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LO1 FEEDBACK

Georgia Pearce LO1 Feedback. 5/12/16

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You
LO1 Part may have missing items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please
A. improve this. If you require help with any of this work, or need to show me
work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning


outcome is a Merit Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are
any minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are
made.
Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.
Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are
clearly labelled with the words Re-Submission.
Advertising Types & Styles
Some good work here, however, you would benefit from more detail. Add a video
for each of the persuasive techniques and explain in the descriptions how the
advert applies the technique.
LO1 Part B. What is advertising?
This is missing from your blog.
Lo1 Part C. Regulation
You have added this work, but called it LO1 Part B. This requires a lot more depth.
Ensure you have covered all of the points on the handout. You are missing Ofcom
from this work. Try to add in more detail on how they are funded and the
communications act.
LO1 part D. Analysis.
A fair start here Georgia. There are some things that you need more detail on.
Add images to the mise en scene and cinematography section so I can see what
you are referring to. Make sure you add more detail on the representation section
(link to the mise en scene) and add in the ASA / BCAP section. Overall, this work
does feel a bit rushed toward the end. Id re-visit this. Make sure you have
covered all of the areas. You have missed off the ASA / BCAP codes section.
Please do this, it is a requirement. If the advert doesnt break any guidelines,
which ones must it follow? Look up section 2 and 3 of the BCAP code list. There
may be something of relevance in there. You also require a linked magazine
advert analysis, which means until you re-submit this the highest grade you can
obtain is a pass. Please re-submit this work. Use the handout on moodle for
guidance.

The resubmission deadline is: January 13th 2017