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iFixit Resume

by Valeria Soto-Quintos

Submission date: 31-Aug-2017 09:39PM (UT C-0700)


Submission ID: 841901744
File name: Valeria_Soto_-_iFixit_Resume.docx (39.91K)
Word count: 209
Character count: 1138
I'm not sure what you mean
Seeking
by association skills--can
you use a different word?

Good evidence that you


can lead--and that
you've been trusted to
do so in the past. In the
future,
add specificity addfor
here, specificity
example? to
show more of what can you name 2-3 tasks?
you've done.

mo
stl
ya
go
od
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I'd indent these three loo
lines, since they "go kin
under" CSUF. g,
eff

ect
ive
de
sig
n

keep the grammar consistent: fundraising and decorating


are nouns (things), while help is a verb (action)

good consistent grammar in this bullet.


iFixit Resume
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Text Comment. I'm not sure what you mean by association skills--can you use a dif f erent
word?

Text Comment. Seeking

Text Comment. Good evidence that you can lead--and that you've been trusted to do so
in the past. In the f uture, add specif icity to show more of what you've done.

Text Comment. add specif icity here, f or example?

Text Comment. can you name 2-3 tasks?

Text Comment. mostly a good-looking, ef f ective design

Text Comment. I'd indent these three lines, since they "go under" CSUF.

Text Comment. keep the grammar consistent: f undraising and decorating are nouns
(things), while help is a verb (action)

Text Comment. good consistent grammar in this bullet.


RUBRIC: IFIXIT RESUME RUBRIC

CRIT ERION 1 Advanced


Form and Organization

ABSENT OR BELOW Sections organization is absent, illogical, or inconsistent; Headings may be absent or
BASIC do not describe content ef f ectively

DEVELOPING Sections organization isn't always clear or consistent; Headings may not describe
content ef f ectively

PROFICIENT Sections are usually organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
adequately

ADVANCED Sections are organized logically and consistently; Headings describe content
ef f ectively

CRIT ERION 2 Prof icient


Content & Persuasiveness

ABSENT OR BELOW Job description's details may not be addressed; evidence of qualif ications is lacking
BASIC or irrelevant

DEVELOPING Generalizations attempt to address the job's description; evidence of qualif ications
isn't yet adequate

PROFICIENT Some specif ic details address the job's description directly; evidence of qualif ications
is adequate

ADVANCED Specif ic details address the job's description directly and aptly; evidence of
qualif ications is plentif ul and convincing

CRIT ERION 3 Advanced


Appearance

ABSENT OR BELOW White space, f onts, and design are not used to increase the reader-f riendliness of
BASIC the resume.

DEVELOPING White space, f onts, and design may be distracting or inef f ective.

PROFICIENT White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective.

ADVANCED White space, f onts, and design are ef f ective and attractive

CRIT ERION 4 Prof icient


Readability

ABSENT OR BELOW Bullet Point clauses/phrases are hard to understand and structured inconsistently;
BASIC errors impede readability throughout.
DEVELOPING Bullet Point clauses/phrases may be hard to understand or structured inconsistently;
errors impede readability at times

PROFICIENT Bullet Point clauses/phrases are usually ef f ective and structured consistently; a f ew
errors

ADVANCED Bullet Point clauses/phrases are ef f ective and structured consistently; nearly error
f ree
iFixit Resume
ORIGINALITY REPORT

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