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LO1 FEEDBACK

Bex Holland LO1 Feedback. 30/11/17

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome is a Merit Pass Grade,
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Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.


Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words Re-Submission.

LO1 Part A. Radio Station Presentation (P1)


You provided a good presentation on a UK radio station, explaining the type, genre,
audience and market share. However, the video and feedback is not on your blog. Please
add it.

Lo1 Part B. Radio Show Analysis (P2)


Some good work here, this shows that you have analysed your chosen radio station.

The resubmission deadline is: 14th December 2017