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LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK

Connor Rogerson LO1 & LO2 Feedback. 5/6/2018

The current grade is calculated on the work that is present on your blog. You may have missing
items, or vastly incomplete sections of work. Please improve this. If you require help with any of
this work, or need to show me work before re-submitting to check the quality, please do so.

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Remember – Don’t overwrite the blog posts, make new blog posts that are clearly labelled with
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LEARNING OUTCOME 1.

Current Grade for LO1: Fail


The start of some good work here, the ideas and treatment are good. But there are some
things that need to be improved and added. Because there are things missing, I cannot pass
this learning outcome.
Please ensure you use the audience terminology on the ideas document, Explain the
demographics, socio-economic groups and psychographics of the work, for each idea. – You
could add it as text below the image.
Add the storyboard, this is missing
On the budget, explain how many days the total is for.
Add the shooting script
Add the script and interview questions
Add production schedule

LEARNING OUTCOME 2.
Current Grade for LO2: Fail
The risk assessment needs a bit more detail, add in all of the locations you used and be
more specific. What else could be an issue?
The legal and ethical documentation is missing, which needs adding.

The resubmission deadline for both learning outcomes is: June 15th
LO1 & LO2 FEEDBACK