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Hull no. 721 ‑ a fanfic

  2006­11­20 02:06pm

Table of Contents
This is slightly‑impure Star Wars so far, set basically between Yavin and Hoth, with some continuity deviations,
mainly to do with starfighter availability and just how much an Imperial Starfleet Captain can get away with. I
found it lurking in a backup folder and decided to update it with some of the things I've found out from SDN‑ here
beginneth Chapter 1.
Ghorn system, Vineland sector, a minor offshoot of the Perlemian run.
As fitted a system so close to one of the major arteries of galactic trade, there was a fleet presence.
Around a dim, red‑orange star near the end of its life, planets; two gas giants, with their horde of moons and
asteroids clustering and flustering around them, three smaller worlds huddling close to their dying sun. It had
been burning itself down for longer than there had been star‑traveling life, and the living creatures on the little
lumps of rock were in no danger just yet. Except from each other.

A large slice of that danger, made actuality in durasteel, hung in latticework repair bays over the small blue‑green
haven of Ghorn II. It hovered protected by the guns of the planet’s north polar defence station, a fleet tender
standing by the much‑ scarred ship, shuttles and tugs and work platforms roaming over it.
Imperator I‑refit‑II Star Destroyer Black Prince did not look much like the pride of anyone’s navy, least of all that
of her crew.
A grotesque patchwork of faded parchment yellow, gleaming white replacement hull, bare silvery metal, a few
slabs and patches that were the colour of her name, angry heat‑ red emergency field repair and dots of fused
blue‑ black scoring all across the much abused hull.
She would never feature on any recruitment poster, was lucky not to have been condemned as beyond economic
repair, but she was one of the Twenty‑Five Thousand, and far from the least, except in numerical precedence.
Beneath the registry number, 721, were a line of non‑ random black dots‑ silhouettes of ships. They were the
boast, and the gun crews’ skill the living proof, that for all the damage abundantly visible she had given out far
more than she had taken.
The tender Sahallare’s job was field repair; in theory this was nothing out of the ordinary. In practice, most of
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‘What in stang happened to her?’ One of them said to his workmate.

‘Lots of things, lots of times.’ The second technician said. ‘You ever seen anything this badly beat up and still
‘Yeah, a YT‑ series, but that was on a wanted poster.’ He was looking up at the kill markings beneath the
starboard‑ side row of heavy turbolaser turrets, in particular the bulged oval that represented the Mon Calamari
cruiser Irrepressible. The Rebellion had not forgiven nor forgotten.

A pressure shelter had been hung over the section of dorsal hull they were working on‑ deep‑annealing a fusing
line between two replacement hull plates.
They could work faster, and with a lower accident rate, that way than by wielding the clumsy jackhammer‑ looking
heat projectors in spacesuits.
It also meant they could be kept under observation more effectively, and the work shed erected on the outer skin
of the destroyer had a stormtrooper detail watching them.
The first workman was getting increasingly jumpy, glancing at the stormtroopers, glancing up at the kill score.
There was a lot of blood on this ship’s hands, and some friends of friends of his would be interested to know that
she was here.
Concentrate, he told himself, just do the job, don’t draw attention to yourself, keep your head down.
Finish the shift, get out, and then he could go to the com center on the Sahallare, use his allowed call home, to
which he would add certain phrases and emphases, which would be passed on to a man codenamed Starshine,
and from there find their way to Third Mid‑Rim Theatre Command.
Taking an Imperial Starfleet tender would be a shining achievement and a real practical gain for the Alliance;
probably not going to happen, but they would settle for a chance at a beached Star Destroyer.
The rebel spy kept working, quietly, trying to avoid drawing attention to himself, hoping not to feel stormtrooper
eyes on his back.

The destroyer’s own crew were working on their ship from the inside out, dealing with the softer tissue inside the
heavy armoured shell. Most of the problem was with control systems.
The actual damage had not been at all severe, this time‑ not by this ship’s standards‑ mainly ionization. Half the
consoles in the main bridge pit were still dark, clusters of operators round others.
One of the turbolifts opened, and a very junior officer bounced in followed by two engineering ratings carrying a
large box.
‘I’ve got it!’ the probationer lieutenant said. ‘El Fuzz says that it’s the‑‘ He had expected his classmate to be the
only one there of importance; he had failed to notice the tall, thin vulturelike figure of the executive officer at the
back of the bridge. He realized he was in trouble when everyone else turned to look at the exec.

‘Carry on.’ The exec told everyone else, pointed at the lieutenant, pointed at the deck in front of himself. The
probationer gulped, slunk over.
‘Who sent you up to the bridge?’ the exec asked, coldly. 2/263
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‘Uhm, er,’ the probie tried to wriggle out of it, ‘I was told you were on board the tender, Sir, I really wouldn’t‑‘
‘Is this really a line of defence you want to pursue?’ the exec loomed. ‘That you would not have expressed extreme
disrespect of a senior officer, if you had realised that you might get caught?’
The poor, raw lieutenant was visibly squirming. ‘Sir, I meant no‑‘
‘The proper response under the circumstances,’; the exec advised him, ‘is‑ repeat after me‑ “I am guilty of gross
insubordination, I apologise, I will accept the mandated punishment, and I won’t do it again.” Say it. And do try
not to make it worse for yourself.’

The lieutenant looked left and right; apart from the rest of the repair party, the only other people on the bridge
were a four‑ being stormtrooper detail. One of them was wobbling slightly, trying and failing not to laugh.
The poor probationer gabbled through the words, and then broke orders again by asking ‘But Sir, how did you
know I meant‑‘
‘Who else would be sending you here, to say that it’s the‑? Context, probationer, context. What does the chief say
the trouble is?’ The exec would come back to attempting to entrap a senior officer later.

‘The secondary nav system, Sir. When it was ionized it went into full reset, and the only uncorrupt backup was the
initial dockyard settings. It, ah, isn’t accepting that the ship’s been modified, and is trying to override the primary
nav system, which it thinks is obviously still damaged.’ He parroted.
‘A hardware patch?’ Not normal procedure.
‘Um, I think so, Sir.’
‘Do you actually understand any of what you’ve just told me?’
‘I, I think so, Sir.’

‘Hmmm. Let us review the charges.’ The exec began pacing up and down in front of the main viewports.
‘Disrespect of a senior officer. Compounding the offence by asking me to refer to said officer in the same terms.
Disobeying an order‑ not to make it worse for yourself, which you did. That is a technicality, however‑ where are
you from?’
‘Pomolthooine, Sir.’
‘ ‘‑tooine’ means ‘Barren wasteland’ in some language or other, I swear. Your only authority there would have
been your family, which you disobeyed in any case to go to the academy.’ The exec did not know this, and was
making it up as he went‑ accurately, it seemed, from the probationer’s reactions.
‘Poorly brought up, crammed through an abbreviated training program. Insufficiently prepared.’ The exec paused
for thought, pacing up and down.
‘The daily bread of a starship is training and exercise. For all elements. Practise prepares us for the reality of
working the Emperor’s will on the reluctant to obey.’
That much at least was doctrine; what came after less so. ‘Our onboard stormtrooper group has a deep probe
interrogation team attached. They, too, need training and practice.’
The exec dropped his voice to a whisper. ‘If I had any reason to think that you weren’t simply a loose‑ tongued
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‘Sir, please don’t sir it was just a slip of the tongue, I genuinely meant no disconscious resp, I mean no conscious
‘My duty,’ the exec stated, ‘is to make competent starmen out of people like you. At the moment, you’re alive
because I’m assuming you’re an idiot. That is not a long term survival strategy.
A punishment that fits the crime‑ I think I’ll make you use your brain. I want a full rundown on the ship’s
hyperdrive systems. How and why they work, evolution of hyperdrive, navigation systems, how they integrate with
ship sensors and electronics, new experiments in hyperwave theory‑ I want you to prove, not to me, to the Chief
Engineer, that you’re worth more to the Empire alive. Report back to engineering‑ Dismiss.’
The poor probationer, almost in shock, stumbled off the bridge.

The exec walked over to the port sub‑gallery, the ship’s com centre, out of earshot of all but the sensors in the
stormtrooper helmets; and released his own repressed burst of laughter. El Fuzz, indeed. He shook his head, went
to the intraship terminal. ‘Engineering? Get me Commander Mirannon.’
A few moments later, an extremely hairy man in dirty overalls came to the other end of the terminal. When he had
time to perform personal grooming, at best in other words, Engineer‑Commander Mirannon looked like a wookie
disguised as a human. When he had other priorities, like now, he looked more like a human disguised as a wookie.
‘Ah, Commander Dordd. What is it?’
‘Do I look like a waste disposal unit to you?’ the exec said.
‘I rebuild ships, not men‑ talk to Medical.’ The bulky, grease and dust stained engineer said.
‘You seem to think I am; you keep trying to dispose of unwanted junior officers by feeding them to me.’
‘Oh, you mean the work crew.’ Mirannon’s expression was not easy to read behind the beard.

‘Why are you using a hardware patch for a software solution?’

‘It’s temporary, it deadends the interference from the secondary nav computer. I have all the processing power I
can get my hands on running finite element analysis for the ion drive calibration, hyperdrive’s a straightforward
derivation of the same analysis. Eight more hours to work the balance out and twelve to set it up.’
‘So the engines are sound, then?’ Dordd asked.
‘It’s the firing controls that aren’t. We can make full acceleration, if you don’t mind a line of thrust, and relative
inertial field, around eighty milliradians off the centerline of the ship. Probably not in the same direction, either.’
He sounded as if he didn’t expect Dordd to know the difference between a milliradian and a microchloridian.
‘Primary nav is functional, it’s sublight drive that isn’t.’ Dordd stated what he thought the position was. He was
about to go on when the bridge PA called him.
‘Commander Dordd, report to the Captain’s day cabin. Repeat‑‘ and he was moving already.

The day cabin was basically a cubbyhole just off the bridge for a cot and a desk, where the ship’s commander
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Very few Star Destroyer’s captains let it remain that basic. It was a common joke that, as the ship’s offices were in
the command tower, if the rebels did blow it off you might be better not restoring emergency control, just go
down with the ship.
Otherwise, you would only spend the rest of your life paperchasing through the navy bureaucracy trying to rebuild
the lost records, medical files, requisition and stores reports, status sheets, personnel records‑ it was the bane of
the navy’s life, and more than one captain wished he could do his filing by turbolaser.
On the other hand, it meant there was lots of room to expand more important facilities into‑ just squeeze the
offices up a little tighter. Preferably with the staff still in them.

Many Imperial warships spent more time fighting the bureaucracy than they did the enemy. Between a tremendous
stroke of luck at the beginning to build on, and a combination of interest, brown‑nosing, judgement and
blackmail, ISD‑721 had won victories roughly comparable to a certain infamous proton torpedo entering a certain
poorly shielded exhaust port.
The Black Prince’s commander’s day cabin had expanded into a full scale penthouse suite including small
swimming pool under a previous captain, but it was under new management now.
The entryway had been converted back into something resembling the original purpose‑ desk, computer terminal,
flanking datawalls and holodisplays.
An abstract, multi‑ belabelled image of the ship was being spun from one holoprojector; ship status display. It
hiccupped occasionally, as if refusing to believe the image it was showing.

The captain had one foot up on the desk, and was frowning at the image. He was a man of above middle height‑
not the stick‑figure of his XO, not far off either‑ and leanly built, dark hair turning grey at the temples, chiseled
face, dark, dark eyes.
Appallingly badly dressed‑ looking more like a sea‑ surface fisherman than a captain of a major warship, uniform
tunic (faded) flapping open over a jersey of some palaeolithic material and grey‑ green uncertain colour.
‘You sent for me, Sir?’ Dordd asked. The captain nodded, waved him to the other chair.
‘Yes…where would you be now, do you think, if no‑one had shown you mercy as a loose‑ tongued probationer?’
the Captain asked, tone well at odds with the words, speculative rather than punitive.
‘About the same place I’d be if no‑one had pointed out to me in time that there are limits to mercy.’ Dordd said,
still standing, not even bothering to wonder about how the captain had managed to overhear.
The captain nodded. ‘Narrow line, is it not? Encouraging them in some directions, stopping them in others,
shaping young mynocklets like that into the officers the fleet needs‑ especially when they arrive thinking they
know it all.
It was easy for us; the short sharp shock is less painful in the long run…someone thinks you’re doing something
right.’ Captain Lennart handed his soon to be ex‑ executive officer a hardcopy of a recently received file.
Dordd read the first couple of lines, then his mind went blank. The Captain swung his foot off the desk, stood up,
grabbed Dordd by the hand and shook it. ‘Congratulations.’
The exec was still boggling. ‘Thank you, Captain, I had thought‑‘
‘Sit down.’ Dordd collapsed into the chair. ‘I did recommend you; it’s not been an easy cruise, she can be a
demanding old bitch, and you did well enough.’
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two glasses on it. Lennart poured the cobalt‑ blue liquid out himself, two full shots, and the two officers gulped
them down.
‘What’s in that?’ Dordd asked, reeling. It felt like a river of molten ice being poured through his head.
‘Alien biochemistry’s a wondrous thing‑ not a clue.’ Lennart said, deadpan, and lying. Dordd’s eyes went wide
before he realised it was a wind‑up. Lennart went on;
‘I read it, of course,’ meaning the hardcopy, ‘Dynamic’s one of the Arrogant‑ class. Not a new ship, which might
be just as well.’ Both of them knew exactly what he meant. The sort of people who were getting priority over new
construction, neither of them felt comfortable around.
‘Weird little ships, seventy‑ five percent our‑ well, a standard Imperator’s, anyway‑ length, thirty‑ six percent the
volume and forty‑ five percent the mass. Supposed to be derived from the old Venator class‑ the pure combat
version without the fighter bays. Half way through they realized they were doing it backwards, KDY turned the
design study into a separate project and Rendili built the Victory class round the old reactor plant.
Dynamic’s a fast fleet hunter‑outrider‑ once again, congratulations, Captain‑designate Dordd.’

Delvran Dordd, very recently promoted Captain in His Imperial (and sith) Majesty’s Navy, started to think about his
new job. What was the size‑ for that matter, who were‑ the crew of the Dynamic? Where was she?
‘Normally,’ Captain Jorian Lennart told him, ‘I’d do a fast flyby of her last reported position and drop you off, but
supposedly she’s been on boundary patrol on the outer Rim edge for the last year, and you’ll remember how
trigger happy we got on that detail. Especially right now with our drives in this state, best thing to do is for you to
take a shuttle‑ no, better an assault transport. One’s prepping now. You’ll probably miss that.’
‘Fighter support?’
‘Everything it implies. A million worlds in the galaxy. Capital ‘W’ worlds, anyway.
Another fifty million colonies. Four hundred billion stars‑ and tomorrow Black Prince could be on her way to any
one of them. Engineering permitting.
Even moving from exec to captain, you don’t realize what that means until it hits you‑ like one of them, a small
planet in the face. You don’t have to be ready for anything, you have to be ready for everything.
Arrogants don’t have the multirole capacity to be sent any‑and‑everywhere, so it should be easier for you. You’ll
just be chasing ghosts all along the outer rim.’

‘Does it say anything about fleet, oversector group, assigned op‑area? Or crew?’ Dordd asked, mind still reeling.
‘Eleven thousand, seven hundred and twenty‑ four, leaner manned than an Imperator.’ Jorian poured another set
of drinks, drank one of them. He was talking about the crew.
‘So many, and probably the same unlikely blend of heroes and halfwits, starry‑eyed idealists and black hearted
thugs, overgrown children and dead‑ spirited cynics, blunderers, chancers, wasters, risk‑ takers, egomanicacs
and lost souls, fools and rogues, murderers and paladins, and Bodgit and Scarper doing business as usual,
changing face of the galaxy be damned.’
Dordd was worried. The captain was getting unusually maudlin; this wasn’t like him. Most of the time, anyway.
‘Are you sure this is safe for human consumption?’ he said looking at the shot glass.

‘I’m pretty sure it isn’t. Maybe I am getting sentimental about my crew; but‑ what’s devotion to duty, if not a
sentiment? What’s loyalty, if not a sentiment? Numbers are one thing, but you look out of the window down past
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than reactor rated output.’

‘Captain, I believe, but I don’t understand. I’m not sure what I can do with what you’re trying to tell me.’
‘Well, on one level, you don’t have a choice‑ no stormtrooper detail. I’m telling you that in addition to the worlds
outside the ship, you’ve got another twelve thousand on the inside to worry about, one‑ or more‑ inside each
crewman’s head.
They might actually be the most important. The universe is too big to cope with on your own.’ Jorian Lennart
shook his head. ‘I must be far gone‑ more narcotic than drink in this.’ Which was his excuse, anyway.

‘Still, better a blinding glimpse of the obvious than a blinding flash of turbolaser fire. You need your crew.’ He had
one foot back up on the desk.
‘You need them to work for you, you need them to think for you, you need them to believe for you. The best built
fighting ship in the universe is pointless if the people running it are half trained and scared out of their wits. The
worst‑ and the tender crew seem to think we come pretty close‑ is invaluable if it’s properly used, and those
twelve, or thirty‑ seven, thousand are as much the weapon as the ship is. You’re probably going to make a better
captain than you did an executive officer.’
‘What do you mean by that?’ Dordd asked, slightly stung.
‘As exec, you have an answer for your problems. You have your part of the picture to look after and keep in order,
you know what you ought to be doing. As Captain, you finally get to see all of the picture; and you realize that it’s
a puzzle. I am generally prepared to put up with far more, from this crew, than you are. Did you never wonder
‘It’s deliberate, that much I got, but I never understood why you think it’s a good idea.’
‘If I was being appropriately cynical, I would call it the illusion of freedom. I need their belief, their pride and
commitment in the ship and in the cause. As a captain, you depend on your crew‑ only fractionally less than they
depend on you.
One thing; your last official duty as executive officer of the Black Prince. Who do you recommend I promote to
replace you?’

For a brief moment, Dordd was tempted to recommend Mirannon, if only for a taste of his own medicine.
‘Lieutenant‑commander Mirhak‑ghulej.’ The Chief Divisional Officer, midships starboard section.
‘Interesting. Your logic?’
‘He’s done well in a difficult situation, keeping the most diverse part of the ship in good order, displaying what I
think are the necessary qualities for the job.’ Dordd answered.
‘The crew loathe him. A man doesn’t get ves daubed over the inside of all his uniforms for nothing. At first glance,
I would have opted for Brenn. However, exactly because he would have been my personal choice, that could mean
he’s wrong for the job. Recommendation accepted.’

Dordd was still standing there trying to work that one out when the captain’s steward came in again with a
datapad and two antidote pills. Lennart read it, thought about it, handed it to Dordd.
‘On the other hand, you may not want to miss this. It’s from your favourite stormtrooper.’ 7/263
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‘I don’t have a‑‘ Dordd started to protest, then got involved in what the message said. It was a report from one of
the security troopers, concerning one of the tender’s work teams. ‘She doesn’t even have a name.’
‘Her being named Omega‑17‑Blue‑Aleph‑3 might make whispering sweet nothings a bit more difficult, true ‑
question is, is her judgement trustworthy?’
Omega company was special attachments to legion HQ; things like seismic demolition teams, deep probe units,
propaganda and destabilization, ugly, dirty, messy jobs. 17 was the team number, blue the specialization ‑ Scout,
officially, but clearly not exactly so ‑ Aleph 3 was a personal number.

‘Dockworker with high stress levels, trying not to draw attention to himself and getting it wrong, looking up
repeatedly at the splotch for that damn’ rebel cruiser ‑ that doesn’t make a spy.’
‘I’m inclined to take it seriously.’ Jorian turned to one of the subconsoles on his desk. ‘Engineering? Mirannon.’
The huge man covered in red‑brown hair and grey‑ blue grease came to the terminal, grumbling. ‘Flarding
interruptions, can’t I get ‑ oh, it’s you, skipper.’
‘How many decimal places are you running this analysis to?’ Jorian asked him.
‘As many as I can. Tender’s got the tools and parts for me to fix a couple of long standing gripes, and synergy
effects are going to take an unpredictable time to sort out ‑ so many ifs and buts in the estimate, it’d make no
sense. Sir.’
The Chief Engineer had a ship model on his seldom‑used desk, which looked something like a cross between a
normal star destroyer and a swan ‑ wide, sweeping curves, streamlined, graceful.
The rest of the engineering crew said that was what he was trying to turn the Black Prince into, one major refit at a
time. And he knew perfectly well how long it was going to take.

‘If you were Rebel Theatre Command, and you found out about an unescorted imperial fleet tender patching up a
disabled star destroyer, what would you do?’
‘Kriff.’ Mirannon swore.
‘Don’t think of it as losing time in calibration; think of it as saving time spent in damage control. How soon can
you give me manoeuvring thrust?’
‘We can thrust, with a moderate to high chance of becoming pate in the process, and we definitely can’t steer. It’s
not the only problem ‑ I’m doing that the long way because there are other jobs needing done in the mean time.
Power distribution forward of the hangar bay is shot, we’re using DC’ ‑ in this case, Damage Control ‑
‘portaconduits that won’t take long duration at full power. They need a proper rebuild. Overlapping shields
burning each other out. It’s all do‑able, but it’ll take time. Can’t we just call for support?’

It was possible that by arresting the rebel agent, they could avoid contact entirely. Lennart hadn’t even seriously
considered it. It wasn’t their job to avoid combat, and he was still in fighting temper after the clash that had
landed his ship in a repair bay.
Capability was the only question. ‘We’ll notify fleet. How much notice they’ll take I don’t know, we’re strangers
here. We’re not far off being able to do the job ourselves. I know perfectly well, chief, we’re not going to be a
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‘I can knock a couple of hundred decimal places off the calibration and patchwork it‑ six hours, and the
compensators will be redlining. Don’t push it. Another twelve past that to be able to hyper, well below full speed
though‑ stable at point two five, best rough estimate. If I can borrow half the legion to do the donkey work with
my people directing, shields in eight hours.’ Mirannon groaned inwardly, but stated the facts.
He was not an unhappy man in his job, usually. Imperial Starfleet engineers fell into one of two categories;
peacetime, or at least civilian university, trained with general and comprehensive background knowledge‑ in other
words, overqualified; or military academy trained and thus barely qualified‑ too narrow, too specific, skipping too
much of the groundwork and basics to get to the workaday details.
Gethrim Mirannon fell very firmly into the former category, and it would have been difficult to prevent him
reassembling the ship to suit himself, if in fact Lennart had wanted to stop him. For all that they snarled at each
other occasionally, they were in effect partners in crime.
‘No support from the tender?’
‘The equipment I can use. The people‑no. They’re why we’ve got the interaction problem.’

‘OK, chief, that sounds good enough. Get on with it.’ He dropped the link to engineering, and typed in an access
code. ‘OB173, this is Black Prince Actual.’
‘You’re not supposed to be on this network.’ A female voice came back out of the speakers‑ deep, contralto,
amused rather than offended.
‘Tell me more about this rebel of yours,’ Captain Lennart asked.
‘Probability that he has something to hide; unity. Probability that it is Rebellion related; 0.92. Do you want me to
take him in?’ she asked, phrasing it purely as a question.

Lennart looked at Dordd. Dordd wanted to. Lennart decided against it.
‘Negative, OB173, he hasn’t had time to get the word out. Take him now and we’ll have nothing to trap. Your team
has the ball on this one. Monitor him, let him communicate, then grab him and brainburn him.’
‘Yes, Sir.’ She said, clearly looking forward to it.
Captain Lennart backed out of the stormtrooper comnet, turned to Dordd. ‘Don’t know what you see in her.
Personally I’d be more inclined to run away you want to leave for the Dynamic, or do you want your
old job back‑ in an acting capacity‑ to see this one through?’
Dordd stood there, thinking. Technically he shouldn’t even have been given the choice, but he had. On one hand,
his own ship; on the other hand, combat against the rebellion‑ and he would just as soon put off the chaos of
taking command for another day or so, to get his head straightened out.
‘You might need the assault transport.’
Lennart smiled. ‘Good.’

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and the rest reduced to virtual wingtip to wingtip storage. Ceilings lowered, floors added, waste space eliminated.
The Oversector Fleet command she had been operating with at the time had been obsessed‑ more like
traumatized‑ by rebel starfighters, and Black Prince had been in for major refit after taking a kamikaze rebel
gunship‑corvette in the flight bay. A bay that had been suspiciously empty of personnel at the time.
Strings had been pulled and reputations traded on, and the end result was that the veteran destroyer had the
support for a double normal strength fighter wing.
There was actually an Imperator‑ conversion that did this anyway, and it had proved easier, administratively, to
get one of their heavy fighter wings assigned, but that variant lost too much capability as a warship for Lennart’s
taste, and this way he had the best of both worlds.
The pilots were not busy at the moment. This was officially safe space, and the space they had come from had
been decidedly unsafe.
They had taken losses, and needed time to draw breath, reorganize, and have the ground crews assemble
replacement fighters from parts storage.

Most of Epsilon squadron had passed through the mourning stage, and got just about as far as ‘Thank the force it
wasn’t me.’
Their unit bay held, on the lower level, their actual fighters, launch racks, maintenance pads, stores and spares, on
the upper level‑ separated by a comfortingly thick armoured deck‑ the squadron ops room, office, ready room,
rec‑ usually pronounced ‘wreck’‑ room, mess‑ which it was, ground crew barracks, pilots’ cabins.
The squadron leader’s cabin had black bunting around the door; half of it had been torn off and was now draped
over the shoulders of Epsilon‑3, he had a drink in one hand and with the other he was playing a kazoo. After their
fashion, it was a wake.

In the squadron office, the only pilot not participating was sitting behind the desk, one hand holding a soother‑
pad over her forehead, stylus in the other, looking at three datapads and wishing her head would stop throbbing,
or Three would stop playing that thing.
She had lost her own element leader, and been lucky not to have her own head ripped off when a lump of engine
from a detonating rebel fighter had caved her cockpit viewscreen in. The senior flight commander of Epsilon
squadron was therefore in a black mood, and wondering if anyone had ever in fact been beaten to death with a
kazoo. Surely it had been tried.
She knew that if she did stand up and go to get some quiet out of them, she would probably end up doing some
of the rebellion’s work for it.

‘Flight lieutenant Rahandravell?’ the door opened, and a misshapen figure said.
‘If you don’t shut that door, I’ll start blasting on the count of three.’
The lopsided man came in and closed and sealed the door; he had the same rank insignia she did, although rather
less of a body to pin it on. The squadron adjutant was a grounded pilot; he had been on an atmospheric strafing
run when a minor hit had caused his laser power cells to split.
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‘How do you do this, Yrd? How do you stop yourself accidentally telling the truth to the poor silly bastards?’
Rahandravell poked at the datapads with the stylus. They were three letters to next of kin.
‘Lady Lyria Tellick; dear lady, your son died when a rebel heavy fighter blew the front of his cockpit off. I saw him
drifting there in space with no legs, and I don’t know whether loss of blood or loss of air managed to kill him first,
because I could still hear him screaming and thrashing round, so I know that shock didn’t.
Malomik Inturii, rust farmer; dear sir, your brother gave his life for the empire. Actually, he threw it away because
he couldn’t stand it any longer, he ejected and was caught on the tail of his fighter, I should have given him a
clean death there and then myself but I didn’t, the impact broke every bone in his body below the ribcage, they
tractored him in before he could decompress but he killed himself in the med bay because he couldn’t take the
pain any more. How do I not say that? How do I make them think it didn’t happen?’ she was crying.

Yrd was afraid to comfort her; he didn’t know her all that well. She was a highly competent pilot and an excellent
shot, but had a reputation as an ice maiden; she kept whatever drove her sealed up deep inside. Now that was
cracking wide open, and it made him squirm.
He didn’t know how to cope with it either. He started by rambling.
‘When I got shot up, I could have invalided out. Maybe should have, but home, for me, is Kuat. What would be the
point? Every time I looked up, I’d see a sky full of star destroyers. I wouldn’t be leaving anything behind.
That and I couldn’t stand the thought of being back among the normals. They wouldn’t understand if‑‘ the first
thought that came into the adjutant’s head was ‘if you beat them to death with the squadron leader’s blown off
legs.’ He knew better than to say things like that. Shock wasn’t going to work.

He was saved by the link terminal. It was no less a personage than the Captain.
Lennart had not simply been venting steam when he talked about believing in his crew; it was impossible to know
thirty‑ seven thousand individuals, but he could keep track of section leaders, the senior enlisted rates‑ and the
handful who screwed up badly enough to merit his attention‑ and at least the top layer of the ship’s fighter and
ground combat attachments.
‘Flight lieutenants.’ Lennart began. His attention had been drawn by an incomplete item of paperwork‑
notifications to next of kin still to be sent off. He took one look at the state of the two officers on the other end of
the terminal and decided there might be a problem.

‘The ship we were sent to rescue survived.’ He cut straight to the chase. Given the strike cruiser’s ineptitude in
managing to need to be rescued, it was probably only postponing the inevitable.
‘The Rebel ambush failed. This ship survived. That doesn’t make it any easier to bear when it’s your friends and
colleagues that didn’t. Talk to me.’
She stumbled through it again.

‘Your private griefs are your own, and no‑one can, or should, help you with that.’ He knew perfectly well that she
had been sharing a bed with the squadron leader.
‘When we come up against competent, determined opposition, some of our people will get killed. That much is
certain, and I have two hundred and fourteen of those to send myself. My consolation is that I have twenty‑ two
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‘Necessity determines whether we take the risk or not, chance determines who pays the price‑ insofar as anybody
can be responsible for such a self‑ willed, contrary creature as a fighter pilot, I was responsible for him, and for
you. I asked him, and you, to take that risk, and he did not die to no cause nor, considering the mauling we gave
that rebel bastard, unavenged. What’s important now is to do our best to avoid having to write any more. As
Franjia Rahandravell, you mourn‑ as Epsilon Five, your squadron mates and the ship need you. It is that simple.’

She sniffled a little more, wiped her eyes dry‑ still bloodshot red, though.
‘Two other things. Tellick‘s mother‑ I met her. I reckon she has a certain secret sympathy for the Rebellion. Tell it
as you please‑ I don’t think she deserves the truth‑ but make sure she knows who killed her son.’ Franjia nodded.
‘Other thing‑ do you need stormtrooper support to deal with that kazoo?’ Lennart asked, deliberately changing
‘Captain.’ She said, reproachfully‑ he was trying to lift her mood, she didn’t immediately realize that.
‘It’s been so long since they got to do anything, they’re getting stir crazy. I have manhunter teams pulling rank to
demand jobs even as mindnumbing as walking security; if I sent a detachment down there to keep order, I’d have
difficulty stopping them trying to use an AT‑AT.’ He paused for a couple of seconds. ‘Seriously‑ you’re going to
be all right.’
‘Yes, Sir. What was it you wanted?’
‘Already taken care of, flight lieutenant. Carry on.’ He broke the link.
If he had been stupid enough to accept Lyria’s invitation, and if Ezirrn Tellick had thought he had a future, she
could easily have been his daughter in law.
She probably was good enough to move up a rank, he thought, but not now, not until her heart resumed normal
operations, and not in her present squadron. Replace Tellick directly, and give her the next or next‑but‑one
available squadron leader’s billet.
Depending on what happened‑ time for their spy to contact the alliance, time for them to analyse the information
and make a decision, time for them to get a capable unit here‑ that billet could be open in twenty to thirty hours.
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2006­11­24 09:14am

Chapter 2

The shuttle meandered its way through hyperspace, with most of the crew asleep.
The course was plotted and the nav computer was looking after it, so there was nothing to do but doze, amuse
yourself in the privacy of your own quarters, or someone else’s if you were lucky, or sit on the flight‑ deck and
watch the streaks of stars go by.
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squadron commander‑ just let the ship get on with it, even this near breakout.
The replacement was on the fight deck, along with the co‑pilot, who had drawn the short straw. Both were looking
out of the radically‑sloped main viewscreen.

‘Are you sure you should be doing that? It starts to play weird tricks with your head after a while.’ The shuttle
officer said, lazily. Best to make it sound as unofficial as possible; his passenger outranked him.
Privately, the passenger agreed. Somewhere past the screaming blue‑white nodes racing at them, there was a
capital ship waiting with a squadron of hyperspace capable fighters. He would probably be seeing far more than
enough of this view, and without room to so much as turn over.
‘I mean’, said the shuttle pilot, struck by an idea of his own, ‘are they really stars?’
‘What are you on about?’ Peremptory enough, and it would have been worse if half his attention wasn’t on the
Lieutenant‑Commander Aron Jandras, proceed to Ghorn system Vineland sector, take command of Epsilon
squadron, composed of Starwing fighter‑bombers, of Strike Wing (Provisional) 721 based on board ISD Black
Prince, and for doing so this shall be your warrant, to fail at your own risk...although the last part was really

‘All the streaks. Could be anything‑ could be dust, meteors, interstellar gas, some kind of leakage from the
hyperwave. If they are stars, we must be covering a lot of space. Could have gone half‑way round the galaxy
without really noticing. Wouldn’t that be something, to have seen the universe without ever realising it.’
No real point in jumping on him, Aron thought. Don’t have to make an impression; he’s not directly under me.
Although if this is a fair example, they must be a pretty loose outfit.
He had a point; the nav computer did it all. You told it to go from point A to point B, it came up with possibilities,
and you picked one. It was the act of an expert to go through the advanced options like short‑ cuts and mapping
to realspace.
‘Then it happens to everybody. You can still know enough to get to where you’re going.’
True enough, but not really worth further comment.

The ten‑ minute warning sounded, and the rest of the crew appeared. Neat enough, and they went through the
drill with no appearance of incompetence; manning the piloting and all the gunnery stations, standing by to make
a sensor sweep and raise shields.
‘How bad is this sector?’
‘Huh?’ the copilot answered.
‘You’re preparing to make a combat drop, into the middle of a subsector HQ and major naval base.’
‘Pretty bad, but that’s not it. Captain would roast us if we didn’t.’

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‘Well, he has been known to use lazy or stupid crewmen as jury rigged heat exchangers.’

Although they probably would try to put the wind up him, there was every chance that it was literally true. Star
Destroyer captains were judge, jury and executioner on board their own ship, and the megalomaniac count was
very high indeed. Not much fun to be on the receiving end of, but the alternative was...impossible. No‑one less
than superhuman could keep track of and motivate thirty‑ seven thousand men by any other means. At least, so
ran the doctrine.

The shuttle dropped out of hyperspace. Ghorn was a more than usually red‑ orange star, dim and well through it’s
life off in the distance on the port bow, and the planet in front of them was far more than usually built‑ up for this
far out in the mid‑rim.
Orbital platforms and manufactory modules littered the nearby space, and there were three blobs hanging above
one of the poles of the planet.
‘There she is.’ he said, once he had found the destroyer, and waved Aron over to the station. The co‑ pilot could
still be heard going through identification and traffic control procedures in the background while he examined
what the sensors were telling him.
1A2‑class Star Destroyer. Built early, rearmed with the new gun fit. Veteran. At first, he swept the narrow‑ arc
optical finder right across it, not quite believing when the direction pointers told him otherwise.
As he zeroed in on it, clear from very slightly above it’s beam, he realised that was because he hadn’t instantly
recognised it as an Imperial fighting ship.

He had half‑ expected it to be black. What parts of her original hull remained were faded yellow, mostly, and
marred in many places by blaster scars; large parts had not remained.
The forward four hundred metres of the ship was brilliant, regulation reflective/conductive white‑ with an
unpleasant series of irregular hummocks just behind the unpainted area that probably marked the ends of major
structural members, as if the entire forward quarter of the length of the ship had been torn off and a new one
There was also a huge unpainted patch low on the starboard midside, with charred edges, where the kamikaze
damage had been repaired but never cosmetically aligned.
A deep shredded carbon‑ marked segment above the starboard vertex marked an attempt to chew it off by
turbolaser. There was a tangled heap of molten metal where one of the main scanner domes had been, and a new
one mounted on the forward edge of the superstructure, as well as a direct replacement just inboard of the molten
The main superstructure was less impressive than usual, shot up and rebuilt in SSD‑black durelium rather than
standard durasteel; it also looked off centre, as if the bridge module had been moved‑ closer inspection revealed
that it was the port side of the ship, a mix of bare and some strange red metal, that had been extended outwards,
leaving the destroyer lopsided.
There was also a jagged scar at the base of the bridge module, as if someone had tried to blow it off and only just
not succeeded.

‘Galactic Spirit...’ battle damaged wasn’t the term, he decided. At a rough estimate, if the ship had taken all of that
damage at once‑ there were numerous blaster scars‑ she would have been blown apart three times over. Battle
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‘Look under the superstructure.’

There were scars and craters there too. The ship’s name and registry number‑hull 721. And a series of black
blobs that resolved themselves into silhouettes. He looked, and kept looking.
An Old Republic Procurator class battlecruiser. Two Hapan battle dragons. Three alien craft he did not recognise.
Two Victory‑class Star Destroyers. A Rebel MC‑80 Starcruiser. An Imperator‑class Star Destroyer with a phoenix
mark. More than a dozen lighter capital combatants.

‘How did that‑ that flying junkyard manage to take out a kriffing republic battlewagon?’
‘Dumb overconfidence on their part, very smart shooting, and a lot of luck with the terrain.’
‘A fair kill tally for a ship that looks as if it crawled out of a junkyard.’ he said, impressed but refusing to show it.
If they were all directly claimed, the Black Prince had seen a massive amount of combat, even for a ship her age.
‘You’ve got no idea how much work it takes to keep her that way.’ he said, enigmatically.
‘Yes, Sir.’ the pilot could be heard responding to someone on the com link, and he leaned forward to push all the
throttles past their safety stops.

Turret 4‑Port;
‘I get this not.’ Pellor Aldrem announced, from the gun pointer’s console. He was a fair haired man dressed in a
quasi‑ regulation armoured spacesuit that had been customised to take a gunner’s helmet; if their turret did get
hit, chances were they were toast, but flukes did happen and he wanted to be ready to take advantage of them.
Technically, he was a Senior Chief Petty Officer; in practise, he was the best shot with a turbolaser on the ship, and
held rank as a turret commander accordingly.
‘I really wish I just didn’t. That slimy jizzbucket Lomarel, he’s left half a rationpak smeared over the power
monitor. At least I hope it’s a rationpak.’ The next most senior member of the gun crew, ‘Fussy’ Fendon,

‘Yeah, well, he is the guy his own turretmates bought an inflatable nerf for.’ Aldrem made an effort to be tolerant.
Lomarel had been a member of his own gun crew before being punted up and out, and the chubby, smelly freak
sort of grew on you. Then again, so did fungus.
‘And a sound damper field. I don’t care if he makes a dianoga’s nest out of his own turret, if he does we might be
rid of him and it would probably do a better job, but why’s he allowed to make a mess out of our turret, hey?’
‘That’s what I don’t get. We’re in dock, right? Caution, maybe, keeping us busy, maybe, but it’s the after turret in
each battery that’s kept manned. The one with the best all round field of fire.’

Two quad‑ barreled heavy turbolasers, thermal shroud around each tapering down, adding to the perspective and
making them look like a clutch of lances to stab the stars with.
Each of the quads elevated independently, traverse of about three or four degrees on it’s own sub‑ platform,
against a barbette and back‑ plate hardened to withstand planet‑ shaking shocks, anchored in suspension‑ film
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Wondrous stuff; it’s hyperdense fluid nature made it the most perfect shock absorber in the universe, the only
material substance that could take the recoil a heavy turbolaser battery kicked out.

Aldrem ran a hand over the pointing grip; with this, he could make countries disappear…it was fortunate for the
planet underneath them that he was a stable individual. Whatever his file said.
It had happened, hadn’t it? Star destroyer in the inner rim, permanent defence orbit around the sector capital. One
of the gunners had fallen in love with a local, he had two‑timed her, some said stood her up at the altar. She had
waited, seemed over it, divisional officer hadn’t caught it in time, she had simply climbed into the turret one day,
pointed it down and made the cheat’s home city into a green fireball.
Some of the newer ships had monitors installed to prevent someone in an unbalanced state of mind getting into
the turret; apart from the fact that most people tended to be in an abnormal state of mind when shot at anyway,
Black Prince had never received that particular upgrade.
Just as well, Aldrem thought, thinking about the team he was in charge of. Fendon’s nitpicking precision had
saved them from malfunction and flashback more than once, at the gun status monitor board, but he wasn’t a
man you could go and paint the town purple with.
Wasn’t he a member of some obscure mid rim cult? Still busy vehemently denying the existence of things everyone
else had forgotten about.
Number three was Areath Suluur, a dark‑ haired, warm brown‑ skinned man of indeterminable age‑ always
armed, always coldly, fluidly precise on the job, and his service record was a pack of lies.
Whatever he had really been and whatever he had done he, on the other hand, was a good mate off the job, even if
he did occasionally look longingly at stormtrooper armour, and react strangely to a few things. He was comms and
sensors op.
When things went well, that was all the turret needed to serve it’s guns. Unsurprisingly, it often didn’t run that
The other twelve turret crew were there to deal with problems as they came up, and were supposed to be capable
of any running repair up to and including replacing a shocked‑ loose barrel in it’s recoil cradle. Also capable of
replacing the alpha team if they were the ones that got hit.

‘Yeugh. This‑ it’s almost whole.’ Fendon held something up for inspection.
‘Look, that console’s sealed and hardened to stand vacuum and light flashback. You won’t break it if you hose it
Just then, the sky started to move around them. There was a small ball indicator, a space globe that showed two
highlighted sections‑ their target‑ finder’s current slice of sky, and their potential arc of fire. The ship pitched
‘Manoeuvre jets function, and we have objects in arc.’ Suluur said, looking past Aldrem at the globe. ‘Control?’
‘You call them‑ Fendon, don’t do anything yet, but stand by to spin her up.’ Aldrem told the power‑tech.
‘Fire Direction Control, this is Papa Four.’ Suluur com’d to them. ‘We have a line of fire to the station and the
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‘Papa Four‑ FDC. Weapons safe, repeat, weapons safe.’

‘Zarri, what’s going on?’ Aldrem asked his friend in fire direction.
‘We’re pitching round to cover them, don’t ask me why. Probably just Mirannon blowing off plasma.’
‘Probably just getting ready to cover the tender if we are jumped, you mean.’ Aldrem stated grimly.
‘You could be right, Pel. I’ll let you know if we get any real news.’
‘Feel free to give us fake news, it passes the time. Papa Four out.’ Suluur said, breaking link.

‘So we are expecting trouble.’ He said to the rest of the team.

‘Stang, yes. Rebels think we’re weak enough to jump, they’ll send something to have a go at us.’
‘Not surprising.’ Fendon stated. ‘The ship looks ready to come apart.’
‘The guns are in perfect working order.’ Aldrem stated. He was right, too. In the ambush that had landed them in
dock, both sides had been heavily ionized, and after the initial clash the rebel cruiser had been shifting power and
rerouting data to keep one system in working order ‑ her hyperdrive. Black Prince had been doing the same‑ to
protect her main battery.

‘Maybe, but we look more like something that belongs to the rebel alliance.’ Fendon declared.
‘You joined after that, didn’t you? That operation was a lot more fun to look back on than it was to go through,
believe me.’ Aldrem reminisced.
‘Go on.’ Suluur said, grinning.
‘New Eguria sector, about, what, eight years back now? The sector group commander, it was Admiral
Demorak I think, went rogue, refused an order and defected to the Rebellion. Well, what of it already existed by
He was Republic navy from way back‑ real stuffed shirt. We pretended to join him. You’re right, we do look like
something out of the alliance fleet‑ we weren’t as bad, then, but they still welcomed us with open arms. Poor
suckers. Talk about a target rich environment.’ Aldrem chuckled.

‘I wonder how fast people die, or quit, in the rebellion. I wonder how far back their memories go.’ Suluur
‘You wonder if we could get away with it again, you mean.’ Aldrem said. ‘That’s the main reason we can look like
this; command knows we’re loyal. We get the edgy, dangerous jobs, places the rebellion’s won itself an advantage,
situations another ship might not come back from, we get the job. We don’t always bring all of this ship back.’

‘You and Captain Lennart.’ Fendon said.

‘I’ve met him, which is more than I can say about the skippers of some of the ships I’ve been on.’ Aldrem said,
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‘So what happened to the rebels?’ Fendon asked.

‘They were still using a lot of old Clone Wars kit, we picked up two Recusant and a Victory kill, but so much of the
superstructure got blown away, it was as easy to refit to Imperator‑ II as it was to fix up as was.’
‘Most of the rebels are just a gang of pirates anyway, aren’t they?’ Fendon pointed out. ‘Their big ships are rare‑
we see a lot more of them than we ought to. I mean, the initials of their proper name are A‑R‑R. What does that
say about them?’ He said contemptuously.
‘Don’t read too much into that. I mean, what would it make us, ninja?’ Aldrem said.
Suluur laughed quietly and said nothing.

Lennart had requested the presence of the tender captain and the defence station commander. Both of them
came, largely out of curiosity to see what sort of madhouse this mongrel ship was.
Their Lambda shuttles arrived at the same time as Jandras’. Because he was riding one of Black Prince’s own, they
gave him priority.
What he wanted to do was look around the pad, inspect the strange arrangements here. He had served with a Star
Destroyer’s fighter wing, and competently otherwise he wouldn’t have been up for promotion, but not with an
outfit like this.
He picked up his baggage, wandered out down the ramp, realized who his shuttle had been given priority over
and decided to run away and hide before his career was irreparably damaged.

He should have known better; nothing on this ship was ever thrown away as irreparably damaged.
Two people came up to him; one male, mid height, solidly built and wearing a tool belt, the other female, neatly
and precisely dressed‑ he didn’t recognize either of the insignia, but he guessed he was enlisted, she was an
Franjia had taken the captain’s advice, and joined in the wake; she had a fair amount to drink, grief turned to
anger, she had verbally savaged half the squadron, and the rest of her felt much better for it‑ her skull was still
She didn’t remember if she had hit anybody or not, but her head felt bad enough to have spent most of the night
headbutting stormtroopers; what Aron took for a ramrod up the spine was in this case her trying not to fall over.

‘Welcome aboard, sir.’ She said, extending a hand. He took it. He was short and broad shouldered, round faced
and dark haired, she was taller than he was, hair so fair it was nearly white, oval faced, pale green eyes, looked
like an icicle in a uniform. Physically fit, endurance rather than strength.
‘Epsilon squadron?’ He asked.
‘Yes, sir‑ I’m Flight Lieutenant Rahandravell, Epsilon Five, this is Squadron Technical Master Sargeant Oregal.’
‘Run that one by me again. Flight Lieutenant?’
‘Sargeant Oregal, as this explanation is technical, you should deliver it.’ Franjia smiled, as the squadron ground
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‘As a carrier based strike wing operating off a non‑ carrier, we are technically Starfighter Force rather than navy.
Most of our personnel are in fact navy crossbadged to starfighter force, some of them are actually army hat
jumpers but if this ship were ever to be officially classified as a carrier the naval personnel of the wing would
revert to their permanent ranks whereas the army personnel would have to resign their permanent and have
ratified their temporary commissions in the starfighter force in order to be allowed to serve with the navy.
The upshot of this is‑ congratulations, you’ve been demoted. Although nominally O‑equal the administrative
responsibilities consequent on the rank mean that a squadron leader acquires effective juniority under a naval
lieutenant commander. Do you know where that falls in the starfighter force rank system, sir?’

He’s starting to look like I feel, Franjia thought. She would have snapped and told the sergeant to shut up before
he got to ‘technically’. Either he has an unusually and exploitably high gibberish tolerance, he is very patient and
forgiving‑ also exploitable‑ or his brain is so fried that all of this is rolling right off him.
Oregal continued. ‘We’re a wing, therefore we’re commanded by a group captain, who has multiple wing
commanders under him to command the tactical groups. A group captain is considered equal in rank to a colonel
but junior to a naval captain, which is anomalous because naval captain and colonel are considered nominally
equal, it comes from the fact that the army recognizes the equivalence of the senior lieutenant’s rank and the
starfighter force doesn’t, which should put a group captain higher on the pay spine but you know how the navy
A squadron leader‑ you‑ commands a squadron except when such squadron is composed of heavy or multicrew
craft in which case he commands a flight, normally the job of a flight lieutenant, and the squadron is commanded
by a wing commander. Do you understand all that, sir?’ he said, totally deadpan.
Aron had been letting it roll over him, but his brain wasn’t that far gone yet. ‘I don’t need to, I have junior officers
to do that for me.’ Franjia and Oregal shared a look. Perhaps he wasn’t totally hopeless.
‘Tell me about something I care about. Over normal strength, over normal weight, right? So what have we got in
the wing, group, whatever?’
‘Two squadrons of TIE Avenger, except Alpha‑squadron lead flight is an experimental group‑ commanded by an
actual group captain, just this once.’ Franjia told him, pointing across the bay.
‘Triple wings, each wing splits again? Preproduction models, except GpCp Olleyri‑ Alpha One‑ liked them so much
he refused to give them back. They’re supposed to receive a D‑codename, Devastator, Dominator, some such.’
‘The Commander Air Group‑ don’t you start‑‘ that directed at Oregal‑ ‘leads from the front? Good‑ but I don’t
recognize a lot of these things. They can’t all be experimental.’ Aron said.
‘We do get a lot of flight testing work.’ Oregal told him. ‘Some of them are regional specialties we liked and picked
up, the rest‑ I’m the senior crew chief, by the way. I don’t fly them, I just fix them‑ are odds.’

‘The rest?’
‘Two Bomber and three Interceptor squadrons, one of the interceptor squadrons is Xt‑ light shield units. One
other Starwing squadron‑ Delta, we’re junior‑ Hunters, Gamma squadron, are a regional specialty, folding winged.
Fighters‑ more or less. Mu and Nu squadrons are experimental, and the other side of the credchip. The D‑ birds
are a winner; those‑ aren’t.’ Franjia told him.
‘The Ravagers are escort fighters. See how all the wing hangs down below the body, and it looks like two eyeballs
welded together? That’s because they are. Everyone in the wing who can hold a hydrospanner has had a shot at
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‘Turret fighters. They do not work, and if our report has anything to do with it, they will not enter general service.’
‘Those flying wing looking things?’ Aron asked. They looked beautiful, sleek and chromic, almsot to god to be
true in fact.
‘Designed to fit a new, maybe rediscovered old, weapon; weapon works, spaceframe’s junk.’ Oregal confirmed.

‘I know I’m here as a replacement.’ Aron said, looking at Franjia’s face freezing over again. She had thawed out a
little talking shop, now she was back to icicle. ‘What happened?’
‘The people we lost,’ she said slowly, ‘make it feel much worse than the numbers say. Squadron Leader Ezirrn
Tellick, Flight Officer Garm Inturii.’
‘Flight Lieutenant, I transferred in from an Interceptor squadron. There were only two people in the unit whose
name it was safe to let myself get to know, and one of them was me.’ Aron said, brutally. It was usually safer than
the alternative.
‘Are you suggesting we should let ourselves get killed more often, just to stay in practise?’ she was ready to
savage him.
‘Clearly, I’ve pushed one of your buttons.’ Best way to cope with it, Jandras thought, just plough on regardless.
‘Those numbers. What do they say about the other side?’

‘Two rebel half squadrons, X escorting Y wings, we destroyed four X and a Y, the rest ran, four damaged enough
to claim.’
‘Not bad‑ we seem to have got off on the wrong foot, Flight Lieutenant.’ He started to say.
‘The rebel bombers ripple‑ fired their antiship torpedo loads at us to give themselves time to flee to hyperspeed.
That’s how we lost Squadron Leader Tellick. We miss him, and I mean to avenge him. I know all about the two
graves business, and I don’t greatly care. Come on, I’ll introduce you to the squadron.’ Franjia stated.
‘One thing. Oregal.’ Aron turned to the sergeant.
‘Yes, sir?’
‘How do you remember all of that bureaucro‑crap?’
‘I’m studying to put myself through law school, Sir. Know your enemy and all that.’

‘Kitrich? Help.’ The young probationary engineer appealed to his room‑mate. Mirannon had most of his senior
officers and artificers, and himself, working non‑ stop; and had let the rest know that whether or not they ever got
to be senior depended a lot on how hard they drove themselves now.
Junior officers he wasn’t worrying about, considering them unlikely to pull their weight in the purely technical
work underway.
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‘Have you stopped laughing about me getting into trouble yet?’

‘What’s the problem?’

‘I got told to write a report on the ship’s hyperdrive‑ and I’m lost. I mean, this makes no sense.’ He had three
large datapad‑ textbooks sitting open on their shared desk.
‘Right now, all I know is that I don’t want to go near one ever, ever again.’
‘A hyperdrive or the exec?’
‘Both. I mean…this is crazy. It doesn’t work. It can’t work. It can’t work. According to this, the light barrier is
impossible to cross.’ He pointed to one of the textbooks. ‘This calls it a…hypersymmetric transposition? As if we
somehow change places with something on the other side of the light barrier? Which this,’ pointing at one of the
other datapads, ‘calls a dead theory, proven nonsense‑ but this, the actual handbook‑‘ he banged his head off the
‘Hyperdrive motivator, what does that mean? It motivates hyperspace, like makes it do circuit training until it gets
tired and agrees to let us in? Time and energy running backwards, causality normalisation fields‑ when there is no
normal referential frame anyway, and we depend on abnormal causality to get there?’ He wailed, from the
forehead‑on‑desk position. ‘I give up. It’s a black box with a ‘go’ button on it.’
‘If it didn’t make your head hurt, it wouldn’t be worth working out.’ Kitrich said, heartlessly, then he recovered a
slight shred of mercy. ‘Are you really baffled?’
‘Look…start with something you understand. Work with that, and work outwards from it.’

‘I thought I understood power converters. Converter controls electron standing wave that intercepts and is
energised by electromagnetic activity, converts low energy radiation like heat to usable power by draining back
energy from activated electrons‑ regenerative heating, the energy gets dumped back in the reactor. It’s the ship’s
heat sink system.’ He opened a workbook.
‘T‑E series, and most of a hypermatter reaction’s product interacts weakly or not at all, and the core runs off five
stage T‑N series, process to control a process to control a process to control…how does the other side do it? How
does a bunch of failed politicians and art school dropouts run ships dangerous enough that we have to be here
trying to stop them?’
‘They treat their tech as black boxes with ‘go’ buttons on.’

The tender and station commanders were escorted to the ready room beneath the bridge. The ship’s scarred
appearance was only skin deep; there were work crews everywhere‑ including a group of stormtroopers levering
something into place under the direction of a small team of engineering enlisted.
The tender commander understood more of what was going on, and he was grudgingly impressed‑ still intended
to shout at the captain for removing the tender’s people and keeping their tools.
All but one of Black Prince’s command team were there and waiting; Lennart, Dordd, gunnery officer, sensors and
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The bulk of the ready room was taken up with the main display table and the ring of seats around it‑ an
arrangement the Rebels had apparently copied for their own starships. At the moment it was showing a display of
the surrounding space.
‘Junior Captain, Port Commander.’ Lennart greeted them, emphasizing the fact that he ranked them and
commanded a combat unit. Otherwise, they might not have believed that he was an Imperial naval officer.
‘Two things; one of more interest to my people than to our guests. With effect from 1200 Coruscant Time today,
Commander Delvran Dordd is promoted to Captain and appointed to command Arrogant‑ class Star Destroyer
They cheered him, grouped around him, slapped him on the back, congratulated him. It was never an executive
officer’s job to be popular, and indeed he was not, but he was professional.
‘Thank you.’ He told them all, even the two visitors who had congratulated him with icy politeness. ‘I’m remaining
in my old job in an acting capacity for the moment, because we have another problem I want to see through.’

If it’s getting this rustbucket to look like a proper warship, Dynamic’s going to be waiting a long time, the station
commander thought. It was depressing‑ worse, it was demoralising having this thing broken down and hanging in
space near his people. What had happened to the Navy’s standards?
‘Junior Captain‑ Fokatha, isn’t it? I never knew life on board a tender could be so interesting. Rebel spies and
everything.’ Lennart hand‑ signalled to one of the stormtrooper escort, who called their chief witness for the
persecution. Omega‑17‑Blue‑Aleph 3 walked into the ready room.

Perhaps one in ten of the stormtroopers in the 721st Legion was either a more recent clone or an actual veteran of
the Grand Army of the Republic. Somewhere around one in thirty was female.
OB173 was both, and she had been designed for perfection. Dordd tried not to stare, and gave up. It wasn’t just
the way she walked, the obviously powerfully athletic frame, yet lithe and fluidly elegant; she could have stepped
onto any catwalk in the Core, stormtrooper armour and all, and brought the house down.
She had her helmet hooked on her belt, showing off a long flowing crown of red‑ gold hair, a hawk face and
bright, sharp star‑ blue eyes. Every male eye in the room locked on to her‑ except the captain’s. He was watching
her hands and her weapons.
Dordd was entranced. She’s magnificent, he was thinking, a divine being, a snow‑clad angel of death.

‘Dockside security became suspicious of this man.’ She said‑ glorious, glorious voice‑ slotting a datachip into the
display. It was a split image of the worker, his personnel record. ‘He was abducted from your ship, Junior Captain,
and questioned.’
‘Impossible! My security‑‘
‘Is porous. They suspected nothing, before, during or after. He confessed to being a rebel operative. I have the
details of that also, if you require them to convince you.’ She was definite, thoroughly in control of herself,
unquestionable. Which was exactly the effect she wanted to have, of course.
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‘I’m qualified.’ She stated, simply. ‘Others are more so, and it would have been unjust to deprive them of the
chance to put their talents to use. He broke thoroughly, we have confidence in our conclusions.’
‘Those conclusions being that the Alliance knows we’re here. Thank you, trooper, you can go.’ Before my acting
exec drowns in a puddle of his own drool, Lennart didn’t add. She saluted and glided out. Most of them watched
her go.

‘Gentlemen; tactical planning time.’ Captain Lennart had to flare the holoimage‑ a maximum intensity pulse of
light‑ to get their attention. ‘What, if anything, will the rebels try to do to us, and how do we defend and
‘Do you have any more like her?’ the tender captain, mind still not with them, asked.
‘It, people; a Grand Army clone template, limited edition, liaison communications and public relations. The effect
she had on you, she was supposed to have on early imperial journalists. Can you concentrate on something other
than thinking about seducing one of my stormtroopers?’
‘Usual worst case scenario, Captain?’ Commandwe Wathavrah‑ "guns"‑ asked. He had a peculiar mottled look
about face and hands, could have been near‑human, in fact had been sprayed with cryogen from a damaged laser
cannon early in his career.
‘Yes, no point worrying about that. Most probable case?’
‘What’s the worst case?’ the defence station commander asked.
‘The rebels put two and two together, realise it’s us, decide to wipe out a lot of scores and send a battle group
with enough collective firepower to make even the Executor nervous.’ The navigator, Commander Brenn, fielded
the question. He would have been the captain’s first choice to replace Dordd as exec.
‘We know exactly what to do about it; we run. Most probable, now…that depends a lot on the competence of the

‘Hmph.’ The gunnery officer expressed contempt for the rebels’ intelligence. ‘Even disabled, a destroyer still takes
a lot of putting down, they’ll have to send something hefty.’
‘Have to risk it? I don’t think so.’ Brenn stated. ‘The only time they’ve ever been able to capture a Star Destroyer is
when the legion aren’t aboard, ideally none of the crew either. Not a serious objective. Nicking the Sahallare,
though, that would appeal. Neutralise the Golan, demolish us, capture the tender.
Dreadnaught‑ class cruisers; the last I heard, the rebels were starting to automate them and use the crew space
for assault troops.’

‘One of those old junkers against a StarGun? Even the Rebellion isn’t usually that stupid.’ Dordd replied.
‘Starfighter support. Everything they have with an ion cannon, disable the station and the tender, probably those
fancy ion pulse warheads as well. Dreadnought jumps in, finishes the station, fighters land and rearm with heavy
demolition warheads, bombs and rockets, finish off the crippled star destroyer while the dread boards and
captures the tender.
Three phase strike, true, but all they really risk is an old junker and a few thousand meatheads.’ Brenn replied.
‘What’s the system defence force going to be doing? Standing by and cheering?’ the gunnery officer queried.
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‘So the rebels put commando teams in, covert insertion by tramp freighter ahead of the main op, seize the V‑150s
and use them against us, the rebel heavy fighters slaughter the garrison TIEs, and Lancers are dead meat against
anything bigger than a starfighter. System defence isn’t going to be much more than a speed bump to a
competent rebel group.’
‘Well, thank you very much.’ The defence platform commander objected.
‘Your platform is the only system asset the rebels need fear.’ Lennart took control of the discussion. ‘Brenn, your
plan has them using fighters, spec ops teams, an expendable old ship and troops. I’m not convinced they have
that much disposable fighter strength‑ but the V‑150 idea is a nasty one. Guns?’

‘Same old rebel idea; harder they hit us, further they knock us off balance, more chance they have of getting back
whatever they commit. Victory or Mon Cal, fighter first wave then a combat drop, with us between them and the
planet, use us as an ion shield. They’ll try to blow the tender if they can’t capture it.’
‘Point. Delvran?’
‘Insystem spies. The rebels probably do have someone on the planet, it’s a fleet transfer point after all. They’ll see
the preparations we make. Otherwise‑ send down stormtroopers to secure the ion cannon, half our fighters are
hyper capable‑ use them as a reaction force, have them jump out now, jump in on signal to counterstrike the
‘So far. I don’t see the rebels risking a major force unit‑ there’ll be one, but it’ll be distant support, outsystem
waiting to hyper in. Our fighters clear the rebel fighters, Sahallare moves to shelter behind the Golan, we fight a
conventional engagement in high orbital space with ion support to cripple and take the rebel strike ship.’ Lennart

‘Captain!’ the platform commander protested. ‘Your ship’s in no fit state‑‘

‘It looks that way.’ Captain Lennart smiled. ‘We have full firepower, fighter and ground ops, we’re six hours away
from shield function, ten from basic ion drive and fifteen from hyper. The rebels can’t plan and organise faster
than we can come back on line, not with enough to be a serious threat. A half planned scratch group could be
here now, but‑‘
There was a loud beep. ‘Captain, this is sensor watch. Hyperstate bow shocks, multiple small craft. Incoming rebel
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  2006­11­29 06:19pm

Chapter 3

‘Count?’ Lennart asked the duty sensor chief.

‘Thirty plus, low intensity‑ possibly X, likely smaller.’
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‘Groupie? Inbound. Two minute readiness all, scramble Beta, Gamma, Epsilon‑ they need shaken down‑ Nu on
close and point defence, Theta. Threat’s two to three squadrons, rebel area command probably.’
‘Sir?’ It was abrupt, but the group captain overcame his shock. ‘Acknowledged, moving.’

‘All hands,’ Lennart told the com terminal‑ it gave him ship wide broadcast‑ ‘general quarters, incoming fighters.
Engineering‑ Mirannon, what can you give me?’
‘Roll and pitch, no main thrust yet unless you want a lot of pizza.’ The chief engineer was not at all surprised to be
interrupted this time. He was busy trying to tell one of the zone relative inertial field generators what it’s sector of
the ship was shaped like, and stop it arguing with the tensor fields and shield systems that were already there.
If he had left it to its own devices, it would have taken the unit too long, five hours as opposed to ninety minutes,
to bed itself in‑ and the field overlap would have been lethal. Inertial compensation was one case where two rights
very definitely made a wrong. He did not stop to talk.

‘Full weapons, the bridge, main battery and hangar bay emitters are in good enough shape to take power, I can
give you shields there. Skipper, we’ve got no ion wake. We’re wide open around the engines.’
‘Better than I expected on the shields‑ the engines, depends on their tactical objective. I’ll have it watched.’ He
turned to his guests.
‘Station Commander, Junior Captain, do you want to return to your respective commands‑ Commander, you
should, Captain, you’re probably safer here.’
The command team were already moving, the gunnery officer to the fire direction station buried in the base of the
superstructure, Dordd to primary damage control, Brenn and the sensor officer to the bridge.

Aron Jandras, still getting used to the idea of being a squadron leader, had said very little to the pilots of Epsilon
squadron; he had just surveyed the wreckage left by the wake, made a formal acknowledgement of taking over,
and gone to what was now his cabin. It had been stripped and cleaned to within an inch of its life. The cot and
several panels in the walls were new. The previous occupant had been effectively erased.
His previous ship had been an Imperator‑I; the original barrack rooms had been remodelled into four‑ person
dorms, which considering they fought in flights of three had been either perfectly useless or, the common theory
went, an ISB trick to prevent pilots conspiring when off duty. Before that, a Nebulon‑B which barely had room for
fighters, and still did have a barrack room. He hadn’t dared to joke about hammocks, in case anybody took it as
meant seriously.
On the other hand, this time he had been assigned to a ship that looked as if it could be taken apart with a feather
duster. For all the relative comfort of the quarters, he didn’t intend to get comfortable‑ he might have to leave in
a hurry.
He was still in uniform rather than flight gear, and he was reading through his copy of Technical Order 2‑30SW‑1.
The Technical Order was as close as a starfighter came to having a manual‑ not as good as flight experience, but
a lot better than climbing into a cockpit cold.
This evening, he would formally meet his immediate superior, the bomb wing commander, and the commander air
group; he had scheduled two hours in the ship’s simulator bank before then as the best way to get to know his
squadron in the only way that actually mattered, and was reading up, not in expectation of imminent combat, but
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The manual claimed the Starwing had the same rate of roll as an Interceptor, and he was in the middle of saying
‘Bull‑‘ when the GQ alarm sounded. More proof that censorship has gone too far, he thought as he began to
One of the things he had noticed was that the Starwing was supposed to have a pressurised cockpit. He wasn’t
prepared to place much faith in that, either. Flight gear was kept in the ready room, the flight suit was supposed
to go on over the uniform, another idea that didn’t work as well as it was supposed to.
He dropped the datapad Technical Order, sprinted for the ready room, collided with one of the other pilots on the
way and stuck an elbow into his kidneys, wriggled into the ready room.

He had been expecting a mad scramble, locker room fire drill, not enough room for twelve pilots to clamber into
flight suits at the same time, fend for yourself and devil take the hindmost; instead, odd numbers went in and got
suited up first, with enough room to do it neatly and efficiently, then even numbers‑ wingmen.
Nobody explained the drill; it must have been in standing orders‑ the previous squadron leader’s. He was left
looking like a fool and an odd man out, and was that a sneaky look on Epsilon Five’s face? Probably.
Normal pad arrangement on an Imperator was the two hangars in the forward wall opening into the main bay
space, craft on ceiling racks launching through the hangars. Black Prince’s complete rerarrangement had a much
shallower main bay, and the extra six squadrons were accommodated in the ‘loft space’ on sloped racks releasing
down through the deckhead of the bay.
The lead six had a small docking and maintenance hangar, but they launched on racks that moved out through
apertures in the otherwise sealed off forward wall. Instantly Aron hated it.
The frames for the racks were powered‑ if something failed, which he expected it might, what was he supposed to
do, sit there and wait for the ship to come apart around him?
Standing there looking at it, he suddenly couldn’t wait to get out into space.

The pilots around him all had their helmets on, as he did, the hamster‑look that had it shown up on a living being
would have been sent for reconstructive surgery instantly. Every time he saw one, he wanted to put a beanie hat
on it.
The racks had already lowered the big, heavy‑ finned, shovel nosed craft to pad level, ground crew supervising
and doing the pre flight checks. Oregal‑ Aron didn’t even bother trying to remember his rank‑ was standing by
‘Shields and weapons are charged and inactive, Sir, warhead load is standard torpedoes.’ No sign of help. Which
made sense, because if Aron didn’t know what he was doing now, it was too late. ‘Activate in the bay, Group’ll tell
you where to go from there, sir.’
Aron nodded; three steps up to the cockpit, slide in‑ much easier than a TIE Eyeball which had space exactly
where it wasn’t wanted‑ link the flight suit into the cockpit instrumentation and life support.
The cockpit was exactly as the manual had described it‑ sensor and comms panel on the left, ship combat
systems in front, flight technicals on the right. Most of that was done in helmet in a TIE, there was a second of
double vision as the helmet and the cockpit decided which was to be the prime information source, and the
cockpit won.
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and marvelled when it failed to come. The fighter fell free; the gravity in the bay was set to fractional ‘g’ down and
out, enough time to power up and swim out under manoeuvring ion power.
He was a second behind the rest in starting engines, a whole three seconds in remembering he had combat
shields, and he could feel the squadron knocked out of synch by him. By now the ship’s sensors had pinned down
the rebels’ vector of approach, and flightcom began the battle‑play.

‘Pilots, this is Olleyri.’ When he wasn’t tasked to fly himself, the group captain outright usurped the role of chief
air controller, reckoning it was still his job to look after his pilots.
‘We have two to three squadrons of rebel fighters incoming, and‑ now additional traces of small craft possibly
armed freighters. Local area squadrons, they’ll be using mostly older fighters, competence unpredictable‑ don’t
take them lightly even if they are flying poodoo. They may be good enough to be a threat. Beta leads the intercept,
Theta flank cover. Nu squadron disperse for ship close defence. Gamma and Epsilon are reaction element. Out.’

So far, so standard, Aron thought, five against three, the full fighter complement would simply get in each other’s
way‑ although they were being held at short standby in case a threat developed that they would be needed for.
Beta’s Avengers‑ the best thing about this entire tour seemed to be that he now had some very impressive
friends‑ would hit the rebels fast and head on, with Theta covering them. Personally, he had time to think.
Epsilon had simply taken station on him, in the same pretty much Rebel standard finger four formation, not the
Imperial three‑ fighter V. It was how Cygnus recommended the gunboat be used, and he noticed it was how the
Avengers were deploying.
Also, the sensors had given them enough warning that they were fully deployed before the first rebel hit
realspace. Eight short strings of emergence flashes‑ deploying by flights; two waves, first wave a flight of X‑
wings, flight of Z‑95s, two flights of local fighters he didn’t recognise‑ big‑finned taper nosed cylinders.
The second wave, a flight of Shobquix Gauntlets, a flight of those local fighters with bulgy pods on the fins‑
missile racks?‑ a flight of CloakShapes, a flight of Y‑wings.
‘Not often the zoo comes to visit us.’ Someone‑ Beta One‑ said on the group channel. ‘Second line looks like their
bomb element, reaction element pass under the fighters, all units watch out for friendly fire from the Golan.’

Too confident, Aron thought, he’s overeager. Committing us too soon.

On the bridge Lennart was watching the sensor picture develop. His ship’s departments could do their jobs
without micromanagement; the most useful thing he could do was comprehend and anticipate. Jammers were up,
the rebels would have to get close for a detailed status scan, but they were heading this way. His ship was the
main target, not the station.
What was their plan? They were faced by four squadrons of the empire’s best‑ and one of it’s worst‑ and weren’t
planning to break off? What were they expecting to happen‑ or what else?
‘Flight Ops, Lennart. Beta and Theta to press to close quarters now. Send Gamma in, pull Epsilon back, launch Mu
to join close defence.’

Olleyri knew better than to delay; he transmitted the order‑ then asked what it was about. ‘Aye aye, Captain‑
what’s the plan?’
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local area force to draw out and chew up the wing, and the light freighters on their way are their best weapon for
that. This is a space superiority op, not an antiship strike‑ a furball suits us, because‑‘ emergence flares.
‘Oh kriff.’ Olleyri said.

Aron had watched the strange looking Hunters soar past over his head; ball and back block, longer, thinner
folding thermal wings‑ hadn’t Incom originally offered the X‑wing to the Empire and been turned down for its
price tag? If Sienar had tried to reinvent it afterwards with TIE technology, that was probably what it would look
Their sprint thrust was far higher than a Starwing’s; Aron didn’t know any of them well enough to ask them to
leave some for the bombers.
Then plan A came apart in red fire. A handful of larger rebel‑ red blips in the sensor scope, telescoping
themselves down to combat speed, the instruction to Gamma to make full speed and Epsilon to break off, and a
hailstorm of quad and light turbo‑ laser fire pouring into Beta, Theta and Gamma squadrons’ path.

Two YT‑ series, a Ghtroc light freighter, and a larger ship‑ Customs corvette.
Aron’s target sensor went off, he shouted ‘break break break’ into the com, and firewalled the engines twisting
the Starfury up and to the right in the start of a tallon roll.
A salvo of light turbolaser fire screamed past behind him; the manual was right about the beast’s agility.
He was supposed to be keeping these people alive, not just himself; glance at the scope‑ a couple of fuzzy green
blips, hit but taken on the shielding, before the rebs had changed target to the closer Hunters.
‘Epsilons, form up again on me, make room to weave, keep it loose…’ he ordered. ‘Five‑ a customs ship?’
‘Long range light turbolasers. Designed to overmatch the average pirate‑ the rebels turn it into their version of
our Lancer. Advice; that’s our target. Who else can deal with it, if not us?’

Gamma’s Hunters were fleeing the beaten zone, most trying to escape forward into the furball where the rebels
would fear friendly fire, exactly what Lennart’s plan had been in pushing them on. Two had been lucky enough
just to lose shields, but three had gone. Two ejections.
The destroyer behind us, Aron thought. ‘I’m not up to speed on Starwing doctrine yet. Five, you lead in.’
‘Epsilon squadron, accelerate to attack speed.’ She acknowledged by taking charge.

Lennart turned to the navigator. ‘Brenn, opinion. We sneeze at that corvette and it goes away. The rebs then know
we have more function than they thought, and fail to follow up or hit us much harder. We don’t, we lose a lot of
fighters. Hmmm?’
‘Protect the wing.’ The navigator said instantly. What Lennart had intended to do anyway.

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‘Oh, come on. Suluur, any actual reason why we aren’t weapons free yet?’ Aldrem complained.
‘We’re playing dead so that bigger targets come along.’
‘We’re not going to have a fighter wing left to do it with unless we give them some support fire.’ Aldrem was
exaggerating, but the armed freighters with their military‑ grade turrets were doing a lot of damage.
‘Port‑4, this is FireCon. Do you have a bearing on the corvette?’ fire direction called, at last.
‘Bearing, firing track and death wish all lined up, FireCon, say the word.’ Suluur reported.
‘Blow it’s shields out, the skipper wants prisoners.’
‘A greatsword to do a scalpel’s job‑acknowledge.’ Aldrem said. He could bitch and track a target at the same

‘Shield rating on that thing?’

‘Twenty‑eight‑ it’s been reinforced.’
‘Fendon, step sub one down to output thirty. LTL yield, why one of them can’t do it‑‘ snatching seconds out of the
fire routine.
‘Fighters have still got to go in after the bastard thing and ionise it, I know we’re supposed to be more accurate
but not that far below standard, has anybody told them to keep clear yet, if we’re not supposed to be able to do
this then our jammers had better stop them getting the word out, ready‑ firing now.’
He depressed the trigger switch. The result depressed the rebels. A single ripple salvo from the quad turbolaser,
thirty thousand terajoules a shot‑ trivial by it’s design potential, but enough, aimed in a shallow tracking diagonal
across the line of flight of the customs corvette.
One hit. There was a thin, soap‑bubble‑breaking flare around the corvette as it’s shield generator overloaded and

Firing into the melee around the three transports was much more risky. He activated Sub Two and took one full
power shot at the least encumbered of the three freighters.
It was effectively a snapshot. No warning from the fire control, just the instant continental hammerblow shattering
it into glowing gas. The tracer may be below the speed of light, the bolt was well beyond the speed of

‘Useful.’ Franjia’s comment. ‘Squadron fire order‑ objective Corvette.’ It flared up on Aron’s targeting panel, she
was designating it for them.
‘Weapon torpedoes, subcomponent target; turrets. Fan salvo. Director identifying.’ The way she set it up, each of
the six twin turrets had four torps, from four different fighters, homing on it. Must be a preset. He had used
missile systems before‑ on an Interceptor, they were a rare aftermarket modification, poorly integrated.
On the Starwing, his targeters cut through the rebel’s jamming in less than a second, and‑ first time in coherence
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‘One, standard procedure on an attack run is if a fighter loses shields, it breaks off and circles to recharge for
another pass‑ procedure also says we provide our own top cover, the circling element covering for the rest. You’re
the interceptor pilot.’
‘I’ll take the cover party. Epsilon two, three, four, conform to me.’ Aron acknowledged, and led his flight in a wide
decelerating sweep, eyes in the cockpit, letting his wingman cover him while he looked at his sensor display.

Ship for ship, the Imperials were superior this time; the corvette had ignored the Avengers, though, it and the
freighters had concentrated on shooting up Hunters and Interceptors. Beta One had ordered his squadron to chase
down the X‑ wings and Gauntlets; the Gauntlets were proving tougher targets.
Turret fighters, pretty nimble and no blind spot, they needed to be hit from two directions at once, and the rest of
the rebels were running interference trying to prevent that happening. Com traffic tagged the corvette as the rebel
flagship, it was the one directing the rest. Probably they would move to protect it‑ preventing that would be his

The local cylinder‑ fighters were fast but clumsy; they made a run, broke off and tried again‑ but they had a huge
gun battery, eight light autoblasters or something like, spraying out huge geysers of orange‑ red light that
splattered off an Avenger’s shields, wore down a Hunter’s but sheared an Interceptor to fragments. The Hunters
had one torpedo tube each, so they were trying to hit the rebel freighters. Both sides’ plans had come apart, and
actually his squadron was the largest formed unit on either side.
He looked for a shot; three of the cylinders had just finished a run on a pair of Avengers‑ one of the Avengers was
wallowing‑ and they were turning for another go.

‘Two, with me.’ Aron went for them in turn.

Lock and launch a torpedo‑ targeters and jammers made too neat a pair, it usually took long enough to get a lock
that the situation had changed by then, but the bomber electronics on the Starwing made it easy. Follow it in‑ the
cylinder saw it coming, tried to turn away, but its drift carried into the torpedo’s flightpath. The proton warhead
left it hot gas, and Aron charged in behind his missile aiming for the right hand cylinder.
They managed to slide round to bear, flying tail first. ‘Two swap targets‑ I go low.’
The firestreams leapt out of the cylinders too little too late; he slid under and his wingman slid over, stray red‑
orange sparks splashed off both their shields, there was the muted thunder‑crackle of heavy laser fire as Aron
snapped out four twin bolts. Green impact flash, yellow‑white fireball.

Two wasn’t as good a shot; he crippled his cylinder, cut thrust and was pivoting to have another go when an
Avenger came after it and stole his kill; one of the Gauntlets lobbed a torpedo at the Avenger, that dipped and
Aron took a long range shot at the Gauntlet, which neatly sidestepped out of the way and fired another at him.
Power output, rapid fire ‑ no time. He lined up on the torpedo and started shooting at it, one managed to connect
and the torpedo blew, the sensors behind him showed the Avenger double shields aft, seem to take the hit ‑
damaged but not destroyed, then the engine block sparked and the fighter shook, the Avenger pilot punched out.
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crossing tangent across the front of the formation, hammering at them with both it’s guns; Five and Six dipped to
match it’s vector, yawed to bear and sprayed fire at it. Five switched to Ion, hit and paralysed it, kept her finger on
the trigger switching to Laser‑ set up her own sitting duck. Nice; he’d have to remember that trick.
Two of the cylinder bombers were attacking the port edge of the squadron attack line‑ he found the right button
and pressed it, marking the lead of the pair as his target.
The Ghtroc was moving towards the corvette, but Hunters were harassing it, preventing it using its guns on the
Starwings. He’d deal with that later.

Two followed him, Three and Four were lined up on the other bomber, both the rebel cylinders started lobbing
unguided light missiles‑ Aron laid his guns ahead of his target, started ripple firing, Two, Three and Four did the
same, aiming for the missiles first and tracking back to the bombers. Ten, Eleven and Twelve broke to evade, Nine
throttled back to cover them, one of the bombers ceased fire and turned to break‑ his target. The other, Three
and Four coned and blew apart.
Aron banked after the retreating bomber, switched to ion cannon, hosed sequential fire around it, it started
tumbling out of control‑
‘Break lead break.’ Two called, Aron slammed the fighter into a diving twist, red quad laser shot screamed past
flaring off his after shields, he yo‑yo’d up to see an X‑wing zooming high being chased by Two.

The X‑ Wing half‑rolled into a head on pass with an Interceptor, neither imperial could fire, the X‑wing missed
and hurdled the Interceptor, but the Interceptor pilot nearly rammed Aron‑ the Starwing sideslipped out of the
way on pure reflex before he consciously realised he had to dodge.
I’d forgotten how much fun furballs aren’t, he thought, looking for the bomber and lobbing a torp at it before
anyone could steal it, then turning back to the squadron.
The torpedo spread had hit the corvette, and there were six glowing lumps of wreckage where twin light
turbolaser mounts had been. Some of them had been stopped, but not enough.
Now it was ion time. Makes sense, Aron thought, they surprised us this time, we want to grab someone who
knows what other tricks they might have ready and introduce him to Mr. Painful‑ that didn’t make it easy.

The Ghtroc was angling it’s shields to keep the Hunters busy while it turned guns to cover it’s command ship ‑
that was their opportunity.
‘Lead flight, ions, from the front, that Ghtroc.’ Two for the price of one.
They flew the same scything attack pattern, build a vector then ride it, strafing across its nose ‑ a fast three
seconds of close enough contact for reliable shooting, they twisted and weaved to throw its aim off, it shot back at
them ‑ Four’s shields collapsed entirely, and he had two glowing holes in his fighter’s wing radiators; Aron took
two hits, soaked‑ the Ghtroc took four long columns of blue bolts, it reeled, lightning crackling across it. The
Hunters could finish the job.

‘Formation change, Four takes lead, we cover.’ That was so they could cover the now vulnerable Epsilon Four’s
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‘Head for the rest of the squadron.’ Bearing marked on the sensor globes.
They had swirled round the corvette, ionising it and then some. Aron didn’t envy the boarding party.
That done, Epsilon were watching each other’s backs, scanning for threats and opportunities. There were more
green blips than red, now.
The rebels were losing, their tactic had failed, and they seemed to realise that fact. They started to look for ways
out of the furball, avenues to clear space.

‘Five? Bomber tactics query here. How do I say “blow the stang out of that freighter”?’ He spotlighted the
remaining YT‑ series, which was running for hyperspace. It glowed on his scope, and his headphones beeped. Like
that, then. He lined up on it, switched to torpedoes, triggered a shot with the rest of the squadron.
The freighter saw them coming ‑ somewhere over on the left, in front of third flight, an overeager Interceptor pilot
got himself crisped by blundering into one of their torpedoes ‑ one score against.
Not their fault. The freighter spat laserfire at the torps, doubled shields aft, twisted and tried to roll out of the
way. Six connected.
A YT‑series was perfectly capable of being souped up to carry turbolaser‑ resistant shields. Some had been. Not
this one; its shields flared and collapsed, it limped into hyperspace. Damage, not a kill.

What wasn’t dead already, the Avengers were finishing off.

Rescue and boarding ships were a long time launching; apparently when the main guns had fired, the lighting in
the forward hangar bay had had a seizure, and the station’s and the tender commander’s shuttles had managed to
collide. No injuries, much wreckage.
Epsilon squadron got to stand sentry over the disabled and wait to cover the boarding and rescue transports.

‘Delvran, your eyes have glazed over. You’re thinking about her again, aren’t you.’
‘Captain Lennart, I‑’ Dordd began.
‘Many hats. I have to be a part‑time everything, so will you, and that includes relationship counselor. The counsel
I’m giving you about this relationship is; don’t.’ He was prepared to joke about it, as long as it wasn’t too serious.
‘And why should I not?’ Dordd said, drawing himself up to his full height. Which was a lot.

‘Delvran, you’re basically an organisation man. You relate to your superiors, you relate to your equals in rank, you
relate to your juniors, competently, normally‑ you fit in. Command of your own’s your chance to grow out of that
mould‑ live up to the ship’s name.’
Lennart smiled; HIMS Dynamic. ‘She isn’t; white armour or not, I recognise a lone wolf when I see one. I should
know; I’m in a relationship with one myself.’ He waved an arm at the structure around him, meaning the Black
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sorted out. That gives me two hours.’

He spent ten minutes of them packing, twenty pacing up and down, stomach in knots, before deciding to take the
risk. He invited a stormtrooper to dinner.

She probably had a clearer idea of what was going on in his head than he did. She decided to play with him a little.
His actual quarters were close to his duty station ‑ damage control central, above the main reactor bulb, and not
far from stormtrooper barracks.
She turned up at his door dressed in her environmental body glove. Slick, black, figure hugging ‑ he nearly
collapsed on the spot from sheer excitement.
Pull yourself together, he thought, before realising there were at least two very wrong words in that statement.

‘You requested my presence, captain.’ She said, voice rolling over him like liquid honey.
‘Yes, yes, come in, sit down.’
She flowed through the space around her like black mercury; he could not tear his eyes off her hips, her thighs,
her belly. It was too late to avoid looking like a lust‑struck fool.
‘Captain Dordd,’ she said, changing mood and tone drastically ‑ bitter and defiant, putting one foot up on a chair,
‘you far outrank me. If your only purpose in requesting my attendance on you was to satisfy your lust, you can
order it so, and I must lie back and think of Coruscant. From a separate chain of command, I have nothing to gain
by pleasing you, and you may remember my ranking as a field interrogator. Shall we drain a cup of misery
together, or may I go?’
‘Why does it have to be one or the other? Can’t I simply talk to you?’ he said, baffled, confused, disappointed and
‘Is this normal enough to be simple? Are you trying to tell me that you want to get to know me as a person?’ She
could have made that much more barbed than the words suggested.
‘Sithspawn, woman, why are you using my rank against me?’
‘Do you command me to explain?’ that did reach into open mockery. ‘I’m sorry. As a person, that went too far. But
I am assigned as part of a hunter‑killer squad. Do you think I don’t notice eyes following me?’
‘I’m sorry too ‑ I admit to the lust. At least give me credit for realising that that alone isn’t enough.’ He was
almost pleading. ‘Stay and eat with me.’
Somewhere in the small part of her head she used for passing for a civilian whenever duty required it, a simulated
personality was rolling on the floor laughing. She bowed to him and sat down in the chair. Dordd’s steward had
barely believed what was being asked of him, and had made a very scratch job of cooking for two. CHON synthesis
or not, arranging the stuff was still best done by hand; although this time done very badly.
‘Ah.’ She said, taking a deep sniff of it’s scent. ‘Roast Bothan. My favourite.’
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He met her eyes, and she noticed he was nearly ready to burst into tears or chuckles, or both. ‘This was crazy. I
don’t know why I thought it made sense.’
‘I knew it didn’t. Somehow, I ended up here anyway.’ She smiled.
‘What do I call you? OB173 just doesn’t capture you.’
‘For any of the real veterans, names are equipment, issued as needed, and the name I like best is the one that has
served me best: Aleph‑3. You have the same problem, former commander Dordd, your name is changing, and
that’s going to change the person under it more than any of mine ever changed me.’

‘Tell me about yourself.’ He asked the nightblack‑clad woman of his dreams.

‘You do realise that I’m a clone?’
‘I can’t believe there’s more than one of you. The universe would have noticed. Jorian said so, but‑’
‘How he knows is a topic in it’s own right. I was designed as part of a limited production run, to fill certain
support functions; liaison with civilian authority, army spokeswoman, internal communications ‑ I was to be a
finger of the velvet glove covering the iron fist. Or a glittery flash of distraction, covering the approach of the
blade…normal training as well of course, but by the time I reached a useful maturity ‑ Hail Palpatine.’
She was been sitting leaning forward with her elbows on the table, fingers steepled together, watching him react.
She straightened, sat upright in the hair, suddenly less intimate.
‘The glove torn off and thrown away, my clone sisters and I had to find a new purpose for ourselves. Not easy;
some of us failed to rise any higher than what I expected you wanted me for.’
He wanted to reach forward and touch her, but he wanted to do that for so many other reasons as well, he was
afraid she might tear his arm off. Vulnerable, she was not; she had faced that fear and beaten it. ‘Others entered
various branches of the service, became aides and adjutants, analysts and supply officers; I found a more special
‘When you were talking about the rebel spy, you said something about injustice.’
‘Sometimes…when we are doing our proper jobs, I am the face and voice of the hunter team. I ask, "what do you
know? what have you seen?" I smell out lies, find trails, follow leads ‑ the best justice we can hope for, I think, is
simply that; being given a fair chance to make use of your talents. Some of the talents I have, I was given, even the
ones that nearly condemned me and I would perhaps preferred not to have; the most I have really done with face
and figure is preserve them ‑ the talents I have worked for and earned, those I am proud of.’
She paused for a moment, pulled her mind’s eye out of her own past. ‘Yourself, Captain Dordd? What gifts has
fortune given you, and what traps has the pitiless bitch arranged? I succeeded in clawing my way out of a pit;
you’re about to enter the top trillionth of the most powerful people in the galaxy.’
‘I think one of those traps is sitting across from me now.’ He smiled at her. ‘I did well enough at the academy, no
second M’thh’raw’nurundo though ‑ few are. I think I must look better connected than I am.’ She resisted the
impulse to tell him that the way he looked at her made him seem entirely disconnected.

‘I was lucky, right place, right time, and at least enough of the right man not to drop the ball. I worked my way up
through the deck division, navigator on an Ecliptic and exec of a Venator before being sent to the Black Prince, five
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thing I’ve done since the academy.’

‘It took the captain this long to corrupt you?’
Gradually, she got him talking about himself, explaining and trying to justify. She was a good listener, he was
under a lot of stress, he opened up to her completely. It was, in its own way, a triumph of the interrogator’s art.
He was besotted with her.
The steward came in to clear the hardly‑touched plates, and also to pass on a message; the pad was clear,
wreckage removed. Time for him to go.
He looked at her, dewy‑eyed, and opened his mouth. Quickly she reached across the table and placed a finger on
his lips.
‘Don’t say it.’
He looked desperately disappointed. Heartbroken.

‘Delvran…’ she said, slowly, ‘what would we do, when I am alone and unmasked, with nothing to do except work
through you? Whatever my good qualities are, I assure you I have badness to spare. I think we would come to
loathe each other, in time. Yoked together, on the edge of the deep dark, probing and twisting and manipulating ‑
and I would have to stow away to go with you, don’t forget ‑ what would happen in our first lovers’ quarrel?
Go and take charge of your ship, and accept all my good wishes to go with you, because I cannot.’
She stood, walked out, leaving an image of herself burnt on his minds’ eye.
From the bridge, Jorian Lennart watched the transport go.
‘Omega‑ 17‑ Blue‑ aleph 3.’ He tapped in the access code he wasn’t supposed to know, and called the cloned
woman he hoped was still aboard his ship.
‘Yes, Captain Lennart.’
‘Delvran escaped with his life, then.’
‘There would have been little challenge in it; the other main factor was that you said you would have me shot.’
‘I owed him that much covering fire, at least. That and I don’t think you would have enjoyed being Pirate Queen of
the Outer Rim.’ Lennart said, dryly.
‘Captain Dordd’s dark lady, the power behind the command chair ‑ you don’t think I wasn’t tempted? Perhaps it
was this ship that would be sent after us to bring us to heel.’ She said silkily.
‘Another reason to stop you ‑ Imperator against Arrogant would be no challenge at all.’
‘There are two men on this ship I would joyously accept a command to bed from…’
‘And both of them have far too much sense to issue it, OB173. Be about your duties.’
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Chapter 4

The probationer cowered at the far end of the corridor, looking at the snarling, crackling mess.
A junction in the power web had overloaded, partially melted, and the work team was standing a safe distance
away looking at it, working out what to do.
He was the only officer, it was his responsibility ‑ he didn’t have the experience to point a petty officer at the
problem. They were looking at him; he had to do something, he needed something nonconductive, he started to
take his jumpsuit off‑
‘Freeze, spacer,’ a large voice said from behind him. The eight strong work crew turned round to spot their hairy
‘Ah, sir?’
‘You were about to try to do something heroic, weren’t you? At risk to your own life and limb, etcetera, did it for
the ship, etcetera, and hoping to distract me from that your taskbooks are drekh.’

‘Commander, I was trying to shut the node down.’

‘The power distribution node has melted, probationer. Two other nodes failed when the compensators came back
on line, and this one got too much load too fast to break circuit cleanly. The thin layer of contaminated carbon
you were about to smear all over it wouldn’t have helped.’
As he talked, Mirannon was assessing the situation. The intermittent blue‑white glare did very strange things to
the look of his beard.
‘Where’s it arcing to?’ he asked the raw young lieutenant. There was something familiar about him, Mirannon
knew he ought to recognise the young officer, how had he made himself noticeable? Eleven thousand in the
engineering department. He couldn’t keep track of everybody.
‘Um, nearest main structural member?’
‘Correct, closing a circuit to the main reactor bulb, as you would have known rather than guessed if you were up
to date.’
Mirannon turned to the leading member of the work team. ‘Tiffy, you are supposed to tell him when he’s being an
idiot. When were you planning to stop him killing himself?’
‘Sorry, Commander,’ the leading mechanical engineering artificer said. ‘Didn’t realise anybody would do
something that dumb. I’d have stopped him before he got to it.’

‘Procedure; you look, here,’ Mirannon pointed to a panel set on the wall and labelled with what the probationer
thought were hieroglyphs, ‘for directions to the nearest routing station, go there and shut down the node. The
routing station’s droid brain should be smart enough to bypass around it, but you may have to do it manually if
the network has been, say, recently ionized. Someone forgot about that, which is why this one has acquired a new
function as a probie‑zapper.’
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‘Then,’ Mirannon fixed him to the spot with a shout, he wasn’t getting out of it that easily, ‘you go to the nearest
DC bunker, draw a replacement, come back here and fit it, taking what’s left of that down to Main Machinery sub‑
2 for reconditioning. No, you’re not allowed to get electrocuted in the process.’

‘Chief, the tender commander’s here looking for you.’ One of his assistants called him.
Then send him to the sick bay for ointment, Mirannon briefly thought of saying but didn’t. He had just gone to the
Damage Control bunker himself, pushing his way past a heap of newly returned portaconduits, to look for the
next outstanding problem that merited his attention. There were supposed to be limiters that kept the team that
normally occupied the bunker focused on their area of duty; his access code overrode them and he called up a full
ship status display.
‘Send him to DC starboard‑45.’ Shield unit which had lost synch, blocking fire outgoing as well as incoming. That
would be the next problem worth seeing to.
‘As well, chief, three stormtrooper squads called.’ The assistant was new, and didn’t believe the message he had
been asked to pass on. ‘They said you must be bored, would you mind if they hunted you down and shot you?’
‘Business before pleasure,’ Mirannon replied.

Starboard‑45 was, as the name suggested, on the starboard side of the ship at Primary Hull Frame 45; what was
primary was the frame, not the hull.
The system counted from forward aft, which meant that if Mirannon had his way they would need negative
numbers. Secondary hull frames filled in the space between the primary frames, which were set one every ten
metres, and the DC bunkers‑ a smaller ship would have had lockers‑ also performed the routinely useful function
of zonal maintenance centres.
Ventral‑40 was the main maintenance complex for the shuttle and dropship launch bays, Spinal‑10 was oriented
towards the light turbolaser and point defence laser turrets clustered thickly in the prow of the ship. Dorsal‑130
was ion drive accelerator routine servicing, Spinal‑120 was a standing joke as it would actually have been inside
the reactor bulb.
All of them were also hardened to act as disaster shelters if the ship broke up. Starboard‑45 had no specific, only
the general function.

The Sahallare’s commanding officer found Mirannon looking through a rack of storage cabinets, searching for
parts. He had narrowed it down to one of two possibilities, the shield unit wasn’t responding to the fire window
requests or it simply wasn’t receiving them, in both cases it was a control problem.
‘Engineer‑Commander, um, Mirannon?’
‘Me.’ They were equal in rank.
‘What are you doing with my men? You sent them back and kept their equipment.’
‘We needed the hardware, not the wetware,’ Mirannon snapped back, before deciding to explain. ‘This ship’s been
seriously damaged and undergone major repair six times. Every time, she moves further away from spec. Which in
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‘Outer rim, nine years ago, one of those marginal species the republic knew about but could never be bothered
bringing civilisation to. Nasty little battle, we lost most of our mid and after shielding. The FleetTechServ unit we
linked up with were too scared to hang around; they replaced or improv‑ mounted where they could, spent the
minimum time on the job and ran for safe space. We managed to repair and recondition some of the wreckage
they left us with ‑ six of twelve. Spare generators, spare mounts ‑ we remounted them, shifted the panel layout,
and your work crew didn’t know that. They had our shield units treating each other as incoming fire.’
‘Your ship looks like a wreck; naturally, my people assumed they knew best.’ The Sahallare’s commander stated,
less arrogantly than he might after seeing some of the Black Prince’s engineering team in action.
‘The skipper has this idea about ships having identities and personalities. The computers, we prevent that, but the
actual structure of the ship has enough complexity in it to show emergent behaviours. That and fuzzy thinking.’
The chief engineer shook his hairy head.
‘He reckons the ship’s a berserker, a warrior proud of her scars. I make sure they’re no more than skin deep‑ how
much do you know about the design of the Imperator class?’

‘What are you going to tell me that I don’t know?’

‘Quite a lot, I suspect.’ Mirannon moved to the bunker’s compnode, called up the ship status display. ‘Main
structure of an early model Imperator‑I, hull number below, say, twenty‑two hundred. What do you see?’
‘A tuning fork.’
‘We’ve got two separate sets of main ribs. One radiating forward from the ion drives, one radiating outward from
the main reactor. Characteristic of a capital ship.’ The double keel arrangement was what made the ‘tuning fork’.
‘There up to sixty‑five hundred, double destroyer‑weight ribs, sixty‑five to thirteen thousand eight hundred,
single heavy tetra structure with the reactor in central suspension. Thirteen nine hundred upwards, light tetra
structure.’ Smaller ship models appeared in the air next to the main model, the three named below, two more
above; an original‑spec Imperator, and a heavy destroyer‑leader.

‘Tensor field generators.’ They appeared highlighted on the display. ‘Multiple, distributed, redundant. Relative
inertial fields‑ same again. Power network ‑ parallel redundant, barring operator brainfarts, anyway. I don’t know
what the fuss about the Executor was; by any reasonable standard, the I‑boats were already super‑destroyers. We
forget just how much of a new breed the Imperators were at the time.
'Not pack ships like the V‑boats, both kinds, not near‑cruiser flotilla leaders, but heavy independents. The half‑
written tac manual did strange things to the technology, like a virtual pocket battleship hull frame. Sloppy design;
they’re overbuilt, the Imperator‑II’s are more elegant, more closely matched to the job ‑ but every time we have a
reason, I try to have Black Prince rebuilt closer to what the power systems and the hull frames can bear.’
‘The port side of the ship?’
‘Is as I want it; the problem is that I haven’t had the chance to rebuild the starboard side to match. We were in
company with the Notitior, a Vic‑II, chasing a fleeing Rebel MC‑40. The reb skimmed close to a neutron star trying
to shake us, Notitior cut the corner too close, didn’t have the vee to get past. There was too much shear for a
tractor to be any use, we had to get under her and physically ram her to push her out of danger, with enough
momentum to carry us clear if we did tear off an engine. We were badly but not essentially damaged, I took the
opportunity for a major reconstruction; you noticed the portside turret line?’
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‘Echeloned them outwards so they can all bear directly ahead. Why the Imperator wasn’t built like that to begin
with I don’t know. Heavier brim trench weaponry, some of it our own recycled and some of it removed from the
enemy. All of it stable enough and well enough served in use that it should have been set up that way. The ruined
look serves efficiently as camouflage.’
‘One other thing I wondered about. In the MCR, I overheard one of your juniors saying the stormtroopers wanted
to hunt you down and shoot you?’
‘Inside joke. Five thousand of my people and the legion were involved in boarding a Procurator battlecruiser, and
the crew and the legion have covered each others’ backs since. That’s just their way of telling me they think I’m
pushing myself too hard, that my judgement’s going to start to suffer unless I get some rest. They might be right,
I’m not doing anything a competent PO Artificer wouldn’t. I have more than enough deputies to do it all.’
Which meant he wouldn’t stop for another four hours or so. ‘That was fun, that day. Did you know a Jedi
lightsabre is based on the same technology as a cutting torch?’
‘No…can’t say that I did.’
‘High density plasma held in a stasis field…One half trained idiot and two quarter trained idiots, attacking me, an
Imperial Starfleet engineer, in a starship engine complex, with glorified cutting torches. I think their plan was to
get me to laugh so hard my brain would seize up. Didn’t work. Ultimately, I think,’ the display of the destroyer‑
leader, a V‑sterned outline with a mid‑ mounted bridge tower, expanded, ‘I can bring this ship close to the
functionality of a Proelium destroyer squadron flagship.’
‘That’s ambitious. Very ambitious,’ the tender’s commander said, impressed.
‘Of course, if you spread this story around, it will sound like the sleep‑deprived ravings of a man who runs a ship
that looks as if it tried to run away to the circus.’

The captain’s ready room, Lennart at the head of the table, Brenn and LCdr Mirhak‑Ghulej in attendance. Mirhak‑
Ghulej was a near‑human, skin quite literally the colour of the metal bronze, not exactly standard imperial officer
material. That only made him all the more zealous.
‘At ease. Captain Dordd got out alive,’ Lennart said, not entirely seriously, ‘and now I need a new executive officer.
Sector Fleet has failed to specify their own candidate for the job, which means it’s in house. Mirhak‑Ghulej, you’re
the outstanding officer in the deck division, Brenn you have seniority. The other factors I have to bear in mind
made the choice.’ He paused for a moment, watching them react. Brenn was suspicious of Mirhak‑Ghulej.
‘We are not the most average ship in the Star Fleet. We do our best for the Empire, and that best sometimes turns
out to be more and stranger than the Empire expects. One unofficial position in the chain of command is what you
could loosely call the ‘Ambassador of normality’; someone whose job is daily routine and established norms, who
can remind the rest of us how much, or how little, the fleet expects. Ielamathrum Brenn, do you think that you
could fit that description?’ Lennart’s tone made it clear he didn’t think so.
‘If you don’t think I’m up to the job‑‘
‘Executive officer, you could do; straight man, no. Barring accident, your next posting‑ I will try and find a spot for
you in local sector fleet, as commander of a strike cruiser or frigate‑class starship.’ That looked like a mixed
blessing to Brenn.

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an assault charge. I will back up one of my officers, but there is a lot you could do to reduce your status as a
‘Sir, I am not going to hide. I want things done the right way, the Imperial way, and if some of them can’t hack
that, they don’t belong in His Majesty’s service.’ Mirhak‑Ghulej could have temporised, but that wasn’t his style.

‘Let me rephrase that. When I said “barring accident”, I meant “if you get fragged”. It has happened to unpopular
officers before. Seldom on this ship, mainly because I also discourage my officers from offering the crew that
much provocation.’ Hazing was routine, but generally not above Lieutenant’s rank.
‘Then may I respectfully inquire of my commanding officer why I have been selected for a job that he has no
intention of allowing me to perform, Sir!’ Mirhak‑Ghulej replied ‑ forcing the issue, trying to win himself a free
‘Because, first, you were the previous incumbent’s recommendation, and second, if I move Brenn up, than I have
to find a new navigator in addition.’ Lennart was only half in jest. ‘You have to recognise, and punish, infractions
of discipline; you also have to recognise, and reward, competence and dedication. If you can only do one of those
things, then you’re right; you shouldn’t be allowed to perform the job. I think you can do better, and you’re trying
to snow me.’

‘Captain, I admit to being orthodox. I admit to following the regulations, to the letter.’ He obviously intended to
go on.
‘Follow them to their spirit instead; you’ll have a better life,’ Lennart said, apparently mildly.
‘Discipline has to be maintained. That means enforcement.’ Which was the party line.
‘What do you want from a career in the Navy?’ Lennart asked the metal‑faced, impassive lieutenant‑commander.
‘Some of us are in this to see the galaxy, some of us because our homeworlds are pestilential hellholes, some of
us for the excitement and some for the money, some for the skills they intend to pick up to carry them into
civilian life. I joined the Republic fleet to defend justice and right ‑ and when Palpatine proclaimed the empire, I
took one look at the ship’s turbolaser batteries and three milliseconds to decide which side of them I wanted to
stay on. How about you?’
‘I don’t understand. I would need a reason to not serve the Empire.’ The near‑human said. ‘Every loyal, good and
true citizen should look for a way to put their talents‑‘
‘You sound like a COMPNOR recruitment poster,’ Lennart said, grumpily. ‘I’ve read your file, read your reports,
examined your defaulters, and there is only one hint of an actual individual I’ve found under it all; you must really,
really want to be here, to submerge whatever you are so thoroughly under the official position.’
‘I just want to be part of something greater than myself, to stamp out the forces of evil and chaos, sir.’ He said,
utterly, impossibly deadpan; nobody could come that close to the official line, he had to be a rebel agent, Brenn
was thinking.

‘Good for you,’ Lennart said dryly. ‘Let me remind you of something; upwards of eighty percent of Imperial
defectors to the Alliance were under threat of disciplinary action at the moment of their defection.’ Lennart wasn’t
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‘All that proves, Captain, is that the system works. We weed out those unfit to help maintain peace and order.’
‘Or create them. Treat a man as a criminal, he might as well become one in earnest. You can manufacture
rebellion.’ Lennart paused for a moment.
‘We’re both over‑reacting. If you were that tactless, you wouldn’t be up for promotion. This crew scores well
above average on most benchmark inspections, they need to be led rather than driven. You have to inspire
affection, not for yourself, but for what you represent ‑ at the very least, don’t piss them off.’
‘Sir.’ Mirhak‑Ghulej’s face was expressionless.
‘Test case for you; Group Captain Olleyri. O‑equivalent higher in rank, beneath you in chain of command. He takes
over fighter direction when he’s not flying himself. We have controllers for that. Concerned about his pilots, yes,
but isn’t that concern more efficiently served by letting those whose job it is get on with it?’
‘I see, Captain. I’ll take it up with him at once.’
‘When you’ve done that, tell him to come and see me. Second test case; Turret‑master Aldrem. Exceeding his
orders, this time.’ The second shot on the YT.
‘He exceeded; he succeeded. What’s to punish?’
Lennart nodded. He was wrong about that. ‘Leave ship operations to me.’

Three quarters of an hour later, Olleyri turned up in the ready room.

‘Ah, good, come in. The new XO talked to you?’
‘If he ever tries to take this ship away from you on account of your disregard for uniform regulations, don’t be
surprised.’ Olleyri wore a uniform that was almost as wrecked as Lennart’s; less inherently out of place, but it had
been rumpled, crunched up and sweated into many, many times.
The starfighter force commander was in his late thirties, average height but painfully thin, as if nervous tension
had shaken all of the fat off him. His hair was going grey from forward back, and his cap should have been shot
for dereliction of duty.
‘We need someone like him.’ Lennart declared.
‘That far up the chain of command?’ the pilot shook his head. ‘What’s the problem?’

‘Generally, what we expect to happen next. I’ll hold another round table on that one. Specifically, your squadrons’
antiship work, and Epsilon squadron. They only had two flights of even average quality fighters; the small ships
did the majority of the work for the rebels, Gamma tried to counter but they were improvising. The Hunters could
function as light strike fighters, if the pilots knew attack doctrine.
Epsilon’s the other problem, and they may be able to solve each other.’

‘They did well.’ Olleyri said.

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‘Virtually nothing. Rahandravell led that one, not the new man‑ the command situation there could become a
problem.’ The group captain said, thinking about open billets elsewhere in the wing.
‘I checked; Jandras is an Interceptor pilot, used to light, fast fighters. He would be perfect for Gamma, except that
he’s no attack pilot. Franjia could do either, but giving her Gamma would leave a prime fighter‑bomber squadron
in the hands of an effective rookie.
The best long term solution would be to keep him in Starwings long enough to learn the trade, and then give him
the Hunters and let Franjia take over Epsilon. If they can work together.’
‘I’ll fold Gamma and Theta together in the meantime, break out the reserve Hunters and rebuild Theta when we
have a chance. I’ll talk to both of them.’ Olleyri decided.
‘Good. And Ol? Do as many sim exercises as you like as a controller, just not when there’s live shot in the air.’
Both of them knew that he was old for a pilot, his reflexes were slowing, and his next posting was likely to be as a
senior controller on a carrier or battlewagon.

‘Yee‑hah.’ Aron shouted, vaulting out of the cockpit of the landed Starwing.
‘We were lucky.’ Franjia called across to him.
‘How do you mean that?’ he had the sense to ask.
‘We exploited chaos; coming with a formed unit, still able to manoeuvre, into the middle of a furball. Someone
else on our side, Gamma and Theta squadrons, paid a high price to create that chaos.’ She reminded him.

‘Yeah.’ Aron realised. ‘Beta lost two fighters, one pilot, Gamma lost five fighters, three pilots, Theta…they got
‘Seven fighters, five pilots. We’re claiming twenty‑five out of thirty‑two Rebels, all pilots casualties ‑ sixteen dead,
nine prisoner. A freighter and a customs corvette. My personal score is two, yours three. Beta claim the majority of
the kills.’
He looked across at the panel below her cockpit. That would take her personal score to thirty‑one; and his to
twenty‑ four.
‘We’re part of the Bomb Group; on an anti‑ship strike, we are the ones who make the mess to give the TIE Twin‑
Tubs their chance.’ She meant TIE Bombers. ‘Today was a good day. Other days are not so good.’ She was back in
ice maiden mode.

Yrd was waiting for them on the pad. ‘Squadron Leader, Franjia.’ Did he mean that the way it sounded? Aron
glared at him. ‘The group captain wants to see you both. Alpha squadron ready room.’
‘Immediately?’ she asked.
‘That was the impression I got, yes.’
‘All right‑‘ she began.
‘Flight Lieutenants.’ Aron called them both to order. ‘Adjutant, lead us to Alpha’s ready room.’
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monochrome maze of storage, access, blast‑trap and function chambers. It was, in fact, a shortcut. Aron thought
it was a runaround.
Grey, black, white walls ‑ once the surrealistic sight of a stormtrooper standing against a white bulkhead, all that
was visible a pair of eyes, a few black patches of bodyglove and a blaster.
Alpha’s bay was laid out the same way; the decoration was different, a full holovid wall in the rec room ‑ half a
dozen pilots using it as a shooting gallery ‑ more flash, more chrome. Their adjutant, who flew as Alpha Two,
waved them into the ready room.
‘You did well out there.’ Olleyri told them. ‘Both of you.’
‘Sir?’ Aron stalled.
‘I was in flight ops, and I can practically hear the air between you crackling now. You wouldn’t be fighter pilots if
you didn’t have more ego than was good for you.
Jandras, you did well to give the main responsibility to the person best fitted to discharge it. Rahandravell; you
picked that responsibility up so fast it needed relative‑inertials.’
‘Sir, I saw what had to be done, and asked for permission to do it.’ Franjia replied, stonefaced.
‘Indeed.’ Skeptically. ‘Can’t have a squadron with two squadron leaders.’
‘What do you want, have us strap into a pair of Starwings and fight it out?’ Aron asked, aggressively.
‘That would be one solution. The winner gets the cost of the loser’s fighter stopped out of their pay.’ Olleyri
suggested. Both of them stopped to think just how much a Starwing cost.
‘Why are you assuming there’s a problem, Sir?’ Franjia said, sounding utterly disingenuous.
‘There will be. You led the squadron, not Jandras.’
‘I know why the Captain didn’t want to promote me after Ezirrn got killed, and with all due respect, he’s wrong. I
may be a little unstable off duty, in the cockpit is the one place where everything becomes clear again.’ She said,
humbly, sincerely.

‘You haven’t been appointed to run the squadron. I have.’ Aron told her.
‘Peace, the pair of you. This is the plan; Gamma squadron needs a new boss as well. They tried to fly as light
strike fighters and got hammered for it. Jandras, you’re going to move from Epsilon to Gamma as soon as you
know enough about the bomb trade to lead them as a fighter/attack unit. Rahandravell, you move into Epsilon
command slot when that happens.’
‘Easier said than done.’ She said.
‘You mean I’m to understudy one of my own flight commanders?’ Aron shouted, at the same time.
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room beneath the bridge. Mirhak‑ Ghulej looked as if he wanted to have a team of cleaners following the chief
around and sanitising everything he touched, if not the man himself.
‘I tempted fate last time,’ Lennart began, ‘by saying there was no way the Alliance could get a force large enough
to be a threat to us together faster than we could be ready to meet them. They tried anyway. Gethrim, what shape
are we in‑ and how much rest have you had?’
‘A couple of hours. A Stormtrooper spec‑ops team found me and threatened to stun me to sleep unless I hit the
sack. They said you authorised it.’ It was impossible to tell if he was grinning or not.
‘I authorised no such thing.’ Lennart said, wondering whose idea that had been.
‘They’re getting sneakier every day.’
‘Counter‑terrorism ops.’ Lennart said. ‘Ask them to think sneakily enough to outguess Rebel saboteurs, you end
up with a lot of clean, shiny white helmets with warped, twisted minds inside ‑ be happy they work for us.’
‘If I hadn’t been so tired, I would have called their bluff. Which proves that they had a point.’ The engineer

‘If this ship was an orgophone, she would have twenty‑five keys out of tune. Engines are fine, compensators ‑
we’re now clear up to two thousand ‘g’, the RIF fields start interrupting each other after that.’
‘We can maneuver, but we can’t chase.’ Lennart stated.
‘Tensor fields are fine. Stasis generators are twitchy. I’m not even going to try to explain what happened to the
number five hyperdrive motivator.’ A lightbulb went on in Mirannon’s head; that was where he had come across
the probationer before.
‘We can microjump with ten minutes warning, not less time, no more distance. Shields, weapons, interactions
between, ninety‑ six percent confidence. Stores and parts, seventy‑ four percent.’
‘The other four percent?’ Lennart meant the interactions.
‘Bow and bow‑ ventral shields are still up to 70ms slow to accept fire window requests. Two more hours to find
and fix.’
‘Guns, work round that if you have to.’ Lennart ordered. ‘The rebel survivors have been interrogated; they were
supposed to be part of a combined strike. From the lack of laser fire in the area, I can only assume they’ve gone
back to the drawing board.’
‘Details?’ Brenn asked. Wanting to show he was still part of the ship.
‘They actually screwed it up. The fighters were supposed to hit in time to draw the local defence wing and system
reaction squadrons out, with the freighters and corvette appearing five minutes later. Instead it was barely forty
seconds. They cut their timing and positioning too close, we got more warning from the bow shock, and had more
formed units outside the melee and able to react, than we should have. They planned to bomb, not seize, the V‑
150s, that would open the way for assault ships that would proceed as we expected.’
‘What went wrong?’
‘Com procedure. Whoever was in charge of the regional command units set it up so that a failure to communicate
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that’ll be changed by now. Sector Fleet have been informed, and they intend to deploy a Demolisher frigate;
they’ve asked us for heavy fighter support.
'The only reason not to ‑ gut feeling. The primary threat hasn’t gone away. It was a well planned strike at a
valuable objective; I think they’ll have at least one more try before they write it off. As usual, decision is mine, I
want your input towards it.’
‘Are we still looking at a light to medium warship strike?’ Guns asked.
‘No indication that any of the strategic reserve MC‑80s are involved. Almost a shame.’ Lennart grinned fiendishly.
‘Bulk carrier and various Republic leftovers and defectors. They never shot at our shields, the rebel survivors know
that we have jammers and one main turret operative,’
‘Reminds me ‑ Aldrem’s in sickbay.’ Guns said. Reproachfully.
‘Sleep deprivation and hallucinations, yes?’ Lennart assumed, correctly. ‘He did a lot to frighten the rebels off. It
was a damn’ good shot, damn badly timed. Drilling him until he dropped was a suitable punishment.’ Lennart
stated, for the benefit of Mirhak‑Ghulej.
‘On the other hand, several of the rebels had a bounty on their heads. He’ll get the taker’s share of that.
Deployment‑ either operation could be a non‑event. Worst case; both go live simultaneously.’
‘Demolisher’s mainly a light carrier type.’ Brenn said. ‘Any help going, they need it more than we do.’
‘Squadron of Bombers, half squadron of Interceptors, two and a half of ln.’ Olleyri reported. ‘Decent troop
complement, more than enough to cover that side. Send two of ours ‑ Alpha and Epsilon. We can call Beta,
Gamma, Delta and Nu if we need reinforcements. How much of that bounty goes to my pilots?’
‘Usual split.’ One quarter to the personnel directly involved, one quarter split between the indirectly, one quarter
to command‑ primarily Lennart and Olleyri in this case ‑ and one quarter to the ship. ‘How’s the slush fund
doing?’ he asked Brenn. It was nominally the paymaster’s job to manage and the XO’s to oversee, but Brenn was
best up to date.
‘Pretty healthy.’ It was used for, amongst other things, bailing out sailors caught short of the law on shore leave.
‘We have enough to, for instance, pick up three squadrons of Rebel‑type fighters on the black market.’
‘What an extraordinarily sneaky idea.’ Lennart liked the sound of it, but could see the problem. ‘Is there such a
thing as a trustworthy Hutt? If you ever find one, we could triple the slush fund by selling the story.’
‘We can welsh on a deal with more gigatonnage than they can.’ Brenn stated.
‘Leave extreme infiltration aside for the moment‑ make that very far aside. What more do we need from the

‘Motivator five. I’m leaving it to last because of the stasis generators, and so I can get the maximum amount of
use out of the test rigs I borrowed from them,’ Mirannon said.
‘We can jump missing as many as three motivators, we have that redundancy.’ Brenn, who should know, said.
‘How safe is this indescribable failure, if that’s what’s stopping us?’
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to the rest of the ship, it went acausal, wobbled across the light barrier, and wrapped itself around its own world
line. Damn thing turned itself into a closed timelike curve.
Useless ‑ totally self referential ‑ and an anchor is exactly how it’s behaving. We can’t hyper cleanly with it on
board. Straightforward replacement job, totally unrepairable with the available tools and time, only dangerous to
itself so far.’
‘I love that ‘so far’. Get rid of it,’ Lennart ordered. ‘I want the tender ready to leave in a hurry if she has to. Ready
Epsilon and Alpha squadrons. From 0445C on, we go on alert stations.’
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Jedi Council Member

  2006­12­13 08:40pm

Ch 5

Most of the gantries were still, to the naked eye and the casual scan, in place; from the outside, Black Prince still
looked like a ship under major repair.
From the inside, fine tuning, trials, adjustment and compensation still to do, but the rough work was done and
she was spoiling for trouble. Some of her people were, anyway.
Two fighter squadrons floated out of the bay, formed up, confirmed their hyperdrive coordinates. They would
rendezvous with the sector force warship at their target. Olleyri’s idea; look like part of the sector reserve,
preserve surprise. Which he had a vested interest in, because he was leading the formation.

He had taken his most awkward problem with him: Epsilon squadron. It was Delta’s turn, but Epsilon needed it
more, and Olleyri would be happier to have them covering his tail anyway. Delta were more by the book, Epsilon,
under Tellick’s command, had treated the book as a launch pad rather than an objective.
That was what was wrong with too many Imperial pilots, according to the Group Captain; they weren’t crazy
enough. Too many flight colleges, and the one attached to Carida was the worst, turned out calm, thoughtful,
disciplined, obedient servants of the Empire.
In the cockpit, a servant‑ of anything‑ was dead meat. Olleyri wanted predators.

That was one of the reasons the rebels depended so heavily on fighters‑ their propaganda appealed more to, and
they got more of, the sort of people that made good fighter pilots.
Command thought it was a materiel problem. Olleyri had no problem with them thinking that, as long as it kept
the factories trying to one‑up the Alliance by turning out things like his Defender.
Navigation on the Black Prince was plotting their jump for them, and as they did, the Group Captain kept an ear
open for crosschattter between fighters‑ especially, between Epsilon One and Five.
He had told them the truth largely so they would think there was something else behind it; they would clash, and
drive each other on.
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carrier group. Treating Jandras as a problem might do the same for him.

Far off in the inner system, there was a hyperdrive‑ entry swirl; light hours away, they were seeing effects relayed
by Black Prince’s main domes.
‘Group Captain, that’s the Demolisher Raduvej away; your course mark is ten seconds from…mark.’ Flight control
‘Alpha and Epsilon, you heard Flight; lock in, and activate in four…three…two…one.’ Twenty‑ four fighters went to

On board, the crew were now standing rotating one in three watches. Some features of a Star Destroyer’s internal
layout were immovable.
Others were not, and one of Lennart’s and Mirannon’s reconstructs had been about breaking up the quarters
block in the superstructure and moving the crew closer to their duty stations.
It meant that the forward turbolaser crews no longer got asked to do the three minute mile; that was the most
extreme example, but it had improved readiness and response times. The fifteen crew of Port‑4 shared a bunk
room immediately beside their turret assembly.

‘That’s better. The walls are grey again.’ Aldrem was sitting on the edge of his bunk, blanket draped over his
shoulders, steaming mug of dwarf dice‑melon juice in his hands. He had stopped twitching.
‘We had them repainted green.’ Suluur said, in just the right comforting‑a‑sick‑friend tones. Aldrem took one
hand off the mug, held it up in front of him, squinted past it, and gave Suluur a very black look.
‘How do you two do it?’ Aldrem asked. ‘Stay up.’
‘Simple.’ Suluur said. ‘You were the one that got the blame, so the drill was tailored to hit you hardest.’
‘Changing power output at least one shot in three?’ Fendon objected to that.

‘I don’t get it. Punishment and reward. Reward without punishment, stang yes, but not likely. Punishment without
reward, I could at least get my head around. Neither means they’ve lost the file again. But both?’ he shook his
head, a bad move. ‘Urgh. At least the space spiders have stopped crawling across the inside of my eyeballs.’
‘No, they were alien bioships. That was part of the sim. You nearly melted sub‑2 shooting at them, remember?’
‘One windup is enough.’ Aldrem told them. Suluur put the holoprojector remote down. ‘How much does a good
therapist cost?’
‘By the day or by the hour? We’re on wartime running, fat chance of getting anywhere near one.’ Suluur was using
a very loose definition of the term ‘therapist’.

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the hull frame, and there was what looked like the mother of all scanning units bolted to the sphere.
‘Look at it with the naked eye, all you’ll get is a migraine.’ Mirannon advised him. ‘Use the scanner.’
‘How did we get this exotic an accident?’ Brenn asked, looking at the scanner, trying to work out how to make it
‘Because the built in factors of safety, and the active and passive safety systems, prevent all the simple ones.’
Mirannon pointed out.
‘Millions of things could go wrong, if we were daft enough to let them. This should have been preventable. My
headache is going to be working out how this one managed to slip through.’

‘You call one of the motivators turning itself into a solipsistic time machine simple and preventable?’ Brenn said,
not believing it. ‘I’d hate to see your version of a complex problem.’
‘Trying to fix it.’ Mirannon said, darkly.
‘Is there any use to it as it is? Anything we can do with it?’
‘It’s causality’s a knot; I’m still trying to work out what can be safely done to it. The only think I can think of is to
cut it loose, crate it up, leave it drifting and laugh at the Rebels as they try to pick it up and run with it.’
Brenn looked up. ‘That has potential. Captain wanted rid of it, so‑‘

‘Most of the through‑deck hard patches are already open. Two minutes to jettison, thirty to fit and calibrate a new
motivator to usability, ninety more to finish sorting the stasis fields, three days of juggling calibrations to get a
rating above point three nine. Then another ten days of systems integration. Joy.’ Mirannon grumbled.
He was protesting more than he otherwise would have precisely because so many of the systems that were giving
him trouble were his own adaptations. ‘The threat?’
‘Not yet but soon, I think. There are other Starfleet ships in the system, nothing bigger than a frigate though,
most of them out around Ghorn‑IV and V. You’re sure we can turn this into a glorified mine?’ Brenn asked.

‘Sure. DMR looked at something like it.’ He motioned Brenn back, out of the way of the work crews that were
disconnecting the scanner, unbonding the sphere from the hull spar.
‘What do you have to do with the Department of Military Research?’ Brenn asked, intrigued.
‘The top twenty of my academy conversion class were offered the option.’ Mirannon revealed. ‘We were shown a
few things, allowed to guess a few more, got to talk to some people.
Then we were addressed by one of its’ section heads, and that put almost all of us off the idea. You might have
heard of him, he’s famous now. A guy called Lemelisk.’

‘You met the chief designer of the Death Star?’ Brenn could barely believe it. He blurted it out.
‘Yes, and I’m surprised anybody thought it was necessary. His nervous twitch alone could have cracked the crust
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conferences after that, and neither of the two from my class have been heard of since.’
‘Navigator, Gunnery Officer, report to the bridge.’ The PA blared out.
‘That sounds like things starting to happen.’ Brenn advised Mirannon. ‘You don’t have a superlaser of your own
hidden somewhere around here, do you‑‘ he noticed a twinkle in the hairy engineer’s eye. ‘If you do, I don’t want
to know.’
‘I’ll release this and close up the hard patches.’ Mirannon gestured to the sphere, now held in a tractor‑ clamp.
‘Tell me if we’ve got time to fit the replacement.’
‘Right.’ Brenn said, running for the access corridor and the electrobuggy he had used to get here.

Lennart was in the starboard gallery; he waved Brenn and Guns across to the console he was standing over.
‘Does this smell as fishy to you as it does to me?’ he called up a received message. It was a datadump, made
through moderate haze.
‘HIMS Syirdraev to Black Prince, we are reconnaissance conversion Strike Cruiser, being pursued by a rebel hunter.
Intruder is larger, we are unable to engage, respectfully suggest we lead him past your position. Is your status
sufficient to engage?’
‘Syirdraev, that’s a hunting lizard, isn’t it? They must be reusing names, that should be KDY class 1000?’ Guns
‘That’s a Syurdraev, with an ‘I’ it’s a type of solar prominence, makes her a Nebulon‑B.’ Brenn stated. Even with all
the galaxy’s languages to draw on, there were barely enough words to name an entire navy. ‘What’s the rebel?’
Lennart called up the sensor footage. ‘Fishy as a Hutt’s rotting grandmother.’ Brenn realised.

The image was a computer reconstruction of what was going on‑ the ships were too far away for tactical sensors.
The Imperial‑ or the one with the green blip, anyway‑ was a heavily modified‑ looking Strike Cruiser.
Such things happened to ships converted to recon, and it was a logical choice, take advantage of the Loronar
design’s modularity; there were supposed to be a handful.
The professed Rebel was an old Starfleet Fulgur‑ class Star Frigate; five hundred and sixty metres, as near to an
egg shape as it was a wedge, and engine bells almost the size of an Imperator’s. The Fulgurs lived up to their
name; they had an oversized reactor, too, and not enough weaponry to take advantage of it, nor enough shielding,
but speed they had and to spare.

‘Do they really think we’re that stupid?’ Brenn said, scornfully.
‘You see something in this I don’t.’ Guns said.
‘Naturally; you’re interested in how ships shoot, he’s interested in how they move. A Strike Cruiser doesn’t have
the power to outrun a Fulgur, however heavily modified it is. They only adjust so far. That is a pair of Rebel
warships running a fairly interesting bluff.’ Lennart decided. ‘I think we pretend to take the bait.’
‘They don’t leave us many options, we couldn’t catch either even in full condition.’ Brenn said. ‘Fifteen minutes
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‘They have to do something to us when they get here; they will. Tell Mirannon to get the replacement motivator in
and the hardpatches sealed up as soon as may be.’
External com channel; ‘Black Prince Actual to Syirdraev; We are well below optimum condition, but an
undergunned fast frigate we can cope with. Herd her in. Black Prince out.’

‘You’re sure you’re not overdoing that?’ Brenn asked.

‘Fairly sure, they are theatre command types. If they compared notes with the Mon Evarra, they’ll know we’re lying,
but if they had I’d expect them to bring something bigger.
Right now we only have logic to go on, System Defence Command isn’t necessarily going to respond well to that
so send them an advisory, but warn the Sahallare and the Golan.’ He told the comtech. ‘Sound General Quarters.’

The coordinates the fighter group had been given for the Rebel local force base were a huge chunk of snow and
ice far out in the cometary halo of a system called Thebune. It was the next stop over on the civilian nav maps,
which described the mainworld as a flourishing residential planet, ecologically managed, pleasant scenery, rich
and diverse culture. Instinctively Aron was suspicious of it.
Alpha and Epsilon squadrons emerged from hyperspace in loose combat formation, close enough for mutual
support, far enough apart for sensor parallax, not too close to the target= enough room and time to react if there
was anything waiting for them. The frigate‑ carrier Raduvej was far ahead. Well within the jaws of the trap.

‘One, Five.’ Franjia called him; infuriatingly professional. ‘Capital ship targets. One large, two medium signatures.’
Expecting him to pass it up the chain of command, becoming her messenger in effect.
The Starwing’s sensor suite was more complex than a TIE’s; there was a lot he couldn’t do with it, and he resolved
that he would master it if it killed him. Or her.
‘Classify them. Alpha One, we have hostile capital ships.’
‘I see them.’ The iceballs were very large and very, very far apart; the nearest was a cosmic hairsbreadth at a
hundred thousand kilometres, that and this slowly revolving round a common centre. The far comet had a ship
half‑ hidden behind it, reactive scramblers returning nonsense to any active search.
Passive slowly pieced it together‑ ‘Lead, main rebel target is Neutron Star class. Auxilliary carrier.’

The Neutron Star class were‑ once shorn of the sales blurb‑ basically protected cargo ships.
Armed and defended to resist piracy, the empire had retired them from fleet support, and was compulsory‑
purchasing and breaking up all the civilian examples it could‑ because when they were taken, the Alliance turned
them into their equivalent of the Demolisher.
Everything about them was improvised; it was impossible to predict what any given example was capable of.

Scanning resolved two squadrons of T‑wings, one squadron of X, one squadron of old V‑wings. Interception
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‘They haven’t brought enough bombers. Those medium signatures, probe for them, they’ll be the ship killers.’
Olleyri said. He led the formation towards the Raduvej to support her, at Starwing speeds.
‘Forty‑eight kills waiting to happen.’ Alpha Two said.
‘That would be pleasure, this is business. Rebs wouldn’t be here in force unless they thought they could take us.’
Smenge, Aron thought. A rebel ambush on his second day on the job. All of his pilots sounded insultingly calm,
and he was probably getting paranoid.
Olleyri seemed to be deliberately putting him and Epsilon Five against each other; he’d have to talk to her about
that. If they survived.

‘Got it.’ Franjia said. ‘Nebulon‑B, and one unknown. Fighters moving to escort‑ Whoah.’
This Neutron Star, for instance, in addition to it’s fighters had an extremely powerful main jammer unit. It
snapped on and flooded a cone of space centred on the Raduvej with howling distortion, paralysing comms and
navigation, crippling sensors.
‘That’s one of ours. Heavyweight Imperial EW equipment.’ Rahandravell reported.
‘If we could stop the rebs raiding our dustbins, this war would be over in a month.’ Olleyri grumbled, thinking and
bitching at the same time. What were they doing that blindness could serve?
Making it look like they were covering a retreat‑ while they were aiming for an Imperial scalp to hang on their
Raduvej would press on, doctrine said so. She would send her fighter wing after the jamming, and they were

Somewhere in the haze, the frigate‑carrier’s fighters were tangling with whatever the Rebels had put up; they
could hear bursts of com chatter, rebel and Imperial, and it sounded as if the Rebels were winning.
Undisciplined babble, first names, nicknames, kill claims. Then a pair of X‑wings cut across the formation’s nose.
Epsilon had no shot; Aron broke into a climbing turn, Franjia into a dive, banking to catch the Rebs as they went
by‑ if Alpha left anything of them.
The rebels reacted fast; one of them turned along the formation, firewalled his engines, and raced into the haze
with a cone of green light snapping at his heels.
The other tried to sideslip and twist under, Olleyri caught him and crippled him with a snapshot quad, rolled onto
his tail and finished him. Alpha Two ordered third flight to chase the fleeing rebel scout; they went to full throttle
and peeled off after the X‑wing.
Ten seconds later two proton torpedoes came out of the scrambling, followed by a flare that showed through.
Epsilon scattered to avoid the torps; the rebel had deadfired them back down his line of flight, trying to catch one
of the Avengers, missed. They got him.

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‘And he wants to make me ask you for an explanation.’ Aron said to Franjia.
‘It covers a small slice of sky. We don’t need to get close, we need to surround it, but the easiest way to do that
‘Get close.’ Aron finished her sentence.
‘First pass, target the jammer. Alpha strafe, Epsilon torps.’ Olleyri ordered.

Epsilon’s three flights were supposed to spread out into a triangle, one towards and two away from the enemy;
Alpha would do the same in reverse, the two Avenger flights forward and flanking, the Defenders above and
behind, ready to react.
The Rebel jamming seemed to be affecting their own systems; both sides got an unpleasant surprise. For the
rebel, two squadrons of Imperial heavy fighters appearing at point blank. For the Imperials, the carrier’s close
escort. It was the Nebulon‑ B frigate.
The Avengers broke and evaded, twisting and dancing across the sky; the Starwings couldn’t be that drastic. They
needed to keep sensor spots on it to get a torpedo lock. They could pitch and yaw, but not much more.
‘With me, on my target.’ Olleyri ordered, the Defenders peeled off, dived under Aron’s flight and raced ahead, the
Avengers followed him.
He was aiming for the main sensor array; when the frigate got it’s act together, it would start group‑ firing,
directing all it’s guns against one target at a time, swamping them in fire‑ two seconds a fighter, if that. Knocking
out central sensors would at least paralyse central fire control.

The Starwings were bucketing through streamers of red light; if there was one thing Aron knew about the
Starwing, it was how to throw it around.
He spiralled right‑ Two went the other way‑ faked reversing the roll, the rebel predictors shot well ahead of him,
he twisted inside one line of fire, rolling and pulling up; had to slam the stick forward to get out of the way of
Epsilon Four who had swung wide.
Epsilon were all doing the same; jinking and weaving‑ there were hits; one of the turbolasers put a bolt into
Eleven, their shields were good but not quite that good. He fireballed.
Three took one of the defence lasers and lost shields, Six got tingled‑ then the Rebels realised they should be
worrying more about Alpha squadron.

Olleyri went in suicidally close, trusting to his fighter’s agility to avoid being shot‑ and the shields to take the
blast of his own weapons. He and the rest of Lead flight were carrying torpedoes; he ripple‑ fired them all, as fast
as his launchers could kick them out, and the others took his example.
Against a large target, it wouldn’t have been enough. The continuous ripple of scarlet fireballs that kicked the
frigate to one side and blasted a hole in her shields wouldn’t have worried a Carrack, even, but Nebulons were
lighter than that. Fighter pilots on every side loathed the things; and payback was sweet.
The four Defenders skid turned, soaring through the rolling blast wave, shields scintillating, and lanced streams of
green and blue laser and ion fire through the local flaw in the Nebulon’s shields. The shell of the sensor unit
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The Avengers followed, swarming around the base of the Nebulon’s fin, strobing ripples of laser fire into it,
looking for the shield generator to turn a temporary breach into a permanent one.
The rebels were shooting at random now, defence turrets on local control; they were good at that, broke the
shields on two Avengers, maimed a third, but the turbolasers were missing, scattering wild.
Not enough, not fast enough, not accurate enough. The Defenders were blunting vector, coming back for another
run. Green blazes marched up the fin, smothering the turrets, reaching in, finding and smashing the generator.

Olleyri switched to ions, ordered his flight to do the same. Killing a capship was never simple. Disrupt it, strafe off
the turrets, then try and smash engines and hyperdrive, stop it getting away.
Blasting a warship apart with fighter lasers was long, slow work, usually long enough for relief to arrive for one
side or the other.
The frigate knew this as well as they did. It called for fighter support.

Epsilon‑ less one‑ were lining up for their own torpedo run. If anything, the huge sector jammer made it easier to
lock on to the merchant carrier, its normal defences were compromised to fit it.
Aron‑ everybody‑ were constantly weaving, trying to avoid setting up a pattern; it’s guns were sparking, medium
antiship pieces as well.
‘Four on, then break off for another pass.’ Franjia advised.
The rebels were shooting like novice wegsphere players; all chasing the ball. Whatever seemed the easiest target,
they would dogpile on‑ and that fighter went from partial to full evasive.
It was good tactics, by accident, but shoddy shooting. Either their predictors weren’t working or their gunners
weren’t listening.

The Starwings showed them how it was supposed to be done. Lock on to the ship, twitch the pointer on to the
subsystem, squeeze off a torp‑ break off as the gunners decided to play with you.
Burn back to get more time, accelerate in again‑throw them off. Another torpedo.
Blast of laserfire to catch their eye, sucker them into going for you rather than someone more vulnerable‑ then
curse your own stupidity as half your shields vanished in a haze of defence lasers and the stars blurred by as you
frantically tried to dodge anything bigger.
Snapshoot the last two torpedoes, and accelerate to safety beyond effective gun range.

Aron broke off, shunted his shields to face the freighter, most of his flight followed.
Epsilon Four was in trouble. Three was floating backwards, trying to cover him, spraying laser fire at the rebel
turrets‑ Four’s engines were shredded, a laser hit had blown one out entirely and sent shrapnel through the other.
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Four ejected, manually and, by the book, too soon; in fact, barely in time. The fighter took a turbolaser hit and
evaporated, the pilot was out and floating, for what good it would do. They needed to win to get rescue sleds to
the area.
Forty‑four torpedoes turned out to be enough. The dorsal shield around the jammer blew out, lightning arcs
crackling between the fragments of debris, the jammer took a direct hit; the distortions stopped, and they got a
good look at the entire battlefield.

Raduvej was closing on the iceball with the rebel base; two flights of TIE bombers were orbiting it, there were a
couple of individual, scattered TIE fighters, and that was it.
Four or five of the V‑wings were gone, about the same in T‑wings, but most of the red‑ blipped fighters were still
there. Not good.
The base was empty; no jammers, no power source, no defence turrets, no anything. At best, the mission was a
bust. The missing third rebel capital ship was about to do it’s best to turn it into a disaster.
It was a freak; probably a one off. The engine bank looked freighter‑ based and running very, very hot; the outline
of the ship‑ light plating, barely enough to carry a shield and mostly there for the look of the thing‑ was based on
the Alliance phoenix symbol.
The only thing that stopped Epsilon laughing was the radiation it was putting out. Missile targeters‑ twenty of

Alpha one, Epsilon one. What do we do‑ support the carrier?’ Aron called to Olleyri, urgent.
Raduvej was rolling to bring her guns to bear, activating her own jammers; good idea in principle‑ kill the rebel
before it could get it’s shots off.
Alpha could chase down the missiles, they were closer to the Rebels than they were to the Imperial light carrier.
Doctrine said losing unit for unit with the Rebels was good business for the many‑times larger Imperial fleet.
Ignore it and stay on target, trade the Neutron Star for the Demolisher.

‘Black Prince, Black Prince this is Alpha One, we need support, send Beta, Gamma, Delta urgent.’ Olleyri spun
round to face the rebel strikeship and firewalled his engines.
Twisting and rolling to clear the Nebulon’s zone of fire as they went, he invented his excuse on the way. This was
a first time; if the rebels got away with it, they would try it again.
That flying abomination‑ they must have got the missiles from the same place they got the jammer, from an
imperial navy scrapyard. They looked stripped off a Victory‑I, and that was an awful lot of firepower in a small,
cheap package. Perfect terrorist‑mobile.

‘With me.’ Olleyri called Epsilon; they couldn’t arrive in time to do anything about the missiles, but they could kill
the strikeship.
‘Five, situation;’ Aron called her, tone dripping in sarcasm. ‘We have two damaged but still shooting rebel
warships behind us, one assassin ahead of us, and around three squadrons of rebel fighters on an intercept
course.’ Said while lining up and accelerating towards the strikeship. 54/263
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‘What does bomber doctrine suggest we do now?’

She laughed, briefly. ‘This falls into the part of the manual titled “…or die trying.” Seriously, missile engagement.
Torpedoes you aren’t going to get far enough to use if the rebel fighters jump you‑ may as well use them on the
fighters. I suggest the T‑wings, they’ll be the most trouble once they get close.’

The turbolasers would carry far further than they could be aimed on small, fast targets; the rebel ships were still
firing at them, blind grid patterns.
Franjia banked her flight round to a direct line between the Nebulon and the rebel T‑wings; Aron realised, and
followed her round. Long, shallow banks worked best to take them out of the patterns, one group of shot flew
past them and crashed into two T‑wings.
Which was good, but the last salvo put one bolt into Epsilon Eight. The shield unit held this one back for a fraction
of a second‑ long enough to eject. Three fighters down. Krutz. The Nebulon and the Neutron Star lumbered round
after them. It would be funny if it wasn’t so dangerous.

The X‑wings had torpedoes to shoot back at them. Acceptable risk.

Twelve rounds each, four gone. Aron picked one of the T‑wings, squadron leader by the look of it‑ his private
game‑ and lobbed a torpedo; switched target to his wingman and fired another. Stop them covering each other.
Most of his pilots did the same; the nine remaining X‑wings probably meant to lob a torpedo at each of them, but
in practise they pointed and pulled the trigger. Aron got three; Franjia got two.
Switch to lasers, power to forward shields, set lasers to arghohmygodskeepitaway‑ low power maximum rate.
‘Squadron defence order, and try not to hit our own torpedoes.’ Aron ordered, lining up on one of the incoming
and spitting a green hose of fire at it.

Those who weren’t looking at hot proton death shot at the torps of those who were. Carefully; trying not to
sideswipe each other.
Aron was actually a very good shot, when his heart rate‑ currently somewhere around the low two hundreds‑
didn’t make his hand shake on the stick. Franjia was an excellent shot. She nailed her pair comfortably.
Aron didn’t. He got the first easily and at long range, but sprayed shot all over the sky trying to pin down the
second. By the time he did connect, the third was too close.
Couldn’t out‑ turn it, not normally‑ he hammered it with a maximum intensity active sensor pulse and shoved the
flightstick hard right at the last possible moment; blinded, it lost touch, went for where it guessed he was, and
slid under his fighter’s belly, tail flare close enough to tickle the shields.

On the other side of the balance, one torp hit wouldn’t kill a Starwing with shields doubled forward‑ Six proved
that, it happened to him‑ but it would slag a T‑wing.
They shot at their torpedoes; single heavy guns with poor rate of fire. Dodged; agile as they were, not enough to
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They could have done better, should have, but Epsilon weren’t complaining. Eight hits. Eight less T‑wings to worry
about, and the rest scattered badly enough to buy time. Aron gave the target order.
‘Five, take your flight after the X‑wings. Nine, the V‑wings, then whatever’s spare. Good hunting, and we must be

Olleyri picked his moment; ‘C flight, double back and deal with those T‑ wings.’ Let the rebels be, just long
enough to get them looking the other way.
The rebel was letting the Raduvej turn on it; because that exposed their hangar bay. Fire solution.
Twenty heavy bombardment missiles streaked out of their launch cradles and accelerated towards the frigate.
Olleyri’s defenders shot past the strikeship, trying to match speed and thrust with the missiles.
Raduvej spurted green light, antiship weapons on the strikeship‑ Olleyri’s fighters had to dance out of the way.
It was maneuvering and returning fire from two turbolasers, dorsal and ventral turrets, slow and heavy‑ bigger
than it really had the power to use, but it was shooting better than the frigate, scoring hits that weren’t intended
to kill but to weaken the shields. That would be enough.
The missiles had enough wit to realise they were being targeted. They began to jink, weaving sharp, drastic
evasive patterns‑ even with four Defenders on their tail, not easy kills.
They only had to point on and the heavy missiles would dart away like touched salmon. It was real dogfighting
work. Olleyri and Alpha Three got two each, but it took them three quarters the distance to do it‑ follow the
missiles in too far, and the Defenders would join them impacting on the frigate.
Kriff, Olleyri thought, half of them are still going to hit‑ ‘Break off, nothing more we can do.’

Last ditch defence salvos caught another two‑ eight impacted. The forward shields shimmered, bubbled, blew out,
and the last two missiles hit bare metal, one of them detonated inside the hangar bay.
It wasn’t a kill, but it was easily within turbolasing distance of one. The forward prongs were glowing white‑ hot
and the main body of the ship had dimmed to orange‑ red after the fireball cleared, it was not likely anyone
forward of main engineering had survived.
More than half the crew were cremated, and the forward defences and weapons were down.

The T‑wings tried to accelerate past the Starwings to come round after them; Aron had picked a T‑wing, lined up
on it, lobbed a couple of ion bolts at it‑ then gone into a full power side drift and caught the wingman. Cyclic, all
four cannon.
Ion and lasers hammered at the light fighter, turned it into a crackling fireball. There was another blast as Three
made a kill on the approach, and then the T‑wings were strafing past them and they were swinging round into the
Two banked, Aron delayed a second, one of the T‑wings lined up on him, he sideslipped on full throttle, started to
tumble. Two shot at the T‑ wing and missed, Aron recovered.
Two shot past him with a T‑wing lining up on his Starwing’s tail, Aron rolled round after it, dipped to clear two
from the line of fire, started to shoot, had a red spark smash into his shields. 56/263
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Flip of the fire switch to grouped guns, a single shot that crippled the T‑wing‑ Two could finish him‑ and break
before the rebel could bring his fire back on target.
The rebel rolled with him, trying to turn inside each other. Aron had an unfair advantage; the T‑ wing was fast and
agile, he was slow and agile. It overshot and desperately tried to dive and loop on to his tail, he took a snapshot,
missed, and let it go. No time.

One more green blip was missing. Six; he had lost shields to a torpedo, and fuselage to an X‑wing’s lasers. That
left two Starwings against seven X.
Out and drifting; the Starwing’s ejection system worked, most of the time. The V‑wings were outclassed and
scattering, back to the cover of the frigate‑ then the Avengers hit.
A flight of X turned to face them, streams of red and green laser fire crossed, one of the Avengers and three of the
X‑ wings went tumbling away blasted, the X‑ wings scattered.
‘Raduvej, are you still under command? Crowd the bastard, block his way to hyper so we can torpedo him.’ Olleyri
called the carrier, leading his flight back into the fighter melee.
‘Alpha, do what you can to cover the Starwings. Epsilon, we need your torpedoes. Stop playing with the rebs and
get back to work.’ Second and Third flights needed no further encouragement.
Two Starwings against four X‑wings was almost a fair fight. Five killed one, the Avengers got the other three.

One of the T‑wings made a suicide run on Aron; spitting fire at him, collision course.
Aron twisted, the Rebel pursued‑ last moment he slammed on full retros and the T‑wing sliced past his nose,
Aron pitched up after it and caught it in mid turn, finished it with another quad shot.
He was sliding round after another when a Defender danced in in front of him, rattled a long stream of fire into it
exploding it. Aron was about to shout at it when he realised it was the group captain.

Suddenly there were a lot less Rebels around. Eight surviving Starwings‑ no, seven. Locking on to the phoenix‑
shaped rebel strikeboat was almost trivially easy.
It was shooting into the Raduvej, all it was achieving was making the wreckage twitch; even Aron managed to
target it easily, and all seven rippled off their remaining torpedoes.
The Rebel was too eager for the kill; hung around too long. It’s shields were thin, it’s structure thinner‑ the
barrage of torpedoes cut into it, blasted the defences down, ripped the hull apart. The engines exploded. No
‘It’s got no onboard magazines, it must have used cradle launchers, that’s why it was working with a carrier.’
Franjia suggested.
‘So if we hit the Neutron Star really hard, it should go boom? What a time to be out of torpedoes.’

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‘And what a time to be reinforced.’ Aron said, wanting to do the job himself but knowing it was impossible. He
sagged with relief. Imperial pilot’s flight suits were very good at soaking up sweat.
‘You’d be willing to charge two rebel cap ships with half a squadron of mostly shield depleted fighters? I suppose
it looks good on the record.’ Franjia replied, sounding scornful but not meaning it.

Counting odds‑ a carrier, an escort and a handful of fighters against two battered and three fresh Imperial fighter
squadrons‑ it wasn’t a winning fight for the Rebels any more.
Neither of them were badly enough damaged to be held from running away, and Epsilon were not sorry to see
them go.
‘Tell me the truth.’ Aron called to Franjia. ‘The real dirty secret of the bomber trade is just how often the plan
goes to blazes and it turns into an incoherent, demented scramble, isn’t it?’
‘You worked it out; perhaps there’s hope for you yet.’ Franjia said, just as flippant. More seriously‑ ‘Was this a
victory or not?’
‘Well,’ Aron said, thinking about it, ‘we did a lot of damage. For the squadron‑ probably. For the Empire‑ doubt

‘What kept you?’ Olleyri asked Beta One.

‘We have a situation back at the ship as well. Captain wasn’t sure it was safe to let us go.’
‘Wonderful. Now we get to sit here and watch that cool‑‘ the Raduvej‑ ‘and hope we have a mothership to go back
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2006­12­19 06:10am

Ch 6

The Quarters alarm sounded, surprising some.

‘Urrrgh.’ Aldrem staggered to his feet.
‘Are you sure you can do this?’ Suluur asked him.
‘No, but I’m zorched if I’m going to let someone else make a mess of my turret.’
Fendon and Suluur held him up as they went up the companionway to the command compartment. ‘If he wants to
make a fool of himself, least we can do is help.’ Suluur decided.
They practically poured him into the gunlayer’s chair, blanket still draped around his shoulders. Dizzy as he was,
he went through the drill of activating the turret perfectly, the hand holding a chillpak to his forehead didn’t slow
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‘OK, what have we got?’

‘All hands, this is the Captain. We have one of our strike cruisers, a recon‑line conversion, being pursued by a
Rebel fast frigate. Apparently. I suspect both ships are in rebel hands, they are attempting to bluff their way to
close quarters and use either heavy ion cannon or mag pulse mines on us, disable and hijack the tender. Both of
them are flying evasive, and the Strike Cruiser is showing Imperial ID codes. Override that. Our margin, to hit them
before they hit us, is thin.
We will be manoeuvring as radically as we can manage‑ last second evade and counterfire. I’ll give the fire call.’
‘Captain, the Lancer is moving this way. It says it wants to offer support.’ That was Lieutenant‑Commander
Rythanor, chief sensor officer.
‘Shandon, has it been out of sight of either us or the system defence for any length of time?’
‘No, but give me a moment…’ he moved to one of the consoles in the pit, looked up the confidential reports.
‘Sector fleet has a low estimate of their reliability.’
‘This used to be a peaceful sector, things well under control. I think sector fleet got complacent, just about the
same time as the rebs realised they were losing and threw in more forces to try to hold on to it. Bad combination.’
Lennart shook his head.
‘Either the captain’s about to change sides, or he’s dumb enough to bring a clutch of fighter‑class weapons to a
capital duel. Either way, it bears watching.’
‘Or you could be overanalysing again.’ Brenn suggested.
‘You’re right.’ Lennart admitted. ‘I’m starting to come down with Master Plan Syndrome. I wonder who is on the
other side, though. Certainly Republic if not Imperial Starfleet trained.’

‘Not much chance of taking him alive to ask.’ Commander Wathavrah‑ Guns‑ gave his opinion. ‘Fulgur and most
of the recon conversions we’ve seen have been too volatile for their own good.’ The gunnery officer would go
down to fire direction control when trouble started.
‘The only Ion weapons we have available belong to the fighter wing.’ he added.
‘Which makes the Lancer’s involvement interesting. How do we put her to the proof? Shandon?’
‘No ID code that they don’t have. I’ll have one of the duty stations monitor her.’ The sensor officer said. He was
medium height and had a share of jerboa in his makeup, quiverish, darting, suddenly looking at things, always
listening; it was one of the occupational hazards. Some devoted so much of their brain to the job that they had
virtually no common sense outside it; like him, like the ship’s chief medical officer.
‘Flight Control? Get the wing in their racks, but hold them back until I give the word. Get the Legion’s transports
ready to fly, as well. Most of them are ion capable, if we can strip the shielding off that ought to work.’
The ship was at full combat readiness in two minutes; jamming suite up and in dampener mode ‑ hide the fact
that the Black Prince was as ready as she was.

Aldrem was leaning back in the fire control chair, eyes closed, listening to the hum of the turret around him;
Fendon was watching him, worried. 59/263
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‘Do you know anything about the Fulgurs?’ Suluur asked him, for effect.
‘Not apart from the captain’s instructions.’
‘They were pirate‑hunters in the old Republic navy; as fast as most of our fighters, they could easily take a
Corvette or an armed merchant apart ‑ but they went out of fashion in the Clone Wars, no good against their own
There are still a few of them doing recon. They’re about right for the Rebellion ‑ I’d expect them to try harder to
get more of them.’

‘Strafing a star destroyer? Are they cracked, or is it us?’ Aldrem said, slowly, eyes still closed.
‘Good. I thought we’d have to fire on central.’ Suluur said. ‘Seriously, Pel, get Gendrik or Hruthhal in here, post
your brain as an Op‑Def.’ They were the chiefs of the sub‑assembly crews.
‘I can’t, it’s not Ulthsday morning.’ Usually the morning after the night before. ‘This is actually about all I feel fit to
do.’ Still without looking, ‘Do we start tracking yet?’
‘No.’ The turret had a quasi‑autoaim system, which could be run locally or from Central Fire Direction; the target’s
course was programmed into it, and it automatically tracked to follow. Setting that up and anticipating the target’s
movements was all the gunlayer had to do, and it was a very big ‘all’.

There were sparks of turbolaser fire; the Strike Cruiser was sliding on the rim of the Fulgur’s accurate firing range;
just out of reach, occasionally getting stung by a light turbolaser bolt. It’s shields were still in suspiciously good
The Lancer edged closer; suspiciously unshot‑at. Stunting, weaving‑ the strike cruiser, nearly overrun, flipped end
for end, burned back past the Fulgur, crossed its wake; the Fulgur was round on it in a flash, raked it as it went
‘Good thing about this is, we’re getting a thorough picture of both ships. No hidden angles.’ Rythanor said.
‘Except the inside. If you could prove to me that the SC is in rebel hands, I’d be much happier about shooting her.’
Lennart stated.
‘I think I can.’ Rythanor replied, suppressing the impulse to ask; suppose I told you I couldn’t? ‘Engine
temperature. The rebels run hotter than we do, and although strike cruisers vary anyway, that‑‘ selecting the best
image‑ ‘is at the upper end of the spectrum.’
‘That fits the tactics.’ He would have done it anyway, on his estimate of how it was being flown.

‘Timing and bearing?’ Wathavrah asked.

Brenn replied. ‘They’re shedding a lot of V, they’ll overfly us at seven hundred KPS near as I can estimate. Drop the
mines, retro‑burn, move in and launch boarding teams, ten minute op if they’re lucky.’
‘When will they be in predictor range?’ Wathavrah asked him; he had a rough guess of his own but the nav
computers should be accurate to more than five seconds. They had been in gun range from the moment of
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That had been one of the main reasons for the switch to the Imperator‑II’s gun fit; with more and faster‑ cycling
heavy guns, it could lay down a barrage at more than twice the effective range of the Imperator‑I.
‘Doesn’t matter. We open fire at three thousand.’ Lennart stated.
‘Kriffing near flash hazard.’ Wathavrah pointed out; the big guns had a minimum range of two thousand, flare
distance from a detonating HTL bolt.
‘How many shots do you expect to need? We kill one, blow the shields off the other for the transports to deal with,
then stand by to turn on the Lancer if our suspicions are well founded.’ Lennart decided.
‘Turning to bear?’ Wathavrah asked; Lennart nodded.
‘One simultaneous salvo into the prime target, ripple from the LTL’s into the secondary.’ Guns decided.
‘Set your fire plan up accordingly.’

Wathavrah left the bridge to go down to Fire Direction; Lennart went to the bridge gunnery monitoring station,
leaned over the operator’s shoulder.
‘Right, we have the data.’ Suluur told his turretmates. ‘Stang. Have you ever rammed a blaster’s muzzle into
someone’s gut, stood so close you could feel their breath, then pulled the trigger?’
‘What have I told you about getting into bar room fights?’ Aldrem said, shaking himself awake. ‘Point blank?’
‘Full power, three thousand.’ Dangerous; it was only blow‑through that had saved Aldrem from baking most of
the fighter wing with the shock from shooting the YT. If had been solid enough for the entire bolt to burst on, he
would have scored about fifty fighter kills and a spot on the executioner’s ‘to do’ list.
‘I see what you mean, when do we start tracking?’
‘At eight thousand, roll to bear, line up, simultaneous salvo.’ Suluur said. Worried about Aldrem’s manic grin.

‘Bow shocks. Incoming rebel starfighters.’

‘Damn them and their timing.’ Lennart grumbled. ‘Point defence batteries hold, track passive, open fire with the
main salvo‑ if they know we’re shamming, they’re playing it very cool.’
‘Eleven thousand.’ Both Rebel ships were making their final approach on the port quarter of the Black Prince,
slightly above mid‑ level, and far enough apart. The Golan was splashing fire in the direction of the Fulgur‑ it was
sidestepping it almost contemptuously.
Revealingly, both their shuttle bays were open.
‘Evasion burn, bring Alpha to bear, attack as planned.’ Lennart demanded.

Two thousand ‘g’ was all Black Prince could manage at the moment. It was more than enough. The gantries
shattered and were brushed aside.
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into which all her weapons could fire. Main and secondary targeters flooded them with light.
The Strike Cruiser reacted slightly faster than the Fulgur, breaking right, trying to escape behind the Destroyer;
she was the primary target.

Fire Direction actually pulled the trigger. All the guns were pointed on, charged and ready, local control had
handed over to central; sixty light turbolasers added their fire to the main battery.
It was instant, it was unexpected, it was devastating. For a moment the Strike Cruiser burned bright enough to
outshine the sun. Glare dampers protected the gun crews. Aldrem looked down instead, at the hull blazing in
reflected turbolaser light.
There were a few hundred thousand people on Ghorn III who would need replacement eyes, and a few more who
would need replacement homes‑ what of the shockwave reached the upper atmosphere would kick off
tremendous weather effects.

That firepower was endurable, over time; at once, it would cleave through the shielding of far larger craft than a
mere Strike Cruiser‑ a frigate by the old scale in any case, and now a nothing, a veil of hot gas that would create
spectacular auroral displays when it hit the planet. It just tickled the Destroyer’s shields.
‘Heavies hold fire, Light turbolasers pursue the Fulgur, launch fighters and transports.’ Lennart ordered, ignoring
the shout of ‘Yippee‑ki‑yay‑yahoo’ from somewhere behind him in the sensor pit, and trying to control his own
hungry grin.
The Fulgur dropped its bomb, and missed wide thanks to its own last second power slide; the blast from the mag
pulse bomb was a mere tickle, the surge dampers overrode it at once. ‘The Lancer?’
‘Starting to bear away.’
‘Order it to close with and support the fighter wing, Fighter Direction‑ warn the pilots that it’s loyalty is
questionable. Guns, have that thing tracked by the main turrets.’

‘What? Follow but don’t shoot ‑ is it on our side or not?’ Aldrem was thoroughly confused.
Suluur glared at Fendon, looked at his board. He was trying to signal with his eyebrows. It would have worked on
one of his brothers. Fendon took a while to get it. He powered down the guns, just in case the gunlayer’s finger
‘Give me a moment…fire direction says, maybe. The way it’s flying, it’s captain must be a hero, an idiot or a
traitor.’ Suluur said.
‘Two out of three says shoot it.’
‘I’ll remind you of that next time we’re on Defaulters.’

The Fulgur needed to get to random shot range so it could initiate its hyperdrive; the clear run it required would
be suicide if it was still inside accurate prediction. They couldn’t miss it if it flew dumb. That meant it had to stunt
like mad to get clear, and meant the fighters had a chance to catch it. It also meant the Fulgur would do
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the Fulgur maneuvered to cross their path. Doctrine was clear; the fighters scattered.
The experimentals were back protecting the Black Prince; one squadron each of Bombers and Interceptors was
with and escorting the twelve transports.

The Rebel fighters were a heavy hit squad; squadron of B‑wings, squadron of X‑ wings. They dropped out of
hyper expecting to find an ionised Imperator and Golan; to have to paralyse the fleet tender then have the two
ships drop troops on it while they chewed the destroyer and platform up with heavy rockets. Half that plan might
still work.
The Sahallare had agreed to hold still as bait; that job was over, and it turned and began to run for hyperspace.
The Rebel fighters hesitated, picking their target; their flagship was in full evasion, chased by an Imperator. That
simplified their choices. They ignored the tender, outran the Golan, closed on the Black Prince and her two
squadrons of escort fighters.
The Lancer moved to intercept them. It carried an impressive array of fast‑tracking, fast‑firing anti fighter
weapons; its shields had been optimised for rapid recharge, saved the power needed for that by being thin to start
with. Dangerously lethal, dangerously vulnerable; the X‑wings went for her.
‘Hero and idiot, then.’ Brenn decided.
‘Two objectives safely met…She won’t take rocket fire well, not well at all. What support do you think we can offer,
consistent with the success of the objective?’ Lennart knew the official answer.
Brenn failed to improve on it. ‘Officially, none, this is exactly what Lancers are for, nearly their ideal deployment.
We could pull Eta back, but vector, timing, I wouldn’t expect them to be there in time to matter. Mu, Nu?’
‘Against a squadron of B wings? We need the Lancer to cover them, not the other way around.’

The twelve X‑wings swirled around the Lancer; it’s guns slashing green lines of light out at them, their quads
sending pulses of crimson in.
They were stunting for all they were worth; they could afford to be drastic, it was a much bigger, easier target.
They were throwing their fighters around like hummingbirds, darting in every direction, snapshooting at the
Lancer whenever it swam across their gunsights. They weren’t aiming to kill, not yet, but to paralyse and tie up;
stop it shooting at the B‑wings. Any actual damage was a bonus.
The two squadrons of Imperial oddities peeled off to confront the Rebel bomb element; hard to say whether they
or the Rebs were more nervous.

‘Central, the rebel fighters are being dumb. Let us shoot them.’ Aldrem commed fire direction central. No reply.
Wisely. Suluur discreetly blocked the com channel.
The Ravagers didn’t need to fly evasively; they had a full‑blown quad laser cannon in a second eyeball module
piggybacked on the first. The kick from a grouped shot sent them nearly out of control anyway. They and the B‑
wings hit head on, the Ravagers jouncing across the sky, the B‑wings in their trademark slow, controlled arcs; no
B‑wing casualties, two Ravagers splattered.
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certain but very slow. B‑wings were so few, it was justified‑ and the wing knew, when the defence grid looked at
something and said ‘mine’, to get out of the way.

The rebel fighters were scrambling to hide behind the imperial fighters; the sort of furball that gave their technical
deficients at least half a chance.
The Marauders were entering the fight now; their guns had been copied from a wreck dug up in a basement on
Coruscant. The theory was that it had augured in, and afterwards they had just plated over the hole and put up a
new towerblock. They carried four of what were officially called Variable Choke Space Combat Arc Saturation
Blasters, but which everyone spoke of as laser shotguns. A real dogfighter’s weapon, short ranged but accurate
and, with a narrow focus, highly lethal. They were a great idea for point defence, and would go far, if the lumps of
dreck they were strapped to didn’t sink the project first.

They would take losses, but that situation was under control. Forward, the light turbolasers in the trench were
standing down for want of a mission ‑ the Fulgur’s shielding was shredded. She had outrun her fighter cover, and
what weapons she could bring to bear were shooting at the transports.
‘Send the Interceptors‑ both units‑ in to strafe the turrets.’ Lennart ordered, terse.
It achieved little, but it bought time; time for a long searching blue cone of ion fire, the collective output of twelve
transports, to thrash around the sky, wash over the Fulgur twice before it actually hit and settled. Fighter ion
cannon took a lot of time and shot to paralyse a ship; they managed it, just.

Six Stormtrooper Transports, six Assault Transports; they dispersed to points about the ship, maintenance and
access airlocks, hardpatches. One STR went for the Fulgur’s shuttle bay; one went for the softest available spot ‑
the lifepods below the bridge in the small, early‑KDY tower.
It opened the iris hatch to the boarding lock, thirty metres clear; six heavy rifles spat strings of burgundy‑red
blaster bolts into the lifepod cover, chewed through it, blasted the lifepod apart, shredded a usable gap in the
inner retaining hatch.
Pressure curtains, locally and independently powered, came back on; but their way into the ship was open.
Team Omega‑17‑Blue ditched the anti‑materiel rifles; no use for sniper weapons inside a ship. They would be the
second squad in. The Transport tractored itself in, locked on. Go.
Speed was essential; there would be a minimal security detail on the bridge, most of them would be around the
shuttle bay ‑ where they expected to board from, not be boarded. Get in, secure it.
Team FD26 was first ‑ shooting themselves in, blasting likely cover points, paving their way with clouds of
fragments shot off the walls. Into the main corridor below the bridge, computer centre, ready and conference
rooms. Fire element Omega‑17‑Blue‑Gimel went to secure the computer centre; Beth reinforced FD25 setting up
a perimeter, preparing to defend their gains against ship’s security. Aleph led FD24 and 26 towards the bridge.

The emergency stairwell was defended by a handful of bridge crew, mostly with pistols, and four proper rebel
soldiers; FD26 ran in to the base of the stairwell, shot at as they deployed, spraying fire back on the move,
fragments off a wall knocked one down, a direct hit in the head dropped another; two of the rebels leaped up,
screaming, one more collapsed forward, shredded by splinters from the bulkhead.
Aleph picked their moment; under cover of the line team’s fire, single aimed shots. Each of the four rebel soldiers.
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Grenade; FD268 threw himself on it, Aleph‑2 and 3 lobbed grenades of their own up the stairwell on to the
bridge. Some units had almost a cult of versatility going on; any job, a blaster is the answer. The 276th
(provisional 721st) legion took whatever advantages they could get.
Screams and a loud ‘glorp’, brilliant, eye‑ bruising flash; a ‘slacker’ ‑ sound, light, and confusion ‑ what an earlier
age knew as a flashbang ‑ and an expanding‑foam capture grenade.

Team‑26 held position, 24 raced up the stairwell behind Aleph, in the direction of the ominous ‘vommm’ sound,
bursting through and shooting down what was left in the stairwell.
The bridge was a double crescent layout of consoles facing the main window panel, the grenades had landed
between the rows of consoles; only four people were both free of the glop and not in shock. One of them was
holding an emerald‑ green lightsabre.
24 raised their blasters ‑ a combined volley would surely do ‑ Aleph waved them back. He was their meat.
The other three took cover and shot at 24, who laid covering fire and moved forward through the consoles; all,
really, bystanders.
Aleph moved forwards around the Jedi, Aleph 2 announced; ‘my turn’. Technically, he was right, Aleph‑3
The young, grey‑robed force user looked at them in astonishment, even more so when Aleph‑2 dropped his
carbine, drew a vibro‑rapier and a stick.
Hand to hand with‑? Ah. Materials technology scores again. The blunt rod gleamed, revealing itself to be of sabre‑
resistant matter. A phrik stick.
The Jedi tried a cheap kill, to start with; twisting lunge in on the rapier side ‑ instantly pulled back, sabre caught
and flicked away with the rod, step in and rapid up‑and‑under gutting shot for a riposte; lightsabre flashed down
after the rapier, it had inertia and the sabre didn’t ‑ Aleph‑2 jumped back, the rebel lunged in again, downward
and outward parry‑ the lightsabre a centimetre clear of white armour.
High diagonal‑downward stab, the Jedi had to twist awkwardly to get his sabre round‑ Aleph‑2 drew the rapier
back and reached forward cracking the Jedi on the wrist with the stick. Nearly enough to make him drop the
lightsabre, not quite; enough to put him off balance ‑ the Jedi leapt back, force assisted, too fast for anything
more than a raking, grazing touch. Grey cloth fluttered to the ground, but no kill.
‘Yes,’ one of the spectating stormtroopers said ‑ a woman’s voice? ‑ ‘we are playing with you. We’ve been hunting
your kind for twenty years. Your tools, your techniques, your training, your tricks ‑ an open Holocron.’
Aleph‑2 leapt up on to the next console to the Jedi; a green ampersand in the air, flashing blade blocked once,
twice, thrice. A dextrous probe with the rapier, curling round the lightsabre, a block in the wrong direction; their
very weightlessness could be used against them.
The rapier darted in, the lightsabre slashed out at it a fraction too slow, the rod seemed to make the same move;
reaction, counter‑reaction ‑ the Jedi pushed the rod aside, and the rapier flickered in to slash at his forearm,
laying it open.

‘Your calm serenity is going to kill you.’ Aleph‑3 taunted him. ‘Do you have the time to seal your wound? Do you
have the skill to do that, and not take another?’ The lightsabre hand drooped; the Jedi tried to transfer it from
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he leapt back ‑ but managed to split the Jedi’s foot open, with the tip of the rapier’s blade.
‘You need to kill us.’ Aleph 3 said, calmly, poised. ‘Your only way out is to wade in blood ‑ you can’t do that with
a still heart.’ The Jedi lashed out, telekinetically, at her; she slammed into one of the monitors, it came off worse,
she pulled herself out of the tangle and brushed shards of duraplast off.
Now Aleph 2 was just playing with him; darting in, rapier behaving more like a blade of light than sabre ‑ any well
balanced blade can move too fast for the human eye to follow, any competent swordsman exploit a gap in his
opponent’s defence faster than the human muscle reacts. The Force was a powerful advantage ‑ but not more
powerful than years of training and bloody experience with weapons ancient and modern, practical and absurd.
‘Hate. Hate is your only chance. Take the strength you need from it. Balance cannot triumph. Two, a minor organ
this time.’ The rapier came up to guard position, the sabre sliced out at it, the rapier tipped up out of the way, fell,
darted into the Jedi’s left shoulder.
The Jedi half‑turned and lashed out wildly; Two ducked under the blade, stepped inside his guard, headbutted the
Jedi breaking his nose. Aleph 3 shook her head in disapproval; Two improved on that by dropping down low and
lunging for the Jedi’s guts.
Under, the lightsabre dropped to block, flicker back and over. Straight to the liver.

The Jedi folded, writhing on the ground. ‘See what good the Light Side has done you?’ Aleph‑3 walked over to
him. ‘Last chance; surrender, and we gift‑wrap you and send you to Darth Sidious as a present.’
The poor fool started reciting the Jedi Code, in trembling voice; Two let him get as far as ‘there is no death‑‘
before slashing his throat open with the rapier.
‘Another one for the trophy cabinet.’ He said, picking up the lightsabre.
‘Where does the alliance find these ‑ these fools, these children?’ Aleph‑3 said, looking at the dead Jedi. He was
no more than twenty years old. ‘Don’t they know how long it takes to make a warrior? Don’t they train?’
‘It’s a big galaxy; it has room for a great many fools.’ Aleph‑1 stated the obvious, to them, and on command net;
‘Bridge secure.’

FD241 asked Aleph‑3; ‘Why didn’t you just blast him?’

‘Too easy.’ She shook her head. The fighting was basically over; command net reported the ship taken, a third of
the crew dead and the rest prisoner, no major internal damage, ready to scrub the phoenix off and rejoin the
Imperial Starfleet.
‘Sometimes, if we play with them, we can drive them mad.’ Aleph‑3 continued. ‘Less often, lately; he was one of
the new breed, all guts, no brains. Six months’ training, if that.’
FD241 looked shocked; that far on in stormtrooper training, you were still being taught to dig latrines. ‘Still, if we
wish for worthwhile opposition, we might get more than we bargain for.’
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Chapter 7

When all the to‑ing and fro‑ing was done, there were four ships hanging in space next to the Sahallare: a
destroyer and two frigates.
The Raduvej and the Fulgur fast frigate, named Caderath in Old Republic service and now provisionally renamed
Grey Princess, hung beside the destroyer. The Lancer, fore‑structure ravaged by rocket fire, was next to the
tender. The destroyer herself was rolled inverted, facing the planet.
There had been traffic: a Star Galleon under Strike Cruiser escort, to drop off the parts and fittings the tender
needed to recondition the Raduvej, and collect the prisoners. The escort cruiser had not been at all happy about
their newest kill splash ‑ as usual, the crew drew lots to see who got the priviledge of painting it on.
The Galleon had also carried fighter replacements, enough to rebuild the existing units to strength and replace
the squadrons they had given up on.

The two flight test squadrons had been badly mauled by the B‑wings. That was hardly believable. There were
some ‘junior aeronaut’ type fighters so light and so cheap they could be purchased mail order ‑ for instance, the
Zerflade Dart that made an embarrassingly large portion of Aron’s score. Even they could usually beat B‑wings. It
was the group captain’s decision, but the Captain’s ultimate responsibility; Olleyri met with Lennart to discuss it.
‘The numbers, I already know,’ Lennart told him, straight away. ‘Reasons and alternatives, I want.’
‘They’re not standard, and there’s a good reason for that. They’re fungus. I like having the experimentals around;
they give us room to improvise, a doctrinal flexibility that matters more than having a crap fighter squadron. We
need to keep some of them.’
Lennart agreed, broadly. Starfighter Force had a different set of mynocks in its helmet anyway. ‘Which do we do
‘You mean, save the pilots from?’ Olleyri pointed out. ‘The Marauders are less worthless, but that’s just the gun. A
fashion designer built those things, not a flight engineer, kriffing flying wings. The Ravagers might just be the
worst kitbash I’ve ever seen.’ He thought about it.
‘On balance, we lose the Marauders. Call the gun a success, the spaceframe a joke, test complete. The Ravagers
could work, with a gun that didn’t take up half the total mass of the TIE, and they might make something of
themselves in antiship.’
That was how elements of the fighter wing found themselves lined up on the main landing dock, mostly with
sidearms. ‘Testing to destruction’ the notification had called it. Mirannon had been asked very nicely, and had
agreed to raise the bay shields for the occasion. Epsilon were invited.
‘Are we really about to do what I think we are?’ Aron asked Franjia. He still resented having to look up to her, but
that was daft. Prejudice usually was, especially reverse prejudice. Off duty, she kept herself to herself, coldly
formal and more than a little distant; in a cockpit, even a simulated one, they worked well together.
‘We took losses to numerically superior fighter opposition, an antifighter escort and a light carrier‑ and gave
better than we got.’ His score was now twenty‑seven, hers thirty‑four.
Five of the fighters had gone, but only two of the pilots. ‘They were taken down by B‑wings; it doesn’t get more
embarrassing.’ There was already joking, shoving ‑ one pilot nearly had his face pushed through the pressure
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company or so of stormtroopers watching; they already looked amused.

The leader of the rout was a man in his undershirt and purple silk shorts, spiky hair, an expression that had given
up grip on sanity, and a heavy blaster pistol in one hand, a stein in the other. He looked up at the ceiling and
shouted ‘Pull!’
Somebody called back ‘Which end?’ ‑ but the ceiling drop chutes released a Marauder. At least, the stripped down
remains of one. Most of its jets gone, it was remote flown in a slow spiral down the bay, and Nu squadron’s
survivors and ground crew opened up on it, whooping and blasting for all they were worth.
‘They must really hate those things,’ Franjia said, joining in ‑ so did everybody else.
Aron shot at it as well, but he wasn’t as good, couldn’t pick out his shots from the hail of fire going in to it. ‘Why
are they so bad?’ he asked her.
‘Because those are so good.’ She pointed ‑ and had to shout over the crackle of massed blaster fire ‑ at the
Defenders, screened from this behind their layers of shelding. ‘They’re beautiful, but they’re the end of the line.
Sienar know they’ll never be able to top that, so they’re reaching; scrambling around for some way, any way, to
take the TIE series forward. They’ve come up with a lot of bad ideas trying ‑ count yourself lucky you missed the
Intruder fiasco.’ She winced, thinking about it. External missile racks, instant firepower but prone to cook off for
as near nothing as made no difference. Even the solar wind could touch them off, the survivors had said.
‘Our test flight are due to return to Sienar for redesign to get the cost down; another test with a new model in two,
three years perhaps. Until then, and maybe ever, that’s the largest unit of Defenders you’ll see in one place at one
‘How much?’ Aron asked, prepared for an absurdly big number.
‘Three hundred and eighty thou?’
'Worth it, though. The Marauders, we’re actually adding value to by reducing them to scrap.’

Both of them turned back to fire on the second hull being dropped down the chute. The shooting was wild, wild;
from pilots, on their own two feet, what could you expect? The stormtroops‑ there to keep order if the flyboys
started blasting each other, deliberately or more likely by accident ‑ were now expressing as much contempt as
silent, fixed masks could.
‘You think you could do better, eh?’ the purple shorts ‑ Nu One ‑ turned and shouted at the stormtroopers ‑ still
waving his blaster. The rest of Nu quickly dogpiled on him, before the stormtroopers could shoot him. He was in
no real danger; most of them had done civil support duty, they could recognise a drunken idiot when they saw
An order was passed over the comnet; one of the squads formed up, marched to the edge of the bay, took aim
and began controlled, timed fire ‑ placed shots as rapidly as they could be aimed.
Flight control made it harder for them, spinning and twisting the Marauder hull, but it didn’t help. There were
maybe seventy, eighty pilots there, hitting as often as the eight‑troopers‑plus‑sargeant.
A further order came down, from ship command this time; play up to it, make a bit of a show.

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worse for wear after having what was left of his squadron sit on him ‑ said.
‘Are you all right?’ Aron asked him.
‘Ah, the glory boy. The hero of the hour.’ Someone sensible had taken his gun away, but he was still holding the
‘You wander in, straight to command a cracked squadron, while the rest of us slog our guts out in junk like that?’
He reeled, glaring at Aron. ‘Big interceptor bomber pilot.’ He was balancing on the balls of his feet, spoiling for

‘Garram, you’re drunk.’ Franjia stepped between them, trying to calm them down. He pushed her out of the way to
get at Aron; Franjia stumbled back. Most pilots were arrogant enough to believe themselves great fighters in any
environment, air, space, land, or pub, she was well aware she wasn’t. Basic and passable, no more.
One of the stormtroopers saw it; stepped over to intervene. Three blindingly fast, white‑handed touches to
pressure points, and Nu One collapsed. The trooper hoisted the limp, pissed squadron commander over‑ her?‑
shoulder. The bulged chestplate was a glaring giveaway. Franjia had never taken notice of that before.
‘Follow me.’ Franjia told the trooper, headed for one of the maintenance storage bays on the side of the hangar.

OB173 dropped the drunk squadron leader at one of the benches, propped him up, Franjia planted two beers in
front of him.
‘Not many women in the Emperor’s service.’ The Flight Lieutenant said to Aleph‑3.
‘I don’t count; I was born to it.’ Aleph‑3 said. ‘You surprise me, though.’
‘Oh, the Empire recruits women.’ Franjia sat down at the bench herself, took one of the beers. ‘For the donkey
work. Seventy‑thirty on some worlds, you know that? Out on the Rim. Then the pyramid gets pretty sharp, pretty
fast. O‑3, there are maybe one in twenty left. O‑6, is it closer to one in a hundred or one in a thousand? At some
point in there, as you struggle through the incomprehension, malice, blatant sexism, being treated as a sex
object, you realise that these people do not want you to fight for them. Or for yourself.’
‘At least,’ Aleph‑3 said, ‘you are not simply an object.’
‘A standard flight suit’s almost as anonymous ‑ and half the time, I don’t think they know what they expect of us.’
Most of the time, the stormtrooper thought, she doesn’t know what she expects of herself, which won’t be
‘It should be ‘we’. Even under arms for the Emperor, we’re still a separate entity, they think of as ‘other’. Lust,
fear, jealousy, hate, confusion ‑ and the most infuriating are the ones who nearly understand.’ Aleph 3 said, with
one specific individual in mind.
‘I’m used to that for other reasons, but there’s nothing else I could, or would, do. However awkward it is, I’m
‘However awkward…do you know what our adjutant told me? He lost a lot of peripheral nerve function, he’s
grounded ‑ he said we were both physically unfit for higher command.’ She had wanted to strangle Yrd, at the
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Aleph 3 decided to go out on a limb. ‘From what I’ve seen of the Empire’s high command, that could have been a

‘Is there a red flag flying?’ Franjia asked.

‘No, why?’
‘An old pilot tradition ‑ back before repulsors, even. Atrisian Starfighter Corps, I think ‑ not every day, but some,
the red flag would be hoisted in the mess hall. It meant it was free speech time; you could say whatever you liked,
even ‑ especially ‑ about the government, the people in charge. Blow off pressure, bitch to your heart’s content.’
‘Stormtrooper loyalty is ‑ rightly ‑ taken for granted; we are the trustees of the Empire, we keep the faith. We do
not have to like or respect the people we’re keeping it for. This ship is far better than most; I’ve served a good
many idiots in my time.’ Aleph‑3 said.
‘I know. I should save it for an assignment I really hate. But there are times…just when you think you’ve found a
hole in the system, some way, some one, you can be woman and soldier both with, reality comes and takes it away
from you.’
Aleph 3 wanted to keep talking, but she sensed something coming. ‘Trouble.’

‘What,’ there was an enraged bellow, ‘is going on here?’ The bronze‑faced exec, Anode Head to the engineering
team, was shouting at the pilots; the stormtroopers snapped to attention, the pilots made some approximate
pretense of it.
‘Conduct unbecoming; unauthorised discharge of weapons; drunk and disorderly; unlawful assembly; destruction
of Imperial property.’ His voice rose almost to a scream at that point. ‘Whose idea was this? Stormtroopers ‑ arrest
these ‑‘

‘Belay that.’ A loud voice cut across the exec‑ Engineer‑Commander Mirannon. He was more cleanly shaved than
usual, and what of his face was visible was annoyed.
The pilots and troopers, and every spacer who was within earshot, listened. This was going to be fun.
‘Chief Engineer.’ Mirhak‑Ghulej acknowledged him. ‘Do you have something to do with this?’
‘Somebody with a few grams of sense had better. Do you realise how absurdly serious a charge that is, to arrest
half the wing on?’
‘It is the charge that fits.’ They were almost nose to nose, Mirannon more than half again Mirhak‑Ghulej’s
bodyweight. ‘It is the charge they lay themselves open to by their conduct.’
‘Bantha poodoo.’

‘I stand above you in the chain of command, Chief Engineer; you have no authority to talk to me like that.’
‘You’re junior in time‑in‑grade, and also apparently a halfwit. Maybe forty percent at best. Your writ doesn’t
stretch this far.’
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clearly my duty to stop and punish.’ The exec said, sounding as if he was quoting.
‘I’d be more confident in that if it wasn’t also your only apparent pleasure.’ Mirannon snapped back at him. ‘Are
you so totally devoid of judgement that you don’t understand why this is happening?’
‘Meaningless.’ Mirhak‑Ghulej dismissed the stress, the tension, the fear of combat in one word. ‘No reason for
violating regulations is good enough, attempting to rationalise it an offence in itself.’
‘Apart from the fact that you’re wrong, DIP is a Category One offence, with a severe penalty.’ Mirannon reminded
‘The Empire has the right to execute those it feels has displeased it.’ Mirhak‑Ghulej said.
‘Who here feels less comfortable about serving the Empire now than they did before our exec opened his mouth?
Show of hands.’ Mirannon asked the crowd.
Most of the pilots put their hands up; almost all the crew; Aleph 3 glared at them, and even half the Stormtroopers
had their hand up ‑ the one they weren’t holding their blaster carbine with.
‘There, congratulations, you’ve just won yourself a spot on your own death list as a ‑ hypothetical ‑ Alliance
agent‑provocateur. If you’d bothered to do your paperwork before coming down to flex your warped ego, you
would have known that this is unconventional ‑ but fully authorised. By myself, by Group Captain Olleyri, and by
Captain Lennart. Those things are no longer Imperial property ‑ they’re imperial junk, being disposed of
destructively in accordance with security regulations as befits their, former, classified status.’
Mirannon did a little looming of his own. ‘The only person here, Exec, still staring down the maw of justice, is you.
It would be wise for you to go away, before I have to start taking you seriously.’
‘Are you interfering with the enforcement of the laws of the empire?’ the frozen‑faced exec tried to reassert
‘Angling for a confession to a cat 2 offence? I don’t think so. What I am doing is protecting the law by preventing it
being enforced frivolously and incompetently. I’d invite you to stay to the roast we’re about to have, but I don’t
think you’d be welcome, and frankly, keep pushing it and you’re more likely to be on the menu.’
‘What about all the other charges?’ Mirhak‑Ghulej snarled.
‘I don’t support them. The disciplinary system on this ship is your responsibility; but all the others belong to me.’
Mirannon growled back at him. ‘I haven’t had the chance to do any really creative plumbing in months ‑ so go on.
Annoy me.’

Aleph‑3 knew exactly what he meant by ‘creative plumbing’; she had been standing next to him when he had
reduced a company of Alliance marines and a force user to loose carbon with a relative‑inertial field.
Manipulating it to compensate for a non‑existent acceleration had left them hurtling through the air at twenty‑
four hundred ‘g’, all a Procurator was capable of, and between that and air resistance ‑ she had never seen an
indoor meteor shower before, and profoundly hoped never to do so again.
The exec stalked out, furious ‑ but also wary. The beer continued to flow and the remains of the Marauders were
swept up by tractor beam, compressed into a bundle which, still glowing hot from blaster fire, was dumped on the
hangar bay floor. Sparks scattered off it, the pilots jumped back, there was a brief fire extinguisher fight ‑ the
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time for the mood to reassert itself, though.

Lennart was stuck in his office, sifting through personnel files. Intermittently he was looking up at, and cursing,
the Fulgur.
‘You sent for me, skipper?’ Brenn.
‘Come in, come in.’ Lennart waved him to a chair. ‘You heard about the incident in the flight bay?’
‘I heard. I think the entire ship did. Halfwit.’
‘He tried to exert his authority, and blew it. Spectacularly. When I told him he was in danger from the crew, I didn’t
think it was going to be Mirannon.’ Lennart rubbed a hand over his forehead. ‘That’s problem number one. This is
problem number two.’
He called up the sector map, first level; the twenty‑seven worlds of the sector that were worthy of the notice of the
galaxy, and the standard routes between them.
‘So far so normal, two indigenous alien species, one of doubtful loyalty, usual scatter of industrials. Give me a
clue.’ Brenn said; apart from the usual half‑awake Republic surveys, there didn’t seem to be much wrong,
standard web pattern.
‘Not fair, I suppose ‑ upper right middle.’ Lennart brought up the second level map, the worlds that featured in
the sector’s head count but were unlikely to impinge on the galaxy at large, the other two hundred and fifty‑four.
One of them had a very interesting name: Ord Corban.
Brenn got it straight away. ‘How in the name of the force does an Old Republic fleet depot system, with enough
vintage military equipment to equip an Alliance theatre group ‑ and it probably has ‑ get classified as a minor
‘That would be problem number three.’ Lennart said. ‘I had Chief Cormall do some digging. One of Shandon’s
signal‑interpreters, and a pretty capable slicer. I have his report, but you would be better meeting him ‑ so you
know who to blame if half the ship’s ready fund goes missing.’
The office door opened, and a prematurely grey‑haired, round faced man, apparently impeccably uniformed, came
‘Frevath, some people are built to wear a uniform, and some aren’t. Lose the jacket.’ Lennart, who belonged in the
first category but insisted on dressing as if he didn’t, said.
The shocked‑looking chief petty officer did, searched around for a place to put it, giving Brenn a good view of the
‘Boba Fett and the Assassin Droids ‑ On Tour Deaf or Alive’ T‑shirt he was wearing under his uniform.
‘There.’ Lennart said. ‘That looks more like a man with the illegal skills to crack into a high security datafortress.’
‘Sir, don’t tell my divisional officer, he’ll ‑ what am I saying? You’re the Captain.’
‘Not that you would guess it from appearances.’ Brenn said. Lennart nodded to him to carry on, ignoring Frevath
Cormall’s suppressed chuckle. ‘Where did you look, and what did you find?’
‘Well, sir…how likely are you to be able to successfully negotiate an asteroid field?’
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‘Spot on, Sir. I thought, well, if we do suspect tampering with the facts, we need to establish a baseline, work out
what’s actually going on so we can tell who’s spinning what lies to whom. The sector insurers are usually a pretty
good place to start for firm info.’
‘And?’ Brenn asked.
'Um‑ Sir, am I going to get into trouble over this?’ Cormall asked Lennart.
‘If you do, the rest of the ship won’t be far behind you. Tell it all.’ Lennart forced himself to say, suddenly worried.
‘Sir, this sector’s a much more dangerous place than Sector Group is admitting it is. With the records of losses and
hijackings I’ve been able to put together, they’ve been under‑representing Alliance, smuggler, pirate, all sorts of
criminal activity by upwards of a hundred and fifteen percent, probably close to a hundred and sixty.’ Cormall
‘So we have at least one big lie from the hierarchy. The reason we’re rolled this way is so our main guns can cover
the planetary ion cannon.’ Lennart revealed. ‘Just in case they know that we’ve worked it out. Carry on.’
‘Ord Corban got downgraded actually during the clone wars. The fleet based out of it did something crazy,
something scandalous that the Republic hushed up and buried under very heavy security.’
‘Would that be the hundred and eighteenth fleet, at all?’ Lennart spoke from sudden intuition, with a shiver down
his spine, speaking slowly and coldly.
They noticed. Cormall hardly had to say yes.

‘Um, Captain, you’re scaring me now‑‘

‘Small bloody wonder, if what I think happened actually did. I begin to understand how the scam could work. Say
‘Well, I looked at some of the trade records, and there’s a lot more top quality military hardware floating around
the sector than local manufacture or known import accounts for.’
Brenn was not in the mood for an economics lecture, and Cormall noticed. ‘So ‑ to cut a long story short, the local
bosses started selling bits off very early, and kept the business up under cover of the Republic security blanket.
People ‑ regimes ‑ have come and gone, the families behind the scheme have stayed the same.’
‘Actual collusion with the Rebels?’ Brenn asked.
‘Ah, now there the trail gets vague. What I reckon, Sir, is no; but the Alliance have done a lot of false trail work to
make it look more like treason than graft and corruption.’ Cormall said.

‘Which is what, by now‑‘ Lennart stopped himself. ‘Chief Petty Officer, just how deeply do you want to be involved
in this?’
‘How deep does it get, Sir?’ the slicer said, mainly to give himself time to think.
‘Depends how far out into the murk you want to wade. They don’t know, or at least if they do they are the boldest
bunch of bandits I have ever even heard of. For that matter, neither do I, really, and I’m far from certain I want to.’
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‘So what’s the worst case scenario?’ Brenn, expecting something pretty horrific, asked.
‘We find ourselves on the same hit list as the rebel “Heroes” of Yavin, at first estimate. If it goes back to the
Hundred and Eighteenth Republic Fleet, even if it wasn’t involved directly, that could involve digging into just how
the Republic managed to turn into the Empire.
Not a subject a sane man with healthy survival instincts wants to learn too much about.’ Lennart said, grimly,
imagining telekinetic fingers digging into his throat.

‘Captain, I think we want to keep a very healthy separation between problems two and three.’ Brenn suggested.
‘Still leaves us standing on a lava dome and throwing thermal detonators at each other. The scam‑artists in the
sector government must have some idea, but the Rebels can’t know, otherwise they would be following it up,
they’d realise there’s far more political treasure on that planet than there is materiel.’
‘All right, Sir, count me in.’ Cormall decided, not sure why.
‘Good. Wait here.’ He went out to the com gallery off the bridge, sent a ship‑wide alert; ‘Commander Mirannon to
the Captain’s office.’
There were two reasons he could be summoned to the captain’s office, and the big engineer had a case for either,
or both; this was clearly another problem entirely. He realised as soon as he arrived.
‘Good, you’re here, I’ll scream at you about the flight deck business later, I think we’ve just blundered into a world
of hurt.’
‘Typical.’ Mirannon declared. ‘Not content with my services, you go out and find more trouble for yourself ‑ what
is it, skipper?’
‘We were tracking down how the rebels get hold of their ships, and we found it was from the fallout of an old
scandal it would be unsafe verging on suicidal to inquire into.’
‘Suggestion; don’t inquire into it. Chase the ships, not the original screwup.’ Mirannon had a very good idea what
the problem was, Brenn could tell, and didn’t want a better one.

‘That’s the consensus?’ Lennart asked.

‘You command an Imperator‑ class destroyer and you’re asking for consensus? That’s just how abnormal this
business is?’ Brenn asked, almost amazed.
‘Yes.’ Captain Lennart answered.
‘I think I’d like to find out. I’d like to know. But if you’re serious about the hit list as well...’
‘At this point, believe me, I desperately want not to know. We deal with the problem at hand, Rebellion and
Empire, right? Digging up the wars of the past ‑ even if we were actually in them ‑ is a step too far.’

‘What do I do?’ Cormall asked.

‘Follow the trail forward, not back.’ Lennart ordered. ‘Gather data on anything and everything except the Republic
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out, for first, if they have a line into Iushnevan Port Authority.’ That was the sector capital.
Cormall saluted, picked up his uniform jacket and left, head buzzing with questions. He probably would have the
sense not to chase too many of them.

‘I’ll call the rest of the command team, talk through the practicalities of the situation. First things first ‑ Nav.’ He
called up the image of the Fulgur again. ‘Life has no sense of timing.’
‘No.’ Brenn said, straight away.
‘Thank you. Why?’
‘If you make the offer and I turn it down, it’s a major black mark on my record. If I accept, well, I’m probably not
literally indispensable, but‑‘
‘Close enough, especially at a time like this.’ Lennart admitted.

‘It’s possible the rebs are blackmailing the Sector governor.’ Mirannon pointed out. ‘If this big dark secret gets out
on his watch, what the Empire would do to him would be vastly worse than anything the rebellion could. Neither of
them need know exactly what all the trouble is about.’
‘So we have a rebel supply base, field manufacturing facilities and all, effectively protected by the Imperial
Starfleet. Can you get Motivator Five back? I’d like to return to yesterday and do today over again, completely
differently,’ Brenn suggested.
‘Rank has its privileges ‑ me first.’ Lennart said. Out to the com systems gallery again, to arrange for a general
meeting of the command team.

They gathered in the ready room; Lennart, Mirannon, Brenn were there first, generating a little field of desperate
seriousness and gloom. Wathavrah and Rythanor, Guns and Sensors, next in, followed by Olleyri and, unusually,
High Colonel QAG‑111. The commander of the ship’s Stormtrooper legion looked less frozen‑faced and metallic
than the Exec, who sat at the foot of the table, as far away from Mirannon as he could.
‘Gentlemen, all of our minor problems have just been reduced in size. We now have a major problem to deal with.’
Lennart began, and motioned to Brenn to continue.
‘Data from other arms of the Imperial service indicates that this sector is barely under Imperial control. The sector
group’s figures for Rebel activity are so wide of the mark as to be unbelievable, verging on mendacious.’
‘Ah, I thought so.’ Shandon Rythanor said. ‘First line warships in first rate condition. Wouldn’t be the first time
they’ve had more than we suspect ‑ wait. You’re saying Sector Group are lying?’
‘Open, bare‑faced lies.’ Lennart confirmed.
‘Then what are we waiting for? We have some hyper capability, right? Straight to the capital, bombard them before
they realise that we know, and present the evidence afterward.’ Wathavrah suggested.

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‘The reason they have been able to get away with it, is that the rebs are operating within the, metaphorical, blast
radius of a political unexploded bomb.’ Brenn said.
‘Translate, for whose of us who aren’t trying to learn doubletalk?’ Wathavrah asked.
‘The Dubbel people could probably sue you for defamation…’ Lennart suggested, deadpan. ‘There’s a political
threat to the Empire. The rebels don’t understand anything about it, except that it exists. They are using it to
blackmail the Sector Group into permitting them to present a military threat. It’s working because the Sector
Group expect to find themselves on Darth Vader’s appointments list if it gets out.’

‘The Alliance are using a political weapon, which they don’t understand but Imperial Security does, to attack the
Sector Group with?’ Wathavrah tried to put it together. ‘If they don’t know what the big secret is ‑ how?’
‘Because they expect to be able to rely on mugs like us to do their investigative dirty work for them.’ Rythanor
suggested. ‘Stop me if I’m wrong, Captain, but you’ve been very vague ‑ is that why?’
‘Yes. Whatever it is ‑ we don’t need to know. If we investigated, even with absolute integrity and discretion, there
would still be enough fallout from it to give aid and comfort to the enemy. It’s a secret the empire wants kept.
Question is, how do we deal with the military problem, without exposing the political?’
‘What is the military problem?’ Olleyri asked. He was still slightly hung over.
The image of Ord Corban came up.
‘I hate to say this,’ Rythanor said, ‘but I agree with Guns for once. Alpha strike.’
‘Might not be the worst option ‑ but what do we do about the turncoats inside Sector Group command?’ Mirannon

‘Commander Mirhak‑Ghulej.’ The first time he had been spoken to. ‘What does the book say you are supposed to
do, if you catch your superior officer or officers in the act of betraying the Empire?’
The exec’s response was entirely mechanical. ‘Report them to their superiors.’ Lennart wondered what he would
find in his in‑box about the flight deck incident.
‘That will constitute plan A, we’ll do it in any case. I want operation plans prepared for; a BDZ‑level strike on Ord
Corban, with and without fighting our way through a defending fleet; a drop assault on Ord Corban, objective
personnel; a drop assault with bombardment support on Sector Group headquarters. Mirhak‑Ghulej, wait outside,
QAG111, wait here, the rest of you, dismissed.’

They left, in varying degrees of bafflement; Lennart faced round to the helmeted High Colonel.
‘Whatever it is, Captain Lennart?’ The trooper’s voice was ice cold.
‘I can guess. In fact, I could put together a very convincing theory. You probably could too.’ He had to be a
veteran. ‘I trust my officers’ discretion and loyalty enough to at least tell them that there is a problem; they won’t
go looking for evidence, nor will you, nor will I.’
‘So what do you need me for?’ The senior stormtrooper asked.
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shoot to stun and disable. Then identify the punishably guilty, and shoot them without interrogation.’ Lennart
‘You don’t want to know. Acknowledged. Second?’
‘Soothe my conscience. I do have a theory ‑ if it’s right, I want to be at least reasonably certain that the reason of
state behind it was at least approximately just. Think of it as a helping hand to one less strong in faith than
‘I know considerably less than you do.’ It was impossible to tell if the stormtrooper High Colonel was sincere, or if
he was playing along, giving the Captain enough rope to hang himself.
‘Some of your people know more ‑ I need to talk to one of your hunter‑killer teams, Omega‑17‑Blue. I believe
they are fairly well informed about subjects like the Jedi, and the Force.’
Long silence. The High Colonel sat there like a statue; undoubtedly involved in internal comms. Lennart wished he
could overhear. ‘Agreed.’
Lennart sighed with relief. ‘Tell them, whenever they’re ready. Dismissed ‑ and on your way, send Commander
Mirhak‑Ghulej in. It’ll be a refreshing change of pace to deal with a nice, normal problem like two of my officers
threatening to murder each other.’
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2006­12­30 05:50pm

Chapter 8

Lennart sat in the ready room, brooding. He knew what was going on, and wasn’t sure how he knew. The whole
plan had just popped into his head, like a flashbulb memory. Something had been done ‑ a secret he well
understood why the Empire wanted to keep. So did he, but he couldn’t keep it on his own.
The Exec’s re‑entering the room was a welcome distraction.
‘Sit down, Commander.’ Lennart hadn’t quite yet reasoned out how to play this; aggressively, he decided.
‘Chief Engineer Mirannon is a responsible officer. He understood what you were trying to do, and I’m sure he
regretted slapping you down almost as much as you regret having it happen to you.’
‘So you will support your officers ‑ up to a point.’ Mirkak‑Ghulej said, bitterly.
‘You owe him more than you know.’ Lennart said, voice hardening. ‘He saved you from me.’ Two long steps, and
Lennart was at the exec’s chair, pulled it away from the table, grabbed him by the lapels, hauled him to the
standing position.
Mirhak‑Ghulej looked utterly shocked. He had, in fact, been less than respectful of the Captain; considering
Lennart soft, un‑Imperial, unprofessional even. He was on first name terms with some of his petty officers; how
much more undignified could the man get? Being physically manhandled was less disturbing than realising the
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‘The very least I would have done, and don’t think it isn’t still an option, would be to have you committed to
psychiatric care. On the other hand, Gethrim’s theory has some merit. What went through your head?’ Lennart
dumped him back in his seat.
‘Somebody has to…’ he mumbled. Lennart looked at his face, interested. Then he pulled himself together, and it
was like a mask slipping back on.
‘That was what they were doing, that was the charge that presented itself. How could I ignore that?’
Lennart instantly thought of half a dozen other heresies that would warp the exec’s mind even further; but what
would be the point? ‘You intended the new‑broom trick. Do something spectacular, get taken seriously. I did it
myself, when I had your job ‑ but there’s spectacular and then there’s more than you can cope with. What
persuaded you that you could get away with putting half the fighter group on charges?’
‘How was I supposed to ignore them? There they were, and the pilots are the worst. Always daring each other,
always hazing. They disrupt a ship’s routine, and tradition is not law.’
‘No, but for maintaining order, it can be just as useful. The power went to your head, didn’t it? Eight divisional
officers, hundreds of section officers ‑ and you jump to the head of the queue, at the same time as fortune hands
you a problem you can’t ignore. Life, indeed, has a lousy sense of timing.’
‘They could have been released. It would have been necessary to impress discipline upon them, one or two would
have served as examples for the rest.’ Mirhak‑Ghulej protested.
‘Have you ever been an example?’ Lennart asked him; Mirhak‑Ghulej’s face fell. He knew what was coming.
‘No, Sir.’
‘Would you like to be?’
‘Captain, I was only trying to do my job‑‘
‘Exec, your doing your job would have severely impaired the fighting efficiency of this ship. That is where the
credit stops, that is the be‑all and end‑all; that is the point of the order and the discipline, of all the daily grind.
Understand that and I might not have to have you transferred to a colonial tender hauling farm products along the
outer rim.’
‘Sir, the procedure‑‘ Mirhak‑Ghulej protested. He realised that the Captain held his career in the palm of his hand.
‘You want procedure, I’ll give you procedure. One; you are to familiarise yourself with the personnel profiles of
every individual under your authority. Every. All forty‑six thousand of the rank of Lieutenant‑Commander or
below. And I want a report and recommendation on each and every one.’
Mirhak‑Ghulej was only near human; his data‑processing speed was more or less standard. Assuming half an
hour per file, worst case estimate, and every waking moment, that would be over fourteen hundred days’ work.
‘One point one; For as long as it takes you to do this,’ and Lennart knew perfectly well how long, ‘you will deputise
your duties to the divisional officers, on a day by day rotating basis. And you’d better hope that I don’t find
anyone who can do the job better than you can. Or that I need to get to points two, three or four. Dismissed.’
Coldly, shock gradually changing to fury, Mirhak‑Ghulej stood up to go, saluted ‑ perfectly, marched out.
Sod, Lennart thought. What a time to make an enemy. Almost all the damage he can do to me ‑ or for that matter,
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job‑ I still need someone for that. Mirhak‑Ghulej should find some shortcut round that; some elegant solution to
the problem. Lennart could think of at least three, including the way he intended to process the recomendations.
If he’s daft enough to do it the hard way, he deserves it.
Unpleasant but straightforward. What was next on his list promised to be anything but.

Some of the crew were luckier than others. Ghorn III was a fairly nice planet, most of the time. When it wasn’t
suffering from massive solar storms, anyway.
Part of the ship’s stormtrooper and engineering complements had been dropped to organise disaster relief, and
do what they could to minimise the effects.
Watching AT‑ATs break up storm cells by detonating flak blaster bolts was fun for a while ‑ especially seeing how
often they got it wrong, their guns were pared down to get as much firepower into as small a package as possible
and were no good at the off‑modes, but to gunners used to multi‑teraton weaponry it got old fairly fast.
Nobody on the planet seemed to know or care to add up that no more men and equipment had gone surfaceside
than one lift from the Black Prince’s shuttles and transports could retrieve.

Port‑4 turret team were on leave, heading for a warren of a pub, old stonework looking like a monastery with six
floors too many all set at odd angles to each other, not far from a small aerospace‑port in the north temperate
zone somewhere. Not all of them were entirely happy with the décor.
‘What billennium is this planet living in?’ Fendon grumbled as they opened the main doors. Actual, real wood.
‘Fourth oldest profession, brewing.’ Suluur pointed out. ‘Time honoured, it is.’
‘That’s what worries me ‑ more they try to sell it, worse it’s likely to be.’ Aldrem said, sceptically. ‘still, could be
‘You recommended this place.’ Suluur said.
‘One of the lads from the Golan told me about it.’ Aldrem said.
‘If this is what they were on at the time, it must be good. Cross‑eyed nerfs.’ Assistant Gunlayer (CPO) Eddaru
Gendrik, leader of sub‑assembly team one, grumbled.
‘There’s more to life than gunnery and beer.’ Aldrem said; the other fourteen turned round to stare at him, but he
didn’t care, he had just caught sight of the woman behind the bar.
All the gunnery team were more or less in uniform, but none of them were without the identifying shoulder patch;
a human, in black armour that came from the same cultural era as the style of the pub, closed visor, usually a
raised lance with black pennant, the ship’s name and hull number, and the ship’s motto ‑ “In our hearts, wrath, in
our hands the stars”.
The gunners’ badges had the knight carrying a turbolaser barrel instead of a lance.
They came in obviously as a group, and the locals turned to look at them. A mixture of shuttle pilots, airtaxi
drivers, freight barge tenders, farmers and tourists, mostly human; the free traders would be potential trouble.
Suluur scanned the place, with tactical potential in mind. Fairly solid furniture, primitive showpiece weapons and
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‘What do you reckon? Fight then drink, or drink then fight?’ He asked Aldrem.
‘Yes,’ he said offhanded, not paying attention, dreamily walking up to the bar.

The theme of the pub was pioneer days, there were half a dozen staff all dressed to fit; the one Aldrem had locked
on to actually seemed to be the duty manager.
The bar was a spiral in the middle of the building, flat counter space at each alcove, and the duty manager was
moving from one landing to another; she spotted the potential trouble coming, decided to deal with it herself,
realised one of them was staring at her.
Aldrem spent most of his working life sitting down; he was a shade over middle height, fairly solidly built,
handsome but strained, something zealot‑like about his face, which had a strange light on it now, and eyes like ‑
she had seen eyes like that before, on a bounty hunter; and his target. Drawing crosshairs on everything that
passed across them.
She was dressed in a brass‑ornamented low‑cut leather bustier and matching bracers, rich, glossy dark tan colour
complementing auburn hair, over a white silk shirt, black neck‑cloth, floor‑length white skirt; nearly the same
height he was, reddish‑brown eyes, oval face, she looked worried, lots on her mind. That only made her more
beautiful to him. She was prepared for most things, from the usual rocket jockey chat up lines to assault (shock
stick under the bar, two stun‑ set blaster pistols in the folds of her skirt); what she got was total
dumbfoundedness. As their eyes locked, Aldrem’s bravado completely deserted him.
He just stood there, looking moonstruck at her for five seconds before Krivin Hruthhal ‑ subassembly 2 ‑ saved
the day.
He pointed at the taps. ‘We’ll have five of those, please, five of those, five of those…five of those, five of those and
five of those.’
‘The navy isn’t overwhelmingly popular around here.’ She warned them, apparently sincerely. ‘Will you be staying
Her staff were already pouring. Suluur waved a hand at them. ‘Oh, this is just us deciding what we want to drink.’
‘Come and sit with us.’ Aldrem said to her, uncharacteristically softly.
‘I’ll stun her, you grab him and carry him to safety.’ Suluur muttered to Hruthhal.
‘No, stun him, and carry her to safety.’
She heard, showed no sign of being offended; ‘Find yourselves a table.’

The gun team found a corner, with lots of interesting implements on the walls, and a clear line of retreat to the
door; dragged three small tables together.
They clustered round, Aldrem glared at Fendon who planted himself next to the senior chief; he wanted a space
left beside him. Fendon shuffled round.
The duty manager came over to the table herself, followed by two repulsorlift trays stacked with beers and ales.
The gunners started sorting through them, Aldrem looked at her, puppyishly. She looked him over; senior
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‘Tell me about yourself?’ Aldrem said, looking into her eyes from a range of two feet. Well within flash, or for that
matter every, sort of hazard. ‘How does someone born for wide open space come to be here?’
‘My parents worked a tramp freighter.’ She admitted.
‘I knew there was something of the stars about you…’ he introduced himself. ‘Pellor Aldrem. My friends call me
‘Skipper calls him a trigger happy idiot.’ Suluur added.
‘Jhareylia Hathren. Trigger happy idiot?’ she asked, amused.
‘Complicated incident.’ Aldrem admitted. ‘We’re gunners on the destroyer in orbit, Black Prince.’
‘Oh.’ She said. He was too busy looking at her to see her, see how she reacted to that. Not much showed;
inwardly, she responded like any well trained Rebel field agent would. Scenting opportunity. Technically, she was a
dispatcher; arranging passage for wanted fugitives in and out of the system. Her job gave her a lot of leeway for
that. Now this ‑ all right, fairly handsome ‑ Imperial Starfleet gunner wandered into her life.
‘I hated the smallness of it, and the constant chasing in circles to make ends meet. As soon as I could, I found
somewhere more solid, somewhere with roots.’ She told him.
‘All you really need is a bigger ship. On a destroyer, you roam the universe, you’re not overshadowed, you can
look any ‑ almost ‑ any star in the galaxy in the face and tell it where to go ‑ a part, not a pebble.’ Incoherent, but
she knew what she meant.
As they talked, she listened with half an ear to the crosstalk between the gunners. Their captain had raked their
exec over the coals? He was new to the job, and they missed the old one who had been a nasty piece of work but
at least knew what he was doing.
The fighter wing had used wreckage to hold a barbecue on the flight deck? A junior engineer was in the sick bay
with third‑ degree burns to the face after looking down a power conduit? The variable‑gee toilets had backed up
again? Domestic gossip interspersed with genuinely useful intelligence. They seemed...endearingly corruptible.
Endearing? Was she starting to take this man seriously? He was like an overgrown puppy; but if his and his crew’s
boasts were even half way right ‑ they were ‑ they were devastatingly good at what they did. She liked him. Was
that so hard to say?
On his third drink, Aldrem went green. She draped his arm over her shoulders, supported him. He muttered an
apology, had to close his mouth. She got him outside and to the gutter just in time.
‘Thanks.’ He spluttered, after it was over. ‘Not many prepared to go that far on the first date.’
She smiled at him. ‘I’m used to looking after rummies. You didn’t have enough for that, though. Is there
something wrong?’
‘Stress, hallucinations. Working too hard, training too hard, worrying too hard.’
‘Some of the shuttles working out of this port are helping with the relief effort. Transporting refugees out,
supporting work crews trying to set things to rights.’ She said, reproachfully.
‘That’s…that’s crazy. That’s negligent. It was only flash, anything ‑ system defence knew there was going to be
trouble. They knew we were in low enough orbit there was a risk. Lowest‑power planetary shields would have
bounced that. If the rebels had taken the opportunity to wreck a few local industries you would have far worse on
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‘Before you chew on me, ask ‑ with half an hour’s warning for a five minute job, why didn’t the planetary defence
do their part? Why didn’t they protect you?’ He actually sounded angry ‑ on her behalf.
‘Before I chewed you, I’d want to hose you down first.’ She helped him back into the pub; he didn’t need it, but
accepted her touch anyway.
Maybe an hour of talk later, there was a descending rumble, hissing, clanks; the sound of a tramp freighter
landing at the port. Aldrem glanced at it, then looked back.
‘That freighter.’ He said, looking at the battered YT‑series. ‘That’s the one that got away.’
‘Are you sure?’ Gendrik asked his turret commander.
‘I never forget a target.’ He said, menacingly. ‘Jhareylia ‑ do you have an E‑web?’
‘I think this is still reacting with your stress medication.’ She took the tumbler out of his hand.
‘Something with a tripod. A bipod, at least?’
‘Don’t mind him, he’s a gunner. Lost without a rangefinder to look through…you serious, Pel? Thinking of doing
something about this ship?’ Suluur soothed her and asked him.
‘Suppose you do. Then an angry crowd of atmo jockeys comes pouring out after us and takes it back.’ Krivin
‘I can fly one of those things.’ Aldrem said. They just glared at him. ‘Well, I can remote‑fly a target drone. It can’t
be that much harder. It just looks bigger, that’s all.’
‘You’re probably going to need my help.’ She sighed. How else was she supposed to get on board one of those
things? Besides which, she sort of found him cute.
Attacking the freighter was simplicity itself. The duty manager escorted a crowd of rowdy Imperial spacers out of
the pub, across the concrete pad with the docking bays around it, apparently looking for a hire passage to take
them back to their ship; past the freighter they recognised.
The crew came out to see what the problem was ‑ and went down to a blizzard of stun bolts, which decorated the
ship, the back wall of the bay, the ground, the sky, you name it.

Charge on board the freighter, light up the powerplant and engines, head for orbit‑ and get intercepted by one of
Black Prince's assault transports.
They explained it, and it sounded insane. The sight of cold space brought it home to them, just how far off the
norm they were. The ATR didn’t believe them, so they said it again. It made even less sense, but this time it was
accepted as crazy enough to be true.
‘Shame.’ The assault transport pilot told them. ‘It’d go easier on you if you were rebels. Then you just get to die.
Spin this one to the captain and he’ll come up with something worse.’

'Why, SCPO Aldrem, is it always you?’ All fifteen of them, sixteen counting the civilian, were on the carpet.
Physically, they were in the ready room, in front of an irate Captain and a squad of stormtroopers. ‘You have a gift
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‘We did capture a rebel transport, Sir.’ Aldrem said woodenly.

‘No, you captured an ex‑rebel transport. They had disposed of it as too hot, yesterday. The crew you seized it
from ‑ most of them will recover ‑ had only owned it for fifteen hours.’
‘We didn’t know that! Honestly, Sir, we thought we were doing the right thing.’ Aldrem protested.
‘You’re gunners. You control one of eight main turrets, twelve percent of the ship’s total firepower. You are not in
that rank and that position in order to play Junior Stormtrooper. You are not allowed to throw yourself away that
cheaply and that stupidly. The civil police have quite a charge sheet against you; grand theft starship, attempted
murder, actual bodily harm, kidnapping‑‘
‘I volunteered to help.’ Jhareylia failed to interrupt Captain Lennart’s flow.
‘I could throw you to them and it would be only fair. All right, it was fairly dedicated. It was also mentally deficient.
I’m not sure whether to promote you, demote you, transfer you or keelhaul you. If I do transfer you, it’ll probably
be to the Rebel Alliance.’ Was it his imagination or did the civilian react to that?
‘It was hot.’ Lennart said, more calmly. ‘The crew will be charged with receiving stolen property. What I will do
with you ‑ actually, I think that would suit you perfectly. Junior stormtroopers.’

‘Oh, space, he’s going to put us through basic again ‑ Sir, can’t you just demote us instead?’ Aldrem pleaded.
‘You insist in getting involved in a ground brawl, at least you ought to know how to come out of it in one piece.
Stand watches as normal, but for the rest of the time, until they pass you as either fit or not likely to do it again,
you belong to the Legion. Dismiss.’
All but two of the squad escorted them away; Jhareylia tried to sneak away with them, bu t‑ easy enough ‑ he
spotted her.
‘As for you, congratulations, you’ve just volunteered for the Imperial Starfleet.’
She started to protest. ‘No, it’s not optional ‑ if I let you go, the fleet would never live this down. Aldrem’s not this
loose normally; he would have thought about it, but not done it ‑ unless he was trying to impress you.’
She flushed with embarrassment; remarkably well acted, Lennart thought.
‘You were a shift manager at a pub, yes? Good. I’m going to make you the exec’s steward. He could do with
having a looser perspective around him. First one of you to drive the other mad wins.’ To the other two
stormtroopers; ‘Take her away and have her sworn in.’

A knock on his office door; ‘Enter.’ He said, keeping his voice level.
Four stormtroopers, but the armour they were in was far from standard. Iridescent blue to red, shifting with the
angle, smoother, sloped, overlapped and streamlined; how much rarer, more effective and more the badge of an
elite, Lennart could only guess.
‘Omega‑17‑Blue‑Aleph, I presume?’
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‘I presume you know what the issue is.’ Lennart said, sitting at the head of the table. It made no difference, being
in a vulnerable position or not; if he stepped beyond bounds, and they thought they needed to, they could drop
him easily.
‘Enlighten us.’ Aleph‑3 said. She was looking at him through helmet sensors, in all the detail they could give.
‘The major local rebel base used to be the fortress‑factory system of the hundred and eighteenth republic fleet.
You should know from your own High Colonel that the rebels are using the TS‑Cosmic clearance of that business
as cover to snipe at the Empire from.’
‘Continue.’ Aleph‑2 said, trying to put him off balance.
‘No, wait.’ Aleph‑3 said. ‘The Captain is right, not to want to know more and say more than he has to.’ Was she
actually sympathetic? Lennart wondered. So did she.
‘I’ve told the command team that it’s something we don’t need to know.’ Lennart said. ‘Something to work
around. The problem is that I think I already know it.’
‘How?’ Aleph One barked.
‘Putting the pieces together. You’re all veterans of the Grand Army, yes?’ Lennart was on very dangerous ground.
‘You remember what the internal situation was like, mid‑to‑end phase, say three quarters of the way through the
war.’ Mentioning it brought a lot of memories flooding back for him. For them too? What was it like to have a mind
filled with things you didn’t dare or didn’t know how to think about, embedded ideas and conditions? Would you
realise that it wasn’t normal? For that matter, did he?
‘In what respect?’ Aleph‑3 asked him. There were other ways than the force to read someone’s mind. She was
watching his eyes, his worry lines, his body language. He didn’t want them to tell him that he was right.
‘The political war was in full swing. Natural born humans were flocking to the Republic’s banner. By proportion,
though, we weren’t doing nearly as much of the fighting. Holding and clearing operations, patrol and defence‑
there were more prewar Republic admirals and captains dying of heartburn than Separatist attack.’ He was
exaggerating, but only in spirit; the numbers bore him out, that for their respective strengths the clones bore a
vastly higher share of the war.
‘There were mixed ships, mixed fleets; clone pilots, womb‑born ground crew; clone gunners, womb‑born
maintenance and engineering teams, but only at the end of the war and in the early Imperial fleet. The hundred
and eighteenth was an early experiment ‑ one that went catastrophically wrong. Rumours ranged from plague
through fratricide to outright defection. It bred mistrust and division in the fleet, it kept your kin exposed at the
sharp end.’
‘You expect us to object to that?’ Aleph One said. Lennart was right; they knew where he was going.
‘No, I don’t. But wasn’t it convenient, that the Jedi‑commanded spearhead fleets were full of incorruptibly loyal
clones, ready to stop them when they turned against the Republic?’ Lennart asked.
‘You believe‑‘ Aleph One began.
‘The Hundred and Eighteenth Fleet debacle was an act of political engineering, not of war. It prevented mixed
fleets, forestalled mixed loyalties, made sure Palpatine was in a position to use you to wipe the Jedi out with a
word when he chose.’
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‘It was a setup ‑ because it needed to be set up. The vast majority of the Jedi had no intention of turning on the
republic; it was the republic that turned on them.’
‘Essentially correct.’ Aleph‑3 told him. The universe failed to move, and he felt disappointed in it.
‘Would it be dumb of me to ask why?’ Lennart said.
‘No, it would be dangerous, but you’ve already accepted that. We are the worst people in the universe to ask ‑ was
it right, was it necessary. Let me ask you ‑ how did you work it out?’
‘What does it matter? Logic. Intuition. A leap of bad faith. All of the above.’

Subvocal, helmet com to helmet com; Do we inform him? Induct him?

Is there time?
‘What effect,’ Aleph One asked, ‘do you think this knowledge would have?’
‘On the Rebels ‑ little to none, they believe something like it anyway. On the rest of the galaxy?’ Lennart pondered
‘Realising that they have been manipulated and lied to ‑ even that they can be, on such a scale; realising that
about one very large thing at least, the rebels are right; I think there would be many more worlds, under the
circumstances, that would cross the line from thinking Empire something to be endured, to thinking it ‑ us ‑
something to be opposed.’
‘We were never made,’ Aleph‑3 said, ‘to be arbiters of destiny. We were never made to ask such questions.’
She was evading, and with that, Lennart felt the balance of power shift.
‘You know this answer at least. Why was it necessary? Why do you, veterans, Jedi hunters, do what you do ‑ and
it’s not because you were bred to it. There’s too much intelligence and too much creativity in it, you are fit to
answer whether you want to be or not. Why was it necessary? Why is it?’
‘Why do you care?’ Aleph‑3 tried to derail him; and nearly succeeded.
‘About the truth, or about your opinion?’ Lennart said. ‘Surely the answer is obvious ‑ you talk about being an
arbiter of destiny. What do you think the captain of an Imperator has to be?’ He shouted at them.
‘Especially us, as much time as we spend on independent and detached duty ‑ that is my responsibility.’ He
decided to push it. ‘And you are mine, to ask questions of.’
No time, Aleph‑3 com’d Aleph One.
Is there another way? Can you do this?
I think I can, she replied.

She stood up, took her helmet off, glared at him.

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close to eliminating the ability to learn from experience.

Those of us who survived this long are the ones who learnt to question‑ and to hide the fact that they could. We
did indeed come to our own conclusions; our own, perhaps, justifications.’
‘You’re accusing me, of asking you to tell me only what I want to hear.’ Lennart said. ‘Tell me what you want to tell

‘When I hear one of our victims talk for his life, I always wonder; they bring conscience up so often. What do they
imagine it is, that it can be so different from the sense of duty we feel, like a waterfall in our heads? I am certain,
certain beyond any doubt reasonable or unreasonable, that it was right.’
‘I want to share your certainty. Convince me. Stand by what your conscience tells you.’
She took a deep breath ‑ a lot rested on this ‑ before beginning; ‘The Jedi Order earned their extinction a
thousand times over. Not for the damage they did, but for the damage they failed to prevent. The republic was set
to drown in its own pus; how did it sink so low, with the Jedi watching over it?’
‘You probably saw more of them in your youth than I did.’ Lennart remembered. He was, like so many people who
came to galactic attention, Corellian; it was a system with a lot that needed sorting out by some force of justice
and order ‑ and the Corellian Security Force were one of the things that needed sorting out.
‘Exactly. Where were they, when you needed them?’
‘Precisely.’ Aleph‑3 said, meaning it as a conclusion. ‘Not for action, but for their inactions, in allowing the
republic to sink so far that the Clone War was even possible. Any civilian court would convict them of malfeasance
in office, and have them imprisoned; any military tribunal ‑ you ‑ would find them guilty of dereliction of duty and
have them shot.’

‘That, then, is exactly what you do.’ He suggested; she replied with a nod.
‘They had the power of the Force, they had the authority of the Republic; how did they fail so thoroughly to use it?
Simply because they were trained to fail. Their withdrawn‑ness, their detachment, their flat out refusal to relate to
other’s pain ‑ I do not understand how someone can turn their back like that, and then dare to call another evil.'
she had to pause for breath.
'They were like doctors who had sworn only to treat the symptoms of disease, and never the cause. I can’t say I
anticipated Order 66; you would have, if you had been there. But, Galactic Spirit, how I welcomed it.’
‘Taken as children, divorced from ordinary life so totally as they were ‑ you almost make it sound as if they need
to be pitied.’
Lennart suggested, guessing at what Order 66 was; she was ‑ not the words, the actions. Her flashing‑bright
eyes, above all else. Persuasive ‑ contagious, even, in her certainty. Somewhere in his head, an alarm was
sounding; reminding him that to Dordd, she had ‑ claimed or admitted? ‑ that she had been originally a public
spokeswoman, sliver tongued and fluent with lies.
‘I shouldn’t be, personally, angry with them. We should thank them for being such fools as to call us into
existence, to have failed so badly that it became our time, not theirs.’ She said.
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‘Who protects the peace and security of the galaxy now?’ She waved an iridescent arm, gesturing at the walls
around her, meaning the ship as a whole. ‘Rather more purposeful than a mere lightsabre, wouldn’t you say?’
‘Why not do justice upon them publicly, then? Simply because they were at their most useful, and most popular,
precisely during the war?’ Lennart theorised.
‘That would be within your competence, not mine; I would accept your word as security for that.’ She bowed to
‘For someone who was not made to answer such questions, you handle them well. Still leaves me with one major
problem, though; how do I prevent the echoes of that, righteous shoot or not ‑ and many would say not ‑
harming the innocent, or at any rate the loyal, now?’ he asked them.
‘It is not our place to say.’
‘If you want a better job done, allow me to use some of the tools they failed to. One of those tools is surely
realising that you don’t know it all, and other people can provide valuable input to a problem. Hmmm?’
‘Perhaps that was vague, I’ll say it more clearly; we don’t know. Unless ‑ false crime?’
‘You know more than you realise. Thank you.’ Clearly, the interview was over. Try ‑ no, the order he had already
given, present as a reason for their condemnation ‑ those responsible for something else.
Falsifying returns to regional command would probably do; something that would justify security, at least.
Whoever had come up with the incident, those twenty‑three years ago, had probably thought exactly the same,
Lennart realised. He wasn’t sure whether to be comforted or depressed by that.

The troopers left, Aleph‑3 putting her helmet back on.

He needs to know, she com’d. Someday.
He only listened to you because you batted your eyelids at him, Aleph One said contemptuously.
It worked, she said defensively. Besides, it’s not forbidden. Not for what we want to turn him into.
At a time when there is time. No sense presenting a half‑trained man, Aleph One cautioned her.
She was more sure of him than the team leader was, and for a moment her hand rested on a pouch containing the
present she had hoped to give him. A lightsabre; one with a crimson blade.
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­01­05 05:52am

Ch 9

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side was up to. ‘Intelligence evaluation flights’ was the usual description in the logbook.
Most pilots admitted it was a joyride. In terms of priorities, the bomb wing ‑ Delta, Epsilon, Iota, Kappa ‑ got first
crack, and senior ranks got priority within that.
Aron was third on the list, right behind Olleyri and the Bomb Wing Commander; he had invited his senior flight
commander to take the second bird out with him.
Actually, going out with her was what he had been trying to avoid saying. He made a purely professional
invitation, and she accepted in a purely professional spirit.

Tech Sargeant Oregal and his team were waiting on the pad with them. B‑wings were not known for reliability, and
he wasn’t going to send two of his pilots out in craft he hadn’t looked over himself.
‘Don’t know why you want to bother, Sirs.’ He said, as the two captured fighters ‑ splashed with imperial logos on
every available flat surface ‑ were tractored in to the bay.
‘It’s something different, Sergeant. After all, one can become spoiled by too much good flying.’ Franjia said,
putting on a mockingly exaggerated upper class Coruscanti accent. ‘A change of pace from time to time reminds
us of just how much we have.’
‘Why didn’t we borrow a couple of Alpha Lead while the Group Captain was looking the other way?’ Aron said,
looking without much hope at the two big, spindly bombers jockeying for space on the pad.
‘Missing the speed?’ Franjia asked him.
‘Because the Group Captain would personally take the others out after you, ionise you, drag you back, beat the
living shit out of you and have you painting ship for the rest of your life, Sir. Very protective of them, he is.’ Oregal
pointed out.
‘Why couldn’t you have made that much sense when we met?’ Aron asked him, knowing perfectly well why not.
‘And yes. Apart from the fact that I get shot at by bigger guns than ever before, the thing I really miss from the
Interceptor is the ability to pick my fights. In a squint you can outrun or outmaneuver almost everything; in the
Starwing you have to take what comes.’
‘So it’s just as well that we can, then.’ Franjia bounced back.

The two B‑wings were now down, and Olleyri and the wingco vaulted out of the cockpits‑ the old man showing he
could still do it‑ and started to walk off, muttering to each other. They weren’t paying much attention to their
surroundings; Aron asked ‘Good flight, Sir?’ and got a ‘Mmm.’ in return.
Oregal was already walking round them, looking for pitting, loose connections, wear, checking engine temps and
erosion, fuel levels, downloading from the onboard flight computer, the usual starfighter pre‑flight.
‘Well, Sirs, that’s one thing you’re not going to get out of a B‑wing. Slow as glaciation. Nothing any more wrong
with them than ever was, they’re ready to go ‑ and sirs; if anything goes wrong, just get out, don’t bother trying
to bring them back.’
‘Cockpit systems?’ Franjia asked.
‘Good thought ‑ they aren’t designed to work with Imperial helmet displays. Turn the aids off and eyeball it, Sirs.’
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display; flightstick and throttle; notes attached to most of the controls by the ground team that had put them back
Start it up ‑ different engine note, higher pitched, closer to TIE scream than Starwing growl. Rebel fighters were
designed to fly out under their own power rather than be racked and tractored; he started to work the repulsor
controls, reacting off the ship’s AG, and it pivoted ‑ slowly. Franjia’s was behind him, she was waiting for him to
finish the maneuver; it moved like a sick bantha. He hoped it was just the repulsors. Out over the edge of the bay,
the ‘ground’ dropping out from under him, roll, foils out, and throttle up.
Glance at the throttle, at the instruments; maybe he was doing something wrong. Apparently not. Glance back at
the ship; by most standards, they were moving. By fighter pilot, second best is next to dead, standards ‑ bricks.
Franjia was just behind him. ‘Look, there’s the Golan. We can outrun that, if we try really hard.’
‘Not with the orbital speed it’s making…do these things even do two thousand?’
She tried to put her B‑wing through a barrel roll. It was more of a blubber wallow. ‘Maybe we should write to the
Rebellion, telling them how wonderful we think their new bomber is.’ She suggested, sarcastic.
‘Too much like baby seal clubbing for me.’ Aron said, trying and slushing out of a yo‑yo. ‘Cheap kills are one
thing, but this couldn’t outfight mynocks ‑ and I don’t have their address.’
‘Oh, dreck. Maybe you do ‑ open up the com panel.’ She said, suddenly serious.
‘I left my spanner behind ‑ hey. Rebel freqs, rebel crypto and com security active. What’s that about?’
‘Perhaps,’ she said carefully, ‘the Group Captain and the Bomb Wing Commander wanted to have a private
conversation that no‑one, well no‑one we know,’ apart from the inevitable Imperial Intelligence, ‘could intercept.’
She pinged out ‑ checking if there was anyone else listening on the channel. No‑one who they could detect,

Aron hauled the B‑wing into a long swooping bank, one with a turn radius about three times that of his old
Interceptor. The ship swam across his sights‑ red, enemy coloured box around it. No‑one had bothered to
reprogram the IFF. ‘What do you think it was about, Flight Lieutenant?’ he asked her, formally.
‘What have we been doing in the exercise tanks? Let us have our fun, then sweat it out of us to bring us back up to
readiness, skipper works that way, but I didn’t think you would be too far gone to notice what we were up
against.’ She said.
‘Antiship work, against unknown attackers, and in support of heavy ship to ship. We were beyond visual range and
in heavy jamming, launching on sensor dots.’ Which he had found annoying, but not suspicious.
‘It helps, if you’re a bomber pilot, to know something about the ships you may have to bomb, yes?’ she said,
trying not to sound superior. ‘Sensor dots that moved, took punishment and fired back just like Imperator‑I
‘You mean we’re in training to attack‑‘
‘The local sector group? I think so. The question is, have they gone rogue or have we?’ Franjia wondered, feeling
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rolling away to avoid the Golan and Lancer beyond it. Slowly.
‘Either option scares me. It wasn’t just an exercise. Captain Lennart was taking it far too seriously.’
‘Well, we lost.’ Aron said. ‘The last one, against two attackers, we got mauled.’
‘Because the captain and the bridge team were commanding the attacking pair. The hull team, the command crew
stationed below the bridge tower, were primary. Simulating the tower getting shot off.’ Franjia told him ‑ she had
found out, quite simply, by asking the com‑scan crews who set up the exercise environment.
‘Should I be glad, or scared silly, that I’m on a ship where they prepare for that?’ Aron asked.
‘Depends which side you think we’re going to be on.’ She replied.

‘Speaking of getting shot‑‘ he said.

She tried to answer her own question. ‘Ezirrn Tellick and I were more than just friends, and Ezirrn’s mother threw
herself at him. I know him better than most.’ meaning Captain Lennart, ‘You name the breach of protocol and
uniform regs, he’s probably guilty of it, but he’s loyal.’ She hoped.
‘Which means the sector group aren’t.’ Aron said, slowly. He decided to leave the confession that she had been
sleeping with her previous CO well aside. ‘Why do I suddenly feel better about being in a Rebel fighter?’
‘A piece of dreck like this?’ she laughed, needing some excuse to and glad to move off topic. ‘They’re available in
the sim tanks; they’re pathetic. I wanted to see how accurate the simulators were. Nice guns, but the only possible
use would be to saw off the thrusters, glue the entire thing to the Fulgur, and call it a point defence turret.’
‘Would you describe me as paranoid?’ Aron asked.
‘What, just because you check your chair for land mines? No more than average.’ She replied. It had been a water
balloon, anyway.
‘If we are about to pick a fight with, say, Imperial defectors in place, these things would be great for covert
assassination.’ Aron suggested. The attack force would even be self‑ eliminating.
‘Good point. Let’s go home and land, quickly, before we start to look competent with them.’

In terms of rank and seniority, the general rule ran; invariably a Captain, usually a Captain of the Line, for a cruiser
or larger. Usually a Captain for a destroyer. Frigates were usually a Commander’s ship, and corvettes a Lieutenant‑
Commander’s. It might vary to a grade above or below, independent destroyer a Captain of the Line ‑ a rank
Lennart had been avoiding for years ‑ small ship like a Victory maybe a Commander.
Companies gave their ships names that made no sense ‑ like the Rendili Dreadnaught heavy cruiser, named after
two classes neither of which it was. In practical terms, a medium frigate, between ships like the Acclamator above
and Interdictor below.
The one sure way to tell which class a ship ‘properly’ belonged to was to see which rank held which job, and the
disparity in size meant that the same job was done by different ranks on different ships, the main difference being
in the numbers, not the nature.
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Lieutenant, probably counted as a disturbance in the force.

Commander Ielamathrum Brenn had more seniority than most of the local officials, but a sufficiently median job
not to attract too much attention; accordingly, he hopped a Skipray out to local base, Ghorn IV.
Black Prince was over the relatively pastoral Ghorn III to avoid getting in the way of the traffic around the main
port; that was the system’s main inhabitable, but two of the moons of Ghorn IV had been terraformed and that
was where the main naval and military presence was. What mining and manufacture there was existed around the
other small gas giant, V.
A couple of empty orbits and a lot of empty kilometres between them; he could have micro‑jumped it easily, but
that would have made him look too competent. So run the thrust up, cruise it at high sublight, and take the time
to think.
The absolute record for the Kessel Run still stood at twelve parsecs, by a light freighter pilot who had a price of
two hundred thousand creds on his head now ‑ for reasons other than criminal incompetence. The man had to be
either a genius or an idiot, or both. To choose, and use, a near direct line through the maze ‑ basically playing
pinball with your ship, in the fierce and variable environment of a stellar morgue ‑ it was more of a negative test,
a proof of lack of judgment.
Using a ship with as much power to frontage as that could almost count as cheating; there was also envy involved.
Brenn had conned a Venator through the Kessel run, in hot pursuit of a rebel probe‑ship, in fifteen point one.
Then again, he had also been chasing their own flotilla leader, whose nav had taken an Allegiance class heavy
through in fourteen point six. That man was fleet navigation coordinator on the Executor now, which made Brenn
almost thankful he hadn’t done any better.
The Rebel had hit a plasma jet and never come out, so it was certainly possible to do worse.

He had nothing like as much confidence in his abilities to chart a political course, but the only alternatives were
the Captain, or Gethrim Mirannon, so him it was. His mission was to discuss options, in theory ‑ confer with the
sector group’s staff on how to use the intel data that had been recovered from the Fulgur and its prisoners.
It was sensible, and utterly meaningless. His actual objective was very different; find out how far down the rot
goes. Find out how badly they think they’re doing. Find out if there’s anyone we can trust. No point accelerating to
a speed that would stress the Skipray’s shielding too badly. Boost up to a third lightspeed, drift, decelerate. Hour
and a half. Almost enough time to think of something.
Oh, yes; don’t get caught. By rebel, or imperial, intelligence. Optimist.

Ghorn IV‑a, Quorpall, looked like it had a giant antenna sticking out of it; it had been supposed to have a
beanstalk, for some reason known only to the Republic Terraforming Agency. Somebody sensible on the staff had
realised, half way through the project, that there was nothing whatsoever on the planet worth shunting up and
down the gravity well on that scale. It was just another late‑republic boondoggle, another interest group getting
its share of the public purse. They had finished the shaft, anchored it properly, but there were no elevators, no
transfer station, just another monument to the good engineering and bad politics of the late Republic.
There was a small defence complex on the counterweight asteroid, but most facilities were groundside. The only
unit of any real weight in orbit was a Meridian‑class frigate.
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generation of a distinguished family. Hefty pieces of work; a well handled Meridian could take a badly handled
Victory. Against an Imperator ‑ it might last long enough to be interesting. Her captain could be an important man
to talk to. That would follow.
Re‑enter and put the skipray down on the shuttle pad next to subsector HQ, virtually in the shadow of the
beanstalk. Simple; in his capacity as crack navigator, he could make things easy for himself, which in his capacity
as very mediocre pilot, he needed.
Quorpall had the slightly tingly, too bright feeling of a world whose ecology didn’t really belong there. Land, shut
down, get out.
He was met by an orderly, a young junior lieutenant who led him over to a repulsorjeep. Through the complex, up
to the low dome command centre.

Inside, it was almost arrogantly structurally unsound; heavy galleries of office and admin space suspended from
the ceiling, repulsor‑braced platforms, cool, serene and very neat. He was shown to the conference room, floating
in air; it bobbed slightly as he got in.
Eight people there, two Commanders ‑ one with the rank cylinder of a command officer, one seemingly logistics.
Two Lieutenant‑Commanders, both staff, one sensor and one planning directorate. Four Lieutenants, at least one
of whom would be security. Four stormtroopers.
He plugged his comp into the room’s displays; once the introductions were over, he began. ‘We were lucky. Up to
the last moments of the chase, the rebel frigate believed it had a chance of escape, so they delayed purge
procedures until it was too late. We recovered a good deal of data.’
Three of them winced slightly; one of each rank. Dreck, Brenn thought, I’m outnumbered.
‘We have locations for fleet rendezvous‑ pointless except for what they tell us about procedure; much closer to
traveled space than normal. Very arrogant of them.’
He watched how they reacted; the Meridian’s captain looked embarrassed, at least, but the worried looking
lieutenant, probably an ISB plant, was not impressed at all.
‘We have locations of several more base stations,’ Brenn continued, ‘most of which will be evacuated by now, but
there’s a chance, if we move fast enough‑‘
The logistics Commander objected. ‘A chance of further Rebel ambushes?’
‘We can’t do it all on our own.’ Brenn said, coming on too harsh.
He brought up the sector map. Not time to take the big risk yet, leave Ord Corban strictly alone.
‘We chose this sector to repair and refit after our clash with the Rebel cruiser Mon Evarra because it was the
quietest within reach. Either we were wrong, or the rebels have moved back in, in force. In that case, it’s
imperative we kick them back out again before they become too deeply embedded.’
The security lieutenant relaxed a little.
‘The rebel coding system is penetrable, but their shorthand less so. What is a Neiman‑class base facility, for
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‘They have a structure.’ The planning lieutenant‑commander said. ‘Mostly based on the old republic navy.’
‘Their equipment certainly seems to be.’ Brenn dropped in.
‘What do you mean by that?’ one of the lieutenants said.
‘The local force ‑ local, mark you ‑ flagship seems to be a Venator class destroyer. Very heavy metal, for
‘We have no such data.’ The sensor officer stated.
‘Acquire some, unless you want us to beat you to the mark.’ Brenn said. ‘I presume the sector group is interested
in that big a trophy? We have our hunting license.’
‘Your ship isn’t fit for combat.’ The logistic commander stated. ‘You can’t wander around our sector at random
looking for trouble.’

‘If we did, how much would we find? Your official estimate of rebel presence in the sector has one Dreadnaught
frigate,’ calling up the map, adding the suspected base stations, ‘which seems to be lurking in the barren stars
around here.’
He highlighted a patch of space that included Ord Corban. The planning officer and the security lieutenant’s eyes
flickered in that direction. Ah.
‘It doesn’t include any of the formations ‑ hunter groups, striker groups, warden groups, support groups ‑ that
turn up in the Fulgur’s computer systems. Something needs to be done.’
The discussion dissolved in detail after that, the logistics officer and planner getting increasingly anti ‑ no real
proof, could have been disinformation, need to retain forces to cope with other threats, serviceability issues, alien
presence in the sector. Brenn knew better than to get annoyed with them; he let the locals do that for him. The
local force was understrength; it was a small sector, so it got a small sector group ‑ less than half nominal.
It sounded as if the rebels were being relatively careful not to give the game away; rumours, rumblings, a long
string of minor and distant losses, relatively little done against the Imperial starfleet itself. One of his worst habits,
more or less an occupational disease, was playing with maps. Tied in to the base computers, he started plugging
search routes, standard patrol patterns, effective sensor reach of bases into the map. The sensor‑systems officer
was looking at the map too.
‘Gaps in the system?’
‘I see a lot of relatively intense sweeps of near space, a lot of ships held as reaction force.’ Brenn said. ‘What are
they being held back for?’ He wanted to see what sort of answer he would get. ‘Officially, the sector’s quiet. The
theory is that the only rebel activity we’re likely to see is some form of last desperate objective strike, so we’re
basically on defence and showing the flag.’
An argument broke out at the table. A fair and frank exchange of views, the minutes would call it. The planning
officer was yelling at the ship captain, who was yelling back.
‘You always select the same handful for the plum jobs, and they always come back empty. Rotation is doctrine,
and it’s our turn.’
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Brenn moved to intervene, but the lieutenant buttonholed him. ‘Commander, we need to talk.’
The stormtroopers followed him out; the lieutenant led him up to the peak of the dome, to a suspended pod with
a holonet unit. It activated, and a being Brenn did not recognise, not in uniform, appeared.
Falleen, slightly flabby around the eyesockets, rich, suave. That was strange in itself; they were superb
manipulators, but generally not staunch supporters of the Empire. Having a dent put in your planet did that. So
who was being held hostage for this one’s good behaviour, or was he just a traitor to his own people? As for the
being, personally ‑ unctuous, Brenn would have said at first. Once he began speaking, the navigator would have
preferred ‘pompous prat.’

‘This is the man, Sir.’ The lieutenant addressed the image.

‘I am Moff Xeale. You have blundered into my sector, and into my plans.’
Hello to you too, Brenn thought, trying not to look disgusted.
‘Sir, we’re theatre reserve. So far, we’ve encountered three times as many rebel medium warships as your people
even think exist, so there’s a good case to be made for the theatre reserve becoming involved.’
‘Seven levels of rank below me, and you dare to suggest anything at all? Lieutenant, you,’ pointing at the security
man, ‘leave the room.’ The lieutenant smiled viciously, at Brenn, patted his holstered blaster, left.
Calm, Brenn thought. Don’t give anything away. Don’t get into trouble.
‘I am not impressed by your patchwork, vagrant ship. How does that reflect on the might of the empire?’ the Moff
said, sarcasm dripping off his voice. ‘How will my systems react to that mockery of Imperial glory?’ So that was
how he was going to defend it. Politics first.

‘We’re a working ship. We are behind in our cosmetic repairs, Sir ‑ other systems came first.’
‘No wonder you are a reserve vessel; no reputable sector would have you. You will do no work here.’
‘Sir, with all due respect‑‘ the Falleen changed colour slightly, becoming angrier red ‑ ‘you aren’t directly in our
chain of command. We operate logistically to directorate III, Sindavathar region command, administratively to
Hundred and Forty‑Ninth Fleet, operationally to Destroyer Squadron 851.’ Half a galaxy away, no longer existent,
and provisional respectively.
‘Are you refusing an order?’ the Falleen’s eyes glowed.
‘Of course not, Sir; but as is established protocol, we will inform our own chain of command. A bare order to allow
the rebels to go unintercepted‑‘
‘Is an order, and must be obeyed as such.’ The Moff leaned back in his chair, gave every appearance of thinking
about it.
‘There are…plans, you see. We allow them to believe they have a safe haven, until ‑ they are visible, and the
moment is ripe. Then, and only then, we will sweep them from the heavens.’ Said with clenched fist. For a
moment, it was so typically megalomaniacal, Brenn actually believed it.

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‘This had better be good, I’m supposed to be delivering a lecture on advanced damage control. What is it?’
Mirannon asked, mainly for form’s sake.
‘Political damage control. I’ve just gone and planted a suspected rebel spy on the exec.’ Lennart admitted.
‘Well, if you want them to get a false idea of what’s going on, you couldn’t do better. What has this got to do with
‘Traditionally,’ Lennart said, smiling, ‘it’s supposed to be a five year old child. I figure that for pure unadulterated
logic, an engineer is the next best thing.’
‘Something,’ Mirannon bounced back at him, ‘I assume you weren’t guilty of at the time.’
‘Oh, when an incident that absurd presents itself ‑ I tried writing it up to report to regional command, but it
looked so kriffing ridiculous on paper.’
Mirannon pulled a datapad out of his pocket, started sketching.
‘Hmm?’ Lennart made a questioning noise.
‘Setting the problem up as a venn diagram. Whose areas of knowledge and social connection overlap.’ Some of it
macro’d in, most of it was rapidly scribbled. Mirannon kept up a running commentary. ‘‑two orders away from
Sn(2), inadvertence, pr.5 of deliberate infochanting with Sn(4) via op F‑sub‑E2‑‘
‘You’re doing this deliberately, aren’t you?’ Lennart asked.
‘Yes, and you’re right. It does look ridiculous on paper.’

Mirannon plugged the datapad into the desk’s holoprojector, displayed the nested bubbles in all their bafflement.
‘Much better. Now you can draw conclusions that don’t depend on instinct.’
‘Assuming I can make sense of it at all.’ Lennart grumbled good‑ naturedly.
‘You did interrupt me on the way to give a lecture. You know how one of these is supposed to work.’
‘Ah, I think I see. The exec, for instance, is in three fields ‑ no, five.’
‘I did have to simplify a lot. And yes, fields within fields. He knows most of what there is to know of basic‑
knowledge‑of‑the‑Empire, but a lot less of basic‑knowledge‑about‑the‑Alliance.
Long, narrow ellipse? He has a social overlap now with someone who ‑ depth of colour is degree of certainty ‑ has
access to a subset of secret‑knowledge‑of‑the‑Alliance, and‑‘
‘Assuming this has any relationship to reality at all.’ Lennart said, sceptically.
‘Abstracted but relevant, trust me ‑ threatened versus exploitable knowledge space, and ‑ I was right first time. It
was a dumb move.’
‘Assuming active manipulation by the participants?’
‘Plug in the factors for that, and ‑ still dumb. No matter how finely balanced it comes out, assuming she has
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‘You needed a diagram to work that out? Assume that I had a reason, not yet obvious from this. What would it be?’
‘Disinformation flow. Do you need help coming up with any useful lies?’
‘It would come in handy.’ Lennart admitted. ‘The basic plan was to make them think we’re not trusted. That
whatever we realise, and whatever we attempt, is going to be marginalized by sector group and dismissed entirely
or not supported.’
‘First make sure that it actually is a lie.’ Mirannon said.
‘Brenn’s on that at the moment. The other reason is that, socially, I think it’ll be good for him.’
‘Something has malfunctioned in your head.’ Mirannon said, flatly.
‘What do you suggest I do with him, then? We need him, so how do I bring him, metaphorically, on board? Left to
myself, I would run too loose a ship. It could cripple his career, to promote him one day and break him the next.
At the time, I thought he deserved it.’ Lennart said.
‘Throwing him a rebel to play mind games with could do more than just cripple his career. You do realise that
you’ve gone from worrying about his prospects to, I think the vidshow phrase is ‘used as an unwitting pawn’, in
one breath?’
‘I know. Getting the crappy end of the stick‑ I want him to have more sense of how that feels. Yes, I know, I’m
probably going to make him worse, and no, I’m not going to let him take it out on the crew.’ Lennart decided.
‘Trying to teach humility to a desk officer ‑ twenty thousand years of history are against you.’ Mirannon pointed
‘Maybe so. Have you been talking to the ground complement lately?’
‘They have been helpful.’ Mirannon said. ‘I know they’re incorruptible, but it would be useful if they were,
fractionally, so we could actually do something for them to say thank you.’
They were not technically adept, most of them, but they were diligent, sharp‑eyed, and unwavering. Once you told
them what the right thing to do was, they got on with it.
‘I had to interview some of the veterans and specialists, about the old days, the republic and the Force.’
‘Hmph.’ The engineer snorted. ‘Whatever advantages there may be to it, I already have the strong and weak
nuclear, electromagnetic and gravitic forces to occupy my time. I don’t need psionics on top.’
‘I’d be more certain of that myself, if it wasn’t the fashionable view.’ Lennart said.
‘That’s what twenty years of indoctrination does for you.’
‘Gethrim, you had better hope you never get transferred away from this ship, because describing official policy in
terms of open indoctrination ‑ you could be shot for that.’ Lennart said, half amused, half worried.
‘Some physics models apply very closely to politics. Ideological influence, to put it politely ‑ I’d call it propaganda
‑ expands to fill the available space. You think the people responsible for it don’t think technically about it?’ The
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‘Maybe they do, but that wasn’t what I was interested in. The Force. Facts.’
‘Takes us straight back to propaganda, and what the Jedi wanted us to think about the Force. They colonised the
mind‑space around it; raise and maintain their authority, thought control over their own‑ and at some point, they
went from knowing how much spin they were using to actually believing their own take on it.’ Mirannon stated.
‘This is part of your operational responsibilities how, exactly?’ Lennart asked him.
‘We’re in a physical, not a social vacuum. Believe it or not, we have to worry about people, even if not designing
for them we have to design around them. Or, if you want it that way, idiot proofing.’
Lennart shook his head. ‘One of these days…so they lied to their own students, who grew up believing the lie and
passing it on as truth. That much makes sense. I wonder to what extent we do the same?’
‘More than we want to acknowledge. Anyway, simple logic; if the Force flows from every living thing, then every
living thing has the Force. Irrelevant to minor in most, if there ever was data to make good estimates on, it’s not
accessible now.
Major powers ‑ there has to be more potential out there than they ever succeeded in tapping. Minor abilities, that
could be mistaken for high fitness, good judgement or dumb luck; probably trillions use the Force without being
consciously aware of it.’
‘I was afraid of that.’ Lennart admitted.
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­01­09 10:06am

Ch 10‑A

‘Today’s topic: how to abuse a tensor field.’ The chief began.

That raised a few eyebrows. The audience were a mixture of junior officers who needed to know, senior officers in
for a refresher and members of other departments who wanted to know what Engineering was up to.
A hand went up; gunnery, port battery commander.
‘Abuse, commander?’
‘Nine tenths of the technology we use‑ 91.2% to be exact‑‘ only the engineers realised it was a joke‑ ‘is described
by the function it performs, or by the manufacturer’s advertising department.
Don’t get me started on the subject of durasteel; and we have ‘power converters’, that in the forces they convert,
from and to, are entirely separate technologies from each other. It’s as loose and woolly a term as “flying

The ‘lecture hall’ was actually one of the bays of Main Machinery, subsection 2; sub‑1 was the MCR, the master
control centre for the ship’s engineering functions, sub‑2 was central repair and reconstruction. Most of the
audience was sitting or leaning against disabled component parts; the chief engineer’s lectern was an auxiliary
power unit from one of the main turrets, and there were about eight hundred manufacturing droids stored on the
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‘The specifications come from the same sources. Abuse is a loose term; properly, use to it’s limits.’ Holodisplay;
Force field architecture of an Imperator‑ class destroyer.
Secondary display; force field architecture of a Venator‑ class destroyer.
‘Basic observation, people. What changed from one generation to the next?’
‘Modularity?’ one of the main drive technical officers‑ Lieutenant Marnart‑ asked.
‘Correct. A good decision, made for the wrong reasons.’ The displays showed coloured dots, red tensor, blue
stasis, green relative inertial, turquoise hyperdrive, orange atmospheric, yellow particle and violet ray shielding
generators, haze around them showing areas of effect.
‘The Venator is wartime construction. Of the ship rather than combat functions, one of each plus
secondary/backup. To improve, it is necessary, and I mean it this time, to abuse it or replace it, frequently
necessary after abusing it in any event.’
‘Why wasn’t she designed to the limits of the technology to begin with?’ damage control Lieutenant Sprenger.
‘Cost, safety and diminishing returns. Cost; two hyperdrive cores are more expensive than one plus the support
machinery to expand the hyperfield to the same area.
Safety; our multiples have to be integrated with each other. This places a burden on the skills and computing
resources of the ship that is non‑trivial.
Diminishing returns; take a hypothetical. With a 100kps2 relative inertial field, this ship becomes a danger to her
crew. Power hungry, inefficient, causes unnecessary strain, and you now stand a good chance of being slammed to
your death against the fore rather than aft bulkheads.’
Slight ripple of laughter at that. The chief engineer carried on. ‘The Imperator is post war construction. This
changes the design objectives. The Venator is more efficient in the short term, but their service life is two
centuries at best, and the single large generator format makes them expensive and difficult to refit.
The Imperator class‑ one of whose design objectives was to deal with the refuse left over by the clone wars‑ is
more efficient in the long term. The redundant multiple medium generator format makes us more damage
tolerant‑ with proper system management‑ easier to repair by replacing damaged elements of the network, easier
to upgrade if the investment becomes materially or politically possible. Also, the convolutions of baffling and
mirroring necessary to get an even field intensity out of generators which obey the inverse square law become
more manageable.’
‘If I ever allow any of you to slack off long enough to read it,’ Mirannon said, looking at the engineering personnel,
‘I have a file of the considered‑and‑rejected design proposals for the Imperator that rewards study. Particularly
as, given KDY’s other commitments and the politically driven haste the Imperator design was finalised with, the
yards license‑ building them filled in the blanks largely to their own ideas. Frequently with elements rejected for
the official design.
Sienar‑ built ships, recognisable by their more centralised hyperdrive arrangements, have the worst maintenance
and serviceability records in the fleet; carelessness caused by corporate envy.
Even KDY/Fondor versions are different from KDY/Kuat‑ more heavily armoured and fractionally slower, sub‑
control centres separately armoured, fire control and sensors more sensitive but less jam resistant, their most
serious flaw is an old school ring‑main power system.’
‘This ship?’ one of Brenn’s plotters asked.
‘Correllian built, which is good. Not luck‑ determinism, we wouldn’t have survived this long unless she had been.
The 695 to 782 batch were assembled to very stringent specifications because Correllian Engineering were aiming
for a larger share of the construction tenders. They actually tried to win a contract by producing a superior
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Roughly a third of the personnel present.

‘I wish. They do a lot of refit business, though. KDY/Kuat’s build quality started high but declined with growing
complacency, Fondor’s began as mediocre and improved, Loronar’s are distinctively more fragile, lighter and
faster, and Rendili stuck their own bridge tower design on the 11280 to 11431 batch as well as replacing between
ten to thirty of the LTL’s with medium turbolaser clusters and missile tubes. Those are the ones that made it into
‘Sir, I know we’re supposed to be here to learn about structural reinforcement fields, but could you tell us more
about the rejected elements of the design?’ Sprenger asked.
‘You’re going to go away knowing what I want you to know. The only variable is how much time you sidetrack me
into wasting on other matters first… The most interesting is a massively parallel multiple micro generator design.
That would have broken the ship up into fifteen thousand separate zones, each with it’s own fighter class or better
hyper, stasis, tensor and relative inertial nodes.
It failed primarily because of the massive overload it would have placed on the human component. Also because
the individual nodes, as a consequence of their size, had limited capability.
There were two further developments; one which ventured into utter lunacy, by encapsulating each zone. The ship
would have resembled fifteen thousand light freighters glued together. Combined and separate combat modes for
a ship like that would have been interesting verging on bizarre.
Not everything possible is good to do‑ there are very good reasons that one stayed on the drawing board.’
‘Massive overload on the human component? Sir, is that a euphemism for “splat”?’ one of the fighter wing ground
crew, a tech sergeant.
‘No, it means that by the time you’d finished learning how to look after them properly you would have been eight
years dead.
Actually, frequently it is a euphemism for splat. The splinter version would have had a malfunction and accident
rate well beyond any sustainable or acceptable limit. Believe it or not, the engineering department does respect
human limitations. Occasionally. Most of the time, we just bitch about them.’
He drank from his glass of water‑ there had been a spate of practical jokes a couple of months back; something in
the water, and half the ship had been peeing emerald green. The joker responsible had never been caught; the
chief suspects were the medics. And himself.
He went on; ‘Maintenance and upgradeability is my hobby‑bantha, not the topic at hand, and I will ramble on it at
the end of the lecture, not the beginning. Tensor fields; what are they?’ He looked for a non‑ engineer to get an
answer from.
‘They, ah, reduce tension on the ship’s hull by exporting part of her mass into subspace…?’ one of the galley staff
‘Droids, lynch that man.’ Mirannon turned to them; they were inhibited from anything of the sort, but most of
them had acquired enough personality to act it. They activated, turned glowing eyes on him, started to clank
‘I’m sorry I didn’t mean it‑‘ he gabbled.
Mirannon turned to the droids. ‘Stand down.’
‘Although,’ he continued to the cook, ‘you probably do deserve it. No. And relative inertial fields don’t rely on
subspace, either, something else described by function rather than mechanics.
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couplings from drive to hull frame, a mesh of compartment‑ localised gravitic nodes, and how many lectures do
you expect me to give at once? Tensors.’
Another holodiagram. ‘If you go far enough back, you find stress fields‑ the ancestors of our tensor field, and
another backwards description. The tensor field counteracts stresses in the members of the ship.
Stress fields did this literally, creating opposing and cancelling pressures‑ converting to more easily withstood
forms‑ which did relatively little for the service lives of the ships they were fitted to.
A tensor field generates a binding and stabilising force within the hull material on the order of the binding energy
of an atomic nucleus; this is very easy for it, because that’s exactly what it is.’
‘So how do we abuse it?’ the propulsion engineer, Marnart, asked.
‘A strong nuclear force field deploys, and anyone who is surprised by this will have their brain remedially
overclocked, nuclear levels of energy. If we lose power trunking, the tensor field can be tapped from the nearest
local generator as a capacitor bank and input to the local grid.
This is less efficient than doing it properly, but provides a valuable interim measure until we can rig proper DC
cable. This has further synergistic benefits; it means we need fewer APUs, which gives us a better mass
distribution, improving agility, therefore evasion, reducing the need for them.
Secondly, it can be used to fill in jobs that no structural member could do. Members which may or are required to
deform‑ Durasteel doesn’t flex well. In context. There are as many different compositions of durasteel as there
are of steel‑ a detail we will go into later.
Most of the elasticity of the hull comes from the tensor field. The hull frame attachments points are minimal
material, mostly field.
The tensor field also serves as the retaining wall for most of the rest of the force fields. It would be possible to
project a tensor field without a material carrier, and have it perform most of the functions of a ship‑ and if any of
you are crazy enough to volunteer to test the idea, then you’re too stupid to live anyway and I might let you.’

‘No, thank you, sir‑ but why do we have a two meter thick armoured hull, if the force field is tougher than the hull
anyway? Why all that material, why not simple plating?’ Sprenger, again, asked.
‘Short version‑ we need a framework to bolt the other force field generators to. If properly designed, the fields are
mutually supportive. The relative inertials reduce stress on the hull which reduces the load on the tensors,
lowering power requirement out of or increasing margin of safety in combat.
There are some interesting things you can do with a stasis field, thermal conductivity and incoming turbolaser fire,
‘So if the hull’s just a metrology aid‑‘
‘The stresses imposed on it by the force field architecture are substantial; orders of magnitude better than bare
metal, but still demanding. The hull is also our fail safe.
It has to possess sufficient strength to function without the force fields. If properly put together‑ and dockyard
workmanship plays at least as large a part in this as basic design‑ should be able to support and withstand a
failing force field complex long enough for us to remedy or execute controlled shutdown.
Lastly it must be a material or composite of materials that can benefit from tensor and relative inertial fields. Iron,
at the lowest point of the binding energy curve, is too stable for this.
Depleted‑electron‑shell materials are advantageous, nuclei closer together and we turn a disadvantage into an
advantage by using the opportunity to apply active electromagnetic binding and stabilisation also.
Neutronium would be perfect, if we had drives of literally infinite power. Stealth is nearly irrelevant, because when
we are emitting stellar power levels from the ion drive, we’re approximately as visible as if we did.
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numbers may wish to leave now. Now consider a material structure of composition…’

Two supposedly secret transmissions. One of which crossed the signal intercept team’s desk, the other did not.
Embedded in a message, supposedly to her sister;
Vineland sector, oversight group eleven.
Hathren, J. System cell Ghorn, network Lobat‑4, reporting.
Situation complicated. I have been conscripted into the Imperial Navy as the result of an incident‑ refer to the
news. I am on board the ship currently at the top of our watch list, and in a position of some access.
Frankly, it’s far too good to be true. I hope this harmonic coding is as secure as it’s supposed to be.
I have been employed‑ they haven’t even tried particularly hard to indoctrinate me yet, and yes, I know how
dubious that sounds, it’s far from the only worrying thing about this situation‑ as a personal servant, they call
them stewards, to look after an officer in disgrace.
It’s possible that they want me to do them a favour by abducting him. From what I have been able to see of life on
board this ship, something as basically abnormal as that seems to be a daily occurrence.
When I said I wanted to do something different, this wasn’t what I had in mind. To achieve as much as we know
they have, the crew of this ship must be sharper than they seem. Common sense eaten up completely by their
jobs? It would fit.
This ship is in much better condition on the inside than the outside. I have some access to the ship’s personnel
files‑ one of the people I was involved with is possibly the top ranking gunner in the sector, never mind the ship,
and he could pass for fifteen. Away from the trigger.
I can’t funnel bulk data through a covert channel like this; I’ll have to cherrypick. The ship is theatre reserve, not
local; she has wider access. It seems odd to call a ship named ‘Black Prince’ she, but they refer to her that way.
Anyway, it will take time for me to get into a position to extract and exfiltrate. I’ll trickle what I can, and should
have valuable data when‑ let’s not tempt fate; if‑ I do.
Defection prospects? Unlikely. With so much blood on their hands, they would be unwelcome in the Alliance, and
besides, they would probably make us look bad.

Candidate/Watcher 22173, reporting.

Interim observation, candidate Lennart, J.A.
Status; unpromising. Candidate has genuine talent, intuitive/precognitive, sense related, but is under only
moderate pressure to develop it. Candidate is a man of significant status and other talents, but little outward
Recommendation; push rather than pull. To force development of his abilities, a threat to what he already has is
indicated. Perhaps this ship would make a fitting flagship for one of your protégées.

Secondary subject, Mirannon, G.K.Q. 101/263
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Status; contraindicated. Subject has displayed a number of task‑ related abilities apparently without broader
grounding, but is only subliminally aware of them if at all. Subject is also openly contemptuous of such talents.
Recommendation; playing on this one’s pride and ambition could work, but given his attitude and approach, it
would be difficult to make use of him.
Security warning; prime prospect intuited his way to a nearly complete understanding of the Ord Corban
operation. Subject is loyal, but from pragmatic reasons. Rebel exploitation of this cannot be delayed much longer‑
see candidate recommendation.

One lecture, two messages, three captains.

In Lennart’s day cabin, Commander Aythellar Barth‑Elstrand, whose Meridian was orbiting nearby, and Senior
Lieutenant Ertlin Kondracke, whose Lancer was under repair just adjacent.
‘Gentlemen, thank you both for coming to see me.’ He was a senior captain, in charge of a fleet destroyer; there
was no way they wouldn’t. His politeness warned them something was up, though.
‘I wish this was simple ship visiting; instead, I have a problem and a possible solution to put to you.’ Lennart was,
rarely, properly and impeccably uniformed; his typical state of half undress wouldn’t do, not for this. He had to
look as thoroughly, officially imperial as possible.

Kondracke looked barely old enough for his command, something made worse by the sling on his arm. He looked
like a child who had fallen out of a tree. Elstrand was fair‑ haired and red faced, looked more like a prosperous
bantha rancher than a fleet officer.
‘What is it, Captain?’
‘You were very quick to come to support us.’ Lennart said. ‘I’m guessing you don’t get too many opportunities to
use your guns in anger?’ the young man’s face opened up.
‘Captain, the local rebels are driving me mad. We hear snatches of comm, catch bursts of drive light, chase broken
holonet threads, they’re there. They have to be. We never get within gun range of them. Well, until now.’
‘Same situation. We have the sense that we’re being played with.’ Elstrand added. ‘Your ship’s seen more action in
two weeks than the sector fleet has in two years.’

Lennart nodded. ‘They have come gunning for us, and as a result of that we have taken down and brainripped
enough of them that we now have more to go on than the sector fleet. Enough, I think.’
‘So where do we fit in?’ Elstrand asked. He realised a second later that he hadn’t called his superior officer ‘Sir’;
significant breach of discipline. Two seconds after that it sank in that Lennart hadn’t called him on it.
‘The information from the captured frigate strongly indicates the rebels have a very strong presence in the sector,
protecting a hidden facility.’ Hidden in plain sight, behind the Ubiqtorate.
There was another double‑play going on there, especially with an alien Moff, Lennart could almost taste the edges
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‘What?’ Kondracke shouted. ‘They’re‑ they’re allowing this?’

‘I hoped you’d react like that.’
‘Allow me to second my junior colleague’s outrage, Sir.’ Elstrand said.
‘It wouldn’t be the first do not engage order in the navy’s history, or the least well thought out‑ your Moff told my
Navigator that he was leading the rebels into a trap. Lulling them into a false sense of security.’ Lennart’s tone
indicated what he thought of that.
‘We have more than enough real work to do in this sector without political bullsh‑ er, interference, Sir.’ This sector
had a lot of money spent on it by the Republic Terraforming Agency, and relatively little of it wisely.
Four running ecological catastrophes, one imminent nova, two alien species, one economically expansionist and
one too widespread to be anything like as peaceful as they seemed.
‘I know. Which is why I intend to use the standing orders of the Imperial Starfleet on supporting other ships to get
around that,’ Lennart informed them, watching their enthusiasm grow, ‘and set up a very public, very noticeable
meeting engagement. Are you with me?’ He hardly had to ask; they were.
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­01­18 07:49pm

Ch 10‑B

‘Do you know what the most annoying thing about being a part‑ time white hat is?’ Aldrem asked the rest of his
team, rolling out of the line of fire behind a prickly shrub, one of many in the artificial jungle.
‘Not being allowed to shoot each other.’ Gendrik snarled back, annoyed. For people whose jobs revolved around
shooting and being shot at, an alarming number of Stormtroopers seemed to enjoy it as a hobby as well. ‘Playing
with fresh meat’ also came pretty high on the list.
It was a triple function facility; backup life support and food production, recreation, training ground. It could have
passed for a botanical garden, if it wasn’t for the stun blaster bolts going back and forward. Surprisingly, the
plants didn’t react badly to being stunned; some of them even thrived under it. Just as well, considering.
The troopers had reacted fairly predictably to having a turret crew team dumped on them; they had done their
duty, coldly and professionally. When no one who might be disturbed was looking, they laughed their asses off.
The fifteen gunners had been thrown in at the deep end. Fitness training, weapons training ‑ Suluur had dented
their smugness a little by outshooting all of the instructors with a heavy rifle ‑ survival training, and exercises like
They called it ‘tactical awareness’; the list to volunteer as opposing force was long. A chance to shoot navy ‑ why
The control chamber had a dozen troopers in it, ten more than necessary.
‘Preliminary evaluation ‑ wash them out. Transfer them to the Starfleet.’ The staff sergeant in the master control
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‘That would be inappropriate, Sergeant. They’re not here to learn to be stormtroopers, they’re here to learn to
leave the close assault business to the professionals.’ One of the spectators ‑ Omega‑blue‑17‑Aleph One ‑ said.
‘Three of them are enjoying it, Sir. Com/Scan Tech Suluur, PO Hruthhal, Weapon Mechanic (Leading) Tarshkavik ‑
they could do well with proper training. In fact Suluur may be too good for a rookie. He’s done this before.’
‘They all have, at least once.’
‘They could be useful, Sir. The senior chief’s the best shot with an emplacement weapon I’ve ever seen. Although I
do not understand how he achieved his rank.’ The sargeant’s scorn ‑ and envy ‑ was evident in his voice.
‘In the army he would be a Specialist‑9, but the star fleet has no efficient way of dealing with men of high skill and
low fitness for responsibility ‑ short of making them junior lieutenants.’

Fifteen minutes, it was supposed to take, to set up an E‑Web.

Those fifteen minutes included leveling the tripod, building up an earth and ablative foamcrete berm to protect it,
digging in the generator, making contact with neighbouring units, setting up aim point and fire arc markers in the
enhanced sight system, and getting the rest of the squad in place to provide defensive crossfire and keep any
approaching grenadiers’ heads down.
‘Crash Action’‑ plonk the damned thing down any way it went and hose the target‑ took ten seconds, if that.
Aldrem had taken to the E‑web instantly, and had been overheard wondering whether he could get one assigned
to himself, personally, and how he could probably fit it on a repulsorsled, and wouldn’t planet leave be much safer
with their own organic fire support?
Even most of his own team thought he was nuts. They knew he was kidding, but they still didn’t trust him.

‘Areath, go right, round that funky thing with the blue flowers and tendrils. If it tries to eat you, vape it.’
‘With an exercise blaster hardwired to stun. Right.’
‘Then kriffing well beat it to death.’ Aldrem said, popping up and firing a long burst at a low, spreading, vaguely
animate looking food plant.
Three stormtroopers, well out of the line of fire, shot back at him, he dived for cover, one of them connected and
he went down twitching like a rattlesnake; Suluur shot back, rapidly dropping two of them. The old reflexes were
coming back now, which was probably bad for him. He dropped behind a set of trays, looked around to see who
was still on his feet.
Stang, he thought, that looked far too competent. He stuck his head up, looking for a way to get shot that didn’t
seem too suspicious.
‘Advisory, Sir.’ The training staff sergeant, KF‑5614, asked Aleph One. ‘Are there any other considerations we
should be aware of?’
‘In other words, why am I interested?’
‘I never before appreciated how large the difference is between ‘unflinching’ and ‘too dumb to duck’, Sir.’ KF‑
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‘You think we’re beating a set of learned reflexes into them that will make them less efficient in their primary job?’
‘I believe that may be the case. This is the basic training the Starfleet gets them to unlearn when it goes about
turning them into efficient gunners, Sir.’
‘Don’t worry. These are some of the ship’s problem children. They’ll do something absurd and be put on an
intensive gunnery refresher course sooner or later.’
‘I see, Sir.’ The training sergeant wanted to know more, but was too disciplined to ask.

Captain broadcasting to the crew;

‘All hands, this is Captain Lennart. As most of you know, we’ve been busy lately. Unfortunately, it turns out that
there’s a reason for this. This sector is quiet not because there are no rebels, but because it seems they have an
interest in not drawing attention. They have strong base facilities they do not want to have exposed, so when we
blundered in, they tried twice for a relatively cheap kill, which only got me…interested.
'If they have any sense, they’ll now be keeping their heads down and waiting for us to go away. Unfortunately,
events indicate they do in fact have some sense. What I think happened is an Alliance internal communications
SNAFU; regional command sent units to assault us and the tender, local command threw a fit when they found
out. They have too much of a logistic base here to hazard it. We’re more or less operational now, and I would be
pleasantly surprised if they decided to try again.
'Coincidentally, and I know some rumours have been emanating from the fighter wing, the sector Moff has asked
us to go away too. He says he has things in hand. This is a Moff who let things get this bad in the first place, so
colour me skeptical.
'We are going to be following a course of action that may seem…dubious, verging on outright disloyalty.
'There won’t be time for detailed explanations, not until afterwards, but we are acting in the best interests of the
Empire‑ under cover of a thick screen of bluff and poodoo.
'Some of you who have been with this ship longest will remember similar operations. You know what a high WTF
factor they usually have. Our objective is to lure Alliance forces into a straight fight; but it is going to be a twisty,
windy path getting them there.
'Internal operations will continue as normal, and if external events confuse you, spare a thought for the command
team who actually have to manage it all. Black Prince Actual out.’

Around the ship, various people took the news in their own way.
Hathren, J., rebel spy in residence, was dumbfounded. There were still a lot of her people in the cells, she daren’t
do anything about helping them without blowing her cover. Yet. She had a half‑formed escape plan, and it would
be easier and safer if it was a mass escape. But how much more would there be to find out?
Most Rebel captains ‑ certainly the very formal Mon Cal ‑ would tell their crews far less than this, never mind
Imperial Starfleet.
This was professional opportunity beyond her wildest dreams. She knew perfectly well she was probably going to
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Not the only one. The man she had been assigned to, Mirhak‑Ghulej, spent most of his time sitting on the edge of
his bunk, looking lost. He twitched, he ranted, he sat in black depression.
She was used to handling awkward customers; she needed all that experience. His world had just turned round
and bit him.
The other people she had to work with ‑ they were, in a word, different. Whatever popular support the Rebellion
had, the overwhelming majority of those at the sharp end were there for a reason. Some ideology, some incident,
some Imperial brutality. This bunch was ‑ the word she was looking for, she finally decided, was normal.
For the given circumstances, of course. They were mostly male, surrounded by high technology, with duties,
responsibilities and enough firepower to depopulate a world down to the algae, but given that, basically stable.
For a given, bored, grumpy, practical joke ridden value of stable, anyway. He took no notice of her, until much
later that day; she came back to his cabin, after fetching a snack from the galley, and found someone had pumped
helium into his quarters’ air‑system.
‘Someone’, internal arrangements varied; on most ships, life support belonged to Logistics and Supply branch, on
the Black Prince the lifesystem belonged to Engineering. Lennart had long since given up trying to hold back their
colonial tendencies. Their version of the shoulder patch had the knight holding a hydrospanner, as often as not.
He started to bawl her out, stiff faced, harsh and typically Imperial, but it came out in such a high‑pitched whine,
she started to chuckle. He shouted at her more, which only made her worse, until she doubled over in ‑ the
helium was wafting out of the room ‑ squeaky laughter. As she did, she noticed the glint of a lens poking round
the corridor corner.

The Exec’s quarters were the largest and best appointed unit in a quarters block directly adjacent to damage
control central; in combat, the captain ran things from the bridge, the chief engineer from the MCR, the Assistant
Chiefs oversaw their components of the ship, one of the two Deputy Chiefs went to the bridge, one to DC central.
The way it was supposed to work was that the exec made decisions from the operational point of view, prioritising
what they needed fixed, and the deputy chief assigned assets to do it. It looked as if he had decided that what
needed to be done was embarrass the exec, live on camera.

He was still shouting, grabbed her and tried to get her to stand up straight, managed it ‑ she was too busy
laughing ‑ tried to slap her. She moved instinctively to block, caught herself just as she was about to slam the
edge of her hand into his throat.
He looked as surprised as she was. She stepped back along the corridor, breathed deeply to get any helium out of
her lungs, and said, ‘If you really, truly cannot see the funny side of this, then I reckon you deserve everything the
captain did to you.’
That boggled him. He couldn’t. She took his arm, guided him back into his chambers as she would a half‑cut idiot
out of the door of the inn.
She sat him down, controlled her own laughter well enough to talk, squeakily.
‘I looked at your file, as well.’ She admitted, knowing how much trouble it could get her into. ‘You’re Mr. Clean,
aren’t you? Never been on the receiving end…not even violations of uniform codes, never had so much as a civil
parking ticket. What I think this is about is, well, showing you the crappy end of the stick. Showing you ‑ from the
victim’s point of view ‑ what the punishments its your job to hand out mean.’
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‘How would you react to someone who took a disciplining this badly?’ she decided on a harder approach. It
sounded absurd under the helium, but what wouldn’t?
‘I’d…they would be obviously unfit, so I would keep riding them until they were broke or resigned from the
service.’ He said, thinly.
‘So now you’re punishing yourself as well. Great Space, how did you ever get this far? What you have to do now is
to prove that you are fit, to yourself and to him. Those recommendations should take almost as long to read as
they will to write; how does he expect to do that? What shortcut is Captain Lennart planning to use? Work it out,
exploit it yourself.’
His face brightened; he should have thought of that himself, but it was still a good idea. The air was starting to
clear; evidently they had given up on the helium.
‘The other thing is to work out what to say on those recommendations, to prove you deserve your job back.’
He was already moving towards his desk and the stack of datapads with the files.

Franjia Rahandravell and Aron Jandras didn’t dare say what they were thinking, because they were being detailed
for the craziest mission either of them had ever heard of. It would only have been a long string of swear words,
‘They call it a destabilisation operation, I believe.’ Olleyri had them in the ready room of Alpha squadron.
‘They can call it anything they like, I think it’s crazy.’ Aron was standing, leaning over the desk, trying not to shout
at the commander air group, and getting close to ceasing to care.
‘That’s exactly why you’re the man for the job.’
‘What,’ Franjia asked, ‘because he has no faith in this, that makes him appropriate? And what about me?’
‘You’re right. It is fundamentally insane. The situation that makes it necessary is demented. So it fits perfectly.’
Olleyri told them.
‘I’m not that good an actress.’
‘We’re not going to get them to break cover for anything less. Think about it. To get the Rebs to come out to play,
we need to give them an objective they can’t ignore, and a situation they can realistically do something about. We
hand our captives over to the locals and appear to sail off, they organise a public, judicial murder of our prisoners
‑ doesn’t that disgust you? Even a little?’
‘Would it shock you,’ Franjia asked him ‑ both of them, really ‑ ‘if I said no?’
‘Not much, no.’ Olleyri replied. ‘The reason its you ‑ rebel frequencies?’
‘Why,’ Aron rounded on her, ‘did you have to work it out?’
‘As well hung for a bantha as a nerf. What’s really going on?’ she asked Olleyri.
Olleyri didn’t know. He tried to bluff it out. ‘If you know, who else do you think might find out?’
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trained for it, and I’m pretty sure I’m not going to be any good at it.’
‘Nonsense. Command is at least half acting, you ought to know that, and most of the rest is paperwork. The
practical rebels will be overjoyed to have two experienced pilots, the idealistic side ‑ it’s just the sort of fairytale
they love to lap up. And you are going to lead them into such a trap, any Imperial officer would have been proud
to set it up.’
‘I get shivers,’ Aron said, ‘when anyone starts talking about me in the past tense.’
‘Kriff, I didn’t mean that; you are supposed to come back.’ Admittedly, he had no idea how. ‘But you are definitely
supposed to go.’ He handed each of them a datapad. ‘Read, memorise, destroy. Report to me when you’re ready,
They saluted, turned to leave.
In the corridor outside Alpha’s bay,
‘Franjia‑‘ Aron began. He hardly ever called her that, and especially not outside the cockpit.
She turned and looked down at him. ‘Yes, Squadron Leader?’
‘We’re supposed to be striking out on our own, rediscovering our consciences and our individuality.’ He was
standing very close; she put a hand on his chest, gently pushed him back.
‘No.’ He looked hurt, shrivelled. ‘I shared a bed for almost a year with Ezirrn Tellick.’ She confirmed what he knew.
She would have added that she didn’t come as a perk of the job, didn’t think she needed to go that far.
‘I know, Franjia,’ he said, sounding pleading, ‘it’s too soon ‑ but dammit, by the time you feel, you’re ready, you
know what I mean, we’ll be “just friends” ‘‑ or dead‑ ‘and it’ll be too late.’
‘It’s too soon for you, too.’ She said. ‘There’s a mess in your head, of anger at being in this, envy, jealousy, a little
lust and all the usual madnesses of the fighter pilot‑ I don’t want you to pour that over me. Or expose you to
She turned on her heel, heading for the simulators; she wanted to put in some B‑wing time. Just in case.

‘Captain, request permission to volunteer in place of Flight Lieutenant Rahandravell.’ OB173 barged straight into
Lennart’s office and asked him, point blank. Actually, those were words he didn’t want to think about.
‘Why do you want to do that?’ he asked, brain temporarily in boggle mode.
‘I’m simply the most appropriate person for the job.’ She said, knowing he would guess that it wasn’t that simple,
and trying to come up with a cover story.
'How do you know,’ Lennart recovered and asked her, slowly, ‘what the job is?’
‘Guesswork. Politics. Intuition. That and I asked her.’
‘If she was fool enough to tell you, then anyone would be better for the job.’ Lennart agreed. ‘She came away
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‘Can you fly a B‑wing?’

‘ “You don’t fly a B‑wing; you just sit in the cockpit while it plods along.” ’ She quoted Franjia. ‘To that standard,
‘So tell me about your cover story.’ Lennart asked, professionally.

I’m a talent scout for a dark force adept, good enough to step straight into the ranks of the Sovereign Protectors,
and the only reason I haven’t risen higher to become an adept in my own right is ‑ I lack the hard edge of moral
courage, the guts to take responsibility for the pain and misery I inflict.
I prefer to be told what to do. Show me the path, be it never so black, and I will walk it ‑ but do not ask me to
choose it for myself. To that extent, at least, I am the prisoner of my clone heritage.
And I want to be somewhere else, while the situation I have ‑ I hope ‑ set up for you starts to bite. Largely
because, I have told myself, I can appear to be on your side, and manipulate you appropriately.

She might be able to say that to him, eventually. In the meantime she settled for ‘I’d need naval cover, a divisional
officer or someone in Supply branch with part responsibility for the prisoners‑‘
‘If that’s the best you can do, forget it.’ Lennart said. ‘You haven’t had any contact with them, any leak there ‑ and
there may be, accidental or deliberate ‑ means your head on the block and, worse, a blown operation.’ He was
deliberately brutal about that.
‘I don’t think you can pass for anything other than a trained killer. Start with a feasible motive, then sort out who
could be credibly found holding it.’
‘Professional jealousy.’ She said, straight away. ‘Responsibility for them was taken away from me ‑ I don’t have to
pose to pass as an interrogator ‑ and I got stroppy about it. I’m a talker; I cajole them, trick them into giving up
their secrets. The new man was more the racks and pincers type, typical bloodthirsty blundering Imperial, half
sadist and half moron.’ She smiled at that one; a lot of the Rebels did think in stereotypes, but the smarter ones ‑
for instance, intelligence officers ‑ didn’t.
‘I reacted badly to that ‑ crisis of conscience, to the extent of breaking him with his own tools. Then I had nothing
else to do but run for it, and where else but to the Alliance?’
‘Very nice.’ Lennart said. ‘lots of small problems that can be plugged, and one insoluble one. The rebels have
undoubtedly been guessing, they may even have got it right. The chief reason they haven’t tried to employ their
political weapon is that they are smart enough to know that, even if they say the truth, without backing it with
evidence ‑ in practical terms it’s just a conspiracy theory. You can tell them entirely too much about what to think,
where to look. That makes it an unjustifiable risk. You would be better for the job ‑ if it wasn’t for that. Request
denied, dismissed.’
She looked worried as she left, probably for herself. That was backwards; his instincts twitched a little. He would
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‘Sit down, Senior Chief.’ The captain told him. Oh crap, he was really in for it.
‘Least things first; from your, ah, top end heavy perspective, an E‑web may seem little different from a common
blaster pistol ‑ but I assure you; no.’
The captain was being flippant. He had probably decided to keelhaul him after all.
‘Your team is returned to normal duty, I’m going to need you to do some trick shooting for me. In about four or
five hours, our rebuilt pair of B‑wings will be checked out, and they will be beyond accurate LTL range before
anyone realises they’re not coming back. You are going to try to shoot them down, and miss. Very narrowly.’
‘It’s a setup, Sir?’ Aldrem asked.
‘Yes. Do not actually hit them. Two other things‑ your local control op.’

‘Areath Suluur? He’s an essential part of the team, Sir.’ Aldrem stood up for his man.
‘He’s almost certainly a deserter from the Republic navy, part of one of the clone gun teams on an early Venator;
he spent ten years AWOL at the end of the Clone Wars, before joining the Imperial Starfleet under a false ID.’
The senior chief looked horrified. ‘Sir, if that’s true‑‘
‘If I had actually bothered to check up on it, I’m fairly sure I would be certain. I haven’t bothered. Just tell him to
be slightly less effective in man to man combat, because if I can work it out, I’m sure the Legion’s veterans can.’
Aldrem was puzzled, but not unhappy. ‘Thank you, Sir.’
‘I’m not going to throw away a good gun team. Last thing, have you bumped into your girlfriend recently?’
‘If this is about the fraternisation regs, it’s not an issue, I mean yes, but the rank thing‑‘
‘She’s already done one major service for the ship, by stopping the exec looking more than mildly foolish, and as I
had hoped, injecting him with a dose of classic Rebel sticktoitiveness. Under her influence he should do well.’
‘That’s good‑‘ then Aldrem’s brain caught up with his ears. ‘Rebel?’
‘Afraid so.’ The captain handed him the message pad; the only thing he had done was blank out the part about
Aldrem passing for fifteen. ‘It raises a couple of interesting questions.’
‘But she doesn’t, she isn’t, she can’t‑‘ Aldrem was trying not to believe his own eyes.
‘Does, is and can, but I do have some leeway in this. What I want is for her to defect to us and turn states’
evidence, what happens then ‑ she shouldn’t be killed, but it could still be fairly unpleasant. If she can help us reel
the rebel force we’re after in, if you can turn her all the way, and I think you may be able to, I’ll give the bride away
at your wedding myself.’
‘Sir, I mean, I see it, but I don’t believe it. I just can’t get it into my gut that she’s a Reb.’
‘That doesn’t make it wrong for you to like her, or unbelievable for her to like you; it just makes it very awkward.
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‘By all means, talk to your team about it, but no further. After all, as willful as she obviously is, she belongs on this
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­02­06 10:36am

Chapter 11

The final briefing was delivered by Commander Brenn himself. Normally it would have been a relatively junior
officer’s job, but there was nothing normal about this situation. The two fighter pilots opposite him certainly
didn’t think so.
‘In theory,’ he began, ‘you’re going to pretend to defect and feed them false information. In practise, we’re
sending you to take those pieces of dreck back and trade them in for a pair of X‑ wings.’
It was a fairly crude attempt to lighten the mood; even Aron thought so. It didn’t stop him laughing, briefly.
‘You have read the briefs?’
‘Of course.’ Franjia said. ‘Someone worked very hard, polishing that plan to the point where it almost makes
Brenn glared at her. Parts of it had been his idea.
‘Just getting into practise, Sir. After all, we are supposed to be joining the ranks of anarchy.’
‘Don’t believe it. The rebels run their armed services on the old Republic model ‑ the higher command levels may
be fractionated and disorganised enough, but they are strong on the minor discipline.’ Brenn reminded them.
‘Military police; the common enemy?’ Aron suggested.
‘Not that far from the truth. You will be interrogated, we expect the urgency of what you have to tell them to push
them into a rush job. Some will be suspicious‑‘
‘Rightly.’ Franjia pointed out. ‘I would be very suspicious of a Rebel defector to us.’
‘Maybe.’ Brenn knew, more or less, what Captain Lennart was planning. ‘On the other hand, some of them will
want to believe you.’
‘So what you’re saying is divide and conquer, but take care not to look like it.’ Aron said. ‘Have I got time to go on
a refresher course for escape and evasion?’
‘Getting you out is less than predictable. No preset plan for that would be enough.’
‘Who did we annoy to get this job?’ Franjia asked.
‘Who else would you send? The Alliance is so fighter‑centric, you’re the obvious choice. None of our people are
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them. Our organic intel consists of subsections of Navigation and Com‑Scan who know too much to be allowed to
go, or stormtroopers who simply wouldn’t be believable. You were unlucky enough to stand out.’
‘I promise, Commander, that if we get back alive, I will never, ever distinguish myself ever again.’ Aron snarled at
Franjia managed not to say what came into her mind‑ that shoving a laser cannon up the chief navigator’s arse
and pulling the trigger would be a distinction of a sort. ‘Sir, we hate this plan.’ Was what she actually said. ‘Why
doesn’t that rule us out?’
‘Because you can make it work. All you’re doing is bombing them with payloads of lies instead of proton torps.
Has anyone told you to shut up and soldier yet?’ Brenn replied.
They got the hint.
‘Officially, this meeting has been about my giving you a flight test program to conduct with the reconstructed
fighters. A tactical evaluation exercise. Unofficially, it has too.’ Brenn said.
‘As you are going to be masquerading as Rebels, I suppose I should wish you ‑ what is it they say, “may the Force
be with you?” ‘
‘Try “Farce”, Sir.’ Aron stood, saluted, Franjia did the same, they turned to go.

In the corridor outside Commander Brenn’s office, he started to say ‘Flight Lieutenant Rahandravell‑‘
‘We make a good combat team.’ She cut him short ‑ then changed her mind about what she intended. ‘Do you
think we could pretend to an, ah, sufficiently tortured relationship to catch their attention, serve as motive and
‘Sufficiently tortured would be the right term for it.’ He said, wondering what she meant. Did she mean it literally,
was she teasing him, or for whatever reason torturing herself ‑ probably a combination of the first two. Which
was, in itself, warped. If he was right, she was asking him to prove that he could fake it, lie to her with believable
passion, as a pass to get to the real thing, which ‑ suddenly amateur spying seemed relatively straightforward.
Which was probably exactly how she wanted him to feel, and now his head was starting to hurt. ‘I’m probably
going to regret this, but yes. I think.’ He decided.
‘Well, we’re definitely going to regret having anything to do with B‑wings,’ she covered her relief with flippancy,
‘so let’s get on with it.’

Port‑4 main turret, bunk spaces; most of the team were catching up on their rest. They had been officially notified
that they were to stop their ‘liaison’ mission. Wonderful what you can cover up with a single well chosen word,
isn’t it, Suluur had thought. They had celebrated with a round of pillows, and only himself and Aldrem were
‘What is it, Pel?’ The turret chief obviously wanted to ask him something. Probably going to be bad.
‘The skipper himself spoke to me about‑ a couple of things. Was it me, or did I see a few of the white‑hats pacing
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‘Um.’ Aldrem said. This could be touchy. ‘He said that he didn’t care much whether or not you were what it looked
like you were,’
‘Which is?’ Suluur said cautiously, after mentally decoding the gibberish. No security presence, so he was in no
real danger‑ even if he could bring himself to hurt the crew chief.
Aldrem looked round carefully ‑ as if he could spot listening devices ‑ and said, in a whisper, ‘A deserter from the
Republic Navy.’
‘Very nice of him not to care. Covering something like that up could get him in a world of dreck.’ Suluur said,
sounding much calmer than he felt.
‘Is it true?’ Aldrem asked.
‘Did he tell you to ask?’
‘No. No, he didn’t, and he said he wasn’t going to. Also said you needed to get shot more often because if he
could work it out‑‘
‘Yes. Yes, it’s true.’ Suluur admitted. It was a long complicated story, one he more than half wanted to tell.
‘Then I’m going to need your help.’ Aldrem moved straight into that, careful not to ask why or how. Not yet.
‘What? You’re not planning to run, are you? Are you really that sold on that woman that you’d take the chance?’
Suluur didn’t believe it‑ Aldrem could be that crazed, but not this time.
‘No, look‑’ he did, glancing around again, all still asleep. ‘I need to get her to desert to us.’
Suluur started to ask who from, got it, then decided to ask anyway. ‘I’d look like a kriffing idiot if I assumed I knew
what you meant, went ahead and acted on it, and turned out to be wrong, so you had better tell me who from.’
‘And convince you I haven’t gone from hallucinations to outright paranoia‑ who else? Them. The enemy.’
‘Big R?’ he was referring to the Alliance to Restore the Republic.
‘She’s some kind of spy for them, she’s been sending messages.’
‘You’re taking this very calmly.’ Suluur told the senior chief. As for whether it was true or not ‑ possible.
‘Well, I couldn’t start breaking down and gibbering in front of the Captain, could I? After that, the time never
seemed right.’
‘There is a right time, when what you see, and especially what you know is going to happen next, gets to be too
much to bear.’ Suluur said, slowly and reflectively. ‘A decent commander, a competent commander, gives you
confidence and hope, postpones the day. An incompetent rat‑bastard‑‘
Aldrem was just sensitive enough to try not to let his own urgency show. ‘Areath, if you need to talk about this.’
What he wanted to do was scream at Suluur to help him with his problem.
‘Some time.’ Suluur, on the other hand, was sensitive enough to pick up on it. ‘Are you sure you want to help her
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Aron and Franjia, suited and helmeted, checked out the rebuilt Rebel bombers as planned. Neither of them trusted
their own acting abilities enough to go through it barefaced. Fooling their colleagues, people who knew them,
would be harder than foxing strangers, wouldn’t it? It had better.
The filed flight plan had them following a spiral outward to distance, then a series of standard flight manoeuvres,
then a return to base.
For a moment both of them were tempted to just fly the set plan, land, and see if Brenn could come up with any
charge even remotely public to do them on.
The captain certainly could. And after all, the objective was right.
The initial tests went perfectly to script‑ it was as bad as they thought.
‘I want to see what the actual peak performance is ‑ I’m shutting everything down except the engines.’
Franjia advised, as they were both nearing the point in the other plan laid down as breakaway.
‘Tensors and compensators, too?’ Aron asked, drymouthed. Go‑code received and accepted.
‘Congratulations, you remembered something mechanical ‑ we’ll make a Starwing pilot out of you yet.’
‘Anything other than a kriffing B‑wing.’ He said, turning the brickish fighter to follow her.

Actually, they weren’t that bad. Short, low power thruster bells were their main curse ‑ the power systems put out
watts on par with the Starwing, if not a shade better, but they had to butcher the engines to actually fit torp
launchers in.
As planned, Black Prince called them ‑ on main intership, not the fighter control bands. That was supposed to
look like a simple mistake, that would ‘accidentally’ allow them to be overheard.
‘Epsilon Test, that is an unauthorised manoeuvre. Return to the flight plan at once.’ Olleyri, in flight control,
No response. As planned. Any rebel agents on the planet ‑ which there apparently were ‑ would have noticed
nothing more than two speeding B‑wings, which was still enough of a contradiction to attract interest.
‘Scramble Beta squadron.’ The order, open mike, was heard by all.
Aron and Franjia kept building vector, one eye on the monitors ‑ engine temps rising ‑ one eye on what passed
for a nav unit.
Beta cleared the bay. ‘Epsilon Test, are you in trouble? Do you require assistance?’
‘Beta One, Epsilon Test ‑ emergency. Engines overheating, throttle locked, ejection systems disabled. Get a rescue
shuttle out here.’ Aron replied, sounding genuine. The thought of being in that situation helped.
‘Epsilon Test lead, burn towards us, I think we can shoot the canopy off.’ Beta One decided.
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Port‑4’s alarms went off, cutting Suluur’s and Aldrem’s conversation short. The collection of sleepy gunners
jerked awake, blasted back to consciousness. The drill was well established. The emergency action bell meant
drop everything and get to your duty station, from wherever you were and whatever you were doing. It took the
lead pair thirty seconds to get to main gun control, and they both stood down a step‑ Suluur working Fendon’s
board until he got there, Aldrem tapping into comms.
‘Control, what’s going on?’ he said, genuinely startled; he had forgotten about the set up.
‘Our test flight’s gone rogue‑ attempting defection. Shoot them.’
The guns came up to power, just as Fendon arrived. ‘Oh.’ He said, looking disappointed; they took their proper
‘Control,’ Aldrem asked, remembering, ‘are you sure?’
‘Acting Exec’s orders. Do it.’
‘You’re convinced it’s not just a malfunction? You know I need confirmation.’
The blips that overlay the two fighters changed colour. Rebel red. ‘There’s your confirmation.’
Aldrem settled in, rotated the turret to bear, set the gross motion tracker; ‘They’re over dex; 3hk out, this is going
to be barrage fire.’
3hk; h‑hundred, k‑thousand. Faster than spelling it out. They were flying straight courses, slight tangent though;
the cruciform shape of the B‑wing was tempting.
For a second he wondered if it would be possible to bracket it perfectly, one bolt each side of the cockpit, one bolt
each side of the fin ‑ at better than three seconds round trip delay, against a target that would start stunting when
it got locked on to, probably not. And he was supposed to miss.
‘Fendon, set sub‑2 up for flak bursts, one hundred thousand and rct, set sub‑1 for stutter, give me fifteen
One hundred thousand terawatts on the flak bursts, rangefinder controlled timed detonation, fifteen thousand
terawatt shots cycling as fast as sub‑1 could put them out. A tiny fraction of capacity, but more than enough for
the target.
He played with the shot dispersal a little; pointed on to the fleeing B‑wings, made the deflection, held his finger
on the trigger and moved the grip in a small circle around the aimpoint.
Four screaming streaks of green, one burst low, right and behind the B‑wings, one left and a shade low, one
almost directly above and ahead, one right, above and ahead.
‘That’s a warning shot?’ Aron screamed at Franjia. Their fighters kicked on the fringes of the blast waves‑ dumb
luck or very, very good shooting to narrowly let them live.
‘Nav laid in, get out of here.’ She shouted back, shoving the B‑wing into a wild half‑ bank, half‑ roll. The first
handful of stutter shot screamed by close to her‑ she knew this was daft. The more she manoeuvred, the more
likely she was to simply fly into a shot.
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been right down her mean line of vector.

Aron pulled the red lever ‑ activated hyperdrive, and a sequence of shot followed him, across the track of the ship
lunging for conversion threshold; Franjia followed, before the guns could turn back on her. Safely away.

The Lancer, partially repaired, turned to lumber after them. This was part of the plan; so was the argument
Lennart and Kondracke ‑ skipper of the Lancer ‑ had on open com channel.
It started with Kondracke saying how usual it was to have to pull the destroyer’s fat out of the fire, passed rapidly
through accusations of blind incompetence on both sides and peaked in his accusing Black Prince of being a nest
of traitors.
To most of the watchers, it probably seemed as if the Lancer was escaping from the destroyer as much as leaving
in pursuit.

‘Fire direction, they got away. Like trying to pick up a grain of sand with a piledriver.’ Aldrem announced.
‘Port‑4, that doesn’t make sense.’
‘You noticed?’ Aldrem tried not to be that sarcastic, and failed. ‘Are we clear to stand down?’
‘Checking‑ yes. Release to normal watch pattern.’
‘Right.’ Aldrem looked round at Suluur. ‘Can you give me turret internal, and isolate us from the rest of the ship?’
‘Done.’ Suluur set it up. ‘I know what this is about, yes?’
‘Afraid so. Team, I don’t know about assigned, but we’ve definitely been detailed to something that I reckon is out
and out espionage work. It’s also a painful subject for me personally, something I expect you’ll enjoy ragging me
about later.’
‘Gun crew, storm trooper training, now intel? What’s next, reassigned to fill two vacancies in the starfighter wing?’
Hruthhal asked.
‘Remind me to put in for qualification bonuses on the strength of that.’ Aldrem postponed it, hoping one of them
would work it out.

‘Hold on.’ Tarshkavik‑ gun maintenanceman, looking silly in his balloon‑ bulging, perfectly mirrored, magnetic
shielded suit.
Ground combat exposed him to less energy than his everyday job, one reason he had taken to it so well; the
handling suit he wore was attached by a ten centimetre thick umbilical to the turret’s heat and static dispersion
systems, otherwise he would have taken it with him.
‘This is about that woman, isn’t it? So the espionage connection‑ ah.’
‘So it wasn’t just your dashing charm, then?’ the other subsection leader, Gendrik, asked.
‘Considering she was still talking to me after I nearly threw up on her, I should have known it was too good to be
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‘She snuck on board to spy on us?’ Hruthhal wanted Aldrem to confirm.

‘That’s the theory, yes.’ Aldrem admitted.
‘So,’ Suluur backed him up, ‘if we promised to buy you an E‑web for your name day, on condition you shot her
with it, what would you do?’ It got a chuckle, and it let Aldrem handle it as seriously, or not, as he wanted.
‘I need to talk to her, and I want you there for moral support when I do. Not fire support.’
Fendon shut down the turret, it took ten minutes for everyone to get out of protective gear and into day uniforms.
Aldrem checked; as a steward, she had no fixed schedule any more than the officer she looked after did, and he
didn’t like the thought of knocking on the exec’s door looking for her. Only thing for it, though.

He did, his fourteen men behind him; it was the exec who answered. Looking past him, Aldrem could see rank
after rank of protocol droids. What was going on?
‘Commander, Sir, I’m looking for Steward Jhareylia Hathren. This isn’t a private visit, Sir, I wish it was.’ He went on,
before Mirhak‑Ghulej could lose his temper with him. ‘Check with the Captain, Sir.’
The exec thought hard about it. ‘If you turn out to be lying, I’ll have you used for reactor shelding.’
‘That might be a less painful alternative, Sir.’ Aldrem said, sincerely.

Mirhak‑ghulej looked closely at the senior chief. His file had come up, and the exec’s memory was good; maybe
too good, on occasion. It kept him brooding over the past.
Aldrem had risen rapidly to his present rank on the strength of his specialist skills, and then stuck there, failing
the academy entrance exam twice ‑ both times on leadership issues. Attitude problem, the file had said. Utterly
incapable of providing ideological and doctrinal support and guidance.
Some of his irresponsibility came from that root cause, Mirhak‑Ghulej thought; knowing that he was never going
to be asked to be responsible, and had no more to gain by trying to be.
‘You wish to see your girlfriend, on ship business.’ Sarcasm dripping off his voice. ‘What?’
‘Can I speak freely, Sir?’ the chief sounded desperate.
‘If you are fool enough to think you won’t be handing your career to me on a plate, you might be fool enough to
make this entertaining. Speak.’
‘Sir, the captain’s got it in for me as well, and this is my dreck job to do. The only thing you could do would be to
make it worse.’ Aldrem took a chance on saying.
‘Why shouldn’t I do that?’ the temporarily disemployed exec asked, thinking that perhaps if he did, it would make
him feel better.
‘Because he actually needs this job to get done.’
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Jhareylia was busy supervising the protocol droids; they were doing the datawork. She heard the tail end of the
conversation, recognised Aldrem’s voice; came to the door, saw the entire turret crew behind him.
‘Pellor, really, when you come to court, you’re not supposed to bring your own jury.’
He turned round to them and said ‘See why I wanted you here?’ and to Mirhak‑Ghulej, ‘Sir, you can screw this up,
or not.’
‘I want a full report.’ He snapped. Jhareylia ducked under his arm and out into the corridor with him.
He looks terrible, she thought. Half‑slept and stressed out. I wonder how he scrubs up? ‘Where are we going?’
‘Well, my first thought was a nice stroll in the training garden, but this lot might mutiny.’ The growl from behind
them served to prove that. ‘We could go down to engineering, find an inspection port and watch the ion drives
‘Considering what I’ve heard about them, that might be just as dangerous.’
‘I knew it wouldn’t take you long to find your way around this ship.’ He bounced back at her.
Actually, she changed her mind, he looks about how I feel. Like something terrible is about to happen.
‘There’s always the water tanks; we use them as a swimming pool, but the white‑hats use them as an exercise
tank too. A hint; if you hear that strange coloured clouds have been seen in the exercise tanks, don’t shower for a
while. The filters are supposed to take it out, but I don’t trust them myself.’ He rambled.
She turned a corner at random; he followed her, she went down three more twists and turns. ‘Where are we
going?’ he asked.
‘Somewhere where we aren’t expected. Somewhere we can sit and talk without anyone knowing we’re there.’ She
Kriff, he thought. If she’s going where I think she’s going with this, we have a crisis. We did anyway.
Counting tags on the bulkhead, they were on the lower starboard side of the ship; quarters blocks, storage
spaces, the forward end of the engineering workshop space, a few point defence turrets.
He pushed open a door into a storage room; realised it was a bad idea. ‘We must be right against the outer hull,
that’s a blowout panel. I think this might be the wrong place.’ Automating security had been tried and failed. Too
easily cracked; human recognition worked better. This was still on the old system, the code locked door had
opened for the transponder in his rank cylinder. Gunnery branch.
The room looked like a mesh of steel stalagmites, with a corresponding pattern of them hanging from the ceiling;
three meter wide cones, marked with a handful of glyphs, access, handling points. Large enough, they loomed
larger in the eye of an expert.
‘I shouldn’t think anyone comes down here if they can avoid it.’
‘What are they? Some form of abstract sculpture?’ she asked, looking innocent.
‘Only if you consider ‘kaboom’ to be art…which personally I do, but I thought it was just me.’ Aldrem said, quietly,
trying not to breathe too hard.
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‘This is Commander Mirannon we’re talking about here. Give him a couple of months.’ Tarshkavik said.
‘We can sit and talk here,’ Aldrem turned to her, ‘provided you don’t mind my skin crawling so bad it tries to
escape independently.’
‘If you’re scared, then I am too‑ but do you think anyone would come in here?’
‘No‑one in their right mind would be within ten kilometres of this lot.’ Suluur stated.
She mentally compared that with the length of a star destroyer, took a deep breath, and sat down with her back
against one of the antiship proton torpedoes. She couldn’t actually touch the metal; the magazine safety systems
wrapped a shield over it.
Aldrem sat down opposite her.
‘Jhareylia, you know I’m not very…well informed outside my profession. It takes up most of my common sense.’
He said, nervously looking at the torpedo and wishing it would take the rest; she couldn’t help smiling.
‘The thing is…I’m supposed to tell you that, ah‑‘
‘It’s all right, Pellor, I know what you mean.’ She said, hoping they were talking about the same thing.
‘Then you will?’ he said, face brightening.
‘Um ‑ perhaps I don’t know what you mean.’ She was confused now.
‘Oh. Right. I wish anyone else but me had been sent to do this. Anyone. The captain thinks you’re a rebel spy.’
‘What do you think?’ she asked him. This was the nightmare she had been half hoping wouldn’t happen, half
wanting to get it over with.
‘I think I’d prefer it if it wasn’t true.’ He said, slow, sad and sincere.
‘Does he have...evidence?’ she asked, nervously.
‘He thinks he has. Tell me it isn’t so.’
‘I could, but…’ she could get angry with him, shout at him for taking the system’s word over hers; demand that he
trust her. That was why he had brought his friends. She couldn’t fight her way out; too many of them for that,
either. ‘Would you hate me for it?’
‘Eventually. Maybe. Look ‑ we get away with a lot on this ship that we shouldn’t be able to, because there was a
monumental paperwork snafu when she was commissioned and we’ve been in no permanent command, with
nobody’s particular job to keep us orthodox, ever since. In fact, we’re ahead of the game, because we’re a theatre
reserve unit, it’s our job to keep others in line, so our loyalty is taken for granted as part of the system and we
don’t get watched as much as most ships. I’m not saying the rest of the Empire’s like us. But are we that bad,
‘Yes, you are. Your commanding officer makes you do dreck jobs like arresting your girlfriend yourself.’ She
flashed back at him. ‘You admit yourself that you’re the exception that proves the rule.’
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interrogators ‑ would do to you, if they had an excuse? I don’t want that to happen.’
‘Listen to yourself!’ she shouted at him. ‘You admit you’re afraid of what the Empire does to people, what it would
do to you ‑or me ‑ if it caught us ‑ Pel, you’re not a bad man at heart,’ she blushed slightly, ‘you can’t approve.
You can’t want that to happen.’
‘No but ‑ I don’t know what your parents told you, but I was an inner city kid. The closest we got to justice or any
of that abstract crud was the idea that you stand by your friends, and try to hurt your enemies. Maybe there is
some ideal concept, some big idea out there, but it’s amazing just how straightforward galactic politics starts to
look when you boil it down to gang kid logic.’ All fourteen of the team behind him were nodding.
‘It’s not like that.’ she said, passionately. ‘This is about‑‘
‘I do read, sometimes. The empire is average, it’s us, it’s Dexter and Aldric and Elan and Garvoth from down the
road, it’s ‑ the Empire inherited the galaxy. Whatever that is, the Empire is ‑ despite what those New Order
nutcases tell you, the bulk of the Starfleet, even, is ordinary stiffs like us.’
‘You’ve already said enough to get yourself into trouble.’ Jhareylia said, almost demanding that it was so. ‘I could
walk out of here, steal a shuttle and escape to the alliance, and take all of you with me.’
‘My career may be a dead end, but I’m not that crazy. Why ‑ actually, what made you become a Rebel?’
‘I told you, my parents had a light freighter.’
‘What happened to it?’ Aldrem asked her, softly.
‘We were ‑ just doing business as usual; it was a typical run, out of Correllia to Brentaal, and we were stopped by
an Imperial interdictor. It boarded us, and murdered them.
They hid me in one of the cargo pods; I heard the argument, and the shots, and the sound of my mother and
father being dragged away and thrown out of the airlock. Don’t try and tell me ordinary people would do that.’
He looked away, and from the eye she couldn’t see gave Gendrik the wink. He felt rotten.
‘What was the name of that ship?’ Gendrik asked her.
‘HIMS Antorevan.’ She said it like it was burned on her memory.
‘Suluur,’ Genrik asked him, ‘we did shoot at an Interdictor once, didn’t we? Do you remember her name?’
‘Fantastic bloody coincidence, if it was.’ Suluur said. ‘Stranger things happen, though ‑ to the turret.’

They were all happy to leave the vault.

‘Typical.’ Tarshkavik said. ‘Blunder into a sealed, out of the way compartment on any other star destroyer, what
would you find? A still, a spice farm, a sabacc pit maybe. On this ship, we find an illicit stash of proton torpedoes.’
‘I’m sure we’ve got all those things as well.’ Aldrem said.
Jhareylia leaned on him on the way. Another day, it would have had him bouncing off the ceiling. Now he was
scared, more than anything else. Both of them were preoccupied, she too much so to notice Suluur and Hruthhal
disappear, sprinting back to Port‑4 for the fastest slicing job of their lives.
She should have been taking notes; it wasn’t so often the Alliance got a good look inside imperial HTL turrets. She
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She wasn’t sure what to believe was happening. Would they fake it ‑ was it even possible? Did he have the sheer
twistedness to manipulate her like that? She didn’t think so.
‘Rebels and minor powers are one thing, but you’d be amazed; we spend the vast majority of our time chasing
down rogue units of the Imperial fleet, and hauling them back into line. Usually it’s fairly easy; all we have to do is
roll slightly, show them our kill scores.’ Suluur said, as he was digging in the action logs.
‘Speaking of which…’ Aldrem said, using his own range taker to look down at the hull. ‘I thought so. Two
‘I’m sure I’ve heard that name somewhere.’ Suluur said, fingers dancing on the keypad. ‘I don’t think it’s us,
though, ours were the Ildomir and the Yelduro‑Vartha. Where else would ‑ I knew it.’
The data came flooding up on the main holodisplay in front of all of them.
‘It was in a squadron tactical circular. Tector‑class Indomitable intercepted the Antorevan, ordered her to stand
down and receive auditors and inspectors from sector group command.’ Aldrem read out, and interpreted. ‘She
must have been under suspicion already, especially if she was shaking down the convoys she was supposed to be
He didn’t add, at least not out loud, ‘and not giving his squadron commander his cut.’
‘Antorevan refused, Indomitable opened fire, shooting to disable ‑ one heavy turbolaser shot hit a grav well
projector, dead centre, imploding it and overpenetrating to the reactor which, well, this calls it ‘regrettable
accident’, I’d call it ‘small supernova.’

Quietly, Jhareylia watched the ship which had been responsible for her parents’ death rack and twist, then expand
in a turbolaser‑greenish tinted flare of white light as the energised implosion wrapped itself round the reactor,
and rebounded.
‘The Indomitable’s one of ours ‑ also part of 851 Squadron, that’s why we heard about it. A crime was committed,
detected, and punished. The Empire can look after its own, and the Alliance is so thinly spread, running as fast as
it can to stand still, it can’t. It wasn’t the Rebellion who avenged your parents’ murder. Remind me why you’re with
them again?’ he said, feeling thoroughly rotten, and weirdly relieved at the same time.
It was enough of a shock, it robbed her of the presence of mind necessary to suspect a lie.
‘Shall we go and talk to Commander Brenn, then? He’s the navigator, this sort of thing defaults to him in the
absence of anybody else. Let’s go talk to him.’
Head reeling, she was in no position to say no. Her brain would pull itself together before long, and he intended to
be there when it happened. For now ‑ get it on paper, make it too late for her to turn back. Square it with his own
conscience, which was about to have an almighty falling out with his libido anyway, later.
He did spare a second on the way, as she was being helped down the accessway, to talk to the com/scan tech.
‘So that’s one outrageous lie told in the interests of truth and justice.’ Suluur said.
‘Sod truth and justice; in the interests of not handing her over to the pointy stick boys in Interrogation.’ Aldrem
replied. ‘What did you actually do? That looked a bit too good to be that instant a creation.’
‘Changed the name on the ship it happened to.’
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member 

  2007­02­14 06:24am

Ch 12

The pair of B‑wings emerged at the end of their first programmed jump. Both of them turned to kill velocity,
scanning each other to see that they were in one piece, then searching out. This was supposed to be one of the
rendezvous points, and their fighter comms were on rebel bands ‑ helmet comms still on Imperial, so they could
talk to each other out of character.
‘Galactic Spirit, what a barrage. Are you sure they were shooting to miss?’ Aron asked.
‘I think so, just very, very well.’ She replied. ‘Time to start the spiel.’
She took her helmet off, turned the B‑wing’s com unit to broadcast, began to call ‘Any alliance forces, please
respond, this is B‑wing Test Flight Epsilon, help.’
The rendezvous point they had arrived at must have been a main fallback position. It was a more or less
permanent problem for the Rebellion, and far worse for a junkheap like the B‑wing whose nav systems were so
limited; hit and run tactics required somewhere to run to. That meant staging areas, covered retreats, ambush
points to deter pursuit, and, when they were lucky ‑no, she told herself, think opposite, when the rebels were very
unlucky ‑ confused, sprawling running battles that gave hyper capable fighters lots to do.
Long range sensors revealed small craft in the area, the outsystem of a barren star; a tramp freighter, apparently
prospecting, and two mercenary fighter escorts. Supposedly. It was a fairly good cover, in the intelligence sense.
Somewhere nearby with a precalculated route in would be cover, in the military sense.
One of the mercenary fighters broke off to investigate; they headed towards it, reactivating shields ‑ just in case.
‘Identify yourselves.’ It said. Z‑95; fractionally more agile than a B‑wing, which wasn’t hard. In common use the
galaxy over, by innumerable local governments ‑ hefty and robust, it had never done well in fleet service but had
been a standard garrison fighter of the late Republic. Common enough in rebel hands.
‘We’re Imperial, we want to defect to the Alliance.’ Aron said, quickly, before the first part made him do anything
‘In B‑wings?’ the pilot didn’t believe them.
‘Captured, rebuilt, we were assigned to test them, we decided to see if they knew the way home.’ Franjia said.
‘We’ve said enough to doom us, you’ve said nothing. Are you Alliance or not?’ Aron challenged him ‑ powering up
the B‑wing’s weapons.
‘Easy, hotshot. This is a holding area. You wait here while we check you out. Where did you leave from?’
‘Imperator‑class, Black Prince.’ Aron told him. ‘Snap it up, they’ve probably got hunting parties out.’
The other fighter and the tramp ‑ CorelliSpace, rounded triangular prism main body, bridge module on a stalk out
ahead of it ‑ turned towards them and moved to intercept.

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‘Well, they probably use that freighter as a shuttle.’ He thought about how he would do it. ‘I don’t see them
trusting anyone with nav coordinates straight off.’
‘So you think we abandon ship, board the freighter, get blindfolded or something similarly melodramatic, and
ferried to somewhere safe ‑ hopefully ‑ but wouldn’t a litter of drifting ships be a dead giveaway?’ she wondered.
‘I suppose even fleet recon couldn’t miss that.’ Aron said. ‘Whatever sort of checks you’re making, freighter man,
want to speed it up? We left with a flight group of Avengers chasing us.’
The freighter’s crew heard all of this; they were intended to. The team on board consisted of four guards, an
intelligence officer and the two crew, and they were arguing it out between them.
Mainly, there was an urgent call out to a watcher unit on Ghorn IV; their response was just coming in now‑
unanalysed, unfiltered crackly com intercept and fuzzy point‑camera‑at‑sky home holovid footage. They heard
the call to clear the line of fire; heard the intership between the Lancer and Black Prince, saw the unmistakable
flares, visible even in broad planetary daylight, of turbolaser flak bursts.
What they were meant to hear. They also had, in a separate, self‑erasing communication, an intelligence report
from the ship in question.

‘Identify yourselves.’ The voice from the freighter ‑ the pilot ‑ said.
‘We’ve already told you, we’re on the run, and we’d like to do some more of that before they kriffing come after us
‑ get us out of here, you can shoot us later.’ Aron snapped at them.
‘They mean personally.’ Franjia told him. ‘Flight Lieutenant Franjia Rahandravell, Starfighter Corps, Strike Wing
attached ISD‑721.’
‘Oh. My previous comment still stands ‑ get the hfredium out. Squadron Leader Aron Jandras, Imperial Starfleet
attached Starfighter Corps, Strike Wing nominal 721.’
‘Legitimate defectors or not, they’d be valuable captures.’ The intelligence officer decided. ‘Send for the frigate.’

‘Clear on sensors?’ the pilot asked his flight engineer, who checked ‑ and they were not.
‘Negative, negative, incoming, small capital ‑ light or medium corvette, fast, ten, fifteen seconds.’
That was only enough time to prepare themselves, raise shields and activate weapons; one triple laser turret.
Nothing spectacular.
Stretched and slightly off‑centre white flare; a poor hyper exit from a ship in a hurry, it was the Lancer‑class
Dubhei Targe, Kondracke’s command. It swept the area on active scan.
‘Renegades! Stand down ‑ and we’ll only disintegrate you once.’ Kondracke sounded as if he was enjoying himself;
he was certainly hamming it for all he was worth.
‘Each?’ Franjia called back, acidly, shunting energy to her own weapons. This had been one of the contingencies in
the script.
Depending on how you looked at it, the Lancer’s shape served it very well, or very badly. It pretty much enforced
all round fire ‑ the other side of the coin was that it couldn’t concentrate on any one target. And it looked stupid.
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‘Considering what it’s supposed to do to us, that’s not an image I wanted.’ Aron replied, turning and heading for
it. Franjia followed.

The two Z‑95 followed them in. Not the rebellion’s best, not its worst, they were tour‑expired main line pilots; in
theory, this was their spell of soft duty, away from a front line attack unit to rest and recover before being thrown
back into the thick of it.
Attacking an antifighter frigate was not their idea of fun. Doing anything involving combat in a B‑wing wasn’t
exactly Aron’s and Franjia’s.
‘Think TIE fighter.’ She told him. ‘The firepower that thing puts out, you can’t afford to get hit. Jink, stunt, don’t
be afraid to break off and run for it.’
‘Is that what you did when you were back in TIEs?’ he couldn’t resist asking her. Both the Alliance pilots noticed
that, banter aside, the two B‑wings were coming in moderately far apart, close enough for mutual support, far
enough not to crowd each other, jammers active, sensors picking out point targets, in slow, deceptive weave.
‘Stang yes. I survived. The really clever part is managing to make it not look like you’re running away…95’s, are
you loaded?’
‘Affirmative, flight lieutenant.’ One of them said, in a senior officer sounding voice.
‘Good,’ Aron said, blandly ignoring the tone, ‘one of you follow each of us in ‑ that ship did get fairly well shot up.
Do you suppose it still has any blind spots?’
‘Mirannon didn’t get to it, so probably. We’re not going to take it down.’ Franjia said, and spectacularly
optimistically at that. ‘Our best option is to pick off it’s com antenna, so at least it can’t report which way we run.’
‘Right.’ Aron acknowledged. ‘I’ll lead in.’

So slow, so inexorably slow; Aron wanted to get out and walk, it would be faster. ‘Headhunters, start lobbing your
concussions at the turrets.’ At least it would force the Lancer to waste time shooting them down.
‘You refuse the order of the Empire? Then DIE!’ Kondracke shouted, all the Lancer’s guns that could bear opened
fire on Aron. If we ever get back, Aron thought I’m going to recommend him for psych‑eval.
What’s even worse is that the rebels don’t seem to get it. I mean, he’s shooting at me, and I can see the silly side.
Humourless bastards.
Aron surged the B‑wing into a diving right ‑ hand spiral, aiming under the Lancer. He was hoping that even if he
couldn’t dodge the fire control systems, at least he could fake out the gunners. Zigzagging, twisting and weaving
to draw their fire away from Franjia’s attack run, and hopefully not get killed himself ‑ he was, when it came down
to it, a better pilot than she was, and she was a better shot. That meant she got the easy job.
B‑wings didn’t dodge. Not well, anyway. The quad‑lasers spat green fire at them, and reflexively he twisted in his
seat, trying to make himself a smaller target. The cockpit was well away from the centre of mass, so the ejectors
probably would have time to function. That was pretty much the only comfort.
The Lancer seemed to be having trouble with it’s fire control systems. Twenty quads, eight could reach Aron, three
of them were empty sockets; for a second he wondered why he wasn’t dead, a glance aft ‑ they were tracking him,
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None of the advanced modes, like calculating and coordinating to flood his manoeuvre envelope; Kondracke’s
gone and left them unmanned, hasn’t he? Aron thought. They weren’t even trying to predict what he would do
next. They could still kill him if he was dumb enough to let them.
The rebels seemed to be flinching, hanging shy of the stream of green light pouring out of the Lancer; small
wonder. One of them shot off a missile, the turret flicked round on to it. Franjia rolled to bear on the turret and
sent a stream of autoblaster fire though the shield gap; the missile warhead detonated, Aron used the cover of the
flash to reverse course and head for the dorsal mounted antenna, the ship rocked as the turret blew up.
Not before the last of it’s stream of shot had followed on to the evading Z‑95. Shields blown out, shunted aft,
blown out again, engines crippled; the pilot ejected before the fighter shook itself to pieces.
It didn’t save him; one of the other turrets caught him and turned him into a luminous smear.

So much for plan A, Aron realised; fly the B‑wing into the com antenna, eject before impact. Ouch, Franjia
thought; that would be a public‑display atrocity, then. To make this look right, he has to be prepared to do the
same to us.
Vicious but dumb was what the script called for, and he delivered on the second half of that; the guns spurted
bolts ‑ what some of the bomber crews called ‘hard rain’ ‑ at her, two glancing shield hits, then switched back to
following Aron.
Her target‑warning was howling, but no actual incoming, she ignored it; doubled shields forward, set the guns for
simultaneous fire.
The surviving ’95 had backed off, locked on from relatively long range and rippled all its missiles, one at each
available turret; they switched into self‑protection mode long enough for her to get a good, steady shot.

The heavy laser, twin autoblasters, triple ion cannon pounded into the shields around the com antenna; it had
been shot off in the initial Rebel rocket attack, the dorsal aft generator crippled, and it was now covered by
stretching the main dorsal midships shield emitter’s field over the area. It was no easier to knock down ‑ probably
beyond fighter energy cannon anyway‑ but it was possible to get a local burn through.
The shield flared, crackled, became patchy. The Lancer’s cannon, still pulsing out their bolts, swung off him on to
her, she held steady on target as the streams converged on her. Front shields fraying, split second to weigh the
odds, break away‑ she shut down weapon charge, dumped it into stabilising the shielding, twisted away in an
asymmetric corkscrew.
They turned back to track Aron as he swung in to finish the job, started shooting‑ and she curved back in again,
shifted from shields to weapons, hammered it again; that was enough. The shield gapped and blistered long
enough for a stream of blaster shot to leak through, the com antenna shattered, the guns turned back to her and
she ran for it, all shields aft, dancing and twisting. Aron pulled away to join her.

‘I’ve changed my mind.’ She said, on private com. ‘Let’s go back to the Empire.’
‘Just when we were having fun?’ he said, sardonically.
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‘Galactic Spirit. I should have realised I was tempting fate.’ She said, as the slightly larger, slightly more ridiculous
shape of a Nebulon‑B wearing an Alliance transponder emerged from brilliant white flare.
‘It’s going to tear the Lancer apart.’ Aron realised what she meant. ‘Unless there’s a friendly fire hazard in the
‘You lead, I’ll cover.’ Stabilise shields and weapons, and back in again. This time, they were simply trying not to be
hit. Very close, high aspect, lots of twisting, unpredictable moves.
If there had been men in those turrets, gunners to second guess them and take the processing burden of
judgement away from the computers, they would have been toasted on the first attack run.

For a moment Aron thought of flying in front of the bridge and making rude gestures at Kondracke, try to make
sure he took the hint; a sure way to get a laser bolt in the face. He settled for hosing down the ship’s shields with
ion and blaster fire, and weaving to avoid being hit. Franjia did the same‑ pressed in to close range and swarmed
all over it. It seemed to be working; the rebel frigate was holding its fire. Neither of them were sure if Kondracke
actually deserved that much luck.
Dubhei Targe rolled to bring fresh guns to bear, sent a stream of fire after the freighter; emerald sparks flew off it,
it accelerated out of the way and moved to hide behind the Nebulon.

The lancer turned to accelerate away; that left Franjia and Aron with the choice of thrusting after it to keep up ‑
predictably ‑ or breaking off. Hoping Kondracke had the sense to hyper out, they turned away, opening a gap
between them with the total acceleration of forty‑seven hundred g. Almost enough to feel safe.
The Nebulon sent a relative handful of LTL shots after the Lancer; too late.
‘You may win this one, traitor scum, but we’ll find you.’ Kondracke was still ranting, some quirk in the signal
processing software caused his words to Doppler shift as the frigate made for light speed, trailing off in basso‑

‘Nebulon frigate,’ Aron called to it, sounding and feeling tired as the adrenalin started to drain away, ‘permission
to land?’
‘Test flight Epsilon, this is Chandrillia Rose Actual; the suggestion has been made that we should turn you down,
your brand of madness may be contagious.’
‘All right, plan C, where’s the nearest Hutt arms dealer?’ Franjia said, over open channel, to Aron; they intercepted
‘We can use maniacs like you.’ The Chandrillia Rose’s captain responded. ‘You are number one on approach.’
As they cancelled vector and moved towards the Nebulon, Aron private‑channelled across, ‘So that much of the
plan worked, at least.’
‘Yes, and that was supposed to be the easy part.’ Franjia replied. ‘Scramble your helmet com, they’ll inspect it.’
‘Doing it now.’ He did; they were on official channels until they touched down.

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cockpit rotated. Aron’s fins worked, the cockpit didn’t.

He hated Nebulons on principle, chiefly that they were damned difficult to land on. There had been so little
manoeuvring room, even when he had been riding a TIE off one, that he had started taking a gas gun with him ‑
hand held EVA thruster.
The principle was, it gave him the option of ejecting and space‑walking home. He wished he had it now. It was
very tempting.
‘Tractor beaming you in now.’ The ship com’d to him.
‘Negative, I’ll bring this junker in myself.’

That would have been disastrous. The compensators would have reacted to the tractor beam as if it was being
brought in sideways, would have tried to rotate into an upright position. At the least, it would give him a headache
‑ slam the cockpit off the hangar ceiling. At worst, boom.
There was virtually no room within the hangar bay; two half‑ squadrons, X’s and Y’s, sat parked there. Coming in
damaged, effectively ‑ he came in dead slow, rolled to line up, coming in on the fighter’s side, crossed his toes,
hit the edge of the frigate’s relative‑ inertials and the B‑wing nearly kicked itself out of his hands.
He had to wrestle it down on to the flight deck, steering jets flaring, threatening to twist itself out of control; there
was a bang and a molten‑ insulation smell from behind him.
No room for this, he thought ‑ more of a glandular scream ‑ he bounced the B‑wing off the deck, it skidded and
came up trapped against the nose of a pair of X‑wings.
The cockpit opened, he tumbled out on to the deck, landing on his shoulder. He got up, rubbing it, took his
helmet off with the other hand, threw it at the B‑wing, then started kicking the grounded fighter.
‘Useless piece of crap.’ Kick. ‘Slow, unreliable, worthless junk.’ Kick.

There was a squad of Rebel infantry, civilian blaster rifles and Alderaanian‑ pattern uniforms standing there
looking at him; there were a couple of pilots too, one of them looking annoyed. It must have been his X‑wing
Aron had landed on.
Franjia’s B‑wing arrived with fewer problems. She touched down, vaulted out.
‘You could treat it with a bit more respect. They got us here, after all.’ She advised him. ‘At the most, spit on it.’
The infantry were glaring at them, one of the pilots was laughing at the other one.
One of the infantry came forwards; a rank insignia neither of them recognised. He seemed to be an officer, from
the attitude; sandy hair, pockmarked face like grit had been blasted into it, and it probably had.
‘Your sidearms.’ He held out a hand. The troopers behind him looked menacing. They were surprisingly good at it.
They weren’t heavy, not physically impressive, but they looked as if they held life very cheap indeed.
‘What for?’ Aron asked.
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‘That’s daft. If I wanted to do something like that I’d have strafed the hangar bay. Scrap these‑‘ he waved an arm
at the fighters, ‘their power cells and ordnance cooking off could be enough to break a Nebulon’s back.’
‘As twistedly useful an idea as that is, we should probably hand over your gun and start with “hello.”’ She gave
him her gun, took off her helmet. One of the rebel pilots wolf‑whistled.
‘I think I might just go and do that.’ she said turning back towards the B‑wing.
‘Come with me.’ The rebel infantryman ordered.

They were led out of the bay, past a workshop ‑ the air smelt of metal filings; did they have to hand‑craft their
own replacement parts? Interesting.
Nebulon‑B’s actually did have an inside, although it often looked otherwise, as small as they were. Down three
levels, left two corridors, a couple of heads poked out of doorways to look at them in passing.
Eventually, they were led into a chamber that seemed to be some kind of ready room; it reminded Aron of a
doctor’s waiting room.

‘What is this?’ Aron asked the one man already there. The squad of troops and the two pilots, as well as a ship’s
officer, filed into the room behind them.
‘Debriefing.’ The man already there, in basically civilian clothes ‑ from somewhere deeply unfashionable on the
outer rim ‑ said, in a grey, nondescript voice. Instantly both the pilots’ hackles went up.
‘What the smenge? You don’t trust us?’ Aron snapped.
‘Aron,’ Franjia said to him, ‘we’ve put our lives in these people’s hands. There probably will be a time to start
screaming at them, but I doubt if this is it.’
‘We have very little on you.’ The grey‑voiced man said, as if nothing had been said.
‘Small wonder; if you tried to assemble a file on everyone in the Starfleet, you’d need more data pushers than you
have infantry.’ Franjia pointed out, looking at them, trying to decide who the head man was. Probably one of the
pilots, by the vibe.
‘And they might do you more good.’ Aron added. ‘Look; we came to join the Alliance. Join. So why are you treating
us more like prisoners of war?’
‘We do have a file on the ship you claim to come from.’ The greyish interrogator said. ‘The same ship that
eliminated a frigate division and a local force fighter wing.’
‘What’s your score?’ Franjia turned round to what looked like the senior of the two Rebel pilots.
‘Fourteen.’ The man said. He was shortish ‑ meter seventy ‑ dark haired, pale skinned.
‘Thirty‑four. Fifteen rebel and nineteen renegade Imperial. We’re a‑‘ she realised where she was going with that,
‘we’re from a theatre fleet unit, we see more of the Empire than most.
'The so‑called loyal opposition, the local powers with grudges, the power‑crazed within our own ranks, the
criminals and shysters and arrogant upper‑class shits that the New Order hasn’t got around to purging yet‑ or got
bought off by…turning your back on that, how much comes down to reason and how much to revulsion?’ she
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‘We quit,’ Aron said, ‘because of what was going to happen. We were elsewhere at the time, but I know the Black
Prince took that fast frigate more or less intact, with something around two thousand prisoners.’
‘How?’ the Rebel naval officer asked.
‘Burnt her shielding off with LTL fire, kept her evading long enough for a transport wing to ionise and board. The
crew were turned over to the locals, who plan a mass public execution. The Captain ranted about it in the alpha
wardroom, the senior officers told the juniors ‑ and so on down to the disposables like us.’ Franjia smiled a
ghoulish smile.
‘Mass public execution?’ The pilots, the naval and the intelligence officer looked at each other, assessing, giving
their opinions by expression. The pilots believed it instantly. The intelligence officer was more sceptical.
‘One of the reasons Captain Lennart never rose any higher is because he has a bad habit of telling the truth,
especially when he’s annoyed. In furor veritas.’ Franjia continued. It was actually more or less true.
‘He viewed it…for complicated reasons, he viewed it as a deliberate attempt to marginalise the ship, and have the
sector fleet do things their own way. He had plans for comprehensive brainripping and follow up strikes; we had
already been briefed on some of them. Then Sector threw us ‑ sorry, him ‑ out, seized your people, and basically
plan to put them through blenders.’
She was being deliberately, brutally flippant, and it had the desired effect. The intel type was still uncertain, but
the naval officer and the pilots thought otherwise.
One of them did remember his duty well enough to say ‘You don’t seem very‑ anti.’
‘The Empire, I don’t regret leaving behind‑ but Black Prince, maybe. She was basically a happy ship, and there are
few of those on any side.’ Aron decided to say.
‘The other side of that ‑ the easier it actually is to get away from, the less you need to. Usually. That was just sick,
though. A fair chance is one thing. Well, for a certain value of fair anyway.’
‘A fair chance? You call what the Empire does fair?’ the naval officer snarled.
‘For a given, sneak up on them and shoot them in the back before they see you coming, value of ‘fair’ ‑ where
does your Captain Lennart come from?’ the more senior of the two Rebel pilots asked. Perception was part of the
game, too.
‘He’s old Republic fleet, joined a few years after Naboo I think.’ Aron said. ‘Look ‑ I’m a hunter, not a butcher. It is
relative, I can stomach one but not the other, and aren’t you going to do anything about it?’
The senior pilot and the ship’s officer left; the interrogator, the junior pilot with the bent‑nosed X‑wing, and the
troopers, and the two Imperials still in TIE flight suits. Routine interrogation, names, dates, places, technicalities.

Aron’s service career was fairly straightforward; young swoop ganger from Coruscant, enlisted one step ahead of
the planetary police, did well enough at the Academy to go to fleet rather than garrison duty. A convoy‑escort
Nebulon‑B, then an assault ship, then flight command, then shifted to an Imperator‑I, moved up to Interceptors,
then transferred to the Black Prince as a squadron commander. Most of Aron’s score was pirates and local
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Hovers and skimmers mainly, observation and rescue work. Compulsorily transferred to the militia during a period
of piracy, she had been among the group that had intercepted a major pirate attack ‑ and been drafted into the
Starfleet fighter corps for her pains. Fighters, then TIE bombers off a Venator, then the frankly strange Int/Xt‑ and
at that point she was questioned primarily by Aron.
‘The Xt has a weird reputation. Do they live up to it?’
‘What’s an Xt?’ the rebel pilot ‑ Comran M’lanth ‑ asked.
‘Squint Special.’ Franjia replied. ‘It must have seemed like a good idea at the time‑ maximum possible firepower;
it retains the chin guns the standard Interceptor loses; and adds two more laser cannon in each wing hub.’
The Rebel pilot’s jaw dropped. ‘It does what?’
‘Flies very, very badly. There was a reason they drafted bomber pilots to them. Ten guns sounds wonderful ‑ the
idea was to hit hard enough to knock out things like YT’s, shuttles and transports quickly and neatly. Six extra
guns draining the power banks‑ or carrying their own capacitors, in addition to the weight of the weapon, and six
more guns’ worth of waste heat, on a fighter with too small a wing radiator area to begin with.’
‘It didn’t work?’ Aron asked.
‘Like skis on an AT‑AT. By the time they stripped the guns and capacitors down to save weight, you only had
eight, maybe nine shots before the capacitors ran dry or the barrels melted, take your pick. It was the wrong
spaceframe for the job; a version based on the Starwing hull would be more effective.’
Basically, it dissolved into three pilots talking shop. The little grey man took notes on both sides.
‘OK, but if I get anything ‑ any fighte r‑ in the killing position, above, behind and close, one or two shots and its
dead anyway and your shields don’t do you any good. They might count for something against high tangent
snapshots when you can’t get a consistent sequence of hits, or against light PD, but the whole idea is not to get
shot.’ Aron was ranting.
‘Without the protection of a decent layer of shields, the chances of getting killed before you learn not to get shot‑‘
Comran said.
‘I don’t understand how you expect to win a war on the basis of on the job training.’ Franjia interrupted him.
‘What about getting your shot in first? Past about Interceptor, and I reckon the A‑wing goes too far, you are better
off with shields to hold the thing together, because something that agile is too twitchy to be a good gun platform.’
‘Which side are you on, anyway?’ Aron asked her, mostly in jest.
'The side of superior firepower, of course.’
‘On many things you seem to be, in fact, broadly in agreement.’ The little grey man said; impossible to tell if he
approved or disapproved.
‘Well, it is supposed to be a civil war. You expect the sides to have nothing in common?’ Aron said, still too
The squad leader clenched his fist and stepped forward, about to punch Aron; Comran stopped him.
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‘Perhaps there is.’ Greyface said. ‘Loyalties. I need to know more about your loyalties.’
‘Well,’ Franjia said, openly sneering at him, ‘you qualify as an outright mirror image.’
‘I have not had you tortured.’
‘The most efficient seldom do.’ Franjia said. ‘They erode their way to the truth, that way they find it in fewer
pieces when they get there. All right; I admit it. I’m human, sometimes conscience and pragmatism trip over each
other, and loyalty is a stranger beast than most people like to think.’
‘We believe that the cause of the Alliance is just. A search for justice is not as powerful a motive as we would
want.’ The interrogator said.
‘Forces within the empire; old guard and new men, radicals and moderates ‑ some leave the Imperial armed forces
and some are ejected. Centrifugal forces.’
‘No, no, linear forces, I’m a third dan master of the Cult of Thrust.’ Aron pushed his wit a shade too far, and then
turned serious. ‘Why is it so bloody hard for you to accept that you might be right? There weren’t exactly an
abundance of Rebel recruitment offices on Coruscant. Now I find myself on a ship loose enough to make a
getaway from, with a hyperspace capable fighter that probably knows the way, and a messy atrocity in progress to
turn my back on. Why don’t you think that adds up?’
‘Have you ever considered defecting to the Empire?’ Franjia asked him. Eyebrows shot up around the room.
‘As an academic possibility.’ The interrogator replied.
‘Why didn’t it add up for you?’ she said, innocent sounding.
‘You plan to stand my reasoning on its head?’
‘Basically. Why don’t you think that your reasons to belong to the Alliance and not to the Empire are enough?’
‘Because I have yet to be convinced that they are also your reasons.’ The grey man said. ‘You put up with the
Empire and served it loyally this far, did you not?’
‘Actually, as a regional fleet unit, and an ex‑cop, cynicism is part of the territory.’ Franjia answered. ‘You get to be
familiar with the brutalities that local forces perpetrate. In fact, you recognise them as exactly the same sort of
bloody‑minded stupidity that tore the Republic apart.’ The rebels looked unfriendly upon her.
‘I thought being part of the loyal opposition was enough; that things were no worse than they would be otherwise,
and perhaps a little better. Then you come face to face with a genuine, full‑blooded psychotic, and the shock of
realising that they believe that you, in fact, are on their side. That they expect you to hear and obey, as if nothing
was wrong.
That their sense of what is and isn’t right is so far out of touch that they don’t understand why people are
shocked by them any more ‑ you expect to find that huddled in the gutter, not in power.’

The Alliance naval lieutenant re‑entered the room. ‘Would you care to prove your loyalty to the Alliance?’ he
asked, bluntly. The grey faced spy glared at him; the first sign of real emotion he had displayed.
‘Depends whether our propaganda people are right about your initiation rites.’ Aron replied.
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Comran couldn’t help it. ‘And at worst?’

‘Spend the rest of our lives in ‘debriefing’. I don’t know who you, personally, would be prepared to kill to avoid
that fate, but‑‘
‘So what’s the mission?’ Aron asked. ‘Let me guess. Recon run?’
With suitable destruct charges bolted under the ejector seat, Franjia guessed. ‘Provided you don’t make us fly it in
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Ch 13

Nearly thirty‑seven thousand crew, that worked out at a shade over four thousand midshipmen or better, ten
thousand petty and warrant officers. Four thousand officers needed a lot of wardroom space. There was enough
internal space and to spare on a Star Destroyer, but traditions died hard.
A wardroom was combination living room, dining room, lounge and library space, dating back to when ships were
too small to give the officers any private space beyond a cot and a footlocker. The Republic fleet had been more
expansive about these things, but making officers associate socially with each other had struck the Starfleet as
good sense.

Four decks down and two compartments aft, the main bridge officers’ wardroom was busy. Dinner, and much
talking of shop.
‘As far as I’m concerned, the sector fleet are part of the problem.’ Brenn was pausing between mouthfuls. ‘Not
Rebel, I wouldn’t go that far, but definitely independent. Or at least ‑ not trying very hard.’
‘Their cryptographic security isn’t very good either.’ Rythanor said. ‘Traffic flow patterns are‑ strange. A lot of
silent substations, too much coming and going from central command. That has advantages; they’re overworked,
they get sloppy. We’re good, but we’re not that good. If we can break in, the Alliance can‑ and the Ubiqtorate
could blow in and out like a summer breeze. Probably even the ISB might manage to achieve something.’
The Starfleet always had a closer relationship with the substantially more competent Imperial Intelligence than it
had with the enthusiastic amateurs of the Imperial Security Bureau; closer, but nobody, possibly not even
themselves, had a comfortable relationship with the Men In Visible.
Black Prince, like all Imperator‑class, was simply too obvious for intelligence work. Following up on information
revealed and handing over prisoners taken was about it, and they would have welcomed a little professional advice
‘Winter typhoon, more like.’ One of the pit officers, com watch team supervisor Lieutenant Ondrath Ntevi, said. ‘I
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One thing, they have been interested in us. Forty, fifty requests for information to regional command, theatre
fleet, Central Command, you name it.’
‘That should keep them usefully baffled for a couple of years.’ Brenn said. If there was a place for glib
facetiousness on an Imperial warship, the wardroom was it.
‘Well, it’s kept us baffled for the best part of two decades.’ Rythanor said.
‘Sir, is there any particular reason we’ve sometimes had to break through fleet security to get our own mail?’ Ntevi
‘That’s right, you don’t know the story, do you?’
‘Story? I thought we were trailing a multiplex of gibberish. If there’s a core of sense in there, I’d like to hear it too.’
Rythanor asked.
‘Boiled down to the bare essentials,’ Brenn grinned, ‘Black Prince commissioned late. And early, technically. She
was held up in construction, region command misestimated the actual completion date, and…there was no
formation for us to fit in to. We were assigned to an old Operational Fleet, 149, which had already ceased to exist
when it was folded into Qiilura Sector Fleet‑ the original commission, already filled by another temporary
assignment. We were posted to a formation that didn’t exist yet‑ Shiwal Sector Fleet‑ when we completed working
up earlier than the second due date. At this point we veer into, well, I trust I’m among friends here…outright
‘Organisational screwups are one thing‑ taking deliberate advantage of them, how?’ Ntevi asked, smiling in
‘The Exec of the plankowner crew. He appealed to a third command, the Tingel Approaches subCommand that
eventually turned into Azure Hammer, a long, deceptively straightforward set of requests, which kept getting
continually amended and clarified, as per procedure. Which‑ and remember we’re still part of 149, and chain of
command procedure meant we could effectively use their letterhead‑ two other commands got dragged into the
mess, arguing over us. What’s it called, Pseudo? Jublo? The art of using an opponent’s strength against them‑ it
works on paperwork too.
'Basically, we managed to start a faction fight over us, get them wrestling with each other while this ship sort of…
slipped between the cracks, acting and drawing pay, fuel, spares and stores on one or other‑ or several‑
temporary authorisations. At one point we were drawing pay and spares for a Shockwave with the same name‑ In
Standard, not Basic‑ which was, well, interestingly inappropriate.
'We had to bank the excess as capital and draw interest, horse trade the bits that were too dangerous to sell off
back to the Starfleet‑ beginning a long tradition of improvising, modifying, making do. No‑one with the specific
oversight to stop us.
‘We were the lead ship against, and claimed the kill credit for, the CSS Moderniser‑ a separatist remnant
battlewagon. The captain was old Republic navy ‑ this was two years after Second Coruscant; pretty much
everyone senior was ‑ and not a natural Imperial.
'He resigned his commission and retired to the Rim, he’s probably a Rebel now. That was what triggered the
investigation, in the end, but to all practical purposes the exec was running the ship, and we were moving from
zone to zone pretty much at will ‑ looking for more war.
'Distinction, glory, advancement. We were a crack ship; worth arguing over.
‘It came to an end when Captain Dodonna resigned and three alternative captains turned up over the next month.
Live by the improv, die by the improv. Three separate commands claiming the right to assign and promote‑ or
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'Now, I was a raw junior lieutenant at the time, just too late to defend the Republic, still so wet behind the ears my
helmet kept sliding off; I only worked out the details much later.
'The papers still exist, somewhere. The last I heard, the court records were a standard training document for the
ISB’s fraud squads.
‘The Starfleet dealt with the ship by assigning us to a higher echelon force on a permanent basis‑ the only way to
tidy up all the counter‑claims, and exactly what we wanted in the first place.’
Brenn gestured at the squadron shield on the wardroom wall; the winged mace of 851 Destroyer Squadron.
‘One City ‑ Urbanus ‑ class cruiser, two Allegiance and two Shockwave heavies, three Tector, six Imperator
including us, three old Venator. The squadron has two distinctions; we have never deployed all in one place at one
time, and we have never sent a man to any of the strategic pursuit squadrons. Three, if you include never
submitting a dishonest fitness report.’

‘Sir, why is that so much of a distinction?’ Ntevi asked. ‘Surely‑‘

‘Everyone screws up. Gets sloppy, takes shortcuts, fails in courtesy to a brother officer‑‘
Someone muttered ‘Mirannon’.
‘Precisely.’ Brenn said. ‘Engineer‑Commander Mirannon is a perfect ‑ no, spectacular‑ example. Professionally,
he’s a very competent officer. Personally, he’s rude, abrupt, abrasive, pushy, ungentlemanlike and a chronic
practical joker and encourager of same. I’m not saying that just because I like the man.’
‘According to our store returns,’ Wathavrah said, ‘he has been stockpiling torpedoes. Either he’s planning to go
into the blasting business for himself, or he has one spectacular trick planned.’
‘Don’t worry, the authorisations actually exist.’ Brenn said. ‘First Principle of Bureaucratic Warfare; do it right,
somewhere. Then lie about it all you want, once you’ve established the ability to prove it’s the other guy’s fault. In
theory we have them to replenish other ships. Next time we lose a turret,’ the navigator said it as if it was
inevitable, ‘his plan is to emergency fit torpedo tubes in place of the flank LTL’s, and double them up‑ to preserve
the ship’s effective firepower.
'Of course, when we get the turret replaced, the tubes won’t go away. Net result, we acquire a large addition to
our long range and bombardment firepower. As an academic exercise, for all of you, picture the charge sheet.’

‘I knew he wasn’t mad enough to do something like that without covering himself, but he comes damnably close.’
Wathavrah said. ‘When was he planning to inform the relevant department of this?’
‘Before or after you unload‑ three Category One, two Category Two and four Category Three offences?‑ on him?’
Rythanor asked.
‘None of which will happen.’ Brenn explained. ‘He will be reprimanded, which will balance out against the
commendation for putting the ship back together after being damaged. Punishment will be administrative and
internal. His fitrep will say things like “brilliant but unstable” and “achieves results at the expense of proper
procedure.” Meaning we hold on to him.’
‘You can break a man’s career with an honest fitrep. The slight screwups, the mistakes you make while learning to
do the job, the routine stress of sitting on a stellar power level reactor and waiting for it to burp, the enemy trying
to kill you and command trying to get you killed ‑ what’s perfection?
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50% of the time, but only if allowed to use both hands.” We like to tell as much of the truth as the individuals
involved can stand.’

‘In the interest of keeping them still standing.’ Wathavrah said. ‘If I punished all my people for uniform and
conduct infractions, as severely as the book says ‑ we’d end up parking the ship on Kessel, and could the last one
out turn the lights off? What good would that do anyone? There has to be some discretion.’
‘Shandon, the last all up drill, how did your gun crews do?’ Brenn asked.
‘We benchmarked out at six point eight.’ The gunnery officer reported. ‘In accordance with standing orders.’
‘Without the minor hiccups, how would you have done?’
‘Eight point nine five.’ Rythanor admitted.
‘Which is in violation of squadron standing orders, because we are supposed to pick up on the minor details like
non‑standard uniform, holoposters in the turret‑ to keep the benchmark below seven. The screening threshold.’
Brenn said.
‘I don’t understand.’ Ntevi said.
‘Above that benchmark, you become eligible for transfer to strategic forces, like the Death Squadron, like the
Death Star‑ picture a situation where you have to live up to the pack of lies on your fitness report.’ Brenn said,
smiling like a wolf.
‘Ouch…’ Ntevi realised.

‘Their real performance is nowhere near as good as the fleet likes to think. They’re all far too busy simulating
performance to have any time for the real thing. The only way they can keep their jobs, or their lives with the Dark
Lord involved, is to do it exactly by the book. No initiative. No ability to deviate from the plan, react to the
unpredictable. If you want to turn into a hollow shell of your former self, running scared of your own command
structure every nanosecond of the day, join the waiting list for the Executor. If you actually want to fight for the
Empire, stay put.’

All of them made the appropriate deduction for squadron pride and personal envy.
‘The loose end. The first exec. Executed?’ Ntevi asked.
‘No; it was hard to prove that a ship with over forty merchant captures and ten warship kills including a medium
cruiser was acting against the interests of the Empire. At least, it was hard then; I dare say it could be managed
now. The court busted him back to Lieutenant, and a staff job. Took him eight years to work his way back to a
destroyer command.’
‘So what happens next?’ Wathavrah asked. ‘Now that we have a plant in the alliance.‘
‘Who told you that?’ Brenn shouted at him.
‘Two fighter pilots go missing, and their rooms aren’t torn apart for evidence, their comrades aren’t interrogated
to within an inch of their lives, their places aren’t filled ‑ no internal security investigation worth dreck, in fact.
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‘You may be on to something. Don’t compromise them. Now,’ Brenn said, ‘we wait for the Rebs to take the bait.’

It was a slightly augmented fighter squadron that left the Chandrillia Rose.
The apparently junior Rebel pilot who had watched them undergo debriefing turned out to be more senior than he
looked, and not too bad an actor. Squadron Leader M’Lanth’s X‑wing leading, and both Y‑wing flight leaders had
traded up to the B‑wings. In Aron and Franjia’s opinion, only very slightly augmented.
They flew a formation that made no sense, except under the circumstances. The rebel bomb half‑squadron had all
moved up a place; the flight leaders taking B‑wings, their wingmen taking their fighters‑ and the last pair of Y‑
wings were left for their ‘new comrades’.
Physically, they were leading, where the rebels could watch them.

Just before takeoff, one of the flight leaders‑ what was it with these people? She hadn’t seen a single one who
would have looked out of place in an Imperial uniform. Same names, same manners, same jokes, those of them
that had any sense of humour at all. Their personnel breakdown was virtually the same as the racist, sexist
Imperial fleet. That worried her, to an extent.
‘So how do these things fly, then?’ the flight leader‑ Wordell Grannic‑ had asked Aron.
‘It’s one of yours, you don’t know?’
‘Central command squadrons get ships like that, maybe. One or two squadrons in a subzonal command, ten or
twenty in a sector maybe; we wouldn’t even see one in a green star.’
‘Don’t you at least have sim time to go on?’ Aron asked.
‘On a frigate? We don’t have the facilities for that.’ Wordell said, baffled.
Both the imperial pilots kept a straight face only with effort. ‘Well, electronic cockpit time isn’t all it’s cracked up
to be.’ Aron said.
‘It’s a bomber.’ Franjia said. ‘Slow, well armed and good fire control. Fly like you expect people to get out of your
‘You sure as stang can’t.’ Aron muttered.
Well, they were in the air now, and both of them meandering loose around the sky on their way to the
programmed jump point. M’Lanth was fairly competent; he had the wit to realise that four of his pilots were new
to their craft, and give them a little time to get used to them. And their astromechs. RO2‑ZB1 was riding behind
Aron, RF2K‑RL3 with Franjia; ten other droids in the unit, the odds that at least one of them was downloading to
Imperial Intelligence‑ whether it knew it or not‑ better than forty percent.
Both of the astromechs had probably been briefed to prevent any re‑defection attempt. Triple agents.
The Imperial pilots were, nonetheless, enjoying themselves. The rebels were short of sims, short of fuel and parts
to allow their fighters to accumulate real wear and tear; fifty, sixty flight hours was normal.
Between patrol and hunter operations, Aron and Franjia both had well over two thousand. They reacted more
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rolling round each other, Aron got killing positions on all of his flight, one after the other, pop, pop, pop. Franjia
preferred distance, long range, high aspect fire; just not quite where they were expecting, just out of the
crosshairs, ducking past every time.

Comran knew his business; he might be able to take on one of them, but not both. ‘If you can keep that up, I’m
glad you’re on our side. What do you normally fly?’ he asked them.
‘Starwings. And how I wish I’d brought mine with me.’ Franjia said; her astromech beeped indignantly. ‘No, Raf‑
Tookie, you don’t make up for the five hundred ‘g’ this clunker’s short of.’
‘You don’t rate the Y‑wing?’ Grannic said.
‘Is this really the time and place for a discussion of Imperial methodology?’
‘Before a fight, dodgy ‑ but a lot better than during or after.’ Aron said.

‘The TIE Bomber goes back to the clone wars. It was designed for close quarters brawls; massive casualties
inevitable, from friendly and random as much as targeted fire. The only way to minimise your losses is to degrade
the enemy faster than he does you. The design shows that‑ heavy payload, good electronics, medium
manoeuvrability and poor straight line thrust and damage tolerance.
'The Y‑wing’s a completely different type‑ a fighter‑bomber, designed for open, running combat, faster, more
agile‑ but not by much. It’s a step in the right direction, for the Alliance. Only a short one, but better than
nothing.’ Franjia gave her opinion.
‘Intel doesn’t trust you.’ M’Lanth said.
‘Not surprised. I wouldn’t like us, if I were him.’ Aron said.
‘If he wasn’t suspicious, he wouldn’t be doing his job.’ Franjia said. ‘He’ll learn.’ Inwardly, she was calculating her
probable lifespan as an Alliance pilot. It was not a comfortable line of thought.
Lady Lyria Tellick had been a senatorial aide at one point; she knew politics, and she loathed Palpatine and his
Azirrn, she had never really dared to seriously believe in a future for them together; there were no broken dreams
grinding against each other, at least it had been a clean amputation.
Was she really a rebel? Lyria Tellick, Alliance agent in place? Probably. That could have carried her here by
stranger, although possibly more honest, routes.

M’Lanth announced the hypershift; the fourteen leapt into hyperspace, ran their way down through the energies
and up through the velocities, heading for Ghorn III. Franjia felt no reluctance about shooting at the sector forces
‑ apart from the practicalities of doing it in a Y‑wing. They might easily have ended up doing that anyway. Aron
was feeling grumpy enough to attack pretty much anybody. Suicide missions had never agreed with him.
The exit was planned very close to the planet; close enough that the defences could get a bow shock and warning
off them, so close that they would be deploying inside any likely screen. Hopefully, close enough that they could
be in and out without having to engage.
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The actual plan was for four pairs, Y’s and B’s, flying a low, fast patrol route, down on the deck using the planet as
cover, two flights of X keeping the TIE’s off their backs. Sensible as far as it went, but he didn’t agree with making
it a squadron operation at all. Too much to sneak in, too little to blast their way. Better, if they needs must use
what they had to hand, to send a smaller force‑ a flight of Y’s, fake transponders as some local force defence unit,
go by bluff.
That was only part of the problem. It wasn’t that he had never questioned his own loyalties; just that he loved
flying, and had allowed himself to become hardened to the price of the job. Fast fighters tended to have guns
strapped to them.
Basically, he was on the imperial side because he had been born there. Something about the Rebel cause did
appeal; independence, freedom, being on the wrong side of the law. Only a badly damaged society would cling to
values like Order, Stability, Conformity. Then again, it was starting to look as if the Alliance had more than a few
problems of it’s own.
I’m using myself as a test case, he thought. If this lot are anything to go by, I could go far as a freedom fighter ‑ if
they can convince me, or seduce me with a command of my own, we’ll just have to see, won’t we?

Emergence; and a quick passive scan revealed a merciful absence of destroyers. The Golan was still there; with
them between it and the planet, all it could do was scramble the alert flight. Heavy warships around Ghorn IV,
nothing nearby.
Imperial doctrine ‑ and what an aid to the rebels it was ‑ called for an aggressive response; instead of doing
something sensible, like raising planetary shields on low power and sending for a hunter group to chase the
rebels away, they would scramble the garrison fighters.
M’lanth’s lead triad of X‑wings peeled off to deal with the alert flight; the four pairs of bombers dived into the
Their shields soaked up the heat of re‑entry and deceleration, leaving them plunging ballistically through the
upper air, S‑turning to bring them down to a practical repulsor flight speed and heading for the treetops. It was
their most vulnerable phase; they were lucky the garrison didn’t react in time.
Grannic’s flight were headed straight for trouble, skimming the planetary capital; prisons, public spaces. The flight
Franjia was part of was going wider, three provincial starports to scan.
At top practical speed‑ running on painfully weak gravitic engines‑ the B‑wings’ speed gave the Y’s fifty kph in
hand; and meant the planetary garrison TIEs could catch them easily.
Grannic was running with his sensors active as they came up on the outskirts, scanning forward; the other pair of
Y’s were focusing on one building after another.

Aron slammed his repulsors into reverse, they lanced ahead of him, he accelerated forward in chase and
hammered all three of them with sensor and fire control pulses, one after the other.
‘You’re going to fight your way past at least a flight of garrison TIEs‑ you want it to be this easy for them?
Concentrate on the target once you get to the target.’
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The first had two TIEs on ready racks out in the open; they were the first target. They should have been airborne
already‑ perhaps the controller had been reprimanded for a premature launch before; however it happened, they
were too late. The flight leader hosed one down‑ missing wild at first, unfamiliar gun layout, hammering the
ground spewing loose and fused earth everywhere. The second was starting to lift when Franjia took a single
aimed shot that hit it in the right wing hub.
It fireballed, the pilot’s ejector seat took him clear to seven hundred metres and his gravchute started to drift him
Franjia started a tight evasive weave, looking for the defence flight hangar and turrets; she was relieved she hadn’t
killed him ‑ in theory she was prepared for that, in practise she was happy to postpone the moment. Relief turned
to horror when she saw one of the X‑wings curve after the falling black figure. She rolled out and climbed after
him on a brief flash of ion drive.
Normally that was a dumb move in air ‑ the dumping of ekawatts of energy into thick lower atmosphere made a
pretty good explosion substitute. The astromech screamed in protest, lightning bolts crackled to earth off the ion
trail, and the shockwave the miserable aerodynamics of the Y‑wing trailed behind it slammed into the X‑wing and
sent it tumbling.
Franjia rolled out at the top of the zoom. ‘How dare you!’ she shouted over the com. ‘You call yourselves the side
of good and you shoot at ejected pilots?’
M’Lanth had been manoeuvring to line up on her; the tumbling X‑wing said ‘Hey, all I wanted was a gun camera
‘Of a man in a mask?’ Franjia spat back.
‘Iyran, both of you, calm down and get back in formation.’

Not before time‑ the relative handful of defence turrets around the port were shooting at them now. Green, red,
orange, blue ‑ a low‑rent garrison like this, they got the tail end of every gas shipment.
It made for an interesting light show, but not when it was happening to you. Most of the bolts were converging on
the high, cover flight. Franjia rolled and dived using the column of shredded air as cover; one of the high X‑wings
got coned, trapped between converging streams of fire. The B‑wing went for one of the turrets, covering him; all
three Y’s did the same. Too late‑ the X‑wing tried to turn on one of them, flew too straight for too long, the
converging fire hit and splashed it.
The rest dived for cover, the defence turrets looked for a fresh target; they found the B‑wing, and it’s shields
started to come apart; Franjia came up off the deck in a half‑roll, line of fire trailing her across the sky, sent a
stream of laser and ion fire into the defence tower next to the port control tower.
The fire control wasn’t as good, but more than enough for a stationary target. It’s shields blew in and the quad
laser fireballed.
She had no problems at all with that kind of target. Point defence weapons were no pilot’s friend ‑ and they were
Imperial Army anyway. The rest of the defensive flight ‑ that would be the hangar; empty. Withdrawn, or ‑ on
instinct she broke hard right, skimming less than three metres off the ground, shields sparkling with the flare of
bursting blaster bolts and shrapnel.
Two TIEs, two old Z‑95; one of the TIEs went after the B‑wing, which wallowed ‑ the TIE overshot, blasting chunks
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the repulsors, laid up a high deflection shot as it tried to line her up‑ hit it and sent it tumbling, the second shot
was a kill.
One of the Y’s exploded under a stream of laser fire, the TIE‑ sensibly‑ flew from there to the city, to hide behind
the buildings and wait to be reinforced‑ or for a chance at a shot in the back. The second ’95 did the same after
spraying fire over two Y‑wings, denting their shields‑ but the old blasters needed a long, steady stream of fire on
target. The X’s pursued, the remaining bombers went after the turrets; Franjia broke off the chase to deal with the
mission, scanning the warehouses and bays of the starport.
It was small by galactic standards; total volume of trade less than a million tons a day. Zig‑zagging and rooftop
hopping, it was a matter of moments for her astromech to find life signs. Masses of them; the Y‑wing’s computer
tried to distinguish them through the jamming and lost count. ‘I have either a herd of nerf, or a jail.’
Calculated risk time; whereabouts in the building ‑ there. It was a large square block with an undulating roof,
some mad bout of architecture. She picked the far edge of the building and blew one of the roof ridges off. Blast
carried the debris clear; the shock disrupted the jammers and security screens long enough to get a good look.
‘It’s a jail. They’re in there, two thousand plus, mostly human, don’t seem to have been too badly mistreated yet.’

The planetary capital was naturally more heavily defended. The first thing Aron did as his Y‑wing brought the city
down over the horizon was look for the garrison ase‑ looming, slab‑sided, tower‑topped ‑ and lob a proton
torpedo at it.
‘You’re crazy! They’ll‑‘ one of the Rebels shouted.
‘They’re reacting anyway ‑ suppress them. Slow fire, make them shoot torps, not us, keep the TIEs in their
hangars for fear of blast. Kriffing well fire.’
One of the Y’s lobbed a torpedo after Aron’s; he was thinking, city. Maze. Repulsors gave off nothing like an ion
signature. How do I spot a defending fighter in a maze of mirrors; and on the other side, how do they find me?
By coming and looking. Already over the suburbs, less than thirty seconds from the city centre and the public
buildings, when his sensors identified two four‑ strong flights of TIE fighters, one high, one low.

The X‑wings raced ahead, the high TIEs slowed to meet them and the low flight curved up underneath; Aron
accelerated up to meet them‑ locking on to one which began to weave, faking it out by switching his targeting
computer off and spraying shot at it’s wingman; unguided, unheralded‑ he missed low with the lasers but the ion
bolts hit the eyeball dead centre.
Not exactly aerodynamic, the pilot could have tried to fight it down to a dead stick landing‑ but he did the
sensible thing instead and punched out, the fighter tumbling down to hit and explode in someone’s swimming
The chemical‑looking flare of rupturing capacitors flashed the water into a rising pillar of steam. A dogfight in
fog. Fun.
The other six‑ against X’s, in atmosphere, at two to one‑ the X’s sprayed fire over the formations and broke.

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controlled crash; an X‑wing got hit in the upper port engine, the S‑foil tore away and it spun out of control. Two
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The new bomber shot at the TIE, brilliant crimson heavy laser and red‑orange autoblasters, the TIE‑ wearing flight
commander’s stripes‑ rolled high and right out of the streams and put two twin laser bolts into the B‑wing. Its
shields flickered and crashed, Aron nailed the TIE a split second before it could finish the job.
Two for me, Aron thought, too late to stop the crippled X‑wing being finished off. The pilot punched out.
Before anything else, Aron lobbed another torpedo at the garrison base. His astromech watched the sensors, the
TIEs were actually giving the remaining pair of X a relatively easy time, herding them and holding them in check;
most of them were going after the bombers.

One TIE dipped down towards Aron; he swung towards it aiming about twenty degrees off‑rolling round some sort
of district facility, a fire tower he thought ‑ the TIE pilot tried to be fancy, aim with the gun offset.
It was a good design idea badly executed; there were simpler ways to do it. Sienar made a big ‑ and clumsy ‑ deal
of it because the big gun on a small frame of the TIE needed the engines specifically reset to soak up the recoil;
they ramped up the ergonomic difficulties to match the practical difficulties.
Cygnus, with the heavier Starwing, had been playing with the idea of an eyeball sight ‑ servo equipped weapon
mounts linked to an aiming reticule that fit over the pilot’s eye.
Aron’s Y‑wing had a turret. Only ion cannon, but the little side‑stick controlled them a lot more easily; high
deflection, he hosed the ion stream on to the TIE‑ aiming down, one of his shots hit a house and blacked it out,
another started an electrical fire, then he connected.
The TIE fell out of the sky, too low for reaction time, it hit the ground and tumbled like a jack until it broke up.

Two more of the TIEs were down, one of the Y‑wings had an engine pod in flames; and the garrison base was
launching another flight.
One of them was a /gt; Aron realised when it tried to get out of the way of his last torpedo and failed. The point
defence guns caught it; not a clean hit, the torp had a split millisecond to detonate in, and did. The blast caught
the /gt, and the load of proton bombs on board detonated. The flare shredded two of the fighters and sent the
others tumbling, left the face of the garrison base blackened and sintered.
That‑ literally‑ cleared the air, but from the total of forty, that was less than twelve dealt with, and the strike force
would run out of fighters first. There would be smaller elements scattered around the planet, too, ‘95s as well as

Aron dived to roof height and redlined his repulsors, astromech unit complaining and barely managing to hold
them together. Time to think objective ‑ get it done, get out.
The prisoners themselves weren’t the problem. It was the other end of the ‘humiliating and painful death’ process
Aron was searching for. Something public ‑ probably not the governor’s palace, possibly the garrison but he
hoped not; and he had a city centre to play with.
Never mind womp rats. As a young capitoline thug, zooming through crowded skyways at absurd speeds was
routine for him; the last time he had done this, he was being chased by the police.
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best thing he could do for the Empire might be to go back and encourage them. They’d have the Rebel Alliance’s
reputation in tatters within the week.

He’d never gone wallsurfing in anything as solid as a Y‑wing before; the droid was a drawback‑ if it was possible
for an astromech to have an apoplectic fit, his was ‑ but the thing was a lot tougher than any swoop. Which gave
him an idea.
Right now, defence coordination had the opposite problem; they would be getting swamped. People calling and
com’ing from all over the city, to report, to complain, just to panic. There had been some damage to the city, but
the/gt had been an airburst, not really damaging anything except windows and vid reception. Unless the garrison
did something outrageously stupid ‑ like trying to shoot through buildings to get him, not impossible that they
would be that dumb ‑ it was just standard monstrously illegal city flying.
People shooting at him was nothing unusual, but repulsortanks‑ that was less fun.

Ground forces had been activated, and one of them picked up on him ‑ a technically obsolete Sabre‑class tank. He
had to swerve down a side loop to avoid it ‑ it came after him.
He had four hundred and eighty km/h in hand, but couldn’t use all of them in a cityscape, and it could fly through
buildings a lot more efficiently than he could.
The city wasn’t laid out on a grid; it was organised around linked loops of ring skyways, which made for fast
flying‑ past hordes of shoppers and commuters and delivery vans.
Was it right to hose them with ion fire to create an obstruction? Probably not. It might be fun, but it wouldn’t
necessarily work, either.

Flash right, a flicker of office windows to his left, someone threw a computer out of a window at him; bit of
repressed frustration coming through there.
Zig‑zag, trying to lose the tank ‑ it knew the city better and got ahead, curved out of an intersection after him,
but not firing; public building ahead. Fire coming at him from the rooftop ‑ streams of blaster bolts. That made it
a non‑trivial problem.
An Imperial Security Bureau office, apparently; right, Aron thought, as Imperial or Rebel, I hate them either way.
They were using E‑Webs on him; a strange gun, for something that size it threw a surprisingly light bolt ‑ but the
rate of fire was very high and the recoil was virtually nonexistent. Held steady, pounding bolt‑streams into the
same aim point, it could chew through warship grade durasteel in seconds.
The Sabre had the sense to stop shooting at him, but the CompForce fools on the roof were dumb enough to keep
firing past him and catch it in the cone of fire; the rain of blaster bolts gnawed at the hull, blew off the stabiliser
fins, killed the secondary light cannon, demolished sensors and fire control, took out the vision devices.
Flying blind and paralysed, the tank tried to ground ‑ on the roof. Three of the power generators ruptured and
detonated, the tank rolled over and the crew crawled out.
Aron couldn’t resist it; the damage to the armoured roof made it a tempting target.
He pulled the Y‑wing up in a hammerhead turn, attracting TIE attention. It took very little mental effort to think of
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Only the elite got to personalise their fighters; the wing commander on his previous destroyer had “You lookin’ at
me?” painted on the side of his Interceptor. Like thousands of others, probably, but it summed up perfectly. The
rebs were right to call them ‘eyeballs’; They were looking at you.
From them at least, looks could kill. Do the deed and run.

Aron dived on the building, put a couple of shots into the underbelly of the tank. Its reactor vessel ruptured,
sending a gush of eye‑blasting light out. His viewscreen went dark, he switched to proton torps, as vision started
to return he shot a pair off at the hole, untargeted through the sepia haze; hurdled the far edge of the roof,
doubled shields aft.
The TIEs had the sense to stay clear and give them room to detonate. They were semi‑directed antiship warheads,
they slammed through the roof and blew up. Most of the blast went downwards into the body of the vaguely
pyramidal, fifty‑ storey building, enough spread to gush out of the roof and the windows like an erupting volcano.
Aron rode part of the concussion wave away, astromech screaming something like ‘I resign’ as the building burnt
and collapsed in on itself. Later on, he would get the shakes. Right then, all he thought was ‑ crispy fried cop. I
could probably get a commendation from both sides.
He had gained distance there; he wanted enough clear space to, at least, break for orbit ‑ he rolled right, dived
down a ring‑way underpass. It turned out to be a bad move. He hurdled a jack‑knifed cargo train, went the wrong
way round a split, avoided a subsurface residential complex, made surface again and climbed to break for orbit;
but he had been predictable, and there were a flight of TIEs waiting for him.
He tried to bank round on to one, and found the entire fighter following him; damn aircraft ‑ like repulsors ‑ he
had to twist away as the TIEs opened fire. They were, in contrast, probably overtrained; they were having difficulty
keeping out of each other’s way, and they were all chasing the same fire solution ‑ he didn’t have to worry about
dodging a cone of fire, just a stream.
He shot past them out into the open air, looking for room to fight in; they followed him up, and two cone‑shaped
glows flashed past him on the way down. He had missed the announcement; they had found it, the stadium was
being prepped. Franjia’s comment about blenders wasn’t that far from the truth.

Most of the rebel fighters were breaking for orbit; she had counted them and missed him. A fast suborbital hop on
ion thrust to the capital, and two altitude fused proton torps fired into the formation; on repulsor, they couldn’t
break away fast enough.
The blast broke one TIE ‑ its wings folded up, the pilot dived out of the shattered viewport ‑ and detonated
another, sent the outer pair tumbling away on the shockwave; she lined up on the one that looked to be
recovering control fastest, and sent single shots after him.
The pilot threw the controls away, deliberately losing control to avoid being hit; it worked until he flew into an
office tower. Aron tried for the last with turret ion fire, but she got to it first, ripping the top of the eyeball open.
Both of them wasted no time ‑ pointed the nose up, lit off ion engines on all the power the shields could sustain
and rocketed out of the atmosphere to a safe jump distance.
‘How did you do?’ she asked him. Her astromech was twittering away on a side band, trying to calm his down.
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‘Six and a handful of defence turrets ‑ nice work on the office.’ She said.
‘You’re not ‑ I mean, they were…’
The ISB are thugs, not police.’ She said scornfully. ‘No concept of law, even less of justice. Good riddance.’
‘Speaking of the law‑incoming corvette.’ Aron noticed.
‘Hit it.’ Barely into full vacuum, a Lancer bearing down on them, they and the surviving rebels bolted for
Nine fighters arrived at the rendezvous, one of those, a Y‑wing, so badly shot up the pilot and droid ejected as
soon as they re‑entered a bradyonic state, one of the B‑wings with large pieces missing.

Chandrillia Rose was accompanied by a positive battle group ‑ by rebel rather than Imperial standards. Three
Corvettes, two MC30s and a Quasar Fire, another Nebulon, a Neutron Star and what appeared to be the flagship
MC40 light cruiser‑ frigate, by Imperial standards.
It was a fairly impressive force. Well above Sector’s estimates ‑ well below Lennart’s hopes.
‘Aron, does that Neutron Star look familiar to you?’
‘Well, the charred spot on it’s dorsal mid surface is a bit of a giveaway. Do you think we should admit it?’ He asked
‘Considering that they’ve just monitored us saying it anyway, we might as well.’

The squadron ‑ what was left of it ‑ was ordered to divert to the cruiser‑carrier, and land there. At least it was
easier than touching down on a Nebulon‑B.
Large bays, amazingly full ‑ they must have been resupplied; there was a squadron of the strange local fighters,
cylinders with cruciform weapon pods, a squadron of Gauntlets, squadron of T‑wings, squadron of Y‑wings. The
locals left to make room for them ‑ exchanging with the Rose.
There was a crowd around the battered fighters as they floated on to dispersal pads and shut down, pilots, navy
and ground forces; Aron’s astromech was shaking as it was lowered to the deck, a robopsychologist led it away,
pestered by a flight and two naval officers wanting the data.

Good and bad, Franjia thought. They seem to be taking the bait; but we have a whole new set of people to explain
ourselves to. Eight corvettes and two frigates. Fourteen squadrons, maybe.
M’Lanth came over to them. ‘Between them, my lads scored seven, I lost five with three ejected. You two alone
racked up eleven.’
The flight controller waiting to debrief him was horrified. ‘Five. Five fighters and five good men.’
Franjia and Aron both thought what any Imperial pilot would under the circumstances; the definition of ‘good’ was
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‘The security building,’ Aron said, ‘is mine.’

‘It might be all for nothing.’ The junior lieutenant flight controller said. ‘We sent a preliminary report, and…sector
are considering doing nothing.’
‘What?’ Aron exploded in anger. Actually, that was a bad metaphor for someone who had access to proton
torpedoes. He looked like he would like to make someone explode.
Franjia’s mind raced; a loyalty test? Simulating cold anger bought her a second to work out what she ought to say.
‘If this is some kind of loyalty test, it’s sick. Conspiracy theories be damned, are you really going to stand aside
and let your comrades be inventively and grotesquely abused to death in front of an audience of trillions? If you’re
thinking about the martyrs‑‘ she said; people were starting to listen.
‘The Empire kills lots of people.’ The controller said, looking at the deck and muttering.
‘You’re supposed to be trying to stop them.’ Aron grabbed the controller and shook him. ‘They’re trying to make
it look like you can’t look after your own.’
‘It’s not a finished decision.’ The controller protested. ‘There are a lot of us prepared to argue against it ‑ but
they’re going to want to talk to you. Your information could be crucial.’

They went along with the process that far; after a basic ‑ and paralysingly sloppy ‑ debrief that seemed to have
more to do with telling war stories than objective analysis, there was a full scale flotilla conference.
I was right about joining the ranks of anarchy, Franjia thought; there were half a dozen arguments going back and
forth in the auditorium, and the senior officer was the Mon Cal cruiser‑frigate‑ captain; he was formal and
dignified, and not a natural Basic speaker.
It took him four attempts to call the council of war to order. What a time for an ambush, Aron thought.
The recon squadron were in the spotlight. Two Imperial defectors were a point of interest; when Aron corrected
the intel officer ‑ they were from a regional force unit, not the sector fleet ‑ attention centred on them.
Game on, Aron thought; this ‑ spreading confusion and lies ‑ was what they were here for.
‘So,’ the Mon Cal Captain burbled slowly at them, permanently in a state of thinking of the next word, ‘what does
the regional support group think of this? What are their intentions?’
Keyed up ‑ Aron’s mind suddenly went blank. ‘We’re just fighter jockeys. I can’t be sure, but‑’
‘For three days before we left,’ Franjia said, ‘we were exercising twelve hours a day ‑ against other Imperial ships.’
‘Really?’ one of the human officers asked. ‘Attacking or defending?’
‘Both.’ Franjia said. ‘If our ship was anything to go by, Region now considers Sector to be slack to the point of
encouraging rebellion. Captain Lennart wouldn’t object to attacking either side.’
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‘Perhaps,’ one of the Intel people said slyly, ‘the regional forces could be persuaded to attack Sector?’ He was
looking at Aron and Franjia. If they were stupid spies, they would agree, want to be sent back ‑ and get stunshot
and arrested immediately.
‘Possible,’ Franjia said, ‘but the pretext? Assume, for the sake of argument, that it happens ‑ what then? The
Moff’s going to be replaced by someone who knows he’s liable to have higher authority sit on him at any moment
‑ and that he has to be more fanatic than thou to keep his job.’
‘A straight up smash and grab rescue,’ Aron said, ‘that could be written off as business as usual ‑ standard issue
local force laziness and incompetence. It’d make a splash, but not one big enough to drown in.’
The intel officer looked disappointed.
The argument rumbled on; polarising the force. It boiled down to the Mon Cal’s fear of traps; they seemed to be
the main force behind the idea of doing nothing. Aron glared at him. I don’t think of myself as particularly
xenophobic, he was thinking; but…
‘Galactic Spirit,’ he shouted at them, ‘you’re outnumbered fifty to one. How do you expect to survive, how do you
expect to rally people to the cause, if you go around being afraid? If all you have are long shots, that’s what you
have to take.’
Franjia supported him, yelling over the rising noise, ‘It could be better for you if it was a trap. The sector force is
criminally incompetent; if you can save your comrades and humiliate the defence force, that’s two victories for the
price of one.’
Most of the human rebels were, broadly, in agreement.
‘Were you involved in the capture of the Caderath?’ the Mon Cal burbled, using the name the Fulgur had served
the republic under.
‘No ‑ we were busy putting dents in this ship at the time.’ Aron admitted.
‘Remember what you said about spending the rest of our lives in debriefing?’ Franjia muttered to him.

Unexpectedly, the Neutron Star’s commander backed them. ‘You’re right. We’ve been eroding away here,
compromising and working around, playing it safe. Trap, or not ‑ that’s a matter of tactics; politically,
strategically, we have no choice ‑ we have to put up or shut up.’
‘Thank you.’ Franjia said to him.
‘You owe me a sector jammer.’ He replied. ‘He’s right,’ meaning the Mon Cal Captain, ‘it probably is a trap, and I
wouldn’t be at all surprised if you had something to do with it; but would the Empire abandon its people like that?’
‘If it would cause more losses getting them back, then by the book, yes.’ Aron admitted.
‘You see, no choice.’ He said; left his seat, moved to talk to the Mon Cal quietly.
‘You trust them?’ the Mon Cal said, surprised.
‘I respect their competence.’ The human said. ‘Face it; we always knew it was going to be a trap. The Empire offers
us the choice of losing ships and men, or losing face. Too obvious.’
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‘If we commit up front, we can get in, make the pickup, and get out before the jaws of the trap close. Move fast,
and I reckon we can beat this one. And they’re right;’ meaning Aron and Franjia, ‘if we don’t at least take the
chance, what do we look like?’
‘All my instincts say, cut our losses.’ The Calamari captain said.
‘Sometimes, there is truth in platitude. The boldest measure may, indeed, be the safest.’ The human urged.
‘I do not like situations where the enemy dictates our spectrum of choice.’
The Mon Cal took a second to compose himself, and pointed to the two Imperial pilots. ‘Whether or not they are
spies sent to mislead us, or genuine fighters for freedom, I believe they are destined to lead us to disaster.’
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­04­03 04:37pm

Ch 14

Autokrator‑class Star Destroyers were not the largest ships in the Star Fleet, but they were some of the fastest.
The first ship of the class had been HIMS Arrogant, and that was how they were usually known by the Basic‑
speaking majority of the galaxy; this one, Dynamic, was on exercise ‑ her new captain working her up to
something he considered efficiency.
Captain Delvran Dordd was not particularly enjoying it so far.
I’ve been spoiled, he thought. I should have thought to poach about ten LTL crews from Black Prince. They were
conducting a fire‑and‑motion exercise, target drones hiding in an asteroid field, a fast flyby‑vector parallel to the
edge of the field, two thousand klicks per second at one hundred thousand out.
Dynamic’s gun crews had missed every one of the TIE‑sized target drones so far. Compared to an Imperator, its
turret arrangement was back to front, and more sensible for it.
She carried medium turbolasers by the smaller superstructure, heavy turrets in the axial defence position, stepped
enough to fire past each other directly forward. Their huge fire arc was what made the Arrogant‑class effective
flankers and pursuit ships, provided the gun crews could shoot straight.
They were dry‑firing, firing local control active sensor pulses instead of shot. In theory, the target drones would
light off their beacons when hit and manoeuvre out of the asteroid field for recovery. It was still only a theory.

It wasn’t impossible that they were missing on purpose, just to spite him. He had started by putting the ship
through its paces: terrible.
They took eight full minutes to get to general quarters from a standing start. They passed training norms by the
oldest dodge in the book ‑ take a turret; each crew was supposed to pass the tests independently.
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Maintenance and engineering ‑ the same. On all the standard evolutions, the overall impression was of a crew who
were barely keeping their heads above water. All of which was made worse by his knowing if not exactly all the
tricks, then at least more of them than they did.
Dordd turned to his chief gunnery officer, present on the bridge for the exercise, and thought about what he
wanted to say. Anger warred with prudence ‑ on one hand, they were genuinely very poor verging on abysmal.
Bawling them out would at least relive some of his tension. On the other hand, anger might be a luxury he
couldn’t afford. He had never appreciated before how comfortable stormtroopers were to have around.
Was it even possible to push this crew hard enough that they broke under the strain? They felt more like a sponge
‑ damp, gooey, structureless, prone to flop around and lie there.
Looking on the bright side, at least they were capable of most of the standard evolutions. At a pace that
suggested most of the officers were reading out of their ops manuals as they went along, true, and benchmarking
out as barely good enough to be in the Starfleet, never mind on a fleet destroyer. Some of it was natural confusion
and nerves following the change of command, but more of it was simple unreadiness.
The previous captain had been promoted, if that was the word, to command one of the search lines of a patrol
squadron; the job was essentially a dead end, a cemetery for the living. The only way to restart a career from there
was to actually find some trouble and do well dealing with it ‑ chance would be a fine thing.
Dordd, on the other hand ‑ they were walking very wary around him so far. He had come from a crack ship;
cracked, most would have said, but Black Prince’s gun crews would have dropped all twelve drones in less than a

‘Gentlemen,’ he addressed the bridge crew, all of whom were at least male if not necessarily noble of spirit, ‘this
ship is supposed to be a destroyer. A unit of significance to the fleet. While it is all well and good to be able to
intimidate with size and strength, you may find it hard to deliver on that promise if the gun crews can’t hit the
broad side of a nebula.’
‘Sir,’ the exec stood up for his ship, defending the indefensible, ‘this is frontier space; minor colonies and
outposts, we’re the largest thing for thirty parsecs in any direction.’
‘How many moments do you think that would take to change?’ Dordd snapped.
‘Alliance local forces spend a lot of their time hiding from the Empire; they tend to be around trainee, or
complacent garrison, levels. Alliance strike, regional and central command units tend to get committed to combat
more often than any except our strategic pursuit forces, and be that much more experienced and battle‑
One of the pit crew muttered something about the Tarkin Doctrine.
‘Ah, yes, rule through the fear of force rather than force itself. Efficient.’ Dordd said, watching their faces to see
who twitched, who looked like a security service plant.
‘Unfortunately, that doctrine made the Starfleet thoroughly hated throughout the mid‑rim and outwards, and cost
the empire at least one obnoxiously self‑righteous but basically wealthy and tax‑paying planet.
'That, and one barely‑used battle station splattered across the void by a rebel strategic strike team, with contents
including more of the cream of the Starfleet than we could afford to lose, and Wilhuff Tarkin. I’m interested in the
facts of force.’
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‘Captain, we train to meet the sector standing doctrine, which says close range, closely grouped fire ‑ we’re
prohibited from engaging at all beyond five thousand kilometres, strongly advised to close to point blank, under
two hundred, before opening fire. We’ve seen precisely one rebel ship, ever.’
Not that far away from Imperial standard practise; the theory being that you needed high hit rates to get the
power transfer to pound down an enemy ship’s shielding, which was true enough, but that you needed to close to
almost ‘can’t miss’ range to do it was less certain.
Even in fleets and with ships that could do better ‑ the Executor‑class being the prime example ‑ most stayed
fairly close to the doctrine of decisive action at close range.
Necessity often dictated otherwise, and the physical performance of turbolasers was more than up to it, but the
gunners frequently weren’t. Lennart’s and his gun crews’ willingness to fire at distant, manoeuvring targets was
extraordinary by most standards, verging on freakish.

Dordd was almost surprised to realise how corrupted he had become. For a second or two he thought about it;
stick to the established doctrine, they couldn’t blame him for that, or do something different. No contest.
‘I know. It’s suicidal against a larger ship, counterproductive against a smaller ‑ likely to burn more fuel chasing it
down than simply hosing it from long range would.
'You came up against one ion‑scarred corvette whose hyperdrive failed on reversion, and it took you forty‑seven
minutes to catch it and kill it. If it had taken you that many seconds, it would have been over average. It’s not
good enough.’
He looked at the main tactical holo. They were clear of the exercise track, drifting away along the edge of the
zone. ‘Helm, bring us around, reciprocal, same separation, eighteen‑fifty KPS relative.’

Star Destroyer manoeuvrability was a debateable issue; there were at least four different ways to turn a ship.
Throttling back one outer main engine and firewalling the other could spin an Imperator end for end faster than it
took to throw the switches, but the shock that inflicted on the ship’s stabilisers and compensators made it a once
or twice in a lifetime manoeuvre.
Off‑centre thrust from the auxiliary engines was the doctrine prescribed emergency turn procedure, the thrust
deflectors were usual and in the event of complete thruster failure, recoil from the guns could do.
None of them worked if you didn’t have the energy. Or the competence.

‘Captain, I have to warn you,’ the navigator told him, ‘we’re approaching our allowable exercise limit.’
‘Already?’ Penny‑pinching was an at least partial explanation, but this was ridiculous. ‘Give me the data.’ Dordd
said, holding out a hand for the datapad.
‘Sir, I don’t have the figures to hand, but‑‘
‘Then get them. I’ll stand in for you while you compile.’

Dordd gave the helm orders himself; instead of simply rotating and retrofiring, he spun the ship in a combat
curve, a long u‑shape that cost energy but preserved velocity, and hopefully kept the ship from being hit. As
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His first instinct was to throw it away ‑ his second to find the idiot responsible, sheath the datapad in ablat foam
and drop it on him, her or it from orbit.
‘This is ridiculous. This is hardly enough to warm the engines up, never mind real training. The sector budget only
allows fifty minutes a month at full power?’
‘Sir, that’s still billions of‑‘ the navigator began.
‘Agreeing with an economist is like agreeing with a prosecution attorney. No good ever comes of it. Have you been
using even that?’
‘We have been fulfilling fleet training norms.’ Ridatt stated.
‘Only on paper‑ and are you really content to fight a war on paper? With the fleet bureaucracy? This‑‘ he threw the
datapad away, hitting the disposal chute‑ ‘is farcical. Not enough to do any real training on. I’m surprised some of
the turrets haven’t frozen solid. In fact,’ looking at gunnery’s fire distribution chart, ‘I think some of the PD
weapons have. We don’t have the fuel allowance even to recover our drones?’
‘Officially, no, Captain.’
‘Hmph.’ Dordd grunted, walked down into the pit, to one of the drone control consoles; the operator’s eyes
bulged out at the sequence of commands he keyed in. Most of the drones started to drift back towards the
Dynamic; two headed deeper into the asteroid belt.
‘Interrogate them.’ Dordd commanded; an active sensor pulse sparkled off them, both of their identifier blips
changed colour in the main display. Enemy ‑ specifically, Alliance ‑ red.
‘Those things have enough processing power to be treacherous, don’t they? They must have decided they were
tired of getting shot at. They’re defecting. This is no longer an exercise.’ Dodd said, decisive‑sounding. ‘Live fire,
engage and destroy.’
The bridge crew boggled at him. He shouted at them. ‘Move.’

The turrets were slow to react, half of them called fire direction control to query, several kept firing scan pulses,
but one of the main turrets took it too far and fired a full power HTL bolt. The ship rocked back and an asteroid
near the centre of the belt got turned into a plasma doughnut ‑ the bolt overpenetrating, the head flashing it into
vapour and the tail of the bolt smearing the cloud out along the line of fire.
‘Just as well. We’d never have been able to get away with that on the exercise budget…’ Dordd managed to keep a
perfectly straight face as he said it. ‘Guns, did you instruct them to do that? Fire a teraton‑level shot?’
‘No, Sir, I instructed them to engage as per standing orders.’
‘Really?’ Dordd looked, studying, the overweight, jowly Lieutenant‑Commander. ‘I heard your fire order. Precise
and disciplined ‑ it was not. Loose words and panic are understandable when, for instance, you are drifting at
high speed towards a division of Alliance cruisers ‑ they are never permissible.’
The gunnery officer briefly closed his eyes and waited to be sacked; not quite yet, Delvran Dordd thought, not
until someone demonstrates sufficient competence to do the job instead. He pointed at the drone images in the
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Guns looked at him blankly for a second, before realising what was being asked of him. Hesitantly, trying to
remember how it was done in the manual, he gave a phased, grouped fire order, too slow to be useful in combat;
a more or less coordinated volley of shot blasted out.
One of the drones got a close enough near miss to activate its hardwired routines, it shut engines down and
signalled a hit.
‘It’s playing pittin, finish it off.’
This time, against a stationary target ‑ they missed again. Nearly got it with blast waves and fragments, but not
‘This ship does have torpedo tubes, doesn’t it?’ Dordd knew perfectly well it did; for one thing, the drones had
been launched from them.
‘Yes, Sir ‑ shall I fire them, Sir?’
‘I think you had better.’ Dordd said, looking down at him.
Two tubes fired; torps catapulted out, energising themselves‑ violet‑tinged red teardrop‑ shaped electromagnetic
sheaths forming around the warhead cones. Although less effective at normal combat range, they were at least
more interesting to watch than a TL bolt. They twisted and weaved through the asteroids, caught and detonated
on both drones.
‘Secure and stand down.’ Dordd ordered. ‘On the evidence, I would be better off dismantling some of our torpedo
stock, removing the guidance computers and replacing most of the gunners with them.’
‘Sir,’ the exec said, ‘that’s not really fair, after all it was only a pair of drones‑‘
‘You think their performance would be improved if the targets were shooting back? Perhaps we should go further
‑ invite the Rebellion to come and attack us. Yes, definitely. They might think it was an ambush and avoid us, that
could be this ship’s best chance of survival.’

He looked round the frightened bridge officers.

‘There will be no more live firing unless needs must ‑ for one thing, they may be a danger to themselves, we seem
to have an electrical fire in no. 17 LTL mount. Exec, go and sort that out, will you?’
Ridatt hurried off the bridge, to the little electric cart waiting there. They raced those things up and down the
corridors...have to put a stop to that. Eventually. No sense beginning with the trivial.
‘Simulations.’ he continued, ‘We will simulate until the crew’s eyes go square. Clearly they need it.’ He stalked off
the bridge to his day cabin, to begin drafting an exercise programme.

To be fair to them, it wasn’t really their fault. In the growth surges, first from the Republic Starfleet, neglected,
demoralised and understrength, to the cauldron of the Clone Wars, then from there to the dominating presence
they needed to secure the peace of the Empire ‑ the fleet had long since outrun any available reserve of trained
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There weren’t really enough veterans available to serve as instructors for the rest, never mind cadre or full crews,
and the womb‑born parts of the Republic Starfleet had learned a frightening amount of their business through on
the job trial and error ‑ much the same way the Rebels were attempting to do now.
Fine, if it had stopped there, but it hadn’t. The fleet kept growing, drawing in more and more raw meat, and the
only people whose competence was keeping up with demand were the yard workers; real talent and experience
just kept getting spread thinner and thinner.
Combat hardened crews, but, perversely, the Imperial Starfleet’s very size worked against it there too; there were
seldom enough enemies to go round. It also left parent units faced with the choice of keeping together a
successful crew and depriving the rest of the fleet of a useful cadre, or breaking up a winning team. Like himself;
he was fairly sure now that he had been transferred out of a crack squadron, which had managed to establish
consistently very high standards, to pull this ship into acceptable shape.
Imperial discipline was generally ferocious, and doctrine so precisely descriptive, because the alternative seemed
to be shambolic, fratricidal chaos. Privately, Dordd doubted this crew had that much energy.

An hour later, the com/scan chief officer entered, looking sheepish. A lot of the burden would fall on him; what
was this about?
‘Captain, we have an incoming message ‑ holo, encrypted, Captain’s Eyes Only.’
‘Route it through.’
Dordd had to type in the access codes from his rank cylinder personally; he didn’t understand what extra level of
security that might confer, but it was enough. The message unfolded.
A robed, yellow‑eyed figure; Dordd started to go down on one knee, then realised from the shape of the head, the
breadth of the shoulders, it wasn’t actually His Imperial Majesty, just someone who favoured the same tailor. Pre‑
recorded; no need to reply.
‘I am Kor Alric Adannan,’ the hooded figure identified himself, ‘Private secretary to Privy Councillor Gwellib ap‑
Double‑plus ungood, Brenn thought. What could a being with high connections, and a voice that sounded like a
death threat, want with him? Couldn’t be anything to do with him himself, or this ship.
‘Captain Dordd, I am empowered to exercise the oversight authority of the Council.’
Which was terrifying enough, but something else niggled ‑ the background noise. Asteroid effects from Adannan’s
ship’s environment ‑ awareness system.
Dordd left the message playing, bolted out on to the bridge, grabbed the PA,
‘All hands, prepare to receive VIP visitors, I need a Regulatory Branch honour guard at the docking bay.’
Only just in time. They were already on docking approach.

Adannan’s ship was clearly a custom job, light freighter weight class but military spec; black, an X‑shaped
arrowhead, an array of folding radiator fins that made the wicked little dart vastly overpowered for its size.
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That’s going to make resupply awkward, Dordd thought, irrelevantly. As if that deserved to rate as a serious
problem, when Destiny is about to land on us with a distinctly sickening thud.
The regulatory branch ‑ nearly absent from most ships where the stormtroopers took over the duty, basically the
police of the navy ‑ managed to scrape together enough bodies to make a decent show of it, all clutching
obsolescent A280 rifles, shined and polished as best as may be in ten minutes’ notice.
A ramp extended, the “private secretary” ‑ and what was he really, if one was to dare to put a name to it? Enforcer,
executioner? That was how Adannan carried himself. He stalked down it, to the deck; shorter than Dordd, but ‑
how did someone with a shrouded face manage to have any kind of expression at all? He looked perfectly
prepared to melt through Dordd with a glance until the head and shoulders of the tall, thin man dropped down to
his eyeline.
Which, by then, would be pointless, but Adannan didn’t look the sort to let that get in the way of personal
expression through violence.
Almost amazing in its way, Dordd thought of his bridge team; with all the galaxy and its statistically inevitable
leaven of bloodthirsty madmen to draw on, how few of them were actually in it for the joy of hurting people.
Adannan looked to be the exception that proved the rule.
‘Captain Dordd.’ Adannan recalled him to his duty. And what did duty have to do with creatures like this? ‘You
may introduce your officers to me.’

Dordd had been close to wishing some of them dead, or at least dismissed the service; at least now he knew he
didn’t mean it literally. He began with the exec; Ridatt looked at Adannan like a mouse faced with a dianoga. He
shakily extended a hand that Adannan glared at, the exec retracted it sheepishly. Dordd introduced the rest of his
senior team, with one eye on Adannan’s followers filing out of the transport.
His entourage was as bad or worse, some of them victims rather than perpetrators. One compu‑mod carrying
servant, black and yellow livery, looked scrubbed to within an inch of his life, and two likewise liveried twi’lek
wearing electrocollars who looked whipped there instead, one male and one female.
One man who looked the sort who gets sacked from the ISB for excessive brutality, an insignia‑less uniform with
weapon‑like bulges under both arms and at both hips‑ what did a man need with four pistols?
A scaly, spiky‑faced alien in a half‑tunic, half‑robe that almost certainly also held more than a few devices of
Another alien, a Givin ‑ their natural talent for juggling numbers in their head made them instinctive navigators,
this one wore a breath mask and eye shields.
Another human male, in a robe similar to his leader’s, but covering a lot more bone and muscle. Put him next to
Mirannon, and there would only be a haircut in it. He was certainly armed as well ‑ there was more of him to hide
it on ‑ but he looked more as if he preferred bare hands and brute force.
The last two were both female, a robed one and a ‑ the species was impossible to tell. Humanoid, bright‑metal
hands, neck and head, maybe more than that but hidden by a naval pilot’s uniform, moving as machine‑like as
the cybermask and limbs suggested, and being supported by the other.
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The living double ‑ clone sister, must be ‑ of his own (he wished) Aleph‑3, what was she, her clone, doing amid
this damaged, deranged crew? As swift on the uptake as her sister, she noticed his attention; so did Adannan. His
expression was unreadable, but Dordd knew he had just landed himself in it.

Captain Dordd had barely moved in, still hadn’t finished unpacking. It was no great personal misery to offer
Adannan his main suite in the terraces of the superstructure, and move in to the day cabin on a permanent basis.
Apart from the symbolism of it. As expected, Adannan invited him to join him in what were now the Private
Secretary’s Chambers.
It was almost more worrying not to see the collection of freaks waiting for him. The honour guard from his own
crew looked severely scared, but the only people immediately visible were the robed three, the huge thug, her,
and Adannan himself.
She looked good in a black robe ‑ would in anything. Is she the second prong of the trident? Here to distract and
threaten, flank and pounce? Concentrate, he told himself Adannan is the main threat, isn’t he?

‘Kor Adannan, I would like to say that I’m flattered by the Privy Council’s attention, but the simple fact is, I don’t
understand it. This is my first command; we haven’t had time to distinguish ourselves.’ Or disgrace ourselves, he
thought privately.
‘Precisely.’ Adannan said, like a scalpel. ‘It is with ISD Black Prince that the privy council is concerned.’
‘Then‑‘ The thug glared at him. Dordd ignored it, but paused anyway. He had been about to say ‘why the indirect
approach’ when his brain caught up with his mouth.
‘Good.’ Adannan said. His people understood, the naval captain didn’t. That meant that he appreciated a
subordinate who thought slowly enough to be no threat, but quickly enough to be at least useful.
Dordd thought very fast nonetheless, of what it would be safe and unsafe to say. What in sanity’s name had
Lennart gone and done, that the Privy Council itself sent a hatchet‑man to take care of him?
What looked very much like one of Vader’s followers, at that ‑ a licensed force wielder, exempt from the anti‑Jedi
legislation. And a whole raft of other things. My best bet, he thought, is probably to play it straight, as if I know
nothing. Space, I don’t.
‘If you don’t mind me asking, Kor Adannan, what brought Captain Lennart to the notice of the Privy Council?’
‘He displayed potential.’ The heavyweight said, his master’s mouthpiece.
‘He has come across a dangerous and complex situation we feel he needs…support and reassurance in his
handling of.’ Adannan himself said. ‘As his right hand man for five years, you should know him well.’
‘Left hand man.’ Dordd said. ‘Chief Mirannon is his right arm.’ Dordd tried to disclaim involvement.
‘That fact was not known to the Privy Council.’ Adannan lied. ‘I am fascinated by the achievements of the ship, and
how they reflect on the individuals involved. It is the people, and their ability to rise ‑ or fall ‑ that matters to us.’
‘Jorian Lennart,’ the clone sister said, tormenting him with the name of his rival, ‘is an enigma. His service record
makes no sense. He should have been promoted long ago, for his abilities, or dismissed long ago, for his
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how to explain it in acceptable political jargon. ‘They display to an exceptional degree the virtues of solidarity,
‘Indeed.’ Adannan said. ‘I am intrigued,’ in a tone that suggested “intrigued” was a euphemism for “am about to
schedule for dissection”, ‘with the statistically absurd fortune that has attended Black Prince. She was not named
for Lord Vader, was she?’
‘No, it’s a traditional warship name in the Tion Cluster.’ Named for a historical, or this far downstream on the river
of time largely legendary, figure, similarly renowned for a near‑uncontrollable temper. Dordd had the sense not to
add that part.
‘She has received extraordinarily little attention for a ship of her combat record. There are only three line
destroyers in the entire galactic fleet who have a majority claim to a capital ship kill. The Swiftsure is now assigned
to the Royal Guard, the Leviathan so badly damaged her number was retired and the hulk replaced Carida’s
missing mascot moon. Lennart’s ship is the third.’ The special assistant to the privy councillor thought he had to
tell the career naval officer that?
‘If all that was at stake was the recognition that deserves, you wouldn’t need to be here, would you?’ Dordd
‘Correct. There is a purpose, which he would suit. Captain Lennart is, however…unpredictable. Eccentric, even.’
Adannan stated, with a certainty he couldn’t possibly be obtuse enough to believe. ‘Central authority must be
upheld; If I approached him directly, it is possible he would do something rash.’

‘You expect he would be less likely to do something crazy in the face of a Starfleet ship commanded by a former
member of his own command team, fine ‑ but what would make him want to do that? How terrible is this
purpose?’ Dordd asked.
‘How terrible can it be,’ the clone sister said, ‘if an arm of the Privy Council is carrying it through?’ Which was not
much of an answer, but to challenge it was probably more than he could get away with.
‘Tell me more about the incident.’ Adannan said. There was only one he could mean.
‘It was just before my time, but I heard all about it, and we flew it again in sim ‑ trying to work out how Black
Prince had got away with it.’ Dordd said, and proceeded to tell the tale.

Two Procurator‑class battlecruisers, the Faber and the Palmus Viridis; the Viridis had spent most of her life laid
up, she was over eleven hundred years old, part of Kuat’s defence force.
Come the Clone Wars, she had been recommissioned with a cursory survey, and the first major refit she had come
due for post‑war had found the hull frames and reactor vessel severely cracked and corroded. It was deemed
uneconomic to repair her, and Viridis was scheduled to be broken up and components recycled to refit the
hundred and twenty year old Faber.
Black Prince was there both as part of the guard force for the deepdock and to lend support from the engineering
They were not alone ‑ the Alliance had decided to stick their oar in; relatively new formed, but already picking up
the pieces of older revolts and running discontents.
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dock complex.
He had arrived in time to catch the Rebel strikeforce as it was deploying; an old Recusant, two Corellian frigates ‑
a 9600 and a Mushroom ‑ a pair of Dreadnoughts, and transports containing two full Corps’ worth of renegade
PDF soldiers from a world that had decided to cast its lot against the Empire.
Now that was shipjacking in style.

Black Prince managed to nail two of the transports before being swarmed over by the Rebels; she had to turn to
beat off the strike escort before dealing with the situation at the dock.
Dordd’s predecessor had died when the mushroom rammed the destroyer in the forward superstructure; it had
been gutted by HTL fire, it was only the wreck that hit; that was enough.
The Recusant was crippled and brushed aside with no time to finish it off, one of the Dreadnoughts and the 9600
obliterated, the other Dread limping away with the Recusant.
By then, the remaining six divisional transports were docked and their troops running riot through the deepdock
and the battlecruisers.
Lennart blew one of the transports out of the way, docked on the Faber and released the legion; most of the
engineering detail ashore ‑ six thousand including Mirannon ‑ had retreated into the Faber’s engineering spaces
and were holding out there.
Black Prince’s stormtrooper complement had been the 276th Armoured Legion during the Clone Wars;
renumbered when assigned to the Starfleet, they had managed to keep most of the heavy equipment.
There were few spaces inside a Procurator where it was worth trying to fly a repulsortank, but dismounted
secondary cannon and repeating blasters, there was more than enough need for.
Veterans, a high proportion of clones, with heavy weapons and a team of crack engineers rigging the battleground
in their favour; three to one odds became almost manageable, especially with Mirannon’s irradiating, squashing
and accelerating to death the three self‑proclaimed ‘Jedi’ leading the attack.

They had just linked up and were starting to turn the tide when the rest of the rebels managed to release the
Viridis from the dock. Two corps‑level boarding actions and an escaping, hijacked battlecruiser; it was certainly an
interesting life in the Imperial Starfleet.
Lennart started juggling plates at this point, leaving most of the transports and dropships by the Faber, and
pursuing the Viridis with the Black Prince and the fighter wing.
Palmus Viridis’ fighter complement had been removed and reassigned, so the strike wing had free range.
Most of the rebel soldiers had limited verging on no cross‑training as ship crew, and the real turning point of the
action was probably when a short‑interval ripple salvo from the port side HTL turrets blasted through the back of
the Viridis’ bridge module. That killed off most of the rebel officers who actually were capable of handling a ship
the size of a battlecruiser.
The fighters exploited that, taking precision potshots, racing the rebels to disable shields, engines and weapons
before they could be brought fully on line from the emergency positions lower in the hull; Black Prince continued a
distant fire, blasting pieces off the battlecruiser’s engines, but also firing mainly LTL into the Faber, hitting the
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Once they had started to win ‑ and the legion’s veterans were simply faster thinking, faster reacting, as well as
better armed; they couldn’t use any of the available biologicals and chemicals, too many unsuited engineers on
their side, but everything else was fair game.

Once the tide had turned, Lennart withdrew a strike team.

Unskilled but enthusiastic, the rebels on board the Palmus Viridis did have enough wit to return fire, and a ship
the size of a Procurator ‑ four and a half times the length, eighty times the mass of a mere destroyer ‑ was not
short of guns to do that with.
Taking out the bridge had bought time, but the secondary control positions were too deeply buried; the chances
of being able to pound the giant battlecruiser into submission before the hijackers managed to jump away were
A full scale boarding action ‑ also out of the question. Even if they had the time to transfer over, they couldn’t do
six to one against. Three, maybe, but not both ships and the dock.
A sabotage team, then; a handful of engineers and stormtroopers to disrupt it, hack into local control and do
enough damage, cause enough chaos to slow the ship down, buy enough time for Black Prince to find and exploit
a real weakness.

Black Prince was firing more slowly, taking aimed shots at the edges of shield panels, hosing the Viridis’ gun
turrets with LTL fire so that when they opened a shield window to shoot out, hopefully there would be a bolt
coming in. Raw firepower was never going to be enough, but a scalpel might.
Port battery scored again; from aft forward, aiming at the superstructure beneath the ruined bridge, a ripple salvo,
one gun after the other, twentieth of a second apart. If they couldn’t find a weakness, they would make one.
Pounding on the same two meter wide square of shield, extraordinary shooting ‑ Lennart had to hold the Black
Prince rock steady, she picked up scars from that, nearly losing her own command module ‑ it fluctuated, flared;
local burn through.
Bolt after bolt burned into the Viridis’ cortex, splashing hull aside, shearing deep wounds‑ not mortal, but enough
for a landing party to exploit.
Viridis banked to hide the wound, slowly; Lennart was guessing, accurately as it turned out, that whoever was in
charge after the bridge had been shredded was a junior or staff officer, head full of the naval history most
academies stuffed their students with. No reflexes ‑ they could work out what the right thing to do was, but they
took an age thinking of it.

The sabotage team knew they probably weren’t coming back; they went anyway. An assault shuttle ‑ more likely
to survive what would be essentially a controlled crash ‑ sprinting through the defensive fire, crunching into the
wreckage, disembarking the volunteers for death.
They were at least semi‑prepared ‑ they chemical‑bombed and bioshot their way to the main damage control
centre enthusiastically enough there was a good chance the ship would be too contaminated to retrieve anyway.
Heavy casualties ‑ under the circumstances, acceptable. Only half a dozen made it ‑ that was enough.
The survivors managed to hack in ‑ central overrides to stop them were vapourised with the bridge module ‑ and
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No‑one would ever know the full story; some panicky idiot in the Alliance ranks tried to blast them out with a
thermal detonator ‑ killed them, took out the control linkage.
Any authorised terminal could undo the damage, if there was a sufficiently skilled slicer to hand with enough
presence of mind to do it. There wasn’t.
After that, all there was to do was fly an S‑curve, swaying back and forward across the battlecruiser’s stern, firing
ripples from each main battery alternately.
Overtaxing and crushing shield generators without the elasticity of their mounts to rely on, leaving guns unable to
shoot back without their turrets being smashed by their own no‑longer‑buffered recoil, hits sending showers of
shrapnel through the ship killing the people needed to put it back together. Each failure straining the systems,
making it ripe for more ‑ then, once the aft quarter was thoroughly shredded, coherent full salvoes, burning huge
killing chasms deep in the hull.
Com chaos; thousands of signals, pleas for mercy, spurious surrenders, defiance, incoherent babble ‑ on the
fourth full salvo, the battlecruiser’s reactor ruptured.

Sector fleet had thought they were doing well to catch and kill a crippled Recusant and Dreadnaught; they simply
could not believe it when they arrived to pick up the pieces, and found an expanding cloud that had formerly been
a capital ship and a limping, battered destroyer claiming the kill.
There was some doubt, some disbelief ‑ far from being praised, Lennart only narrowly avoided being court‑
martialled on a variety of crimes, basically failing to be in two places at once, and worse, embarrassing the sector
group. After all the fuss, he decided not to file an official claim for recapturing the Faber as well.

Dordd finished the tale; the three hooded figures looked as if they barely believed it.
‘He’s the man.’ The bulky, robed human said; Dordd was still surprised that he actually knew how to talk.
‘Against an old ship and a scratch crew? Circumstances were in his favour.’ She said.
‘In achieving the seemingly impossible, that often turns out to have been the case.’ Adannan cautioned. ‘The
opening phase. How did he come to disregard a warning that by all the rules and regulations he was bound to
heed? The supply convoy was a safer and more practical target for the rebels, there was no reason to disregard it.’
‘I’ve seen him do so on other occasions‑ tactics, experience, partly, I think, intuition.’ All three of the robed
figures noticed that.
‘Partly, also, I think he enjoys risk to a degree, sometimes he follows chances that are simply too thin for comfort
‑ he’s not infallible. His hit rate is well above average, but occasionally we do draw blanks, spend months combing
barren void.’
They had tuned him out and were trading significant looks among themselves. They seemed to reach consensus.
‘You will take this ship to Vineland sector, to rendezvous with the Black Prince.’ Adannan said.
‘Of course, Private Secretary ‑ and after that?’ Dordd asked.
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‘The Privy Council’, he lied, ‘has a use for the only destroyer captain still below Admiral’s rank with a capital ship
kill claim to his credit. The council also has uses for a man who knows how to defy standing orders, work the
system, and act on his own initiative. The fact that those two happen to be one and the same makes it all the more
anomalous that he has escaped attention thus far. We intend to praise him, not bury him.’
Dordd was nowhere near as oblivious as Adannan was giving him credit for. Every instinct he possessed, for man‑
management and navy politics, was screaming at him that something was, very seriously, wrong.
He was desperately trying not to think about it too hard. ‘I see.’ He said, innocuously.
‘I hope you do, Captain. Best speed to Vineland sector.’ Adannan looked at the door, clearly meaning the captain
was dismissed.
Dordd was grateful to get out.

Adannan sat motionless for a few moments. His team knew that meant he was thinking.
‘He seemed very taken with you.’ He said to his female aide and acolyte.
‘Thinking of turning an accident into an opportunity, my lord?’ she smiled back, hiding her nervousness. Adannan
was not a galaxy‑bestriding titan, like their ultimate master, but that was in some ways worse; he aspired, and
His entourage consisted of an uneasy, damaged blend of favourite victims and co‑conspirators, and it was
frighteningly easy to make the downward change. For the moment, she was one of the priviledged.
‘…Yes.’ the sith acolyte decided. ‘Torment him a little. Then, just to see how he reacts to it, tell him the truth.’
‘By your will, my lord.’ She gave the formal reply, then ‘How much of the truth?’
‘Use your own judgement.’ He said, cruelly.

Dordd, walking away, was kicking himself for staring at her ‑ but what was Aleph‑3, or one of her clone sisters,
doing there? Among the Empire’s dirty work squad?
Mainly, he was thinking of what in space they were supposed to do. Did he have time to train his men, even? The
curse of hyperdrive ‑ short journey times that left little chance for any meaningful maintenance, damage control
or training along the way.
Prioritise. At best, they were going to be acting in support of a fleet destroyer ‑ at worst, depending on how
unusual things got, conceivably, against.
That would be ‑ suicidal. Even on the same side, the best use Black Prince would have for this ship would be as
bait, or spare parts.
In general, combat; fine, but what? The Arrogant‑class were actually less agile than the Imperators ‑ faster in a
straight line, but less good at the footwork.
Survivability first, then, see what difference practise made to that, and no reason why the gun crews couldn’t be
busy at the same time, if not at long then at least medium range. He was still on his way to the bridge when he
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It was her; his mouth went dry, he started to ask what she was doing following him.
‘I, ah…’ she said, mock‑shyly, ‘you looked at me there as if you knew me.’

‘I thought I did.’ Dordd said, looking at the robes. ‘Or at least your identical twin.’ Yet now he was face to face
with her, he noticed differences; this one, whatever her name was, was rounder faced, fuller figured, fleshier. Stop
it, he thought, not listening to himself.
‘A twin? What was her name?’ she teased him.
Dordd couldn’t think of a snappy comeback in time. ‘Aleph‑3.’
‘Ah, the white sheep of the family.’ The aide said. ‘Was she older? Younger?’ It was nice to have a toy of her own to
play with; start with simple embarrassment and work up to misery and torment.
‘The same age, surely? She explained to me about your, um, birth.’
‘Oh, we were a very late series. The Geonosians learned a lot since the original J‑model, in particular not to go too
heavy on the stabilisers, especially for a line which was supposed to be, shall we say inventive? We’re more like
milluplets.’ She said. It was more or less true ‑ they had been given room to develop. Some in the most surprising
‘Is that what you do for Kor Adannan, then? Public relations?’ Dordd asked.
‘Do you think that’s what he needs?’ she said, scornfully. ‘Someone to stand up and lie for him?’
‘He’s political, isn’t he? I’m sure he does from time to time.’ Dordd said, surprising himself with where he was
going. He didn’t want to be hostile to her, for more than one reason.
She changed the subject, so drastically it spoke of an underlying agenda asserting itself, even to him.
‘Is that what my sister does for Jorian Lennart? Tell me more about her.’
‘She is…leaner than you. Possibly the only person in the galaxy who can make stormtrooper armour look sexy.’
‘She’s still doing that, then?’ the woman in front of him felt offended ‑ by his failure to flatter her, and by his
attentions to her sister. Either way, he couldn’t win. ‘Never moved on, never followed her star?’
‘You don’t think being an elite trooper is enough?’ Dordd asked.
‘No, I don’t. She is either refusing to rise, or thinks she had found another way.’
‘Rise to what?’
‘Power, of course.’ The robed woman said, as if she was speaking to an idiot.
‘I don’t think that’s Aleph‑3’s main motivation ‑ and before you say “more fool her” ‑‘ the clone sister in front of
him had indeed been about to ‑ ‘think, and tell me what price you bought your status at.’
‘Something of Captain Lennart has rubbed off on you after all.’ She snapped back.
‘Any decent person would say the same.’ Dordd said, guts churning and wondering what his idiot mouth was up
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lord has at least two actual slaves in his entourage. Does he really think he can ignore the law, or is that a silly
question‑ and is that your definition of power?’
‘Are you actually trying to challenge the authority of an officer of the privy council? Do you have that much of a
death wish?’
‘If you’d asked me yesterday, I would have said no. Where does he get this untouchability from?’ Dordd asked,
meaning ‑ why does the privy council trust him?
‘He’s an adept. The rules change for him.’ She admitted.
‘To what? Get away with anything, except failure?’ Dordd replied.
‘Essentially. And you, fire this through your own head; for his tricks and outright defiance of procedure, Captain
Jorian Lennart is, by rights, a dead man. He badly needs a ‘get out of dreck free’ card.’
‘That’s why Adannan was making such a big deal about his instincts…’ Dordd made the mental connection.
‘Latent, untrained force ability. Something that is simply not allowed to survive in the wild. I believe the standard
text runs, “join us or die.” ‘ she stated.
'Hold on. Even assuming you're right, that you aren't simply starting at shadows, a crew with a strong, close‑kint
loyalty and a major warship kill ‑ what exactly do you need them for?'
Dordd demonstrated how far common, unaided intuition could stretch. He continued 'Or should that be who? How
loyal is Adannan? Who's above him, that he might want a way to step into the shoes of?'
'Very good, Captain.' She said, smiling. 'You had best take care; we might decide you have a spark of the Force as
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Ch 15

Neutron Star class auxiliary carrier Great Murzim Stem was, on the inside, fairly well looked after. Surprisingly so
for such an inherently worthless hull. They were not fast enough to escape Imperial hunters and, unless radically
refitted, didn’t have the shields and weapons for a stand up fight with a proper warship.
Like most big civilian ships, their main power trunking went direct from reactor to hyperdrive and ion engines, and
their associated systems, stasis, tensor and relative‑inertial fields, closely integrated with them. They needed a
whole new secondary power system to make any worthwhile percentage of the reactor output usable for combat‑
credible shields and weapons. Imperial Starfleet protected transports usually relied on local generators; this ship
had made an unusually complete job of refit.
Well, it had an entire Clone War era military depot to draw on, so that made sense. Two quad medium turrets,
looked taken from an Acclamator, quad light turbolasers on reinforced point defence mounts, cargo space
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As for the people onboard, there had been a combination celebration and wake, in a borrowed ready room,
snatched out of what little time they had.
The clock was running, the plan already under way; the featherweight Quasar Fire would serve as rendezvous and
retrieval carrier, the Great Murzim Stem would jump in as assault party leader, most fighters already deployed and
what few non‑hyper units there were working off this ship.
Now they were just waiting, for the plan to reach a definite shape, for their targets to be chosen and to be briefed
on them.

Aron had surprised himself ‑ unpleasantly ‑ by his own jealousy. None of them were indulging in substances, of
any form, to any great degree ‑ they would be flying before long; but simple talk was head‑bending enough.
There were five raw replacements in the ready room with them, and squadrons did not come in fourteens. Who
were the ghosts at the feast?
Grannic was rambling about something, some obscure memory of pioneer life ‑ when one of them asked Aron and
Franjia, ‘Why? I don’t mean why the Rebellion; why did you ever side with the Empire?’
‘Fifty‑odd million planets, and you try to call them ‘the?’’ Aron said. ‘It isn’t all bad everywhere.’
‘Get real, Aron, that’s like saying a man with cancer’s all right apart from the lumpy bits.’ Franjia said, aiming for
contentiousness, and then appearing to change her mind. ‘Then again ‑ maybe you’re half right; the people you’re
trying to free from the Empire, are the people of the Empire.
'Where do you draw the line between the people and the system? Is it acceptable to shoot janitors? File clerks?
Traffic wardens? Teachers?’
‘Yes.’ one of them ‑ a Y‑wing pilot ‑ said. ‘Not acceptable ‑ but necessary. ‘
‘Most people find it acceptable to shoot traffic wardens. Now did you see‑’ M’Lanth tried to head the discussion
‘So anyone who finds themselves working for the Empire, even picking gum off the street, is under sentence of
death, as soon as you can get around to it?’ Franjia asked him.
‘They want all of us dead, why shouldn’t we do the same to them?’ he said, looking at Aron and Franjia.
Franjia was about to snap back at him when Grannic looked at him cold‑eyed and said ‘Because, Neridon, we are
supposed to be the good guys.’
‘Most of the Imperial Starfleet would say the same thing.’ Aron said. ‘The thing you forget about Imperial
propaganda is that it works. Unless something that screwed up happens right in front of you, you just don’t get
hit by the clue bat. The pirates and dope‑runners I used to chase were genuine scum the galaxy was better off
without so, yes, I reckoned I was on the side of right.’
‘How? The Empire’s murdered and robbed it’s way across the galaxy, killed billions‑‘
‘I feel,’ M’Lanth looked at Aron and Franjia, ‘like going for a walk. Care to join me?’
The argument ‑ if that was what it was; they seemed to be violently agreeing with each other ‑ rumbled on behind
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So Aron and Franjia went wandering through the ship, ‘escorted’ by some of their new comrades and a fairly hefty
security detail, both to stop them doing anything crazy, and any of the ship’s crew going for them.
After the flight facilities, next stop the magazine.
‘We never did decide who got the kill credit for that thing, did we?’ Franjia asked Aron, on the way.
‘Which thing?’ M’Lanth asked.
‘A crescent‑winged missile attack ship, operating with this as its tender in our, ah, last meeting.’ Franjia admitted.
‘Squadron attack, team effort.’ Aron said, oblivious to the tension, or just ignoring it.
As they got to the magazine hatch, Franjia was just deciding to play with it. ‘That is‑ rather a lot of missile power.’
She said, looking in at the ordnance racks. They seemed to have been put together by someone who had seen a
lot of war movies, but had more actual experience with builder’s scaffolding. Half empty, which still left, at rough
count, over two hundred capital concussion rounds.
‘At a guess, they lack isolated, dedicated shields and baffles…you know, if I was a double, secretly a real Imperial
fanatic,’ she said, smiling evilly, ‘one or two pistol shots at the ready rack, and they would probably cook off.’ She
made a little explosion gesture.
The security detail clustered around her, just in case she did do anything that stupid or dangerous.
Aron glared at her. ‘Are you trying to get us into trouble?’
‘I can’t help it, I’m a bomber pilot.’ She said. ‘Show me a target this good, with a possibility of that satisfying an
explosion, I do tend to start frothing.’ She said deadpan, as cool and poised as ever.
‘You have a point,’ M’Lanth admitted, ‘but it only worries people when you admit it.’
‘The extra internal shielding is keyed to the combat shields.’ One of the techies told them. ‘When they activate,
these do.’
‘Dubious.’ Franjia said. ‘The Alliance doesn’t have the intellectual property rights for ambush.’
‘By the looks of it, you’re short of smaller ordnance.’ Aron said, looking further down the cargo racks. ‘Have you
ever tried slinging one of those‑‘ the heavy missiles‑ ‘under a Y‑wing?’
‘We get by.’ M’Lanth said, sounding determined not to worry. ‘Come with me a second.’ He led them round two
corners and up a level, out of earshot of the ordies.
‘I suppose it probably used to annoy you,’ he said, ‘when you were back there, how all ‘Imperials’ got lumped
‘No,’ Aron said. ‘It always cheered me up. If they’re that dumb, they’re probably easy meat.’
‘Argh. What am I going to do with you?’ M’Lanth said. ‘Look; big galaxy, right? What makes you think that the
Alliance is any more one solid block than the Empire is?’
‘And some of the separate strands that make up the Alliance do not tend to look on the bright side.’ Franjia
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‘Three wings? What, you mean we joined the wrong rebellion? Stang. We’re going to have to go back to the
empire, defect all over again until we join the right one.’ Franjia decided to test his. He ignored it.
‘Fallout from power struggles within the Empire.’ Aron stated.
‘Well, maybe.’ M’Lanth said. What else were you supposed to call an ex‑Senator, come to think of it? ‘But‑ anyway;
then there’s the ideological wing, call it the Corellian and Colonial, the guys with some big idea reason why the
empire is evil. Corrupt, bureaucratic, restricting individual freedoms, yadda.’ He said, smiling to show he didn’t
mean it.
‘Some of the rimmers have a verbal diarrhoea problem‑ talk ideological theory till the wampas come home.
'Then there’s the vengefuls, call it the Alderaanian wing. Personally hurt by the Empire and ready to set the galaxy
on fire to get back at them. The nonhumans, you can sort out for yourself. The point I’m getting at is that a lot of
the people here don’t have much of a sense of humour left, if they had it at all to start with.’
‘Right. I can understand that, a lot of what the Empire does simply…isn’t funny. It must make revolution a pretty
miserable business, though.’ Aron stated.
‘It has its informative side. If, say, Captain Rinpael starts telling blue stories in the wardroom, I know we’re in for a
rough one. Silliness,’ M’Lanth quoted, ‘is the last refuge of the doomed, after all.’
‘So as long as the command staff are grumbling, bitching, and walking around po‑faced, you reckon you’re doing
not too badly? It had better not work both ways, because on those terms, I don’t see how the Empire’s supposed
to lose.’ Aron theorised.
‘Once you take the maniacal cackling into account…’ Franjia corrected him.
‘I’d forgotten about that.’ Aron said, then asked M’Lanth, ‘Seriously‑ for the moment‑ what are you going to do
with us? I was a squadron leader, Franjia was already tabbed for the next squadron leader’s billet. Now I know
we’re in no position to make demands, but ‑ what are we going to get to fly, and when?’
‘Between us ‑ Galactic Spirit, we’ve got better than a Wing’s worth of kills. Intel, maybe, but if all I wanted was to
get out of the firing line and spend all my life answering stupid questions, I wouldn’t have bothered running, I’d
have put in for a desk job.’ Franjia said.
‘There are procedures for these things, here. You’re probably be going to be passed up the line for further
interrogation and investigation. Before or after the fight, I don’t know.’ M’Lanth said.
‘Surely the Alliance’s best chance is to take in as many Imperial renegades as it possibly can?’ Aron asked,
wondering where the Rebel squadron commander hailed from.
‘Best chance of‑ remember those aliens?’ he said, almost hissing the last part.
‘Congratulations.’ Franjia said. ‘You’re almost as bigoted as the average TIE pilot.’ Aron glared at her. If she was
acting it, simulating coming out of her shell, being freer and more flippant, well and good‑ but if it was the stress
talking, the situation starting to get to her, that could be a real problem.

‘Bad blood’s still bad blood, whatever colour it is. The Mon Cal in particular are security fanatics. Cautious,
conservative, no…aggression. No killer instinct. Always looking over their shoulder ‑ well, they can, with those
eyes. Always looking for a safe, low‑risk option.
'It doesn’t kriffing work that way, does it? You take the risks, you suffer the losses, you hope you hurt the other
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‘Five men down.’ Aron said. ‘Three of them retrievable, if we get this right ‑ if we,’ meaning himself and Franjia,
‘are even allowed to take part. I think this is one time the Imperial method has some advantage to it.’
Franjia agreed. ‘Backwards, isn’t it? The Imperial doctrine, indoctrination, is designed to harden squadrons to
endure continuous combat, heartbreakingly heavy losses ‑ and the proportion of units that go through that kind
of punishment is tiny.
'The Rebellion’s supposed to be a band of brothers, and yet you’re sent into the fire so often that being able to
stand it at all starts to look like a triumph in its own right.’
‘I think you’ve started believing our propaganda.’ M’Lanth tried to pass it off, nobody believing it.
‘How did you come to be here?’ Aron asked him.
‘Oh, it’s crazy. I’m from Antigivaun‑ you’ll never have heard of it. Frontier planet, starting to solidify; twenty‑five
years ago, we threw in our lot with the Separatists. Fought for them, using a hideous jumble of captured
Republican and kitbashed Separatist bits and pieces; good practise for the rebellion.
'You know those over‑and‑under darts with the middle ball turret, Nantexes aren’t they, the ones they said were
too difficult for humans to fly? My dad spent two years trying to prove them wrong. Came out of it thirty percent
cyber and three quarters mad.’
‘I’ve sim’d against those.’ Franjia said.
‘You need to get out more.’ Aron bounced back at her.
‘You don’t think this counts?’ she said, plucking at one of the pocket flaps of the Rebel flightsuit. ‘Sorry, carry on.’

‘The battle line shifted as combat groups chased each other around the Rim, but when it got to us ‑ the Separatist
high command hung Antigivaun out to dry. Used us, and abandoned us. No mobile unit reinforcements at all.
'Not many people from our world have much time for nonhumans. Not after that day. We dropped the planetary
shield and made a fight of it, and we lost. Dad survived, just, and after I was spawned‑‘
‘Spawned?’ Franjia asked, unbelieving.
‘Don’t ask. Well, the old man turned into a total anarchist. He took against all forms of being told what to do,
actually ran for office on a Don’t Listen To The Bastards platform. Most embarrassing day in his life was when they
voted him in as mayor…the only way I could rebel against him was to follow in his ion trail.’ M’Lanth said.
Franjia looked meaningfully at Aron, trying to convey‑ I like him. Is he worth breaking cover for?
Aron shook his head. Things were going to get messy enough, without help.

The sound of clumping feet; a little grey man came round the corner, attended by a squad of Alliance infantry.
Tired, drained, grim men. Where does he fit in, Franjia thought. Interrogator on the personal staff of a rogue
Imperial official? True believer, willing to sacrifice himself to the cause and erase his own personality? Outer
personality, all the wrinkles of character that made a man, burnt off by some personal tragedy, leaving only a job
to be got on with?
‘Take them.’ He said, gesturing at Franjia and Aron. The infantry moved out into a firing crescent, the two
outermost came forward with binders.
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‘Captain Ibtilamte. Strike group leader.’ The little grey man said.
‘They’re Starfighter Group’s problem.’
‘As you would know if you understood these things,’ the grey‑faced interrogator said, ‘they have not yet been
accepted into the Alliance. They are to be taken for further investigation.’

Franjia and Aron were wondering whether to make a run for it. The troops looked more than willing to shoot
‘You little grey shit, you cannot do this. Secret police, are you now ‑ that’s against everything the Alliance stands
for.’ M’Lanth ranted at him. The squad pointed their guns at him too.
‘The Alliance chiefly stands for not being ground down by the Empire. Precautions are essential. Stand aside.’
‘No.’ M’Lanth opened his mouth to shout for help; they shot him. Stun, but still ‑ Aron and Franjia looked at him,

‘You’re an ISB plant, aren’t you? Here to stop the Rebellion getting anything useful out of Imperial defectors.’ Aron
‘Hold your hands out in front of you.’ The grey man said, unimpressed. In fact, he was seriously offended that
anyone should think he belonged to that bunch of amateur clowns, when he actually took his orders from
Infiltration branch of the Bureau of Operations. Naturally, he didn’t show it. ‘Three seconds.’
Both the pilots decided they had a better chance of getting out of this if they weren’t comatose; waited two and a
half seconds, just for face’s sake, held their hands out, had them bound. They were taken to a docking port.

Tramp freighters were, in some ways, the perfect weapon for the Alliance; fast, much larger than a fighter and that
much tougher in proportion, power output to match so they could stand heavier weapons and shields, not needing
much in the way of resources to customise, and ‘cargo’ translated frighteningly easily to ‘troop capacity’ ‑ or
ordnance, for that matter.
Usually considered capable of unescorted flight, this one was the courier, carrying information ‑ like the attack
plan ‑ back to higher authority, whatever could not be trusted to long distance transmissions. And them. Three
guards boarded the freighter with them ‑ no sight from the airlock, on the inside it seemed YT.
‘Any bright ideas about how to get out of this?’ Aron asked Franjia.
‘Short of my seducing the pilot, or your suddenly manifesting force powers, no.’
‘Shut up.’ The guard opposite them said. He looked barely sixteen, apart from the eyes.
‘How many fights have you been in, kid?’ Aron ‑ early twenties ‑ asked him.
‘Not enough to die. Yet.’ Which made a sort of sense, at least.

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And low‑confidence engineering. If there had been anything seriously wrong with the ship, it wouldn’t have flown
at all, but it was amazing how many minor gripes they could keep going with.
Aron and Franjia were busy annoying the guard with an extended commentary on each and every little creak,
shudder, twing, clunk and pinking noise ‑ it was working ‑ when there was a shuddering thud, scraping off a cliff
judders and noise.
The lights and life support flickered, the ship jerked straight ‘down’ then pitched as if a space elephant had sat on
its starboard quarter.

Aron and Franjia managed to hang on to the seat, the young guard got it wrong ‑ tried to hold on to his gun ‑ and
briefly ended up on the ceiling, before crashing to the deck as the AG came back into alignment, with at least one
bone broken.
‘We weren’t that rude, were we?’ Franjia asked. ‘Crash transition?’
Both of them headed for the cockpit ‑ stopped by a pair of stun bolts blasting close over their heads. They looked
at each other.
‘Why didn’t you steal his gun?’ Aron asked Franjia.
‘I thought you were the natural thief. Shh.’

The cockpit door was open, and they could hear incoming com traffic; ‘‑Alliance Starfighter Corps. You’re holding
two of ours. Release them at once.’
‘Popularity. Joy.’ Aron grumbled. Both of them ducked as another shot seared the padding on the bulkhead above
them; she went back for the disabled guard’s blaster.
The guard protecting the cockpit started down the short, angled corridor towards Aron; Aron dived forwards and
tackled him, both of them tumbling to the ground before he could get a shot off. Aron was faster getting up,
springing to his feet and kicking the rebel soldier in the head. Not the best move ‑ his helmet took most of it, the
pilot yelped as he broke a toe, the guard rolled over, dazed, and knocked Aron off the one foot he had on the
ground. They went down in another tangled heap, and the freighter’s flight engineer came back out of the cockpit,
pistol in hand, took no chances and stun‑shot them both.
Franjia had seized the other guard’s rifle, came back to see that and put a stun bolt into the flight engineer’s
throat. He collapsed, choking, larynx scorched and fighting for breath. The cockpit door started to hiss shut ‑ her
second shot went into the door control panel, jamming it.
The pilot started to stand up to turn on her, the com system said, again, ‘Heave to, this is the Alliance Starfighter
Corps. Cease acceleration, release our people, or‑‘

That was as far as Comran got. Franjia could see part of the cockpit window, and what she saw out of it was a
bright flash then a big, fast blur, red and parchment ‑ yellow and white and chrome, all with freckles of carbon.
‘I think you’ll find,’ Captain Lennart’s voice cut across the Rebel TBS, ‘that they’re our people. Run or die, your
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The rebel squadron panicked briefly; a Star Destroyer suddenly appearing in their midst was usually a bowel‑
loosening sight. ‘Shuttle, get the kriff out. With me, hit the scanner domes.’ M’Lanth ordered ‑ bold and utterly
dumb. Against a Lancer, it had been a viable strategy ‑ against an Imperator, less sensible.
‘Don’t just stand there, do some pilot stuff.’ Franjia snapped at the transport pilot. ‘Get us out of here.’ She was
using her command voice, and it worked; he turned his back on her.
A momentary hesitation ‑ right, which side am I on? She asked herself.

She didn’t want Comran M’Lanth to get killed. Was that wrong? Un‑Imperial? Fair fight maybe, but twelve to one,
with him only sticking his neck out on her account ‑ no. She was probably a better pilot than the Rebel shuttle
jockey; either way ‑ she shot him in the back of the head.
Stun bolts were non‑lethal, and that was about the best that could be said for them. A stunshot to the head could
seem like ‑ or in some species, including some human variants, induce ‑ an epileptic fit.
She stepped over the twitching body, into the pilot’s seat. Right, multi‑engined, not a theoretical problem;
effectively doing this one handed, worse. She throttled up and started to bring the freighter round in a sweeping
curve, clumsily‑throttles and yoke, fine, but only one at a time.
Looking out ‑ at least Alpha, Gamma and Delta were airborne, the attack on the destroyer was already a failure ‑
the Rebels were starbursting, scattering to avoid the swarm of defending fighters. Two were well out of it, a pair
of Y’s just drifting there ‑ that had been the rescue plan. Droid piloted, ready for them to step into. Another two
were down already, a Y and an X, both ejected, she saw with relief. What she should be doing was heading for
Black Prince’s hangar bay; going home.
Instead ‑ she held the freighter to a loose evasive weave and watched, fascinated, as she identified M’Lanth’s X‑
wing being challenged directly by Group Captain Olleyri. The Defender came in on the X‑wing’s port bow high;
M’Lanth started to turn towards it, the Defender rolled outwards ‑
M’Lanth reversed roll, expecting Olleyri to turn in on his tail ‑ instead Olleyri retro‑burned hard, pitched the other
way, outguessed M’Lanth and ended up behind him ‑ the rebel immediately reversed turn and pitched up, curving
to his left breaking across the gunsights of the Defender.
Olleyri was having too much fun to put a quad burst into the X‑wing and end it there and then. Single fire, he
bracketed the X‑wing, ahead, behind, left, right ‑ M’Lanth faked reversing the turn then pulled up sharply, still in
the same tight powered skidding spiral.
Olleyri pirouetted the big, expensive fighter outwards to buy distance and scorched the X‑wing again, neat quad
bracket, at long range.
M’Lanth’s wingman tried to interfere, rolling out and heading after Olleyri ‑ it would be down to the atomic clocks
which of Lead, Alpha, got to him first. No help there.
The rebel recognised that fighter for fighter, he was outclassed; as pilot versus pilot, probably there too.
The only edge he had was his opponent’s age ‑ skill and guile, true, but also slower reflexes, and that much
deeper dyed in arrogance. A knife fight would suit ‑ rolling round each other at point blank range, if Olleyri would
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M’Lanth’s X‑wing broke out of its bank and rolled to present, drifting away from the Imperial fighter; Olleyri
accelerated towards him, M’Lanth tried to draw a bead with a torp,
Olleyri danced out of the lock once, let the rebel nearly succeed again, nearing optimum firing range ‑ M’Lanth
firewalled his engines, launched the torp on a weak contact, and rolled out to strafe past Olleyri’s fighter then J‑
turn and match velocities.
Good timing in principle, but it lacked surprise. Olleyri nailed the torpedo at medium range, accelerated and
curved into M’Lanth’s line of flight, crossing his sights too fast, twisting like an eel out of the rebel’s snatched‑
trigger stream of fire.
Chopping into a reversing roll and vectoring round, then it was the rebel’s turn to dance as the Group Captain
lobbed a deliberate stream of single shot after him.
One connected between the wings, smashing into the shielding, dropping it and kicking the X‑wing aside; M’lanth
rode into the tumble, exaggerating it and turning it into a radical evasive roll.
Olleyri waited for him to pull out of it into an offensive move; which he did, dumping weapon energy to shields
and accelerating towards the group captain, cancelling lateral velocity into a long, slashing spiral, rolling round
Olleyri’s gunsight.
A Defender had more energy to use than an X‑wing, and the Group Captain saw no reason not to have fun with it,
he kept up a slow fire.
M’Lanth rode his curve, pulling it in, widening it out as need be to dodge.

Distance and judgement; M’Lanth shot off a rapid eight round volley to force Olleyri to evade, not with any
realistic expectation of a hit but to buy time for the close, swirling terminal approach the Rebel wanted. He called
the turn short, would have flashed across the Defender’s nose in perfect killing position, but he had guessed right.
Olleyri overanalysed, began to react too cerebrally and too soon, rolling wide, yo‑yo’ing after a rebel that simply
wasn’t there.
When he realised he had been tricked the Defender flashed round like a conjuring trick, pivoting on the thrust
deflectors, and both took full salvos, point blank.
The Rebel’s shields dropped completely and one of the bolts connected in the fuselage; nothing fell off, at least
not yet. Olleyri’s fighter retained some shielding, but the Rebel refused to break off, spun low and left, nose
coming up, flying almost backwards tracking the Defender; it rolled out and extended past him, and spun,
spraying a hose of fire back along its line of flight which forced M’lanth in turn to break radically, and bought time
for Olleyri to retrieve and plan.

The rest of the action had more or less come to a pause, both sides’ people flying with one eye on their own
business and one eye on the duel.
Franjia barely registered Delta squadron lining up on her, but when she did threw the tramp freighter into a Tallon
roll out of sheer reflex, throwing most of them off and cursing herself half way through — it was the perfect
She decided to extend out and let them try to ‘get’ her, if they could ‑ partly because she had no intention of
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Then the third guard, the one they had forgotten about, pushed the muzzle of his blaster pistol against her ear.
Sithspawn, she thought. I never did think much of Delta’s gunnery.

Olleyri and M’Lanth were still fencing with each other. The rest of the rebels were either ejected, ionised, or dead ‑
and no surprise with two squadrons of Avengers chasing them down.
He must have known the engagement was pure loss, the end came surprisingly swiftly ‑ he shut down lasers and
dumped the power into shielding, fired a pair of torps at point blank on an incomplete lock.
The Group Captain was slowing, but not there yet; he snapshot at the torpedoes and hit one of them, the
explosion cooked off the other, the Defender went tumbling away flare‑scorched, the blast caught the X‑wing and
it started to break up ‑ M’Lanth and his droid ejected. One of the ATRs moved in to pick him up.
Delta had finally coned and paralysed the YT; Franjia could have avoided any one of them, maybe any three, but
not the full pack on a coordinated fire order.
One of the search and rescue ATRs moved in on it, attached itself to the starboard lock; for once, Omega‑17‑Blue
had lost the draw and one of the line platoons had got the job instead.
It opened ‑ the single remaining guard was there, using Franjia as a human shield, blaster pistol to her head.
‘Let me go ‑ or I’ll splatter this treacherous cow’s brains all over the airlock.’
It had taken years for Lennart to get it through their Mandalorian‑influenced skulls that bluff was an acceptable
weapon of war. He was astonished when the stormtroopers stopped coming at him; pretty much anything they
said would have got an ‘eh?’

‘So what will you do then?’ The sergeant asked. ‘Assuming we care about taking either of you alive. You’re not a
flier. If we do let you go, how do you intend to get away?’
Unobtrusively, the trooper at the rear of the squad activated a flash‑bang, rolled it forward along the deck while
the sergeant held the rebel’s attention.
He boggled, decided ‘I’ll take her with me as a hostage.’ Then the blinding flash and the deafening crunch, almost
too loud to hear.
Franjia dropped, more out of the grenade’s effect than tactics, faster than he did; the sargeant and the two lead
troopers put eight blaster bolts into his chest before ‑ after eight bolts, what was left of him ‑ hit the ground.

It was as routine as paperwork in the Imperial fleet; after the battle, the inquisition.
Aron and Franjia were given the once over by Medical ‑ fusing the bone in his toe and removing several items of
biofragmentation from her ‑ uncuffed, allowed to change into Starfighter Corps uniform. That sent a wave of
rumours scattering throughout the ship from Epsilon flight bay.
Then they were hauled up before the ‘intelligence committee’ ‑ Brenn, Olleyri still in his flight suit, someone
neither of them recognised in a ranker’s uniform and steward’s insignia, Pellor Aldrem hanging on to Jhareylia as
if her sanity depended on it, and the Captain.
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‘Sir,’ Aron said, ‘as far as it was necessary at all, we did our part. They were thinking along those lines already, all
we really did was encourage them.’
‘Assuming this hasn’t blown it wide open.’ Franjia added.
‘None escaped, no transmissions got past our jamming. Are you saying you regret being rescued?’ Brenn said,
‘Relax, Iel.’ Lennart said. ‘Time is with us on this one. They’re committed, they can’t afford to abort; even the loss
of their recon squadron is one of those last minute screw‑ups that has to be borne.
'We do know about the escape, and the preliminary strike‑ taking out the ISB building should cripple the security
preparations nicely; the forewarning relatively unimportant, the practical damage more than makes up for it ‑ who
was responsible for that?’
‘Me, Sir.’ Aron admitted. ‘It just…sort of happened.’
Lennart had to work at not laughing. ‘This is completely informal, in case you were wondering. It has to be,
because that ‘happening’ put a hundred thousand credit bounty on your head. As soon as we work out a good way
of disguising the situation as a hypothetical, I intend to inform the fleet legal department, just to see what kind of
fit they throw.’ He nodded to Olleyri.
‘We know all about the operation you took part in. What else have they got, and how good are they?’ Olleyri asked.
‘We never really got much further than general initiation and indoctrination. They ‑ they’re almost entirely like us.’
Franjia said.
‘As people or as pilots?’ the Group Captain asked.
‘Mediocre, sir.’ Franjia answered. ‘Line unit level on average, with a large proportion of novices and a few crack
‘Mostly crazed.’ Aron filled in. ‘Pretty grim bunch, the bulk of them. Thirteen squadrons, Y‑wings, T‑wings, not
many X or better, only two frigates, a –40 and a Neutron Star.’
‘That X‑jockey was pretty good. As long as that isn’t their average standard.’
‘Is Squadron Leader M’Lanth going to live?’ Franjia asked.
‘Not once we execute him, no.’ Lennart deadpanned.
‘But ‑ he came after us, tried to rescue us from their Intel ‑ is that worth killing him over?’ she pleaded.
‘You have it backwards. Is it enough to buy him mercy? You were with them for a short but intense period; long
enough to make ‘them’ start to seem like ‘us’.’ Lennart said.
Brenn was not that much of a hard‑liner, but circumstances left him playing the part. ‘We sent two officers of the
Starfighter Corps undercover, to acquire intelligence and spread disinformation. You are now back where you
belong. Anything that happened in between was the demands, and stresses, of the job. Nothing more.’

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be the planetdef V‑150’s. Take what I could from here and run, consider myself blown.’ The ex‑rebel agent said.
‘Did you get the impression that they would be prepared to go in without you?’
She paused for a second, trying to think it through and sum it up simply, and settled on ‘Yes.’ Dead‑voiced.
Aldrem squeezed her arm, he worried about her.
‘Very well, then. Rebel assets?’

‘Sir, we were under suspicion by everyone but the squadron from the moment we got there. Neither ourselves or
the squadron were briefed on the final attack plan, so I can only tell you what we saw.’ Aron said, and detailed
what he had seen.
Franjia and Captain Lennart both picked up on the attempt to spare the rebel pilots interrogation, at least; Lennart
decided not to pursue that, yet.
‘Your opinion?’ The Captain asked Jhareylia.
‘This would have bypassed me completely. I didn’t do volume discounts.’ She tried to make a joke of it, chiefly to
lighten her own mood‑ and failed to convince. ‘They’re committed, now.’
‘And their standard procedure would be?’ Lennart pressed.
‘With an escape this size, subtlety fails. I’d expect it to be done as a military rescue, cram them into a warship fast
enough to outrun Imperial pursuers and try to cross enough organisational boundaries that the chase flounders in
paperwork, reach a safe base then screen them and reintegrate them.’
Ignoring paperwork was one of this ship’s chief assets; even assuming that the rebels got that far.
‘This,’ Lennart said, firing up the holodisplay, ‘is what I expect to happen.’ They weren’t really here to participate,
they were here to be used as a sounding board and error checker.
‘The object of the exercise is to draw out enough of the Alliance fleet to make a proper fight of it. System defence
has been noticeably slack about long range scans before; I think they would take the risk‑‘
‘The force commander’s Mon Cal.’ Aron interrupted. ‘They’re not good at risk.’
‘Some destroyer captains would have your lips sewn together for interrupting like that.’ Lennart said, calmly.
‘Sorry, Sir, what I meant was that the bold move might be beyond them.’
‘I believe so too; but is that a safe basis to plan on?’ he asked, rhetorically, implying it was the quality rather than
the fact of the interruption that mattered.

‘So, expectations; the Neutron Star, the fighters and the rest of the human‑crewed ships will make a direct entry
in low orbit, which triggers whatever spec‑ops plans they have; they will need to take the planetary and the
capital’s theatre shields.
'I don’t expect them to be activated anything like promptly, but I don’t expect the rebels to count on that either.
No, demolish; they don’t have the assets, and I presume aren’t stupid enough to assume they’ll have the time, to
actually steal the generators. Seize the V‑150s, bombard or have demolition teams take out the shields, fighter
and LTL fire on the prison to kill the defences and guards, then whatever surface to orbit assets they have for
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orbit at best, and whether they officially mean to or not act as initial covering party.
'Does anyone have any objections to the planetary defence force and the Imperial Army receiving a thorough
pasting?’ Lennart asked.
‘No.’ Jhareylia said at once.
‘What about the Golan?’ Aldrem asked.
‘I expect them to buy time and raise the alarm to the rest of the sector group, maybe inflict some casualties ‑
better off killing the small craft and slowing down the surface to orbit cycle than just denting the shields of the
larger craft.
'Sector will react, slowly. The Lancer‑class Dubhei Targe will be present ‑ in atmosphere, over the prison. The
Rebs will, at least should, be hesitant to use heavy weapons on her, for fear of misses ‑ or heat dump off the
shielding ‑ roasting the prisoners.
'Kondracke will be able to inflict losses and buy time. When they do nail him, she’ll be grounding in a relatively
friendly environment with good survival probabilities for her crew. By then, Elstrand’s Comarre Meridian should be
ready to enter the engagement. The rebels will have already done the majority of the work they need to succeed,
and would be far beyond the point of no return.
'Personally, I hope they do get away with the prisoners; once we recapture them, we can deal with them according
to something resembling Imperial law rather than the whim of some mad torturer.’ Lennart said.
Franjia had the sense to say nothing; it was Jhareylia who asked ‘What does that involve?’ She had been about to
ask what the difference was when Pel Aldrem stood on her foot.

‘Recognising it would take a major legal miracle for any of them to be found actually innocent?’ Lennart said.
‘Standard drumhead tribunal. Short to medium sentences for the ordinary rank and file and the support personnel,
medium to long for the non‑coms and officers, long term hard labour to execution for the spiritual‑ideological
leaders and military planners. All martyr complexes accommodated as usual.
‘Ol, this is where you come in. At this point we need rid of the ion cannon ourselves, Elstrand’s fighter
complement should be going for it, but even taking into account the local defence force, Kondracke and the
Golan, they’ll be outnumbered at least two, probably three to one.’ Lennart explained.

‘Captain?’ Aldrem spoke up. ‘Sir, the Golan’s under‑crewed for something that size, and as near as makes no odds
undefended from boarding. Seize it and they’ve pretty much got control of local space.’
‘I considered that and discounted it. It would take too long for them to clear out, too long to evacuate from;
seizing it early in the engagement ‑ it would be a far‑sighted man or Mon Cal who saw the need, especially as
they intend a smash and grab. The time and troops they’d need, they need more badly elsewhere. Take it late on
in the fight and all they’ll be doing is leaving more hostages behind. They’re going to have enough trouble
evacuating the V‑150 crews as it is. Hathren‑ suicidals?’
‘Unlikely but not impossible.’ She said. ‘More likely to be men willing to gamble on a thin chance of survival, or
intending to lie low after the op and escape through the underground railroad.’
‘We’ll know anyway, if they leave any kind of escape ship with the ion cannon, won’t we?’ Aron asked.
‘Yes. Phase three; escalation.’ The holodisplay showed a planet with near orbit criss‑crossed by dozens of trails
and dots, little sparks of fire. Lennart continued, ‘Our purely tactical goal is to inflict damage on the Rebellion, and
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Alliance is in this sector.’ Short term goal, anyway, Lennart thought to himself. The long term goal was to keep an
old, ugly secret hidden.
‘Now, we have parts of the picture,’ he looked at Aron, Jhareylia, Franjia, ‘and we may be morally certain; but
basically, we’re trying to indict a Sector Governor for incompetence, and that requires a higher standard of proof
than the hunches of war. I would run with what the Fulgor’s compcore gave us if I had to, but it would be a long
shot. The Fulgor was regional command anyway; what I hope to do is draw in the distant covering party. That
could present an interesting challenge. You heard nothing?’

‘No, sir.’ Aron said.

‘Captain Lennart‑‘ Jhareylia began. She was still afraid of Lennart‑ for his casualness, more than anything else. He
should look as if his responsibilities sat on him more heavily; he was frighteningly unaffected.
‘As far as I know, we have a lot of movement out‑sector, we, well, we sell ships to the rest of the Alliance. Part of
what we get back is preferment ‑ a lot of people from Vineland sector have gone on to rise pretty high. There’s a
lot of support they can call on, but I don’t know about the timing.’
‘My working assumption is probably one, possibly two destroyers. That should be enough of a fight to raise
attention.’ Lennart said, then paused, looked up at the ceiling, cocked his head as if he was listening for
‘Captain, this is Com‑Scan.’ Ntevi; the duty watch officer. ‘The Ghorn II defence platform is reporting hyperspace
bow shocks. Several medium, many small.’

‘And so it begins.’ Lennart said, reaching for the com panel. ‘Bridge, sound General Quarters. Aldrem, Jandras,
Rahandravell‑ wait here.’ Brenn and Olleyri left; he had to glare at Jhareylia Hathren.
He waited until she had left, then turned to Aldrem. ‘I know about the white lie you told her. I passed the
information up the chain of command, and HIMS Antorevan was intercepted and boarded by Minotaur at 0200
Coruscant Time.’ HIMS Minotaur was a Shockwave‑class heavy destroyer, one of their squadronmates in 851.
‘Eighty‑seven officers and men were brought to trial and found guilty of piracy, robbery, murder, and misuse of
Imperial resources.’
‘I see, sir. Thank you.’ Aldrem saluted, and left. Jhareylia was waiting outside, having no definite combat
assignment; he caught her by the shoulders and pulled her to him, hugged the breath out of her before she could
ask, let her go, kissed her forehead and sprinted for turret Port‑4.

‘Aron, Franjia.’
‘Yes, sir?’ they both said, nervously.
‘I thought that you, of all people,’ he said looking at Franjia, ‘could be counted on to maintain a healthy hate of
the Rebellion. Have you forgotten Tellick and Inturii so soon?’ stinging her deliberately.
No, sir.’ She said, angrily. ‘But, as we said to them, it’s a civil war. You expect the opposite sides to have nothing
in common? Some of them were, really, frighteningly like us.’
‘With similar griefs, and sense of loss…what difference do you think that should be allowed to make?’ Lennart
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Aron saved her. ‘We were sent to do a job we didn’t understand, and be sneaky, treacherous, devious, underhand
and manipulative about it; Captain, I think you should have been more worried if we came back normal.’
‘You don’t know the half of it.’ Lennart said, shooting from the lip. ‘We’ll be deploying in thirty minutes. Epsilon
squadron will be depending on you to lead them, in the name of the Galactic Empire.’
‘We won’t let them down, sir.’ Aron assured him.
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­04­22 05:57am

Ch 16

The executions were scheduled to start at dawn. So it was the nightside of Ghorn II that lit up with nearly two
hundred brief new stars.
The Alliance had burnt a lot of capital, sacrificed most of its sleeper cells and intelligence units, and called in a lot
of favours to make this happen. The ground side was not exactly being handled by a crack commando team ‑ and
probably the better for it.
Punch a hole in the planetary shield generator network, and take out the theatre shield that could fill the gap;
rather than send in a bunch of jittery enthusiasts playing Hero of the Republic with equipment patterns ‑ and
tactical ideas ‑ going back to the Ruusan Reformation, they sent a small bunch of fixers, fudgers, and improvisers.
They had bothered to think about the problem; the garrison wasn’t officially on alert, but the men ‑ more sensible
than their officers ‑ were so keyed up they might as well have been. So sneaky was out.
The central node of the planetary shield web was in a fenced and guarded enclosure in the middle of a major
public park; the clear space around served as killing ground for the guards and safety distance and accident
management space for the shield unit.
The easiest way around the problem was to hijack a heavy cargo skiff, and have it flown by a kamikaze droid ‑
which power dived it into the planetary shield generator. Inactive, not under the stress of carrying its own energy,
the resilience that required made the shield a hard target; the plummeting hauler damaged it only, beyond
immediate usability but not beyond repair ‑ for the time being, that was enough.
The theatre shield was in the outer courtyard of the garrison base, and was dealt with similarly; a light freighter in
transit saw the flash, banked drastically to clear the area, across normally protected airspace ‑ and jettisoned a
pallet of fuel pods over the generator. Cluster bombing with hypermatter fuel cells was nowhere near as efficient
as doing it with proton or thermal bombs, but it surely was effective.
Normally very safe, they had had their seals weakened to make them more likely to rupture. Most of them still
failed to detonate, but enough managed to split open for a ripple of pressure waves that tore the generator apart,
cracked the courtyard walls, caved in the face of the garrison building.

Above the atmosphere, the rebel formation started to sort itself out into task groups; the Mon Cal ships were late
and high, as Lennart had expected ‑ the ‑40, a –30b light carrier, a –30c torpedo boat; the human‑manned
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The fighters started to stream towards their targets; two thirds of the fighters and a third of the bombers headed
for the surface to take out the planetary defence forces and start softening up the prison.
The bulk of the bombers and the last third of the fighters made for the Golan. The platform commander had not
been happy about Lennart’s plan, but being immobile, the only alternative he had was either to bail out almost
immediately, which would not look good. That or rat out to the sector group. Squealing did have theoretical
advantages ‑ provided the sector group actually bothered to do anything, which was not a given.

The Great Murzim Stem no longer had its heavy jammer, the Golan was screaming for help and the Neutron Star
putting out what static it could‑ it was also rolling to bring it’s main turrets to bear.
As intended, the StarGun began to fire on the fighters ‑ its guns were not made for the job of tracking targets that
fast and small, so it was firing predicted grid salvos, trying to get them before they got to close quarters. It wasn’t
an efficient or economical way of doing it, but the crew of the battle station weren’t convinced they were going to
be around long enough to worry about that. It was working, too; the short‑barrel turbolasers were more than
enough to melt rebel bombers. They were only designed to contest near‑planetary space, really just to prevent
bombardment and landings.
The Alliance’s best option would have been to stand off beyond the Golan’s effective range and hose it with MTL
fire, but they needed things to happen faster than that. So send the fighters in, and take the losses and the time
they bought.

The turbolaser salvos the Great Murzim Stem and the MC‑40 did send scintillating towards the Golan forced them
to focus their shields against them, opened up soft spots for the fighters to exploit.
The platform had no actual point defence worth mentioning, because it had been designed with the clone wars
and the hordes upon hordes of droid fighters in mind.
It had seemed so near impossible to get rid of them by shooting at them, the designers had settled on an
alternative solution entirely ‑ beef up the shields to soak up fighter weapons fire, so ignoring them, and carry an
exclusively big gun fit to shoot at the motherships. It had almost made sense.
Their best chance was when the Alliance bombers stopped manoeuvring and settled to line up torpedo shots. As
they pointed on, the Golan lashed waves of green at them, blowing five of the first Y‑wing squadron apart. The
Alliance fighters tried to weave their way through the storm, started to fail, some broke off and ran, then one of
them had the bright idea of throwing the book away. An immobile target with limited point defence didn’t really
need a hard contact, did it?
Eleven pilots too late to work that out, but perhaps not too late for the mission. They began to touch and loose,
firing on partial locks, shoot then keep moving, roll round the target, swarm it, hit flanks and underside.
Somehow, through overdriven shielding, the deterrent effect of waves of green shot pouring out of the platform,
and sheer dumb luck, the Golan survived the first coordinated strike and the streams of torpedoes hammering at
its shields.
The Golan’s own fighter complement had been held back until the rebel formation had been broken up and they
had a fighting chance; now was the time.

On the surface, at Ion Cannon mount North Temperate A, the gun crew were boggled ‑ so many alarms going off,
so many separate alerts they missed the one for ground intrusion.
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They got one burst of fire off ‑ three shots, tracking on to and the last splashing over a Corellian Corvette
manoeuvring for atmospheric entry. It was the evacuation transport. It flared out spectacularly, lightning arcs
crackling down to the upper air and the ship’s lights and engines spasming, and started to tumble end for end
down to the planet.
The hull might survive re‑entry, but one flaw in the seals would let enough hot gas through to roast the crew alive
‑ which if it did happen would only pre‑empt the inevitable, slamming into solid ground without working tensors
or relative‑inertials. At least it was the usual choice; buried or cremated.
One of the ion crew started their victory chant; ‘ “Ion Cannon don’t kill people‑“ ‘
‘ “Uncontrolled re‑entry kills people.” Set me up on the next.’ They were settling down and looking for the next
target when the control bunker door blew in, and the team of Alliance volunteer commandos came in shooting.

The surface attack fighter stream had one target ‑ the planetary capital. It was the only logical place of execution,
it was where everything was going to happen. They played it the same way, dropping below the horizon and
terrain‑hopping, the single X‑wing squadron in the lead doing final tactical recon and wild weasel.
The truest yardstick of the Alliance’s real success was the proportion of people who, when they hit a place, came
out onto the rooftops to cheer, as against how many came out to shoot at them. There was a lot of light random
ground fire.
Not much of it mattered, they were after the real stuff. The garrison base received a phased squadron volley of
proton torpedoes; they hadn’t finished clearing the blast marks off the walls from Aron’s go at it, never mind the
new set.
It ceased to be a problem after it ran out of walls. The phased volley hit the scan towers, crippled the effectiveness
of the point defence; hit the defence mounts just to be sure; dipped down the fighter launch and vehicle garage
bays, blasted open the heart of the ferrocrete ziggurat.
A handful of scout troopers and stormtroopers made it out, but so much heat was dumped into the structure, it
melted and slumped in on itself, liquefying.

The Golan’s two squadrons of TIE/ln took losses from stray shots as they left the hangar bays, but not enough to
stop them as they broke up into their flight hunting groups and scythed into the loose, scattered rebels.
The rebels had already lost the equivalent of a squadron, mostly bombers, in the approach run; the faster T‑wings
extended out of the formation, accelerating clear to reform and bounce the TIEs in their turn, the slower R‑41s
and Z‑95s tried to stay with and cover the Y‑ and local bombers.
The typical cynical Imperial pilot’s definition of the usual rebel bag of odds and sods was ‘if it’s got torpedoes, it’s
a bomber. If it’s got concussions, it’s strike or intercept. If it’s got blaster gas, somebody down in Supply’s on the
take again.’
Two squadrons of Y‑wings ‑ the survivors of two and a half ‑ made up the bulk of the rebel strike force; not
completely hopeless as dogfighters, they were close enough to make it seem that way. They used what advantages
they had ‑ their size and toughness, their turrets and torpedoes, weaving to cover each other against the
speeding, laser‑spitting TIEs. In open space it would have meant that the rebel ships had to slow their rate of fire
and take aimed shots at the platform to avoid hitting their own fighters in the furball; against the background of
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The Imperial platform did have to shift fire away from the rebel fighters, but it had more than enough other
The loss of the evacuation transport would damage the rebel plan, but not yet wreck it; they had a handful of
proper dropships including a stolen AT‑AT landing barge, a larger assortment of superannuated Clone Wars craft
from both sides, and the inevitable small gaggle of tramp freighters.
They led the attack, making awkward, brute force re‑entries ‑ dodging and twisting in the fire from the Golan,
one –9979 lost control and skimmed off. The Golan blew it away as an afterthought; a Republic lander never made
it that far.
Through that, they were starting to think the rest was going to be easy when Kondracke’s Lancer rose out of its
hide like a pantomime monster. He had been in the stadium complex’s main arena; came up on repulsors,
smashing through the weather dome ‑ for no reason other than sheer drama ‑ and into view of the Rebel fighters.
The antifighter frigate was still not in full functioning condition, but at least this time its guns were fully manned.
Quick, accurate Correllian quads, but for all that he and his crew were frustrated and in need of satisfying
explosions, they reluctantly agreed with Lennart’s insistence on minimising collateral damage.
They rose up and over the stadium rim and hovered just above the speeder park, loosing maniacal cones of fire
freely above the horizon, taking aimed shots at the terrain‑hugging rebel fighters.
No starship captain wanted to commit to battle in the middle of a city. It was not exactly one of the normal
engagement modes; but it was as strange to the rebels as it was to the imperials, and both sides could at least
attempt to exploit that.
No two squadrons the same; X’s, Gauntlets, T’s, Y’s, R‑41s and Z‑95s, the X‑wing squadron commander was
senior, and ordered the T‑wings to move out, be ready to intercept smaller groups of imperial fighters coming
from around the planet, the Y’s, R’s and Z’s to stand by, and led his own squadron and the Gauntlets in.
The Gauntlets were weird little beasts; slow, solid, deep serrations in the leading edge, they were a contemporary
and rival to the Y‑wing. Their main point of uniqueness was their turreted proton torp launchers. The weight
penalty of that made them brutally slow ‑ no worse than the TIE bomber really ‑ but it did mean they could evade
and attack at the same time, manoeuvre radically to avoid defensive fire and still get their shots in. They were the
bulk of what the Lancer could actually see. They held its attention, stunting for all they were worth, and the X‑
wings played hide and seek along the horizon, popping up over the rooftops to fire grouped shot and torpedoes.
Both sides were having trouble with the environment. The Lancer’s sensors drowned in background clutter and
false positives; the rebels were horrified by just how much damage dumping so much energy into the air did. The
heat, magnetic pulse, and straightforward concussion wave that rolled out of each proton torpedo detonation tore
at the city; if there were any windows left after the previous proton bombings, they were gone now. Pretty soon,
‘flammable’ was going to become a problem too.

The city centre was not deserted; night shifts, partiers, firms and local offices who dealt with other planets and
whose business never stopped for something as mundane as local dark ‑ there were more than enough people
around. In that environment, ‘people’ became ‘casualties’ frighteningly easily.
No civil attack alarm had been sounded; it didn’t need to, as the superheated dry air around the Lancer swelled
out and rose up, drawing air and windborne debris in from the rest of the city into its own, artificial lightning‑lit
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like leaves in a typhoon would fire wild and start hitting structures soon, if the Lancer’s gun crews didn’t get
overexcited and do it for them.
In orbit the fight spiralled around the Golan, TIEs and Y’s, the bombers frantically trying to claw off the
atmosphere and the TIEs using their superior thrust to spiral around them, braking harder and later.
One Imperial fighter got hit at the bottom of its swing down the gravity well, splashed by a blaster bolt in the wing
hub; the pilot ejected, and found himself doing the hundred mile freefall ‑ racing two rebel pilots and an
astromech to the ground. Well, their dust would, anyway.
The ‘95s and ‘41’s were almost as easy prey as the Y‑wings; nearly fighters and might have beens, but there were
so many of them. Outnumbered by a factor of three, depending on how the fight below went ‑ the thermal bloom
torturing the weather cycle of the planet was not merely visible from orbit, it was rapidly becoming dominant.

By doctrine, the fighters were now a “mission element” ‑ which most pilots translated as "expendable". On a broad
interpretation, they were right. It meant that this part of the plan simply had to get done, to the best of their
ability and endurance, for the sake of the overall objective. They were the acceptable price to pay.
There was no plausible good end to their part of it, and all there was to do was to go out fighting and do as much
damage on the way as possible. Fortunately, most of the pilots who resented that chose to take it out on those
actually shooting at them.
One wide‑spaced trio of TIEs swung in on the tail of a pair of the cruciform local bombers; the single TIE above
and behind, playing wingman, twisted out of the way as an R‑41 shot at him and missed.
The rebel element leader had been hoping to slide into the clear space and gun down the two lead TIE ‑ he was
already moving towards it anyway, not registering the TIE’s survival; it backflipped and accelerated away out of the
blind spot, rolled round its Z‑axis and put two twin laser bolts into the Rebel.
The R‑41 shredded itself in a carrot‑shaped explosion; the wingman who had missed the first time took a
snapshot at one of the lead Imperial fighters ‑ hitting and overpenetrating low on the port wing, blasting out the
lower radiator panels ‑ then tried to sideswipe the trailing TIE.
The intact lead TIE took one chance at its bomber target ‑ wrecking an engine mount, mission kill. The rebel strike
craft tried to limp back to the carrier, but a shot from the Golan vapourised it on the way. Then it tried to turn to
cover the rest of the flight, but the R‑41 slid into the trailing TIE before it could lock and fire; the trailer was slow
rolling clear, was crushed against the shields of the Starchaser, and exploded, damaging and stunning the Rebel,
lining it up for the leader.
He sprayed a rapid chain of laser bolts at it ‑ detonating it, and being hit in turn by the bomber he had been
chasing, which pumped a spray of autoblaster fire into the eyeball.
It was turning for clear space to draw breath and plan a next move when the half‑winged TIE, the only survivor of
the flight, managed to regain control and blasted a stream of laser pulses at it, zeroing in as it receded; the hit
split open the weapon power cells and splashed a red‑orange fireball in the sky.
And so it went. Imperial fighters, against the odds, managing to give better than they got but ultimately ground
down by locally superior enemy numbers.

The orbital battle ended when the Great Murzim Stem dipped down into an atmosphere‑grazing orbit, beneath the
StarGun platform and thrusting to hold itself in place, trying to get it over with fast by firing full volleys into the
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The Golan‑series were huge sprawling things, but they had relatively little to show for it. A lot of heat dispersal,
but the two quad mediums on the Neutron Star could pound it hard enough for local overload, bringing down
shield segments and ravaging the structure underneath with the LTLs fired a fraction of a second later, and
lashing out around it with what point defence turrets it retained.
That should have been the Mon Cal’s task, their light cruiser ‑ realistically, frigate ‑ was better built for the job,
but the –40 was still leisurely descending the gravity well.
It was fortunate for the cause of the Alliance that Captains Ibtilamte and Vallander were not face to face, and could
do no worse than swear at each other.
The Golan shot back, a clear target at close range, but its guns were only at the heavier end of light turbolaser,
and it was taking in more punishment than it was giving out.
Brute force made the end inevitable; the shields billowed and flared out, parts of the structure melted and
slumped in on itself, and the slablike station started to spew escape pods.
Only four TIEs broke out of the melee, and moved to re‑enter and link up with a local defence unit; between them
and the station they had killed better than three squadrons of Rebel fighters, and they had bought time.

The lancer Dubhei Targe was still hovering in front of the gates of the jail, preventing any close approach, with the
rebels becoming increasingly reluctant to put the city to the torch by firing any more warheads at her.
It would do no short term good to cook the men they were trying to rescue ‑ was doing no good to riddle with
blast‑driven fragments the citizens they claimed to want to set free from the Empire. But in that case, what to do?
Sit and get shot? For one Gauntlet crew, frustration got the better of reluctance, and they curved up from behind
the office tower they were using as shelter and fired three hastily‑locked torpedoes.
Two were accurately aimed, one too low. The turrets spat laser shot at the Gauntlet ‑ two connecting, draining its
shields and shooting half the forward fins away ‑ and at the two torpedoes showing no aspect change; the Lancer
hit one, was hit by and rode out the blast from the second, but ignored the third which hit the car park
underneath her, and penetrated thirty metres before detonating ‑ an accidental camouflet.
The blast was bigger than that, but it left a crater in the ground ‑ big enough for the Lancer to drop into. The
Dubhei Targe’s navigator had carelessly mis‑set the repulsors; programmed hover a fixed distance from the
planetary surface, not the centre of mass. The surface wasn’t there any more, and the Lancer’s own engines
hauled it downwards ‑ through the superhot vapour and the ejecta ‑ and embedded it in the crater, tilted half‑in,
half out, with too many heat dispersers and guns masked or driven into foundation pilings.
Kondracke screamed at his navigator. The shields battered at the earth and rock they were embedded in and
drained themselves out, and the Alliance saw their chance.
The dropship pilot had dreamed of opportunities like this; pre‑celebrated in cartoons all over the galaxy.
There was a certain glorious inevitability about it. He warned the troops in back to get on to the upper gantries
and strap in, cut the braking thrusters, and accelerated downwards, at the Lancer. With an AT‑AT barge.
Kondracke looked at the large and growing blip on the abstract tactical display; he had just time to make the
mental transition from the commander of a ship, thinking about vectors, arcs of fire, radiator temperatures, to a
man on the bridge of a ship thinking, dreck ‑ I’m going to get squished here.
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going to kill him ‑ someone else was going to get star billing for it.

The drop barge fell on the Lancer’s bridge module like a hundred kiloton hammer. The compensators on the
barge took it in fairly good condition ‑ it was only 3000 ‘g’ of acceleration, imposing severe but not excess strain.
The Lancer’s systems were still in failure‑analysis mode over the grounding, the electronic equivalent of ‘oops’,
and the crew had been too badly stunned to over‑ride them. It took the impact badly. The ramming, in effect,
crushed the bridge tower to twisted fragments and drove the jumble down into the hull.

The loss of the bridge took out the active control point. Imperial security provisions, legalities, verifications ‑ with
the captain dead, the next authorised in line of command had to certify that, and that he was taking over. It was
supposed to help prevent unauthorised access and mutiny, but it imposed a sometimes critical delay in regaining
control of a crippled ship.
There were at least three other places that had the information systems to exercise command from: Com‑Scan,
main engineering and gunnery control, if anyone had the wit to; it was not impossible that the Dubhei Targe might
be able to survive.
What was likely to make it impossible was the battalion of Alliance assault troops deploying quite literally on top
of them, with lots of convenient hull breaches to work with.

The rest of the drop ships touched down around the crater, now that it was safe to do so, and sent their men out
into the searing heat.
That was actually being dealt with; the regional weather control system was starting to conduct damage control,
nudge the bloom of hot air inland, away from the city, to ‑ relatively ‑ barren areas where the cyclone could be
left to blow itself out.
Some of the rebel pilots, from primitive worlds without such things, thought the air‑heating and cooling lasers
were attacking them and moved to strafe; they hit a couple before they were reined in, the propaganda damage
was greater than the physical. The weather control crews ‑ who would later be portrayed as heroically standing by
their duty in the face of psychopathic terrorist attack; it was closer to the truth than usual ‑ managed to prevent
the full scale firestorm that was building, and started shuffling in masses of cool, wet air.
The closing stages of the fight had tipped a lot of places over combustion point, and there were several streets’
worth of normal sized fires to be put out.
The stadium had caught light, of course, the structure damage less important than that the seating was burning.
Not actually comparable in lethality to a chemical weapon attack, at least not in the short term, the toxic fumes
pouring out of the duraplast choked and confused both sides.
Some of the Rebel troops had respirators. The prisoners certainly wouldn’t.

Inside the giant two hundred thousand seater stadium, the central space was variable, could be swapped out
easily from one purpose to another. There were many levels of basement holding the environment trays and the
stadium furniture, and presumably ‑ tacscans had failed to find them anywhere else ‑ the rebel prisoners.
The dropship had luck it did not deserve when it hit the Lancer dead on; without the Imperial frigate to catch its
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The troops guarding the rebels were mainly CompForce, the military arm of the Imperial Security Bureau. They had
been given the task precisely because their head office had been torpedoed by ‘Rebel murdering bastard druggie
fringer scum’, alias Squadron Leader Aron Jandras of the Imperial Starfighter Corps, and they had already beaten
twenty of the prisoners to death to relieve their feelings, even before the shooting started.
There were two companies of them, and between the vessels of the attack group the Alliance could scrape up the
equivalent of a regiment. In their favour, they had hostages and a closed structure with clear, well defined ways in.

Until one of the circling light freighters decided that the most obvious way in was probably the worst, and set out
to blow a hole in the stadium floor. Firing blind through the reddish‑brown choking smoke, it set up a series of
proximity flak bursts that fused shallow craters in the module surface and cracks around them.
Some of the first rebel troops in got hit by the flash, the rest took cover until it was over, then used hand weapons
to blast the rest of the way through the metre thick ferrocrete slab; some covering the holes and some dropping
through, they broke into the basement levels and started hunting the security force.
At this, the rebels did have a decisive advantage. More of them had seen action than the CompForcers, and the ISB
troops’ doctrine was aggressive to the point of stupidity.
The more politically correct of the company commanders won the what‑to‑do argument, with the most politically
correct course of action ‑ counterattack and drive the rebels out.
By that point the Alliance lead elements had gone looking for the blocking parties covering the entrances they
were expected to use, and blindsided them.

In the shelter of one of the burning buildings, the handful of Stormtroopers that made it out of the garrison base
were monitoring, necessarily expressionless ‑ but disgusted at the stupidity of the ISB. There were only a shade
over two platoons; against a regiment, they were certainly going to die. That was unfortunate, but it wasn’t the
problem. What was worrying them was how to do enough damage to the enemy to make it worthwhile.
They were watching and waiting, looking for somewhere in the rebel plan to stick a large, white spanner. If they
had known the ion mount was in rebel hands, they would have gone for that instead, but all they could deal with
was what was in front of them. Then they saw it.
Outrageous luck had served the Alliance well to this point, there was no reason it shouldn’t prove to be a two‑
edged sword; Dubhei Targe’s bow was sticking up out of the crater.

The troopers opened fire with a rapid volley at the rebels still dismounting from their dropships and the control
tower of the drop barge at the other end of the crater, dropping many and forcing the rest to cover.
As a matter of procedure, the heavy‑rifle snipers and the repeatermen had aimed for the antipersonnel weapons
on the dropships, degrading their ability to cover the rebel squaddies.
The senior survivor, the staff sargeant with most time in grade, made a decision; at this point it should be fire and
manoeuvre, bounding forward section by section, but soon the rebels would realise how few of them there were
and get their act together. Then they would be pinned down and prevented from moving at all.
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All the stormtroopers, then, broke cover, scrambling forwards, spraying blaster bolts wherever they had a clear
line of fire past their own comrades, hitting more rebels with splinters than shot.
One of the YTs opened up on them with its belly turret, spraying low power laser shot, secondary blast vapourised
‘crete knocking troopers down, picking up others and throwing them ‑ only two direct hits, but the disruption of
the blast gave some of the rebel infantry time to organise themselves and shoot back. The small formation lost a
quarter of its strength killed, stunned, or pinned down and unable to take part in the battle for the Lancer.
On the lip of the crater, the stormtroopers established a firing line, some keeping the rebels they had just cut
through suppressed, most of them shooting at the rebs in and on the Lancer. They picked one hull breach, fired a
platoon volley at it, triple tapping in two shot burst mode ‑ then one squad charged down over the broken surface
of the crater to take and exploit, and the rest switched target to the next hole.

It was procedure, shooting each other in to the target in sequence, but the senior sergeant looked up and spotted
the YT coming round for another pass, with a flight of fighters in support.
If they were stupid enough to use torps again, the blast would fry enough rebels that it would be justified to sit
here and let them shoot; but they wouldn’t be that dumb twice in quick succession. He ordered his men to move
now, all forward fast, get in among the rebs and do some damage.

It was actually too late; most of the Dubhei Targe’s crew had already been taken prisoner or killed, or frightened
into panicked incoherence. It would have been practically impossible to sort through who was left and regain
They tried anyway, advancing behind a carpet of blaster fire and bulkhead splinters, trying to punch through to
the still Imperial controlled areas of the ship and take out as much as possible of the rebel command structure on
the way.
Against the rest of the rebel mixed bag it might have worked, but there were two formed battalions, based off the
frigates, and this crew were the Great Murzim Stem’s assault strength.
They had been trained together, under the control of someone who was more or less competent, and their
doctrine said, in this sort of mutual close quarters fighting, to lay maximum fire down on the contact ‑ including
grenades, it wasn’t their ship after all ‑ and fall back, regrouping as they went until they reached local superiority
then surround and outnumber the attackers.
The stormtroopers surpassed the rebels in tactical dexterity ‑ used that to push them locally on to the back foot,
shoot some of them then find another line of advance, avoid being sucked into rebel fire pockets ‑ but there was
only so much ship to play with, and too many Alliance infantry.
The platoon sergeant died countercharging a rebel ambush party; one of them had a thermal detonator. The
stormtrooper cannoned into him, broke his jaw and knocked him down, shot two of his mates, then felt
something ding off his helmet.
Two feet was not the recommended range for demolition/breacher grenade use. It was almost funny. Then, boom.

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and stop any have‑a‑go heroes from getting themselves killed, and protect the fire and paramedic teams. They
were actually in relatively little danger ‑ no more than the usual demands of the job ‑ because the infantry were
busy and after the weather control laser debacle, the Rebel fighter commander was keeping his squadrons on a
very short leash. Some of them were forming their own cordon around the city, prevent any garrisons from the
rest of the planet moving to intervene; only the X‑wings were given a strike target, the governor’s palace, and he
was three miles underground by the time they melted it.
CompForce had died like the fools they were, but they had shot another thirty of the prisoners to prevent them
being recaptured first, and another hundred had died and many were suffering from fume inhalation.
Instructions from the strike commander: get them out and into the dropships as fast as possible, leave a small
fighter element to protect them. The dropships were to shelter under the atmosphere until called for, but the rest
of the fighters were wanted in space now. Something about an incoming Imperial heavy frigate, Acclamator or
Meridian class.
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Jedi Council Member

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Ch 17

The rebels reoriented themselves to meet the threat; the less capable combat vessels, the light carrier MC‑30b
and ‘saddleback’ Corellian Corvette conversion, remained to cover and retrieve the dropships, the MC‑40 turned
to meet it in high orbit accompanied by the torpedo MC‑30c and the gun‑armed corvette, Great Murzim Stem and
the two Nebulons following as a second division out on the flank, for crossfire.
The Meridian class‑ Kuat called them Acclamator‑II ‑ were shorter and more compact than their ancestors. The
original Ecliptics had been designed first to replace, then after the Republic Senate refused to cough up the cash
revised to serve as flagships for squadrons of, the old Dreadnaught‑class. They had a typical flagship’s generous
bay space for emergencies and contingencies, and intervention assets ‑ troops and fighters.
When one had been required, it had actually been an obvious and logical move to base the design of the fleet’s
new standard planetary assault ship on a heavy, efficient, and by now proven reliable hull. Hyperdrive and cooling
systems had been moved aft ‑ on a few nightmare examples rebuilt half way through construction it had been a
problem, purpose built hulls from then on ‑ and the interior rearranged. True, it had left the Acclamator vastly
over‑rated for the mere transport side of her duties, but most people thought that had been a budget dodge
In the Imperial Starfleet, they now served as assault spearheads; sent to break through the final line of planetary
defences and take an area by seizing it or simply blasting it clean, big enough to bring the non‑combatant
division and corps‑level transports safely down on.
The Meridians brought main engineering back inside the armoured primary hull, converted most of the bay space
that was left into fuel tank, kept six of the Acclamator’s quad mediums and replaced the other six with single
heavy turbolasers.
To fill a tactical gap ‑ or, cynics said, to justify Kuat’s selling them to the Imperial Starfleet ‑ they were designed
to complement the high‑power, medium‑short endurance destroyers, by going for the long‑haul deep patrol role.
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While fleet destroyers specialised in hunter and deterrence operations ‑ that is, deterring imperials from joining
the rebels as much as deterring the rebels from attacking ‑ the Ecliptics and Meridians got the slow jobs. Distant
escort for merchant convoys, protecting army and military stores transports, occasionally something actually
interesting like enforcement group command and recon in force.

As far as Commander Barth‑Elstrand on the Comarre Meridian was concerned, this was almost too good to be
true. Large numbers of soft targets at close range, no going and looking for them required. No hide‑and‑seek,
nothing but hijacked planetary defences to worry about.
The heavy frigate was zig‑zagging, to avoid defensive fire. Also to try to get the rebels against the backdrop of
open space. It was only one little planet, true. It probably was basically expendable, and it probably wouldn’t land
him any worse than a reprimand if he put a dent in it ‑ especially considering any damage would likely be blamed
on the Rebels anyway.
Also, he was supposed to be that ruthless, if duty called for it.
How many people ever do put, ‘Today I shall become a mass murderer’, on their to‑do lists? Elstrand hadn’t. He
had been watching the fight unfold from long distance sensors ‑ what news footage there had been was too
incoherent to show much of the tactics ‑ and the collateral damage had been impressive. Most of it accidental,
true ‑ lob that many torpedoes at buildings directly and the city would be a cratered, blazing ruin.
That was enough to be getting on with. Execution, maybe, but not random butchery. He would try and avoid using
Ghorn II as a backstop.
As far as it using him as a target was concerned, thank fortune ‑ or the Force, although you weren’t supposed to
do that any more ‑ for budget cuts.
There were supposed to be eight ion cannon sites, both poles, three one hundred and twenty degrees apart round
the north temperate zone, three equally spaced in an offset ring in the south temperate zone, something like the
corners of a cube, and six superheavy turbolaser mounts, at the centre of the faces of the cube. The economists
had butchered that plan ‑ said the planet’s status as a target didn’t justify it, not with a naval base in the same
system capable of sending defending forces. They only had the two ion cannon, the other was still in Imperial
hands, and on the other side of the planet.

Time to see if their plan made sense. Or for that matter if the rebels’ did. Eight squadrons’ worth of Alliance
fighters ‑ they had started with around a hundred and sixty, their shuttles were doing search and rescue, they had
maybe a hundred and ten left and ninety of them were heading his way. The rebel plan seemed to be to intercept
him and fight a distant engagement, fighter strike with the ships in support. The MC‑40 behaved as if it believed
it, anyway.
He could almost hit it from here…it had shields and weapons ready, but it was flying a slow, straight course,
manoeuvring short. Gutless frogspawn, Elstrand thought, watching its vector shift.

Perhaps it was inevitable. As the Imperial Starfleet managed to catch and kill the defector and leftover‑Republic
assets of the bolder elements of the Alliance, most of what they had left would be the more cautious, later arriving
alien elements, the balance of power within the Rebel Alliance would shift, and it would start to look like the
Confederation, mark II. Most of their heavy metal was nonhuman, chiefly Mon Cal, in origin even now, wasn’t it?
That would leave the Alliance increasingly politically screwed, push them from being an armed mass movement,
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of victory.
For the moment, of his ship’s own three squadrons, the Bombers were carrying concussion and flying close escort,
a trick he had heard of from the Briefcase Brigade ‑ the parade of contractors, consultants and think‑tank teams
that plagued a beached warship. Supposedly, an Imperial admiral ‑ a nonhuman, one of the very few ‑ named
Thrawn had trialled the idea of using missile armed bombers as close escort interceptors. Elstrand had his four
stormtrooper transports out and doing the same. Neither of them could accelerate fast enough to get past the
rebel fighter swarm, so they would play close escort, while the TIE/ln, which did have the thrust, would go and
attempt to accomplish their strike mission, without warheads. Sometimes you just got the feeling it wasn’t
supposed to make sense.
For the moment, the Comarre was fencing with them, trying to lure them away and open up clean lines of fire.
Commander Elstrand had been studying fleet tactics for years, and had increasingly despaired of any chance to
put any of it into practise; his chief thought on watching the rebels manoeuvre to counter him was kriff, it actually
works. He had been impressed by Black Prince’s use of flak burst fire, and had tried to get his gun crews to do the
same; only one of the HTL and one MTL crew had been able to do it consistently in simulation, so they got to try it
for real now. The process involved half‑choking the bolt in the barrel, sending the lead part out fractionally slower
than the main body, so the turbolaser bolt overtook, tangled with and burst on itself. Ideally at a predictable
distance downrange.
Not every captain thought it was worth the wear and tear on the gun barrels, and in most cases with a turbolaser
heavy enough to produce a decent splash, the cost of the hypermatter fuel to power the shot was probably greater
than the cost of the fighters you could reasonably expect to bring down. That was all right. His real target was
their battle plan.

There were so many rebel fighters, they had got in each other’s way down on the planet, but now they had a
proper swarm‑sized target they intended to make the most of it.
If you went by command equivalence‑ assuming the ship a Commander’s seniority justified, a medium or heavy
frigate, was equivalent to the fighter unit led by an officer of the same grade ‑ he was outgunned.
The light turbolasers opened up on the fighter group with a clear line behind them, the rebels broke into a loose
pack formation and started jinking, twitching out of the way whenever they had a lock on them. Some of the
gunners tried passive targeting, but the rebel jamming produced too many false reads, and they hadn’t had time
to develop the subtlety under pressure or the sixth sense to tell the real from the artefactual.
Flak bursts didn’t care. The four medium and the heavy detonated in the rebel fighter stream; they scattered as
they recognised the unstably‑rippling green tracer, but not far enough. The local force craft had the thinnest
shielding and were hit the worst, especially by secondary detonations.
It wasn’t an inherent problem with the torpedo design; in fact, the torps the rebels were using, often stolen and
reconditioned surplus, were usually beyond shelf life and more likely to fail to detonate when they were supposed
to than the other way around. Most of the pilots chose to set their torpedoes to detonate if they were intercepted,
run with unusually large flank and rear distance settings on the proximity fuses. They preferred a low‑order boom
to no boom at all, volatility by choice. Sometimes that turned a near miss or a point defence interception into an
effective hit, and sometimes they paid for it.

The TIE Bombers followed the chaos up, shooting missiles at the damaged and tumbling rebels, launch then turn
away, better a chancy shot and live to take another than press in and get killed. It worked at first, the flak bursts
killed five local bombers and four Y‑wings and set up another two local and three Y for the TIEs, but the rebel
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There were still better than twenty T‑wings flying; the Bombers shot more missiles at them and broke up into
pairs, started to weave in preparation for the fight.
The Imperial frigate blasted light turbolaser volleys at the T‑wings as they lanced in, only hitting two ‑ crisping
them instantly ‑ but the evasions of the rest gave the bombers a better chance as they entered close quarters.

The four transports were still in the missile phase, firing past the dogfight at the concussion‑armed rebel fighter‑
bombers, who returned the favour. The transports were bigger, easier targets, but they had better sensor gear to
lock and guide missiles in with, so hit scores would be high on both sides.
Concussions were multimode; capable of accepting assistance from firing or friendly vessels if it was available,
doing without if it wasn’t. They could be fired and forgotten, were more likely to score if they were guided in.
The Imperial transports were doing that and preparing to rely on defensive fire; the rebels were jinking.
The first splash killed two R‑41, maimed a third; hits drew down the shields of all the transports but only cracked
one, bursting on the side of the absurdly minvan‑looking stormtrooper transport and opening the empty troop
compartment to space.

The X‑wings, Gauntlets and surviving Y‑wings began to loose torpedoes at Comarre; in a fleet melee one could
get away with fire and forget, but in single ship operations they had to be steered ‑ ridden in, most pilots said ‑
to stand any real chance of not being decoyed into missing or stymied into becoming sitters for the point defence.
That was especially frustrating for the X‑wings, stuck in the bomber role simply because they could and did carry
proton torps, and their electronics were two generations more advanced ‑ not technically, but tactically ‑ than the
Y’s. They could also sidestep LTL fire more effectively. Three Y‑wings failed to do so; one broke up ‑ the pilot
amazingly not dead ‑ the other two fireballed.
The Gauntlets could do more than just sidestep; instead of locking on and flying more or less steady with the
turret traversing freely to protect themselves, they could lock the turret on and manoeuvre the main hull freely.
They broke out of the rebel attack stream and some of them went hunting, one killed a TIE Bomber and one
finished off the damaged transport.
They would take some killing. Mass sequential, fire everything at one after another, might do. In the meantime,
there were easier targets to hit to draw down the rebel fighter strength and the number of torpedoes they could
fire at him.

The first volley was on terminal, red‑lining their thrusters to sprint through the point defence envelope. Almost
seventy incoming. Comarre moved into her own terminal‑approach routine, jamming and evading as radically as
she could, as unpredictable as a ship which answered the helm so slowly could reasonably be.
Fifty hits. Fifty tiny, brilliant fireballs sparkled off the Meridian’s shields, enough to kill a small or bring down the
shields of a medium warship, against a large ship ‑ by Alliance standards, anyway ‑ it was degradation, more heat
to be bled off. Another three or four like that would break down the shielding entirely.
The planetary ion cannon took a shot at the Meridian; electronic warning well in advance, and the slow‑moving,
relatively quickly dispersing ion bolts achieved nothing by the time they reached the Imperial frigate, probably
more of a danger to their own ships in orbit. Not an immediate danger, but if he closed in after the Rebel
warships, and the ion cannon got him ‑
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He felt like flipping a coin, knew if he did it would only be a shabby attempt to find someone else to blame. And it
wouldn’t work. He was supposed to know. Captain’s prerogative.
Deploy the /ln now, defensively? Doctrine stated ‑ maintenance of the aim.
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­05­14 01:48pm

Ch 17b

What was the aim? The goal, the hope? To…this was technically an illegal operation anyway, wasn’t it? Doctrine be
‘Change of plan. Release the TIEs into the melee. Inform their task is now close defence anti‑fighter.’
‘Aye, aye, Sir,’ the increasingly nervous flight controller replied.
Rebel training was showing its usual uneven quality. A handful of veterans and naturals, who were capable of
doing serious damage, a slightly larger total who had at least been well trained, and all too many amateur
enthusiasts. Five TIE bombers and two Transports were down, for two T‑wings and eight R‑41.
The Starchaser was supposed to be tougher than the TIE Bomber, and combat shielded, but the difference in
innate agility was less than the difference in the pilots’ training, and the Bombers’ heavy lasers, designed to strafe
capital craft, punched through fighter shields and armour easily.

Numbers, though, numbers; if he committed now, as he had, what was he supposed to do about the planetary ion
cannon? Bombard that bridge when he came to it.
The Gauntlets were continuing to fight backwards, turrets locked on and spaceframes moving freely, and they
were chasing down the remaining transports.
The T‑wings were trying to hunt down the Bombers, and the R‑41s trying to escape from the melee to join the Y‑
wings and add concussion to proton fire. As good a moment as any for a scramble.
The TIEs screamed out of the flight bays ‑ at least one of the rebel pilots had been counting, and expecting it. The
T‑ and X‑wings swung in to intercept them, in organised manoeuvre this time, and Elstrand picked his moment.
As the rebel bombers swung away to give the fighters striking room the Comarre’s engines fired, ramped up
rapidly to maximum thrust.
There had been an original mistake, that turned into a happy accident: the original heavy frigates had been
supposed to be much heavier than they had turned out to be. When the design was revised, they had kept the
engines, and the results were two very and one outrageously fast classes of ship. Meridians couldn’t outrun
torpedoes, but they could outpace most of the craft that carried them.
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chase Comarre, and that left them fairly easy meat for the 900 ‘g’ faster TIE/ln.
That changed things. The rebels, looking for a silver lining, were about to celebrate driving Comarre from the
frying pan into the fire, when the ion cannon mount reported that it was under attack.

The Imperial garrison fighters, under remote direction, had formed into an attack stream spearheaded by the
Golan’s survivors, a mix of TIEs and Z‑95’s. The TIE/ln could strafe the armoured shell of the V‑150 until the
ground around it started to boil without doing it any serious harm. They lanced in first, going for point defence
turrets, sensor arrays, outlying units ‑ three getaway skiffs were found and destroyed, four point defence turrets it
cost two TIEs to eliminate, then the missile armed Z‑95s swept in.
They were obsolescent, inferior in every respect except this; with defences suppressed, rebel fighters near the
planet still guarding the dropships and evac transports, they could afford to make a proper job of it. They fired
from close range, launching at the visible tip of the ion gun, at the line where the ball of the turret sat in the
socket of the mounting; unguided, with a large, stationary target ‑ the missiles crashed into the huge globe,
jamming it in place and smashing the final aiming tunnel.

The Great Murzim Stem and the Rebel frigate appeared to be trying to change places, the Mon Cal frigate trying to
get out of the way of the charging Imperial and the fragile, already shield‑depleted and scarred armed merchant
manoeuvring to intercept.
In terms of hardware, the neat, compact little aquaslab was the more dangerous, but her captain was, at best, a
reluctant warrior. Probably capable enough if backed into a corner ‑ which he had to have done to him to make
him scream for help.
The Rebels were doing their best to fight their way out. The torpedo frigate, MC‑30c, launched two full salvos at
long range. Someone over there might be paying too much attention to the manual.
The ship torpedoes were much more dangerous than their relatively tiny fighter equivalents, still being
sporadically fired from the frigate’s aft; Comarre shifted all the guns that could bear forward, launched LTL and
low‑power MTL streams of shot at the torpedoes, and her main guns crashed out their first coherent salvo at the
A cigar of a ship, her captain chose to take a chance and attempt to remain in the fight, turning bows on to
minimise his target area. It almost worked. One of the HTL bolts hit her as she straightened out on the new
heading, a glancing blow, but enough to dump heat into the shields.
The MC‑30 looked something like a baby Recusant that hadn’t been properly fed, but had nowhere near the
shielding, not even in proportion ‑ the single heavy shot was enough to burn more than half the shielding off and
bleed enough heat through to leave a huge molten weal in the casing.
Both the rebel frigates began to return fire, the Great Murzim Stem a slower, more deliberate fire than the MC‑40,
both of them at least competently trained. Target selection ‑ on the back foot here, Elstrand realised. Firing
defensively, failing to dominate the battle.
Doctrine? Take out the most valuable target first, the one which reduces the enemy fleet’s effectiveness by the
greatest amount in the shortest time. Kill the force multipliers, the carriers and fighter control ships, the
command and EW units, in preference, so ‑ the torpedo frigate first.
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Elstrand pulled the MTL’s off them, ordered the guns up to full power and lashed out a coherent salvo at the
torpedo corvette.

It bet on its target profile; any manoeuvre would have exposed its flank as a target. Bet and lost. Two MTL bolts
hit it on the bow, cost it its perfect profile as they kicked it aside. One HTL bolt splashed into the exposed flank.
Thin, depleted shields not enough, the shot burned the little ship almost in half, and the manoeuvring stresses
took it the rest of the way. It ripped itself apart.
The engine mount separated ‑ both parts drifting under the influence of the impact, but no starship was
completely neutralised until it wasn’t generating power. If any auxilliary generators survived in the forward hull,
they might still be able to power a torpedo launch.
Elstrand ordered two MTL turrets to stay on it until it was gone, and the rest to switch target.

The Neutron Star would be an easier kill, but it would also be less likely to scream for help. The Mon Cal frigate
was more potentially useful for that.
The four quad and six heavy turrets began a slow measured fire, staying on it as the light turbolasers, light ion
cannon and actual point defence weapons duelled the incoming torpedoes. They were fractionally easier targets
The first salvo had four shot, three jammed, five impacted. They splashed blast waves over the Comarre, briefly
engulfing her; she sailed out of the fireball with more than half her shielding pounded down. If the second salvo
did as well, the rebels might be in with a chance.
The single HTL that could manage it launched a flak burst at the incoming swarm; they got their timing wrong, it
missed ‑ exploded behind them and scored the barrel badly enough that the safety systems shut the gun down.
Not all bad ‑ it did make a clear background, the smear of tracer compound scattered with the burst lasting
longer than a nuclear flashbulb, good to shoot missiles against.
Six intercepted, four ballistic, two hit ‑ one local burnthrough right on the bow that left a triangular section of hull
glowing white hot. Nothing important underneath, spares and life support tankage space.
The MC‑40 would be grateful to get off that lightly. The rebel gunners were better; in a close range, high aspect
change engagement, they would score more often ‑ maybe enough to be decisive. They had to live long enough to
get that close.
Neither ship was manoeuvring radically now, and the Imperial was pumping out enough electronic noise to
eliminate the fine edge, make brute force the order of the day.
Both ships were built to deal with MTL fire, absorb the heat from it and wave it away, but the Imperial ship’s
heavies scored twice in the first three salvos. That mattered.
The Mon Cal traditional heavy shielding and their focusing of it was all that held it together, the shielding flared
out as the rebel frigate was kicked by the heavy shot and almost tumbled end for end.

Captain Vallander of the Great Murzim Stem was a loyal and dedicated warrior of the Alliance ‑ enough so to
contemplate the insane. His ship was not under fire, and was using that freedom to make good shooting practise,
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Keep it off long enough to run away, she had done that; or batter a light frigate like an Interdictor until it broke
and ran, she had done that too. Not the other way around.
He took a cold look at the situation. Imperial heavy frigate, moving too fast to stop. Rebel medium and light
frigate defending a fixed, defenceless objective. The light frigate had the Imperial within its manoeuvre cone ‑ and
two hundred heavy concussion missiles in its ordnance bay.
It was depressingly obvious. The Great Murzim Stem turned to cross the path of the still‑accelerating Comarre.

Elstrand was starting to wonder, was the trap going to work, or was this it? The MC‑30 had been disposed of, the
light fire from the two Nebulons and the Corellian was somewhere between an irrelevance and an augmentation to
his own point defence, it was only the two rebel frigates in it.
He began to lay LTL fire on the evacuation ships, not aiming for kills, just to stop them flying straight enough to
plot a hyperspace route and make sure they needed to fight their way out.
The rebel MC‑40 was behaving as he would have hoped, maximum evasion now, stunting, trying to avoid being
hit and compromising it’s own fire accuracy in the process, and Com‑Scan reported a high‑power broadcast burst
that sounded very much like ‘help’. Good ‑ but they also brought his attention to some very strange behaviour on
the part of the armed merchant.
‘What the stang is he doing? Does he think he has a better chance at point blank?’
Speed, distance, the sheer size of space ‑ Vallander was counting, absolutely, on the willingness of Elstrand to lay
him close aboard and finish him.
Comarre had enough thrust in hand to avoid it if she wanted, but Elstrand didn’t know about the strikeship
business, or the missiles still in the Great Murzim Stem’s holds.
The two quads that had been dismembering the‑30c were finished, they switched targets to the armed merchant.
Streams of green began pounding into her thin forward shielding; the forward turret got hit early on.

‘Right, people, listen up, this is Captain Vallander. We have nothing that can kill that Imp frigate, we’re not scoring
and the Mon Cal aren’t either. So I’m going to ram the nerfson. Switch all systems to autocontrol and get to the
escape pods.’
The ship kicked again, hit hard; some of them weren’t going to take much persuading, some weren’t going to live
that long.
‘When our magazine goes up, it is going to be a kriffing big bang. I’ll kick you out at the last safe moment so they
don’t work it out too soon. May the Force be with you.’

The Imperial frigate had enough of a head start on the fighter swarm that she should start to shed velocity now,
decelerate to make a slower pass by the dropships. Elstrand was practically bouncing off the ceiling. This was his
first real chance, first opportunity for main line fire combat and it was working, he was winning, it was good. He ‑
and many of his crew ‑ were not in full brain mode. He did not recognise and categorise the threat until it was
pointed out to him.
‘By the fire rings of fornax!’ the com‑scan officer said. He was the son of outer rim disaster relief volunteers, as
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running wardroom joke. ‘I think he’s going to ram!’

‘What’s she supposed to gain by that except suicide?’ Elstrand said, scornfully.

At that point ‑ if not a long way sooner ‑ Lennart would have realised something was wrong, and had it closely
scanned, had the fighter wing shoot up its engines to buy more time, concentrated fire on it, or banked drastically
out of the way, likely all four. Elstrand might mature into a competent commander, but he wasn’t there yet.
The forward part of the armed merchant was being hammered into a molten jumble, but collapsing in on itself as
it was it served as ablative shielding for the engines and magazine. One of the secondary generators ruptured in a
brief flare of light.
Then a shower of escape pods burst loose from the Rebel frigate, and Elstrand finally understood the significance
of the suicidal approach.
‘Gunnery, cancel fire plan, cancel all tactical instructions, switch all guns to bridge target central direction, kill it‑‘
Elstrand ordered, elation changing to panic.
All the functioning turbolasers paused, twisted to bear, cracked out a volley at the Great Murzim Stem; it was
enough to burn through the wreckage, but it was very late, very close ‑ they were less than ten kilometres apart
when the two hundred concussion warheads blew.

Imperial Intelligence had a fascinating little gadget called a Hyperspace Orbiting Scanner. In theory, it could read
off the contents of a computer ‑ detect the movement of the electrons, the bions, the non‑ons, the quantum
vortices and the hairs off the back of Schrodinger’s Cat.
From a tachyonic perspective. In practise, it was nowhere near that sensitive.
The Com‑Scan team of Black Prince knew this because they had stolen one, and had fun playing with it. It was
listed as damaged beyond repair while being recaptured from a Rebel attempt to obtain one for study. The
Ubiqtorate probably knew the truth, but Lennart had done enough for them over the years, handing over prisoners
taken and following up leads, they were not pursuing it actively.
The scan team’s working theory was that it was a double bluff; its literally miraculous capabilities had been
invented as an excuse and cover story for many, many slicers, penetration agents, interception stations, and
similar lower‑tech but far more widespread and practical forms of sigint. It could detect big, spectacular events
easily enough, though, and it was. The command team of the Star Destroyer were watching the battle unfold via it,
and commenting.

‘Kriff. He nearly had them in the bag, and to then go and do something that dumb‑‘ Rythanor said.
‘Arguably, we were partly to blame for not informing them that it was a possibility.’ Brenn pointed out.
‘They had the information to put it together. They knew about the previous actions.’ Lennart decided. ‘They failed
to think it through. We may have to move earlier than I expected, simply to rescue what’s left of Comarre
Meridian. Nav‑ drop points?’
As far as Lennart was concerned, there was one thing severely wrong with the design of an Imperator’s bridge: the
basic design concept. They were a ported‑in relic of the Clone Wars, designed on the working assumption of
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the routine information flow of the ship was routed away from command level, on the probably accurate
assumption they wouldn’t know what to do with it, and only command decisions left to them ‑ which, inevitably,
they often were not well enough informed to make.
No physical fix was possible ‑ the bridge was the one place every VIP visitor was sure to come, which meant they
had to keep it at least apparently fairly close to spec; but the place had more holoprojectors than any three
studios. The ship also had more than enough people in Navigation to maintain a continually‑updated selection of
pre‑calculated hyperdrive courses, which Lennart used to give himself tactical options.
He looked at the map of the system, at the symbol and status sheet of the crippled and half‑molten Comarre,
weighed the factors in his head. One was missing. ‘Scan‑ ah, Cormall.’ It was indeed him in charge of the gadget.
‘With that thing’s sensitivity, I would think you would be able to find better music to listen to...’
The team laughed, partly because it was a captain’s joke, partly because he did use it to surf faint signals for good
hard rock music anyway. ‘What, precisely, would those be?’

The chief looked guilty; caught with a strange blip on his hands. He had been about to report them, had been
trying to classify them, had the signal, or signals, isolated and was processing. Lennart recognised that, decided
not to fall on him too hard.
‘Sir, precisely I don’t know yet. It’s probably a bow shock, but it sharpens, fades, twists‑ I can’t classify it.’
‘And like a typical slicer, you decided to keep worrying away at the problem by yourself. Tacscan’s a more
communal business‑ you are allowed to ask for help. Give me playback.’
Cormall reran the few seconds of sensor log, Lennart and Rythanor looking at the holo‑projection of the display.
‘I see. Or rather I don’t.’ Rythanor said, fascinated by the apparent paradox. ‘It looks like bow shock, but it doesn’t
smell like one. Interestingly weird. Could be a couple of things‑a radically‑reconfigurable, polymorphic hull could
throw that off, extragalactic aliens; or maybe even a tachyon‑bypass distortion‑manifold cloaking device‑‘
He was, of course, speaking in mockery, mouth making noises to keep busy while his brain ran. Lennart pretended
not to get it.
‘I hate the sound of technobabble. There’s a much simpler explanation.’

‘Radical evasion.’ Rythanor agreed. ‘But of what?’

‘Something with enough engine power to steer a highly erratic course. Our targets.’
‘They’re not manoeuvring consistently, so they’re not giving a consistent signal. Most scanners would pick up
nothing, It’s only because we have this that we’re detecting anything. Chief ‑ combine and overlay.’ Rythanor
Cormall compressed the sensor data into one image, the two senior officers tried to make sense of it.
‘MC‑80?’ the sensor officer suggested.
‘Power profile’s wrong.’ Lennart decided. ‘Two smaller ships.’

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beams at a point, picking out one of the preselected drop points; ‘There, and fast.’
‘Captain.’ Aleph‑3’s voice from behind him. ‘Urgent.’ She was wearing the iridiscent red‑blue armour, helmet off.
Full dress outfit.
‘You’re not supposed to be on the bridge at battle stations. Is there a reason?’ he asked, hackles rising.
‘Higher authority’s response.’ She handed him a datapad.
Message form, the authenticators checked out, there were some interesting bits in the routing he would have to
think about later, but it claimed to be from an officer of the privy council. Not good news.
Situation under review, agent dispatched to take oversight, take no further action ‑ withdraw to a rendezvous
point. A do‑not‑engage order.
Lennart took the actual text in at a glance, noted the name ‑ Kor Alric Adannan; made his decision.

‘Nav, run her up to point four seven eight, I want to be there before they are. Engage hyperdrive.’
‘Captain, the orders, you‑‘ Aleph‑3 began, before her brain caught up and she realised that he could and had.
‘May I speak with you? Personally?’ She said, in a frantic whisper. She looked disturbed ‑ face calm and impassive,
but somehow seeming as if the mask was coming loose over whatever was underneath.
Behind her the main viewscreen blurred into a blue‑white blizzard.
‘As opposed to?’ Lennart asked, calmly. There were actually answers to that.
‘Captain, please. Understand me. I have a lot to explain, and I’m going to find this difficult enough already.’ She
said, controlling herself with difficulty. She gestured vaguely to the accessway off the bridge; he motioned to her
to lead on.

Some ship’s business to sort out first.

‘Guns, I’m expecting a couple of old friends for a party. I think at least one of the inbounds is a Recusant.’
‘Aye, Aye, Sir. Any special instructions?’ Wathavrah answered.
‘If you take out the rest of it with the bow heavies intact, you can keep them to play with.’ Lennart informed him
over the comlink, and turned to Rythanor, still studying the developing image. ‘Deduct that, and I think we’re left
with a light destroyer.’
‘Too sharp to be a Bulwark‑ renegade Imperial type? That why we’re rushing to get there first?’ Rythanor guessed,
‘Planning for the worst case. I have no intention of emerging from hyperspace into the kill zone of a Vic‑I.’

Aleph‑3 was looking pointedly at him from the bridge accessway; he took a deep breath, walked off the bridge,
the blast door slid shut behind him.
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‘I‑‘ she took a deep breath. ‘A high proportion of my ‑ brood ‑ found their way into positions like this, jobs…
tangential to the Force, because we do tend to display a certain ‑ sensitivity. Woman’s intuition, the male
Kaminoans called it until we were old enough to threaten to rip their testes off.’
‘Are you trying to tell me that you, a clonetrooper, have the Force?’ Lennart said, not seriously ‑ postponing the
real problem.
‘How I wish I could!’ her eyes flashed. ‘I’m trying to tell you that you do. I have a tiny, tiny spark of talent ‑ more
theoretical knowledge of the Force than almost any Jedi Master, and far more target’s‑eye experience than most
live through; but I have just enough danger sense and instinct to make me doubt my own judgement, just enough
contact with others to make me hear faint whispers that half‑convince me I am going mad, enough control over
my own metabolism that the medics need half a spoonful less in the bacta tank each time, and I can telekinetically
lift a hundred credit chit, any higher denomination and the weight of the electrons would be too much. I think part
of the reason I am a skilled hunter of Jedi is sheer envy.’
Lennart took that in his stride. He was more concerned about something else. ‘So it was you who mistook simple
tactical dexterity for ancient sorcerer's ways.’ Even at a moment like this, of revelation and betrayal, he couldn’t
keep his tongue entirely out of his cheek. That attitude was one of the things that had helped there be so few of
them; but it looked as if that strategy had just imploded.
‘No mistake. Every test proves it ‑ you are a powerful but untrained sensitive and precognitive. Do you know why
you have escaped notice for so long?’
‘I take it that by this stage, protestations of innocence are completely useless?’
‘Galactic Spirit rot you, Jorian Lennart, why the kriff can’t you get angry with me?’ she yelled at him. ‘I betrayed
you, I sold you, and you stand there ‑ quipping, as if nothing was wrong.’
‘Clearly by your own standards, nothing is.’
‘Not mine. The council’s. The acolyte’s and adept’s. The “I”ness that this unit was forbidden.’
‘Do I have nothing useful to say on the subject? He asked, again driving her nearly insane with his
undemonstrativeness. ‘Shouldn’t I have been hearing these voices, seeing these visions in the mind’s eye?’
‘I have no idea what goes on in your head.’ She snapped at him. ‘Twenty years ‑ you avoided being identified as a
sensitive simply because you seemed far too firmly embedded between the oblivious and the disdainful, of the
searingly obvious and politically sound, to have any kind of foresight ‑ or any sense ‑ at all.’
‘That is probably the most worrying thing you’ve managed to say so far. That this ship’s record matters less than
my inability to kiss wrinkled buttock ‑ obscene.’

She moved her hands forward as if to strangle him. ‘Aleph, us, we were the first to really consider that you were
crazy like a pittin instead of just crazy. If you put the energy into going with the flow that you do now dodging it,
you could have been a sector admiral by now.’
‘You’re half right; I do hate politics.’ Lennart said, dryly.
‘No, you don’t. No man works the system as effectively as you do without being a very competent political
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throwing flour bombs and rocks at Senators.

'After Naboo, when we realised what was going to happen, I made a deliberate choice to fight for the Republic I
knew, and despised, in hope that the Republic I believed in would emerge, purified, from the fire. Yes, I was that
stupid about war then. We all were.
'And it worked, for me, but not for the Republic; the more the system changed, the more it seemed to stay the
same. You once described the republic to me as drowning in its own pus.’
‘I did, and I did not know that I was preaching to the converted. Why did you hide that from me?’ she asked him.
‘From the eyes and voice of the system? An enthusiastic voice, too.’
‘But I‑ we‑ are the change. We are the proof that it is not the same, that the new order‑‘
‘Perhaps I have simply matured into the same sort of elegant cynic I used to throw bricks at.’ Lennart said, world‑
wearily, and acting.
‘You?’ she said, looking at his crumpled, stained jersey and battered cap. ‘Elegant? Or are you going to claim to
have become indifferent to appearances as well?’

‘Inversely; a point of principle. I always intended to be followed and obeyed for who I was, not my costume
jewellery.’ In fact, he had his captain’s bars on upside down, she noticed, appalled.
‘That is not the way things are supposed to work ‑ that is outright disrespect and defiance of the system. You
cannot, you just can’t demand the right to spout treason as the system’s price to accommodate you.’
‘It’s worked well enough so far.’ He said, flippantly. ‘Have we reversed positions on this, or have you simply lost
She took a deep breath and started from the beginning. ‘You were identified as a force user and recruitment
potential. Kor Adannan has been sent to examine and possibly induct you.’ He looked disappointedly at her. He
was waiting for her to spell it out explicitly. She did. ‘As a dark side adept.’
‘What in the void possessed you to think that I might possibly make a good ‑ no, appropriately bad ‑ Sith?’
‘Because it was the only thing I could think.’ She shouted at him again. ‘The only other option was to kill you.
Independent use of the Force is ‑ you were there, it was forbidden. The Emperor cannot permit anyone to be
seduced and used as a conduit by the so‑called Light. Once we knew, it is the one way out, the only way to live.’

‘How nice of Adannan, therefore, to begin by offering me a no‑win solution.’ Lennart said, like a political
technician, matter of fact.
‘The choice between practical failure and jeopardising the situation, or disobeying an order ‑ I assume he believes
he has oversight authority. Would I be wrong to expect that this recruitment involves some sort of battle of wills?’
‘Crushing and rebuilding.’ She said. ‘Normally. You? I don’t know. The aged and corrupt, the young and greedy ‑
they’re easily taken. A man already in a position of authority, with some ideals left and what seems a very
sideways take on life ‑ the real question is not whether, but how much of yourself you emerge with.’
‘You’ll understand,’ Lennart said, ‘if I have my own ideas on the subject.’
‘I don’t know what you expect to change. You already behave as if you had that kind of authority.’ She said, part
admiring, part disapproval. Stormtroopers inherited, or had pounded into them, a military sense of neatness along
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‘So it doesn’t seem as if I actually have much to gain by this, does it? Which side are you going to be on?’
Did he realise how important a question that was to her? Possibly.
‘I‑ don’t know. It would help if I understood what your side stood for.’
‘I think it should be obvious.’ He said, deliberately facetious. It came so naturally to her to do the opposite ‑ she
was still only starting to comprehend what he hid under that. ‘Disappointed‑optimist cynicism, political
technocracy, a sideways take on life, and half‑bricks in the night.
'I understand that promotion, within the order of the dark side, is on a dead‑men’s‑shoes basis?’

‘Good.’ She said, without conviction. ‘If you‑‘ then realised how cynically he meant it.
‘If this truly is inevitable, and I remain unconvinced, then I have no intention of being an easily taken apprentice.
Especially not if, as seems to be the case,’ Lennart waved the datapad, ‘the man is a political fool who knows the
Force, mind games and nothing but…you’ll excuse me, I have a ship to run.’
‘Would you really be prepared to do that?’ She said, as he was turning to leave. ‘not simply kill in the line of duty,
but murder for your own ends?’
‘What, you mean just like the stories say a proper Sith is supposed to?’ he said with one eyebrow raised, then
walked back into the bridge.

There were other people on board with problems of their own. Not as severe as being shanghaied into an order of
ancient evil ‑ just a modern one. Of the eleven active squadrons ‑ Nu was awaiting reformation ‑ only five were
hyper capable. All of them were being held on board for the short sprint through hyperspace, on thirty‑second
In practise, the fighters were ready; the pilots weren’t.
In Epsilon flight bay, they were all standing around, suited but two without helmets. The rest were boggling at
Aron and Franjia, trying to work out what to say.
Aron had made a deliberate effort to avoid learning their names; now he realised he was going to have to. This
was inherently bloody absurd; meeting them now, after two messy, bloody operations, as people rather than
numbers. Particularly his wingman and the second element leader of his flight. And it did come down to him; he
noticed Franjia looking at him expectantly.

‘Well, fellow interchangeable components of the system…’ he paused, uncertain of how to proceed; decided to be
bold. ‘Take those kriffing stupid looking hamster helmets off. We’re on two minute standby, they take five
seconds to put on, no sense wasting life support time.’
Uncertainly, most of them did.
‘The senior flight lieutenant and I,’ he explained, ‘were sent as mock defectors, to pretend to join the Alliance and
feed them a load of dreck. It did not go entirely according to plan,’ understatement of the year, ‘and right now we
should be being ultra‑cautious, ultra‑careful to spout party‑line crap at every chance. Kriff it. Let’s see any of the
securipricks do as much for the empire.
'Speaking of which, we’re strike element. We expect Rebel heavy warships, big targets with big guns to shoot back
at us with. So move and shoot, move and shoot. I want explosions. So, in the name of peace, justice and galactic
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‘That would make justice optional, then?’ Epsilon Nine‑ F/Lt Ardrith Yatrock, athletic and poster boy handsome,
caught the mood and managed to say. He looked much more like most people’s idea of a fighter pilot than the
short, stocky Aron. Far too much like it to really be any good, cynics said, but he was competent and a shade
‘You’re in the Starfleet. There ain’t no justice.’ Aron replied, glancing at the far wall of the bay ‑ still showing the
blizzard of blue‑white streaks.
‘So, what are they like?’ Epsilon Two, Zhered Gavrylsk, Aron’s wingman, asked. He was an endomorphic yellow
man ‑ literally; a near human, his skin was the colour of a ripe lemon. It looked very odd above a flight suit.
‘Cynics and believers, fools and heroes, murderers and madmen ‑ just like us, but more obvious about it.’ Franjia
‘What about me?’ Epsilon Three, Paludo Kramaner, asked.
‘All seven.’ Franjia told him, knowing he wouldn’t keep count. ‘But they fight for their side, and we fight for ours ‑
just as well for the rest of the galaxy. If we weren’t in the military, we’d probably all be out robbing banks.’
The rest of the squadron started arguing among themselves at that.
‘Nah, security’s too tight, everyone expects banks to be robbed. You want to go for small businesses, hit them
and get the money before it makes it behind too many walls.’
‘Why do I have the feeling that you’re speaking from experience?’ Franjia asked him.
‘Too small, too risky. Fraud is the way to go. Hardly ever prosecuted, and usually a fairly civilised business when
they do.’ One of the newer replacements, Epsilon Eleven, spoke up. Tall, thin, long‑nosed.
‘All right. Show of hands. Is there anyone in the squadron who spent their childhood on the right side of the law?’
Aron asked. Most of them raised their hands ‑ ‘Including the things you never got caught for.’ All but three went
back down again.
‘Let me guess. You took up music late in life.’ Franjia asked Paludo, who was claiming to be innocent. ‘Otherwise
there would be Assault with a Deadly Weapon, at least. By or on, one or the other.’
‘What about you, or was that just a pack of poodoo you spun the interrogators?’ Aron asked her.
‘When I was very young, I spent some time in the, ah, rapid transit sector of the economy. Moving on to air patrol
from that was as good a way as any of cleansing the record.’ She admitted.
Aron’s gut started to twist‑ ‘Tin up, to your fighters.’

It was a magnum launch, everything out except the dropships; the shuttles would form a close defence unit,
effectively additional point defence. The stormtrooper and assault transports would join the bomb wing. In that
role they operated without their troops ‑ it was too easy a way to squander an infantry platoon. Especially on the
older stormtrooper transports, which had had their budget dismembered during construction. They had neither
the heavy energy weapons that would have made their attacking role easier or turreted weapons to defend
themselves. Minimalist‑brutalism, a design intended for mass production.
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Now all any of them really needed was a target. Like their missiles, the fighters could accept help if offered, work
alone if need be. They were ‘plugged into’ Black Prince’s sensor picture.
There was some chaos around the planet, Imperial garrison fighters harassing the rebel evacuation transports and
fighting a running battle on the fringes of the atmosphere with the rebel fighter screen; there was a strange melee
in interplanetary space, looked like a mass antiship strike without a ship in the middle. Two major and a handful
of light warships, a half‑ molten Imperial and a badly chewed Rebel frigate, both of them tumbling out of control,
and a couple of Nebulons, one with recent repairs around its lower fin, one identifying out as Chandrilia Rose.
Aron surveyed the battle zone, the afterglow of the many‑teraton blast, the litter of fighters and escape pods, and
said ‘So far, so normal. Where’s the fight we were promised?’
‘Scan‑incoming?’ Lennart asked.
‘Twin engines, good speed, medium‑poor agility.’ Rythanor said, referring to the unknown. ‘Not Vic‑I, unlikely
Vic‑II, could be Karu or Vic‑III, by upper limit it could be an even less agile type ‑ Harrow possibly, give me a
moment to sort this out and I’ll give you a probability breakdown, but is it possible they could have got hold of a
‘I do hope so.’ The captain grinned. ‘Tell the legion to ready the lilypads for ship to ship.’
The nicknamed and unofficial class of dropship had been, officially, retrieved from the outer rim. In actual fact
they were a homebrew design, one of Mirannon’s pet ideas ‑ virtually nothing but a heatshield, a few engines, a
central control pod and the largest shield generators he could find. Ultra‑minimalist, they were very vulnerable to
interception, a known weakness, but they meant Black Prince could drop a full armoured legion from geosynch
orbit in under twenty minutes, hours faster than most.
Loading for antiship meant piling on infantry and light vehicles‑ speeder bikes, AT‑RT and AT‑PT walkers ‑ and
going for the boarding action. That would be last of all. First things first.
If it was a Venator, best not to send the fighters after it. Thirty‑five squadrons would take some beating, and the
best way to do it was kill them before they got into the air ‑ hit the ship’s flight bays with heavy turbolaser fire.
‘Iota, Kappa, finish that –40, Mu cover.’ Lennart ordered. ‘Flight control ‑ watch that furball. If the rebels break
out, detach fighter elements to contain. Tell the rest of the group to clear our alpha arc and await orders.’
They obeyed promptly ‑ small wonder. Black Prince had been at battle stations long since, now all they were
waiting for was the enemy. Then ‑
‘Emergence, ten seconds.’ The sensors highlighted the emergence point, Lennart gave a final helm order; space
began to bend slightly, the flash of re‑entry. The enemy was with them.

The Rebel Alliance light star destroyer Kestrel had actually started life as two Recusants, and bits and pieces from
a third, the remains of one of thousands of barely recorded outer rim and expansion regions clashes, another note
from the constant background rumble of the clone wars. Real military victory was dangerous and expensive,
scoring propaganda points was worth the risk, but the most efficient use of the Alliance’s fleet assets was to
attempt to obtain more fleet assets.
On their most recent outer rim tour Black Prince had netted a healthy score of Rebel grave‑robbers, pillaging the
wreckage left over from the galaxy’s last major war.
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ships the Starfleet actually had without worrying about the ones they and their enemies used to have. So much of
the flotsam and jetsam remained, unmarked by anyone except the local patrol squadrons ‑ which were
themselves, witness the pair of Nebulons, in an easy enough position to be jumped by or defect to the rebels to
form another fertile source of fleet assets.

‘Main battery, one ripple volley, I want shield depletion. Fighter wing, that’s your target. Hit power trunking, hit
control nodes.’ Lennart highlighted them on the sensor image as he spoke. He knew Recusants very well indeed.
Kestrel had emerged on alert, her fighters out of their faired‑on bays but inside the open casing of the long, lean
destroyer, shields and jammers up, her two huge bow cannon primed and ready.
Black Prince’s gunners beat her to the draw. Some of the turrets fired together, some quad by quad, Port‑4 fired
rapid sequential barrel by barrel, each shot aimed at the ripples and fluctuations the last raised, forcing it to burn
energy stabilising itself, draining out ‑ Kestrel lost ninety percent of her shield energy in the first salvo.
The return fire, a splatter of smaller heavy and medium turbolasers, splashed all over the ship, mostly accurate ‑
the two superheavies spat bright scarlet tracer, one hitting forward of the superstructure, one on the shields of
the bridge tower. She was going for the cheap kill, aiming for the command centre.
For the thousand‑and‑oddth time Lennart wondered if he could get away with sawing the bridge tower off entirely
and moving command to somewhere better armoured and less obvious a target, and where to put the ship’s
offices if he did.
‘LTLs, hit the secondaries; main guns check fire, be ready to retarget on the second. Obral, the plan is to let the
wing pick this one apart, coordinate your LTL fire with flight ops accordingly. Your next major target is due…’

The second heavy support ship of the distant escort, Penthesilea, had a captain whose sixth sense was in full
working order; either that or her com systems were far more advanced than the Imperials expected.
Understandable ‑ those ships had been the pride of the republic fleet once.
She delayed her exit, overrunning the intended drop point and flashing back into bradyonic space close to the
planet; an old and much patched Venator, painted mainly blue and white. Immediately she began to turn hard to
bear, exposing her upper surface and main battery to the Imperator.
‘Good. I might actually have something to do.’ Lennart said.
Most of the bridge crew knew what he meant. Ntevi asked. ‘Captain? What about the frigates?’

‘Marginalia. EW, eighty‑five offensive, sixty‑‘ designating the Venator as prime target, ‘twenty‑five.’ On the
Kestrel. Lennart was speaking in percentages of antenna and antenna‑analogue resources and processing power.
It was a very aggressive split.
‘Gunnery, main battery, port‑4.’ Lennart said, informing the respective layers of gunnery command that he was
giving an order directly to a subcomponent. ‘Aldrem; I want a flak burst straddle around Penthesilea. She’s close
to the planet, I don’t trust anyone else to cut it that finely.’
‘Aye, aye, Sir.’ Aldrem said, signalling for it to be set up‑ handwaving and pointing at Fendon’s board, and failing
to think of any banter.
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Penthesilea opened with a slightly staggered torpedo volley ‑ at Comarre. Surprising, but sensible under the
circumstances. If that ship had anything like its complement, then any Imperial fighter threat would be so heavily
outnumbered as to be a non‑event.
The attack on Kestrel would be beaten back ‑ was really almost a breathing space. Kill the smaller Imperial ship,
and it reduced to a two‑body tactical problem, how to keep Black Prince busy while the rest made their escape.
Sensible, logical, decisive, and quickly thought out. Lennart approved. Of course, it depended on a Venator being
able to stand up to an Imperator for a tactically useful period of time.
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  2007­06­03 10:33am

Ch 18

Kestrel began to loose her fighter complement; the base Recusant never had such a thing, but the endo‑and‑exo‑
skeletal structure made them easily refittable.
There had been something of a cornered‑rat effect after the official end of the war as the Confederation Remnants
threw away the standard unified template and started modifying. Perhaps, somewhere back in the initial design,
that had been the idea; once the confederation had won its independence, a series of plug‑in modules under the
outer shell to enhance and vary their abilities, fit them for the many duties that came the way of a galactic
That hadn’t happened, and the confederation remnants had done everything possible to fight a delaying action,
try to make themselves expensive enough for the new Empire to conquer that some kind of peace deal became
possible. It seldom had.
Many and various things had been done to Recusant hulls in that strange war after the war, and the Rebellion had
inherited the ideas as it had inherited some of the pieces.
Kestrel, amongst her other modifications, carried eight fighter squadrons. One of R‑22 Spearheads, said to be a
botched mass‑market clone of the Aethersprite and also the base development model for the newer, faster rebel
Two squadrons of X‑wings and three squadrons of Y, so far so predictable, and two of Clone Wars relics, ARC‑
170s and more Gauntlets.
‘Dreck.’ Aron said. ‘We hit the turret fighters in pairs, two on one, one after the other.’
‘Can we hit one of them with ion cannon? I’d like to take a Gauntlet home to play with.’ Franjia said, half serious.
‘Kriff, no. No more rebel fighters, no more flight testing, bloody ever.’
‘Optimist…Alpha One, Epsilon Five. Reb warhead pointers swinging towards you.’
Olleyri stifled a ‘No shit’ as his own threat receivers started howling at him. How egotistical was an officer of his
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‘Everyone else, cover us. Don’t waste time shooting torps, hit their concussions, then break and attack.’

The four Defenders fired torpedoes blind at the rebel fighter swarm, extreme sensitivity dialled into their fusing ‑
Olleyri wanted them to detonate as they passed the wave of rebel missiles that would surely come their way, and
make holes big enough for a Defender to slip through. Hopefully.
The Spearheads actually carried concussions, the rest torpedoes; they and the Y‑wings fired at Alpha Lead flight.
Six concussions and eighteen torpedoes each; somebody really didn’t like them. Either that or they had lost the
Olleyri spared half a second for sober analysis ‑ the rebs had just pretty much guaranteed that they would lose
the opening moves of the fighter battle, by overconcentrating on one element of the formation; good. It happened
to be him; bad.

The fighter wing commander was next in line ‑ the bomb and attack/multirole wing commanders flew desks. ‘Beta
One, you have tactical control until we shake this lot.’ He backflipped the Defender and his flight followed, racing
away from the torpedoes ‑ they could outrun proton torps, although only by a hair, they couldn’t beat a
concussion. Until? If.
The rest of the Alliance fighters held their fire, for whatever reason ‑ wanting to save the heads for a ship target,
somebody had been too good at warning them against shooting off expensive ordnance ‑ well, that was unlikely
in view of their resort to overkill. More likely, they simply didn’t believe it was necessary. The Alliance had its
arrogances, too ‑ chiefly that of their fighter pilots.
Especially after Yavin, the Alliance Starfighter Corps was very much the tail that wagged the dewback. They
believed themselves easily capable of taking on four, five to one odds ‑ and against garrison units, it might have
been possible.
They probably picked on the Defenders because they were the most dangerous; knock off the elite, and the rest
would be murder as usual. That seemed to be the theory.
The Alliance formation shook out into a spearhead; backwards, slower Y‑wings leading, X‑wings and R‑22s
behind and on the flanks, Gauntlets and –170s at the rear, covering. The Imperial formation changed shape to
meet them, reaching out to engulf; the unshielded fighters going wide, Interceptors and Ravagers, the Avengers
and Starwings and Hunters fanning out into a loose bowl formation to meet and flank the rebel lead element. In
the rear of the formation, STRs sheltered behind the ATRs and assault shuttles.
The Alliance fighter leader realised he had misestimated his opponent just too late to do anything about it. It was
difficult to give any fire order to most rebel squadrons other than fire‑at‑will; sure, they went on about how Yavin
had been won with dedication and discipline and Republican military virtue, but those were central command
forces, close enough under authority’s eye to actually be disciplined. Most rebel line and defence squadrons were
guerrillas at heart.
They opened fire raggedly, and early.

The Imperial fighter force went on to individual routines; the break‑and‑attack order meant that at this stage they
would keep rough formation, open out for individual jinking room, and each pilot pick their target and open fire
when they thought they had a shot.
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protection was to shoot back, make them evade, throw their targeting off.
A wall of green and a wall of red light seemed to hit head on and detonate; in fact, that was the torpedo
explosions in the middle. Some of them got hit in passing, most flew on chasing Alpha Lead.
The Rebels lost more heavily in the first pass; Avengers against Y‑wings, what else was to be expected? It was
more than just heads taken, it was position gained ‑ the ability to outmanoeuvre the enemy, force them to begin
in evading position, make them flee from you.
So multiple layers, one ready to reinforce the next.

In theory, the X‑wings would have swung in on the tails of the Avengers ‑ but the Avengers just left chaos in their
wake and ploughed into the second wave, leaving the Y‑wings to the Starwing squadrons and calling the fast
flanking Interceptors down on the Rebel turret and flexible‑gun fighters.
Aron was operating under orders; he would personally have preferred a more compact formation than the loose
Starwing pack ‑ he lead A flight through to line up on one of the squadrons of Y‑wings, sent C flight wide to hit
them from the flank, and Franjia’s second flight looped back to cover the rest from the flight of Spearheads she
saw peeling off in their direction.
The Spearheads were moving towards lead flight; she headed them off and caught their attention with a long burst
that she tracked into one ‑ and was amazed to see it start to come apart. She had thought they were tougher than
The three survivors shifted vector towards her ‑ sidestepping in pale imitation of the supreme agility the
Aethersprite was famous for. Not nearly as good.
The bigger Starwings actually covered more distance, both sides were squeezing off shot, one looked almost
determined to kamikaze on Franjia ‑ rolling in tight little circles round her gunsight. She lined up on him, just off
line herself ‑ a shallow curve forcing him to adjust to meet her ‑ expecting a point blank missile shot, she surged
power into her jammers, rolled left and over him, and her own launchers coughed out a single torpedo. Overkill.
Epsilon Seven had faked his out, broke across it and let it overshoot, got killing position and lasered it. Six’s
shields had been chewed but he had nailed his bird too.
They weren’t a patch on dear old Dad, she thought irrelevantly as she pivoted her Starwing on its deflectors, the
flight conforming, and scanned to see if there were any Y‑wings left.

Aron had started by hosing one pair with massed fire ‑ they would share those ‑ but the other six Y‑wings
roughly opposite them broke formation, accelerated outwards to get lateral distance and ideally be able to
crossfire the Starwings. C flight matched their manoeuvre and Aron led lead flight right through the middle. There
was method to the madness. He hoped. If Yatrock managed to blindside them ‑ it was all a matter of timing.
He skidded through in a wild, sweeping bank, taking a pair of laser hits, returning fire on one Y‑wing, forcing it to
break off and burning its shielding out; glance at the scanner, it was just a blizzard. Red and green dots
everywhere. The two formations were thoroughly mixed, and his mental horizon had narrowed to a very small
space around himself. No time to think about the big picture. This was what the Alliance called the manoeuvring
phase, what he called the Mad Scramble.
Epsilon Four had had his shields stripped clean, but only an Ion bolt had gone through; his fighter was limping,
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One of the Y‑wings was down, Two ‑ Gavryls k‑ and Three, Kramaner, had taken hits, but not penetrating, and
then C flight hit them. Two more of the Y‑wings got streamed, long lines of fire chasing them, catching them up
and splashing them in flowers of energy. The rest scattered; he looked for and saw engine vents, passed up three
closer targets for a good position on one further, Kramaner banked round after the closest, him and Four
switching position in the element.
Ahead of him, Aron saw X‑wings starbursting out of the way of Interceptors, and rolling dogfights start to form.
Beyond them, laser and blaster fire crossed as Franjia and her flight took long shots at the approaching Gauntlets.

They were, tactically speaking, screwed. The ARC‑170s had very long barreled guns on pivot mounts, with a crew
member who could devote their whole attention to that; it would have suited them best to hang back and on the
flanks, use their superior weapon control to snipe and interdict.
Now they were going to have to play it backwards, be the element the scattered rest of the Alliance fighters
formed up on. That would make them relatively easy targets.
They didn’t intend to make it easy; the shieldless Four was locked on to, forced to evade radically, the streams of
blaster fire caught up to him ‑ safe ejection, though. Insofar as anyone could be safe in this maelstrom.
B flight were trading lines of fire with the Gauntlets; with their lighter weapons, the numbers worked that a
Starwing would kill a Gauntlet before the Gauntlet could burn through the heavier fighter’s shields ‑ if both could
get a stable shot.
It was the minor footwork, the slight shifting of position of jousting knights. Franjia’s flight were accelerating into
the attack, the Gauntlets would have held back if they could, but they needed to accelerate to meet them.
Alpha B and C flights were heading for them also; part of Franjia’s motivation was to get them before the Avengers
She stabilized on one, dazzled it with active scan, then sideslipped on to its wingmate, level at first then a shallow
curve, pivoting around it while her wingman made electronic noise to cover her. It started to roll out of the way as
its shields frayed; called for help.
She stayed on target as long as safe, rode the kill down then hauled the Starwing’s nose round in a climbing bank,
letting the rebel’s friends try and avenge him, drawing fire away from the rest of the squadron.
Jerking, spasming quad laser fire came from the follow‑up unit of Ravagers, so Aron scattershot at the fleeing Y‑
wing, rode out the poorly‑aimed scatter of ion fire and landed a three round burst that tore the Y‑wing’s
starboard engine off, left the Ys to the Ravagers and ATRs and ordered the rest of the squadron to follow him in
support of B flight.

Further afield, the space around the Rebel light star destroyer Penthesilea exploded in green fire. For all his
sometimes irregularity, Pellor Aldrem managed his turbolasers with the same clear headed precision the physicists
of old devoted to their research accelerators.
He set up four close, hard bursts on the planetward side, tight, brilliant green blooms; four looser billows of flame
to voidward ‑ that was how the tracer looked. He watched closely as the Venator’s shields reacted.
‘Captain, Port‑4. I think that if that thing opens its bay doors, I can drill the shielding with a point salvo, get a
local burnthrough in seven rounds and detonate a flak burst from the eighth inside their hangar bay.’
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time at least.
How were things going to play out now? The initial rebel plan had been for the heavy escort to emerge in open
space and sweep in towards the planet. The Recusant had done that and been depleted. One or two more main
gun salvoes would finish her off; they only had about eight percent of the power output of an Imperator at
baseline. Kestrel looked to have been uprated, but not that far. The main reason he hadn’t fried her was to keep
the rebels in play, he wanted both of them, captured if possible or destroyed if not.
In the Rebels’ shoes, he would back off to medium range, stabilize and recharge as far as possible and use his
ship’s guns to support the fighter wing in a strike on the Imperial star destroyer. That was what they were trying
to do‑ but it wasn’t working. The Rebel fighters had overcommitted, staked everything on a quick victory, lost the
bet, and red blips were falling off the scan picture a lot faster than green blips. Four to one, it seemed.
The furball, the original strike on Comarre‑ the rebel fighters from that would move to support Kestrel’s fighters,
or intercept the bombers Lennart had dispatched to finish the MC‑40, as soon as they cleared away the last of
Comarre’s TIEs.
Which, they were probably just now starting to realize, would be Aldrem’s cue to flak‑burst them.

Similarly, the nearly six wings on the Penthesilea might be better off not launching at all. By prolonging the
engagement with a fighter battle, they increased the time Black Prince had available to pound their mothership
into splinters. The best thing she could do would be to recover the dropships and evacuation transports as fast as
she could and get out. The only circumstance it would make sense to sortie in would be if the Rebels couldn’t
make it out in time, and needed to fight their way clear.
The mothership would have to go onto radical evasion, scattering her fighters along her path, trying to avoid fire
and get them clear ‑ a running fight the heavy defence envelope stood a good chance against anyway.
Politically speaking, mission accomplished. He had drawn the rebels out and proved that Sector was hopelessly
wrong in their estimates, ascribing one frigate to a force that possessed at least two light destroyers. Now the
mission was simply to take heads.
‘Guns, Kestrel; she’ll remain here as long as the Rebel fighters look as if they have a chance. When she starts to
run‑‘ and two superheavy turbolaser bolts splashed into the bridge module’s shields; the viewscreen glowed red
for a second ‑ ‘burn through and take her engines out. And mark my target.’
The Recusant‑class simply could not power their weapons to anything like the same rate of fire as an Imperator.
They depended on the on mount capacitor banks for any kind of burst fire; Lennart had found that the best tactic
was to engage at medium range, burn through the target’s shielding as rapidly as possible on the strength of the
stored power, but feed the superheavies nothing at all from the main reactor‑ follow up with the secondaries, the
smaller heavies and the mediums, and pick off shields and gun mounts from there.
Lennart would have liked to shoot the capacitors off, but there was too much risk; a volley of HTL shot tended to
make a nonsense of most failsafes, and if they ruptured and released, that would break the bow off. Which was
plan B.
Lennart put the pointer on power feed and targeting control.

Penthesilea was manoeuvring slowly. She had no choice but to accept boarding from the dropships which had lost
their parent craft, which meant she would have to open a bay. Some of them had lost sublight engine capability
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Black Prince was keeping up a contemptuously slow fire, lazily posting one turbolaser shot after another into the
Venator’s shielding, knocking down the walls. The smaller, lower bay opened, the one hidden from fire.
‘LTL, gun cluster three, some fire on the dropships please. Make them think we actually are trying to stop them
getting away.’ Not, Lennart noticed, grinning, that it would actually be necessary.
There was a container left drifting in the middle of that lot, one with their own failed hyperdrive core; there was a
rebel tug on route to it. That should prove interesting.
Penthesilea was returning fire as best she could ‑ scared but coping with it, Lennart thought, watching their fire
pattern nearly come apart and be recollected. Splashing shot off the Black Prince, which was coping easily with her
shields semi‑focused on the two attackers.

‘Enemy intentions.’ Lennart said, chiefly to Brenn and Rythanor. ‘How do they expect to get out of this?’
‘Splatter fire all over us, get us to start feeling overconfident‑‘ Brenn began.
‘Which it certainly looks like we are.’ Lennart confirmed.
‘Then switch targets, go for converged sheaf component shots, take out above all else the turret that’s firing flak
bursts, then make a proper battle of it, not just an escape. Try to bury us under five hundred or so fighters.’
‘When do you expect that to happen?’ Lennart asked the navigator.
‘Sir, I’d rather not be specific. I don’t trust the universe’s sense of timing.’
‘Neither do I…’ Lennart replied. ‘Gunnery, turn Port‑3 and ‑4 over to central control and instruct the crews to
move behind bulkhead DF 140, enforce it if necessary. Shields, stand by to reorient ‑ maximum depth over port
battery and tower on my mark.’

Aldrem would, of course, bitch about it, which was fine as long as he didn’t do it loudly enough to count as
disobeying an order. This would be as good a time as any to suddenly sprout proton torpedo tubes, but ideally
not at the price of a prime gun team.
Kestrel was stabilizing out and reinforcing her shield envelope, but the LTL barrage had destroyed all four
mediums that could bear on Black Prince, and burnt out many of her lighter gun mounts.

Her light‑gun focus of fire danced backwards and forwards over Black Prince, shifting aimpoint‑ now here, playing
over the bow to port; jumping to forward of the bridge tower; aft flank, just to search for bare metal; each point of
firefall blocked, shield energy following the incoming, fencing almost, slash and parry with multi‑megaton rapiers.
And riposte. Black Prince carried her weaponry spread out over a wider area than Kestrel; more room and options
to fire back from.
While Kestrel’s lighter weapons were splashing power over one place, all the rest were aiming in return, looking
for the hole in the shielding, the fire window to lob a bolt down. They were finding it too often for the lighter ship.
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She had to perform pickup on the last of the dropships; the time was ripe. Lennart gave the order. ‘Shields,
reorientation, execute. Gunnery, ripple salvo, as the Venator decelerates, execute.’
The Venator’s DBY‑827s were actually more powerful than the Imperator‑II standard cannon; sixteen of them ‑
combined with the two superheavy turbolasers on the Recusant ‑ lashed out in a time on target salvo.
Which would have been a good idea, maybe even worked, if it had actually hit.
Imperator class destroyers were popularly supposed to be clumsy and collision prone; which was true, to a point.
More important was that doctrine stated that in a low‑energy collision like a sideswipe, it was better to take the
hit rather than turn away and possibly unload thousands of petawatts from the ion drive into the other ship. When
their lives depended on it they could move.

Black Prince dipped ‑ autotrack compensating for the ships motion, keeping her own guns on target‑ and rolled,
angling between the two Rebel destroyers, turning it into a full evasive corkscrew.
That was pure showing off. It was the ship control team’s boast that it was only fuel cost that stopped them
outmanoeuvring most of their own fighters; exaggeration on their part, mostly. They could outrun many things in
a straight line, but they were average dogfighters. Perhaps a little better than that, but being a stable gun platform
had been more important.
Black Prince rolled and twisted through the sky‑burning blasts, took three hits from the closer Kestrel, burnt into
but not through the shielding, four from the faster‑firing Penthesilea; insignificant.
Then she rolled out into level flight, slowed to a steady thousand gravities, weaving gently, and returned fire in

The Rebel Venator’s captain must have realized that Black Prince was simply shaping the battlefield, firing well
below her maximum potential. He must have been prepared for heavy return fire; his ship dipped and accelerated,
making herself a crossing target, rolling to present the battery to bear as she ran up to hyperspace insertion.
There was probably a fair bit of praying, religious or not, to Destiny, Karma, the Galactic Spirit, the Force,
whichever, that their shields would last. Lennart thought they would ‑ up to a point.
The heavy turbolaser bolts from Black Prince cleaved into and pounded the smaller destroyer.
‘Gunnery, send Port‑ 3 and 4 crews back to station, return the turrets to local control.’ Lennart remembered to

Penthesilea was emptying her power banks and redlining her reactor, reinforcing her shielding and overdriving the
heat dissipators to survive the lash. The rebel captain probably had been intending to conduct a mass fighter
strike on the Imperial ship, if possible.
Only if the objective strike had been able to take out their flak‑firing main turret, which it hadn’t.
Now, they would be thinking, the battered Imperial had left it too late ‑ an old, tired ship with an old, tired
captain. Counterattack and a clear flight out would not now be possible, but a mad scramble could still succeed.
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Gunnery remembered the orders they had been given. Lennart had his mouth open to say ‘execute’ when they did
it for him anyway. The four starboard turrets paused, twisted, reoriented on the Kestrel.
Disable her engines, he had said. Being themselves, Gunnery had opted to translate that as ‘obliterate’. Better to
make a clean, sharp break than leave a half‑ done job.
Starboard battery bore; medium‑power calculated fire to burn clear the shielding, followed rapidly by higher
powered shot to blast through the hull.

The engine bells were one of the toughest parts of the ship; gun barrels, engines, reactor casing. Logic suggested
the most resistant material for the most demanding job; and so it was. Armour gave some structural strength, but
for its main purpose would be needed rarely ‑ if the vessel happened to be unlucky, once. A ship had to be
protected from her own energy processes every moment of her life. To disable a ship, oblique shots at the ion
engine venturii were actually a pretty good option.
The spaced single shots arced in, smashing thrusters off their mountings, cleaving away fins, tearing apart the aft
structure through transmitted shock. Kestrel ceased to accelerate. She was trapped.

Penthesilea survived the attentions of Black Prince’s gunners long enough to make the entry to hyperspace.
Mirannon, in Main Machinery‑1, had one of his holobenches replaying the same main tactical sensor picture
Lennart was looking at. He watched with interest, ordered the hyperdrive cores raised a priority level on the power
allocation board; they might have to go in chase ‑ this was going to be embarrassing if it didn’t go to plan.
Not that it hadn’t been done with skill; just that Mirannon was an improviser. He wasn’t really happy unless he was
doing something far enough out, risky and edgy enough that there was a real chance it wouldn’t work.
The hyperspace mine he had improvised from their own failed motivator did not let him down.
The Rebel destroyer appeared as a brief blur on long range scan; that seemed to invert itself, twist, distend ‑ just
as he thought it was going to break up completely, and what a very interesting explosion it would make, it flashed
again and thudded back into realspace, twisted‑looking.
‘Captain, take that ship in‑‘ quick glance at the sensor picture, ‘‑no more pieces than it is already, and make their
chief engineer a job offer. They did well managing that.’
‘Unlikely, considering what I want now is to disable their power grid. Where’s the aimpoint for that?’ Lennart
‘The distribution complex is just aft of the main reactor ‑ there.’ He marked it on the target‑image of the Venator.
‘If you’re thinking disable and capture, a better target ‑ more easily repaired afterwards ‑ is the computer core.’
Lennart shook his head. Mirannon couldn’t see it, but the tone was enough. ‘Intel reasons.’
The Imperators had a central memory core and processing complex that were powerful, but not the be‑all and
end‑all; enough to override a rogue or damaged local system or processing node, but the ship could function
without them, once the security measures were satisfied. The Venator class were more centralized than that. The
ship could be paralysed by a few hits to the bridge tower but workarounds could be made, local control systems
existed. A brain‑shot Venator could function, uncoordinatedly; she would lose datalinking between sensors,
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‘Gunnery,’ Lennart ordered, ‘component strike.’ Handing over the target image with Mirannon’s power system
highlights. Black Prince rolled to present ‑ gunnery making the formal request to Helm ‑ and the guns lashed out.
Bolts drilling through the depleted shielding and crunching their way into Penthesilea’s belly, breaking structures
aside until main power distribution was exposed, hammered; it fused and melted, the engines went out, most of
the ship’s lights did the same.
‘Gunnery, Main Battery, Port‑4; do you realize why I ordered you out of your turret?’ Lennart asked his scalpel
‘Yes, Sir ‑ but half of us would have preferred to take our chances; the other half were hoping it would get blown
up, we still haven’t got it fully clean after Port‑2 crew’s standing watches ‑ what’s the job?’ Aldrem asked quickly,
before the captain could take offence at wasted time.
‘Remind me never to transfer you to ship maintenance. Do you think you can hit Penthesilea’s bay doors precisely
enough to jam or melt them shut, rather than blow them open?’ The Captain asked them.
‘Yes, Captain, I can.’ Aldrem said, almost managing to sound confident. As if flak bursts weren’t bad enough.
‘Provided you’re prepared to sign off for the damage we do to the gun barrels.’

Fendon was already setting it up ‑ not believing it, but doing it anyway. A turbolaser fired a particle beam, in
much the same way that a transatmospheric shuttle was descended from a man’s dream of flying like the birds.
Twenty‑five thousand years of evolving countermeasures, the race between defence and attack, had changed and
complicated them immensely.
Aldrem wanted a continuous beam, a superlaser effect from a single barrel; continuous containment and the
feedback loops it would generate had been known to melt gun tubes from the inside out before this.
At least they had a clear target, albeit tumbling slightly.
Listening carefully to the monitor system, he squeezed the trigger slowly, allowing the beam to build up, looking
for the sweet spot ‑ and tracking the beam towards the Venator’s bay doors.
On board Penthesilea, they would be frantic, crossconnecting every capacitor bank they could think of to try to get
enough power together to get the fighter complement out. It was their last chance of putting up a fight.
The beam seemed to undulate into the joint. Intensity spikes ‑ sudden flares in the beam; blotches of tracer
compound; a stitched line of molten hull wandering across the joint line of the bay doors.
Aldrem could smell burning metal. Pure synaesthesia, but ‑ ‘Shut down and purge A‑1, give me A‑2 and prep A‑
3.’ It seemed to be working. If they didn’t manage to melt their own turret in the process.

‘Captain?’ Rythanor ‑ Gun s‑ com’d to the bridge. ‘What would you do if you didn’t have a crew prepared to
attempt the impossible?’
‘Oh, we’d just have to resort to the merely possible, and blow them both to bits.’ Lennart said, flippantly.
‘Speaking of which, I expect to need long range anti‑fighter fire in a moment.’
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them covering Penthesilea. Good, one less worry for the dropships.

The surviving Rebel frigate was no longer doing such a good job of surviving. Two squadrons of TIE bombers had
rippled long‑range proton fire at it; it was essentially dead, main mass half‑molten and tumbling in a cloud of
blown off fragments.
The strike was returning to Black Prince, pursued by elements of the fighter swarm that had attacked Comarre
Meridian; the rest still busy chasing Comarre’s fighters.
Comarre herself had been hit by three of Penthesilea’s torpedoes, and was in little better state ‑ not far off
Right, Lennart thought. Area clearance. Neither of those rebel ships is going anywhere. Kill the Rebel fighters ‑
and the smaller rebel ships, although one of the Nebulons had already run for it, and what’s that?

‘That’ was a Defender. Alpha Lead flight had managed to outrun the torpedoes, turned to jam and shoot at the
concussions, and left one ejected, one crippled and limping back to the fight bay, and one, with a massive vector
and only one objective vaguely close to it, charging head on at sixty Rebel fighters.
Lennart cut in the flight control channels; at least one controller was screaming at the berserk fighter, but the only
response was a wild yell of ‘Banmotherfuckenzai!!’ Strange; Alpha‑2’s blip, sounded like Olleyri’s voice.
He would have to deal with that later.

The bulk of the Strike Wing was now in the happy situation of chasing a beaten enemy. Epsilon had beaten Delta
to it, got in amongst and started culling the ARC‑170s; the Gauntlets had been left to the following force of
Assault Transports and Shuttles.
Four twin guns on twelve times the power output ‑ or four light turbolasers on fifty times ‑ outclassed twin
medium lasers easily.
Eleven had punched out; he had caught and held the attention of three –170s, they coned him‑ Franjia and Aron
got one each, but the third finished him. Blasters had chewed his fighter apart slowly enough that he had a chance
to get out. Maybe. The rest of the Alliance fighters scattered, fighting individual duels or being chased down.
Flight control asked him to report status.
‘Ten flying, I need two SAR; good condition, ninety percent ordnance. Where do you want us?’
‘Defence suppression strikes on Penthesilea, then dropship escort.’ Flight Command replied.

‘The fleet’s getting its money’s worth out of us today.’ Nine, Yatrock, commented.
‘You mean you wouldn’t pay to be allowed to do this?’ Aron bounced back.
‘Defence suppression, I’d gladly pay to be allowed not to do. Not an option, is it? Gamma and Delta are forming
up on us.’ Franjia said.
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were hunting the scattered rebels.

‘I know some crack units have kept up a twelve to one ratio‑ but not all at once.’ Kramaner said. He was not a
centimeter out of position on Aron’s right wing.
‘They probably won’t be able to get that many into the air.’ Franjia said, watching the thin, splotched green line
scribbling in the hull of the Venator. ‘Probably.’
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­06­27 10:55am

Ch 19

‘Almost a shame.’ Lennart said, looking at the crippled and drifting Kestrel. ‘I have fond memories of those things;
I’d have liked to bring her in in one piece. LTLs, switch target to Penthesilea, target the hatches.’
‘Aye, aye, sir ‑ fond memories? How long did you spend shooting at them?’ Wathavrah said in return.
‘My last job before I came back to this ship was at the Raithal Academy; I was part of the Black Flag OPFOR, two
years in charge of a Recusant teaching humility to snot‑nosed cadets.
'I wouldn’t mind keeping one as a personal yacht ‑ there’s enough waste space. We could collapse one down far
enough to fit in the hangar bay.’
‘You want us to start trimming it to size?’ Wathavrah asked, joking.
‘No, this one’s a fluke; normally you wait ages for a Recusant and then four come along at once…’ Then, tone of
voice changing to indicate it was an actual order, ‘put starboard battery on sky sweep in case there are any other
surprises. LTLs, support Port‑4, then stand by to assist defence suppression, all that can bear on Penthesilea, the
rest on Kestrel.’

The other two squadrons of the Bomb Wing were in open order and weaving; the rebels were a wide selection of
types, and they were tired. Attacking the Bombers would be their third clash of the day.
Some were fighting mad, some were too tired to think clearly about running away, and most were simply trying to
do their duty.
Zeta squadron, riding the rare batch‑IIa shielded version of the Interceptor, were covering as best they could; even
a thousand ‘g’ advantage ‑ which they had over some of the slower‑accelerating Rebels ‑ wouldn’t allow them to
be in two places at once.
Being in one place after another very quickly, that they could do. It wasn’t enough. Then a maniacal black
thunderbolt plunged into the middle of them.

Olleyri and his wingman had both survived the few of the missile swarm that managed to catch them, but the
Group Captain’s bird had taken four hits, two of which had been meant for his adjutant. One of which he had
intended to. His fighter wasn’t destroyed, but it was too badly damaged to take into a fight. Quattiera’s was
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It was Alpha 2’s fighter, but it was a middle aged, mid‑life crisis suffering pilot in the cockpit. By the usual
standards, Antar Olleyri was close to passing from ‘venerable’ into ‘senile old fart’ territory. Part of him was
furious that they had tried a cheap trick like burying him under a barrage of missiles, part of him blazing mad at
missing out on a fight.
He had shot four missiles, ridden two out, realized he had shield energy left and moved into the path of one
intended for Quattiera ‑ and been blindsided by the fourth. It was a miracle the engines hadn’t come apart, and a
tiny bit was terrified at his own mistake. Basically, he was getting too old for this. So, if he was going to hang up
his hamster helmet, retire alive or retire dead he was going to go out with a bang.
The rebels switched target from the bombers to him; he danced and twisted through the fire they sent his way
until it looked as if his Defender was unrolling a red carpet behind it. He had not lost his common sense; he had
thrown it away, but his tactical judgement was unimpaired.
He flew a wild, jagged, zig‑zagging path towards the gaggle of Alliance fighters, and took three of them out
before as much as firing a shot. One Z‑95 wandered across a Y‑wing’s focus of fire and was shredded; a Gauntlet
and a T‑wing sideswiped each other ‑ smashing the Gauntlet’s cockpit open and ripping two thruster pods off the
T‑wing. His first touch of the trigger was on the Y‑wing whose pilot was still half in shock, seeing a friendly
fighter explode under his guns. Olleyri’s first salvo hit together and incinerated him.
He dropped into a less radical weave, held down his finger on the trigger and used the deflection controls to hose
the focus of fire across the rebel swarm, barely aimed ‑ enough to make some of them flinch.
Closest approach, and he plunged straight through the rebel formation, rolling round a –95 that tried to ram him,
catching an X‑wing in the tail flare of his thrusters and he got a brief glimpse of the R2 unit melting ‑ there was
no method at all to the madness, just taking it as far as it went.
This is the sort of thing that young fighter pilots dream of being able to do, the three brain cells not directly
committed thought. The sort of stunt that appears ‑ and belongs ‑ firmly on holovid. The sort of thing most of
the Rebels actually thought was possible to get away with.
He had too much speed to dogfight; all he could do was to strafe his way through them ‑ giving and taking hits as
he went; the local force craft, what were left of them, threw out enough blaster fire to catch something moving
even as fast as he was, so they were his main targets in return.
Yaw, drift sideways, force himself to wait for the target pointer to light up, full six‑gun blast‑detonation. Got it.
Out of short range leaving a shattered formation in his wake, turn, spray fire at them and thrust back towards
them for a second pass over the scattering cloud of Alliance fighters.
The Interceptors followed in his wake, turning to counterattack; the TIE Bombers accelerated away under their
cover to join the rest of the bomb wing moving in on Penthesilea.

Gamma, Delta and Epsilon squadrons were approaching in a compact stream; doctrine. Finger‑fours or TIE‑v
formations at long range, for combat against intercepting fighters, then break to surround and englobe, for a
surface and harassment profile. All of them nervously waiting for a swarm of Alliance fighters to boil out of the
battered hull, delayed only by probably the longest‑distance welding job in galactic history.
‘Lead,’ Franja said, formally, ‘in that position, what would you do?’
‘Curse whoever was stupid enough to come up with that in the first place.’ Aron replied. ‘Blow the “cat flap” open,
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‘Ten seconds?’ She asked.

‘Fifteen.’ He said, and waited. ‘The backflash if it doesn’t work‑‘

There was a thermal bloom on the surface of the smaller set of doors. Torpedo hits. Two ‑ no, three centrepoints,
and the door remained closed ‑ glowing slightly, though.
‘Somebody just made themselves an ace in the Imperial Starfighter Corps.’ Epsilon 3 commented.
‘Jealous?’ Franjia said.
‘Kriff yes. How many people have over four hundred kills?’
‘A handful from the Clone Wars, not many more recent ‑ when you’re fighting against numbers that large,
someone’s bound to be lucky enough to rack up that kind of score before the odds catch up with her.’ Franjia
There was a strange click on the comnet; she guessed Aron had been about to call her on that, then decided he
might be tempting fate.
He waited a second and said ‘If they had any sense setting that up, most of them would have been in the bays.
They would be shielded well enough to take that.’
‘So it’s probably only the trigger‑man who got a face full of proton torpedo.’ Franjia said.

He had, but was not alone. The hangar was still littered with the scooped‑up dropships, many of them now
broken and burning; bay shields had been lost on some of the squadron launch slots ‑ some had had their
independent‑backup power systems drained to try to power the motors to open the door, and the fighters there
were broken too.
The survivors started to filter out into the main central chamber, and line up on the hatch to finish the job with
lasers. Magnetic shielding had been deactivated ‑ had been shot out, more than anything else ‑ there were no
more ricochets.
Gamma, Delta and Epsilon waited for them to emerge, flying lazy, wriggling patterns to keep energy and waste
time, drawing off what little energy the turrets had in their capacitor banks and take out the turrets that showed
any effective resistance. Watched the gap develop ‑ then turn in towards it.

The lead Rebel fighter element knew it was going to be ambushed. A forlorn hope was the best description; they
planned to move out of the narrow, deadly space fast enough to get some through and starburst from there, keep
the Imperial fighters occupied and buy time for the rest to exit after them.
The squadron that came burning out of the shredded hatch were Eta‑2s. They had been the backbone of the
Republic’s defence against the hordes of droid fighters ‑ but kilo for kilo and credit for credit, they were less
effective than their descendant the TIE Fighter.
As they started to show the three Imperial squadrons rounded on them, hosed the hatch area with fire.
Three Actis blew apart; another crumbled, and the fighter behind it flew into the wreckage; two wasted time
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Too few for head to head, they meant to break past and strafe round, get into a position where they could score
easy kills on the Imperials if they didn’t turn to do something about it, break up the imperial formation.
B‑flight Gamma broke off to deal with them ‑ the rest remained on mission, splattering shot at the slowly
spinning Venator, waiting for more Rebels to emerge.
Gamma’s Hunters were interestingly odd; the dominant theory was that they were the result of business warfare,
an attempt to regain Sienar’s lost monopoly by fulfilling the same need as the Starwing.
The fact that Cygnus was part owned by Sienar didn’t necessarily invalidate that; there had been near civil war
between arms of the same company before. In fact, they didn’t fill the need. The Hunter suffered from the usual
poor TIE ergonomics ‑ originally designed for Jedi and Clones, neither of which were very susceptible to physical
discomfort or inclined to complain, and in the final analysis expendable anyway, small wonder that comfort had
been sacrificed for performance. That made them unsuitable for the long duration patrol role, even if their
navigation systems or their sensors
had been up to it.
Their warhead load was only a half in the later marks, a quarter in the earlier, of the Starwing’s; fighter, bomber,
recon ‑ one out of three wasn’t enough. Some sector fleets used them, most did not.
Black Prince tended to deploy them as close‑in escort for the bombers, the role they were fulfilling now.

In armament and agility, they were a pretty close match for the Actis. One of the Rebel fighters died quickly;
shocked by the losses they had taken, he hesitated for a moment too long. One of them tracked a rapid burst of
light laser fire across a Hunter which made the mistake of going long to evade ‑ the Actis caught it and burnt the
shields off, exploded the Hunter. The rebel was still looking for a new target when Franjia pulled a barrel roll,
yawed out of it at the top of the roll and splashed the lightly built Actis. Couldn’t let the lights have all the fun.
The rebels had enough sense to realize they were entering a shooting gallery; the next unit to run the gauntlet
were X‑wings. They sprayed fire out of the hole in the hatch before thrusting their way out, scattering fast. Seven
of them made it out, and C flights of Delta and Epsilon peeled off after them.
It broke down into open order after that, and a herd of Actis, Nimbus, Spearhead and A‑wing interceptors tried to
push out. There were three collisions ‑ and that was it, because the bay had rolled round to face Black Prince
The flak burst was superbly judged. Lancing through the melee, tracer element showing how the bolt was near to
tumbling, splintering on itself and exploding; the rebels saw it coming, couldn’t move out fast enough. The bolt
cleaved through an A‑wing, passed into the hangar cavity ‑ and burst.

The unsealed points in the main doors gapped, the lower hatch burst open, a cone of green fire shone out of the
secondary bay doors ‑ tainted with volatilization flares as Rebel fighters burnt up and were carried away as
contamination in the plume. The only craft left to launch from Penthesilea were escape pods. She couldn’t send
power to the guns. Her on‑mount power systems were drained. There was no fighter screen left to deploy; as a
ship to ship battle, it was over.
‘Epsilon, this is Flight Control. Disable, repeat disable, Penthesilea’s torpedo launchers.’ The last way they had to
inflict harm on the Empire ‑ let themselves be boarded and blow up the ship, take as many of the Legion as
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Mirannon’s lilypads quite literally flatpacked away, control towers mating through unfolding shield/descent
platform discs to thruster modules to form the flight article, dismantling for storage ‑ the destroyer could drop an
entire armoured regiment in one lift, the complete Legion in four, with far more and heavier close air support
thanks to the elimination of the waste space normal dropships would have taken up. They had left the heavy
armour behind; each disc carried a mere four platoons of infantry, well below their normal weight‑lifting
capability, so they moved uncharacteristically quickly.
The easiest way to disable the launchers without setting any of the ordnance off was to burn out the control
station. By the time the Alliance fighters realized what was afoot, it was too late.
Penthesilea was close to the standard Venator configuration ‑ no unpleasant surprises like moving the tubes ten
metres aft.

Aron looked round; Ten was in trouble ‑ X‑wing close on his tail, both of them twisting wildly, rolling round each
other; Yatrock was lining up on another X‑wing. Ten had moved in to brush the second X off his element leader,
and it had gone for him instead.
Some pilots would have broken off to go to help their squadronmate; Aron was lining up his shot. He hammered
the Rebel with active sensor pulses, enough to half‑blind him and alert anyone with no target of their own.
Gavrylsk curved away after the X‑wing; he was converging on the same target as his flight ‑ and squadron ‑
leader anyway.
This sort of melee was either a paradise or a nightmare, and which it was varied sometimes from one second to
the next. Nobody had time to think or focus; one could be blindsided from anywhere by anyone, or on the other
side of the scales find targets that easily.
Epsilon Three snapshot at the threatening X‑wing, blowing an engine off, sending it tumbling away into the void.
He knew better than to try to ride a kill down in this maelstrom; break off, go into radical dodge on general
principles, look for someone who was stupid enough to do that.
Aron was lined up on one set of control chambers, Franjia on the other; a high power rapid ripple to do any
damage to capital ship armour ‑ actually, with the tensors failing, on emergency power at best, spalling and
concussion would probably wipe out the crew and wreck the electronics without needing a clean burnthrough.
They had to hit opposite sides of the ship’s bow, had to keep enough vector on to avoid being too easy a target; it
would take more than one pass ‑ so they overflew the ship and swapped targets, pivoting end for end, drifting
backwards and firing at a receding target.
Aron was good at it, Franjia slightly better ‑ but they had started on each other’s targets. Franjia caught a glimpse
of Epsilon‑Six chasing a Spearhead off her tail, drifted over to cover him ‑ deflectors tracking the bolt stream on
target; the spearhead broke away, and she wished for an extra hand to work the gun deflector‑targeters with.

Close scan; the ship’s jammers were silent and the hull broken down far enough that the Starwing’s scanners
could get a good look inside. They showed ruptured power cells, a sort of fog of splinters, powdered circuitry and
red mist in the chamber. Score one for secondary damage effects. Further aft, the pods started to jettison. Most of
them would steer for the planet. Flight control ordered them ionized, if possible ‑ they would be easier to scoop
up if they could be grabbed before they made re‑entry and the occupants had a chance to run.

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orders they hadn’t managed to intercept or he had simply lost it. Her ESM picked up the reflections of the X‑
wing’s active lock on the torpedo bay. She snapped the Starwing round towards him; he broke outside her and
slewed round to hold his target ‑ she didn’t think the rebels were ruthless enough for that kind of asset denial,
blow one of their own ships. At least not yet, not that soon, but that was what this one was trying to do.
She spun round after him; ended up almost on his wing. He had ceased acceleration, drifting, launchers tracking
continuously now, about to volley his remaining torpedo load. She yawed and snapshot ‑ hit forward in the long
thin nose, and the view from her cockpit turned entirely red; then an irregular black shape came out of the fireball.
The last thing she remembered was her cockpit transparisteel starting to fracture.

‘That’s it. We have to win.’ Lennart said, looking at the tumbling pieces of the MC‑40 and comparing them with
the human crewed ships.
‘Can you imagine what the future would be like with them in government? Everything endlessly debated, if done at
all done in the cheapest possible way, with ‘can’t do this’ and ‘mustn’t do that’ and ‘too dangerous’ bleated at
every turn ‑ we might as well start painting the stars grey.’
‘Sir, wouldn’t the paint just boil off? I mean…’ Ntevi began. Lennart glared at him.
‘You were intending to report something meaningful before you got sidetracked, weren’t you?’
‘Is the captain the only one allowed to ramble nonsense on the bridge?’ Brenn asked Lennart, not seriously.
‘Of course. Privilege of rank. Well?’
‘Hyperspace is almost clear, Sir. No high energy contacts, enemy or friendly, civil traffic only. There is one
medium‑small trace just orbiting ‑ unidentifiable, but estimate is a rebel observer.’ Ntevi reported.
‘Nav, do you think Commander Mirannon’s got around to inventing a way of actually shooting down a ship in
hyperspace yet?’ Lennart said, only half jokingly.
‘Sir,’ Brenn replied, ‘would it be wrong of me to start praying that he hasn’t?’
‘Not really, no...Ntevi, keep monitoring that.’ Not unexpected, he thought. The rebels now know that this was a
trap on a larger scale than they were expecting, and sending, say, a flight of Starwings to wait ‘under’ it and catch
it as it emerged would neither give away or achieve anything.

‘Yes, Sir ‑ Captain, cancel that, distant bow shock. Petty Officer Cormall?’
Cormall reoriented the hyperspace scanner, followed onto the faint glimmer the ship’s sensors had picked up.
‘Yes, sir…evaluation; medium‑large, probable light destroyer class, on direct line, running very hot. Flank speed
or close to. Too far to be classifiable, estimated arrival ‑ nineteen minutes.’
'We’re not expecting further reinforcements, are we, Captain?’ Rythanor asked him.
‘If we are, I don’t want them.’ Lennart said. ‘Get me a type on that ship as soon as you can.’

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troops the rebels had on that thing would have been billeted near the drop bays.
‘Captain, I have an ID. It’s the Dynamic.’
Lennart retrieved the message pad Aleph‑3 had handed him ‑ only, what, under an hour ago? It felt longer, always
did. Checked the message routing. Hmmm.
The fighter battle ‑ battles, really ‑ were going well; what handful of survivors there were from Comarre ‑ it
seemed very long ago ‑ were winning, now. The single Defender was flying as if possessed, scattering rebels
before it, herding them, choosing and swooping on one of them after another, driving them into confusion and
Penthesilea was suppressed and the dropships were about to dock on. That promised to be straightforward
enough; boarding from one of the lilypads was not simple, but it was fast. The rebel escape pods ‑ some of them
had been ionized and caught, some of them would require a surface sweep.
Lennart had not yet made up his own mind about whether the accusation against him was true. That was what it
felt like, a criminal charge. These days it so often was. It might be, he had to concede that much; well, this would
clarify the issue.
Wathavrah counted down to expected emergence; dead on zero, his former exec’s ship, carrying an agent of the
privy council, emerged back into realspace.

Lennart awaited the inevitable storm of temper that should result from open defiance of orders. Mysteriously, it
failed to arrive. All that did was a call from Dynamic Actual.
‘That looks like quite a fight. I’m sorry we got here too late for it.’ Was that a message of support? Probably.
‘If we’d have known you were coming, we’d have saved you a little one.’ Lennart said, dryly. ‘You have a VIP?’
‘We have an operative of the privy council on board.’ Dordd said it with as much inflection as he could reasonably
add. Stress on the ‘operative’. ‘He’s interested in you. Personally.’
‘Hmm. Recognition in high places.’ Lennart said, skeptically. ‘You’re just serving as transport?’
Dordd’s image looked around the bridge, as if checking to see that it was clear. ‘Special Assistant Adannan has
not confided his plans to me, or to any of my command crew.’ Managing to make it clear what he thought of that.
And Adannan.
‘Put your people on alert, but ‑ how good are your gunners?’
‘Benchmark three point two.’ Dordd admitted, with a straight face ‑ but how that must have hurt.
‘Then tell them to hold their fire, weapons free for point defence only. Especially on anything they don’t recognise,
like my drop ships. And relax; you’re too new in command to be realistically blamed.’ Then again, both of them
thought, what was there to guarantee that whoever was doing the blaming had any sense of the realistically
Right now, he was responsible for them but not squarely culpable, and wouldn’t be unless they failed to improve.
In three months’ time, whatever was still wrong would be Dordd’s fault; that was fair enough.
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‘On his way over to you. He has a custom small ship, and likes to arrive unannounced.’
For a brief moment, Lennart seriously thought of a case of ‘mistaken identity’; take the opportunity to blow the
thing into tiny little bits and solve most of his problems in one zap. Only most. Much as he sensed ‑ no, expected
trouble, none of that Jedi gibberish, there would be far too much time for that later ‑ his ship had managed not to
perpetrate any blue on blues so far, politics notwithstanding. It was a clear record he intended to maintain, and
starting with a senior official of his own government was probably bad business from any angle.
That would be something that even he would find hard to explain away afterward. Perhaps if he understood the
situation better, knew who Adannan’s supporters and enemies were, he could make a sensible decision as to
whether it was worth the risk. Given that he didn’t, the only reasonable course seemed to be to play it straight ‑
as far as that remained an option.

The Legion was far understrength, as regarded leg infantry ‑ only eighty platoons, and all but two of them were
deploying to board, sixty‑four on the dropships, fourteen on the dedicated space to space transports and
shuttles. Overstrength, as far as being able to stomp on people’s heads with big metal feet was concerned. The
reception party would consist largely of vehicle crew. The official reception party, anyway.
‘Brenn,’ Lennart turned to his navigator, ‘the chief threat is no longer the rebels; it is now senior officials on our
own side. I’m going to go and deal with that. You have the conn.’
Well, this was the proverbial ‘it’. Lennart watched the peculiar dart‑shaped transport heading towards the bay with
a sinking feeling in the pit of his stomach. OB‑173 never could tell when he was serious and when he was
whistling in the dark.
If Adannan simply was above the law, it would have been easy. He wasn’t; he wielded the power of the law, could
use it to gloss over his misdeeds and land hard on everyone else for theirs. Now it was himself under the
Why do I hate the idea? He asked himself. It’s not as if I didn’t know how bad things can get. The Empire may be
less corrupt and more energetic than the Republic ‑ there’s that ‑ but at some levels, like this Adannan, all that
means is energetic corruption.
I didn’t join to be above the law, I joined up to stand by the law, Lennart thought; and that sounds too damn much
like electioneering for decency.
I was there, kriff it. I know what the Force does to a man, I met far too many Jedi indistinguishable from zombies,
who had sacrificed their personalities on the altar of Detachment. The Force is a curse, not a gift; it sets them
apart and corrodes their ties to the rest of lifekind ‑ that far, at least, Palpatine was right. But is it really only one
extreme or the other; demented by rage or demented by indifference? Is there no middle ground, where it is
possible to be a man, and sane and healthy?
Assuming that’s what I actually am at the moment, he remembered to add to himself.

Adannan’s transport was on final approach now, preferring to land by repulsors reacting off the ship’s own
artificial gravity; the honour guard of stormtroopers came to attention as it settled in the bay. And Mirannon
standing by the environmental control systems just in case it came to that.
The vicious little ship landed, powered down, dropped its ramp; the crew and officers who had turned out to meet
the Privy Council’s agent included some of his inner circle, people Lennart might need later, so he wanted them to
get a good look at what he was up against.
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Lennart would have expected at least two more, more thoroughly hidden. Just behind him was a woman in a dull
black robe, hood pushed back ‑ she looked the exact double of Aleph‑3, and flaunted it. Clearly she was there to
draw a reaction; Lennart controlled his expression carefully, looked closer. Although obviously a clone, not quite
an exact double; they had the differences their experiences had made, and those worried him.
Aleph‑3 was a soldier, she had stress lines, worry lines, one or two well healed scars ‑ but they tended to
disappear, at least fade into the background, when her face was at rest. A troubled mind and a relatively clear
conscience. Her duplicate was a courtier; she had an over‑polished look, and an underlying sly sleekness. Just a
hint of something fouler under the mask, perhaps ‑ a touch of rage and desperation. Why did he send her out
first? Lennart wondered. Reconnaissance by fire? She looked at him, evaluating ‑ he refused to take the bait.
The others of Adannan’s retinue followed, Lennart looked them over, evaluated them and decided to ignore them
for the most part. They were beings, alive and complex, possibly dangerous, probably devious, but important only
as mirrors of their master. In at least two and maybe five cases, that would be their literal master, their owner.
Why would Adannan want to be identified as someone who could not only do that, but flaunt it? Intend to begin by
making a bad impression? Get over yourself, Lennart thought, this isn’t all about me ‑ they’re the ones in chains.
Then the man himself emerged. Six centimeters shorter than the Imperial Starfleet officer, and arrogant. Not
pompous, he was too malevolent for that, and there was nothing understated about it either. He expected those
before him to bow down and worship, and do exactly as they were told. It would be so much easier if they did; it
would save him the effort of coercion.
Despite himself, Lennart was frightened of him. So much for theory, he thought. Time to display some of that
political talent Aleph‑3, currently vibrosabring her way through bulkheads on the Venator, claimed he had.

‘Special Assistant Adannan.’ Lennart greeted him, not saluting. ‘What brings you to Ghorn?’
There were a number of different ways that the dark Jedi could play it. He could be sleekly menacing ‑ looking at
him, Lennart would have expected him to enjoy that. He could be openly aggressive ‑ and Lennart’s contingency
plan for that occasion involved a precise application of thirty‑five hundred simulated ‘g’, if things looked bad
enough that the subsequent consequences could go hang.
He had forfeited any opportunity to be deceptively innocuous, walking around in black robes. Instead, he chose to
ruin Lennart’s plan by doing something completely unexpected. He smiled. There would be a time for threats
later; this was politics. ‘Well done, Captain. You took exactly the action I was expecting of you.’
Lennart took only half a second to work that out. ‘The doctrine is known to history ‑ and most naval academies ‑
as the Greater Order, I believe; when objectives and instructions conflict, go back to first principles.’
‘The first principle of the Imperial Starfleet is obedience to orders.’ Adannan said, and officially he was right.
‘The first order is to fight the enemy.’ Lennart said ‑ virtually proclaimed. ‘Doing nothing would have resulted in
an Alliance propaganda victory‑ and losses and casualties on our side. Proceeding with the ambush as planned
was so obviously the only positive thing to do that even a civilian political advisor managed to realise it.’

Serve and volley; now it was Adannan’s turn to think fast about what exactly Lennart meant. Calling the dark Force
user a mere political advisor was a calculated insult, a bait it would be dangerous to rise to ‑ had Lennart really
intended to be that aggressive as an opening move? Adannan doubted it ‑ but what he was reading from the
Captain was something along the lines of ‘Go on. Admit that you operate outside the law ‑ and give me all the
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Alric Adannan was used to being hated ‑ being able to inspire that in others gave him a warm glow. It was the
proof that he was doing his job properly. Being loathed was just about par for the course, too. He did not take well
to being despised.
‘You seem to misunderstand.’ Adannan said coldly. ‘I am here with the full authority of the council, to bring this
matter‑‘ no need to go into too much detail about exactly which matter‑ ‘to a safe and expedient conclusion. The
eye of the Empire is on you.’
‘I never was much good at amateur dramatics.’ Lennart said, changing tone to genial and absurd ‑ largely to cover
the engineer officer who muttered something about cataract surgery. ‘Centre stage doesn’t suit…’ he turned that
into meaning that the flight bay was not the place for a detailed discussion.
Adannan’s first attempt at that line of argument had failed, but it was still worth pursuing. Force choke him, push
him to the ground, humble him, make him grovel in front of his crew ‑ that was what he wanted to do, but
Lennart was not humble. He would have to be seduced to the dark side, a direct attack would turn into a brawl.
On his own ship, as the appointed champion of forty‑six thousand lesser entities to draw strength from, Lennart
might prove to be a formidable opponent. That could simply make it more fun ‑ and there was no sense relying
on an incompetent acolyte.
There is the distinct possibility that I could lose, Adannan thought. One does not become strong in the dark side
by refusing to confront problems; one does not live long enough to become strong without learning to take every
possible advantage.
Perhaps I can use his strategy against him. Rely upon the masks of officialdom, while I learn him, compromise his
associates, explore his weak points and ripen him for his fall.

‘We still have two boarding actions and the tail end of a fighter battle to deal with.’ Lennart said.
‘I have summoned the system governor, I will convene a command conference in one hour on board this ship.’
Adannan stated.
‘It would be rather unfortunate for him if there were any fighters left, and a stray X‑wing managed to put a proton
torp into his shuttle.’ Lennart pointed out. ‘Is that not a factor?’
‘I do have some knowledge of the situation. A little exposure to risk will do him good.’ Adannan stated, a subject
they could almost agree on. ‘I and my retinue will be occupying the imperial suite.’
Another good reason to get the bridge tower blown off one of these days, Lennart thought. The throne room was
sealed, and should be in good condition ‑ and there was no real way to keep his minions out of the computer
It was stunningly arrogant that he thought he had a right to; stopping him would ‑ first, it would offend him badly
enough to precipitate the crisis they both had been skirting the edge of. Lennart had no real desire to stop him
committing lese‑majeste, at least not unless he actually meant it, and it was too early to be sure.
An honour guard was arranged ‑ three repulsortank crews. A maintenance detail was also arranged ‑ hand signals
to the delegation from the engineering department present ‑ to get there before they did and accomplish any
necessary last minute tidying. Adannan’s transport was moved off the flight lines to a transport maintenance pad
and the parade dispersed. Lennart had one more thing to arrange before returning to the bridge.

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There were peculiar grooves in the ceiling, and faint blue shimmers; a ward, of some kind, with isolation fields
active and bulkheads ready to drop. Air smelt stiflingly odourless, scrubbed out of all character.
What ‑ the last thing that had happened to him had been his fighter starting to break up around him. From there
to a hospital bed, and unless he had been spectacularly lucky, or someone else had on his behalf... He raised his
head, looked around some things both had in common ‑ but the medical officer’s uniforms, the hovering droid
nurses, and the stormtrooper guards were a giveaway. Kriff.
‘You must be M’Lanth.’ Someone said. He looked round and saw a handsome auburn‑haired woman, in the
uniform of an Imperial Starfleet steward.
‘Well,’ he said, ‘I didn’t know putting up a fight qualified me for personal service.’ Then he took in how sharply
she was examining him ‑ which was baffling? Why would an intelligence officer disguise herself as enlisted?
‘You’re half right.’ She said lightly. ‘After today, you’re small fry ‑ possibly not even worth the trouble of asking
questions of. I used to be on your side.’
‘What do you mean?’ he asked.
He had been caught in the collapsing compensator fields of his fighter as he ejected; he had blacked out almost
immediately, and the damage done to him had mostly been put right. He was stiff and sleepy, but that was a lot
better than having no spine. His brain was waking up quickly now.
‘What it sounds like; I was a former intelligence officer of the Rebel Alliance.’
‘Former?’ he said, not quite believing it. Not understanding it, either.
‘Complicated story.’ She said, wondering how closely monitored they were. She was as much being tested here as
he was.
‘You’re a fighter pilot; stunts and tricks, maybe, but lies aren’t really part of your war, are they?’
‘We listen to subcomm Imperial propaganda from time to time when we’re bored and want something to laugh at
‑ we…’ he trailed off.
‘Eight of them survived. They were lucky. How much of a martyr complex do you have?’ She asked him.
‘Who?’ M’Lanth asked. She handed him a datapad. He read it, briefly.
‘They were your people all along, weren’t they. Plants.’ He meant Aron and Franjia.
Jhareylia nodded. ‘Chosen, ordered out and not very good at it, true ‑ how heavily do you hold that against them?
Would you refuse, for instance, a gift from them?’
‘What sort of gift? Lend me an escape shuttle?’ He said, sarcastically.
‘Almost. Why do you think I’m not dead?’ she asked him.
A few highly insulting things occurred to him to say, and he started to open his mouth ‑ then realized where that
would go. He didn’t have all that much of a martyr complex, when it came down to it ‑ but perhaps it would be
better that way, thinking about what else they could do to him.
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She flushed in anger, especially because it was almost true. She was about to hit him with something when she
realized what he was trying to do; the fact that he looked slightly embarrassed saved him.
‘You’re not going to get away that easily. I hated the empire, because of ‑ something ‑ it had done; so I threw
myself into the fight against it ‑ so much so that I almost didn’t notice what the Rebellion was doing for me, or
wasn’t. Maybe it is no better on the Imperial side of the divide, but the Alliance used me. Paid me a credit a day
and got far more than their money’s worth ‑ the satisfaction of fighting the good fight was supposed to be
He knew he was supposed to reply at this point; he decided not to, let her continue.
She did. ‘I wanted revenge; blood for blood…and the Alliance never came even close to it. Eventually, what ‑ what
wasn’t there any more…faded away to a sort of mental amputation.
'I managed a stable doughnut of a life, around a family shaped hole in the center, and I never really stopped to
think, until the Empire did for me what the Alliance couldn’t. From their point of view, they enforced the law. From
mine, long overdue retribution.
'I wasn’t sure who I was supposed to hate any more, other things happened ‑ and here I am.’ That was far from
the whole truth, but it was as much as he needed to know.

‘I was raised an anarchist. As far as that makes any sense at all. I would never side with the empire; could never,
on the empire’s terms.’ M’Lanth said, determinedly.
‘Doesn’t that very much depend on the Empire? Captain Lennart is not a vindictive man; it is his duty to deal with
you as an enemy, but there’s no bile to it, I think he would almost welcome an excuse not to.’
‘Anybody who sides with the forces of evil‑‘
‘The Starfleet outnumbers the Alliance fleet ‑ is it fifty or a hundred to one? We, well you, are the odd ones out ‑
so either most of the galaxy is ‘evil’, or it’s the Alliance that needs to explain its extremism to the rest‑‘ her
comlink beeped. ‘Excuse me.’

The medical instrumentation in the ship’s hospital complex was hardened to survive much worse electronic
disruption than a mere comlink. Enough room to hold six thousand and treat six hundred; in the early days of the
Empire there had been a few hearts and minds tours around the expansion regions and mid‑rim, dispensing
medical aid and establishing infrastructure. Some of the older members of the gun crews had fond memories of
open cast mining by turbolaser, but mainly it was deploying solar power and communication satellites, mineral
surveys and mapping. They always had a heavy emphasis on propaganda value, there were very few of them
ordered these days and usually only for that.
There were a few ill and injured, but mostly it was empty and being prepared to receive prisoners and wounded
stormtroopers. Jhareylia found an empty side ward to answer in. It was the Captain.
‘We have a problem.’ He began, with no preliminaries. ‘I have a particular need for the services of an amateur
commando team.’ He was trusting that she was managing to keep this private, but also that she was up for
whatever it was in the first place.
‘And this problem would be?’ she asked.
In for a millo, in for a megacredit. ‘We’ve been boarded by a very senior imperial official who makes my skin
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‘Most of the bad things you used to believe about the Empire, look at him and you can see them walking and
talking. His entourage ‑ high grade thugs mostly, at least two of them don’t want to be there. Slaves.
'Kidnap them, unchain them, get them talking. I need all the information you can manage to find for me. I’ve no
time to give you much in the way of background, I know that doesn’t make your situation any easier, but who else
am I going to get to make this happen?’
‘Technically, I’m a spacewoman‑recruit‑‘ she began.
‘You think this is remotely legitimate? I know it’s a team job; borrow Port‑4. If they don’t know what’s going on
already via the ship’s grapevine, things are even worse than I thought.’
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Jedi Council Member

  2007­07­04 01:59pm

Ch 20

Brenn had little to do except watch the situation develop and hope that Dynamic did nothing silly. Captain Dordd
had started to move his ship into line abreast, ceased acceleration half way through the manoeuvre, thought about
it, and was moving instead to a support position ‑ behind, ‘beneath’ and inverted with respect to Black Prince.
Sensible and appropriate, but her helm team were manoeuvring the Dynamic as if she was made of eggshells. Her
captain might have known what he was doing, but the crew ‑ never mind, Brenn thought, associate with us long
enough and something’s bound to rub off. Just as long as it isn’t literally.
He called Engineering. ‘Chief? What’s going on down on the flight bay?’
‘You can stand down the bucket and sponge party.’ Mirannon replied. ‘No entrails, at least not yet. Skipper pushed
his luck about as far as it would go, got away with it for the time being ‑ but there’s going to be a round two.’
Brenn thought about that for a moment. ‘How much trouble would you say we were in?’
‘It was a nice, civilised mutual exchange of death threats. I think it’s time to add weapons and combat
programming to the maintenance droids, and start running classes in Spanner‑Fu again.’
‘Run that one by me again? This is an officer of the privy council we’re speaking of, yes? For right or wrong, he has
oversight authority ‑ he is supposed to be on our side. He might not know tactics, but‑‘
‘He’s a Force user.’ Mirannon said it as if it was a synonym for “scum.” ‘Above the law, and beyond rational
argument. I know it’s repeatable but that still doesn’t go far enough to make it respectable. Captain threatened to
meet him head on. We’re stuck with him now, until something unforeseen happens.’
Mirannon had all sorts of biologically incompatible things in mind, but the same problem occurred to him as it
had to Lennart: explaining it afterward. He was still thinking about deniability.

‘We’re equipped to act as a squadron flagship, true, but what does he want?’
‘Look at the logcorder when you have time. Nothing good for us. As long as he follows the regulations, we will
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‘We were overdue something like this.’ Brenn admitted. ‘I still prefer to pay Fortune off on the installment plan,
not in lump sums ‑ oh, yes, the hyperspace mine. I didn’t realise it was capable of doing real damage.’ He
changed the subject to something that he thought might be less worrying.
‘Don’t admit this. Deny all knowledge if asked ‑ but the idea was originally looked at as a security‑driven failure
mode, for hyperdrive motivators on Imperial warships.’ Mirannon told him.
‘What, you mean a boobytrap?’
‘Intended to be remotely triggered to disable fleeing defectors, keep the Starfleet in line. It was never practical;
preparing a motivator to switch into that state already reduces the ship’s hyper performance, in addition to being
glaringly obvious. The only ships that could effectively carry the burden were the ones large enough to have
batallion‑plus stormtrooper complements anyway.’

‘Yes, thinking about them ‑ you work more closely with them; how are they likely to behave under the
circumstances?’ Brenn asked.
‘Their loyalty conditioning defaults to the highest ranking being accessible within the chain of command. That
would be Adannan. Don’t ask me to do anything about that ‑ robots I can fix, not biorobots.’
That was probably unfair to the stormtroopers, but there was historic truth in it. A junior officer ‑ even one fairly
senior on the absolute scale, like, say, a Jedi General ‑ had control over them only as long as a more senior officer,
for instance the Supreme Chancellor, chose to step in, and at that point he could order them to do anything, up to
and including designating their former commander as one of the enemy.
Brenn had always wondered about that. Didn’t it make their heads hurt? A normal human, even an Imperial Army
or Naval trooper, would ‑ all right, could ‑ argue back, try to reach a higher authority yet, stall, fudge, even ignore
Black Prince’s wardroom was not exactly political, but Lennart insisted that they at least keep current with what
was happening in the galaxy. None of them were entirely blinkered, and at least two department commanders
made a hobby of dissecting Imperial propaganda. There had actually been an order to the contrary, forbidding
Imperial officers to listen to or quote from certain sources; Brenn wasn’t certain whether it was Empire‑wide, or
merely some sector governor throwing his weight around, because Lennart had shot the message pad and thrown
the bits away.
It was more damning than anything our enemies could say, that we dare not listen to the truth because it might
destroy our loyalties. Lennart believed, or at least had nailed his colours to the mast by publicly stating that he
believed, that it was perfectly possible for an intelligent, well‑informed being to wholeheartedly support the
It had been rather difficult for even a Vice‑Admiral to openly oppose that point of view. In private cynicism
reigned, as usual ‑ but not for press consumption. Anyway, how many dirty secrets could even a galaxy‑spanning
Empire have? Enough to impose other, similar orders further down the line, anyway.
All right, the depth of stormtrooper conditioning was probably one of them. Navigation picked up all sorts of little
odd jobs related to the ship as a ship rather than a fighting machine, and all sorts of little odd facts came with
Brenn was probably better informed than anybody except the captain, and he still considered himself basically
loyal; but that state of total, and totally transferable, loyalty escaped him. He simply couldn’t comprehend the sort
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‘Brenn, are you all right? You zoned out for a second there.’ Mirannon called.
‘Sorry, just ‑ thinking.’
‘I have the general scan, and we’re cycling down to condition‑2 here.’ Battle alert, not actively engaged. ‘If you
want to send me an inspection scan of Penthesilea and Kestrel, I can start working out detailed repair estimates.’
‘Right, I’ll arrange that; can you give me a rough number now?’ Brenn wondered if they were going to be here ‑ or
alive ‑ long enough for it to matter. Which depended on what Adannan wanted with them.
‘Standard sector fleet deepdock, nearest round number; four months on the Recusant, six on the Venator. Should
be less for both, but I don’t expect any modern Starfleet repair team to know their way around either of them, so
that’s mallet in one hand, manual in the other.’ Mirannon stated.
‘We’ve still got three of those things.’ Brenn pointed out ‑ the ‘scouting element’ of Fleet Destroyer Squadron 851
consisted of Vandal, Venabulum and Varangian, and their fighter screens. Four hundred and twenty fighters each,
many of them clone war and third party relics not retained in Imperial service for any other purpose.
Enough of them were independently hyper capable, and it was a practised manoeuvre; jump in to a system, long
range scan for navigational purposes, dispatch a swarm of fighters that covered the system in eyes. Very little
could hide from a comprehensive blanket like that, and most sector groups that still retained them used them
similarly, for ‘hot’ recon jobs when there was a very good reason to believe there was something there.
One of them could come in handy ‑ that was assuming they weren’t going to be the ones doing the hiding.

Loyalties were also worrying Jhareylia. She was far from certain where she stood in the hierarchy of the ship, but
they hadn’t trusted her with a weapon yet. Which was not that much of a problem considering the people she was
on her way to see had lots of them. Unfortunately, ‘had’ in both the sense of possessing, and in the past tense.
She found all of them temporarily stood down and in Subassembly A’s bay, examining status monitors, opening
tool boxes.
‘Hallo, Jhareylia.’ Aldrem ducked under an armature, grabbed her and hugged her. ‘What’s up?’
‘Politics, chaos and treachery.’ She said. ‘How was your day?’
‘We…think we might have melted some of the gun tubes.’ Aldrem admitted.
‘ “We?” Nice line in collective responsibility you’ve got there.’ Eddaru Gendrik grumbled, not pausing to look up
from a monitor screen ‑ it appeared to be relay data from some kind of RPV actually crawling down one of the
barrels. The fact that they had lost enough of the on mount instrumentation to need it indicated that yes, they
were going to find a problem.
‘Yes, as it happens. We share the credit, we share the blame.’ Suluur pointed out.

‘Fine, you can take my share of the kills for my share of the 72‑hour exercise, or whatever we get landed with this
time ‑ umph. Is there a metallurgist in the gun house?’ Gendrik said, frowning at the image.
‘Deputy Assistant Acting No‑one Else Wants the Job.’ Tarshkavik waddled over to the monitor, taking control. ‘It
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want children?’
‘What have we got?’ Aldrem, who as of a week ago had decided he did, looked over and asked.
‘Broken nuclei, back pressure from the containment field. Congratulations, gang, we’ve achieved transmutation.
To crap, probably.’
‘Then get the RPV out before it fuses to the tube wall and makes our lives even harder.’ Gendrik ordered.
‘Harder as in hard rads?’ Tarshkavik said, moving the little, heavily shielded, drone out of the barrel. ‘We can kill
that problem, stabilise it using the binding energy tensors to lock them down, but we’re talking dismount, replace
and send to Tech Services.’
‘Right, start that and‑‘ Aldrem began.
‘We’ve got a slightly more urgent problem.’ Jhareylia told him.
‘The glacis and shields are enough to keep the radiation out.’ Aldrem said, hoping that would be an answer,
realising it wasn’t. ‘What sort of urgent problem?’
‘You did notice the other destroyer, and the small black ship?’ she said.
‘Of course. Gunnery control sounded really sceptical when they told us not to shoot it.’ Suluur said.
‘VIP visitor. A dark acolyte of the Sith, I think.’ Jhareylia told them.
‘No bloody wonder fire direction weren’t too sure.’ Aldrem said. ‘Never known one of them to be the bearer of
good news ‑ do I want to know what this has to do with us, or should I guess the worst?’
‘Before we do something this crazy and stupid,’ Hruthhal, the subassembly chief whose gun mount hadn’t melted,
said, ‘can we think about it? Whichever way this goes, he is Authority. At least Captain Lennart prefers to make us
suffer rather than blowing us away outright, but annoying a dark Force user can cause huge mounds of possibly
terminal crap to fall on us from a very great height.’
‘Why are you so sure we’re about to do something crazy and stupid?’ Aldrem asked him.
‘Track record? Basically, if we do something to this dark lord, we’re backing our own ship against the might of the
Empire.’ He didn’t add what he was thinking, which was ‘on the say‑so of a very recently ex‑Rebel, yet.’
‘I thought we were supposed to be the might of the Empire.’ Gendrik said. ‘What exactly do you want to do?’ he
asked Jhareylia.
‘Not me; the Captain. And his exact words were, I need all the information you can get for me, who else am I
going to get to make this happen?’
‘Anybody? We did a week of basic training. All right, they were twenty hour days, that doesn’t make us
commandos. We’re certainly not up to the job of assassinating Mini‑Vader. Especially not through the
stormtroopers he can’t trust anymore. Even if we should. Do it openly and we’re renegades, and staging an
‘accident’ with blaster fire doesn’t convince like it used to.’ Suluur said. He at least probably was credible as a
commando, and knew how far they fell short.
‘Team, we’re probably over‑reacting.’ Aldrem said, hoping he was right. ‘What exactly does the skipper want?’
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outright slaves. Captain Lennart wants them rescued and pumped for all the information they can give us about
their master.’ Jhareylia told them.
‘There are enough pilots daft enough for that sort of job, surely? Don’t the flight group have a pool of spares just
waiting for someone else to die? Some of them must be stir crazy enough, and their reflexes are probably better.’
Hruthhal pointed out.
‘Kriff.’ Aldrem said. ‘I just thought of a perfect excuse for us to be there.’
‘You don’t want to do this?’ Jhareylia asked him, wondering why she was so surprised. On the face of it, it was a
dangerously lunatic idea which any sensible person would want nothing to do with. So why had she instinctively
assumed he would go with it?
‘Do I want to offend a dangerous maniac ‑ dark Force user, pretty much a given really ‑ who’s quite likely to
consider something like that an act of rebellion? No. Do I think we need to ‑ maybe.’
‘We’ve spent a lot of time, and a lot of watts, on people who thought they knew better than the official chain of
command. It might be secret from you,’ Gendrik said to Jhareylia, ‘but the biggest single threat to the peace of the
galaxy isn’t the Alliance. It’s rogue elements of the Starfleet. We’ve found ourselves putting down brushfire wars
based on hatreds that go back to the dawn of the Republic ‑ and break out again now because we’ve armed them
as part of a Sector Group. Never mind small time Party thugs who should never have been given power in the first
place, governors with rushes of blood to the head, would‑be successors ‑ we’ve taken them all on. I don’t want to
find ourselves on that target list.’
‘The question is,’ Tarshkavik asked, ‘who’s off reservation, him or us?’
‘What do you mean, maybe?’ Fendon asked Aldrem.
‘Depends what he intends to do to us. I take it he and the captain didn’t get on?’ Suluur replied instead.
‘Captain Lennart said not.’ Jhareylia pointed out. ‘If you can access the monitors?’
‘Fairly easy. Only difficulty is deciding which fake code to use, who to blame.’ Suluur said.
From main turret control, he proceeded to do that ‑ typing it in extra‑fast so that Jhareylia wouldn’t recognise it
was the executive officer’s code he used. They watched the security footage.

‘Looks like a nasty piece of work.’ Hruthhal admitted. ‘Still don’t want to cross him, though.’
‘What’s that about obedience to orders?’ Fendon inquired.
‘Never mind the words, they’re both being diplomatic. Look at the body language.’ Jhareylia hadn’t seen it before
‘He comes in ready to trample over people, skipper stands up to him, they lock horns once then both back down ‑
why do I suddenly feel between a rock and a hard place? There’s going to be more to this, I know it.’ Gendrik said.
‘Slavery is actually illegal, isn’t it?’ Fendon asked.
‘Yes, but you can try a citizens’ arrest on a dark lord if you like, just don’t expect us to back you up ‑ I count three
in robes, two gunmen, one of them alien, one noncombatant ‑ slicer type? ‑ and two twi’lek slaves.’ Aldrem
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‘He’s going to miss anyone we walk off with, what about bagging the slicer?’ Gendrik said. ‘Theoretically. Much as
I’d hate to get caught, I’d hate it even more for a low value target.’
‘I think Captain Lennart wants this to look like a deniable escape rather than an obvious kidnapping.’ Jhareylia

‘Team. In all seriousness, now.’ Aldrem called them to order ‑ or, depending on what happened, possibly to
chaos. ‘Do we take the risk and go and do this, or not?’
‘Does it really need all of us?’ Fendon asked.
‘Considering we’d all be complicit, I’d hate to get left behind and be blamed in absentia, so‑‘ Tarshkavik decided.
‘Good. Someone’s going to have to unleash the poor twi’lek, and I’d have to have to do it all by myself.’ Jhareylia
‘Well, I’m going.’ Aldrem said, and Jhareylia smiled at him.
‘This had better be a kriffing good plan.’ Hruthhal said, admitting he was in.

The boarding action was almost trivially easy, compared to what the Legion were expecting. In Alliance service,
such large warships usually operated below establishment on crew, and well below on ground troops. They didn’t
have so many that they could afford to leave them lying around.
In accordance with established doctrine, it was a multicentric attack ‑ with sufficient superiority of numbers, inflict
chaos by attacking from all sides at once, push in on an easier line of approach and make the defender need to
counterattack you, tactically defend and inflict losses while the other attack groups moved forward in their turn.
Operational‑offensive, tactical‑defensive; they had the time to do it properly, now the ship was no longer likely to
Immediately behind the line infantry were sapper‑slicers to seize control of the ship’s systems and prevent them
being used against the boarders, and disarm any boobytraps; light repeaters up front for bursting through
barricades, heavy repeaters bringing up the rear to hold territory taken.
Scout teams raced ahead, through air vents, cable runs and machinery spaces, lift shafts and crawlways to hit the
nerve centres of the ship; the main targets were the bridge and computer core.

Hunter Team Omega‑17‑Blue were not alone in doubting the wisdom of that. Not that they were not viable
targets, but that at this stage in the larger operation ‑ which was variously nicknamed Peek‑a‑Boo, Blue Meanie,
Teacup Storm ‑ there might be a distinct advantage in not being too well informed. They were reserve and
support for this one; the last main phase of clearance, they had hacked and blasted their way into the base of the
Venator’s bridge tower, and were waiting to reinforce either of the primary attack groups.

Each of the main assault parties consisted of a boarding platoon led by a specialist team ‑ Omega‑ 09‑Blue,
whose normal duties were planetary search and rescue, and Omega‑03‑Indigo, who tended to do the kind of job
that even stormtroopers didn’t talk much about. Political assassination and the tactical application of blame.
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Lennart gave the Indigos relatively little to do, and they were in quite a bloodthirsty mood ‑ they had more flame
projectors, explosive flechette launchers and gas grenades than was strictly establishment. They were going after
the ship command bridge module; with luck, they might leave a prisoner alive.
09‑Blue would seize the core then divert to the fighter control bridge. It was giving those there time to prepare,
time to destroy what information they held ‑ which could be an under‑the‑table objective, not to find out too
It would perhaps have made more sense if 17‑Blue and platoon AC11 had gone straight for the fighter control
bridge, but apart from anything else, this was a central point that it was logical to take and hold.
Two platoons of the naval battalion ‑ not navy troopers, Stormtroopers who specialised in ship to ship boarding
action ‑ would move in to hold the area if they had to move out to support 09‑Blue or 03‑Indigo.
In the meantime, they had set up and were guarding an aid station in one of the conference rooms, and the
medical officer, who had no‑one to treat yet, was passing the time by talking to 17‑Blue.
‘It must be terrible.’ Aleph‑3 said. ‘Actually wanting to have nothing to do.’
‘The Army functions with conscripted civilians, or pays their way through medical school on condition of a term of
service; but we couldn’t have that in the Corps. It has to be organic; within the Family, you might say.’
‘Then ‑ how did you get to be a medical officer?’
‘I volunteered for the Stormtrooper Corps, and I was half‑way through training as a rifleman when someone in
planning took a look at my aptitude scores, decided they needed a surgeon and I would do.’ The medical officer
said wryly.
‘You’re not cloned? It must be nice to have parents.’ Aleph‑3 said, not entirely sure whether she meant it.
‘At least a third of the first generation of recruits to the Corps were running away from their families in some way.
I think a good many of them thought how nice it must be to be a clone with a billion brothers.’ He understated.
‘In some ways it’s our job to understand, and all of us can pass for normal, but that is acting, it’s putting on a
mask and conning the average citizens into seeing what they want to see. We’ve never been able to not stop doing
it, we don’t know what it’s like to have to be that way ‑ you must deal with average people more than most.’
Aleph‑3 didn’t quite manage to say what she meant, but he knew.
‘Training was interesting; there are enough of us now to keep it all in house, but I was one of the first generation.
I went to a regular medical school, with thousands of junior doctors who knew that our group ‑ twenty ‑ were
going to be combat surgeons. They hardly knew how to deal with us; at first, they settled on fear.’
‘I would have thought there would be a lot of curiosity in the mix?’ Aleph‑3 asked, not really surprised.
‘There was, but in a lot of ways we were seeing them at their worst. Very high standards were required of them,
and they were all in competition with each other; we saw them at their most ridiculous and childish, as they played
silly student games to escape from the pressure ‑ and at their most ruthlessly backstabbing, as they tried to
eliminate their rivals. We were all young troopers, proud of our status, too raw to hide our contempt for their
behaviour. We had a lot of growing up to do, too.’

‘So how did the situation develop from there?’ Aleph‑3 asked, trying to picture it.
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preparation we could have had.

'Part of being womb‑born is to almost never be certain. We have the fog of war, they operate under the fog of life;
never sure what’s going to happen to them next, always conditional, always dodging; they have very few
simplicities, and most of those are when something has gone catastrophically wrong.
'There’s another side to that, but we gradually began to pass them by. We were less intelligent, and probably less
temperamentally suited, but sheer relentlessness served us well.
'As we moved up the class ranks, some of them resented us, tried to pull us down, trap us into making mistakes.
Others overcame their fear, started coming to us for help and advice. It was fascinating ‑ we were doing our best
to behave properly, not letting our opinions interfere with our duty, but we hardly needed to. They projected it
onto us anyway. Did you get the same tactical training we did?’
‘No.’ Aleph‑3 answered. ‘Basic self defence, staff‑officer and special role specific. Advanced close combat and
sniper‑scout later.’
‘So you did get the Second Law of Armed Combat drilled into you.’
‘Act on the basis of what you deduce from what you see, not on the basis of what you want and expect to see? Of

‘No‑one’s yet been honest enough to write down a full version of the Laws of Social Combat, but I expect that one
of them is going to be that you win by imposing your own version of the laws. In all the chaos of life, they want
answers to the unanswerable. Given that there aren’t any, they win by getting everyone else to agree they’ve won
by subscribing to the same outlook ‑ overcoming others’ skewed, incomplete view of the world with their own.
'You’d be amazed how easy it is to be somebody completely different, just by having someone different look at
you; it’s fascinating how much people can read into a rigid‑faced helmet. If I was issued a zoo, I could fill it with
what they thought we were.’ The surgeon‑lieutenant said.
All right, she thought, turnabout is fair enough. Now she was the converted being preached to. Admittedly, she
had rarely put it as efficiently. They were outsiders, beings with clear purpose, straight lines in a world of
scribbled confusion. Which begged the question; why was she trying so hard to turn into one of the scribbles?
Because it mattered, who got to tell who else what to do? Because she was half way there already?
She strongly suspected that the donor for her own clone line had been an undiagnosed force‑sensitive. As
permissive as the shaping and filtering process had been, perhaps a shred of that had leaked through?
‘What do you know about‑ aging?’ She asked.
‘Planned Obsolescence, you mean? I was involved in that, I was a latecomer to the program. There were no
complaints, at the time. The war was over, the Army of One Man had served its purpose and it was time to fade
away. At least, that was the theory.
'When the confederate remnants refused to lie down and die, and the peace of the Empire turned out to be more
difficult to establish than the estimates expected, we realised we would be needing them as cadre for a long time
yet. We experimented, trying to slow down and normalise the process. With‑ not complete success. There have
been a couple of embarrassing incidents where the Corps did not do as well as expected; the Reslian and
Erhynradd incidents for one. Largely because the troopers involved had a biological age in their fifties.
'The best are usually the worst, refusing to give up however creaky they get; add in the effects of stress, strain and
injury and there are some of Vader’s Fist more fit to ride a zimmer frame than a dropship. The alternative clone
lines stabilise more easily than the core template, if that’s what you were worried about.’

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‘Better than wanting to die.’ The surgeon said. ‘I presume the standard arguments have worn thin?’
‘We are special operations troops.’ Aleph‑3 said. ‘Our arguments come in for more wear and tear than most.’
He was about to reply when there were shuffling and dragging sounds from the corridor ahead. ‘Ah, something to
do. I think that’s your cue, as well.’ Eight stormtroopers ‑ two of them wounded and being held up by another
two, four of them carrying wounded rebel prisoners.
‘Team, Platoon, make ready.’ Aleph‑One ordered. They did.
‘Make sure you disarm all the rebels before sending them back. Holding my own intestines in with one hand and
resealing the patient’s with the other is not an experience I want to repeat.’

Damage control bunker dorsal‑140 was much larger than it needed to be to fulfill its stated duties, which were
nominally maintenance and repair of the main sensor, bridge and gunnery control data systems. That was due to
its secondary role as a survival shelter in the most populous part of the ship. Lots of electronics, lots of spare
space, enough subdivision to be getting on with; it was the perfect place to mount a surveillance operation from.
It was on Lennart’s way back to the bridge, so he met the chief there.
‘Gethrim, I hope whatever you’re doing isn’t potentially incriminating.’ He said, after the chief had waved him into
the bunker.
‘Yes, that was one idea I had to sit on. It’s exactly the sort of thing he would check for, bugging the Imperial suite
means the consequences of getting caught acquire an extra layer of unpleasant, and I think I can manage to be
just a little bit subtler than that.’
The chief led the captain back into the bowels of the chamber, through a locked door to a small data station.
Lennart looked at the on screen image, and got it at once. ‘That is elegant. Does it work?’
‘So far, yes.’ Mirannon said. ‘Resolution ‑ sky’s the limit. Given tuning time, we should be able to pick up
individual brain cells firing. Assuming in his case that they do.’
‘Through all that background hash? I’m impressed.’
The Chief Engineer’s plan was simplicity itself. He regretted that he had an audience who knew most of it already,
and who he wouldn’t be able to show off explaining to. With so many energy processes, never mind multiple
overlapping force fields, starships were electronically noisy places. It was one of the reasons the main sensor units
were in domes at the top of the ship, so they could be placed on insulated mountings.
Other noise reduction measures were also taken; chiefly waveguides to channel away ‑ and as far as possible
recycle ‑ waste energy, and recording and filtering out stray electromagnetic waves. As sensitive as the main
sensor system had to be for clarity over distance, if a source of interference was not baffled, but instead actively
searched for, it was childishly easy to isolate and identify.
The best part was that Black Prince’s sensor system was non‑standard. A relic of having a sensor dome shot off
eight years ago; it had been replaced with a dome mount forward of the bridge module. Then the wreckage had
been cleared, and the dome replaced properly, but the field expedient had never been removed. There were
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‘You realise this verges on negligence. Failing to carry out proper noise reduction and compensation.’ Lennart
chuckled slightly. ‘How much difference will this actually make to our scan radius?’
‘Oh, we should lose…roughly two kilometres off our standard benchmark against an absolute magnitude fifteen
target.’ The benchmark was in the thousands of light years. Large enough that even in space background clutter
became an issue, large enough to pull in signals to make a mockery of any kind of news restriction. ‘Do we have
any idea what he wants yet?’
‘Amongst other things, apparently an apprentice.’ Lennart admitted.

‘All right,’ Mirannon said after a second’s thought, ‘this is the plan; we fake your death in some embarrassing and
ridiculous way‑‘
‘Does it have to be embarrassing? I always wanted to be a hero.’ Lennart said, part appalled, part amused.
‘Trust me; there has to be an element of farce in this for it to work. You croak in some sort of hideous noodle
incident that doesn’t just spoil, positively throws a yellow snowball in the face of, your reputation for foresight
and luck. That discredits you as a potential Force user, we literally laugh that off. Has to be messy enough to be a
closed casket funeral, though. All right, we’ve got enough people with sick enough senses of humour to run with
'What’s left for Adannan to do? He wanders off pursuing whatever demented objective he has in mind, if he really
does think you have some kind of collective influence power‑‘
‘I do.’ Lennart said quietly. ‘It’s called being the captain. Go on.’
‘Losing that means we can credibly slip far enough below our usual standards to make it make sense for him to go
and bother someone else. You’re discovered in the bilges, not quite dead and with no memory of the incident, a
couple of months later; problem solved.’
‘You’re not entirely serious, are you?’ Lennart asked, not seriously.
‘On one thing only; I’d rather get this sorted out with a splatter of custard than a splatter of blood. Playing it
straight, at the very, very least, we have to prove that he’s lost the plot, and waste him. He’s properly trained, he
won’t make silly mistakes, that’d take some doing. Then hope we get believed afterwards. None of which is sure,
certain or painless.
'At the worst, we get Nar‑Shaddaa’d along on some mad‑eyed quest to assassinate and replace Darth killed‑
more‑Imperial‑officers‑than‑the‑Rebellion‑has Vader, or the Emperor himself, while a real security problem, Ord
Corban, goes unattended.’ Mirannon ranted.
‘Are you sure you’re not the one with the foresight?’ Lennart said.

The medical bay was filling up rapidly. The returning lilypad dropships and transports carried a few of the more
seriously wounded stormtroopers ‑ minor wounds dealt with in house ‑ and most of the prisoners needed some
form of medical attention. That, and a few ejected pilots.
Most of the bomb wing was recalled to rest and re‑arm; that included Epsilon. From the purely military viewpoint,
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and vaulted out in one continuous motion, and sprinted for the med bay.

He had seen Franjia’s fighter take a debris hit ‑ six proton torps detonating less than half a kilometre away, with
an X‑wing to use for shrapnel, small wonder. Her starwing had seemed to come out of it intact, but then he had
realised it wasn’t under control.
After a moment of pure panic, he had recovered his composure, called in the search‑and‑rescue, and desperately
tried not to think too hard about it as he stayed on mission, hunting down the rest of the Alliance remnants.
It was over now, Alpha and Gamma were flying CAP, Beta were on deep patrol scouting along the rebel line of
approach ‑ in this case, the mean line of approach, considering the evasion ‑ and he had nothing to do other than
go and see.
They were not happy to see him; casualties of all kinds coming in thick and fast, human and droid doctors
working triage as fast as they could. The med bay was above and between the two landing bays, below and
forward of the superstructure.
Casualties were shuttled up to it on a cycling lift ‑ Aron rode up with one batch of fifteen rebels, one half‑choked
from capture foam inhalation, two with sub‑lethal gas exposure, most of the rest with broken bones from rifle
butts, or blaster wounds.

The two guards assessed him and said nothing; when he got out of the elevator, a medical droid zoomed up to
him and shoved a scanner in his face. ‘Come on, come on, where does it hurt, snap it up, lots to do, others
‘Your bedside manner stinks. I’m looking for someone, just admitted‑‘
‘There’s nothing wrong with you. Why are you wasting my time?’ the droid beeped indignantly.
Aron grabbed its probe arm. ‘Who waved this at who else? A droid’s more likely to remember; fighter pilot, female,
flight lieutenant’s rank, one metre eighty‑seven, blonde‑‘
‘Too busy. People to see to, let me go‑‘
‘How much help are you going to be to them if you make me rip your arm off and beat your braincase in with it?’
Aron snarled.
‘My arms have been reinforced to deal with injured Wookie prisoners.’ The droid said, with a slight trace of smug.
‘You think that’s going to stop me trying? Where is Franjia?’
‘Let me think.’ The droid beeped a little. ‘Accessing‑ theatre nine.’

Aron let it go and ran ‑ hurdling two stretchers and sidestepping another ‑ into the medical complex.
Immediately left and right, ramps and lift shafts, up to high dependency, down to the main wards. Further in on
the left, outpatients, on the right, security and medical monitoring. Straight on to the operating theatres.
Two stormtrooper guards stopped him, politely but firmly; he thought of trying to barge past them, realised they
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The walls weren’t transparisteel, some close cousin with controllable opacity ‑ he could almost see in, could make
out fuzzy shapes through the sepia tint. A junior doctor ‑ sterilisable plastic medical gown with lieutenant’s
insignia pinned on ‑ came out, took his mask off, leaned against the wall. He was very pale.
Aron grabbed him by the arms. ‘How is she?’
‘Not good.’ He said, shaking his head. ‘You are?’
‘Her squadron commander...and her friend. What do you mean, not good? Can I see her?’
‘Exactly what happened to her?’ the young doctor was already tired and strained.
‘Hit an X‑wing at point blank, its warhead load went up.’
‘Yes, that fits. It would be‑ safer if you don’t go in. You’re not sterile. That fits. It was essentially a debris injury;
the blast dropped the shielding and a bit of the wreckage hit her cockpit. Part of the gun module.’
Aron suddenly thought of their squadron adjutant. Combusting blaster gas had been responsible for his wounds,
hadn’t it? ‘How bad?’
‘The helmet stopped her face melting, and she did exactly the right thing ‑ vented the cockpit to vacuum for ten
seconds, blew away the hot gas and cooled the debris, then restored pressure. Third degree burns across most of
her chest, most of her ribs broken and one lung, we may need to replace that, but it could have been a lot worse.’
‘Galactic spirit…’ he said, not sure if it was a curse or a prayer. ‘Will she fly again?’

‘She’s had a severe trauma, and she’s in no state to be rushed.’ The doctor said, sternly.
‘Doc, when it comes to trauma ‑ she lost somebody recently, somebody personally close. Flying helps her focus,
helps her maintain. She‑ needs to be able to do that. The last thing that would be good for her is sick berth time
to do nothing but brood. Maybe it is selfish to want her out there covering my back, but you need to fix her. She
needs to be able to do that.’ Aron said.
The doctor was about to protest, realised how little effect it would have. ‘We’ll do what we can.’
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Eleventh Century Remnant
Jedi Council Member

  2007­07­12 12:50pm

Ch 21

‘So, what is this amazing infallible master plan?’ Tarshkavik, in ordinary uniform instead of his clumping survival
suit, asked.
‘Oh, good, no pressure.’ Aldrem replied.
‘Does it have anything to do with these boxes? We’re not going to crate them up and carry them off, are we?’
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‘Is that how you would do it?’ The turret commander asked.
‘Um, Pel?’ Jhareylia asked. ‘This plan does exist, doesn’t it?’
‘Ish. Basically, we have a high level VIP on board, so we are going to survey the tower, with these crates of
scanning gear, for places where we can afford to mount additional point defence turrets. We are going to be
wandering all over the place, lurking from time to time, and making loud, strange electronic noises.’ Aldrem
‘Sounds like an average night out on the town.’ Suluur said.
‘Sounds like a very useful cover; I like it.’ Jhareylia said.
‘You’d like it less if you had to carry the scanner.’ Gendrik grumbled.
‘Switch the kriffing thing into travel mode.’ Tarshkavik advised.
‘Ah.’ Gendrik managed to find and activate the repulsor unit. ‘I didn’t know it had one of those.’
‘The stormtrooper teams that usually use these enjoy lifting heavy weights. They also have armour, so it doesn’t
hurt as much when they drop it on their toes.’ Suluur pointed out, with slight sarcasm.
‘Why does a scanning unit, a highly sensitive item of equipment, have to be so heavy?’ Fendon wondered.
‘It isn’t; what’s heavy is the armoured shell and the shock absorbers, which are there to protect the sensitive parts
from the abuse it wouldn’t get as much of if it was easier to handle.’ Aldrem pointed out.
‘Speaking of easy to handle; these twi’lek. We don’t know the first thing about them, do we?’ Hruthhal said. ‘They
could leap into our arms, they might be psychonditioned to die before they let anyone set them free.’
‘True.’ Aldrem agreed. ‘The only way we’re going to find out is to try it and see.’ Now that he was committed, he
felt strangely light‑headed, free from worry; all that was left was to make it happen.
‘That’s why you’re carrying the light repeater?’ Tarshkavik asked, referring to the gun Aldrem was cradling.
‘No, I’m carrying it because it makes me feel better. I can use the sight unit to estimate fields of fire, if anyone
asks ‑ and I’m fairly sure it can be set for stun.’ Aldrem said.
‘No, it can’t.’ Suluur pointed at the fire selector.
‘Oh.’ Aldrem shrugged. ‘Flesh wounds?’

They reached the turbolift cluster at the base of the bridge tower; with the line infantry deployed, internal security
was short of bodies. In this situation, they tended to become external security‑protecting points where the ship
could be boarded from, and choke points. There was a squad at the lift shafts. Aldrem presented his rank cylinder;
the stormtroopers, if they queried it at all, would have been told by Gunnery Control that it was legitimate.
Jhareylia tried hard not to strangle him.
‘The obvious places to begin,’ Aldrem said on their way up in the turbolift, ‘are the outer surfaces of the tower. We
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op where you have to begin by handing over ID.’ Jhareylia said, skeptically.
‘You might not believe it from looking at the outside, but we are fairly competent.’ Aldrem said. ‘Covert was
always a pipe dream. Spacewalking ‑ through active shields, into the main sensor picture, looking like a stray
boarder ‑ even worse. A credible reason for being there, and officially busy doing something else, is the best
we’re going to get, really.’
The Imperial suite, as built into every line destroyer or better, was usually a ten thousand cubic metre boondoggle.
Palpatine seldom travelled, and when he did was equally likely to play the saviour of the galaxy, trusting in his
popularity with his people on board a luxury liner, or ride the biggest, heaviest‑gunned battlewagon available in
Oversector Imperial Centre.
That, or he did so invisibly. There had been rumours about cloaking devices for decades; in the old Republic fleet,
they would have been pointless ‑ the authorities didn’t need them and the criminals usually couldn’t afford them.
In the Clone Wars, the Confederation were mostly too cheap to bother and the Republic…well. The rumours had to
come from somewhere, after all.
Generally, some high level official or agent would use the suite, if anyone did. Thousands of destroyers had it
installed, locked it down and might as well have thrown away the key. This was the first time anyone had ridden in
Black Prince’s since she had been built. The maintenance team who got there with maybe five minutes in hand
cracked the door seals, gagged on the stale air, looked around and issued a collective chorus of ‘Oh stang.’ No
penetrating damage; but sheer neglect and twenty years’ abuse to the ship around it had left it verging on
uninhabitable. The independent life support appeared to have failed, that was the first thing that would need
putting right.

Twelve men, a standard damage control party under a junior lieutenant, with a cross‑section of skills. One man
hour to exercise them in. Not nearly enough. The sound of matching feet interrupted them before they had got
more than cracking the APU and life support units, testing the wiring and detaching the filters for inspection. The
lieutenant called them to attention, thinking, we’re in trouble; there was a brief pause, then Adannan himself leapt
into the room, lightsaber flourishing and glaring crimson, the huge thug on his right, carbine in one hand and
vibro‑axe in the other, the thin thug on his left with two disintegrator pistols drawn and ready.
They were expecting assassins, a secret Rebel cell, a rival agent. What they got was a dozen spacemen in dusty
overalls, loosely drawn up at attention; who panicked. One fainted, another cowered in a crouch with his arms
over his head, two screamed, most took a step back, the lieutenant started quivering uncontrollably.

They deserve to be dismembered anyway for being such cowards, Adannan thought, recognising what he was, or
wasn’t, up against.
‘My lord,’ his female aide said from behind him, where she was covering his back, ‘They’re worthless. If you want
to be judged by the quality of your enemies, this would not be good for your reputation.’
In the time he squandered paying attention to her, he could have ‑ actually, that was an idea. ‘Say that again, and I
will test how many of these interlopers I can hack down in the time I wasted listening to you.’
The tech crew were huddling together; Adannan noticed one of them gripping a hydrospanner. At least one of
them wasn’t completely useless. ‘Sir, we’re‑‘ their officer began, stuttering too badly to speak clearly.
‘Lord Adannan,’ a voice he didn’t recognise said, ‘that would be ‑ counterproductive.’
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‘I didn’t ask for your opinion.’ Adannan snapped at him.

‘I know, Sir, but I can recognise a broken life support unit when I see one.’ The sargeant‑commander said. ‘The
tech crew also haven’t had time to code the door to you yet, Sir.’
Adannan took a deep breath. Let the red mist clear.
‘Why is that important, Sargeant?’ his aide asked, before Adannan could vent his irritation.
‘I thought you might be interested in breathing, ma’am.’
‘Explain.’ Adannan ordered.
‘The module internal life support is down; disassembled for repair. The connections to main life support are also
inoperable. The security systems don’t know that you specifically are supposed to be here. When the blast door
closes, you will be in a sealed chamber with no air and no exit, Sir.’ There was just a tiny part of the sargeant‑
commander wondering if he should have kept his mouth shut.
Adannan hefted his lightsaber, looking sceptical.
‘Sir,’ the sargeant said, ‘exactly who do you think that door was meant to keep out?’
The dark Jedi thought about it for a second, then roared with laughter. Of course security on one of Palpatine’s
boltholes would be intended to resist his own nosy apprentices.
‘You. Lieutenant. Come here.’ Adannan decided to settle that first. The young junior lieutenant obeyed ‑ after one
of his team whispered in his ear ‘Might as well get it over with, sir, hanging back’ll only make it worse.’
He took a step forwards ‑ Adannan’s lightsabre lashed out, slicing through his lower jaw. He fell to the ground,
burbling wildly and trying to hold it on.
‘Ahhh.’ Adannan sighed. ‘I always feel vaguely disappointed when I have to do that. Maiming and mutilation
should be a hobby and relaxation in themselves; it feels like cheating when I actually make it serve a useful
Next time,’ he addressed the writhing junior lieutenant, ‘report quickly and clearly; then when I do gut you, it will
be for a genuine error rather than a failure to communicate.’
Obviously, he wasn’t going to get an acknowledgement.
‘You, Sargeant‑‘ he turned to the leader of his escort detail.
‘DM343, Lord Adannan.’ The sargeant‑commander replied.
‘You seem unusually well informed.’
‘I’m a tanker, Sir, I work with independent closed‑environment systems. We were also briefed on security for the
Imperial suite.’ The sargeant realised he had said too much when Adannan’s eyes lit up and the lightsaber tip
pointed towards him.
‘When?’ Adannan growled.
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Not foresight at all, then, just good staff work. There was something else, perhaps even further wrong; the
stormtrooper’s reactions on being threatened. They were far too…normal. Line One, Mod One stormtroopers had
been near‑mindless, until their experiences had individuated them. Tremendously active subconscious of course,
perception and reflex, but they had to think before they could remember how to talk at times. This one, and he
seemed to be typical of the rest, had been given entirely too much leeway to think about his tasks. It said a lot for
Lennart’s influence, even untutored, that he could even begin to break down that depth of conditioning. Either
that or his personality cult, which if he had done this without benefit of the Force ‑ or with unwitting benefit ‑
made him a major security threat. He could sense the sargeant thinking “how do I get out of this without getting
him mad at me, too?”
‘Sargeant, this place is clearly a mess. Where were you expecting to give us?’ The aide asked.
‘This ship has limited flag accommodations; there or the captain’s suite, ma’am. Permission to proceed about our
duties, Sir?’
‘No.’ Adannan said. Even his own retinue looked surprised.
‘The rest of you, snap to it. And someone take that snivelling thing away.’ He pointed with the lightsabre at the
lieutenant, still whimpering. ‘You, sargeant, have been allowed to think. That is not an approved activity for beings
of your kind; it can land you in all sorts of trouble.’
‘My lord,’ the aide put one hand on his shoulder ‑ of the arm not holding the lightsabre, she wasn’t that crazy. ‘All
sargeant DM343 did was to protect you from‑‘ your own impetuosity, she realised, the saying of which would
almost certainly get him, and possibly herself, killed; ‘‑difficulties.’ She finished, lamely, knowing Adannan could
fill in the blank for himself.
‘Then you‑no,’ he turned to his other robed follower, still with the drawn vibroaxe, ‘you, Banaar, talk to the
sargeant about his bad habits. Ren,’ she hated that shortening of her name, ‘find Watcher 22173. Get the whole
The aide, Aleph‑3’s twin, had no legal name; she simply preferred the archaic Galactic Standard personal name of
Laurentia. Naturally, her master declined to call her by it most of the time.
She nodded, realised the suite’s data systems were equally unlikely to be functioning, left the suite in search of a
working computer node that would understand her priviledged access codes.

The Force works in many ways, from the extremely blatant to the imperceptibly subtle. One of those subtle effects
was in play; the choice of personnel to carry the maimed Lieutenant away couldn’t have been better, from a certain
point of view. The two twi’lek slaves, used to doing ugly, messy jobs, assumed that they would be ordered to do
it. They picked up the young officer, one under each arm, helped him hold his jaw on with a lekku, carried him out
and set off for the medical complex.
Adannan himself left the rest of his party to settle themselves in, the menials to do the menial labour, and headed
to the ready room, where he planned to begin asserting his authority.

Captain Lennart was there already, apparently reliving, in fact reviewing the battle. He was behaving with slightly
more decorum; he had his feet propped up on the next chair rather than the table.
‘I was impressed that the Imperial suite had remained untouched. Other men in your position, with your record,
might have started having delusions of grandeur. Begun to think that they deserved to be rewarded more highly
for what they had done ‑ and resolved to take it rather than wait for it to be given them. Did that never cross your
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‘Call me an old softie if you like,’ Lennart began, ‘but I do hold to something vaguely recognisable as a variation
on the Tarkin Doctrine. Sometimes, less really is more.’
‘I find that difficult to believe.’ Adannan said, realising he had to tiptoe around criticism of the doctrine that had
caught the Emperor’s imagination. Assuming that he hadn’t given Tarkin the idea in the first place.
‘You have done more damage to the Empire’s enemies than many men of greater rank and reputation. And after
all, what is the ability to inspire fear but a form of reputation?’
‘I had a bet with the senior wardroom,’ Lennart said, ‘on the subject of the Death Star’s lifespan. The question
was, how long would it be before one of those who fell under its shadow ‑ the planetary and sector governors, the
moffs and the admirals ‑ managed to sneak an inside man on board to sabotage the thing? Fear can be a very
blunt instrument; friendly fire prone, too.’
Adannan barely heard the last part; his mind was too busy boggling. The sheer level of cheek and sideways
thinking that involved ‑ analytical and unbelievably frivolous at the same time ‑ how in the name of the Force did
such a creature survive in an Imperial uniform? Perhaps he himself was the answer to that.
There was also the uncomfortable fact that Lennart had a point. Famously, the rebel ‘princess’ Leia Organa had
claimed Tarkin was there to hold Vader’s leash ‑ that much of the incident had leaked out. Typical Alliance
inaccuracy, the truth was closer to being the other way around. The Dark Lord had been there to stop Tarkin if he
had started thinking that he, Tarkin, might look good himself in an Emperor’s robe and cowl, and Coruscant might
look good in the Death Star’s gunsights.
Under other circumstances, it might have been the elder rather than the younger Skywalker firing a torpedo down
an exhaust port.
Then again, if any of the rebels ‑ other than a few special ops maniacs ‑ actually understood the inner workings of
the Empire, they might start being able to exploit them effectively.

‘I am beginning to understand,’ Adannan brought himself under control and said, ‘how it is you managed to
remain in your present rank for ten years.’
‘Which part, the not being promoted or the not being court‑martialled?’ Lennart asked him, not meaning it.
‘Besides, I know at least four sector groups used an attack on the Death Star as their major exercise problem last
‘That shows a disturbing lack of faith. Which sector groups?’ Adannan asked.
‘How about a disturbing lack of forethought? All four eventually resorted to mass fighter attack on pinpoint
targets. Mainly the command bridge and the superlaser emitters, nobody actually found the exhaust port, but the
principle was there.
'Why was there no communication between the special projects office of the DMR and the Starfleet? Why did no‑
one tell them that the actual working navy considered such an attack overwhelmingly probable, or did they simply
not listen? How much faith do you think it is wise or safe to have, in people who are too proud to do their jobs
‘Is that a formal accusation?’ Adannan asked.
Lennart reacted initially as Adannan had expected ‑ backing off from the brink. Then he changed his mind. ‘You
were looking for someone’s head to put on a forcepike a moment ago, perhaps the only way to protect them ‑
which you expected me to do by backing down, didn’t you? ‑ would be to take the problem head on, and prove a
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opening that can of worms?’

‘I do not imagine anyone concerned with it would.’ Adannan said, glaring at Lennart.
All right, Lennart thought, I probably can goad him badly enough that he snaps and does something psychotic.
That might not, however, be a positive development.
‘There’s another slight technical problem. The governor will not be able to attend; his palace was bombarded to
slag, and his elevators don’t work through molten rock. Now we could re‑invent some dead technology and
cobble together a teleporter, or we could go down to the planet and dig him out.’
That was pure coat‑trailing, Lennart’s trying to find out just how technically ignorant Adannan really was.
The dark Jedi dodged the question, by imposing one of his own. ‘He failed in his duty; he doesn’t deserve to be
rescued. You had dealings with the sector governor and the subsector fleet command previously, did you not?’
Lennart managed to stop himself before thinking ‘you callous bastard’ too loudly. Instead he said, ‘Now you’re
just trying to impress me with your ruthless determination, aren’t you? Whatever you think ought to be done to
the man himself ‑ and if being an idiot was punishable by death we’d need to import extragalactic aliens to
conduct all the funerals, there’d be few of us left ‑ there’s a command and control facility buried down there with
‘Good. Then he can attend by hologram.’
Lennart decided to float another test barge. ‘In theory, he can also order what’s left of the planetary defence
forces to come and dig him out; considering it was us that landed him in that mess, though‑‘
‘You don’t feel guilty, do you?’ Adannan growled, as if he was accusing Lennart of some hideous crime. ‘How
many years have you served in the Starfleet, and you try to tell me you still feel the slightest shred of remorse?’
‘Of course not.’ Lennart replied. ‘Although it lulls some into a false sense of security when we pretend.’ He
pretended. Now provided he doesn’t call my bluff and ask me to burn the poor sod out, Lennart thought‑
apparently quietly enough to escape notice.
Instead, Adannan was grinning. It was not a cheerful sight.
‘That is the first real sign you have given me that you might be fit for the greater purpose.’ Adannan said.
‘Apart from accounting for more than a hundred times our own tonnage?’ Lennart replied. ‘Planetary governor,
subsector naval command, sector Moff, we have established links to all of them‑‘ and to some parts of their staff
and data setups they don’t know about‑ ‘ready to make formal contact.’
At that point, Lennart’s command team, less Brenn who was minding the ship ‑ and listening in anyway ‑ began to
‘I did not give permission for them to be here!’ Adannan raged.
‘Well, this particular ‘them’ doesn’t need or want your permission. Standing orders.’ Mirannon said, sitting down ‑
forcing Lennart to move his feet, fast.
Adannan’s hand moved towards his sabre. That was a deliberate challenge ‑ but from the strength of his danger
sense, one it might not be wise to take up.
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‘And you would be the troubleshooter from the Privy Council.’ Mirannon stood up, made a civil bow ‑ then sat
down again.
The alternative prospect, Adannan recognised. Large, heavy ‑ the Force was telling him that Lennart was a fencer,
perhaps a plotter, a more subtle threat; Mirannon was the one likely to rage and try to tear him apart. It could be
entertaining to provoke the huge engineer, but on the ground of his choosing. On the other hand, there was face
to be thought of.
‘Are you attempting to demean my authority? Do you not realise what I have the power to do to you?’
‘Many things, I’m sure.’ The big, bearded man leaned forward. ‘And if you have the sense that ought to go with
your rank, you’ll realise we have a practical job to be getting on with.’
‘Mirannon?’ Lennart said, tone cautioning‑ with overtones of mockery. ‘That was barely civil.’
He couldn’t resist it. ‘I’m sorry, Sir, I’ll try and do better next time.’
‘Look, you mad prankster,’ Commander Wathavrah ‑ Guns ‑ said to Mirannon, ‘this man speaks with the authority
of the Privy Council, next only to His Imperial Majesty. Would you be as casual in the Presence?’
‘Well,’ Mirannon began, ‘I’d like to think I could keep my cool well enough to‑‘
‘But the reality is, probably not. You’d turn into a gibbering wreck like most of us.’ Lennart said. Adannan saw
another trap.
‘You have been introduced to His Majesty?’ he asked‑ instead of ‘then why aren’t you sufficiently afraid of me?’
‘Part of a batch. Representative officers from the fleet after Second Coruscant.’ Lennart confirmed. ‘Not counting
childhood scrapes, that was only the second time I ever had to fight for my life, man to droid rather than ship to
ship ‑ we were boarded. I was still half in shock, and the Chancellor looked pretty shaken as well. All formality, no

Adannan was analysing that fact when first one, then two more holoprojectors came to life. The first was the
planetary governor, still in some sort of nightgown, sweating badly.
One was a richly dressed Falleen, looking distinctly annoyed to be disturbed ‑ although he reacted when he saw
Adannan, eyes glowing wildly, slight change in skin tone, involuntary puff of pheromones so violent you could
almost see the mist around him.
The third was the subsector naval commander, a Vice‑Admiral; no‑one Lennart recognised, early middle aged,
slightly jowly, dark hair. From Elstrand’s spilling the beans, Lennart knew that the man was a political appointee,
but one who did take some care over his responsibilities. Could be worse.
‘I am Kor Alric Adannan, and I am the living word of the Emperor.’ Adannan began, glaring at all three of them.
The planetary governor wilted almost immediately, and was glad he was under three miles of rock.
The Admiral’s holographic image tried to meet Adannan’s eyes, lasted a whole two seconds before looking away.
‘You have an abscess in the heart of this sector, and I have chosen to give you one last chance to deal with it as
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answer him. Even the falleen Moff chose not to say anything that might be taken as a challenge.
‘The Alliance to Restore the Republic is strong here, how can that be? A blind eye? Mistaken and misbegotten
“false sense of security” tactics? Collusion?’ the last said with so much venom, the governor blurred out of focus
as he jumped away from the projector.
The admiral opened his mouth; Lennart guessed he was about to rat on the Moff, shook his head very slightly.
Adannan saw it anyway.
‘You were about to say, Admiral?’
‘Lord Adannan, that’s more than enough, one good chance is all we need.’
Reflexive bootlicking as a survival instinct; and a predator adapted to it. Instantly Adannan thought of a dozen
awkward and painful ways he could make the subsector commander regret his words, Lennart could see him do it
and winced slightly.
‘You had years to make your own chances, and failed to do so. I expect absolute dedication, and absolute success
as a result. Only that will entitle you to retain your position.’ He paused for effect. ‘And life.’

‘Governor.’ Adannan turned to the nightgown‑dressed man. ‘Full marks for creative vengeance, minus enough to
put your head on the block ‑ also ‑ for total failures of security.’
‘Kor Alric.’ Lennart said. ‘We counted on the planetary governor’s creative vengeance and failures of security, as
part of the bait for the trap that caught a major Rebel fleet asset.’
‘How much respect do you expect me to grant a worm on a hook?’ Adannan said. ‘Governor, you are dismissed
your rank and position. When I can be bothered, I will work my way down your staff until I find someone capable.
You are now a civilian trespasser on Imperial property, and any of the men whom your incompetence entombed
with you is legally entitled to shoot you.’
The governor started to plead, screamed, ducked and disappeared from the holoviewer, the cameras panned out
to the com centre; they saw him try to dodge a blaster bolt and fail. The camera cut out.
‘Three seconds? A spineless lot.’ Adannan said, coolly. He turned to Lennart. ‘You, Captain. The outsider. The
battle‑hungry madman who refused two orders to disengage, from officers of the Empire far your superior in
grade. One of them mine. The man who took it upon himself to expose this nest of rebels and fools.’

‘Oh, no. We found the enemy and fought them; but we have not yet even begun to expose and deal with the real
mess.’ Lennart said, looking away from Adannan to the sector Moff. Trying to gauge just what he knew. Adannan
did the same.
The fallen kept his face absolutely impassive, this time; and whatever Adannan sensed in the Force he kept to
‘We will discuss your tendency to adhere to the greater order another time. For the moment, I will use this vessel
as my flagship. Captain of the Line Lennart, you will assemble a hunting pack. Draw on the local forces, use your
judgement as to what is necessary.’

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‘You hold a high rank. Undoubtedly you ascended to it by running roughshod over the bodies of your colleagues
and rivals. Trampling on many lesser beings and careers. Equally inevitably, there are many below you who would
like to do the same.’
‘Undoubtedly. As a member of the college of Moffs, I am entitled to privileges and rights.’
‘You really think so?’ Adannan smiled a very evil smile. ‘You have guards there? Of course. Troopers!’
There was an off camera chorus of ‘Yes, Sir?’
‘Condign punishment, authority of the privy council. Burn your Moff’s legs off up to the knee. Slowly.’
The troopers acknowledged. The Falleen went absolutely white. ‘You can’t‑ ’
‘I can. Do you know why? Because I’m bored. In the midst of all this trouble, I need some light relief, and I think I
will find it most entertaining to merely maim you, and then watch you try to plot against me. Carry out your
orders.’ He added to the moff’s guard, and there was a hum of blasters just before he dropped the connection.
Adannan turned to go. ‘Make your plans and present them to me.’ He said to Lennart. ‘And, Captain‑‘
‘Yes, Kor Adannan?’ Lennart said, neutrally.
‘I give what I choose to give, and take away what, and when, I choose to take away. And I dislike being predicted.’

The medics were used to patching up injured pilots by now; things like putting members of the same squadron in
the same ward were now written into standing orders. Epsilon Four, Five and Eleven were together in one four‑bed
bay; the remaining bed had half a dozen pilots sitting on it, Aron was pacing up and down. He was waiting for
Franjia to recover consciousness; she was wired up to frighteningly many medical monitors, breath mask over her
face. She had come out of surgery two hours ago, now.
‘That was the simple part.’ The surgeon had said. ‘Take a tyre pump to the lung, bung in a set of titanium ribs and
smother them in artiflesh‑ trivial. But‑‘
‘She happens to be my friend. Show some respect.’ Aron snarled at him.
‘I know. I’m sorry. We get stressed occasionally, too. Seriously, it is far easier to rebuild bodies than rebalance the
mind’s grasp of them. The very speed of it often makes it worse. Shock, confusion ‑ all I can really give you is an
educated guess about recovery time, and whether she’ll ever fly again. I’d say so, but it’s only ever a sure thing
after it’s happened.’
So here they were, waiting, talking. Four had made a clean eject; the compensators had functioned properly, a
sharp but not a crippling gradient on his way out. Eleven had shrapnel wounds ‑ he had managed to seal his suit
in time, but one leg was badly slashed. Four was just under observation, basically fine. Eleven was slightly brain‑
fried from painkillers.
The main topic was a hardcopy printout from the ‘defence’ section of Galactic News Services ‑ more of a joke than
anything else to those actually in the service ‑ which had been torn up, and each of them had a sheet.
“Consortium of manufacturers unveil new procurement proposal” the headline ran.
‘So who’s in this?’ Aron asked. ‘It mentions Joraan, Hydrotii, Arakyd, Tagge, Koensayr, Corellian Engineering,
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‘Here.’ Gavrylsk handed him a flimsy. ‘See if you can read this and manage to believe it.’
Aron tried. ‘All right, it’s our business, fighters, but this is nuts. Basically, everyone who doesn’t make TIEs has
hired a consultant, a retired Clone Wars general ‑ and Rebel agent by the sounds of it ‑ to come up with an
alternative doctrine for the Starfighter Corps, and they’re trying to sell it, along with the fighters they need to
make it work.’
‘Hello, new toys to play with.’ Yatrock said, with tempered enthusiasm.
‘What’s the scheme?’ Kramaner asked.
‘Start with Alliance Starfighter Command’s wet dreams and work outwards from there…this consultant, headcase
by the name of Arikakon Baraka ‑ bloody fish, no wonder ‑ suggests four layers, separate zones of engagement,
and separate designs of fighter built for each.’ Aron said, believing what he read only because it was so dumb,
no‑one could have made it up.
‘How many separate types do we fly off this ship?’ Gavrylsk made it a rhetorical question. ‘Ten? Years of working
up to that and the tech teams still complain. Dump a menagerie like that on the decks of a ordinary destroyer ‑
total breakdown. Crazy.’
‘Oh, it gets worse.’ Aron read on. ‘ “The outer zone consists of operations by detached elements of the fighter
wing, manoeuvring in distant support of their carrier vessel.” And if that doesn’t translate as ass‑in‑the‑breeze,
what does?
'Oh. He’s not really talking fighters at all, multi‑crew craft, multi‑day missions, the likes of Skiprays and customs
Forward control platform with parasite high‑speed recon fighters, bomber type with multiple turrets, and possible
capital missiles on cradle launchers ‑ nice work if you can get it ‑ and a space superiority type, at least they have
the grace not to call it a fighter, armed with something like a customs corvette’s weapon layout.’
‘I see what you mean about rebel fighter‑wank. Anything in there that makes sense?’ Yatrock asked.
‘Maybe. “To avoid excessive loss of capability in the currently dominant zone of combat…” Anyone else feel like
beating this armchair aviator on the head with a proton torp?
'Anyway, the idea is slave‑linked drones. Not droids, non‑independent, sort of automated wingmen; about the
size of a TIE globe without the radiator panels. One manned fighter with maybe four or six drones; they’d do the
wolfpack attack missions the TIEs get now.
'That might be worth seeing. But not if the price is accepting the rest of this. Long range heavies, short hyper
range, long duration sublight, all…has this fish‑head ever heard the words “Oh kriff where did they come from”
spoken in anger? The ships might be good, the scheme is fragile as all Hel.’
‘So’s the TIE fighter.’ Yatrock pointed out.
‘Which we have, what, six billion of?’ Kramaner said. ‘How much would it cost to replace them all?’
‘Credits be buggered, it’s time something that radical would cost in. Building time, retraining time, for ground
crews as well as us‑‘
Aron stopped in mid‑rant. There had been a groan from Franjia’s bed.
‘I will never…’ an electronic voice said faintly, ‘be rude about the hamster helmet…ever again.’ She was on a
respirator system; a vocoder was talking for her. Aron didn’t care. He had to think to stop himself hugging her.
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