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FRIDAY AND SATURDAY


NIGHTS 8:30PM -
STANDUP COMEDY!!

Friday is SHOWCASE
night and Saturday is
OPEN MIC!!! Be there or
never laugh again! Come
and laugh for free!!!
Enjoy anywhere from 10-15 local comics plying their
mirth-filled trade from 8:30-10:30. See what Drunken
Monkey owners and a few patrons have called, "funny"
and make plans to be there!!!

Warning, like smurfs, they can be a little blue.


Our Maryilyn Monroe
Graffiti wall from 2010

Phone: 407-893-4994.
444 N. Bumby Av. (Bumby and Amelia) in Orlando, FL.

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Drunken Monkey Coffee Bar was conceived to fill the need in Orlando for excellent
coffee and food that everyone can eat... think college-town coffeehouse.
Our coffee is top shelf only, fair trade and organic or rain forest alliance ... we buy only
the best tasting coffee beans from around the world!
We roast all are own coffee in house so its as fresh as possible.
All of our gourmet soups are drummed up fresh in our kitchen.
We want everyone to be able to love us so we have lots of veggie and vegan choices
as well as non-veggie foods.
We serve breakfast and lunch foods all day including great quiches, grilled wraps and
panini that will keep you coming back for more.
We have teas, smoothies, iced drinks, frozen drinks and so much more.
TRY OUR ANZAC COOKIES, A REAL TREAT AND SOMETHING VERY FEW CAN
RESIST... AN OATMEAL AND COCONUT SENSATION LIKE NO OTHER!!
Our Wi-Fi is always free.
Come by our convenient drive-thru for your espresso-based fixes or favorite foods.

We are open...
Monday - Thursday, 7am to 10pm.
Friday 7am to 11pm.
Saturday 8am to 11pm.
Sunday 9am to 10pm.

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Come enjoy lots of traditional coffee house goodness and homestyle food and desserts.

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Email us for more info on our opening at DrunkenMonkeyCoffee@gmail.com.
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Phone: 407-893-4994
444 N. Bumby Ave Orlando, FL
32803

Come enjoy lots of traditional coffee house goodness


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Monday through Thursday 7AM 10PM
Friday 7AM 11PM
Saturday 8AM 11PM
Sunday 9AM 10PM

EVENTS:

What? Standup Comedy!

When? Friday and Saturday nights at 8:30PMFRIDAY AND


SATURDAY NIGHTS 8:30PM - STANDUP COMEDY!!:Friday is
SHOWCASE Showcase Nnight and Saturday is OPEN MICOpen Mic
Night!!!!Be there or never laugh again.

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Drunken Monkey Coffee Bar was conceived to fill the need in
Orlando for excellent coffee and food that everyone can eat...
think college-town coffeehouse.
Our coffeeWe only brew is top shelf only, Ffair Ttrade
Certified and Oorganic, or Rrain forest Aalliance approved
... we buy only the best tasting coffee beans from around the
world!
We roast all are ownof our coffee in house so its as fresh as
possible.can be.
All of our gourmet soups are drummed up fresh right here in
our kitchen.
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veggie foodswe still have the classics. Formatted: Font: American Typewriter, 14 pt
We serve breakfast and lunch foods all day, including great
quiches, grilled wraps and paninis that will keep you
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TRY OUR ANZAC COOKIES, A REAL TREAT AND SOMETHING
VERY FEW CAN RESIST... AN OATMEAL AND COCONUT
SENSATION LIKE NO OTHER!!You absolutely must try our
Anzac cookiesA sensational treat very few can resist!
Our Wi-Fi is always free.
Come by our convenient drive-thru for your espresso-based
fixes or favorite foods.We have a drive-through for your
convenience!
We offer carry out service.

We are open...
Monday - Thursday, 7am to 10pm.
Friday 7am to 11pm.
Saturday 8am to 11pm.
Sunday 9am to 10pm.

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Come enjoy lots of traditional coffee house goodness and homestyle food
and desserts.

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To the Drunken Monkey Staff:

I am excited to announce that I have finished editing your site! As a fan of your
business, I think your material truly sings with the modifications I have made.

I have included a comprehensive list of major and minor changes below:

The Mural. One major change I would recommend is to consider providing a bit more
exposition about the Monroe Mural. While it is incredibly admirable and so beautifully
done, it took some scrolling and squandering to grasp a full understanding that it was a
collage of pictures compiled from the painted walls on your own building. Perhaps a brief
explanation as to how it became a tradition and/or how it defines your enterprise as a
local art-supporting business would provide newcomers with more clarity and leeway
into the atmosphere that is so well liked among your customers. I also might suggest
breaking apart the collage and dispersing the pictures more evenly throughout the site as
to create a more succinct distribution of text to images.
Organization. In sifting through from top to bottom, I felt a bit disoriented in wondering
what the business had to offer, and what type of venue I was looking at. The leading
segments about comedy night were a bit vague and led me, as a reader, to feel that the
subsequent information was oddly arranged. As a fairly regular breakfast/lunch customer
at the Monkey, I wondered if selling marks such as the vegetarian/vegan alternatives you
offer in house, through carry out, and via drive-through along with the elaborate coffee
and tea menu I might add would serve best closer to the top of your page. I rearranged
the order of these items accordingly while including as many details as possible.
Visual Components. It seemed like the color, size, and consistency of the words on the
page were oddly segmented in a way that made it hard to find specific information such
as hours of operation and contact information. I chose a font arbitrarily, let up on the
capitalization, and did my best to really smooth things over for cohesiveness and
aesthetic appeal. My only other recommendation would be to consider changing the color
scheme of bright red to a dark brown backdrop; I think a black backdrop complimented
by a visible red or white font would better suit the colors of the logo at the top of the site
as well.

I hope you find these changes helpful and reflective of your goals for success and for your loyal
customers! Feel free to contact me if you have any questions about changes made, would simply
like clarification somewhere, or for further services.

It has been a pleasure working with you.

Sincerely,

Gabriela Hardgrove
(321) 543-1255
gabbyhardgrove@gmail.com
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