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IN DREAMS Commented [AK1]: Pan up to the band slowly on band when

the main guitar riff starts - grey scale go to colour when on band
Commented [AK2]: Light guitar at the beginning

Fall! Commented [AK3]: Flash to a forest clip guitarist playing?
When guitar changes, jump cut back to vocalist
(Verse 1) Commented [AK4]: Heavy guitar 21 secs.
Break 2
You’ve taken this too far, horizons melting away. This plastic holocaust, and to you it’s just a game. 25secs vocal begins to 31
Commented [AK5]: Melting plastic – sped up
(Verse 2)
Commented [AK6]: 33 secs Up to 43secs
We are not...

…And I am not what you want me to be Commented [AK7]: Single shot on vocalist

As I open my mind I see,

There’s no reality. Commented [AK8]: Close up on vocalist
Commented [AK9]: When guitar breaks close up on it being
(Bridge) played
Commented [AK10]: Guitar breaks
In my dreams I find myself burning in frozen seas
More rhythmical with vocals

Vibrating colours mask the space in between. Commented [AK11]: Jump cut to Clip on the sky
Commented [AK12]: Fire?
In my dreams
Commented [AK13]: Colour change
(Pre chorus) Commented [AK14]: Guitar breaks again
Changes to new vocal rhythm
How do you wake up when you never sleep?

Sand fills the hourglass of eternity. Commented [AK15]: Cut to clip of hour glass- sped up- on
mirror &water – greyscale (blood effect)
(Chorus) Commented [AK16]: Close up on drums – pan? Jump cut to
guitar
We are not
Commented [AK17]: Guitar faster
1.35-1.38 purely guitar and drums
We are not our own

Nothings ours yet everything’s owed Commented [AK18]: Slow motion
Commented [AK19]: Vocal stop 1.46
(Dark clean build up - whispered) Guitar drums to 2.02 fade guitar?
Vocals back in 2.18 quiet
When my eyes are closed, the air it whispers to me

Visions pervade my mind, and they are talking to me

Intuitive signs of this awakening

Obelisk, the diamonds in my eyes

The rain freezes in this hiatus of space and time

I realise Commented [AK20]: Very quiet whisper

(Breakdown)

I am the sun Commented [AK21]: Music and vocals rise again

(Verse 3) Commented [AK22]: Guitar 2.57
growl 3.04-3.12 guitar carries on the same
Fall! Commented [AK23]: start3.20

You’ve taken this too far, horizons melting away. This plastic holocaust, and to you this is a game.

(Chorus 2) Commented [AK24]: Guitar break 3.39 – 3.50

We are not Commented [AK25]: Guitar gets faster as vocal starts again

We are not our own

Nothings ours yet everything’s owed

It's in our grasp, just out of touch

We are not Commented [AK26]: Vocalist alone head banging, wet hair -
greyscale
We are not our own

Nothings ours yet everything’s owed

It's in our grasp, just out of touch Commented [AK27]: Vocal more spaced

(Outro) Commented [AK28]: Vocal out 4.22- 4.26

Vibrating at the speed of light, our faith lies beyond our sight. Commented [AK29]: Song finishes at 4.37 carry on video to
4.40?
Commented [AK30]: Song finishes as the word finishes
Commented [AK31]: Eyes open- grey scale after music stops