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UPM-CALC /AP PORTFOLIO/BBI2423/FORM 2A

Based on your video recorded presentation:


i. transcribe (NOT IPA symbols) your presentation;
ii. number your utterances;
iii. fill in the table below using complete sentences;
iv. identify your strengths and weakness(es), and make appropriate improvements where applicable.

PRESENTER 1
Name: _______________________________________________

Section A. Introduction

Verbatim Transcription Features


Attention getter
Strength Weakness and improvement

Establishing credibility
Strength Weakness and improvement

Introducing the topic and previewing the main points


Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transition between introduction and the body)


Strength Weakness and improvement

EFFECTIVE: SEM 1, 15/16


UPM-CALC /AP PORTFOLIO/BBI2423/FORM 2A

Section B. Body (Point 1)

Verbatim Transcription Features


Main idea
Strength Weakness and improvement

Supporting point
Strength Weakness and improvement

Details/ Examples
Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transitions between ideas)


Strength Weakness and improvement

Supporting point
Strength Weakness and improvement

Details/ Examples
Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transitions between speakers)


Strength Weakness and improvement

EFFECTIVE: SEM 1, 15/16


UPM-CALC /AP PORTFOLIO/BBI2423/FORM 2A

Language used
Strength Weakness and improvement

PRESENTER 2

Section C. Body (Point 2)

Verbatim Transcription Features


Main idea
Strength Weakness and improvement

Supporting point
Strength Weakness and improvement

Details/ Examples
Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transitions between ideas)


Strength Weakness and improvement

Supporting point
Strength Weakness and improvement

Details/ Examples

EFFECTIVE: SEM 1, 15/16


UPM-CALC /AP PORTFOLIO/BBI2423/FORM 2A

Strength Weakness and improvement

Enhancer (Transitions between body to the conclusion)


Strength Weakness and improvement

Section D. Conclusion

Verbatim Transcription Features


Concluding signal
Strength Weakness and improvement

Summarising key points


Strength Weakness and improvement

Ending on a strong note


(making a memorable quotation or dramatic statement)
Strength Weakness and improvement

Language used
Strength Weakness and improvement

EFFECTIVE: SEM 1, 15/16