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LO1 & LO2 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass

Current Grade for LO2: Distinction

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on this learning outcome 1 is a Pass Grade, and
learning outcome 2 is a Distinction Grade, even if you have achieved this, if there are any
minor corrections or additions, can you please ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember Dont overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words Re-Submission.

Overall: A detailed exploration and proposal into radio broadcasting. You cover many topics in
detail, constantly exploring alternatives. However you must consider in more detail the financial

LO1: A detailed exploration of UK radio broadcasting with good discussion of programme

types and content as well as target audience profiling.

LO2: A detailed proposal for your radio broadcast which covers all aspects you are
required to consider within the Learning outcome. Your treatment contains depth and
some great research into primary and secondary audiences whilst exploring the news
bulletins your show will present to accommodate these audiences. However although you
acknowledge the financial elements of your broadcast you may want to enter into more
detail when considering equipment costs and begin to break down the cost of your show
into individual sections.

The resubmission deadline is: 8th December 2017.