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Essay writing. Week 3. Homework.

13. Punctuate the text below.


the london school of business is offering three new courses this year economics with psychology introduction to
management and ecommerce the first is taught by dr jennifer hillary and runs from october to january the second
introduction to management for msc finance students is offered in the second semester and is assessed by coursework
only professor wangs course in ecommerce runs in both the autumn and the spring and is for more experienced students
The London School of Business is offering three new courses this year: Economics with Psychology, Introduction to
Management, and e-commerce. The first is taught by Dr Jennifer Hillary, and runs from October to January. The
second, Introduction to Management, for MSc. Finance students is offered in the second semester, and is assessed by
coursework only. Professor Wangs course in e-commerce runs in both the autumn and the spring, and is for more
experienced students.

15. Correct the mistakes in the following sentences.


a. Write precisely clearly accurately and explicitly.
Write precisely: clearly, accurately, and explicitly.
b. Use corect language: gramar, vocabulary, speling.
Use correct language: grammar, vocabulary, spelling etc.
c. Organise the writing carefully introduction main body and conclusion.
Organise the writing carefully: introduction, main body, and conclusion.
d. Write in an academic style: impersonaly, without using coloquial language.
Write in an academic style: impersonally, without using colloquial language.
e. Write concise and avoid very long sentences.
Write concisely, and avoid very long sentences.
f. Adopt appropriate attitudes be rational critical honest and objective.
Adopt appropriate attitudes: be rational, critical, honest, and objective.
g. Careful paragraph the writing.
Carefully paragraph the writing.
h. Include variety in writing avoid too much repetition.
Include variety in writing: avoid too much repetition.
i. Check details carefully, both for content and for language.
Check details carefully, both of content and of language.
j. Ensure that the Opening Paragraph is not too long and that it creates a good impression.
Ensure that the opening paragraph is not too long and that it creates a good impression.
k. Pay as much attention to the Conclusion as to the Introduction.
Pay as much attention to the conclusion as to the introduction.
l. Avoid the use of clichs jargon propaganda exaggeration and emotive language.
Avoid the use of clichs, jargon, propaganda, exaggeration, and emotive language.
m. Ensure that ideas and items are arranged in a logical sequence and are logical connected.
Ensure that ideas and items are arranged in a logical sequence and are logically connected.
n. Always acknowledge the source for quotations and paraphrases.
Always acknowledge the source of quotations and paraphrases.