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Review Rough Draft

by Presley Branham

Submission date: 19-Sep-2018 04:57PM (UT C-0500)


Submission ID: 1004906293
File name: Presley_Branham_review_rough_draf t.docx (22.64K)
Word count: 737
Character count: 4267
f ont

incorrect

Lengt h c

Review Essay Word Count


spacing
1

3 order of paper

t hesis placement

ts

28+

no pc

ts
no pc

ts

plag

no pc
out t it le

ww2

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wce
wcp
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ORIGINALITY REPORT

25 %
SIMILARIT Y INDEX
21%
INT ERNET SOURCES
4%
PUBLICAT IONS
21%
ST UDENT PAPERS

PRIMARY SOURCES

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www.bls.gov
Int ernet Source 11%
2
Submitted to Olivet Nazarene University
St udent Paper 4%
3
Submitted to Mississippi State Board for
Community & Junior Colleges
3%
St udent Paper

4
Submitted to Centennial High School
St udent Paper 3%
5
www.snead.edu
Int ernet Source 1%
6
elizabeththeblogger.wordpress.com
Int ernet Source 1%
7
www.niagara.edu
Int ernet Source 1%

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

/0 Instructor

PAGE 1

QM f ont
You must use a 12-point T imes-New Roman f ont.

QM incorrect
incorrect

QM Length c
T his paper does not come close to meeting the minimum length requirement of the assignment.

QM Review Essay Word Count


Your word count:

Minimum required: 850

Maximum: 1200

Additional Comment

625

QM spacing
You must double space your papers. Make sure that your spacing is set in the f ormat that was
assigned in class so that extra space is not inserted between paragraphs.

Comment 1
Use the due date.

QM order of paper
Put your outline af ter the works cited page.

QM 3
Your title needs to ref lect the main idea of your thesis more directly.
Comment 2
replace

QM thesis placement
T he thesis must be the last sentence in the introductory paragraph.
Additional Comment

T he thesis must be the LAST sentence in the introductory paragraph.

QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.

QM 28+
improper quote introduction f ormat--See the "Quotations and Paraphrases" handout, which is
in the Research f older in the Inf ormation & Books area of the Blackboard class.
Additional Comment

Check all of your introductions to quotations to make sure you use complete sentences
(independent clauses) and colons as required.

QM 8
Missing citation
You must provide a parenthetical citation f or each quotation or paraphrase.
Additional Comment

Cite every source every time you use it. Check your paper f or quotations and paraphrases that
are not cited.

QM no pc
no parenthetical citations

QM 8
Missing citation
You must provide a parenthetical citation f or each quotation or paraphrase.

QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.

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QM no pc
no parenthetical citations

QM ts
T he topic sentence is either missing or unsuitable.

QM plag
plagiarized

QM no pc
no parenthetical citations

PAGE 3

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QM out title
T he title of your essay goes here.

QM ww2
wrong word, dictionary, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I f lashcards on Blackboard
Additional Comment

see me

QM ww2
wrong word, dictionary, Section L-6, Unnecessary Words, pp. 306-307 and
Grammar Unit I f lashcards on Blackboard

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QM wce
Your works cited entries contain a lot of errors. Please use your textbook to f ix the problem.

QM wcp
Your works cited page is not in the correct f ormat.