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Villafuerte 1

Paola Villafuerte B
Rhys Davies
Composition and rhetoric
6th May 2019
Introduction.
Personally, I think this was the most interesting and funny of all the written works that we had to do, because it gave freedom to my creativity and
got to tell my own story in a more illustrative way. This is one of the main reasons I decided to include this comic in my portfolio, also because it
allowed me to tell my experience in this English journey in a way that I have never told before. The most difficult part was to design each character
with its own characteristics and give the story the proper rhetorically narrative. Make the story follow a chronological order easy to identify for the
lectors, so that they understand it better was a challenge for me, so getting it throw is something that I am really proud of and made me realized all
the accomplishments and awards gotten during my life as an English student.
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I added three more vignettes, in order to give to the reader more specific details about the story.
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I added more details about the story.
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Wrong verb tenses corrected.
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I added more specific details to the story in order to make it more interesting.
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I changed some wrong words and verb tenses.
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I added more vignettes, in order to give to the reader more specific details about the story.
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