Which P.O.V Is Right For Your Story?

COLUMN BY JON GINGERICH OCTOBER 12, 2011

Given this is a column about writing craft, it’s inevitable that sooner or later we’re going to have to discuss point of view.
At its core, P.O.V. is an issue of perspectives. The mode of narration you choose fundamentally alters how your story will
be received.

While writing transcends the visual, you should think like a director when choosing your P.O.V.: you need to make a
judicious decision regarding how “close” or “far” you want your narrator to be in relation to your characters. The
placement of this narrative “eye” can be used to forge an extremely strong bond between narrative and reader.
Sherwood Anderson’s Winesburg, Ohio, for example, places the narrative at a fable-like distance, as if we’re looking over
the town and moving from character to character, lending the story the idea of a shared, unified experience. Extreme
close-ups, on the other hand (e.g., Faulkner’s The Sound and the Fury), can place the reader in uncomfortably internal
spaces, subjecting them to a character’s psychosis.

While there are a number of different modes of narration, it’s important to mention that all P.O.V.s essentially do one of
two things: they serve either as an observer in the action or a participant in it. Below is a look at the first-,second-, and
third-person points of view, with a breakdown of the advantages and disadvantages of each.

Without question, the single greatest advantage to first-person P.O.V. is access. First-person perspectives can be
extremely powerful because the narrative is essentially a mouthpiece for the character, and we’re given unrestricted
admittance into his/her thoughts, opinions, voice and worldview. The main drawback is that this access offers only a
single, limited voice; the character (referring to him/herself with “I”) can only describe what she/he knows, and then only
to the extent of the communicative/mental powers you’ve granted. As such, its extremely restricted range can
compromise its allure. There’s a common misconception among many beginning writers that first-person P.O.V. is the
easy default. In reality, first person is an extremely difficult P.O.V. to master. You need chops to transmit a credible voice
consistently. Too often in the beginner’s story, first-person characters make claims that aren’t earned, or they account for
exposition by digressing into jarring, soliloquy-length rants. In either case, the voice begins to take on the role of
narrative custodian, and the story fails on the authenticity meter. The only time you should use first-person is if the voice
is well-crafted, unique, constant, and compelling, so access to the character makes it worth your readers’ while to see
his/her world in tunnel-vision.

One way to make sure an organic perspective is maintained in first-person is to constantly ask: how does my character
see the world? What would they say in this situation? Another salve for first-person narratives is the use of dialogue from
other characters. If you’re going to write in the first-person, you’re going to need lots of it, because outside dialogue is the
only objectivity your reader is going to get.

Of course, there are other variations of the first-person P.O.V., and each offer the writer varying degrees of leeway.
There’s first-person multiple vision, where the story rotates around several narrating characters (Russell Banks’ The
Sweet Hereafter or Faulkner’s As I Lay Dying are examples of this), and there’s the rarefirst-person peripheral, where a
non-protagonist character narrates the actions of the protagonist (e.g., The Great Gatsby).

Third person is the most common P.O.V., and for a reason. The biggest benefit of the third-person is the amount of
flexibility it provides: an unspecified narrator moves in and out between the character (referred to as “she” or “he”) and
the larger world. As such, the story gets the character’s thoughts and actions but P.O.V. is not limited to the character’s
understanding of their world. Because it’s not as intrusive as first-person however, access in the third is limited, and can’t
take full advantage of a compelling voice.

Third-person P.O.V. is extraordinarily diverse in its application. There are a number of third-person P.O.V.s, and while
some are more popular than others, each deserves some mention here.

The most common of the third-person P.O.V. is the third-person limited (also called third-person close orthird-person
single vision). In this case, the narrator presents the story from the perspective of a single character, the main character
in the story. Like first-person, the thoughts and beliefs of the character are revealed, but because they’re ultimately told

One more point to consider about point of view. creates an extremely strong bond. Third-person multiple vision is where perspective moves from character to character. One benefit to this P.V.O.O. in a way it offers the best of both worlds. the thoughts and beliefs of all our characters. it literally makes “you” part of the story (Jay McInerney’s novel Bright Lights. The disadvantage to this “camera lens” approach is that it’s the nadir of the third-person’s preexisting disadvantage: it allows absolutely no inside access.V. it allows the story to be seen equally from many different viewpoints and angles.s we’ve discussed. for example. The disadvantage is that it’s a dated voice. The biggest benefit of the omniscient is that it can supply us with information our characters’ may not know. the reader) as the focal point in the story. A more recent application of this P. Here the narrator is granted unprecedented leeway: it knows the past. complete with diverse array of dialogue. 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It also takes an unusually great deal of suspended disbelief in order to convince the reader that “you” are the character the writer has created. is in Junot Diaz’s The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao.O. One of my favorite uses of this is in Steinbeck’sEast of Eden.O. it’s tedious and alienating. experimenting with how “near” or “far” you want your characters to be and how this reflects the internal logic or any grand theme your story may have. this P.O.O. the present. The biggest advantage of this P. is that it’s intrinsically intimate. Third-person omniscient is where an all-knowing narrator moves from character to character with the ability to independently reveal anything it wants.V. You don’t want to break that connection just because you can.