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LO5 Feedback.

Current Grade for LO5: Pass

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

Remember, the highest grade you can achieve on learning outcome 5 is a Distinction Grade,
even if you have achieved this, if there are any minor corrections or additions, can you please
ensure these are made.

Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.

Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

Overall: You have developed your proposed idea based of editor feedback to a good standard
however you need to expand on your initial ideas for development purposes. To complete this
please see feedback below.

LO5: You need to go into more detail regarding the resources and equipment your media product
will use. In addition, you need to include launch dates and how you intend to promote your
product to your target audience and how and where you will advertise.

The resubmission deadline is: 15th June 2018.