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Media Studies Assignment Learner Feedback Sheet

OCR AS MEDIA STUDIES H140

Unit: G321
Student Name: Sam Turner ( F Block)
Topic/Essay Title: Preliminary Task

“Using DTP and an image manipulation program, produce the front page of a
new school/college magazine, featuring a photograph of a student in medium
close-up plus some appropriately laid-out text and a masthead. Additionally
candidates must produce a mock-up of the layout of the contents page to
demonstrate their grasp of DTP.”

The table below gives you feedback and understanding on how your work has
been marked against assessment criteria for the Preliminary Task.

Assessment Objectives Summative Feedback (Have


these been met? Yes/No)
AO2 Apply knowledge and understanding HAS TARGET AUDIENCE BEEN THOUGHT
to show how meanings are created when ABOUT?
analysing media products and evaluating Yes – appropriate mode of address
their own practical work. for student audience on front cover
and contents displayed.
AO3 Plan and construct media products DOES THE PRODUCT DISPLAY BASIC
using appropriate technical and creative skills TECHNICAL COMPETANCY?
Yes - some technical competency
displayed on Photoshop and Quark
and use of ICT on blog
AO4 Undertake, apply and present DOES THE PRODUCT DISPLAY MATERIAL
appropriate research APPROPRIATE FOR SUB-GENRE?
Material appropriate for sub-genre of
college magazine on front cover and
contents page.

The table below provides you with tutor feedback, and/or their recommendations for key
areas on how to pass the task.
Key Areas for My Individual Development
Well done, Sam. You have passed the pre-lim task. Although masthead on front
cover could have been bigger to further show your knowledge of magazine
conventions.

BLOG SO FAR –IMPROVEMENTS REQUIRED:


1. You need to reference Assessment Objectives on your posts.
2. Also to fulfil AO4 more research is needed – more images /scans of
magazines’ contents and double page spreads and analysis on their
conventions. Your blog is looking a bit bare.
3. You must upload your video analysis of a music magazine.
4. You must upload your Bauer and IPC research.
5. You must upload your treatment.

Mark 15/15

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