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Te Shkruash nje Fjalim

Te shkruash një fjalim mund të jetë një detyrë e frikshme për shumë njerëz. Mundet te shqetesoheni në lidhje me cilësinë e aftësive të shkrimit tuaj, apo rreth të folurit tuaj publik papërvojë ose ndoshta ju thjesht nuk dini se çka do të shkruani. Me përcaktimin e disa objektivave të qarta përpara se të filloni të shkruani do ta keni me te lehte për të gjykuar ecurine llogjike te Fjalimit apo suksesin tuaj perpara publikut. Me vendosjen e objektivave të qartë, para se te uleni te shkruani, ju do keni aftesine per te gjykuar me qarte, suksesin e Fajlimit tuaj te cilin po shkruani. -Në fazen paraprake te shkrimit te nje Fjalimi Publik, duhet të keni një plan pune. • Duhet te beni nje perzgjedhje te njerzeve apo fakteve qe do tu ndihmojne ne shkrimin e fjalimit. • Duhet te rendisni Temat dhe nen\temat me argumetat perkates. • Gjuha e perdorur ne shkrim te mos jete e komplikuar dhe ti pershtatet atij qe do te lexoje fjalimin tuaj (nese nuk e lexoni vete) • Te rrespektohet Audiditori (publiku) duke patur parasysh te Mos lodhet. Te mos shperfilet. Te jete aktiv.

Te rrespektohen shenjat e pikesimit. Me pas me zherimin e argumentit dhe Shkrimin e plote e me pas Variantin perfundimtar (perfshire korrigjimet. Shkrimi nje fjalimi publik nis me nje skice fillestare. Menyra e te shkruarit . pike kyce eshte se si vazhdon fjalimi. Nje fjalim I mire nuk ka asgje me shume sesa nje struktuare te thjeshte. Trupi i Fjalimit Pas Hapjes. Trupi nje Fjalimi. Ndaj ne fjalite e para duhet shkruar qarte IDEJA dhe spejeguar QELLIMIN e fjalimit. Hapja 30 sekondat e para te fjalimit janë më të rëndësishmet. E folura e qarte bent e kuptohet qarte edhe mesazhi qe ne nisje. Pra Pjesa kryesore. HAPJE E MIRE+ SHTJELLIM I ARGUMENTIT+MBYLLJE MBRESLENESE.Fillimisht do te shohim strukturën e një fjalimi dhe me pas konceptin e mesazhin kyç ose temen e fjalimit. e cila duhet te jete e strukturuar mire.mendimet alternative) Strukura e nje Fjalimi – Si te organizojme nje Fjalim Nje fjalim i Sukeshem para publikut varet nga menyra se si e shkruajme Ate. per te dhene pundesine e nje artikulimi pa probleme. Fjalite ne nisje te mos jene te gjata.

Te shkruani ne fund nje Emocion personal…. . Kjo per te krijuar nje structure te forte dhe solide ne te shkruar.apo pyetje per publikun ? Create a speech outline Outlining is a popular pre-draft technique when . Duhet patur parasysh qe ne mbyllje te nje shkrimi per nje Fjalim Publik te shihni mundesine për të: . (zakonisht pas fjalise se 4) nisin te Shtjellohen apo zbarthehen argumentat mbi te cilat Flitet ne Publik. Nje fjalite pervijuese.Përmbledhur pikat kryesore tuaj e fjalës . degjuesit) Eshte mire te kete nje numer sa me te permbledhur te pikave (argumentave) sesa Pika pa fund te cilat lodhin Publikun (+ ate qe lexon Fjalimin) MBYLLJA Ashtu si Hapja e Fjalimite dhe MBYLLJA duhet te jete e FORTE dhe e QARTE. Kur shkruhet nje fjalim duhen organizuar mire dhe ne rrjedhe llogjike argumentat. Fjalite e shkruara mbi Argumentin duhet te ndjekin ne rrjedhe llogjike njeratjetren. Ne kete menyre behet me e lehte per tu publuar fjalimi per Publikun (audition.duhet te jete po ashtu e qarte.Ti lini Audiences (publikut degjuesit) nje shije pozitive.

An outline is a hierarchical representation of the content of your speech. the subject and other information you have gathered from people relevant to the speech (family. using the notes you have about the occasion. Let's take a Best Man Speech as an example.writing and it is one I commonly recommend to aspiring speechwriters. friends and colleagues of the subject of the speech. Start your outline at its very simplest: Opening Body Closing That was easy.with humor Words of advice to Groom from a married man Closing Ask the audience to be upstanding Raise a toast to the bride and groom .). It gets a little trickier though. The next step is try to flesh out some additional points. Opening Introduce myself Body Pay tribute to key participants Recount how I became friends with groom Describe some of the groom's best traits . Think of it as the skeleton upon which you will add the flesh of your speech. other speechmakers etc. the theme.

For now. Let's take the element Pay tribute to key participants above. a speech is taking shape! Your speech will take further shape as you take each element of your outline and. . That's the next step. a first-cut at your speech. The outline we created in the last step will serve as the basis for our first draft. you add more additional outlines.For the first time. ever be the final draft. be happy to achieve a great framework that will guide you as you write your speech. We take each element of the outline and apply our creative writing juices to turn that outline into a portion of a speech. where appropriate. Be sure not to mistake the outline for the speech itself. Before we start. Your first draft of a speech should never. Draft your speech It is now time to add flesh to your outline and create a first draft of the speech. note that a draft is just that. The next level of outline might look like: Pay tribute to key participants Compliment & raise toast to the bride Thank & compliment the bridesmaids Pay tribute to parents of bride and groom Continue to iterate through your outline until you feel you have captured the essence of your speech.

you can change anything and everything you write later. I will not be speaking for long today because of a throat problem. I am honored to introduce myself as the Best Man for today's wonderful occasion." .. Outline: Pay tribute to key participants Compliment & raise toast to the bride . Let's take some examples from the outline in the last step.. Outline: Introduce myself Speech draft "As my perspiring brow and nervous demeanor might suggest. use your own voice and remember. or more likely the process is less direct and more creative. The conversion from outline to draft can be simple...There is no right or wrong way to move from outline to draft. For now it's just important to establish that first draft.. exchanging an outline element for a speech sentence. Be yourself.. John says he will cut it if I bring up any embarrassing stories about him.

"I would like to pay special tribute to John and Sarah's parents. but here is a good . First.but only if you leave time between each draft. you need a rest. <toast> "As is traditional in any wedding I would like to complement the Bridesmaids on their help with the wedding. she is beautiful. And without further ado I would like to raise a toast for Sarah. John is a very lucky man. they are simply divine. Put the speech down and forget about it for a day or two." Once you have finished your first draft of the speech. You will be amazed at how much your speech will improve when you go from first to second to third draft .Thank & compliment the bridesmaids Pay tribute to parents of bride and groom Speech draft "I know it is a cliché but I would just like to comment on how stunning Sarah looks today. It's amazing what a pair of handcuffs can do. particularly for managing to get Sarah to the church today. There is no scientific way to know when you have reached your speech's final draft. it's time to take a rest. The Bridesmaids look beautiful. They have helped make this a very special day. Can I also say how beautiful both mom's look. But second. your critical eyes will function much better in the cold light of day. outdone only by our stunning bride.

It's much better to learn of any problems with your speech now. Getting feedback on your speech At this stage you have got the speech to a point where you are quite happy. The day for your public speaking debut is fast approaching. It's time to get some feedback on your speech. at least one of whom is not directly related to or attending the event . if you like. it's time to stop. It's now time to do something that many people are loath to do. Examples of feedback you should seek include: Inappropriate content Error(s) of omission Grammatical problems Appropriate use of humor . Ideally you should seek feedback from 2-3 people. That's great. than when you are delivering your speech on the podium at your public speaking event.an impartial critic. This is an invaluable step that will only enrich your speech and potentially save you from much controversial.indication: If you find yourself broadly happy with the speech and find yourself making minor changes from draft to draft. possibly even very happy.

rather than perfect English. You now have a final version of your speech. let's move on. if you're writing a best man speech. In particular. That's great! Even though we label this version of your speech the final version. as you progress through the How to deliver a speech section of this course. . business. award ceremonies).On the topic of grammatical problems. doesn't do so when spoken aloud. That's absolutely fine. I'm a strong advocate of natural language when it comes to writing non-formal (e. it's much preferable that the voice is yours.g. Without further ado. there is still room to change. This familiarity will help your audience engage with you and put you at ease when delivering your speech. you may find that a part of your speech that works on paper. Final version of your speech Congratulations! You started this process with a blank piece of paper. In other words.