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May 1, 2017
My father once said to me Read more you will write better. He told me this
when I was in high school. I took his advice and I started reading Arabic
books and I must admit that his advice helped me a lot in proving my writing.
After I fnished the high school, I applied to the English Language Institute in
Stillwater, Oklahoma. I have studied in the ELI for one year and half, and
honestly that was just a waste of time. In the ELI, the teachers taught us
some stuff that we already know and they didn't teach us the things that we
need in our college life. I fnished my last semester with ELI and I moved to
the Northern Oklahoma College in Stillwater and that time I remembered my
father advice and I started to read more and more in English books. I had
some treble at the beginning but I could pass it. I still have some problems
but I will try to work on it and be able to fx it. Compassion I class, Religion
class and Compassion II class are the classes that could influence me and
helped me in proving my writing skills and I am so glad that I could take
these classes before I move to the University.
I wasn't sure what class I will take in the frst semester so my adviser
recommend that I take Compassion I. I took Compassion I in the frst
semester but I was struggling so hard so I had to drop it. In the second
semester, I chose to retake the Compassion I class and it wasn't easy. I
struggled with grammar and writing techniques. I wasn't sure that I can pass
this class but I did my best to pass it. I had to prove my writing skills and
study hard. One of the problems that faced me was grammar, I did my best
to change that and now I could see some progress. Also, I had problem with
the length of my papers. In the frst of the semester, I wasn't able to write
more than one and half page but I could fx this problem. First, by
remembering my father advice which is reading more books and then, by
taking the religion class with Mr. Cook. By taking the religion class I had to
write more than three papers in the week and I had to focus on my grammar
and spilling to get a good grade. This short class could help me to fx my
paper length problems. In the third semester, I took Compassion II. This time
I was so excited to start this class. I took this class and I did my best and I
could get good grades. In this semester, I could learn new things like,
bibliography and writing in letter forms. It was good semester for me and I
noticed that I still have some problem with bibliography so I will try to fx this
problem by reading more about this problem and try to write some
bibliographies and go to the Writing Center to get more help.
Sincerely,
Hassan Alsahaf
May 1, 2017