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LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

Sophie Malloch LO1 & LO2 Feedback. 5/6/2018

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

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Please ensure all of the work is uploaded on the blog.


Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
the words “Re-Submission”.

LEARNING OUTCOME 1.

Current Grade for LO1: Pass


Some good work Sophie, however can you please ensure you use the audience terminology
on the ideas document, Explain the demographics, socio-economic groups and
psychographics of the magazine, for each idea. Can you please update your production
schedule, adding on any new work you have been producing lately, ensure that you visit this
every week and add it on the blog.

LEARNING OUTCOME 2.
Current Grade for LO2: Fail
A good start here Sophie, the risk assessment is missing though – without this I cannot pass this
learning outcome. In regard to LO2 Part C (legal and ethical), this doesn’t look complete to me, it
requires more detail. You are missing some information. Revisit the handout and improve this work.
Make sure you explain how you could avoid the legal and ethical issues

The resubmission deadline for both learning outcomes is: June 15th