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Scoring the Analytical Exposition Text

No Name Thesis Argumen Organization Use of comments


tation & Writing Evidence
1 Elwa Junaidi 70 72 70 68 Opening statements
did not support the
main idea of
writing. No factual
evidence, need
improvement on
connecting ideas
each sentence.
2 Noviani 94 90 95 95 Good writing. Very
well grammar used.
the ideas flow well
on each sentence.
3 Chindy Selvia 78 75 78 78 Some grammar
mistakes are found.
Need more
arguments to
support the
atstements
4 Jufri Ananda 72 70 70 68 The handwriting is
not really clear. The
ideas are too
common with less
evidence/comments.
5 Parni Rina 80 75 74 72 The way she
connected the
sentence is not so
well. Some
statements ‘jump’
without any
supporting ideas.
She also has
problems with
grammar.
6 Virel Aldino 78 75 75 70 He has problems
with grammar.
Ideas did not flow
very well, less
evidence
7 Nurkholijah 78 75 75 72 Many ideas are too
general, need more
arguments.
8 Fairatul Husna 80 78 75 78 More ideas are
Daslin needed to support
the statements,
some grammar
mistakes found.
9 Ridho Suhandika 82 76 80 78 Each idea did not
have supporting
ideas (only points).
Strong reasons are
also needed.
10 Revis Daria 82 78 80 82 Good writing. Need
more ideas to
support statements
11 DInda Fadilah 85 80 83 83 Good writing. Need
more supporting
ideas
12 Feggy Nisa 78 76 76 74 Some ambiguous
Rabelina statements found,
also some grammar
mistakes. Need
more ideas to
support the
statements
13 Dimas Syaifullah 78 75 75 75 The ideas are too
wide and general.
Narrowing it would
be good.
14 Agrefina 80 78 78 78 Introductory
paragraph needs
more statements. As
well as details.
15 Dira Azizah 80 78 82 80 Good writing, even
some grammar
mistakes are found.
Need more
supporting
statements
16 Annisha 78 75 78 75 The ideas did not
very well-
organized. Need
clear points for pro
and contra
statements.
17 Ranti Melantari 82 76 78 80 The ideas are too
general. Need to
specify them. Plus
more examples
would be great.
18 Sesy Erlina 90 88 88 90 Good writing. Good
Martika evidence.
19 Alfintan 85 78 80 82 Good writing, but
Rahmadini Putri need to improve
how to state the
main ideas with
supporting
explanations.
20 Fadilah Zunuaris 85 78 80 80 Good writing, but
need more opinions
on opening
paragraph.