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3. Opinion is divided over what impact, if any, advertising has on children. What is beyond
question is that many people, parents in particular are worried about its effects. 88% of Swedes
supported their government’s ban on children’s TV adverts in 1991 (Willows, 2009) while 36% of
adults in the UK thought that advertising was damaging to their children (Sidle, 2011).
Paraphrase 1 There is little agreement on the effect of advertising on children, though it is
undoubtedly a concern, especially for parents. When Sweden banned children’s TV adverts in
1991, 88% of the population supported the decision (Willows, 2009), while in the UK, over a
third of adults thought advertising could damage their children (Sidle, 2011). Paraphrase 2 Views
vary on what possible effect advertising can have on the young. What is without doubt is that
most people, especially parents, are concerned about the impact. 88% of Swedish people were
in favour of their government’s ban on advertising on children’s television (Willows, 2009), and in
the UK, 36% of adults believed adverts were harmful to their offspring (Sidle, 2011).
Example Original: “Working from home can lead to employees feeling isolated and dissatisfied” (King,
2009, p.12). Paraphrased: King (2009) suggests that workers can feel alone and unhappy while working
away from the office. Exercise A Original: “The increase in the number of students attending
university has led to changes in the mthods and style of lecture delivery “(Mendez, 2010, p.8). Your
paraphrase:
Exercise B Original: “Academic writing plays a very important role in university education as it is the
medium in which students demonstrate their understanding of the subject” (Carter, 2001, p.222). Your
paraphrase: Exercise C Original: “Courses should contain a practical component ensuring graduates
have skills that are transferable to the work place” (Simons, 1999, p.44). Your paraphrase:
Original: “The introduction of certain austerity measures has greatly reduced the amount of disposable
income for most middle income homes” (Briggs, 2007, p.27) Your paraphrase: Exercise E Original:
“Mass tourism in developing countries needs to be addressed to allow for a more sustainable approach”
(Kowalski, 2008, p.2) Your paraphrase: