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Being repetitive & redundancy To select your
E.g. Subjects Concepts Aspects
Life is beautiful because we have many beautiful moments, and these moments are People persons Psychology - Behavior Stages of life, relationships
wonderful situations because life is beautiful. Government citizens Society Interaction Morality, ethics
Minister of education- Teachers Education - Teaching Planning, methods
Stand / Style Topic sentence Main idea (s) Justification (Support) Additional ideas Examples
Con - Disadvantage Life is difficult. 1 Sometimes, many B (1) people do not pay (1) Moreover, many F (1) Science requires
activities are hard to E attention explanations seem O many formulas and
understand C confusing. R calculations.
2 Life has many A (2) no one knows what (2) In addition, sometimes (2) Especially when
challenging moments. U to do for sure. people do not have I they have to deal with
S enough skills to N adult life.
E accomplish their goals. S
3 Lots of experiences are (3) they take time and T
tiring and demanding. energy. A
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Additional Elements Hard, challenging, complicated, Linkers to list points: Forms / ways to explain your Additional ideas MUST be Ways to exemplify:
exhausting, tiring, demanding - First of all / Firstly / To begin points: connected to your main concern 1 Experiential
with / First . Why Where What How and idea to create clarity and 2 Background knowledge
- Second / Secondly / Then When Cause/Effect arguments unity: COHERENCE and 3 Quotes data - research
- Third / Thirdly / After that... (give reasons) COHESION. 4 Comparison Metaphor
Linkers to substitute because: Linkers to add points: 5 Analogy
Therefore, thus, for this reason, Also, as well, In addition (to), Linkers to give examples:
consequently, due to, since, as, Moreover What is more, apart Such as, for example, especially,
so from, besides, on top of that, particularly,
likewise, in the same way,
Use this very box to work your PROS paragraph and save your version in your ING file: your version must include (so far):
A Title
An introduction (yours)
Topic question A university magazine has asked students to write a pro-con essay to explain how joyful life is and part of its main difficulties.
Conclusion
Linkers to conclude:
In conclusion, all in all, Finally, all things
considered, to sum up,
Life is difficult at times and obviously very demanding. Sometimes, many activities are hard to understand, people often do not pay attention; what is more, many
explanations seem confusing, for instance, science requires many formulas and calculations SOME formulas and calculations are required/HAVE BEEN required / SHOULD
BE required for science TESTS in modern UNIVERSITY education. Secondly, life has many challenging moments; thus, no one knows what to do for sure. In addition, people
regularly do not have enough skills to accomplish their goals; for example, when they have to deal with adult life.