Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Casey Canning
001168285
April 25th 2016
Table of Content
Item
Unit Overview
Connections to English
Language Art Strands
Rational
Essential Unit Questions
Unit Learning Outcomes
General and Specific Learning
Outcomes- Alberta Program
of Studies
Assessment Plan
Learning Activities and
Instructional Strategies
Resources/ Materials
Organization and Structure:
Unit Calendar
Reflections
Lesson Plans
Appendices:
#1 Unit Assessment Plan
#2 Short Story Resources
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Overview
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Rational
Students interest and needs- After collecting an interest inventory
on my students and discussing their reading levels and interests with
my TA, I have discovered that my grade 5 students are mostly at a
grade 4 reading level. I am using smaller text and as allow them to
create their own booklets to regain a love for literacy. My students also
consistently wrote on how they wanted to learn how to write good
stories.
Connection-As I am entering in the middle of the grade 5 school year, I
can image students feeling overwhelmed and even stuck in their grade
5 classroom with their teacher, friend group, family life and many other
factors. Preteen agers as these grade 5 students are, are often feel
alone and misunderstood and in a way stuck. I will be using the theme
of stuck stories to display to my students that all people and characters
can get stuck in their own lives, mentally, physically or verbally. Overall
by introducing these stuck stories, and stuck moments to them, I am
allowing my students to develop an understand success and becoming
unstuck is made up of many failure and a lot of perseverance. I hope to
address to my students that that everyone gets stuck, but the most
important part is that everyone can also get unstuck. Surrounding them
with these short stuck stories will allow them to develop their own
understanding of how they themselves can create a positive change in
their own lives to become unstuck and to persevere.
Content and Activities- I use a lot of group and classroom work to
slowly scaffold my students into working individually so that they can
grow as a class For individual growth I let them create Venn diagrams as
well as plot on a story chart for them to being to develop their own
understanding. I will then use students working together to allow them
to teacher each other their own manner of understanding the material
through class discussions, sharing and reading out loud short stories
and plotting them together and sharing their written journal entries with
each other. Then finally each student can grown independently on their
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Essential Questions:
The essential questions students should think about throughout this unit
are:
1.)
How do short stories keep the interest of the reader?
2.)
Why is organization important in writing ?
3.)
How can narrow ideas help make writing easier?
4.)
How does perseverance and failure allow the main character
to become unstuck?
Assessment and evaluation: For this unit, students will be assessed and
evaluated in a variety of ways. Daily assessment will include teacher
observation, individual participation in class activities, including
discussion, and effort. The following assessment activities are planned:
Pre-assessment:
- Read a short story
- Fill out a plot diagram sheet
Formative:
- Pre assessment Quiz
- Exit Slips
- Definition Booklets
Summative:
- Group plot sheet
- Daily journaling
- Short story quiz
- Final copy of their self created stuck short story
Think-pair-share
Direct instruction
Small group discussion
Reflective writing
Small group work
Whole class discussion
Guided questioning
Resources and Materials
Websites:
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?
v=RSD_zp8yZFo&ebc=ANyPxKpUC5bcV-gAJaOXYKLKPkA8kNnvVLVAyruJ9NSmJbCRJZsmQ1OwGIRvTcPbvAmrAehQ4cM5
2n9oxVfcKQ3DC_jbtvEdw
- http://www.write4fun.net/view-entry/85168
- Education Alberta
Power points:
- The Giant Turnip by Bev Evans
- http://www.slideshare.net/kriziak/frog-prince-pp
Books:
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Unit Calendar
Guiding Question for all lessons:
How does a short story get you to keep on reading?
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Reflection
I have created this unit to meet the interest and needs of my grade
5 students who desperately want to create stories and express
themselves through writing. I used the YouTube video to create a
connection for them because they are naturally a highly technology
based generation. Once I gathered their attention I used multiple stuck
story picture books, which I allowed them to read in groups as a
gateway to discuss how short stories get our attention and make a
reader want to keep reading. I used a lot of scaffolding on the subject
manner they were learning. We would learn it first as a class and then in
groups and the final transfer of information went into independent work
and then finally a summative assessment of their work. The students
often offer more then I am expecting of them and also give back more
then I ever thought they could. They began responding in their journal
entries and gave me great ideas on how to expand and change the way
I was planning; using more hands on activities and technology based
lessons. I began to see that I needed to allow my students to run the
classroom and their own learning, not myself. I began to let my students
work more independently and in groups and found with the right
expectation put forward that this was very successful; I wish I would
have discovered this sooner. I would however change how many
summative assignment that I allowed in my unit. I believe that my
students needed more formative assessment, which I had not
anticipated during this unit planning. I also personally struggled with
differentiating learning. I found 3 of my grade 5s out of a class of 24
were at a very low reading level (grade 1 and 2) and I had a hard time
fixing the assignments so that they could complete them, but at the
same time keeping my expectations high enough to make them push
themselves.
If I was to teach grade 5 again, I would first dive into my
relationships with my students and strengthen immediately and place
my expectations into place right away. Coming into a classroom that
was half way through the year was hard and I struggled at times with
where my relationships with the students was on a scale of friendship
and respect. Often I was either to friends and struggled to gain that
respect from my students or I was the opposite and struggled with
connecting with my students. At the end of my semester I was able to
find common ground and create the relationships that I needed to with
my students, but creating those sooner would have been better for both
the class and myself.
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Lesson
Title/Focu
s
Teacher
:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Tuesday, March 8th
2016
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
GENERAL
OUTCOMES
1. Students will be able to recognizeLEARNING
the parts of a short story and how each of these parts or
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Are students focused and completing their pre assessment sheets with
1.1.2
read,write,representandtalktoexplorepersonalunderstandingofnewideasandinformation
ease or are they struggling
Products/Performa Finish the pre-assessment quiz
nces:
LEARNING
RESOURCES
CONSULTED
Alberta Education
Website
Stuck story resources
from Ms. Vegter
Worksheet
Paper
YouTubeclip:Snowman:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RSD_zp8yZFo&ebc=ANyPxKpUC5bcVgAJaOXYKL
KPkA8kNnvVLVAyruJ9NSmJbCRJZsmQ1OwGIRvTcPbvAmrAehQ4cM52n9oxVfcKQ3D
C_jbtvEdw
PROCEDURE
Introduction
Attentio
n
Show the students the YouTube video
Grabber
Transitio Ask the students what they thought of the story and
n to
if they enjoyed the clip and then have them write
Body
in their journal about their favorite part of the
short clip and if they had ever been stuck.
- in a place
- in a situation
Body
Learning
Activity
#1
Assessmen
ts/
Differentia
tion
Transition:
Time
5min
15min
Time
30min
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Wednesday, March 9th
2016
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GLO1:Expressideasanddevelopunderstanding
GLO2:ClarifyandExtend
read,write,representandtalktoexploreunderstandingofnewideasandinformation
1.2.2usestalk,notes,personalwriting,andrepresentingtoexplorerelationshipsamongownideasandexperience,thoseof
othersandthoseencounteredinoral,printandothermediatext.
1.2.3searchforfurtherideasfrominformationfromothersandformoral,printandothermediatextstoextendinformation
2.1.3comprehendnewideasandinformationbyrespondingpersonally,takingnotesanddiscussingideaswithothers
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.
Students will use talk with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify the
elements of a short story
2. Students will sue graphic organizers to develop each part of their story in stages from
beginning to end
3. Students will recognize the parts of a short story and how each of these parts or elements
contribute to the stories quality
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Are students able to make connections to the plot diagram
Products/Performances Students can work together in groups to discuss the questions asked
:
in class and as well can work independtly
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Introduction
Tell them you want to read them a short story that a student
wrote in grade 5
Begin reading the story
Body
Read the short story till you are half way through. At
this point hand out their white boards and ask them
who they believe was in the cupboard? Have them
write their answers on their mini white boards.
Finish reading the story and then ask the students
1.) Why was the ending surprising ?
2.) Why was this story interesting to you the reader?
Have the students think-pair-share and then discuss these
questions in a large class discussion
Once the class discussion is finished handout plot
sheets for them to label and hand in at the end of
class.
Sponge:
If students finish early they are do prompt writing in
their journals from the following:
Cliffhanger/Closure
Time
2min
5min
Time
40min
Time
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Assessment of
Learning:
Transition:
Lesson
Title/Focus
Short Stories #3
Media and stuck stories part 1
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Thursday, March 10th,
2016
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useappropriatepriorknowledgeandexperiencestomakesenseofnewdetailsandinformation
1.1.2
read,write,representandtalktoexplorepersonalunderstandingofnewideasandinformation
1.2.2usetalk,notes,personalwriting,andrepresentingtoexplorerelationshipsamongownideasandexperiences,thoseof
othersandthoseencounteredinoral,printandothermediatext
2.1.4comprehendnewideasandinformationbyrespondingpersonally,takingnotesanddiscussingideaswithothers
2.2.5writeorrepresentmeaningoftextindifferentforms
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and
to get feedback on their own ideas
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Can students work together in groups and complete their sheets
Products/Performances Are students writing out new ideas and examples
:
Can students define the terms
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Introduction
Tell them you are going to show them another video and
allow them to quiet down
But first you need to go over if the students know the terms
Body
Handoutstuckstoryinformationsheet
Askthestudentsiftheyknowthesetermsandgooverthem
together,iftheydonotgooverandexplaintheseterms:
Tellthestudentstowritedownpointsandkeywordstohelpthem
remember;usethePixarfilmasanexampleandfillthesheetout
accordinglywiththestudents
Rewatchstory
Time
2min
3min
Time
40min
o Whatisthesetting:Define:Asnowglobe/bedroom:
o Protagonist:Snowman
o Motive:discusswhatismotive:Togetoutofthesnowglobeand
visitthegirl
o Howtheprotagonistisstuck:stuckinthesnowglobe
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Stuckas:anothercharacter,ananimalorastatue
Stuckin:sleep,time,places(ship,planes..etc)
Discussthereasonswhichcausesacharactertobecomestuck:
1.)Atrickisplayed(theantagonisttakessomethingwhichbelongs
totheprotagonistandwontgiveitback)
2.)Adisasteroraccidenthappenstothemaincharactercausinghim
oranobjectofhistobecomestuck
3.)Anactofgodoccurscausingthemaincharactertanobjectof
histobecomestuck.
Ex:weatherormagic
4.)Forcecanbeusedonanothercharacter.
Ex:kidnapping
o Twounsuccessfulwaystofreeprotagonist
o Howtheprotagonistisfreed:
1.) Trick
2.) Luck
3.) Someonehelps
4.) ActofGod
5.) Hardwork
Usethesnowmanvideoclipthatwesawfromlastclasstogooverandfind
ideasfortheirbigsheetsofpaper:
Onceyouhavewentoverthesheet,splitthestudents4groupsandhandout
bigsheetsofpaper.Havethestudentsgiveexamplesofthe4differenttypes
ofstuck:Trick,disaster,actsofgodandforcesusedbyothercharacters.
(Haveexampletoshowthemonmotivation)
Sponge:
Ifthestudentsfinishearlyhavethemdopromptwritingintheirbooklet
orfinishtheirassignmentsfromotherclassses
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Short Stories #4
Media and stuck stories part 2
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Friday, March 11th, 2016
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will recognize and define the parts of a short story
4.) Students will be able to plot an existing story using a diagram or story map
ASSESSMENTS
Can students work together in groups and complete their sheets
Can students work independently to complete their stuck story
information sheets and stuck story map
Products/Performances Are students writing out new ideas and examples
:
Can students plot out existing stories in a story map
Observations:
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Introduction
Ask the students if they have ever wished they could change
something with a touch of their fingers
Ask the class if they have ever heard of the story the story
Time
5min
3min
20
Learning Activity #1
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
Time
40min
Sponge:
Ifthestudentsfinishearlyhavethemdopromptwritingintheirbooklet
orfinishhomeworkfromtheirpreviousclass
Summative: Turnip story map
Cliffhanger/Closure
Time
Into next lesson
Rationale
This lesson is to allow students to develop understanding and to allow
them to recognize terms. By allowing them to write out examples in
groups lets the students get feedback from others and clarify there
ideas. I also let them practice and look back on each others story
maps before they complete their own story map for marks.
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Teache
r:
Date:
Short Stories #5
Ms. Canning
Monday, March 14th,
2016
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Are students expressing understanding on the terms: round character
and flat character
Products/Performances Students are completing adding to their definition sheets
:
Students are discussing ideas and terms with each other
Observations:
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Hand
Introduction
Ask the students their favorite Disney characters
out Venn Diagrams
Body
Readthepaperbagprincesstothestudentsanddiscusshowitisa
stuckstory
Definewhataroundcharacteriscomparedtoaflatcharacter
Flatcharactershowsonlyasinglepersonalitytrait.Theyare
typicallyonedimesnionalandwedonotknowmuchaboutthem.
Limitedinformation
Time
5min
3min
Time
40min
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EX:CinderellasEvilstepmothersheismeanandunkindto
Cinderellaandweneverseeanothersidetoher.
Roundcharactershowsseveralsidestotheirpersonality.Theyare
complexlikerealpeople.
EX:NemoandMarlinareroundweknowalotaboutthem.Batman
isanotherexample.
DiscussasaclassDisneyshowsandfairytalesandlabelthemas
roundorflatcharacters(510minutes)(Formative)
HavestudentsfinishtherestontheirownVennDiagraminsmall
groups.Theycanchoosetocomparetothefollowingshortstories
thatwehavewatchedandread
Paperbagprincess
PartlyCloudy
Snowman
TheEnormousTurnip
Sponge:
Ifthestudentsfinishearlyhavethemdopromptwritingintheirbooklet
orfinishtheirhomeworkfromthepreviousclass
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Tuesday and
Wednesday, March 15th
and 16th , 2016
2.2.8 describe and discuss the influence of setting on characters and events
2.3.3 identify the main problem or conflict in oral print and other media texts and explain how it is
resolved
2.3.4 identify and discuss the main characters point of view and motivation
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Are students able to create Venn diagrams in groups
Products/Performances Students are taking turns reading their story
:
Students are completing
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PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Introduction
Let students know this may take two classes
Ask the students what makes a good story?
Give three examples of stories that you believe are
good stories and why
Write three complete sentences
Let them write in their journals for 10 minutes: set a
timer on your phone
Body
Askthechildrenwhattheylearnedyesterday
Flatandroundcharacter
Examples
VennDiagram
Discussyourexpectationsforthegroupsandwhattheyneedtodo
Theyneedtopopcornread
TheyneedtofillouttheStuckstorymap
Oncethisisdone,theyallneedtogobacktotheirdesksandfill
outtheirVenndiagramfromthepaperhandedoutfromlastclass
Gatherthestudentsingroupsandthenhandouttheirassigned
picturebooks.
Walkaroundandaddontostudentsconversationandtomakesure
theyarefillingthemoutproperly
Time
5min
3min
Time
40min
Sponge:
Letthemfinishedtheirassignedhomework
Storybookpage
Greatlakesmap
Badbegin.Chapter3
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Short Stories #8
Hey what about me?: Changing points of
view part 1 & 2
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Thursday, March 17th,
2016
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Products/Performances
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PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Introduction
Ask the students if they could be any other person in
the world who would it be and why?
Give students 10 minutes to write; set an alarm with
your phone
Body
Time
5min
3min
Time
Learning Activity #1
-
Thirdpersontoldbyanarratorwhoisnotapartofthestory.Howdo
youknow?:Usesterms:he,she,is
Firstpersoncentral:perspectiveistoldfromthemaincharacter:we
onlyknowthispersonspointofview
Howdoyouknow?:UsesIorWe
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
ReadapassagefromDiaryofawimpykid
Handoutthechangingpointofviewworksheet
Letthestudentspickthecharactertheywouldliketochangethe
storiespointofviewtoo
Manny
Mom
Rowley
Havethemwriteontheworksheetandthenexpandonthestoryin
theirwritingjournals.Letthemknowthatyouexpecttheirbest
work.
40min
Sponge:
Ifthestudentsfinishearlytheycanreadattheirdesksorfixtheir
spellingmistakesintheirjournals
Formative: Changing point of view sheets will be gathered as
well as their journals
Cliffhanger/Closure
Time
Into next class
Rationale
Allowing students to understand different perspectives in the story will
strengthen not only their writing but their compassion with other
students around them. It will let students to become aware of others
around them.
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Short Stories #9
Assessment Sheet/Quiz
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Friday, March 18th, 2016
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LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Are students finishing the assessment sheet and looking confident in
their work
Products/Performances Students finish their assessment sheet by the end of class
:
Observations:
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Introduction
Let the students know there is a quiz
Move the students apart
Body
Gooverquiz/assessmentworksheetwithstudents
http://www.slideshare.net/kriziak/frogprincepp:readoverthis
withthestudentsonceforfun.
Explainthatitwillbetakeninforasummativeassessment/mark
Iftheyfinishearlyallowthemtowriteintheirjournals
Time
5min
3min
Time
40min
Sponge:
Ifthestudentsfinishearlyhavethemdopromptwritingintheir
journalsortheycanreadabookquietly
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Monday, March 21st,
2016
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2.3.4 identify and discuss the main characters point of view and motivation
2.2.6 compare character and situations portrayed in oral, print and other media texts
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Are the students using each other to discover the correct terms and
identify them
Products/Performances Journal entry
:
Observations:
Pencil
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Introduction
Asktheclassiftheyknowwhatinternalandexternalstruggleis?
Ask them to discuss what they think it may be in
small groups and then ask them what their group
thought
Body
DiscussanddefineInternalandExternalstruggle
Internalstruggle:Aconflictthatoccursinthecharactersmind
Time
5min
3min
Time
EX:fearmanvsselformanvssociety
Externalstruggle:Aconflictbetweenapersonandanoutsideforce
EX:Parentandchild
HavestudentsvotewiththeirfeetifPartlyhasaexternalor
internalconflict
Answer:Externalbecausethedangerousanimalsarelimitingthe
bird
HavestudentsvotewiththeirfeetifPixarhasanexternalorinternal
conflict
Answer:Externalbecauseitisthesnowglobethatislimitingthe
snowman
Askthestudentstowriteintheirjournalsofatimewhenthey
experiencedaninternalstruggleandanexternalstruggle.Three
completesentencesareexpectedandtheirspellingwillbelookedat
carefully
40min
Sponge:
Ifthestudentsfinishearlyhavethemdopromptwritingintheirbooklet
orfinishtheirhomeworkfromapreviousclass
Assessments/
Differentiation
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Cliffhanger/Closure
Time
Into next class
Rationale
Students are using their knowledge from previous classes about types
of conflict and are apply them to their own lives. This will allow them
to connect to the texts they read in a deeper manner
Transition:
Lesson
Title/Focus
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Tuesday and
Wednesday March 22th,
and March 23rd, 2016
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2.4Createoriginaltext
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Are students writing the correct sentences to match the sentence
starters
Products/Performances Are students editing their work as they go
:
Observations:
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Introduction
Journalentryuponboard
Ask them to finish up in their journals and get a
student to gather their work
Body
Learning Activity #1
Time
5min
3min
Time
40min
DefiningHook:
Makingyourreaderkeepreadingwithyourfirstsentence.
Useaction,athough/feeling,aquestion
Introduceatopicthatthestudentsaregoingtowriteon:
1.) Playingtagwithacheetah
2.) Ananimalrefusingtoeat
3.) Tryingtoescapeahauntedhouse
GooverworksheetTipsforWritingaGoodBeginningSentence
Havethempracticeusingthestorytopictheyhavepicked
Thenmakethemwritethestartoftheirstoryintheirminibookletsthatyou
haveprovided.
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GooverworksheetOrganizingYourStorySheet
Tellthemtheyneedtoorganizetheirstoryinthesheetprovide
Iftheyfinishearliertheycanreadtheirwritingoutloudtoeachotherand
thenedittheirwork.
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
Lesson
Title/Focus
BookletswillbegatheredandIwilleditthemandhandthembacknext
class.
Formative: Exit slips one thing you learned one, thing you
want to know more about.
Cliffhanger/Closure
Into next class
Rationale
Students are using their knowledge from a previous class
Teache
r:
Date:
Time
Ms. Canning
Thursday March 24th,
2016
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GLO2:ClarifyandExtend
GLO3:manageideasandinformation.
2.4Createoriginaltext
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Students are editing each others work and giving positive feedback
Products/Performances Students are making changes to their rough draft
:
Students are editing their own work before others look over it
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Introduction
Journalentryisupontheboard
Ask students to hand in their booklets
Body
Definingandexplainingthemiddleofastory
Themiddleofyourstoryshouldhaveseveralsmallproblemsthatdonotget
solved
Askforexamples
Thisbuildssuspenseasthemaincharacterfailseachtime.
Time
5min
3min
Time
40min
GooverworksheetSentenceediting
Discusshowyouhaveeditedtheirwrittenworksofar.
Theyneedtofindthemistakesandeditthem
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Oncetheyaredonethissheetandtheyaredonewritingtheirmiddle
sentencehavethemsharetheirworkandletthemediteachotherswork
Havethemwritewhoeditedthework
BookletswillbegatheredandIwilleditthemandhandthembacknext
class.
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
Iftheyfinishthisearlytheycanflipthesentenceeditingsheetoverandwork
onthecommaworksheet
Formative: Exit slips one thing you learned one, thing you
want to know more about.
Cliffhanger/Closure
Into next class
Rationale
Students are using their knowledge from a previous class
Time
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Monday and Tuesday
April 4th and April 5th,
2016
2.4Createoriginaltext
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Products/Performances
:
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Introduction
Journalentryisupontheboard
Ask students to hand in their booklets
Body
Gooverawordanchorboardwiththestudentsandaskiftheywantto
addanythingontoit
Time
5min
3min
Time
40min
DefiningandexplainingtheEndingofastory
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Theendingofthestorytheproblemmustbesolved
Wemustsatisfythereader,wearerootingforthemaincharacter,soyou
must
1.)Presentthemaincharactersfeelingordecision
2.)Presentthemaincharactersreflectingorconnectingtoapastmemory
3.)Futurewishesordesires
Haveanotherstudentedittheirworkandviseversathenwritewhoedited
thework.
Iftheyfinishearlytheycanworkonthecoveranddrawapicture
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
BookletswillbegatheredandIwilleditthemandhandthembacknext
class.
Formative: Exit slips one thing you learned one, thing you
want to know more about.
Cliffhanger/Closure
Into next class
Rationale
Students are using their knowledge from a previous class
Time
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Lesson
Title/Focus
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Wednesday, Thursday
and Friday April 6th ,
April 7th and April 8th
2016
2.4Createoriginaltext
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Products/Performances
:
PROCEDURE
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Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Introduction
Journalentryisupontheboard
Ask students to hand in their booklets
Body
Time
5min
3min
Time
Learning Activity #1
IntroduceRubrictotheclassandgooverit
Workgroups
Ifstudentsarefinishedwritingtheirbooksgatherthemintotwosmallgroups
andworkwiththembygoingoverthesemistakes
- Starthehook
- Underlineanywordsthataresaidorthen
- Highlightanyspellingmistakesinpairs
- Circlethebeginning,middleandendsofastory
- Squarethethreetimesyourstorycharactergetstuck
40min
Ifotherstudentsarewaitingtheycanworkonthecoveranddrawa
picture
Oncetheyaredonethenextgroupcanjoinworkwithoneofthetwo
teachers
Whentheyhavefinishedmarkingandfixingtheirworktheycanthenbegin
workingontheirgoodcopyoftheirstuckstories
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
BookletswillbegatheredandIwilleditthemandhandthembacknext
class.
Formative: Exit slips one thing you learned one, thing you
want to know more about.
Cliffhanger/Closure
Into next class
Rationale
Students are using their knowledge from a previous class
Time
40
Lesson
Title/Focus
Teache
r:
Date:
Ms. Canning
Wednesday April 6th ,
2016
2.4Createoriginaltext
LEARNING OBJECTIVES
1.) Students will share ideas with others in order to clarify their own ideas
2.) Students will use talking with others in the class to ask questions, elaborate, to clarify and to
get feedback on their own ideas
3.) Students will make specific choices to strengthen their stories
ASSESSMENTS
Observations:
Do they understand the importance of Quotation marks
Products/Performances They will complete an online quiz
:
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Venn Diagrams
Pencil
PROCEDURE
Attention Grabber
Transition to Body
Learning Activity #1
Introduction
Journalentryisupontheboard
Ask students to hand in their booklets
Body
Introducewhatquotationmarksare:
Rule#1:BeginquotationswithacapitalletterALWAYS
Rule#2:ALWAYSusecommasbeforeapersontalksorafteraperson
talks
Example:
WowKarlissuchagreatstudent,criedMs.Canning
OR
MsCanningresponded,Whydoyouguysalwayslockmeoutofthe
classroom
Rule#3:Aquoteseparatedbythepersonwhospokeiscalledasplit
quotation
Time
5min
3min
Time
40min
Example:
OkclasssaidMsCanning,tomorrowwillwillusethecomputerto
playgamesallday
Askstudentsiftheynoticesomethingdifferentaboutthethirdrule
Allowstudentstograbchromobooksandworkonlineat
Richestoragsquotationmarks
Assessments/
Differentiation
Transition:
Formative: Exit slips one thing you learned one, thing you
want to know more about.
Cliffhanger/Closure
Into next class
Rationale
Students are using their knowledge from a previous class
Time
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Understandings:
Students will understand that
- We can learn about ourselves
and people close to use through
short stories
- All elements of a short story are
important and help to make a
story great
- Stories are written slowly and in
multiple steps, one section at a
time.
- The writing process can help us
to develop our own ideas into
great stories
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Assessments
Title
PreAssess
ment
Quiz
Journ
al
Entrie
s
Group
plot
works
heet
Short
story
Giant
Turnip
Quiz
Stuck
story
final
project
Exit
Slips
Definition
Booklets
Format
ive
Formative
r
Learning
Outcome
Type
s
Format
Assessm
Outcomes
(Formativ
e/Summat
ive
ent Tool
ive)
Title
Weig
0%
Pre1.1.1
hting
Assessme
1.1.1
use 1.1.2
nt Quiz
1.2.2
appropriate
prior
2.1.3
knowledge and
2.3.3
experience to
make sense of
new details and
information
1.1.2 read, write,
represent and
talk to explore
personal
understanding of
new ideas and
information
1.2.2 use talk,
notes personal
writing, and
representing to
explore
relationships
Journal own 1.1.1
among
ideas
Entries
1.1.2
and experiences,
1.2.2
those of others
and those 2.1.4
encountered2.3.4
in
3.1.4
oral, print and
other media text
20%
2.1.3 preview
sections of texts
and apply reading
rate and
strategies
appropriate from
the purpose,
content and
format of the
texts
Summ
ative
SummDescription
Summati Summa
Brief
ative
ve
tive
15%
0%
The
quiz is20%
filled with30%
short answer
questions that are aligned with a
stuck story unit. They will be asked
to identify types of conflict, ad other
terms. A story plot chart at the end
X
X
X the X
where
they have
to label
beginning, rising action, climax etc. I
also made it a short answer quiz to
see what level of writing they are
currently at.
Use: My intent is to make the
students able to answer these short
answer questions andXterms atXthe
end of the unit with confidence and
allow them to also plot out a story
properly within a chart. With this
information I can then build my
assignments and test to the students
currently level and needs. I have
them do this quiz to collect data on
what they already know and how
deeply they understand.
As the students are writing their
X
X
journal
entries we as aX class have
together developed a rubric along
with it. By having the students build
the rubric with me. I use journal
prompts from create a new animals
and answer all the 5Ws to define
and explain what is happening in this
stuck story
Use: I am collecting data on what
they feel is excellent work compared
to below grade level work. I can then
build
X on this information and
X students
X to do better
X
challenge my
in
their writing. These journals are
preparing them for their final project
of writing a stuck story and sharing it
with their friends and family. This will
develop their writing, grammar and
X
communication for the future.
X
Fo
AS
OF
X0% X
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Group
work:
Creating
stuck
story
map.
1.1.1
1.2.2
2.1.3
2.3.3
Short
Story
Quiz:
Giant
Turnip
1.1.1
2.1.3
2.3.3
2.3.4
Stuck
Story
Final
Project
1.1.1
1.1.2
1.2.2
2.1.3
2.1.4
2.3.3
2.3.4
3.1.4
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Definition
Booklets
1.1.1
1.1.2
2.1.4
3.1.4
Exit Slips
1.1.1
1.1.2
1.2.2
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Middle:
Problem/Conflict
Ending:
Solution/Resolution
Dialogue
Organization
Exceptional (A) 5
Good (B) 4
Fair (C) 3
It is easy to tell a
when and where the
story took place.
Using descriptive
words
The solution to
the character's
problem is easy
to understand,
and is somewhat
logical.
There is too
much dialogue
in this story, but
it is always clear
which character
is speaking.
Using dialogue
punctuation
correctly 80% of
the time
The solution to
the character's
problem is a
little hard to
understand.
No solution is
attempted or it
is impossible to
understand.
There is not
quite enough
dialogue in this
story, but it is
always clear
which character
is speaking.
Using dialogue
punctuation
correctly 70% of
the time
The story is a
It is not clear
which character
is speaking.
Using dialogue
punctuation
correctly 50% or
less of the time.
The story is
Poor (D) 2
It is not clear
what problem
the main
characters face.
Ideas and
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Title Page
pretty well
organized. One
idea or scene
may seem out of
place. Clear
transitions are
used.
Title page has
the title,
author's name,
illustrator's
name, and the
year.
little hard to
follow. The
transitions are
sometimes not
clear.
scenes seem to
be randomly
arranged.
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