s
shower room. At least I will avoid the amorous fat bald guy. Wrong! He enters
quickly and sheds his robe with a leer. He approaches, grossly naked. I retreat
under the steaming spray.
“Mind if I share your shower?” he asks coyly. “I hear there’s a drought
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As the corpulent blob looms ever closer, I grope for the knob. Finally,
my hand touches metal and I give it a turn. The steaming spray turns to a chilling blast. The blob leaps back.
“Sorry,” I say, my teeth chattering. “I like my showers cold.”
Ten minutes later, dressed, teeth brushed, ready for a busy day, I knocked
on the door of Sheeni’s trailer. I prayed Mr. Saunders wouldn’t answer. Improbably, God was listening. After several tense minutes, the door opened and
Sheeni peered out sleepily. My heart leaped! Oh, to roll over some morning
and meet those beautiful, sleep-fogged blue eyes. Sheeni clutched the undiaphanous terry cloth to her exquisite form.
“Nick? God, what time is it?”
“Sheeni, hi! Nice to see you. I was out for a walk and thought I’d drop
by. I’m sorry I got upset about Trent. That was very immature. He sounds like
a great guy. I’d like to hear more of his neat poetry. Would you like to go to the
beach? How about breakfast?”
Sheeni told me to come back in two hours. She said she was going on a
hike and I could come along “if I liked.” Just the two of us together in the
primeval wilderness. What rapture!
Suddenly, I was ravenous. I walked into town, found an open cafe, and
ate six chocolate cream-filled donuts. As the life-giving sugar entered my
bloodstream, I felt immediately restored. I also figured I’d be safely back in
Oakland before the zits started erupting.
Sheeni was ready when I returned promptly at 8:15. She was wearing
stout hiking boots, khaki shorts, brown work shirt, red bandanna neckerchief,
and an Australian bush hat. A large canvas knapsack was slung over her shoulders. She looked like the world’s most desirable Girl Scout.
“Nick, where are your hiking boots, water bottle, provisions, survey
maps, and compass?” she inquired.
I said I wasn’t hungry, wasn’t thirsty, had an infallible sense of direction,
and preferred to hike in running shoes. “Like John Muir,” I said, “I enter the
wilderness with nothing more than my journal and a childlike sense of wonder.”
Sheeni said OK, but she didn’t plan to baby “any slackers.” She set a fast
pace out of town. We walked through rolling brown hills that seemed, mostly,
to roll uphill. She asked me if I had heard from Martha. I said yes, Martha reports she is busy modeling and has almost finished her monograph on B.
Coma, an early blues singer. I asked if Trent was well. Sheeni said he was very
well, thank you, and was hoping to visit Lakeport that weekend. The miserable
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Friday. Sheeni said yes, that was unfortunate, as she was certain the two of us
“would become great pals.” I said any friend of hers was a friend of mine.
“Likewise, I’m sure,” she replied.
Despite the heat, Sheeni maintained a torrid pace. All those aerobic
church services have left her awesomely fit. I followed as best I could, keeping
up my spirits by concentrating on the rhythmic movement of her exquisite ass
inside her hiking shorts. After a while the exertion, fatigue, lack of sleep, nervous excitation, and six greasy donuts began to be felt in my lower digestive
tract. I excused myself and ran into a clump of trees. Some time later, I stumbled back down the trail to find Sheeni reading my journal!
I grabbed it away from her. The brazen sneak wasn’t even embarrassed.
She said I had egregious handwriting, a fairly decent vocabulary, and Trent
was not an “affected twit.” I replied that my private thoughts were “none of her
damn business.” How would you like it, I demanded, if I read your journal?
“Read it if you like,” she said, pulling the blue notebook from her pack. I
opened it to the last entry and squinted at the neat script. Except for names (a
lot of them mine!), it was undecipherable gibberish.
“It’s a shorthand of my own devising,” said Sheeni smugly. “A necessity
for an intelligent child in a household with two prying Christian parents.”
“What does this say?” I demanded.
“Wouldn’t you just like to know,” she teased, taking back her notebook.
“That last passage would be of particularly compelling interest to you too.”
I grabbed her by her thin, delicate wrists and demanded she spill the
beans. She refused. We wrestled. Sheeni protested. I held on tighter. Her perspiring, squirming body brushed against mine. Instant T.E. She saw it. “Hardon!” she chanted, “Nickie’s got a hard-on. Nickie’s got a hard-on!” I turned baboon-ass red and let her go. She continued to chant. I told her to stop. She
went on. “Nickie’s got a hard-on!” I put my hand on my zipper. “Stop or I
flash,” I said.
“You wouldn’t dare,” exclaimed Sheeni.
“I will too,” I said.
“You haven’t the nerve,” she taunted.
I unzipped and fished around in my shorts. My erect pecker blinked, surprised, in the bright sunshine. Sheeni studied it with interest.
“It’s extremely ugly and not very big,” she said.
I suddenly felt very shy and put away my wilting tool.
“I don’t know why boys always want to expose those ugly things,”
Sheeni said, sitting on a tree stump. “Trent is obsessed with showing me his.
He imagines it gives me a thrill.”

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“I suppose it’s quite good-sized,” I said.
“Oh, enormous,” she replied. “Mother Nature can certainly be quixotically extravagant at times.” (I hate you, Trent.)
I had to know. “Have you and Trent got it on?” I asked, sitting on the tree
trunk beside her. Our bodies touched, but Sheeni didn’t pull away.
“I haven’t made love with Trent, if that’s what you want to know,” she
said. (Thank God!) “But I’m not a virgin.” (Rats!)
Sheeni said when she turned 13 she resolved to discard the crushing burden of her virginity. She promptly gave it up to a convenient high school jock
in her neighborhood named Bruno.
“Did you enjoy it?” I asked.
“Hardly,” she said. “The clod was a clumsy dolt, but fortunately it was
all over in five seconds. I found the act slightly less erotic than a gynecological exam. But according to the sex manuals I’ve read, it’s supposed to get better with practice.”
“Why not practice with Trent?” I asked. (Or me!)
She explained she was waiting for “grand passions in romantic European
venues,” not “furtive backseat gropings in the California boondocks.”
I said I could see her point.
“You’re still a virgin, I can tell,” said Sheeni, smiling. (It shows!)
“Maybe that’s why I like you.”
Sheeni looked at me expectantly. I looked back and gulped.
“Kiss me, you wienie,” she said.
I put my arms around her and tentatively approached her luscious mouth.
Our noses dodged successfully and our lips met. Hers were soft and warm and
wonderful. Her lips parted and I tasted her sweet tongue. The experience was
awesome. We’re talking life-threatening heart palpitations and instant, killer
T.E. After a very long time, we broke off.
“My hard-on is back,” I confessed.
“That’s to be expected,” said Sheeni, jumping up. “OK, lover. Break’s
over. Let’s go!”
We hiked on. For twelve miles. In the heat. Straight up. My feet never
touched the ground.
Later, walking hand in hand through town on the way home, we passed
the fat, bald guy shuffling toward the beach in a grossly skimpy bathing
suit. He pretended not to know me. Sheeni smiled at him and said, “Hello,
Reverend Knuddlesdopper.” He mumbled an incoherent reply and hurried
on.
That fat pervert is the minister for the trailer congregation! Sheeni was
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she said, matter-of-factly. “Everyone knows it. He says extreme pedophilia like
his is irrefutable proof of the existence of the devil. The congregation says
special prayers for him—especially the younger boys.”
“Well, they haven’t helped,” I said.
“Get up early tomorrow,” said Sheeni. “And you can shower with me in
the ladies’ room.” She looked me in the eye. “If you dare.”
I said it was a date.
8:45 P.M. Hot and tired, the sun is beginning to set behind Mt. Konocti.
Sheeni and I are sitting at the tiny green picnic table on my trailer patio writing in our journals. Mom, after another day of righteous ostracism, was happy
to have Sheeni’s cheerful company for dinner. During the meal, Sheeni was
endearingly polite, mature, and even tried to make intelligent conversation
about trailers with Jerry. He mostly leered and stared at her chest. I may murder him later in his sleep.
Can’t write any more. I am completely brain dead. I am looking forward
to a good-night kiss (and possible furtive grope) with you know who.
9:30 P.M. I returned from grappling in the warm darkness with Sheeni to
find this note in my back pants pocket (and I thought she had been caressing
my ass!):
Dear Nick,
Please excuse me for reading your journal. I have
found that people who can successfully resist temptation
invariably lead depressingly stunted lives. Fortunately,
any willpower I ever had withered long ago.
Naturally, I was charmed by what you wrote about
me. Your contemplation of suicide and your invention of
Martha—both clearly prompted by your regard for
me—cannot help but evoke a strong emotional response
in my breast.
We are both young. At least one of us is innocent.
The future is so precarious. Yet I look forward to our
times together. Let’s just live and what happens will happen.
Yours affectionately,
Sheeni
I’m lying in bed, reading her wonderful note over and over again. My
first love letter! “. . . what happens will happen.” I hope that means what I
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WEDNESDAY, August 22 — Another perfect California summer dawn: a
cool breeze smelling of brown grass and eucalyptus, crystal sunshine, a pale
moon lingering in the blue morning sky, birds singing, dogs barking in the distance. A good morning to linger in bed, thinking about life and idly scratching
your dick. But I bounded up at 5:45—a man with a mission. I slipped a robe
over my nakedness, struggled for what seemed like hours to piss through an
anticipatory erection, brushed my pearlies, then quietly slipped out the trailer
door.
Except for birds twittering in the trees, the trailer park was absolutely
still and silent. As I approached the shower building I could hear the sound of
running water from the women’s side—enticing music to my ears. I feinted a
pass at the men’s entrance, then darted quickly around the corner and entered
through the forbidden door.
To my surprise, the women’s shower room had real stalls and privacy
doors. Sheeni, wisely, had selected the last stall in the row. I walked toward the
cloud of steam billowing over the old green plywood, my robe bulging out in
front like the prow of a Roman galley. In one smooth, effortless motion I shed
my robe, hung it on a hook, kicked off my slippers, opened the shower door,
and stepped into the steaming spray.
Sheeni looked up startled. Pendulous breasts! Sagging skin! Patch of
white hair under the drooping belly! Wrinkles! It was Mrs. Clarkelson!
“Excuse me!” I stammered. She screamed and hit me in the eye with a
bar of Lifebuoy. Blinded, I stepped back and slipped on the soap. I fell, knocking the naked old lady down on top of me. She struggled for a handhold,
grabbed my boner, and screamed. “Rape! Rape!” Pinned to the wet cement,
shower spraying directly in my face, I gulped for air but kept swallowing water. Mrs. Clarkelson pummeled my nuts with her fists. I groaned and pushed
her away, fingers repelling from contact with the ancient flesh. Then the door
swung open and a hand reached in and pulled me up. It was Sheeni. “Get out
quick!” she hissed. I grabbed my robe and ran, while Sheeni—still wearing
her bathrobe—dived into the hot spray to rescue the victim of my lust.
Back in the trailer, I threw on my clothes and woke up Mom. “I’m going
into town for breakfast,” I whispered. “If anyone comes around here, tell them
it was all a mistake. A big mistake.”
Startled, Mom wanted to know more, but I left before the inquisition
could begin. As I ran through the park, a few of the residents out on their patios eyed me suspiciously. Jet-propelled by adrenaline, I raced into town—not
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down four buttermilk bars, then lingered longer over a maple bar. A sheriff’s
car roared down the street (toward the trailer park), its siren wailing.
Sheeni found me on the beach an hour later. I was down by the water,
trying to wash human vomit (mine) from my tee shirt. She walked toward me
across the sand—a vision in lavender. Pale lavender blouse, unbuttoned, over
an aubergine two-piece bathing suit. Someday, I thought, this beauty will look
like Mrs. Clarkelson. How cruel is the hand of time. Better to die young than
witness such ravages.
Sheeni smiled, leaned over (a view of exquisite breasts, nestled in purple), and kissed me. “Yuck,” she said, “you taste awful. What have you been
doing?”
“Puking donuts,” I answered. “They taste better going down than coming
up. Should I go to the sheriff’s now?”
“Not this time,” said Sheeni, plopping down on the sand. “I saved your
ass.”
“She’s not going to press charges?”
“I don’t think so. I managed to convince her it was an accident. I told her
you were retarded and couldn’t read the sign. Odd, though, she initially had
some trouble believing that.”
“Thanks a pantsful!” I said.
“She wanted to know why—if it was all an innocent mistake—your privates were elevated.”
“My what?” I asked.
“That was the expression she used. Rather charmingly quaint. She
doesn’t know your privates are always getting elevated. They look a bit elevated now, for example.”
I looked down. She had a point there.
Sheeni went on. “Thinking fast, I said, of course, any man would get excited by the sight of her feminine charms—however innocent their intentions.
She did agree with that. So, anyway, from now on when you see her you have
to act retarded. Drool on your shirt and pick your nose—you know, sort of like
you’re always doing.”
“Oh yeah!” I leaped at her and wrestled for a kiss. As she squirmed in
my arms, my hand grasped the soft roundness of a breast. She laughed and
pushed me away.
“Off, off, Sir Vomit! Away with thy gastric breath!”
I desisted and lay back on the warm sand. Sheeni leaned over and dribbled sand on my chest. “Say, where were you anyway?” I demanded. “We said
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“Women are always discreetly late. It’s expected of us.”
“Swell. And the punctual guy fries in the chair for rape.”
“Don’t complain. At least you got to shower with a naked woman.”
Sheeni smiled slyly and leaned closer, pressing her warm breast into mine.
Grains of white sand clung like sugar to her tanned shoulders.
“Yeah, that’s true,” I said. “Better Mrs. Clarkelson than Rev. Knuddlesdopper. But I wish it was you.”
“Me too,” Sheeni said.
This time, she let me kiss her.
We spent the rest of the morning on the beach. Sheeni went in the water
for a swim, then came out—shivering, nipples tantalizingly erect under the
purple spandex—to towel off in the warm sun. She told me more about her
life. She has one sibling—a much older brother named Paul, who, in between
sampling advanced psychedelics, plays jazz trumpet. He called once about six
years ago to request they send his high school lifeguard certificate to a post office box in Winnemucca, Nevada. “An arid region,” remarked Sheeni, “not
known for its water sports.” That’s the last they’ve heard from him.
Despite Sheeni’s brilliant mind, she attends public school. Every kid in
Ukiah does. She’s known Trent since she was in kindergarten and he was a
glamorous first-grader. They’ve always been smarter than everyone else in
their school (especially the teachers), and therefore have had to deal with
much resentment and jealousy. That’s one of the bonds that unite them. (But
not, I hope, for long!) Trent has it a bit easier since he can use sports to prove
he’s still one of the guys. But since developing beauty to match her brains,
Sheeni has had to cope with outright overt hostility.
“Sometimes I wish I were plain and dull,” lamented the ravishing intellectual.
“So do I,” I said.
“But, honey, you are,” she teased.
To make her retract that slur, I had to resort to hand-to-hand (and handto-other-places) combat.
Later in the afternoon we drove around the lake with Jerry and the Corn
Dog Queen in the slab-sided Lincoln. Exiting the trailer park, we passed Mrs.
Clarkelson watering the petunia bed (shaped like a cross) in front of the cement-block church. She peered at me with fierce suspicion, so I crossed my
eyes and probed for a booger. Beside me in the back seat, Sheeni bit her hand
to stifle hysterics. Mom told me to “take my finger out of my nose and act my
age.”
Sheeni didn’t seem to mind the wind tunnel. She tied a scarf around her
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of my thigh. As we rounded a curve at 60, she reached over, yanked the sunglasses off my nose, and tossed them over her shoulder into the lake.
Our destination was toward Middletown, where Jerry had sniffed out a
trailer for sale. The place was deep in the boonies, but after a few wrong turns
on backcountry roads, we came to a tiny, run-down shack perched on stilts
over a steep hillside. The dusty yard was littered with dead cars, rusty school
buses, old fruit-processing machinery, and a decrepit Ferris wheel from some
long-extinct midway. Residing in the rusty junk were assorted ill-kept dogs,
cats, chickens, goats, and a pig or two. The squire of this manor was a toothless old geezer with the world’s largest beer gut. Jerry’s third-trimester bulge
wasn’t even in the competition.
The geezer led us up a dusty track to a corrugated-iron shed. The trailer
was inside. It appeared to be an RV for midgets. Over twenty feet long, it was
little more than four feet high. Mom looked concerned. “Jerry, what do we
do?” she whispered. “Crawl around inside on our hands and knees?”
The geezer laughed. “Watch this,” he said. He opened a small compartment above the back bumper, turned a knob, and began pumping a metal handle. With each stroke, the trailer rose a notch, until it had miraculously doubled in height. “Saves on gas,” said the geezer.
Sheeni elaborated, “The lowered profile yields reduced wind resistance
on the highway.”
Jerry, I could tell, was enthralled. We all trooped through the tiny home
on wheels. It was newer than “My Green Haven” but not by much. In the front
was a dinette for four, then came a miniaturized kitchen, followed chastely by
two single beds separated by a modesty aisle. In the tail was a compact bathroom complete with sink, marine toilet (smelling of old piss), and a shiny,
stainless-steel bathtub big enough for an adult human. Mom and Sheeni exclaimed over the amenities, while Jerry—ever the shrewd bargainer—pointed
out the flaws. For example, he was not happy about the twin beds.
The geezer sucked his gums. “Better, though, if you snore,” he said.
“I don’t have that problem,” countered Jerry. (What a liar!)
“Well, maybe you wet the bed.”
“Nope,” said Jerry. “Don’t do that either.”
“Well, you might someday,” said the Geezer. “When you get old. I’ve
been known to dribble a drop or two. I snore now too. Never did before.”
I shuddered to contemplate what life as the geezer’s bed partner must be
like. I looked over at Sheeni, who was inspecting the wardrobe closet. Yes, I
could imagine honeymooning in this trailer with her—twin beds or not. I bet if
we tried we could both squeeze into that cozy bathtub. I happily contemplated
that scene, and had to sit down on one of the beds to conceal a sudden T.E.

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The mattress sagged and smelled of mildew. Jerry and the geezer began their
final dance.
“What’s your cash price?” asked Jerry.
“I said in the ad,” replied the old man. “Thousand dollars firm.”
“Thousand, huh?” Jerry looked dubious. “That must be with a guarantee.”
“As is, where she is,” said the geezer.
“I don’t know,” replied Jerry. “You can smell the dry rot. The roof
probably needs work and I really don’t want twin beds. I couldn’t go over
$800.”
The geezer pondered this bad news.
“There are mouse droppings in all the closets,” said Sheeni. “And the
electrical outlets aren’t grounded.”
Jerry looked impressed by my taste in women.
The geezer cleared his throat. “I might take $950.”
“$900,” said Jerry.
“$925,” countered the geezer.
They agreed on $910. While the men counted the greenbacks and did the
paperwork, Sheeni and I wandered around the junk-strewn lot, scattering the
clucking chickens before us.
Sheeni knelt beside an old cardboard box. “Oh, look, Nickie!” she exclaimed. “Aren’t they cute!”
In the box were a half dozen squirming puppies. They were mostly black
with a few spots of white divvied up, here and there, among them. They had
short droopy ears, curled-up tails, and tiny batlike faces. The mother, lying
limp in the heat nearby, appeared to be part pug. She had bulging black eyes, a
pushed-in nose, and a prominent underbite. She was the second-ugliest dog I
had ever seen. The father, snarling at us from the end of a rope tied to smashed
pinball machine, was the ugliest.
Sheeni picked up the puppy with the most white spots. Thrilled to be singled out, he peed on her blouse. She didn’t seem to mind and let him lick her
lovely mouth. “Isn’t he cute?” she said.
“He’s adorable,” I lied. I made a mental note not to kiss her again until
she had brushed and gargled.
“I wonder if they’re for sale,” Sheeni said. “Do you suppose?”
“Wouldn’t surprise me,” I said. “But will your parents let you have a
dog?”
“Of course,” said Sheeni, “they love animals.”
The geezer priced the dog at an exorbitant $10. This was more than
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puppy to her breast. This was too much for the geezer. He studied her chest
awhile, then said she could take the puppy for free. (Very close to the dog’s actual value, I thought.)
Sheeni was overjoyed. For a moment I feared she was actually going to
kiss the old geezer. More than mouthwash would be required to slay those
cooties. Instead, Sheeni smooched her puppy, whom she promptly named Albert (pronounced “Al-bare”), after the existentially deceased French writer Albert Camus.
Albert could tell he was moving up in the world and seemed pleased to
be turning his back, at last, on his sordid origins. He looked over to make sure
his brothers and sisters could see him seated in a Lincoln Continental convertible. Fortunately for his self-esteem, we were not hauling the trailer that afternoon. Jerry planned to return for his prize tomorrow after getting a hitch
welded to the Lincoln. So, for the drive home, Albert sat proudly on Sheeni’s
lap, hopping down only once to take a dump on the white carpet. Jerry was incensed, but Sheeni put her charm in overdrive and appeased him with the
promise that Nick would “clean up every last morsel.”
Protesting vehemently, I forgot to dodge when she moved in and planted
a wet one on my mouth. Yuck. The woman I love has dog breath.
Back at “My Green Haven,” Sheeni hopped out of the car and was off
with her dog like she’d been shot from a gun. Jerry examined the fecal matter
on his carpet and gave me ten minutes either to remove it completely or “take
a slug to the head from a .357.” I went to work with paper towels, cold water,
and detergent. As I was bent over my labors, the always suspicious Mrs.
Clarkelson walked by to snoop. I drooled, chuckled to myself, and playfully
tossed a dog turd in her direction. She screamed and jumped back. This
brought out Mom to investigate. Mrs. Clarkelson, red-faced, said to Mom,
“Look into your soul, sinner. And you will see why God punished you with
this child.”
“Up yours, bitch,” replied Mom with cogent succinctness.
Too shocked to reply, Mrs. Clarkelson stormed off.
“What did you say to that woman?” Mom demanded.
I felt a discreet lie was called for here. “She asked me if you and Jerry
were married,” I said. “I told her it was none of her business.”
“Good for you, Nick,” said Mom. “The nerve of these people!”
8:30 P.M. Sheeni and I are sitting at the little green table on the patio
catching up on our journals. Albert is asleep at Sheeni’s feet. After a tumultuous struggle, Sheeni persuaded her parents to let her keep him—even though
her mother declared he has “the face of Beelzebub.” (She’s right.) But Sheeni
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happy about being forced into this concession, but felt, on balance, that Albert
was worth it. “Besides,” she said, “I can always use the exercise.”
I am amazed at the affection Sheeni lavishes on that smelly, repugnant
beast. If only she were so attentively loving with me. Now I have the egregious
Trent to be jealous of, plus a dog. Falling in love has certainly not improved
my peace of mind.
10:30 P.M. Sheeni gave me a long, deep good-night kiss in the dark and
let me put my hand under her bra. I cannot begin to describe the tactile pleasures of her nakedness: the soft round fullness, the smooth warm flesh, the
firmness of the erect nipple under my busy thumb, the intoxicating girl aromas. Tomorrow I go for third base.
When I came into the trailer (after waiting for my throbbing T.E. to subside), I discovered a stain on my jeans. No, lower. The jealous Albert had peed
on my leg.
THURSDAY, August 23 — I awoke to a dreadful thought. This was my
last full day with Sheeni. Tomorrow we return to Oakland. How can I exist
without her! Soon, she’ll be back in Trent’s tanned, muscular arms, feeling the
press of his manly physique against her delicate body. This thought is pure,
physical torture for me. I will have to kill Trent and accept the consequences. I
can see no other alternative. I wonder if Jerry really has a .357. What if it’s not
loaded? Can 14-year-olds legally buy bullets? Probably they can. Thank God
for the NRA!
My homicidal ruminations were interrupted by a knock on the door.
I put on my robe and opened it. There in the early-morning sunshine—
panic-stricken, eyes red from crying—stood my beloved. Now the hour was at
hand for young Sydney Carton to perform a noble deed for the woman he
loves.
Sheeni told me the whole ugly story as we walked to the donut shop. She
had retired to her tiny second-story bedroom with Albert curled up in her
arms. (Oh, lucky Albert!) During the night, while she slept, dreaming her
sweet girlish dreams, he had slipped downstairs for some after-hours puppy
mischief. When Sheeni’s parents woke this morning, they came into the living
room to find the treasured family Bible (actually the paperback vacation-home
copy) shredded all over the floor. Even then, the godless canine was masticating through the last of Corinthians. For Mrs. Saunders, this singular act of desecration confirmed Albert’s diabolical origins. He has been banished, and none
of Sheeni’s entreaties or cajoleries could overturn the parental edict. Albert has
been temporarily imprisoned in their patio storage shed until his fate can be
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