Drafting for Finance

Lawyers
Introductory
Sbssion:
Handout
Original
wording:
I want to eat burgers with you.
Lawyer's
markup
number 1:
I want to eat burgers with you. Fo1
Lawyer's
markup number 3:
I want to eat burgers with you. For the avoioance doubt, the imm,ediately preceding
sentence:
(i)
shall not be construed to mean
of you) in, on or unrler i
I want to eat a burger that has you (or any part
pnglqeglontv
to ql
buroer a[-the same
Lawyer's
markup number 4:
I want to eat burgers with you.
For the avr:idance doubt, the immerdiately preceding
sentence:
I want to eat a burger that has you (or any part
(i)
(i i)
shall not be construed to mean
of you) in, on or uncler: and
shall be construed ernly-to mean that I want you to eat a burger and,i want me
in the same plar:e.
to eat a burger at th,e same time a
f the
another person (for
the purposes
of
a
Dglgqlby_lhe
seconrl person:
and
"in the same place"
m
consumed and does nol
Final wording:
I want to eat burgers with you
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i n a I S entence:
For the avoidance of about. the
shall not be conslrrued
to mean
fhat
I want to eat a burger that has you (or any part
of you) in, on or under it: and
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eat a b u rs e r an d' wan t m e
For the purposes
of the immediately preceding
[aragraph, with rspect
to the consumption
of one
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oI
1
p"n.:l
,(for
rhe plrrposes
of this ragraph,
rhe
,,first
person,,)
and
an.ther person
(for the purposes
of this paragraph,
the
,,second
person,,):
(a) "at the same time" means the consumltion
of the first person,s
burger by the first person
at approximatel)/
the same time as the ption
of the second person's
burger by the
second person
{provided, _fp1
ther
bv that pelson
zlnci not a
lar!-alIh€_llesX_al_a n
Loth e r a n i m a
rom the flesh
the
to the "secon
AIIS M
fur
approx rm a!qly_!h.e_El0 q
ti rr e', m
1) the f irsl
con
he first
r)erson' r within 10
of th
ons
rqer b\/ the
nd (2)
the first
f ini CONSUM
the first pt2rson's;
burqer (or
noU
d
person.
in tice in
his
srqned bv
_thq
firg;l_pe6q4, tirat
has deterrn
that it will not finish I
sumplion of said fi
in 10 minuters
her (A)
the completiorL of
consumptir]n qf the seconr
notice in writing_(siqned
byfhe
th
that il
of said sec(rnd pgrr-son,s
bulqer); and
(b) "in the same place,'
m€rans
en-at whieh sueh-bwge+s_a+e
consume€l_and-ektes_nelr_fe+_tlae
avoi
:shall consume
(the "Tablel'l_ancl_
the secr
seated at thLe Tablg.
For the avqidancr: of doubfioth
.g{plqqs$e desire
art of
to dri:rft: wordin
completely qn rearsonable
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