Rough Draft 1

by Salvador Apud-Martinez

Submission date: 14-Apr-2019 11:35PM (UT C-0500)

Submission ID: 1112603294
File name: 108401_78705344_1024910099_Rough_Draf t_1.docx (17.47K)
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billions of sheets of ice???

Missing a thesis.

Good thesis- you will need to combine this with the introduction

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 How are we
going to get
there? What
car
companies
need to get
on board
with this type
of
production?

del. comma We need

them for
paper
products.
What are
you going to
do to replace
that
problem?
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Instructor

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T he f irst solution is f ine, but the last two aren't. You
need to be detailed about the steps that will be
taken. You can say "don't cut down trees" f orever,
but will it happen? No. T hink of a more f easible
solution like mandating that logging companies

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replant lost f orests or something of the sort.

T he f uel-ef f icient cars is a great solution, but we're

not currently do anything to produce more electric
cars. T he discussion of more natural f uel methods
as opposed to electric methods has been tossed
around with interesting results. See what you can
f ind and mention that as alternative to our f uel
usage.

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Text Comment. billions of sheets of ice???

Text Comment. Missing a thesis.

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Text Comment. Good thesis- you will need to combine this with the introduction

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Text Comment. How are we going to get there? What car companies need to get on board
with this type of production?

Text Comment. We need them f or paper products. What are you going to do to replace
that problem?

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